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19:01 Jenny: 00:15:636 (1) -
19:01 Jenny: doesn't make sense to start kiai there
19:01 Jenny: that's the kiai-introduction part, not the kiaipart itself
19:01 Jenny: 00:17:842 (6) - this is overmapped if you're mapping to the guitar as you appear to, judging from the rest
19:02 Jenny: 00:41:665 (2,3,4) - hugeass jumps in slow parts s:
19:03 Kodora: 00:15:636 (1) - started kiai because i want hl stream part
19:03 Jenny: 00:47:400 (4,7) - overmap as with first thing
19:03 Kodora: 00:17:842 (6) - this is not overmapped, song have 1/8 beats (listen carefully)
19:04 Jenny: i know it hits on the background beat but it just doesn't come natural because the rest goes as with vocals.
19:04 Jenny: "listen carefully" is not a reason
19:04 Jenny: hitting dominant beats for 99% of the time and then saying "listen carefully there are beats" is not a way to go
19:04 Kodora: confirmed by happy30 also this is his idea
19:04 Jenny: because you then switch the focus for no apparent reason
19:04 Jenny: because happy30 totally is #1
19:04 Kodora: 00:41:665 (2,3,4) - this jump is not huge, if 136 bpm 1/2 jump is too hard for you you can play more easier diff here
19:05 Jenny: i know it's not SUPEREVIL
19:05 Jenny: but it just doesn't fit the part
19:05 Jenny: you have a slow part
19:05 Jenny: and then a big jump
19:05 Jenny: the pace is of no matter
19:05 Jenny: it's all relative to the song, not the total BPM
19:05 Kodora: 00:47:400 (4,7) - this is not overmapped too, following lyrics
19:05 Jenny: the lyrics are 1-23
19:05 Kodora: MAN DONT MOD MY MAPS THEY ARE PERFECT)))0000
19:05 Jenny: not 1-234
19:06 Jenny: that's clearly audible
19:06 Kodora: ^as you said to me long time ago
19:06 Jenny: the last beat, 4, is hitting on the backbeat of the song which itself is okay
19:06 Jenny: but does not make sense when you go after vocals for the rest of the time
19:06 Kodora: but unlike you i always ready to responce
19:07 Jenny: if you want to emphasize weaker layers of the song, don't map the dominant ones or use sliders because their ends/arrows are weaker than their start as you don't have to hit them
19:07 Kodora: i'll keep with notes, sorry, they fits more for me
19:01 Jenny: doesn't make sense to start kiai there
19:01 Jenny: that's the kiai-introduction part, not the kiaipart itself
19:01 Jenny: 00:17:842 (6) - this is overmapped if you're mapping to the guitar as you appear to, judging from the rest
19:02 Jenny: 00:41:665 (2,3,4) - hugeass jumps in slow parts s:
19:03 Kodora: 00:15:636 (1) - started kiai because i want hl stream part
19:03 Jenny: 00:47:400 (4,7) - overmap as with first thing
19:03 Kodora: 00:17:842 (6) - this is not overmapped, song have 1/8 beats (listen carefully)
19:04 Jenny: i know it hits on the background beat but it just doesn't come natural because the rest goes as with vocals.
19:04 Jenny: "listen carefully" is not a reason
19:04 Jenny: hitting dominant beats for 99% of the time and then saying "listen carefully there are beats" is not a way to go
19:04 Kodora: confirmed by happy30 also this is his idea
19:04 Jenny: because you then switch the focus for no apparent reason
19:04 Jenny: because happy30 totally is #1
19:04 Kodora: 00:41:665 (2,3,4) - this jump is not huge, if 136 bpm 1/2 jump is too hard for you you can play more easier diff here
19:05 Jenny: i know it's not SUPEREVIL
19:05 Jenny: but it just doesn't fit the part
19:05 Jenny: you have a slow part
19:05 Jenny: and then a big jump
19:05 Jenny: the pace is of no matter
19:05 Jenny: it's all relative to the song, not the total BPM
19:05 Kodora: 00:47:400 (4,7) - this is not overmapped too, following lyrics
19:05 Jenny: the lyrics are 1-23
19:05 Kodora: MAN DONT MOD MY MAPS THEY ARE PERFECT)))0000
19:05 Jenny: not 1-234
19:06 Jenny: that's clearly audible
19:06 Kodora: ^as you said to me long time ago
19:06 Jenny: the last beat, 4, is hitting on the backbeat of the song which itself is okay
19:06 Jenny: but does not make sense when you go after vocals for the rest of the time
19:06 Kodora: but unlike you i always ready to responce
19:07 Jenny: if you want to emphasize weaker layers of the song, don't map the dominant ones or use sliders because their ends/arrows are weaker than their start as you don't have to hit them
19:07 Kodora: i'll keep with notes, sorry, they fits more for me
leaving this here though noone gives a poot, most likely
[Insane]
00:15:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This rhythm would match the song better... (Use 1/6 for the first slider then 1/4 then 1/8)
00:15:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This rhythm would match the song better... (Use 1/6 for the first slider then 1/4 then 1/8)
Kodora
Mmmm i think the correct tittle is Distance ~In your love~
http://www.tunesbaby.com/dm/?x=x8sbe0
http://blademp3.com/mp3/d1dc66_DISTANCE-In-Your-Love.html
http://www.lastfm.es/music/AOYAMA+MISAO/_/Distance+~In+Your+Love~
Im not very sure... but i think is the correct
http://www.tunesbaby.com/dm/?x=x8sbe0
http://blademp3.com/mp3/d1dc66_DISTANCE-In-Your-Love.html
http://www.lastfm.es/music/AOYAMA+MISAO/_/Distance+~In+Your+Love~
Im not very sure... but i think is the correct
Kodora
maybe your link is correct in Distance ~In your love~. but It is different from Distance.Natsu wrote:
Mmmm i think the correct tittle is Distance ~In your love~
http://www.tunesbaby.com/dm/?x=x8sbe0
http://blademp3.com/mp3/d1dc66_DISTANCE-In-Your-Love.html
http://www.lastfm.es/music/AOYAMA+MISAO/_/Distance+~In+Your+Love~
Im not very sure... but i think is the correct
Distance ~In Your Love~ = Arrangement version of Distance. this⇒ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42122 ( My old map lol
)Distance = Original Song from slot machine "Osu! Banchou" Misao Big Bonus BGM. Play screen ⇒ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4bqsbt5p3A
These are separate songs!!
but the Internet seems to have some wrong information.
It is necessary to listen, and to judge it by oneself about them. and Kodora> Tags: playstation 2 ps2 - I thought that these were not necessary. because originally slot machine is not a game to play on the screen. ( ps2 etc. is a game to simulate ) It is a machine to play with the coin of actual. for ex slot machine play video ⇒ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tjXJABwZsSc
Kodora
Ok then, bubbled. good luck~
I see sorry my bad btw good to know this since i was so confuse about it x_x GL with mapkosiga wrote:
maybe your link is correct in Distance ~In your love~. but It is different from Distance.Natsu wrote:
Mmmm i think the correct tittle is Distance ~In your love~
http://www.tunesbaby.com/dm/?x=x8sbe0
http://blademp3.com/mp3/d1dc66_DISTANCE-In-Your-Love.html
http://www.lastfm.es/music/AOYAMA+MISAO/_/Distance+~In+Your+Love~
Im not very sure... but i think is the correct
Distance ~In Your Love~ = Arrangement version of Distance. this⇒ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42122 ( My old map lol
Distance = Original Song from slot machine "Osu! Banchou" Misao Big Bonus BGM. Play screen ⇒ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4bqsbt5p3A
These are separate songs!!
but the Internet seems to have some wrong information.
and Kodora> Tags: playstation 2 ps2 - I thought that these were not necessary. because originally slot machine is not a game to play on the screen. ( ps2 etc. is a game to simulate ) It is a machine to play with the coin of actual. for ex slot machine play video ⇒ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tjXJABwZsSc
[Insane]
- 00:44:533 (1) - New combo unnecessary. Following your combo pattern before where you follow lyrics, this slider is still part of the previous word. If you're using new combo to denote slider velocity change, don't. Slider ticks and intuition should be enough to tell the difference; unless this is built like this to be consistent with another part of the map, please point that out.
- 00:45:636 (1,2,3,4) - Much, much too loud. Considering the fact that your Kiai, the emphasized section of the song, is only 50%, this certainly shouldn't be any higher.
That was quickKodora wrote:
fixed everything~
go go Kodora~!
Hi there~~~
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[Insane]
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[Insane]
- 00:18:724 (3,4,5,6) - the beat here is weird a bit due to the drum at 00:18:944 - , i would like to choose this:
- 00:21:812 (1,2) - how about 3/4 + 1/2 sliders?
- 00:28:871 (1,2,3,4) - try this shape?
- 00:29:864 - and i think you can start the spinner from here
- 01:16:297 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks too narrow > >
- 00:36:812 (5,6,7,8) - ctrl+g to (6,7), and then stack (8) to 56:120 for better flow?
- 01:05:709 (1,2) - i suppose sliders are more suit to the white ticks here:>
- 00:52:915 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the placement is too odd&linear here
- 01:16:518 (1,2,3) - ^
Thank you for modding :3Scorpiour wrote:
[alacat's Hard]
- 00:36:812 (5,6,7,8) - ctrl+g to (6,7), and then stack (8) to 56:120 for better flow? ok~ nice :3
- 01:05:709 (1,2) - i suppose sliders are more suit to the white ticks here:> put a sound here. 01:06:150 - like my pattern at 01:19:827 (1,2,3,4,5) -
http://puu.sh/2ZqwI.zip
Kodora
Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~~
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[Insane][Normal]
- 00:18:724 (3,4,5,6) - the beat here is weird a bit due to the drum at 00:18:944 - , i would like to choose this:
yes, sounds better, applied
- 00:21:812 (1,2) - how about 3/4 + 1/2 sliders? sorry, i prefer leave 1 long slider with loud tick because it sounds better for me (i focused on guiter here). And those change will take a lot of placement work >_>
- 00:28:871 (1,2,3,4) - try this shape? hm, sorry, no, it may confuse imo because they have same distance between not same beats
- 00:29:864 - and i think you can start the spinner from here good, applied
- 01:16:297 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks too narrow > > usual 2 notes, whats wrong here o.o
- 00:52:915 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the placement is too odd&linear here hhhh. really do not want remake it but fixed >_>
- 01:16:518 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
Rebubbled~~
Hi ~ Kodora ~ 
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions
Nor bad map for beginner, Call me back ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions
[Insane]
- 00:15:636 - The stream sound really noisy,50% volume is fine IMO.
- 00:15:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks a bit ugly,try make more curved.
- 00:19:386 (1) - Remove new combo,it's unnecessary.
- 00:20:268 (1) - ^
- 00:31:959 - Remove finish and Add clap to here,sound much better.
[Normal]
- 00:32:400 - You are forgot Add finish to here.
- 00:52:253 - Add a note,soumd much better.
- 00:52:915 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - More better rhythm,like this.
Nor bad map for beginner, Call me back ~
Kodora
Very big thanks for mod!Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Kodora ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions[Insane]
- 00:15:636 - The stream sound really noisy,50% volume is fine IMO. decreased to 65%, this stream must be highlighted
- 00:15:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks a bit ugly,try make more curved. fixed
- 00:19:386 (1) - Remove new combo,it's unnecessary. fixed
- 00:20:268 (1) - ^ fixed
- 00:31:959 - Remove finish and Add clap to here,sound much better. fixed
FINALLY best suggestion for this part, applied[Normal]
- 00:32:400 - You are forgot Add finish to here. added
- 00:52:253 - Add a note,soumd much better. added added
- 00:52:915 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - More better rhythm,like this.
Nor bad map for beginner, Call me back ~
Rechecked via IRC ~ Fixed some hitsound ~
Here you go <3
Here you go <3
congrats \o/
congratz!
really nice~
really nice~
Grats
Advice to Kodora : Next time, be sure to dont forget set your SV on your Insane
Anyway, gratz
Anyway, gratz
Kodora
Aoyama misao <333
grats!
grats!
Congratz! Kodo-chan
oh gratz
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy
eventually, made it your first rank ! gratz ~
Good job Kodora!