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Topic Starter
pkhg

0gre wrote:

hello~

if it fine I would like to request to make taiko diffs!!
or not needed?
Sorry, but i'm not accepting more diffs.

Try next time !
Niko-nyan
hi there

General
Romanized the title : ハートのKakuritsuない(TV Size)
uncheck Letter box during breaks

Easy~ NOTHING D:

Normal~
01:25:360 - New Combo maybe

Hard~
00:19:516 - can't get the rythme
00:20:089 - ^

Insane~
HOW GOOD PATTERN YOU MAKE!

just that i can mod i think ;w;
Entreal
Sorry if you had to wait! For some reason I had trouble modding this :( (Newbie here)

Easy
00:26:777: I think you need to add some hit sounds from 00:26:777 to 00:36:904, it sounds bland (Ex. 00:32:509 add a finish, just the first circle of the slider).
00:45:885 - I think this slider tick needs a hit sound, since the other two has one

Normal
Nothing here, well in my perspective! xD

Hard
00:09:962 - Add a clap?
00:32:509 - Add a finish? (This kind of applies to the easy diff about the 00:26:777)

Insane
00:23:337 - finish?
00:25:439 - Why is circle 6 so far away from 4 and 5? Distance snapping
00:38:624 - Should add a hit sound here.
01:13:974 - ^
Hope this helps!
Topic Starter
pkhg

Frans Niko wrote:

hi there

General
Romanized the title : ハートのKakuritsuない(TV Size). It seems to be wrong, I use this "ハートの確率"
uncheck Letter box during breaks.Done!

Easy~ NOTHING D:

Normal~
01:25:360 - New Combo maybe. Doesn't fit well.

Hard~
00:19:516 - can't get the rythme
00:20:089 - ^
Listen again.

Insane~
HOW GOOD PATTERN YOU MAKE!

just that i can mod i think ;w;
I didn't change anything, I just uncheck letterbox during breaks, anyway, thanks.


Entreal wrote:

Sorry if you had to wait! For some reason I had trouble modding this :( (Newbie here)

Easy
00:26:777: I think you need to add some hit sounds from 00:26:777 to 00:36:904, it sounds bland (Ex. 00:32:509 add a finish, just the first circle of the slider).A finish sound suddenly, i dislike it
00:45:885 - I think this slider tick needs a hit sound, since the other two has one. Done!

Normal
Nothing here, well in my perspective! xD.
Thank You! :)

Hard
00:09:962 - Add a clap? Done!
00:32:509 - Add a finish? (This kind of applies to the easy diff about the 00:26:777). I dislike it! :P

Insane
00:23:337 - finish?. Sound sudden.
00:25:439 - Why is circle 6 so far away from 4 and 5? Distance snapping. A little jump, i love it :)
00:38:624 - Should add a hit sound here. Ok.
01:13:974 - ^ Ok.
Hope this helps!
Thank you! :)
BeatofIke
Sorry for the long wait! I'll try to mod this map by tomorrow!

You know what? Just have my star!
BounceBabe

pkhg wrote:

BounceBabe wrote:

00:59:348 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These streams are placed where no drum sound is given, so please add some other patterns to it. But sounds good for me :3.
Listen to the song here, pay a little more attention, I follow the drums on this part. Anyway, i change it a bit

Your choice but it really doesnt fit, and i appreciate more strict styles which have flow and are fitting, than overmapping.
I don't want to read such excuses please. Give me a good reason otherwise change it because it doesn't fit one bit and you can barely hear ANY drums how you say. No more rechecks after this. Good luck
Topic Starter
pkhg

BounceBabe wrote:

00:59:348 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These streams are placed where no drum sound is given, so please add some other patterns to it.

Your choice but it really doesnt fit, and i appreciate more strict styles which have flow and are fitting, than overmapping.

I don't want to read such excuses please. Give me a good reason otherwise change it because it doesn't fit one bit and you can barely hear ANY drums how you say. No more rechecks after this. Good luck
*sigh* Well, i delete that stream.
I hope this make you happy :)
Thank you!
SamiPale
hi~from my mod queue

Comments in Important stuff part, which may include unrankable issue, is high recommend to be fixed.
Comments in Map designing part, Rhythm/Placing part, Hitsounds part are personal opinions. You can skip it/them if you disagree.

[General]
  1. Make the AudioLeadIn of your maps consistent(Open osu file by notepad to fix)
[gansijiye]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. None.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:47:987 (1) - ugly slider orz
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:36:331 (1) - whistle?
    2. 00:40:344 (3) - whistle?
    3. 01:13:401 (2) - remove finish? and finish at 01:14:930 (3)?
[Normal]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. It's crazy that SV1.5 for a 175 BPM normal hehe. And this means that AR5 is slow.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:31:554 (4) - Make this curver?
    2. 01:24:102 (2) - copy a new one from (1) and use Ctrl+G/Ctrl+H/Ctrl+J to make them perfect?
  4. Hitsounds
    1. I don't know if those tickclaps at the beginning are necessary, it sounds inconsistant ;_;
    2. 00:35:949 (2) - whistle?
    3. 00:38:051 (5) - whistle?
    4. 01:25:438 (4) - whistle?
[Hard]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. None.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:47:605 (1) - make the head of this slider curve? http://puu.sh/2bnVX
    2. 01:20:280 (1) - make this curve?
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:05:949 (5) - whistle?
    2. 00:12:828 (7) - finish instead of whistle?
    3. 00:18:178 (3) - whistle instead of clap?
    4. 00:20:185 (3) - whistle?
    5. 00:29:261 (3) and 00:31:936 (4) and - whistle?
    6. 00:34:229 (3) - remove whistle?
    7. 00:38:242 (6) - finish? and whistle at 00:38:433
    8. 00:49:325 (6) - finish?
    9. 00:52:000 (3) - whistle instead of (4)'s?
    10. 01:09:197 (3) - remove whistle?
[Insane]
  1. Important stuff
    1. Make the kiai time of [Insane] consistent with other diffs. Ends at 01:29:070
  2. Map designing
    1. This map looks conservative. I think you should learn more placement way to place notes widely instead of keeping many "slider around cirlce" or "slider around slider" placements orz, this shape do not fit anywhere though it's useful.
    2. Stream(triples or more) starts at white tick should be used prudently, which is not easily made well.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:37:860 (3,4,5,6,7) - This shape with (1)(2) looks not good... at least make (3)(4) consistent with (1)(2)?
    2. 00:57:541 (2) - The shape of this slider's end is ugly ;w;
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:07:669 (3) - whistle?
    2. 00:12:446 (1) - remove whistle at the beginning and the end?
    3. 00:29:834 (2) - remove whistle?
    4. 00:30:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - how about red tick whistle only?
    5. 00:33:465 (2) - whistle?
    6. 00:34:420 (7) - remove whistle?
    7. 00:36:331 (2) - whistle?
    8. 00:49:134 (6) - remove clap?
    9. 00:50:662 (5) and 00:51:809 (3) and 00:52:573 (5) - remove clap?
    10. 00:54:866 (3) - whistle?
    11. 00:56:586 (10,11,12) - If you really want to add claps, I suggest that add more one at (12), or even more one at (11), and reduce the volume.
    12. 00:57:541 (2) - whistle?
    13. 00:57:350 (1) - S:C2 clap?
    14. 00:58:879 (1) and 00:59:643 (4) - ^
    15. 01:00:407 (1) - whistle?
    16. 01:07:669 (9) - remove clap?
    17. 01:09:102 (6) - nahhhhh this clap
    18. 01:11:490 (5) - remove clap? and whistle here
    19. 01:11:872 (8) - clap?
    20. 01:13:974 (2) - I'd love finish here hehe, though it's a little noizy
    21. 01:17:605 (1) - remove finish?
    22. 01:19:898 (1) - ^
    23. 01:20:662 (1) - remove clap and add whistle?
    24. 01:21:044 (4) - whistle?
    25. 01:21:236 (5) - remove clap?
Sorry I'm sick these days and comes late... good luck on your map~
Kanari


Haii ~
You requested via forum pm ~


[General]
- "そらのおとしもの" Can this be romanzied? owo
- Make music track lead-in the same.
- Bookmarks can be removed owo


[Easy]
00:06:522 (5) - Make this slider look better? ;w;
00:08:051 (1) - I think that this may be a bit difficult to new players. The slider velocity change is a bit sudden.


[Normal]
00:13:019 (4) - Stack this not properly.
00:43:783 (4) - x:352 y:128
01:14:548 (1,2,3) - Move to x:300 y:328 so that (3)'s slider end meets with 01:13:401 (4,5)
01:26:777 (8) - New combo, because you placed one at 00:13:401 (1)


[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1
00:38:242 (6) - Move to 00:38:433 and remove two reverses.
00:38:242 - Add a circle. (^ If you did that.)


[Insane]
- Overall Difficulty -1
00:04:993 (3) - 3rd point at x:36 y:80
00:09:771 (6) - Make this a bit more curved.
00:20:471 (1) - ^
00:32:892 (1) - Up one grid? owo
00:43:879 (3,4) - Make the spacing the same.
01:29:452 - This timing point is not needed.
01:29:070 - This should be the point where kiai time ends.


Well mapped ~
Good luck with rank! >w<
Topic Starter
pkhg
SamiPale

SamiPale wrote:

hi~from my mod queue

Comments in Important stuff part, which may include unrankable issue, is high recommend to be fixed.
Comments in Map designing part, Rhythm/Placing part, Hitsounds part are personal opinions. You can skip it/them if you disagree.

[General]
  1. Make the AudioLeadIn of your maps consistent(Open osu file by notepad to fix) All changed to 1000ms
[gansijiye]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. None.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:47:987 (1) - ugly slider orz.Changed the shape.
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:36:331 (1) - whistle? Ok~
    2. 00:40:344 (3) - whistle? Ok~
    3. 01:13:401 (2) - remove finish? and finish at 01:14:930 (3)? Ok~
[Normal]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. It's crazy that SV1.5 for a 175 BPM normal hehe. And this means that AR5 is slow.AR5 looks good for me.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:31:554 (4) - Make this curver? Ok~
    2. 01:24:102 (2) - copy a new one from (1) and use Ctrl+G/Ctrl+H/Ctrl+J to make them perfect?Ok~
  4. Hitsounds
    1. I don't know if those tickclaps at the beginning are necessary, it sounds inconsistant ;_; I like these claps.
    2. 00:35:949 (2) - whistle? Ok~
    3. 00:38:051 (5) - whistle? Ok~
    4. 01:25:438 (4) - whistle? Ok~
[Hard]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. None.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:47:605 (1) - make the head of this slider curve? http://puu.sh/2bnVX Ok~
    2. 01:20:280 (1) - make this curve?
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:05:949 (5) - whistle? Ok~
    2. 00:12:828 (7) - finish instead of whistle? Ok~
    3. 00:18:178 (3) - whistle instead of clap? Clap fits better.
    4. 00:20:185 (3) - whistle? Doesn't fit.
    5. 00:29:261 (3) and 00:31:936 (4) and - whistle? I think that whistle doesn't fit.
    6. 00:34:229 (3) - remove whistle? Ok~
    7. 00:38:242 (6) - finish? and whistle at 00:38:433 Ok~
    8. 00:49:325 (6) - finish? Ok~
    9. 00:52:000 (3) - whistle instead of (4)'s? [/color]
    10. 01:09:197 (3) - remove whistle?
That whistle sounds really good.

[Insane]
  1. Important stuff
    1. Make the kiai time of [Insane] consistent with other diffs. Ends at 01:29:070 Fixed.
  2. Map designing
    1. This map looks conservative. I think you should learn more placement way to place notes widely instead of keeping many "slider around cirlce" or "slider around slider" placements orz, this shape do not fit anywhere though it's useful.
    2. Stream(triples or more) starts at white tick should be used prudently, which is not easily made well.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:37:860 (3,4,5,6,7) - This shape with (1)(2) looks not good... at least make (3)(4) consistent with (1)(2)? Done!
    2. 00:57:541 (2) - The shape of this slider's end is ugly ;w; Changed the shape.
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:07:669 (3) - whistle? Ok~
    2. 00:12:446 (1) - remove whistle at the beginning and the end? I think that fit well. No change.
    3. 00:29:834 (2) - remove whistle? Ok~
    4. 00:30:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - how about red tick whistle only? Ok~
    5. 00:33:465 (2) - whistle? Ok~
    6. 00:34:420 (7) - remove whistle? Ok~
    7. 00:36:331 (2) - whistle? Ok~
    8. 00:49:134 (6) - remove clap? Ok~
    9. 00:50:662 (5) and 00:51:809 (3) and 00:52:573 (5) - remove clap? Ok~
    10. 00:54:866 (3) - whistle? Ok~
    11. 00:56:586 (10,11,12) - If you really want to add claps, I suggest that add more one at (12), or even more one at (11), and reduce the volume. Ok~
    12. 00:57:541 (2) - whistle? Ok~
    13. 00:57:350 (1) - S:C2 clap? Ok~
    14. 00:58:879 (1) and 00:59:643 (4) - ^ Ok~
    15. 01:00:407 (1) - whistle? Ok~
    16. 01:07:669 (9) - remove clap? Ok~
    17. 01:09:102 (6) - nahhhhh this clap fit good.
    18. 01:11:490 (5) - remove clap? and whistle here Ok~
    19. 01:11:872 (8) - clap? Ok~
    20. 01:13:974 (2) - I'd love finish here hehe, though it's a little noizy. I didn't add a finish here, i think you heard the backgroun music.
    21. 01:17:605 (1) - remove finish? I love that finish. No change.
    22. 01:19:898 (1) - ^ Ok~
    23. 01:20:662 (1) - remove clap and add whistle? Ok~
    24. 01:21:044 (4) - whistle? Hmm... Added a clap instead of whistle.
    25. 01:21:236 (5) - remove clap? Ok~
Sorry I'm sick these days and comes late... good luck on your map~

Thank you :)

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:



Haii ~
You requested via forum pm ~


[General]
- "そらのおとしもの" Can this be romanzied? owo No :p
- Make music track lead-in the same. Ok
- Bookmarks can be removed owo. Booklmarks everywhere!


[Easy]
00:06:522 (5) - Make this slider look better? ;w; Already looks good.
00:08:051 (1) - I think that this may be a bit difficult to new players. The slider velocity change is a bit sudden. This isn't very hard. No change


[Normal]
00:13:019 (4) - Stack this not properly. Hmm... No change.
00:43:783 (4) - x:352 y:128 Done
01:14:548 (1,2,3) - Move to x:300 y:328 so that (3)'s slider end meets with 01:13:401 (4,5) Oh! thanks, now looks cool :3
01:26:777 (8) - New combo, because you placed one at 00:13:401 (1) Done


[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1 Ok
00:38:242 (6) - Move to 00:38:433 and remove two reverses.
00:38:242 - Add a circle. (^ If you did that.)
No changes :P


[Insane]
- Overall Difficulty -1 OD9 is good.
00:04:993 (3) - 3rd point at x:36 y:80 Done
00:09:771 (6) - Make this a bit more curved.Done
00:20:471 (1) - ^ Done
00:32:892 (1) - Up one grid? owo Done
00:43:879 (3,4) - Make the spacing the same. Done
01:29:452 - This timing point is not needed. Deleted
01:29:070 - This should be the point where kiai time ends.Done


Well mapped ~
Good luck with rank! >w<

Thankyou!
- Kevin
Here are just my suggestion, you can ignore it


[Normal]



  • 00:07:286 (1,2,3) - Think about unstack this
    00:09:579 Add note
    00:13:401 (1,2,3) - Same here

[Insane]


  • 01:09:102 (6) - Remove this note and add a Whistle at end of this slider 01:08:815 (5) - ( 01:09:006 .)
The other things are perfect in my opinion.

Ps: You need a 3 Star less map, *your easy map is really hard for new players*
Topic Starter
pkhg

kevinelson wrote:

Here are just my suggestion, you can ignore it


[Normal]



  • 00:07:286 (1,2,3) - Think about unstack this. Stacked look better.
    00:09:579 Add note. Ok.
    00:13:401 (1,2,3) - Same here. Stacked look better.

[Insane]


  • 01:09:102 (6) - Remove this note and add a Whistle at end of this slider 01:08:815 (5) - ( 01:09:006 .) I don't like it. No change.
The other things are perfect in my opinion.
Thanks :)
DakeDekaane
Hola :v

Tarde pero aqui estoy para hacerle el mod.

[General]
Todo bien.

[Easy]
1.20 SV, es algo rapido a mi parecer, pero funciona bien en este mapa, ten en cuenta que es mi punto de vista.
00:13:592 (1) - Muevelo a 00:13:401, ya que sigues las percusiones para esta parte y puede ser un poco confuso, asi inicias con las voces con el enfasis en "-ra", se oye mejor y es más facil de jugar, si lo haces quita el NC aqui y ponlo en 00:13:974 (2).
00:27:732 (2) - Rota este un poco hacia la derecha, mejora el flujo, algo asi.
00:29:834 (1,2) - Tal vez parezca un poco dificil de jugar, pero se veria mejor algo asi en mi opinion
00:39:388 - 00:48:751 - Remueve los timing points que usas para las custom ticks, sigues mas las voces aqui y se oye raro cuando se juega.
00:39:388 (2) - Haz que el nodo rojo de este slider concuerde con un tick del slider, da un buen efecto al jugar, como lo hiciste con 00:42:446 (1).
00:47:223 (3,1) - Podrias hacer esto para las voces.

00:58:497 (1) - Pon NC aqui, siento que los dos sliders pertenecen a la misma frase.
01:13:401 (2) - Igual a como mencione en un slider anterior, mueve el nodo rojo de tal manera que este en el mismo lugar que un tick, en este caso en el de en medio.
01:16:841 (1) - Remueve NC
01:18:369 (3) - Pon NC
01:19:898 (1) - Y remueve NC aqui

Estética (nazi)
00:08:051 (1) - Mueve el 2do nodo a x:216 y:56 y el ultimo a x:160 y:68, resultando en un blanket perfecto con 00:09:197 (2)
00:09:197 (2) - Si haces lo anterior, copia el slider anterior, rotalo 120°, voltealo con Ctrl+G, y ponlo donde solia estar (x:208 y:152)
El resultado seria algo asi
00:14:930 (3) - Mueve el 2do nodo a x:168 y:212, blanket.
00:17:223 (1,2,3,4) - Tengo una sugerencia para hacer que esta parte se vea mejor, pero es larga, dejo el resultado y el codigo, si tienes alguna duda, mandame pm in-game.

368,132,17223,6,0,B|381:163|349:209|300:216|300:216|304:252|288:296|248:312,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,228,18369,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,292,18751,2,0,P|108:236|120:180,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,19516,2,0,P|208:68|180:16,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Normal]
1.50 SV q_q , esta velocidad, sumada al spacing que estas usando (1.3x) hace que esta dificultad sea algo complicada para una Normal, recomiendo reducirla a 1.40 por lo menos con 1.1 de spacing como mucho, puede que signifique remapear, pero el resultado puede llegar a ser mejor, aun asi dare algunas sugerencias de ritmo y hitsounds por si decides tomar mi recomendacion.
00:08:624 (5) - No recomiendo custom ticks cuando se esta mapeando para las voces, tiende a ser muy confuso al jugarlo, ya que pareciera que vas con las percusiones en vez de las voces.
00:11:108 (1) - ^
00:13:783 (3) - Remueve los hitsounds aqui, con un Finish en (2) basta para la enfasis
00:39:579 (3,4) - Lo que mencionaba arriba de los custom ticks, borra los timing points.
00:58:306 (4) - Borra este circulo.
01:26:777 (1) - Pon whistle en el inicio

[Hard]
Reduce el HP Drain en 1 y tal vez incrementa el Overall Difficulty en 1.
00:01:172 (1) - Haz este un slider de 1/2 beat con una repeticion, seria excelente para las voces aqui.
00:12:828 (7) - Pon NC
00:13:401 (1) - Remueve NC
00:14:548 (4) - Pon NC
00:17:032 (1) - Remueve NC
00:17:223 (2) - Pon NC
00:20:853 - Esta parte se podria jugar mejor asi

00:21:809 (6) - Si haces lo de arriba, pon NC aqui y quitalo de 00:23:337 (1), y pon otro NC en 00:24:102 (3).
00:38:242 (6) - Dejalo que solo tenga un repeat y pon un circulo en 00:38:624.
01:27:159 (3) - Quita el Finish y tal vez el whistle tambien
Me gusto esta diff p:

[Insane]
Reduce el Approach Rate en uno Overall Difficulty tambien.
Algunas notas estan de más, es decir, que no hay nada en la musica para justificar que esten ahi, intenta evitar esto, porque a veces suele destruir algunos patterns que podrian ser muy divertidos de jugar :p
00:15:216 (5,7) - Borra estas.
00:19:802 (7) - Borra este.
00:22:286 (2) - ^
00:22:764 (1) - Aqui pudo quedar excelente un triplet en 1/4 y pusiste un slider de 1/2 :c, haz el triplet o un slider de 1/4 con una repeticion.
00:38:529 (6) - Borra este.
00:40:822 - Puedes añadir algo aqui, pero es meramente opcional, ya que sigues las voces notoriamente aqui.
00:50:376 (2) - Borra este.
01:03:083 (1,2) - Esto es un poco mas de mi gusto personal, pero no me gusta como se juega este tipo de patterns, ya que no hay sonido en donde termina el slider, puedes borrar el circulo y extender el slider a donde estaba.
01:04:611 (6) - Este queda mejor acortandolo para que sea de 1/2
01:06:140 (4,5) - Borra el circulo y extiende el slider
01:07:764 (10) - Borra este circulo.
01:08:051 (1) - Acortalo para que sea de 1/2
01:08:720 - Un circulo quedaria aqui para un mejor stream.
01:10:630 (2) - Borra este.
01:11:395 - Pon algo aqui y borra el circulo en 01:11:586 (6).
01:11:777 - Y pon algo aca, pusiste triples donde no estaba >-<
01:12:159 (9) - Borra este.
01:15:216 - Añade un circulo aca.
01:16:841 (6) - Seria mejor que lo acortaras para que fuera de 1/2
01:18:369 (3,4) - Borra el circulo y extiende el slider.
01:19:898 (1) - Acorta este para que sea de 1/2
01:20:949 - Añade un circulo aqui
01:21:427 (1,2) - Borra el circulo y extiende el slider.
01:22:955 (6) - Acortalo para que sea de 1/2
01:25:822 (5,6,7,1) - Borra los circulos y extiende los sliders.

Bueno, creo es todo, espero te sea de ayuda, buena suerte /o/
Topic Starter
pkhg

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hola :v Hola! v

Tarde pero aqui estoy para hacerle el mod. Baka

[General]
Todo bien.


[Easy]
1.20 SV, es algo rapido a mi parecer, pero funciona bien en este mapa, ten en cuenta que es mi punto de vista.
00:13:592 (1) - Muevelo a 00:13:401, ya que sigues las percusiones para esta parte y puede ser un poco confuso, asi inicias con las voces con el enfasis en "-ra", se oye mejor y es más facil de jugar, si lo haces quita el NC aqui y ponlo en 00:13:974 (2). Okee.
00:27:732 (2) - Rota este un poco hacia la derecha, mejora el flujo, algo asi.Done!
00:29:834 (1,2) - Tal vez parezca un poco dificil de jugar, pero se veria mejor algo asi en mi opinion. Hmm. Me gusta como esta. No change
00:39:388 - 00:48:751 - Remueve los timing points que usas para las custom ticks, sigues mas las voces aqui y se oye raro cuando se juega. I love my hitsounding.
00:39:388 (2) - Haz que el nodo rojo de este slider concuerde con un tick del slider, da un buen efecto al jugar, como lo hiciste con 00:42:446 (1). Fixed.
00:47:223 (3,1) - Podrias hacer esto para las voces. Me gusta como esta. No change.

00:58:497 (1) - Pon NC aqui, siento que los dos sliders pertenecen a la misma frase. No sera "quita NC", aqui ya hay un NC.
01:13:401 (2) - Igual a como mencione en un slider anterior, mueve el nodo rojo de tal manera que este en el mismo lugar que un tick, en este caso en el de en medio. Fixed.
01:16:841 (1) - Remueve NC.Fixed.
01:18:369 (3) - Pon NC ^
01:19:898 (1) - Y remueve NC aqui ^

Estética (nazi)
00:08:051 (1) - Mueve el 2do nodo a x:216 y:56 y el ultimo a x:160 y:68, resultando en un blanket perfecto con 00:09:197 (2)
00:09:197 (2) - Si haces lo anterior, copia el slider anterior, rotalo 120°, voltealo con Ctrl+G, y ponlo donde solia estar (x:208 y:152)
El resultado seria algo asi
^I Love this^
00:14:930 (3) - Mueve el 2do nodo a x:168 y:212, blanket.
00:17:223 (1,2,3,4) - Tengo una sugerencia para hacer que esta parte se vea mejor, pero es larga, dejo el resultado y el codigo, si tienes alguna duda, mandame pm in-game.

368,132,17223,6,0,B|381:163|349:209|300:216|300:216|304:252|288:296|248:312,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,228,18369,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,292,18751,2,0,P|108:236|120:180,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,19516,2,0,P|208:68|180:16,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
^Copy+Paste^.

[Normal]
1.50 SV q_q , esta velocidad, sumada al spacing que estas usando (1.3x) hace que esta dificultad sea algo complicada para una Normal, recomiendo reducirla a 1.40 por lo menos con 1.1 de spacing como mucho, puede que signifique remapear, pero el resultado puede llegar a ser mejor, aun asi dare algunas sugerencias de ritmo y hitsounds por si decides tomar mi recomendacion.
00:08:624 (5) - No recomiendo custom ticks cuando se esta mapeando para las voces, tiende a ser muy confuso al jugarlo, ya que pareciera que vas con las percusiones en vez de las voces.
00:11:108 (1) - ^
00:13:783 (3) - Remueve los hitsounds aqui, con un Finish en (2) basta para la enfasis
00:39:579 (3,4) - Lo que mencionaba arriba de los custom ticks, borra los timing points.
00:58:306 (4) - Borra este circulo.
01:26:777 (1) - Pon whistle en el inicio
Sabia que algun dia pasaria esto. Mañana remapeo la diff :(

[Hard]
Reduce el HP Drain en 1 y tal vez incrementa el Overall Difficulty en 1. Done
00:01:172 (1) - Haz este un slider de 1/2 beat con una repeticion, seria excelente para las voces aqui. No parece haber nada en 00:01:363 - como para hacer eso.
00:12:828 (7) - Pon NC Done
00:13:401 (1) - Remueve NC Done
00:14:548 (4) - Pon NC Done
00:17:032 (1) - Remueve NC Done
00:17:223 (2) - Pon NC Done
00:20:853 - Esta parte se podria jugar mejor asi

Entiendo pero me gusta como esta.
00:21:809 (6) - Si haces lo de arriba, pon NC aqui y quitalo de 00:23:337 (1), y pon otro NC en 00:24:102 (3).
00:38:242 (6) - Dejalo que solo tenga un repeat y pon un circulo en 00:38:624. Comprendo a que te refieres pero me gustan esos repeats.
01:27:159 (3) - Quita el Finish y tal vez el whistle tambien. Solo quite el finish
Me gusto esta diff p:

[Insane]
Reduce el Approach Rate en uno Overall Difficulty tambien. No change. Mantengo ese OD y AR para el spread, porque si hago lo que dices, el Hard y el Insane tendrian el mismo star rating.
Algunas notas estan de más, es decir, que no hay nada en la musica para justificar que esten ahi, intenta evitar esto, porque a veces suele destruir algunos patterns que podrian ser muy divertidos de jugar :p
00:15:216 (5,7) - Borra estas. Realmente creo que hay ritmo en esta parte y esas notas lo marcan bien :3
00:19:802 (7) - Borra este. Deleted.
00:22:286 (2) - ^ Deleted.
00:22:764 (1) - Aqui pudo quedar excelente un triplet en 1/4 y pusiste un slider de 1/2 :c, haz el triplet o un slider de 1/4 con una repeticion. Entiendo tu punto, pero no quiero poner un triplet.
00:38:529 (6) - Borra este. Me gusta como suena. No change.
00:40:822 - Puedes añadir algo aqui, pero es meramente opcional, ya que sigues las voces notoriamente aqui. Podria ser, pero no :p
00:50:376 (2) - Borra este. Me encanta ese stream. No change.
01:03:083 (1,2) - Esto es un poco mas de mi gusto personal, pero no me gusta como se juega este tipo de patterns, ya que no hay sonido en donde termina el slider, puedes borrar el circulo y extender el slider a donde estaba. A mi me encantan esos patterns. No change
01:04:611 (6) - Este queda mejor acortandolo para que sea de 1/2 ^
01:06:140 (4,5) - Borra el circulo y extiende el slider. ^
01:07:764 (10) - Borra este circulo. Me encanta ese stream. No change.
01:08:051 (1) - Acortalo para que sea de 1/2. A mi me encantan esos patterns.
01:08:720 - Un circulo quedaria aqui para un mejor stream. Podria ser, pero me gusta ese pattern.
01:10:630 (2) - Borra este. Stream!!
01:11:395 - Pon algo aqui y borra el circulo en 01:11:586 (6). Amo mis patterns
01:11:777 - Y pon algo aca, pusiste triples donde no estaba >-< T_T Mis patterns...
01:12:159 (9) - Borra este. Ya sabes.
01:15:216 - Añade un circulo aca. Me da flojera cambiar eso.
01:16:841 (6) - Seria mejor que lo acortaras para que fuera de 1/2
01:18:369 (3,4) - Borra el circulo y extiende el slider.
01:19:898 (1) - Acorta este para que sea de 1/2. Lo repeti varias veces mas arriba.
01:20:949 - Añade un circulo aqui. Quiero mantener el pattern actual.
01:21:427 (1,2) - Borra el circulo y extiende el slider.No quiero repetirlo.
01:22:955 (6) - Acortalo para que sea de 1/2. ¿Quieres que lo repita?
01:25:822 (5,6,7,1) - Borra los circulos y extiende los sliders. Nah, no lo repetire.

Bueno, creo es todo, espero te sea de ayuda, buena suerte /o/
AWESOME MOD
Realmente deberias considerar ser un MAT o algo asi. Enserio, el mejor mod que he recibido :3
Thankyouu~
Darksonic
OD 9 para la insane realmente es mucho siendo que es una canción de no tan alto BPM, y aparte que tu Hard es OD 6. Realmente recomendaría que lo bajes, como te recomendaron antes, ya que aparte los mapas con OD 9 son bastante odiados, y mas cuando no encajan con el mapa :P
Topic Starter
pkhg

Darksonic wrote:

OD 9 para la insane realmente es mucho siendo que es una canción de no tan alto BPM, y aparte que tu Hard es OD 6. Realmente recomendaría que lo bajes, como te recomendaron antes, ya que aparte los mapas con OD 9 son bastante odiados, y mas cuando no encajan con el mapa :P
Reducido a OD 7 :p

Remapping Normal In progress :3
smallboat
Hello,for you mod,from my queue ^^ (poor english,sorry ~!)


Easy
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ok


Normal
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00:29:261 (6) - try to add whistle hitsound?
00:35:758 (1) - ^
00:58:115 (3) - try to add finish hitsound?
00:58:306 (4) - try to add whistle hitsound?

Hard
-------------
00:05:567 (4) - try to add whistle hitsound?
00:12:064 (6) - try to add clap hitsound?
00:17:032 (7) - ^
00:30:407 (2) - try to add whistle hitsound
00:36:522 (2) - ^
00:58:115 (3) - ^
01:10:535 (6) - try to add clap hitsound?

Insane
-------------
00:17:987 (5) - try to add clap hitsound?
00:20:280 (10) - ^
00:25:057 (4) - ^
00:27:541 (4) - try to add whistle hitsound?
00:28:115 (2) - ^
00:52:764 (1) - ^
00:57:541 (2) - ^
Topic Starter
pkhg

smallboat wrote:

Hello,for you mod,from my queue ^^ (poor english,sorry ~!)


Easy
-------------
ok

Thanks :3


Normal
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00:29:261 (6) - try to add whistle hitsound?
00:35:758 (1) - ^
00:58:115 (3) - try to add finish hitsound?
00:58:306 (4) - try to add whistle hitsound?

Oh,I forgot to say you, i'm currently waiting for a GD, because mine is horrible maped lol

Hard
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00:05:567 (4) - try to add whistle hitsound? I feel this whistle doesn't fit
00:12:064 (6) - try to add clap hitsound? I'm using the claps only in white ticks
00:17:032 (7) - ^ ^
00:30:407 (2) - try to add whistle hitsound. I don't wanna break the whistle pattern
00:36:522 (2) - ^ ^
00:58:115 (3) - ^ ^
01:10:535 (6) - try to add clap hitsound? I'm using the claps only in white ticks

Insane
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00:17:987 (5) - try to add clap hitsound? I'm using the claps only in white ticks (I use them every 2/1
00:20:280 (10) - ^ ^
00:25:057 (4) - ^ Added whistle instead of clap.
00:27:541 (4) - try to add whistle hitsound? I don't wanna break the whistle pattern
00:28:115 (2) - ^ I can't hear anything to add a whistle
00:52:764 (1) - ^ A whistle sound very repetitive and boring :P
00:57:541 (2) - ^ Oh, this already have a whistle lol
Thanks for moding~
I refuse some things but I appreciate your mod :)
Loooctav
Mas tarde moddeare tu mapa, ayudare en lo mas posible :)
P A N
some suggestion from #modreqs

[Easy]

00:04:993 (4) - left 1 grid
00:06:522 (5,6) - try this http://puu.sh/2R7Jw.jpg the current slide look a bit ugly ._.
code
388,216,6522,2,0,P|432:144|404:56,1,180.000006866455
336,44,7669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:14:930 (2) - move red point to 136|268 and move tail up 1 grid
01:12:255 (1) - its to close to 01:10:726 (3) not beautiful ;w; try other pattern. maybe http://puu.sh/2R7W1.jpg
01:21:427 (1) - move out from 01:19:898 (3) http://puu.sh/2R7Yi.jpg

[Dekaane's Normal]

.....
fine, look good.

[Hard]

00:07:132 (7) - 312|168. smooth to play
00:21:809 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/2R8gr.jpg maybe? the current slide a bit weird shape
01:02:318 (1,4,1) - 176|296 , 104|260 , 96|236

[Insane]

00:38:624 (7) - 286|125
00:50:853 (1) - 348|164
01:02:127 (3) - try delete this note ._. maybe better

GL :D
Topic Starter
pkhg

P A N wrote:

some suggestion from #modreqs

[Easy]

00:04:993 (4) - left 1 grid Done
00:06:522 (5,6) - try this http://puu.sh/2R7Jw.jpg the current slide look a bit ugly ._. Done
code
388,216,6522,2,0,P|432:144|404:56,1,180.000006866455
336,44,7669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:14:930 (2) - move red point to 136|268 and move tail up 1 grid Done
01:12:255 (1) - its to close to 01:10:726 (3) not beautiful ;w; try other pattern. maybe http://puu.sh/2R7W1.jpg I can't see the puush T_T
01:21:427 (1) - move out from 01:19:898 (3) http://puu.sh/2R7Yi.jpg
^ but changed a bit

[Dekaane's Normal]

.....
fine, look good.

[Hard]

00:07:132 (7) - 312|168. smooth to play
00:21:809 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/2R8gr.jpg maybe? the current slide a bit weird shape
01:02:318 (1,4,1) - 176|296 , 104|260 , 96|236

No changes here :P
[Insane]

00:38:624 (7) - 286|125
00:50:853 (1) - 348|164
01:02:127 (3) - try delete this note ._. maybe better.
All done here ^^

GL :D
Laaate reply, anyway thx for modding :)
chaee
Normal:
Not many suggestions to make :p. Good job :)
00:04:229 (1) - Shorten slider and put 2 back arrows, maybe?

Hard:

00:13:783 (4) - Rotate by -6

Insane:

00:03:274 (6) - Stack

00:13:210 (3) - Stack with 00:13:019 (2) - ,maybe?

00:15:121 (4) - Cool stream :)
DakeDekaane
I really don't like sliders with too many repeats in a Normal >-<
Thanks anyways :3
Topic Starter
pkhg
@Shinchaechae
I don't wanna change any thing :P
Anyway thank you :D
Frostmourne
Some of IRC mod. My osu client crashed though :< so I lost all of log there. Do you still have it ?

I will bubble this afterwards as Hard diff still remains a plenty of unsnapped things.
DakeDekaane
Update please, I had wrong offset and tags, they're fixed now D:
http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=eKTL7u64
Topic Starter
pkhg
Updated.
Ok, all done now.
Ready :D
Frostmourne
Good luck for the first map ! pkhg
Topic Starter
pkhg
Thank you Frostmourne-san <3
dkun
big big yeah first ranked map!
DakeDekaane
First :3
Frostmourne
\:D/ first ranked \:D/
ritsu-tanaika
Congrats pkhg-san! :D First ranked map
Cloudchaser
congratz :3 GJ
Kanari
Congrats ! >w<
Delis
gratz( ̄д ̄)ノww
Topic Starter
pkhg
Yay :D
Thank you guys :)
Lanturn
ooo grats pkhg :D
Verlaren
Congrats!!
Oyatsu
Congratz for first ranked! Welcome to Osu! mapper team :D
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