m4m
you updated your map while i was modding it so maybe some sugestions are not valid
general
move your map to works in progress since two diffs are not done
timing must to be the same in all diff's. its an unrankeable issue and must to be fixed
normal
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:18:686 - snap to 00:18:688
00:18:915 - snap to 00:18:917
00:19:602 - snap to 00:19:604
00:19:831 - snap to 00:19:833
00:46:739 - snap to 00:46:741
00:03:688 (1,2,3) - this arrangement looks random made, and hitsounding is inconsisntent , add a whistle at 00:04:604 -, remove whistle at 00:07:352 and - 00:09:184 - ,
00:12:848 (4,5) - this slider shape is good but it does not looks good when you copy it and rotate it horizontally. i sugest you to make (5) a different shape
00:14:222 - circle here.
00:15:825 - make a slider here that ends at the next white tick or just add a circle, thats to fil this gap and help to keep polarity.
00:18:344 (1) - remove clap at end
00:26:130 (3) - add clap at start ,repeat, end
.... keep adding claps at 2nd and 4th white ticks in the measures (same logic as above)..
00:49:947 (1) - this spinner is way too long, its boring. please make this spinner end at 00:52:695 or 00:52:924 and make a new spinner at 00:53:153 - end at 00:54:527
01:49:947 (1) - same as above, but i dont know what is the best to do here.... probably making the spinner start at 01:53:611 and mapping all before that
konei's heart
00:07:336 (4) - make it 1/4 slider instead of 1/6, anyways i dont think its a good idea to follow this fast piano here, feels sudden
00:07:794 - make a half beat slider here and remove circle at next red tick, or just add another circle here
00:09:511 (4,5,6) - looks random made
00:10:084 (6) - make it 1/4 slider instead of 1/6, and add more two repeats
00:14:206 (5) - should be 1/4
00:19:931 (7) - not a nice shape imo
00:23:137 (7,1) - swift new combo
00:24:511 - please map this gap, i know what you wanted to do, but it does not fits that much
00:30:465 (4) - not a nice shape imo
00:49:015 - make a circle here and make a half beat slider at 00:49:244 stacked on circle, and make another slider at 00:49:702
01:40:542 (6) - this slider shape does not fits the style you are using in this diff imo
01:51:763 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - dont like this arrangement, symmetry looks to not work here
01:52:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same here
01:55:885 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - and here
style changed a lot since the 3rd kiai, i personally dont like the end, would be nice if you remap the end. anyways its a nice diff, you improved alot *w*
insane
00:11:819 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:12:735 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:346 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:22:010 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:22:468 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:22:697 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:22:926 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:23:155 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:23:384 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:23:842 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:24:071 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:42:048 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
01:47:659 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:51:323 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:51:781 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:010 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:239 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:468 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:697 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:10:329 - add circle
00:16:970 - ^ stacked to previous note
01:00:024 (5,6) - making them not line the slider starts would look better, try moving 6 to x244 y60 or somewhere arround it
01:01:169 (8,9,1) - this jumps are just too big, more than any other in this diff i gess. make them smaller please. should not be that challenge in that relaxing song
good luck
you updated your map while i was modding it so maybe some sugestions are not valid
general
move your map to works in progress since two diffs are not done
timing must to be the same in all diff's. its an unrankeable issue and must to be fixed
normal
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:18:686 - snap to 00:18:688
00:18:915 - snap to 00:18:917
00:19:602 - snap to 00:19:604
00:19:831 - snap to 00:19:833
00:46:739 - snap to 00:46:741
00:03:688 (1,2,3) - this arrangement looks random made, and hitsounding is inconsisntent , add a whistle at 00:04:604 -, remove whistle at 00:07:352 and - 00:09:184 - ,
00:12:848 (4,5) - this slider shape is good but it does not looks good when you copy it and rotate it horizontally. i sugest you to make (5) a different shape
00:14:222 - circle here.
00:15:825 - make a slider here that ends at the next white tick or just add a circle, thats to fil this gap and help to keep polarity.
00:18:344 (1) - remove clap at end
00:26:130 (3) - add clap at start ,repeat, end
.... keep adding claps at 2nd and 4th white ticks in the measures (same logic as above)..
00:49:947 (1) - this spinner is way too long, its boring. please make this spinner end at 00:52:695 or 00:52:924 and make a new spinner at 00:53:153 - end at 00:54:527
01:49:947 (1) - same as above, but i dont know what is the best to do here.... probably making the spinner start at 01:53:611 and mapping all before that
konei's heart
00:07:336 (4) - make it 1/4 slider instead of 1/6, anyways i dont think its a good idea to follow this fast piano here, feels sudden
00:07:794 - make a half beat slider here and remove circle at next red tick, or just add another circle here
00:09:511 (4,5,6) - looks random made
00:10:084 (6) - make it 1/4 slider instead of 1/6, and add more two repeats
00:14:206 (5) - should be 1/4
00:19:931 (7) - not a nice shape imo
00:23:137 (7,1) - swift new combo
00:24:511 - please map this gap, i know what you wanted to do, but it does not fits that much
00:30:465 (4) - not a nice shape imo
00:49:015 - make a circle here and make a half beat slider at 00:49:244 stacked on circle, and make another slider at 00:49:702
01:40:542 (6) - this slider shape does not fits the style you are using in this diff imo
01:51:763 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - dont like this arrangement, symmetry looks to not work here
01:52:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same here
01:55:885 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - and here
style changed a lot since the 3rd kiai, i personally dont like the end, would be nice if you remap the end. anyways its a nice diff, you improved alot *w*
insane
00:11:819 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:12:735 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:346 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:22:010 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:22:468 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:22:697 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:22:926 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:23:155 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:23:384 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:23:842 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:24:071 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:42:048 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
01:47:659 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:51:323 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:51:781 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:010 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:239 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:468 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:697 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:10:329 - add circle
00:16:970 - ^ stacked to previous note
01:00:024 (5,6) - making them not line the slider starts would look better, try moving 6 to x244 y60 or somewhere arround it
01:01:169 (8,9,1) - this jumps are just too big, more than any other in this diff i gess. make them smaller please. should not be that challenge in that relaxing song
good luck