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CSY the corrupt
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Joined March 2010
CSY the corrupt
irc mod
18:45 CSY the corrupt: 好像没什么可mod(;°д°)
18:45 CSY the corrupt: 不过硬要说的话,有些间距可能改一下会好看一点
18:46 CSY the corrupt: 就比如说00:05:508 (1,2) - 这种
18:46 CSY the corrupt: 不要太挨着啊
18:46 Strawberry: 唔 移上一点好了~
18:47 CSY the corrupt: 00:33:546 (3,4) - 就变成跟这个间距一样的就好了
18:47 CSY the corrupt: 虽然我知道后面是1.2x的
18:47 Strawberry: 改了~
18:48 CSY the corrupt: 00:45:200 (4) - 这个是不是有必要NC
18:48 CSY the corrupt: 节奏不一样给点提示
18:49 Strawberry: 噢噢
18:49 Strawberry: 对
18:49 CSY the corrupt: 02:21:200 (1) - 因为类似的这个最后这里是用了NC
18:49 Strawberry: 然后00:45:200 (1,2) - 这两个ctrl+g一下会不会好点o.o
18:49 Strawberry: 感觉之前的spacing有点违和
18:50 CSY the corrupt: 嗯?这2个怎么
18:50 CSY the corrupt: 00:45:200 (4,5) - 还是说这2个
18:50 Strawberry: http://puu.sh/31yBz.jpg
18:51 CSY the corrupt: 嗯嗯
18:51 CSY the corrupt: 好点
18:51 CSY the corrupt: 01:36:892 (4) - 这里也一样
18:51 CSY the corrupt: NC
18:52 Strawberry: 噢噢
18:52 Strawberry: 我把后面的nc去掉
18:52 CSY the corrupt: 嗯
18:53 CSY the corrupt: 然后好像没啥了╮(￣▽￣")╭
18:53 Strawberry: LOL 十分感谢！！！
18:53 CSY the corrupt: 不用
18:53 Strawberry: 可以po log上去><
18:53 CSY the corrupt: 好
Flower
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Joined August 2011
Flower
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[tleM]
00:02:277 (2) - 向上移一点，和1分开
00:04:123 (6) - ^
00:05:969 (2) - ^
00:05:969 (2) - ^
00:11:969 (3,4) - 改成切分音的节奏试试，间隔改成1/4在00:12:662 - 加上一个note，位置可以在x:385,y:33
00:13:354 (2) - 感觉跳这么远不是很爽快 向右移动至和1接触可能会舒服些
00:16:354 (6) - 试着删除或者去掉whistle看看？这里有个突然变弱的感觉，甚至我觉得如果有sb的话也可以在这里像pulse的sb一样突然变暗
00:19:354 (3,4) - 同00:11:969 (3,4) -
00:38:739 (1) - 有点感觉flow断得太突兀
00:52:585 (5,6,7) - 改成这样？

00:59:508 - add soft whistle
01:03:431 (5,6,7) - 感觉这个有点缺乏活力 ↓只是建议
SPOILER
01:10:816 (3,4,5,1) - 同00:02:277 (2) -
01:15:200 (4) - ^
01:23:046 (1,2) - 微调一下blanket
01:29:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 也是感觉太突兀
01:46:354 - +note？
01:57:200 - ^

[Hard]
00:36:892 (5,6) - blanket
00:42:431 (1) - 要么1/2要么1/1 3/4听起来蛋疼
00:59:046 (4) - 可以叠在00:57:200 (1) - 下面？
02:03:662 (1,2) - blanket

[twice]
00:08:277 (4) - 歪了
00:41:508 (4,1) - blanket
01:35:969 (2) - 考虑一下要不要再加个nc
01:48:892 (1,2,1) - flow有点糟糕 ↓只是建议
SPOILER

[SRY]
有几个地方感觉hard for hard 音效都没加感觉不是很爽 比如00:53:277 (9,10,1) -

Good luck~
Strawberry
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Strawberry

Flower wrote:

123

[tleM]
00:02:277 (2) - 向上移一点，和1分开 √
00:04:123 (6) - ^ √
00:05:969 (2) - ^ √
00:05:969 (2) - ^ √
00:11:969 (3,4) - 改成切分音的节奏试试，间隔改成1/4在00:12:662 - 加上一个note，位置可以在x:385,y:33 我觉得现在这样作为简单I就可以了..
00:13:354 (2) - 感觉跳这么远不是很爽快 向右移动至和1接触可能会舒服些 √
00:16:354 (6) - 试着删除或者去掉whistle看看？这里有个突然变弱的感觉，甚至我觉得如果有sb的话也可以在这里像pulse的sb一样突然变暗 √
00:19:354 (3,4) - 同00:11:969 (3,4) - ^
00:38:739 (1) - 有点感觉flow断得太突兀 因为这里有个"锣"的声音啊.. flow在这里break一下反而可以映衬音乐
00:52:585 (5,6,7) - 改成这样？太远了感觉不好读……

00:59:508 - add soft whistle √
01:03:431 (5,6,7) - 感觉这个有点缺乏活力 ↓只是建议 √
SPOILER
01:10:816 (3,4,5,1) - 同00:02:277 (2) - √
01:15:200 (4) - ^ √
01:23:046 (1,2) - 微调一下blanket √
01:29:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 也是感觉太突兀 同^
01:46:354 - +note？不好…… 感觉难读
01:57:200 - ^

[Hard]
00:36:892 (5,6) - blanket √
00:42:431 (1) - 要么1/2要么1/1 3/4听起来蛋疼 感觉没差..
00:59:046 (4) - 可以叠在00:57:200 (1) - 下面？√
02:03:662 (1,2) - blanket √

[twice]
00:08:277 (4) - 歪了 √
00:41:508 (4,1) - blanket √
01:35:969 (2) - 考虑一下要不要再加个nc 现在的可以啊..
01:48:892 (1,2,1) - flow有点糟糕 ↓只是建议 √
SPOILER

Good luck~
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Diasios
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Diasios
Time to recheck this map! :D


General

  • • Tags: add "tlem"

Twi's Normal

  • I still think that 0,90x or 0,80x spacing will fit a lot better with the current slider velocity but I'm not going to force you to change it, it's not a big deal anyway.
    • 01:48:892 (1,2,1) - If you want some rhythm variation and want to use 1/4 then use some repeating sliders to make these patterns easier:
    SPOILER
    • 01:54:892 (2,3,4) - Select all these circles and reverse them (ctrl + g), seeing the same identical pattern twice is kinda boring imo.

Hard

  • • 00:51:662 (5) - What about using a ~ slider for a better flow?
    SPOILER
    • 02:16:585 (4,5) - I guess you want some rhythm variation here, still I don't really like this pattern, try this:
    SPOILER

Melt

  • • 00:45:431 (2) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:45:546, also try this:
    SPOILER
    • 02:22:585 (5) - Move this circle at x:256 y:39.

SRY

  • • 00:42:431 (1) - Don't use a boring straight slider, try this:
    SPOILER
    • 01:14:739 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - If you really want to use all these combos then change the colors a bit:
    SPOILER

I totally forgot about this map, I'm really sorry x_x
Check all these minor suggestions and call me again.
Strawberry
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Strawberry
Fixed all. Thank you <3
Diasios
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Diasios
(ノ ﾟДﾟ)ノ彡
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DeletedUser_1574070
Just about the Tag (Suggestion)


Park Jin Bae + Shin Dong Whi
ESTi X M2U

So If you want to put that Name 'Park Jin Bae', I think 'Shin Dong Whi' should be added.

And, since this song is reagarded as sequal of 'Oblivion'. So I suggest to put this too.
Strawberry
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Strawberry
Fair enough. i'll fix them in the next change.

updated!
scanter
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scanter
\o/ niceu map & song
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Strawberry ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Melt]


  1. 01:15:662 - You are forgot add finish to here.
  2. 02:22:585 (5) - Add new combo,looks much better.

[Hard]


  1. 00:46:123 - You are forgot add finish to here.
  2. 02:22:585 (10) - Add new combo,looks much better.

[Twi's Normal]


  1. 01:00:662 - Add a note to here,follow with drum.
  2. 01:34:123 (1) - More better rhythm,like this.

OK ~ That's all ~ Pretty nice map ~

Call me back ~ ;)
Strawberry
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Strawberry
All fixed except the nc on the last note!~ thank you moe Rika ~<3
Kodora
Kodora
awesome, go-go bakaberry :3
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Looks much better ~

Here you go <3

Niko-nyan
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Niko-nyan
gratz! omg
scanter
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scanter
gratz xD
Azure
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Azure
omededo :3
Poggo
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Poggo
Woow new map from you <3 gratz with rank :3
Strawberry
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Strawberry
Thanks Rika and all you guys!!~
Chewin
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Chewin
Gratz strawberry <3
HeatKai
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HeatKai
strawberry-nyan <3 congrats <3
Flask
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Flask
哇草妹
Verlaren
Verlaren
grtz
RikiH_
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RikiH_
Epic map
lkx_Shore
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lkx_Shore
这就rank了，好快
iyasine
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iyasine
gratz !
LKs
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LKs
草莓、
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
考前rank bybf
Strawberry
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Strawberry
Thank you everyone!!!!~
Aurele
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Aurele
Congratz c:
bmin11
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bmin11
Congratz Strawberry!
Saturnalize
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Saturnalize
what do you mean it doesn't have easy diff?
orz ok :<
Strawberry
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Strawberry

Loli Cjj wrote:

what do you mean it doesn't have easy diff?
orz ok :<
the present normal diff is easy enough imo since the bpm of the song is such low. lol
SHINKiHEART
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SHINKiHEART
nice song of o2jam. :)
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