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mancuso_JM_
Sorry for the delay

In Normal and Insane: 03:12:426 (Spin) - Move this spinner to 03:12:183 since the long vocal starts where you placed (1), so will fit much better if you move this Spinner till this point.

Other than that, everything looks in order. Call me back then please

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EDIT: Kiai sections in Normal looks kinda repetitive, but looks ok anyways to me.
Rechecked everything, and this should be ready to go.
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Irreversible
maybe it is FlashBack instead of Flashback ?

http://puu.sh/2Hxzo.png

not sure though xD
DakeDekaane
I was just wandering around browsing some maps and I found some stuff that needs to be polished/changed before ranking this, I'll point only the major issues I could find.

[General]
:!: As Irreversible said, the correct title of the song is FlashBack, with the letter B capitalized, as it's stated in the video of this song, see image below in spoilerbox. You must change this.


[Normal]
I find AR 3 too slow for this song, I know this is the lowest diff, but having too slow AR makes many objects appear in the screen and a beginner would likely scream in despair and click as fast as possible (not really, but something similar), increase it at least by 1. Also HP Drain and OD 2, this is not an Easy right? increase both by 1, if you're afraid about star rating, it will just increase to 3.07, which is still accepted imo.
By that you will make a better spread in your difficulties, HP goes 3>5>8 and OD goes 3>5>7
03:12:183 (1) - Not necessary but maybe put NC in this spinner?

[Insane]
I find this pretty overmapped in some streams, I'll just point those who bothered me while playing, don't want to bee too picky, and other some suggestions here.
00:37:399 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete the circles in blue ticks, it's a bit jarring hitting this as there's nothing in the music that makes it intuitive in my opinion
00:42:507 - A circle could fit here very nice with the drums, you really should add it.
00:52:480 - This definitely will sound and play better here, try it, it's a bit weird as you have now as the stream goes before the one that should be in drums.

00:57:832 (1,2,3,4,5) - As I said in the first suggestion for this, delete the objects in blue ticks.
01:52:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part could be very fun to play if following vocals, so delete objects in blue ticks.
02:02:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same reason as above, but in this case just delete (2,4,6)
02:34:156 (1,2,3) - You should know what I'm going to say for this.
02:36:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same for here.
02:44:859 (1) - I find the hitsound for this slider a bit annoying, but I think nobody else mentioned this, so I'll leave this to you to consider.
02:50:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - As I said in 02:02:697, just delete (2,4,6)
03:01:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete overmapped objects.
03:06:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same here.
03:08:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - And here.
03:12:183 (1) - Not necessary but maybe put NC in this spinner?
I passed some triples here, but you should know that many of them are overmapped too, but I'll leave it to you, as it's not a big issue in comparison with all I mentioned above.
If you decide to change something from my suggestions, remember ask mancuso to repair the bubble :P

That's all from my part, my random appearance ended, good luck o/
Topic Starter
etc

DakeDekaane wrote:

I was just wandering around browsing some maps and I found some stuff that needs to be polished/changed before ranking this, I'll point only the major issues I could find.

[General]
:!: As Irreversible said, the correct title of the song is FlashBack, with the letter B capitalized, as it's stated in the video of this song, see image below in spoilerbox. You must change this.


[Normal]
I find AR 3 too slow for this song, I know this is the lowest diff, but having too slow AR makes many objects appear in the screen and a beginner would likely scream in despair and click as fast as possible (not really, but something similar), increase it at least by 1. Also HP Drain and OD 2, this is not an Easy right? increase both by 1, if you're afraid about star rating, it will just increase to 3.07, which is still accepted imo.
By that you will make a better spread in your difficulties, HP goes 3>5>8 and OD goes 3>5>7
03:12:183 (1) - Not necessary but maybe put NC in this spinner?

[Insane]
I find this pretty overmapped in some streams, I'll just point those who bothered me while playing, don't want to bee too picky, and other some suggestions here.
00:37:399 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete the circles in blue ticks, it's a bit jarring hitting this as there's nothing in the music that makes it intuitive in my opinion
00:42:507 - A circle could fit here very nice with the drums, you really should add it.
00:52:480 - This definitely will sound and play better here, try it, it's a bit weird as you have now as the stream goes before the one that should be in drums.

00:57:832 (1,2,3,4,5) - As I said in the first suggestion for this, delete the objects in blue ticks.
01:52:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part could be very fun to play if following vocals, so delete objects in blue ticks.
02:02:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same reason as above, but in this case just delete (2,4,6)
02:34:156 (1,2,3) - You should know what I'm going to say for this.
02:36:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same for here.
02:44:859 (1) - I find the hitsound for this slider a bit annoying, but I think nobody else mentioned this, so I'll leave this to you to consider.
02:50:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - As I said in 02:02:697, just delete (2,4,6)
03:01:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete overmapped objects.
03:06:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same here.
03:08:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - And here.
03:12:183 (1) - Not necessary but maybe put NC in this spinner?
I passed some triples here, but you should know that many of them are overmapped too, but I'll leave it to you, as it's not a big issue in comparison with all I mentioned above.
If you decide to change something from my suggestions, remember ask mancuso to repair the bubble :P

That's all from my part, my random appearance ended, good luck o/

name changed ,thx
mancuso_JM_
Rebubbled!
After to make some changes in Insane diff. and fix the title Name
Niva
Rechecked (mapper self-pop + we went on IRC mod after mancuso restored the bubble), log below:

SPOILER
11:19 Niva: err, you deleted the video?
11:19 etc: yes
11:19 etc: too big
11:19 etc: lol
11:19 Niva: ah, ok2
11:23 Niva: Luka's Hard
11:23 Niva: 00:32:534 (1,2) -
11:23 Niva: switch the hitsound
11:23 Niva: (finish -> clap)
11:23 Niva: finish on (1), clap on (2)
11:24 etc: done
11:24 etc: update
11:24 Niva: err,wait
11:24 etc: 0.0
11:24 etc: ok i wait
11:25 Niva: 02:34:156 (1) - this also in Hard
11:25 Niva: the finish should be on(2)'s start
11:26 etc: done XD
11:27 Niva: btw, Normal
11:27 Niva: 01:23:129 (2,3) - why spacing this close o.o
11:27 Niva: move (3) to ~x:68 y:329
11:27 Niva: err nope, ~x:69 y:334 instead
11:28 Niva: Insane : 00:53:616 (9) - clap
11:30 etc: hmm. fixed
11:31 Niva: err, delete 'soft-sliderslid2.wav' from the song's folder btw?
11:31 etc: done
11:32 Niva: ok (:
11:32 etc: shoud i update?
11:32 Niva: yes... err idk should I rank because of that 'soft-sliderslid2.wav' though ._.
11:33 etc: o.o
11:33 etc: dont mind,its secret
11:33 Niva: ._.
11:33 etc: 。_。
11:33 Niva: a...
11:34 Niva: brb afk few mins btw~
11:35 etc: 。_。 update done
11:35 etc: ok
11:44 Niva: ah, yep, back~
11:44 etc: :D
11:45 etc: sth wrong with my tablet
11:45 Niva: umm, updated yet?
11:45 etc: update
11:45 etc: bubble was popped lol
11:46 Niva: err I still don't see clap on 00:53:616 (9) - Insane o.o
11:47 Niva: ah, yep, Normal and Hard is fine now
11:48 etc: donr
11:48 etc: done
11:48 etc: 0.0
11:48 etc: i remeber i have changed this
11:48 Niva: ah, ok now~
11:48 Niva: that soft-sliderslid orz...
11:49 etc: 0.0
11:49 etc: in folder?
11:49 etc: soft-s2?
11:50 Niva: umm, no, I mean
11:50 Niva: idk if I should rank with that issue...
11:50 etc: 01:46:967 (1) - hmm,another things
11:50 Niva: ah, it's fine
11:51 Niva: do you want to change it atm?
11:51 etc: i cant read here when i played
11:51 etc: 0.0 but maybe its fine for others
11:53 Niva: err
11:53 Niva: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/728460
11:53 Niva: (2) is stacked to (9)'s start btw
11:53 Niva: this might work~
11:55 Niva: ah, just highlight me again when it's updated
11:55 etc: is that too long distance?
11:55 Niva: err, not really
11:55 Niva: it's closer to your current one actually o.o
11:55 etc: o.o ok i try
11:56 Niva: yep, it's encircling (1)
11:56 Niva: ok~
11:57 etc: http://puu.sh/2Jg2Y.jpg i prefer like this,add a circle in blue,and make them to a steam
11:58 etc: that sounds good and more easy for read map
11:58 Niva: umm, I don't think the rhythm sounds good this way...
11:58 etc: 0.0
11:59 Niva: yep, kinda overstreamed imo
11:59 etc: 0.0 ok
11:59 etc: as u said
11:59 etc: i changed like yours
11:59 Niva: ah, ok2
12:00 etc: but the flow was so strange
12:00 etc: www
12:00 etc: u can try
12:00 Niva: umm, ok2
12:00 etc: ok
12:00 etc: i update
12:00 Niva: update to latest version ;3
12:00 Niva: *:3
12:01 etc: done :3
12:02 Niva: oh
12:04 Niva: try this
12:05 Niva: http://tny.cz/5633a008
12:05 etc: insane?
12:05 Niva: yep
12:05 Niva: it's the codes btw
12:05 Niva: for blue (1) until the white (1) slider~
12:05 etc: ok
12:08 etc: fix and should i update?
12:08 Niva: yep~
12:08 etc: test once ,plz wait
12:09 Niva: sure :D
12:10 etc: nice work :3
12:10 Niva: :D
12:11 etc: ok update done
12:12 Niva: err
12:12 Niva: 01:46:967 (1,1) -
12:12 Niva: two notes at once?

I'm about to rank this but that sliderslid2.wav... orz ._.

(I'm fine with the streams that etc used though, good luck with this map (again)) :3

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Irreversible
[quote="DakeDekaane"]

[General]
:!: As Irreversible said, the correct title of the song is FlashBack, with the letter B capitalized, as it's stated in the video of this song, see image below in spoilerbox. You must change this.

/quote]

DAT
STOLEN
KUDOSUS
OMG DAKE pls

edit: yes i'm proud of fail quoting

just kidding XD
SapphireGhost
Just a few notes this time:

General
- Discussing with the mapper about adding the video.

Luka's Hard
02:38:534 (6,7,8) - This pattern is pretty confusing to sightread, especially with Hidden, so I'd change the spacing to make it clearer.

Otherwise it's fine. Good luck!


And now, I've fixed the title text one last time. You've come a long way, good job.
spboxer3
oh~
Rue
yeeeeeeeeeeee
Lanturn
Grats on your first mapset
kurohana
Finally ranked ♥ Congratz etc :3
Foreverends
Congratz :D
Arian_old_1
oh, i remember this one~
gratz~
Andrea
Wow, this is really impressive for a first map.

Great job to the mapper!
Topic Starter
etc
thx for everyone XD
LunarSakuya
Congrats, finally!! xD
wolfn
Nice map, I really enjoy it. Though, are you aware that the background used is related to a totally different song?
Lan wings
where is Spinboxer 0.0
Topic Starter
etc

Lan wings wrote:

where is Spinboxer 0.0
他說做的不好讓我刪掉了 QQ
Lan wings

etc wrote:

Lan wings wrote:

where is Spinboxer 0.0
他說做的不好讓我刪掉了 QQ
简直坠毁
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