1. Deli's Normal (2.95 stars, 235 notes)
2. Forseen's Hard (4.8 stars, 516 notes)
3. Satellite (4.95 stars, 531 notes)

[TimingPoints]
1496,476.190476190476,4,1,0,100,1,0

S v p e r wrote:

#modreqs request. The offset is 549 as you requested

scanter wrote:

o.o!!

Satellite wrote:

SPOILER

13:53 Satellite: りんぐせんせい
13:53 Satellite: hi~
13:54 wring: hi
13:54 Satellite: テストプレイとかどうですか(ちら
13:54 wring: あ、はい
13:55 *Satellite is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257165 senya - Hitorishizuka]
14:00 Satellite: 01:54:810 (3,4,5,6,1,2) -
14:01 Satellite: ここ音取りは間違ってないけど
14:01 Satellite: 1/4拍子と1/6拍子混ざってるんだよなぁ
14:01 Satellite: テスターは
14:01 Satellite: みんならくらくクリアしていくけど
14:01 Satellite: 結構むずくない？ｗ
14:02 wring: スライダーやん
14:02 Satellite: やっぱりスライダーでフォローしてるのがデカいか～
14:02 Satellite: note置いたら
14:02 Satellite: 一気に難易度あがるよねｗｗｗ
14:02 wring: 多分問題ないと思うけどｗ
14:03 wring: http://puu.sh/3aPkx.jpg
14:03 wring: でもこっちのほうが好き
14:04 wring: e-tone
14:04 wring: 00:37:667 (2) - ここは3分割ぐらいして動き入れたほうがいい
14:04 wring: 今のままだと長すぎ
14:05 wring: 俺だったら
14:05 wring: 時間指定むず
14:05 wring: 緑線の初めから3個まで全部区切る
14:05 Satellite: 等間隔でってこと？
14:06 wring: 00:38:143 (3) - 00:38:381 (4) - 00:38:619 (5) - ここ
14:06 wring: 問題は
14:07 wring: 00:37:905 (2) - ここを入れるか
14:07 Satellite: あ・・・
14:07 Satellite: http://puu.sh/3aPXf.jpg
14:08 Satellite: メロディ拾えばいいんじゃね・・・
14:08 wring: それはいっちゃいかんｗ
14:08 Satellite: ｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
14:09 Satellite: ふうむ・・・
14:10 wring: あとはね
14:11 wring: 00:16:238 (3,4,1) - ここを感覚的に広げて行ってもいいと思った
14:11 Satellite: (そういうの配置するのほんと苦手なんだよね・・・)
14:12 wring: 01:17:191 (4) - ここを青線まで伸ばしてもいいと思った
14:12 Satellite: たしかに
14:12 Satellite: ああああ5分席はずします
14:13 wring: 01:48:143 (2) - こういうところもくっつけなくてもいいかなって思う
14:13 wring: 01:51:000 (2,3,4) - 1番と変えてくっつけなくてもリズムは分かってくれる
14:14 wring: 02:11:476 (2) - 青線まで伸ばしても
14:14 wring: 02:27:667 (5) - ＾
14:14 wring: 後は俺の単なる趣味になるけどサビは加速1.2倍も悪くないんではないかっておもいますた
14:15 wring: http://puu.sh/3aQrw.jpg
14:15 wring: こういうのとか
14:16 wring: http://puu.sh/3aQub.jpg
14:16 wring: http://puu.sh/3aQwA.jpg
14:18 wring: http://puu.sh/3aQyG.jpg
14:18 wring: これぐらいのジャンプありありでしょ
14:19 wring: 以上desu

IRC LOG

224,264,108143,2,0,L|240:240,3,21.25
152,260,108381,2,0,L|120:264,3,21.25
192,196,108619,2,0,L|200:164,3,21.25
120,200,108857,2,0,L|84:196,3,21.25
144,136,109095,2,0,L|140:100,16,21.25

wring wrote:

Satellite wrote:

SPOILER

13:53 Satellite: りんぐせんせい
13:53 Satellite: hi~
13:54 wring: hi
13:54 Satellite: テストプレイとかどうですか(ちら
13:54 wring: あ、はい
13:55 *Satellite is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257165 senya - Hitorishizuka]
14:00 Satellite: 01:54:810 (3,4,5,6,1,2) -
14:01 Satellite: ここ音取りは間違ってないけど
14:01 Satellite: 1/4拍子と1/6拍子混ざってるんだよなぁ
14:01 Satellite: テスターは
14:01 Satellite: みんならくらくクリアしていくけど
14:01 Satellite: 結構むずくない？ｗ
14:02 wring: スライダーやん
14:02 Satellite: やっぱりスライダーでフォローしてるのがデカいか～
14:02 Satellite: note置いたら
14:02 Satellite: 一気に難易度あがるよねｗｗｗ
14:02 wring: 多分問題ないと思うけどｗ
14:03 wring: http://puu.sh/3aPkx.jpg
14:03 wring: でもこっちのほうが好き
14:04 wring: e-tone
14:04 wring: 00:37:667 (2) - ここは3分割ぐらいして動き入れたほうがいい
14:04 wring: 今のままだと長すぎ
14:05 wring: 俺だったら
14:05 wring: 時間指定むず
14:05 wring: 緑線の初めから3個まで全部区切る
14:05 Satellite: 等間隔でってこと？
14:06 wring: 00:38:143 (3) - 00:38:381 (4) - 00:38:619 (5) - ここ
14:06 wring: 問題は
14:07 wring: 00:37:905 (2) - ここを入れるか
14:07 Satellite: あ・・・
14:07 Satellite: http://puu.sh/3aPXf.jpg
14:08 Satellite: メロディ拾えばいいんじゃね・・・
14:08 wring: それはいっちゃいかんｗ
14:08 Satellite: ｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
14:09 Satellite: ふうむ・・・
14:10 wring: あとはね
14:11 wring: 00:16:238 (3,4,1) - ここを感覚的に広げて行ってもいいと思った
14:11 Satellite: (そういうの配置するのほんと苦手なんだよね・・・)
14:12 wring: 01:17:191 (4) - ここを青線まで伸ばしてもいいと思った
14:12 Satellite: たしかに
14:12 Satellite: ああああ5分席はずします
14:13 wring: 01:48:143 (2) - こういうところもくっつけなくてもいいかなって思う
14:13 wring: 01:51:000 (2,3,4) - 1番と変えてくっつけなくてもリズムは分かってくれる
14:14 wring: 02:11:476 (2) - 青線まで伸ばしても
14:14 wring: 02:27:667 (5) - ＾
14:14 wring: 後は俺の単なる趣味になるけどサビは加速1.2倍も悪くないんではないかっておもいますた
14:15 wring: http://puu.sh/3aQrw.jpg
14:15 wring: こういうのとか
14:16 wring: http://puu.sh/3aQub.jpg
14:16 wring: http://puu.sh/3aQwA.jpg
14:18 wring: http://puu.sh/3aQyG.jpg
14:18 wring: これぐらいのジャンプありありでしょ
14:19 wring: 以上desu

IRC LOG

224,264,108143,2,0,L|240:240,3,21.25
152,260,108381,2,0,L|120:264,3,21.25
192,196,108619,2,0,L|200:164,3,21.25
120,200,108857,2,0,L|84:196,3,21.25
144,136,109095,2,0,L|140:100,16,21.25

hai douzo

1. 00:04:810 (1,2) - 以下の画像のようなリズムはどうでしょうか？　ボーカルのロングトーンにはもちろん、後ろのピアノから音を取ったとしても合う音鳥だと私は思うのですがいかがでしょうか？
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:45:286 (3) - ここの音とりですが、リバーススライダーを解除して一旦流れを区切った以下の音とりのほうがリズムを感じられるように思うのですがどうでしょうか？
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:50:524 (4,1,2,3) - これら全体を右に4グリッド、その後に 00:50:524 (4) - だけを下に1グリッドさげるとこの箇所で三角形が作れるのですがどうでしょう？
4. 01:11:000 (1) - となりの(4)と高さをあわせるならこのノートをy=217へ
5. 02:20:048 (1,2,3,1) - ここの音取りも02:27:667 - のようにfinishからスライダーが始まるようにしてみてはいかがでしょうか？
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:23:381 - この1小節はリバーススライダーでうめて、スピナーは03:27:191 - から始めたりするのはどうでしょうか？
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:05:048 - remove NC?
2. 00:05:286 - add NC?
3. 00:12:667 - remove NC?
4. 00:12:905 - add NC?
5. 00:16:714 - you can add a note with Finish-hit sound. It's understandable even though you take the sound of the synth.
6. 00:26:952 (3,4,5,6) - only this part is different. how about the same rhythm as 00:25:048 (3,4,5) - here
   or
   changing 00:34:333 (3,4,5) - to the same one as 00:26:714 (3,4,5,6)
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:44:333 - add NC?
8. 00:55:286 - this spinner can start from 00:54:929
9. 00:58:857 (6,7,8) - if you mapped the reverse slider at 00:59:095, it would be more rhythmical to players IMO since you place the reverse slider at 00:57:191
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:06:714 - ^, and how about this rhythm?
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:21:476 - add NC?
12. 01:27:191 - the same as 00:16:714
13. 01:51:952 - add NC?
14. 01:59:571 - ^
15. 02:01:238 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about this rhythm?
    remove notes (7 and 8). then move (2,3,4,5,6) to 02:01:476.
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 02:05:762 - the same as 00:55:286 -
17. 02:08:381 - how about this rhythm?
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 02:37:667 - the same as 00:16:714 -
19. 02:59:333 - add NC?
20. 03:08:619 - same as 00:16:714 -
21. 04:01:000 - extend this reverse slider to 04:01:476?

1. 00:54:333 (5) - ホイッスルの代わりにフィニッシュ?　同じリズムが繰り返されてるのでヒットサウンドも同じ、なんてどうでしょう
2. 00:54:810 - remove Finish?　この後音数がぐっとへってロングトーンだけになるので、ここはホイッスルで静かにしめるのもありだとおもうのですがどうでしょうか？
3. 01:55:762 (5,6,1,2) -
   (5)のスライダーを01:56:238でとめ、
   (6)を01:56:476の赤線に移動
   (1)を01:56:833の青線に移動させ、1/8で次の白線までのリバーススライダーに変更
   (2)はそのまま
   このような音鳥はどうでしょう？曲中のリズムのニュアンスは拾いつつ素直に叩けるようになると思うのですがどうですか？
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:04:810 (5) - 00:54:333 に同じく
5. 02:05:286 - 00:54:810に同じく

1. 00:54:333 (5) - ホイッスルの代わりにフィニッシュ?　同じリズムが繰り返されてるのでヒットサウンドも同じ、なんてどうでしょう いいですね、add~
2. 00:54:810 - remove Finish?　この後音数がぐっとへってロングトーンだけになるので、ここはホイッスルで静かにしめるのもありだとおもうのですがどうでしょうか？ とりあえず保留で～
3. 01:55:762 (5,6,1,2) -
   (5)のスライダーを01:56:238でとめ、
   (6)を01:56:476の赤線に移動
   (1)を01:56:833の青線に移動させ、1/8で次の白線までのリバーススライダーに変更
   (2)はそのまま
   このような音鳥はどうでしょう？曲中のリズムのニュアンスは拾いつつ素直に叩けるようになると思うのですがどうですか？
   
   SPOILER

   
   結構いまの音取りでも問題なさそう+歌詞に従順にフォローできてると思うのでnochangeで！
4. 02:04:810 (5) - 00:54:333 に同じく ^
5. 02:05:286 - 00:54:810に同じく

dosyeru wrote:

Forseen's Hard
hi

1. 00:05:048 - remove NC?
2. 00:05:286 - add NC?
3. 00:12:667 - remove NC?
4. 00:12:905 - add NC?
5. 00:16:714 - you can add a note with Finish-hit sound. It's understandable even though you take the sound of the synth.
6. 00:26:952 (3,4,5,6) - only this part is different. how about the same rhythm as 00:25:048 (3,4,5) - here
   or
   changing 00:34:333 (3,4,5) - to the same one as 00:26:714 (3,4,5,6)
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:44:333 - add NC?
8. 00:55:286 - this spinner can start from 00:54:929
9. 00:58:857 (6,7,8) - if you mapped the reverse slider at 00:59:095, it would be more rhythmical to players IMO since you place the reverse slider at 00:57:191
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:06:714 - ^, and how about this rhythm?
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:21:476 - add NC?
12. 01:27:191 - the same as 00:16:714
13. 01:51:952 - add NC?
14. 01:59:571 - ^
15. 02:01:238 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about this rhythm?
    remove notes (7 and 8). then move (2,3,4,5,6) to 02:01:476.
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 02:05:762 - the same as 00:55:286 -
17. 02:08:381 - how about this rhythm?
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 02:37:667 - the same as 00:16:714 -
19. 02:59:333 - add NC?
20. 03:08:619 - same as 00:16:714 -
21. 04:01:000 - extend this reverse slider to 04:01:476?

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
fine!

[Satelite]
Placement
00:25:286(3,4) それぞれCtrl+Gしてやると、今よりも流れがいいかなと思います
次の位置とDSをあわせているのでここを変えてしまうと後ろも変えないといけないのでごめんなさい・・・。確かに流れは綺麗になります> <
00:53:153(2,4,6)^
ここは故意的にこうしてます！囲むように！
02:03:619(2,4,6)^
^
00:58:619(1) 少し配置を変えてこんな感じなど

SPOILER

変化をつけるためにあんな感じにしてみました！
02:33:143(5) も少し中心から離してみては、ちょっと狭いような気がします
Done
Rhythm
00:54:929 スピナーの後の空白がちょっと勿体無い気がします、スピナー手前出来てボーカルの始まりからnote入れてもいいかなと

SPOILER

spinner直後のnote配置はHiddenつけたときに非常にやりづらいのでスライダーから入ってフォローしてます
02:05:405(1)^
^
01:05:762(6) 01:06:119まで伸ばしてるのはやや不自然です、2番以降は赤線で止めてるのでここも同様に
Done
04:00:524(1,2)曲の最後で盛り上がる部分なのでストリームのが好きです
微妙なbpmで最後の最後で１００出したりコンボ切ったりすると、おこ(ꐦ`•ω•´)なのでkeepで
Hit Sonud
00:01:476(2) バックの音的にfinishの方があってます（whistleがかき消されて殆ど聞こえません
volumeを40％まで絞って追加しました
00:26:000(1)　両端にwhistleはちょっとくどいような…始点のは無いほうが聞こえがいいような
Done

nice map. good luck & star!

1. BG: 1366*768 is OK?

1. 00:46:476 (4) - 00:45:286 (3) - と重なって見にくく感じました。いっそdeleteか00:46:714にadd-noteでも良いと思います
   

1. 01:40:762 (3,4) - it is better to change DS to 1.5x
2. 02:21:476 (8,9) - this jump is a little hard. How about the following?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:59:333 (1) - it is better to avoid 0.5x-slider, I think
4. 03:07:667 (8,9) - How about the following?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:40:524 (2,3,4) -下記くらい角度をつけてsliderを少し離した方が良いと思いました
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:51:000 (2,3,4) - ＾
3. 03:22:429 (3,4) - not stack
4. 03:25:048- no whistle

RandomEffect wrote:

Beautiful song!
let me mod, please~

[General]

1. BG: 1366*768 is OK?

少し前のランクルールが変わって
(ちょうどワイドサイズが対応した頃です)
4：3の比率だけでなく16：9も対応するようになったんです！
なので、1366/768は16：9なのでRankableってことです！

[Satellite]

1. 00:40:524 (2,3,4) -下記くらい角度をつけてsliderを少し離した方が良いと思いました
   
   SPOILER

   
   keep
2. 01:51:000 (2,3,4) - ＾
   ^
3. 03:22:429 (3,4) - not stack
   故意的にずらしてます。プレイしててこちらのほうが楽しいと思うので
4. 03:25:048- no whistle　
   ok

~Good Luck~

thanks modding

• • Tags: add "TH6 TH06"

• • 00:43:381 (1,2) - Try this pattern to keep a consistency with 00:39:571 (1,2) and 00:47:191 (1,2):
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:54:810 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:15:762 (1) - Remove the repeat, then start a new slider at 01:16:476 and end it at 01:16:714. (just make the same pattern you did at 01:08:143 (1,2))
  • 01:23:381 (1) - ^ do the same pattern here.
  • 01:53:857 (1) - Remove the repeat from this slider, then move the next slider at 01:54:810 and add a repeat.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 02:05:286 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 02:18:619 (8) - Same as 01:15:762.
  • 02:26:714 (1) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a repeat.
  • 02:33:857 (1) - Same as 01:23:381.
  • 03:34:810 (1) - Same as 01:15:762.
  • 03:42:429 (1) - ^
  • 03:50:524 (1) - Same as 02:26:714.
  • 03:57:667 (1) - Same as 01:23:381.

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • 00:25:643 (5), 00:27:548 (6), 00:31:000 (4), 00:31:476 (6) etc. - These claps don't really fit here, they're ok if use them in kiai parts but here they sounds out of place imo, remove them and add some whistles.
  • 01:23:619 (1) - Why a spinner here? Delete it and map this part in a different way.
  • 01:26:952 (9) - Convert this slider in 3 1/4 circles.
  • 02:30:762 (2) - Move this circle at x:256 y:366.
  • 02:34:095 (1) - Same as 01:23:619.
  • 03:02:429 (6) - Add a new combo.
  • 03:06:238 (4) - ^
  • 03:57:905 (1) - Same as 01:23:619.
  • 04:01:000 (7) - Convert this slider in 5 1/4 circles.

• • Rename this diff "Insane".
  • HP Drain Rate: 7
  • 00:13:024 (1) - A spinner doesn't fit here, delete it and add some sliders/circles.
  • 00:24:810 (2), 00:26:714 (3), 00:28:619 (2) etc. - Same as Forseen's Hard, remove these claps and keep using whistles.
  • 00:37:667 (2,3,1) - Why such a low volume? Increase it a little, +15~20% should be enough.
  • 00:51:000 (3) - Playing a long slider like this one is kinda boring, try a different pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:00:524 (1) and all next similar sliders - End this slider 1/4 earlier since it doesn't follow anything.
  • 01:23:500 (1) - Same as 00:13:024.
  • 01:48:143 (2,3,1) - Same as 00:37:667.
  • 02:01:476 (3) - Same as 00:51:000.
  • 02:33:976 (1) - Same as 00:13:024.
  • 03:57:786 (1) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• • Tags: add "TH6 TH06"

add~


Satellite

• • Rename this diff "Insane".
  ummm.No change , Because please look at this.
  http://osu.ppy.sh/s/86602
  http://osu.ppy.sh/s/67506
  my insane diff name "Satellite" and this song "Yuuhei Satellite" So. Satellite better.
  • HP Drain Rate: 7
  okay~
  • 00:13:024 (1) - A spinner doesn't fit here, delete it and add some sliders/circles.
  use slider done
  • 00:24:810 (2) - , 00:26:714 (3) - , 00:28:619 (2) - etc. - Same as Forseen's Hard, remove these claps and keep using whistles.
  add clap and many clap keep please. I think it better.
  • 00:37:667 (2,3,1) - Why such a low volume? Increase it a little, +15~20% should be enough.
  +10%up~ done
  • 00:51:000 (3) - Playing a long slider like this one is kinda boring, try a different pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  I like this pattern... keep okay >_> ?
  • 01:00:524 (1) and all next similar sliders - End this slider 1/4 earlier since it doesn't follow anything.
  done
  • 01:23:500 (1) - Same as 00:13:024.
  done
  • 01:48:143 (2,3,1) - Same as 00:37:667.
  done
  • 02:01:476 (3) - Same as 00:51:000.
  ^
  • 02:33:976 (1) - Same as 00:13:024.
  done
  • 03:57:786 (1) - ^
  done

xxheroxx wrote:

Forseen's Hard

• • HP Drain Rate: 6 - Fixed
  • 00:25:643 (5), 00:27:548 (6), 00:31:000 (4), 00:31:476 (6) etc. - These claps don't really fit here, they're ok if use them in kiai parts but here they sounds out of place imo, remove them and add some whistles. - Removed them and replaced with whistles for the most part
  • 01:23:619 (1) - Why a spinner here? Delete it and map this part in a different way. - Changed with an extra note
  • 01:26:952 (9) - Convert this slider in 3 1/4 circles. - Yup
  • 02:30:762 (2) - Move this circle at x:256 y:366. - Done
  • 02:34:095 (1) - Same as 01:23:619. - Done
  • 03:02:429 (6) - Add a new combo. - Added
  • 03:06:238 (4) - ^ - Added
  • 03:57:905 (1) - Same as 01:23:619. - Done
  • 04:01:000 (7) - Convert this slider in 5 1/4 circles.- Fixed

Leorda wrote:

[Forseen's Hard]
00:07:905 (5) - Flip horizontally for better flow? Having a placement and a shape of slider like this can make break the flow. Perhaps, circular flow can make improve the flow
00:46:476 (1,2,3) - How about snap this to purple tick (1/6)? Since you always following the vocal
00:58:619 (5) - New combo for following your combo pattern
01:56:952 (1,2,3) - How about snap this to purple tick (1/6)? Since you always following the vocal
02:20:762 (5) - New combo for following your combo pattern
02:24:333 (7) - ^
03:00:762 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - In this part, you add the clap randomly, and it makes awkward to hear while gameplay. Consider to remove the clap for this part and add clap when the object is snap at 2nd and 4th tick
03:56:952 (6) - New combo for following your combo pattern

sheela901 wrote:

Hi again! From my queue~

hi again~~

[Satellite]

01:55:762 (5) - Same as 01:53:857 (1)?
a few Resembling

03:22:429 (3) - Not well stack
Is a specification

Good Luck and Star!

thanks modding again!
and star~~!!

Smoothie wrote:

senya~

[Satellite]
00:16:714 (1) - Add a clap? It sounds nice i think.
00:36:952 (8) - Add a clap on the slider end?
01:27:071 (8) - Add clap?
02:01:000 (7) - ^
02:37:548 (8) - ^

Good luck!
(´°_°)ﾉ''～☆

quantum-rose wrote:

Feel free to ingnore my mod cuz I'm just a newbie mapper~

[General]
The combo color 128,128,64 is too close to the background and really increases the difficulty
keeeeeep
[satellite]
00:29:333 (4,1) - music is rather slow here so I think the jump is a little big
02:25:048 (5) - move the last point to 73,365
02:25:762 (7) - move the last point to 237,272
03:44:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the distance snap is larger in the last kiai time,so try changing their order to make it more interesting,maybe like this? http://puu.sh/3oDlY.jpg
okay~~ add

excellent work,good luck~
star~☆

alex_98 wrote:

[Forseen's Hard]
01:09:810 (3) - I find this confusing. I think maybe convert this into circles?

CDFA wrote:

From dkun's queue thing

Overall:
Make sure your clap hitsounds are consistent. They're cool, I like the texture they bring, but yeah sometimes they just go away. Mostly in choruses.
okay check...

Insane:
00:05:286 (3,4,5,6) - Like it's a cool pattern but like why.
only Quiet part
00:25:643 (4) - Put the clap on the end of the slider, not the beginning
done
00:43:381 (1) - Like it's fine symmetrically. However, remove the red tick. Right now, it's causing a weird sort of bump in this
no
00:45:286 (1) - ^
no
00:46:397 (1,2) - Snap this to 1/3. Right now it's starting on the blue tick, which is wrong. Also consider removing the previous note and giving (1) another repeat, so it's easier to read.
done
00:59:810 (5) - Even out the spacing between (4) and (6)
done
01:34:810 - Oh god did you copypaste most of this. Some parts are almost identical, just CTRL + Hd and CTRL + Jd. Like I'm usually fine with copy-pasting choruses, especially since there's more than 2 choruses, but with verses it's like why.
01:34:810 - ???


mya.

thanks modding

jonathanlfj wrote:

From my modding queue~
osu! needs moar senya \o/

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
I dont expect to find anything here and i was right


[Satellite]
you should rename ur username to senya
keeeeep lol
00:37:667 (2,3,1) - try this:

SPOILER

ok
00:46:119 - try a note here to cover for the piano
you r right. but keep sorry
01:20:048 (2,3,4) - raise this so the curve makes a blanket around 01:19:095 (4)
ok
01:56:873 (1,2) - this plays a bit awkward since the heavy vocals are at 01:56:873 and 01:57:191 which is covered by one repeat slider. try using 3 1/3 sliders with no repeats here, or any other method so the player can press at 01:57:191
ummm... hold sorry
02:53:857 (3) - break this up into 1/2 slider plus a note so the sound at 02:54:095 can be covered
no. i like this.
03:27:191 (2) - NC to make it look more colourful xD
03:45:048 (4) - initiate the hexagon jump here so the flow from 03:43:857 (4) is more natural e.g.

SPOILER

no.

starrrrrr and good luck in ranking~

nice modding thanks star~

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Forseen's Hard]
00:05:286 (6) - take off the whistle on slider body? - Removed
00:46:397 (1) - i'd prefer you unstack this since the 1/3 rhythm is hard to read when it is stacked (you can make a triangle flow with 00:45:286 (4,2)) - Unstacked and changed the pattern
00:58:976 (3) - a bit overmapped? i dont hear ay significant beat/vocal here - Yeah, removed this circle
01:09:095 (1) - take off NC here and put it at 01:10:286 (4) - Done
01:14:810 (9) - 1 grid left to stack with 01:12:905 (5) - Oops, fixed
01:39:571 (4) - take whistle off slider body - Yeah
01:56:873 (1) - same as 00:46:397 (1) - Changed this part as well
02:03:143 (7) - spacing? - How the hell did I manage to miss this, fixed
02:18:619 (11) - NC here instead of 02:19:333 (1) - Yup
03:00:762 (1) - this jump was quite unexpected and flows a bit awkwardly, try moving it closer to the end of 02:59:333 (8) - Did that
03:36:952 (6) - NC - Added
03:37:905 (10) - stack on where 03:35:762 (1) was - Sure
pretty challenging hard u got there