232,156,3808,2,0,P|164:224|44:168,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

208,280,48502,2,0,P|160:328|72:336,1,160,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,228,49726,6,0,P|155:176|240:172,1,160,4|8,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:

Gero wrote:

Ola k ase?

Intentare modear esto ;U; lo haré en español no creo que haya problema. claro que no haha!

[Easy]

(*) 00:02:583 (1) - escuchando bien el fondo de la canción, me di cuenta que suena un clap en ese tiempo, aqui para ser exactos 00:02:583 ,creo que en el inicio del slider podrías agregar un clap, esto es una sugerencia si no te gusta como suena no lo agregues pero IMO suena bien Nah clap no. Normal clap si. Esa suena mejor.
(*) Una sugerencia en hitsounds, creo que seria mejor si agregaras un slidertick con el clap que usaste, para sliders que son largos, como por ejemplo aqui:
00:09:318 (3) suena el clap de fondo pero con los demas que estas usando suena muy bajo, podrias intentar usar este --> soft-slidertick2 y poner dos lineas verdes a los lados del slidertick para que suene el clap bajando un poco el volumen para que suene mejor.
algo asi: Entiendo tu punto y tiene sentido pero a mi personalmente no me gustan los slidertick. Si quieres un sonido en esa parte, lo mappeas. Eso es lo que pienso yo, pero aun así tu sugerencia no es mala. Solo es mi preferencia. :3


(*) 00:11:767 (2) - ^
(*) 00:30:747 (2) - en mi opinion este slider suena un poco raro siento que podrias recortarlo a que de el reverse en 00:31:359 - y agregar un circle en 00:32:583 esto es una sugerencia puedes omitir esto si no te gusta. tienes razon. Listo
(*) 00:33:195 (1,2) - Nazi* creo que estos sliders se ven un poco disparejos intenta copiar este slider 00:33:195 (1) - y ponerlo en 00:35:032 - para que sean iguales y se vea mejor algo asi: en vez de hacer todo eso solo movi el slider un par de grids :3

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(*) 00:41:155 (2) - Nazi* intenta hacer este slider un poco mas simetrico, algo mas o menos asi: o.o ya esta simetrico, solo no esta en el eje y.

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Si te convence cambiarlo aqui esta el codigo por si lo deseas

[HitObjects]
92,304,41155,2,0,B|204:348|204:348|316:304,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:

(*) 00:46:665 (2) - siento que el NC deberia de ir justamente aqui 00:47:277 - ya que es donde comienza el kiai time y es por eso que hay un nc aqui, porque el slider es con repeat y el ultimo hit del slider cae en ese punto xD
(*) 01:00:747 (2,3,1) - Nazi* estas tres notas no estan formando un triangulo perfecto, intenta mover el slider 01:02:583 (3) a X: 256 Y:258 y el circle 01:03:808 (1) - a X:173 Y: 327 y veras que queda mas bonito :3 ahi lo arregle
(*) 01:03:808 (1) - IMO este NC es innecesario porque esta acabando la frase el NC deberia de ir aqui 01:04:420 (2) lo puse ahi en vez de adelante para evitar que solo un slider conforme un combo
(*) 01:06:257 (1,2) - Nazi* estos dos sliders no estan perfectamente colocados para que se vean paralelos lo cual hace que se vea un poco feo intenta esto: creo que lo logre arreglar
Antes & despues:

NOTA: Esta ligeramente inclinado hacia la izquierda el final del slider.

igualmente si deseas el codigo aqui esta

[HitObjects]
280,164,66257,6,0,L|328:200,2,60,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,81,67481,2,0,L|444:154,1,120,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:

(*) 01:25:236 (3) - Nazi* UFFF siento que este slider esta muy mal echo :c intenta hacerlo mejor. no da para decir que está tan mal hecho, apenas se diferencian pero aun asi lo mejoré
algo como esto:

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Code:

[HitObjects]
291,360,85236,2,0,B|343:371|364:325|364:325|405:356|446:321,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

(*) Una ultima cosa: 00:27:685 - aqui en este lapso de tiempo veo que en el normal usaste whistles y realmente suenan muy bien porque no intentas colocar algunos para que suene mejor esta parte :3 no lo hice porque el ritmo en esta diff esta tan simplificado que no hay lugar para poner whistles que suenen bien.. los whistles los use en tick rojos y en esta diff use todo 1/1. :p

[Normal]

(*) 00:02:583 (1) - lo mismo mencionado en la easy acerca del clap lo mismo
(*) 00:06:869 (3,3) - Lo siento u3u un poco nazi* mueve el segundo punto a X: 304 Y: 76 Y el ultimo punto a X: 236 Y: 116 Para hacer un perfecto blanket con 00:06:869 (3) no lo movi exactamente ahi pero le mejore la blanket

;U; Que bonita normal, no me dejas encontrar nada :c perdon ;-;

[Hard]

(*) Amazing *O* gracias! ;u;

Buena suerte Kei! \:3/ el mapa es asombroso y la cancion mas Sigo esperando segunda temp de durarara ;3; es todo lo que pude encontrar espero te sirva mi pequeño mod >w< Fue util, gracias! y gracias por el doble rank o3o.

• Everything's fine ! I just suggest to finish the kiai at 01:24:012 - because the song goes a capella there, I think it'd fit better.

1. The slider placement makes the comboing extremely inconsistent, and you miss lots of strong beats because sliders end on them... Overall it's... fine, but I'd like you to change this one 00:46:665 (1) - because you completely miss the beginning of the kiai. Also, if you do change the last kiai as I suggested, do the same with 01:23:400 (1) - .
2. 01:24:624 (2) - Remove the clap ? The song goes a capella at this point, there's no reason to continue the clap pattern.

1. 00:19:726 (4) - 00:21:563 (2) - 00:26:461 (3) - These break the comobing because they end on beats where the new combo should have been. It makes the map feel rather... inconsistent.
2. 01:24:012 (1,3) - Remove claps, like for Easy ?

1. hm... methinks you should reduce the HP drain, as the note density is relatively low in this diff, due to the low BPM
2. Your slider usage makes you miss tons of claps in the map... This introduces holes in the hitsounding and it feels weird: 00:09:777 (6) - 00:12:226 (6) - 00:19:573 (6) - 00:39:165 (5) - 00:41:614 (5) - 00:48:961 (4) - 00:51:410 (6) - 00:58:757 (6) - 01:08:553 (6) - 01:11:002 (6) - 01:18:349 (6) -
3. 00:35:644 (1) - I don't think this needs a new combo - or you'd need lots of new combos in this one to stay consistent
4. 00:46:971 (1,3) - New combo on (1) should be on (3) - it follows the vocals and stays consistent with your kiai usage. And, to stay consistent with the beginning of the map, remove the new combo on 00:48:195 (1) -
5. 01:06:257 (4) - missing clap
6. 01:23:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion as Easy and Normal - remove the claps ?

Shiro wrote:

Hi. Someone requested a mod for this, so here I am. Hi!

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any questions, feel free to ask me in-game. Okay!

General

• Everything's fine ! I just suggest to finish the kiai at 01:24:012 - because the song goes a capella there, I think it'd fit better. Wow how did i miss this lol, fixed!

Easy

1. The slider placement makes the comboing extremely inconsistent, and you miss lots of strong beats because sliders end on them... Overall it's... fine, but I'd like you to change this one 00:46:665 (1) - because you completely miss the beginning of the kiai. Also, if you do change the last kiai as I suggested, do the same with 01:23:400 (1) - . Yeah it was difficult for me to do the comboing! I changed what you pointed there.
2. 01:24:624 (2) - Remove the clap ? The song goes a capella at this point, there's no reason to continue the clap pattern. Used a normal-hitclap instead.

Normal

1. 00:19:726 (4) - 00:21:563 (2) - 00:26:461 (3) - These break the comobing because they end on beats where the new combo should have been. It makes the map feel rather... inconsistent. ;_; but i cant do anything better to follow the music.. it isn't that bad imo. I agree with you, but i preffered using sliders with repeat and such to avoid making this diff too difficult.. I'll be more careful next time.
2. 01:24:012 (1,3) - Remove claps, like for Easy ? Replaced with normal-hitclap~ sounds less noisy than the soft-clap imo.

Hard

1. hm... methinks you should reduce the HP drain, as the note density is relatively low in this diff, due to the low BPM Hmm kay!
2. Your slider usage makes you miss tons of claps in the map... This introduces holes in the hitsounding and it feels weird: 00:09:777 (6) - 00:12:226 (6) - 00:19:573 (6) - 00:39:165 (5) - 00:41:614 (5) - 00:48:961 (4) - 00:51:410 (6) - 00:58:757 (6) - 01:08:553 (6) - 01:11:002 (6) - 01:18:349 (6) - Ah yes, but I thought it was more appropiate to stick with the vocals rather than the boring and constant clap sound at these parts. I dont remember who.. i think it was Gero who suggested me to use claps in sliders like this but I didn't agree (i dont like that hitsounding, personally).
3. 00:35:644 (1) - I don't think this needs a new combo - or you'd need lots of new combos in this one to stay consistent Agreed. Removed
4. 00:46:971 (1,3) - New combo on (1) should be on (3) - it follows the vocals and stays consistent with your kiai usage. And, to stay consistent with the beginning of the map, remove the new combo on 00:48:195 (1) - You're right, changed.
5. 01:06:257 (4) - missing clap Added!
6. 01:23:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion as Easy and Normal - remove the claps ? Same!

Well, there isn't much to say. Good luck with this ! Thank you a lot

Behonkiss wrote:

Great song. Yes! I love it. So catchy

General:

Consider turning the hit volume up during the choruses. I can barely hear it outside of the finishes. Okay! I increased it by 10%.

Easy:

00:15:440 (1) - It might be easier to get rid of the second slider and extend this one to end at 00:16:053 and repeat twice so it ends at 00:17:277. Hmm your idea is good, has a point but I personally prefer the current way. Seems easier to read for beginners since I have been using the same ammount of repeats in the whole diff. (1 repeat per slider).
00:54:624 (1) - Same as above.
01:14:216 (1) - And again. ^ It's just my personal choice :p I hope that's okay for you!

Normal:

00:05:644 (2) - Move this up a tiny bit so it's on the same horizontal plane as 1. It looks a little off the way it is. Done!

Hard:

No problems here! Oh good~

1. 00:36:869 (1)-A new combo here is not necessary to have honestly. It comes in at the wrong time in my opinion. Best to remove it. The next object after is a good place to put a new combo over.
2. 01:03:808 (1)-Consider removing this new combo? The way I see it, it's too premature to put a new combo there. Give it some thought. Also, if you do remove it. how 'bout adding a new combo on the next object?

1. 00:44:522 (1)-You could remove this new combo from here. You've didn't have one on 01:14:216 (5) - So, it doesn't hurt to remove it, right? o:

1. 00:56:920 (3)-You're missing a good opportunity of having a clap here. I'm not sure if it was intentional but still, it would be great to have a clap here.
2. 01:06:716 (5)-^

Roddie wrote:

Easy

1. 00:36:869 (1)-A new combo here is not necessary to have honestly. It comes in at the wrong time in my opinion. Best to remove it. The next object after is a good place to put a new combo over. Agreed! done~
2. 01:03:808 (1)-Consider removing this new combo? The way I see it, it's too premature to put a new combo there. Give it some thought. Also, if you do remove it. how 'bout adding a new combo on the next object? Much better

Normal

1. 00:44:522 (1)-You could remove this new combo from here. You've didn't have one on 01:14:216 (5) - So, it doesn't hurt to remove it, right? o: But that's a completely different rhythm imo ;_; I added nc here at 00:44:522 to avoid a long combo and to emphasize the change of melody&vocals.

Hard

1. 00:546:920 (3)-You're missing a good opportunity of having a clap here. I'm not sure if it was intentional but still, it would be great to have a clap here. o.o good idea. Added
2. 01:06:716 (5)-^ ^

Give me a call when you're done looking through my mod post. Thank you very much Roddie!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Kei ~ Hi Rika, again

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1. 00:05:644 (2,3) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical,
   please use this code(fixed next note spacing). Done :3
   

   319,181,6869,2,0,P|340:260|396:312,1,160,4|12,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   444,192,8093,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   436,128,8400,1,2,0:0:0:0:

2. 01:19:114 (1) - Move 1 gird down,symmetrical 01:17:889 (2) - .Doneeee~[/color]

That's all ~ I love relax map :3 Yeah i do too

Call me back ~ ok! Thank you Rika-chan :3