[Sargent]
0:27.870 : The orientation of the 5th and 6th hit circle is very confusing. I would start a new combo here instead of 0:28:620
1:10:610 : The new combo shouldn't start until 1:11:120
1:12:370 : The new combo shouldn't start until 1:13:120 or 1:15:120 depending on if you want one or two combos. Either way, you need to remove the new combo at 1:15:620
1:21:870 : New Combo should start here instead of 1:23:120
1:42:870 : The New Combo shouldn't start until 1:44:120
1:51:620 : Remove the New Combo here
2:03:120 : The New Combo shouldn't start until 2:04:120
2:26:120 : The New Combo should start here instead of 2:26:620
2:38:120 : The New Combo should start here instead of 2:38:620
2:39.620 : The path of the 3rd slider is obscured by the hitburst of the 2nd and when the path of the 4th slider snakes out, it makes it look like that's the path the 3rd slider should go.
This is a nice map, but I think that you tried to make the song fit into 5 hits per combo, which really didn't work out with the rhythm. Be sure to be flexible in creating beatmaps. Other that that this seems good!
0:27.870 : The orientation of the 5th and 6th hit circle is very confusing. I would start a new combo here instead of 0:28:620
1:10:610 : The new combo shouldn't start until 1:11:120
1:12:370 : The new combo shouldn't start until 1:13:120 or 1:15:120 depending on if you want one or two combos. Either way, you need to remove the new combo at 1:15:620
1:21:870 : New Combo should start here instead of 1:23:120
1:42:870 : The New Combo shouldn't start until 1:44:120
1:51:620 : Remove the New Combo here
2:03:120 : The New Combo shouldn't start until 2:04:120
2:26:120 : The New Combo should start here instead of 2:26:620
2:38:120 : The New Combo should start here instead of 2:38:620
2:39.620 : The path of the 3rd slider is obscured by the hitburst of the 2nd and when the path of the 4th slider snakes out, it makes it look like that's the path the 3rd slider should go.
This is a nice map, but I think that you tried to make the song fit into 5 hits per combo, which really didn't work out with the rhythm. Be sure to be flexible in creating beatmaps. Other that that this seems good!