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Baek Ji-young - After a Long Time

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Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 11월 4일 월요일 at 오후 8:42:14

Artist: Baek Ji-young
Title: After a Long Time
Source: Rooftop Prince
Tags: kdrama ost 옥탑방 왕세자 옥세자 koreapenguin scanter
BPM: 67
Filesize: 1825kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.58 stars, 103 notes)
  2. K.Penguin's Normal (3 stars, 75 notes)
  3. scanter's Easy (1.8 stars, 47 notes)
Download: Baek Ji-young - After a Long Time
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Sonnyc's 2013 Map

A drama which gave time slip motif.

살아도 죽고 죽어도 사는 것
Last edited by Sonnyc , edited 14 times in total.
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
코피...
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Artist:Baek Ji-young
ArtistUnicode:백지영
Creator:Sonnyc
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있던 하드에 그대로 이거 복붙하시면되요.
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Sonnyc
Thanks for timing~
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
Normal Diff Done :)

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Darksonic
Global Moderator
2,794 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Hello, from my m4m queue.

K.Penguin's Normal:

00:37:350: You're missing a white tick here, where should be the Drum sampleset, I know you're trying to follow voice here but you can try something like this instead, and then add the Drum on (3)'s tail, try it, fits much better for me.
00:39:556 (1): Unnecesary NC here, remove it.
00:44:409 (5,6,1,2): I don't like how this flow, what about trying this ?, improves the pattern so much. (If you change it remember to fix spacing on the next notes)

Hard:

00:29:211 (3): You can make this blanket much better, like this. (Use the big blue circle as a reference)
00:58:747 (2): This note should be on x:281 y:142 to well stacking with 00:56:541 (5).

That's all for me, nice mapset :D

Good luck!
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin

Darksonic wrote:

Hello, from my m4m queue.

K.Penguin's Normal:

00:37:350: You're missing a white tick here, where should be the Drum sampleset, I know you're trying to follow voice here but you can try something like this instead, and then add the Drum on (3)'s tail, try it, fits much better for me. - fixed
00:39:556 (1): Unnecesary NC here, remove it. - fixed
00:44:409 (5,6,1,2): I don't like how this flow, what about trying this ?, improves the pattern so much. (If you change it remember to fix spacing on the next notes) - I wanna keep this

That's all for me, nice mapset :D

Good luck!
Thanks MOD :)

ㅇㅇ
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ArtistUnicode:백지영
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69653863
1,818 posts
Joined January 2012
69653863
Mod for mod request
Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

General
  1. Tell BATs to change title text colour to 232, 145, 164 (for both Artist and Title)?
  2. Use muted sliderslide? Default one sounds too disturbing ;~;
Normal
  1. 00:26:784 (2,3) - Combine into one slider? Feels better imo
  2. 00:41:541 (1,2) - Stack? Looks better.
  3. 00:47:056 (2) - Finish on sliderstart?
  4. 01:06:247 - Add note?
  5. 01:09:114 (1,2) - Combine into one slider?
  6. 01:15:306 (4,1) - Stacking this feels reeeally better.
Hard
  1. Perfect.
Nice map Sonny, good luck!
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Sonnyc
Darksonic

Darksonic wrote:

Hello, from my m4m queue.

Hard:

00:29:211 (3): You can make this blanket much better, like this. (Use the big blue circle as a reference) // Uhh,, I thought I mapped as a blanket here. :3 Thx
00:58:747 (2): This note should be on x:281 y:142 to well stacking with 00:56:541 (5). // I think it isn't necessary when playing, but fixed~

That's all for me, nice mapset :D

Good luck!
inverness

inverness wrote:

Mod for mod request

General
  1. Tell BATs to change title text colour to 232, 145, 164 (for both Artist and Title)? // I don't want to use color in displayed titles without special reasons.
  2. Use muted sliderslide? Default one sounds too disturbing ;~; // Hmm,, ok
Nice map Sonny, good luck!
Thx~~
69653863
1,818 posts
Joined January 2012
69653863

Sonnyc wrote:

Tell BATs to change title text colour to 232, 145, 164 (for both Artist and Title)? // I don't want to use color in displayed titles without special reasons.
I tried to match the title text color with the pink background. I used the color pink here for the title text. It's up to you though whether you're going to use it or not.
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Sonnyc
I saw that color was the pink in BG, but my answer is the same ._.
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin

inverness wrote:

Mod for mod request
Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

General
  1. Tell BATs to change title text colour to 232, 145, 164 (for both Artist and Title)?
  2. Use muted sliderslide? Default one sounds too disturbing ;~;
Normal
  1. 00:26:784 (2,3) - Combine into one slider? Feels better imo
  2. 00:41:541 (1,2) - Stack? Looks better.
  3. 00:47:056 (2) - Finish on sliderstart?
  4. 01:06:247 - Add note?
  5. 01:09:114 (1,2) - Combine into one slider?
  6. 01:15:306 (4,1) - Stacking this feels reeeally better.
- 이거말고 안고칠꺼에요 ><

Nice map Sonny, good luck!
Thanks MOD :)

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Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
~General~
  1. Make the kiai time consistent between the difficulties if possible.
~K.Penguin's Normal~
  1. 00:44:850 (6,1) - Spacing is wrong here, too close to each other.
  2. 00:45:291 (1,2) - Better making a slider here, it might be confusing for beginners otherwise.
  3. 01:11:761 (6) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
  4. 01:13:954 (1) - This note sounds really off to me, check it out.
  5. 01:15:738 (1) - Unsnapped slider end, please make sure to resnap it properly.
~Hard~
  1. 00:38:674 (2) - Add a whistle on slider end to be consistent with the rest of the map.
  2. 00:45:291 (1,2) - Same as Normal.
  3. 01:13:526 (1,2) - Once again, same as Normal.
The normal-whistle is too loud during kiai, I don't really like it, consider reducing the volume of it. Also, make an Easy difficulty while you're at it, it won't take you much time to make it, this difficulty spread is really bad right now.
HabiHolic
5,373 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
모딩예약~

조금있다가 할게요~ 지금학교 ㅠㅠ
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. Make the kiai time consistent between the difficulties if possible. // Depends on k.penguin. I don't have plans on changing mine.
~Hard~
  1. 00:38:674 (2) - Add a whistle on slider end to be consistent with the rest of the map. // Hitsounds were based on the lyric, and this isn't the spot to add. Exception was at 00:33:379 (7), where an instrument sounded.
  2. 00:45:291 (1,2) - Same as Normal. // (Hard isn't for beginners ww) I think 2 notes fits the song the best.
  3. 01:13:526 (1,2) - Once again, same as Normal. // Hm..? You mean this is off time? Then I should ask someone else,,
The normal-whistle is too loud during kiai, I don't really like it, consider reducing the volume of it. Also, make an Easy difficulty while you're at it, it won't take you much time to make it, this difficulty spread is really bad right now. // Reduced volume. and I think for a calm song like this, NH spread is nice enough. Normal seems easy enough for beginners to play,,,
Thanks~~
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
as requested. Sorry for the delay, I'm having a huge problem with display :<

[General]
  1. Please, map an [Easy]! Song is short, so making an [Easy] won't take too much time! it is necessary to map one, because easiest diff of this mapset shouldn't use 1/4 notes, I guess.
  2. Add drama to tags, as well. Just in case if someone will look for it.
  3. Timing is kinda tricky, rhythm changes aren't really predictable. Please, use SLider Tick Rate 1 to avoid awkward moents when ticks sound totally off music!
  4. According to AiBat there's a difference between kiais. Kiai #2 on [Normal] should start 1ms later. Yes, it's a little thing, but people will complain, so let's just fix it! :<
[K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. Well, I'd say that HP drain and OD 3 fits with this diff much better. OD3 will help us to play 1/4s and HP Drain 3 will help us to pass 1/1 gaps between sliders. So, yeah.. Please reduce HP and OD by one tick.
  2. 01:04:703 - you should ignore LOD beats like this one. I understand, that you're following vocals here, but that beat is TOO loud to be ignored. :< At least, you could curve your slider to follow that beat
  3. 01:11:320 (5) - this circle is overlapped with timilene and scores. ($:3 display, default skin). It's rankable, but it looks messy and that's why you'd better fix it asap!
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:520 (2) - seriously, man, you shouldn't start maps with such jumps. At first, it doesn't fits with CALM music at all! What's more, players need some time to "feel" spacing, so jump between first two objects of the map isn't a good idea. :<
    Note: 00:21:049 (2) - same as above. Whenever you place jumps, please make sure that these jumps are REASONABLE and they fit with music. :<

    In fact, the whole diff has too many jumps with various spacing/ or spacing changes too often.Because of that, map becomes unreadable and looks really strange.
    messy spacing
    For example: 00:17:961 (3,4) - x1.6
    00:18:623 (4,5) - x1.3
    00:19:284 (5,1) - x0.8
    00:20:608 (1,2) - x2.2
    00:21:049 (2,3) - x1.8
    00:21:490 (3,4) - x1.4
    00:22:152 (4,5) - x1.3

    You shuld re-arrange notes with distance snap. Current spacing is too random.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin

Andrea wrote:

~General~

~K.Penguin's Normal~
  1. 00:44:850 (6,1) - Spacing is wrong here, too close to each other.
  2. 00:45:291 (1,2) - Better making a slider here, it might be confusing for beginners otherwise.
  3. 01:11:761 (6) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
  4. 01:13:954 (1) - This note sounds really off to me, check it out.
  5. 01:15:738 (1) - Unsnapped slider end, please make sure to resnap it properly.

-Bakari- wrote:

as requested. Sorry for the delay, I'm having a huge problem with display :<

[K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. Well, I'd say that HP drain and OD 3 fits with this diff much better. OD3 will help us to play 1/4s and HP Drain 3 will help us to pass 1/1 gaps between sliders. So, yeah.. Please reduce HP and OD by one tick.
  2. 01:04:703 - you should ignore LOD beats like this one. I understand, that you're following vocals here, but that beat is TOO loud to be ignored. :< At least, you could curve your slider to follow that beat
  3. 01:11:320 (5) - this circle is overlapped with timilene and scores. ($:3 display, default skin). It's rankable, but it looks messy and that's why you'd better fix it asap!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!
Thanks MOD :)

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TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
Hey! I'm sorry for the long wait. Being a support team member, and addicted to video game streams absorbs a lot of my time.

Normal
Not much to say. It just needs more opinions.

00:30:314 (4,5,1) - Grid snap off and make spacing exactly 1.00. The start of 1 may need to be repositioned slightly afterwards.
00:44:850 (6,1) - The offset doesn't change, so these should be spaced the same as the other transitions within the 68 BPM section.
01:09:114 (1,2,3,4) - Why no hitsounds?
01:13:085 (7,1) - Too close.
01:15:738 (1) - Should start to the red line.

Hard

Unique approach and map.

00:47:497 (3) - The stop the whistle half way through the slider gimmick is distracting. It makes me think the slider should end there. Don't have to change it on my accord. Get more opinions though and assess your alternatives.
00:52:350 (2,3,4) - The whistles work quite well here.
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

-Bakari- wrote:

as requested. Sorry for the delay, I'm having a huge problem with display :<

[General]
  1. Please, map an [Easy]! Song is short, so making an [Easy] won't take too much time! it is necessary to map one, because easiest diff of this mapset shouldn't use 1/4 notes, I guess. // I don't want to.
  2. Add drama to tags, as well. Just in case if someone will look for it. // uhh,, I don't want to.
  3. Timing is kinda tricky, rhythm changes aren't really predictable. Please, use SLider Tick Rate 1 to avoid awkward moents when ticks sound totally off music! // Sorry, Tick 2 is necessary for slider sound change.
  4. According to AiBat there's a difference between kiais. Kiai #2 on [Normal] should start 1ms later. Yes, it's a little thing, but people will complain, so let's just fix it! :<
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:520 (2) - seriously, man, you shouldn't start maps with such jumps. At first, it doesn't fits with CALM music at all! What's more, players need some time to "feel" spacing, so jump between first two objects of the map isn't a good idea. :< // Well dealed with the starting jumps.
    Note: 00:21:049 (2) - same as above. Whenever you place jumps, please make sure that these jumps are REASONABLE and they fit with music. :<

    In fact, the whole diff has too many jumps with various spacing/ or spacing changes too often.Because of that, map becomes unreadable and looks really strange.
    messy spacing
    For example: 00:17:961 (3,4) - x1.6 Fixed this.
    00:18:623 (4,5) - x1.3 This is the original spacing.
    00:19:284 (5,1) - x0.8 No need to consider, since there is a long term between this.
    00:20:608 (1,2) - x2.2 Consistent with 00:17:079 (1,2).
    00:21:049 (2,3) - x1.8
    00:21:490 (3,4) - x1.4
    00:22:152 (4,5) - x1.3

    You shuld re-arrange notes with distance snap. Current spacing is too random.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!

TheVileOne wrote:

Hey! I'm sorry for the long wait. Being a support team member, and addicted to video game streams absorbs a lot of my time.

Hard

Unique approach and map.

00:47:497 (3) - The stop the whistle half way through the slider gimmick is distracting. It makes me think the slider should end there. Don't have to change it on my accord. Get more opinions though and assess your alternatives. // Uhh,, I like the current way it looks.
00:52:350 (2,3,4) - The whistles work quite well here.
Thanks ^^
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
m4m here :3!

[Normal]
  1. 00:28:990 (3) - this slider will have a better flow if it will be just curvend and not a line like it have now:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:44:850 (6,1) - i would not stack objects ina easier diff of a mapset
  3. 00:52:350 (2) - normal sampleset on the reverse-arrow
  4. 01:07:350 (3) - normal sampleset on slider start
  5. 01:15:765 - what about to add a spinner here?
[Hard]
  1. 01:01:174- snap this green line to 01:01:173
    The strange things is that nowhere is sayed that this line is unsnapped just from: http://puu.sh/3CK7e.png i could say that it was ç_ç sad that AiMod is not so accurate
  2. 00:17:961 (3,4) - what about to separate this reversearrow slider in a slider and a circle to have a better flow o3o because atm the actual slider don't flow very good
    SPOILER
  3. 01:15:765 - what about to add a spinner here?
really nice mappu o3ob good luck with it
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]
손닉님 안녕하세요!!

K.Penguin's Normal

펭펭!! 안뇽!!

00:19:726 (3) - 휘슬 제거

00:25:461 (3) - 휘슬 제거

00:26:784 (2) - 슬라이더의 끝에 휘슬 제거

Hard

~_~

00:46:174 (1) - 여기서부터 커스텀 휘슬 쓰시는게 어떠신가요 .. 무언가 듣기가 조금..음..

( 01:00:070 (1) - 제거

01:00:070 (4) - 서클추가

01:00:291 (5) - 슬라이더 추가

01:00:732 (6) - 끝을 여기까지 )

이게 더 좋아보이지 않을까요 .. 저는 그렇게 생각합니다

01:13:526 (1) - x92 y108 로 완전히 겹쳐주시는게 더 깔끔해보이고 좋아보여요!!

좋은맵 + 스타~
Leader
osu! Alumni
1,849 posts
Joined January 2011
Leader
Hi, from my Modding Queue

Short map to mod, yay~

[K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. 00:25:902 (1) - I suggest to move repeat sliderpoint to 24|48, so people will guess the flow better
  2. 00:39:997 (4) - There's the only spacing issue, follow the 1.0x spacing as you did in the whole map? :P
  3. 00:37:350 (4) - Move to the same line as 00:36:468 (3) - , flows much better
  4. 01:02:717 (1,2,3) - What about replacing this with 2 kicksliders? First will start in 01:02:717 - and end 1/4 later, second in 01:03:379 - and end 1/4 later
[Hard]
  1. 00:45:291 (1,2) - Timing is a bit hard to understand here, I suggest to replace these beats with a slider.
Nothing else to say, great map!
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
  • [K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. 00:25:020 (2) - This whistle sounds too redundant and noisy. Better remove it to follow the piano only.
  2. 00:52:350 (2) - This spacing is inconsistent with 00:39:997 (4). You should fix 00:39:997 (4) with distance snap in order to keep it consistent.
  3. 01:01:173 - This hitfinish sounds wayyy too calm, I can barely hear it. I suggest you to increase the volume to ~35% here.
  4. 01:02:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is not friendly for beginners. 1/4 are hard to follow for most of newbie players. Try to keep it in mind, since this is the easier difficulty of the mapset. Due to this, and more other 1/4 patterns I highly recommend adding a [Easy] difficulty to the mapset for a better spread.
  5. 01:04:483 (5) - This slider sounds ehh.. unfitting. If you listen carefully, 01:04:703 has a more important beat than where this slider is placed. My suggestion is moving this slider to 01:04:703 or anything else you want. Just try to don't ignore that big white tick. You used 1/4 at 01:03:600 (3,4) to follow that emphasized sound, don't ignore the one of the white tick!
  6. 01:07:350 (3) - Missing hitnormal at the start.
  7. 01:07:350 (3) - ^
  8. 01:16:707 (2) - Whistle at the start to make it sound better with 01:15:765 (1)?

    There's not much to say. Clean difficulty. I'm against this difficulty as the easier one of the spread. It is just bad. It has 1/4 rhythms, stacks... that's not easy for beginners to read. They get misleaded easily with these 1/4 aka notes at blue tick.
  • [Hard]

    *The slider velocity from 00:17:079 to 00:46:174 feels too fast. You don't give the player the feeling of the song. It sounds very calm, slow, and relaxing yet you didn't change the SV. Consider reducing it by 0,50x or whatever you prefer.

    *The whistles at the chorus sound terrible imo. Too loud, unfitting.. just my opinion though. If you like them that much then consider adding a normal-sliderslide blank sound. It sounds too noisy.
  1. 00:17:961 (3) - Move a couple of grids to the left to blanket 00:17:520 (2)? Nazi.
  2. 00:43:526 - This spinner doesn't fit like this. I'd rather add a note here and then move the spinner to 00:43:747. Sounds better, since it doesn't ignore the vocal.
  3. 00:49:703 - This part feels awkward to play because you ignore this beat here. Consider mapping it by adding a repeat to 00:49:261 (3) or simply adding a note. These empty spaces ruin the flow and derail the gameplay in general, in my opinion.
  4. 00:53:894 (4) - You did the same thing the guest mapper did with this part on his Normal difficulty. There's a much more important beat at 00:54:114, so please consider mapping it. Don't ignore it like this.
  5. 00:58:747 (2) - These hitnormals sound way too noisy at beats like this one.. ;_; that's why I dislike the hitsounding you made for this part.
  6. 00:59:188 (3) - IMO this slider sounds much better if you extend it to 00:59:850. It somehow sounds better with the vocal and it avoids empty blank spaces that break the flow.
  7. 01:00:070 (1) - Similar as with 00:53:894 (4). 01:00:291 is a much more important beat, so better move this slider here and add a note at 01:00:070?
  8. 01:16:957 (3) - This slider is unnecesarily extended. Sounds much better if it ends at 01:17:457 imo.
    ___________________
The spread is too "poor" for ranking (see the point colored in red for explanation). At least, from my point of view. [Hard] needs some work too.. I dislike some slider usages (regarding the flow-breaker patterns/rhythms). As always, just my personal opinion. Also, the timing sounds a bit strange for example at 00:24:799. I'd recommend a timing check by an experienced BAT in timing or something!

Good luck! and thanks for m4m'ing. :oops:
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
From * THE SLOW BPM FREE MODDING QUEUE *

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts a.k.a. things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General things.

[K.Penguin's Normal]
* Found some 1/4 snaps. Except by this, this diff feels good. As Kei (the BAT) said, you need an Easy diff. If you accept, I can make an Easy diff for you (: If you want, just tell me about while answering the mod. I'll keep an eye on this thread (:

[Hard]
00:36:247 (6,7) - Why not make them like this? → http://puu.sh/3L5Ce.jpg → Code: 
144,124,36247,2,0,B|144:256|152:268|196:304|224:312|252:312,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,274,37129,2,0,B|365:242|369:210|369:194|369:122,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

That's it ^^

This song is nice ^^ and the voice of girl reminds me the voice of Cristina Mel (a Brazilian, Gospel singer woman) → http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cristina_Mel

Take a Star!!!!

Att...
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
121212
osu file format v12

[General]
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TitleUnicode:한참 지나서
Artist:Baek Ji-young
ArtistUnicode:백지영
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:K.Penguin's Normal
Source:Rooftop Prince
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[Difficulty]
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Thanks MOD
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

Lally wrote:

m4m here :3!

[Hard]
  1. 01:01:174- snap this green line to 01:01:173 // Fix.
    The strange things is that nowhere is sayed that this line is unsnapped just from: http://puu.sh/3CK7e.png i could say that it was ç_ç sad that AiMod is not so accurate
  2. 00:17:961 (3,4) - what about to separate this reversearrow slider in a slider and a circle to have a better flow o3o because atm the actual slider don't flow very good // Fixed.
    SPOILER
  3. 01:15:765 - what about to add a spinner here? // I don't think a spinner fits.
really nice mappu o3ob good luck with it

[ Zzz ] wrote:

손닉님 안녕하세요!!

Hard

~_~

00:46:174 (1) - 여기서부터 커스텀 휘슬 쓰시는게 어떠신가요 .. 무언가 듣기가 조금..음.. // 휘슬이 충분히 어울린다고 생각합니다.

( 01:00:070 (1) - 제거 // 가사를 따르고 싶습니다.

01:00:070 (4) - 서클추가

01:00:291 (5) - 슬라이더 추가

01:00:732 (6) - 끝을 여기까지 )

이게 더 좋아보이지 않을까요 .. 저는 그렇게 생각합니다

01:13:526 (1) - x92 y108 로 완전히 겹쳐주시는게 더 깔끔해보이고 좋아보여요!! // 음? 수정.

좋은맵 + 스타~

Leader wrote:

Hi, from my Modding Queue

Short map to mod, yay~

[Hard]
  1. 00:45:291 (1,2) - Timing is a bit hard to understand here, I suggest to replace these beats with a slider. // Notes are fine imo.
Nothing else to say, great map!

Kei wrote:

  • [Hard]

    *The slider velocity from 00:17:079 to 00:46:174 feels too fast. You don't give the player the feeling of the song. It sounds very calm, slow, and relaxing yet you didn't change the SV. Consider reducing it by 0,50x or whatever you prefer. // I agree that this is a calm part, so the only action I've done was volume adjusting. I think the tempo is quite equal all through the song, and I think an SV change is not effective.

    *The whistles at the chorus sound terrible imo. Too loud, unfitting.. just my opinion though. If you like them that much then consider adding a normal-sliderslide blank sound. It sounds too noisy. // Already there is.
  1. 00:17:961 (3) - Move a couple of grids to the left to blanket 00:17:520 (2)? Nazi.
  2. 00:43:526 - This spinner doesn't fit like this. I'd rather add a note here and then move the spinner to 00:43:747. Sounds better, since it doesn't ignore the vocal. // I don't think I'm ignoring the vocal c.c
  3. 00:49:703 - This part feels awkward to play because you ignore this beat here. Consider mapping it by adding a repeat to 00:49:261 (3) or simply adding a note. These empty spaces ruin the flow and derail the gameplay in general, in my opinion. // I want to follow the vocal, despite of that beat.
  4. 00:53:894 (4) - You did the same thing the guest mapper did with this part on his Normal difficulty. There's a much more important beat at 00:54:114, so please consider mapping it. Don't ignore it like this. // ^
  5. 00:58:747 (2) - These hitnormals sound way too noisy at beats like this one.. ;_; that's why I dislike the hitsounding you made for this part. // Reduced here.
  6. 00:59:188 (3) - IMO this slider sounds much better if you extend it to 00:59:850. It somehow sounds better with the vocal and it avoids empty blank spaces that break the flow. // Currently follows the vocal better imo.
  7. 01:00:070 (1) - Similar as with 00:53:894 (4). 01:00:291 is a much more important beat, so better move this slider here and add a note at 01:00:070? // Same here.
  8. 01:16:957 (3) - This slider is unnecesarily extended. Sounds much better if it ends at 01:17:457 imo. // Fixed.
    ___________________
The spread is too "poor" for ranking (see the point colored in red for explanation). At least, from my point of view. [Hard] needs some work too.. I dislike some slider usages (regarding the flow-breaker patterns/rhythms). As always, just my personal opinion. Also, the timing sounds a bit strange for example at 00:24:799. I'd recommend a timing check by an experienced BAT in timing or something!

Good luck! and thanks for m4m'ing. :oops:

Alarido wrote:

From * THE SLOW BPM FREE MODDING QUEUE *

[Hard]
00:36:247 (6,7) - Why not make them like this? → http://puu.sh/3L5Ce.jpg → Code: // I want a circle pattern here.
144,124,36247,2,0,B|144:256|152:268|196:304|224:312|252:312,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,274,37129,2,0,B|365:242|369:210|369:194|369:122,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[/notice]

That's it ^^

This song is nice ^^ and the voice of girl reminds me the voice of Cristina Mel (a Brazilian, Gospel singer woman) → http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cristina_Mel

Take a Star!!!!

Att...
Thanks all~
DingGGu
305 posts
Joined January 2011
DingGGu
[scanter's Easy]
00:36:468 (3) - 이쁘게 신경 써주세요.
00:49:703 (3) - 이 뒷부분, 귀찮더라도, 슬라이더 틱에 짝! 소리 넣는건 어떨까요? (완벽한 맵을 위해서! 군대가기전 마지막.. 잘가요!)

[K.Penguin's Normal]
00:41:762 (2) - 빨간색 점이 슬라이더 틱에 올수있도록 해주세요. (무슨 의미인지 아실거에요)

[Hard]
00:45:291 (1,2) - 이렇게 배치하는건 어떠신가여?
SPOILER

BPM이 느리기도하고, 딱히 제가 감히 노트를 추가/제거는 할 수 없어서 나지모딩만 했습니다. 죄송해요~ take my star
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin

DingGGu wrote:

[K.Penguin's Normal]
00:41:762 (2) - 빨간색 점이 슬라이더 틱에 올수있도록 해주세요. (무슨 의미인지 아실거에요)

BPM이 느리기도하고, 딱히 제가 감히 노트를 추가/제거는 할 수 없어서 나지모딩만 했습니다. 죄송해요~ take my star
Thanks MOD

adwdawd
osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:한참 지나서
Artist:Baek Ji-young
ArtistUnicode:백지영
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:K.Penguin's Normal
Source:Rooftop Prince
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scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter

DingGGu wrote:

[scanter's Easy]
00:36:468 (3) - 이쁘게 신경 써주세요. 지금도 괜찮아보여요 ㅇ.ㅇ
00:49:703 (3) - 이 뒷부분, 귀찮더라도, 슬라이더 틱에 짝! 소리 넣는건 어떨까요? (완벽한 맵을 위해서! 군대가기전 마지막.. 잘가요!) 무슨 말인지 이해가 잘;
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
I dunno

red sections
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Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
Star'd for now. Haven't seen anything wrong in the whole beatmap, just going to talk with Charles to make sure the timing is efficient enough before letting it go :3
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Sonnyc
Asked Ultimate for the timing <.<
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate

Sonnyc wrote:

Asked Ultimate for the timing <.<
You know, the fun thing is.
If you listen to the beat only, the bpm and offset is consistant the entire song.

BPM: 68,000
Offset: 1.190

But if you're really going for the voice, then your bpms and offsets sound good : )

Edit: Getting SS on first try without having to fully concentrate.
+ I know this is a bit late, but i wonder why the first 17 seconds aren't mapped. I like the song there too ^^.
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