1. Andrea's Normal (4.14 stars, 192 notes)
2. Hard (4.85 stars, 316 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 361 notes)
4. Sekai's Easy (2.08 stars, 119 notes)
5. Sekai's Hard (4.87 stars, 310 notes)

Andrea wrote:

Mp3 quality is really bad, I suggest you to find a better one.

Also, let me make Normal if that's available!

HabiHolic wrote:

[Insane]
00:08:535 (6) - Finish Finish sounds weird here.
00:25:175 (8) - NC? It will break my NC pattern
00:58:691 (3) - Ctrl + G? Ok, nice idea~
01:05:722 (3) - ^ Not for this one

Good Map Star +1
GL~

W h i t e wrote:

As #modreq

And Good Map! Thanks

[Hard]

01:15:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is difficult for hard diff, I recommand this pattern. Hmm, a lot of people say this is hard, okay i change the pattern.

Example

01:16:503 (1) - 1/4 is good for this nope, i want a slowdown here :3

[Insane]

00:49:785 (1) - How about distance x1.00? I know it's not problem... Ups, didn't notice this. Fixed~

I want to give a star

Very cute song ~ :3

Good luck!

General

Sekai's Easy

Andrea's Normal

Hard

Sekai's Hard

Insane

That's all GL moe song <3

scanter wrote:

Hard

1. Stack leniency -1~3. overlapped notes are a little many. Hmm, i better not to touch this.
2. I recommend add NC on at least every big white tick. because, per combo is slightly over 10↑ Nope, this is intentional so player wont get hp so easily.
3. 00:35:488 (2,3,4) - jump is a little big. reduce distance like x1.2~1.4? 1.5x is fine for hard, besides the bpm is low.
4. 01:15:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - In hard diff, this stream looks a little expert level. how about this rhythm? look at number 1,2 This is fine i think, i have seen more longer stream in some ranked map hard diff

Insane

1. I recommend add NC on at least every big white tick. because, per combo is over 10↑
2. 00:15:566 (10,11) - put to jump this note. sound was changed to strong clap. like this. No, it will be too surprising.
   This is code. I moved several notes to better place.
   
   SPOILER

   196,216,15566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   220,262,15683,2,0,L|276:352,1,105,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   276,352,16035,6,0,P|328:320|380:308,2,105,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   220,262,16738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   88,65,16972,2,0,L|125:219,1,157.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:24:941 (7) - Add NC? distance was changed. Adding nc for jump is not my style.
4. 00:30:097 (9) - reduce repeat length to 00:30:507 this point and copy-paste same note. clap sound on slider's start is much better in this rhythm. Hmm, i think my slider is fine. But i'll consider this.
5. 00:32:441 (4) - If you want more dynamic, Ctrl + G. Ok.
6. 00:58:691 (3) - How about substitute 2 circles for non-downbeat sound? like this. I think my slider is fine.
   This is code.
   
   SPOILER

   440,88,58691,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   240,156,58925,1,4,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:03:847 (6) - Is it intentionally unstacked? unless, move to x:256, y:248 Yup, intentional.
8. 01:37:597 (11) - Same as 00:30:097 (9)

That's all GL moe song <3

BrokenArrow wrote:

Correct me if I'm wrong, but shouldn't "(Short Ver.)" be removed from the song's title?

Metadata

• Refrain from using names such as "Short", "Full", or "Cut Ver." in your map title unless the extension is part of the song's original title. These names aren't needed, as the song remains the same regardless of its length.

I don't know the original song title because google doesn't seem to find anything related :v

1. Please do not use short words like op in tags. It's too short and search engine won't work with this properly. Instead, you can add more tags like ost (short from Original SoundTrack), Gakuoh (people call this novel like this A LOT) and probably Lump of Sugar (it's their visual novel, after all)

1. 00:25:644 (9) - consider placing a New Combo here, so players will read this pattern easier and it will fit with music, also. Or you can try to swap NCs between 00:26:347 (12,1) - to follow vocals better. Feel free to chose one of these variants, but it's totally up to you.
2. 01:05:722 (3) - nazi - this slider kinda breaks your flow, I strongly recommend you to Ctrl+G this slider.Try to reverse this slider, so you will get cute triangle-flow between (1,2,3) which flows much better than you current pattern.
3. 01:16:972 (13) - you're kinda overmapping here. That 1/8 sound disappears at 01:17:441 - so, you should finish your slider here. Oh, and if you apply this suggestion, place a circle at 01:17:675 - to follow vocals.
4. 01:31:035 (5) - blargh, please place a New Combo here to follow vocals better. It will point out end of previous pattern and start of a new one. So, NC here will fit with music, pattern + it makes flow a bit more understandable.
5. 01:56:113 - you shouldn't ignore that drum sound there. It's regular 1/2 sound and it's kinda confusing that you're ignoring it. Try to map it and you'll hear that something like this sounds good here.

1. You use a lot of 1/4s and 1/2 and playfield looks kinda flooded with circles, so I'd recommend you to use AR8. If you agree, switch AR to 8 and make circles bigger. This is [Hard] diff, so you'd better not to use AR8 and CS5 at the same time
2. 01:55:410 (1) - this spinner clearly doesn't fits here.A specially that LOUD and POWERFUL beat at 01:55:878 - simply replace this spinner with hitobjects. example.
   
   Pretty nice diff, but it's too hard for a [Hard] diff. A lot of 1/4s, and small circles. Consider making it easier.

1. 00:06:191 - loud clap here is ignored. Can't you map it? :V Simple circle with clap hitsound will be enough, but you can make something more interesting, tho
2. 00:44:863 (10) - do NOT use sliders like this one, Second reverse appears too late and players have no time to read it, what's more this kind of sliders is very uncommon, so players don't ecven EXPECT to see it there.
3. 01:17:206 (2) - when you return back to normasl SV and DS you'd better lace a New Combo, too! So, players will know that slowdown/speedup is over. Place a NC here to make pattern easier-understandable for players
4. 01:34:081 - place a circle here, to follow vocals and to keep rhythm consistent. Triplet here will help players to understand and read your rhythm easier + it will make this diff a bit more challenging.
   
   Same as Sekai's diff, I guess. [Hard] should be a little bit more relaxing, imo.

• 
  I've expected this diff to be a bit more symmetrical, but whatever. Great job, Nyandrea!

1. You should reduce HP and OD by one tick to make this diff more beginners-friendly to keep diff spread balanced.
2. 00:05:253 (2) - this noteis too close to 00:02:910 (2)'s tail, so some beginners may click it before clicking (1). Consider Ctrl+G (reversing) 00:05:253 (2,3) -these notes to make your flow a bit easier for beginners.
3. 00:36:660 (3,1) - nazi - it's quie clear, that you can improve your blanket here A LOT. Just do it, to make your map a bit prettier <3
4. 01:06:660 (1) - remove a new combo here to keep your pattern more consistent. If you place NCs too often players will cry!
5. 01:10:410 (1) - consider replacing it with 1/2 slider and start at 01:10:175 - to follow music. Don't worry, it's ok and it's rankable as long as it fits with music.

• • Your BG is almost nsfw, mind using another one?

• • 00:26:816 (3,1) - Delete the circle and move the next spinner 1/2 earlier.
  • 00:30:097 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:32:910 (1,2,3) - Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:52:128 (3) - I don't really like flow here, try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:14:628 (2,1) - Delete the spinner and try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:19:785 (4) - Rotate this slider 30° clockwise.
  • 01:31:035 (3) - Move this circle at x:260 y:40.
  • 01:32:206 (1) - Same as above, delete the spinner and try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  

• I'm going to write in italian, if you want a translation just ask.
  • 00:02:441 (4) - Flippalo verticalmente e rimettilo a x:368 y:176.
  • 00:19:785 (1) - Ruota questo slider un pò in modo che sia la copia di 00:18:847 (6) ma capovolto orizzontalmente e verticalmente.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:48:613 (5,6) - Cambia l'ordine nella timeline del cerchio con lo slider, in questo modo continui la pattern di suoni precedente, se non ti piace prova a fare così:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:55:878 (5) - Fai finire lo slider 1/2 prima e aggiungi un cerchio dove finiva.
  • 01:10:644 (4,5,6,1) - Uh non mi piace il flow qui, prova cosi:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:27:988 (6) - Stessa cosa qua, prova a fare una pattern simile a quella sopra oppure prova questa se vuoi cambiare un pò:
  
  SPOILER

  

• • 00:06:660 (8) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:06:894.
  • 00:07:363 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:14:863 (6) - Curve this slider a little, also try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:30:097 (7) - 2 1/4 repeating sliders fit much better here imo.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:55:410 (6) - End this slider 1/4 earlier and add a circle at 00:55:878.
  • 01:26:581 (3) - Delete this circle to keep a consistency with 01:19:199 (2,3).
  • 01:33:613 (5) - Move this circle 1/4 earlier...
  • 01:33:964 (7) - ...and this circle 1/2 earlier.
  • 01:52:363 (6) - Start this slider at 01:52:597.
  
  SPOILER

  

• • 00:04:785 (1) - End this slider 1/4 earlier and add a circle at 00:05:136.
  • 00:05:956 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:06:660 (1) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 00:07:011 and another one at 00:07:128.
  • 00:14:160 (1,2) - I don't understand what these sliders are following, try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:17:675 (1,2,3) - Delete these circles and start the slider 1/2 earlier.
  • 00:38:652 (7) - Uh... why a circle here? Delete it.
  • 01:01:972 (3) - Rotate this slider 45° clockwise.
  • 01:31:972 (1) - A spinner doesn't really fit here imo, delete it and map this part in a different way.
  • 01:55:410 (1) - End this spinner 1/4 earlier.

• • 00:01:738 (x) - Add a circle like you did at 00:03:613 (7).
  • 00:26:816 (13) - Rotate this slider 15° clockwise.
  • 00:30:097 (9) - Same as Hard, use 2 1/4 repeating sliders.
  • 00:45:449 (12,13) - I don't like flow here, rotete (13) a little:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:07:128 (6) - Rotate this slider 15° anticlockwise.
  • 01:31:503 (6) - Rotate this slider 15° clockwise.
  • 01:33:613 (5) - Move this circle 1/4 earlier and add a circle at 01:33:730.
  • 01:51:191 (5) - Rotate this slider 15° clockwise.