1. Remove the Audio Lead-In on all the difficulties except Insane that does really need it.

1. 01:03:481 (1) - Add a finish on this spinner and remove your current hitsounds, it sounds way much better with the music.
2. 01:05:746 (1) - This slider is probably too soon after spinner, though the BPM is really low so I'm unsure about this.
3. 01:21:595 (1) - Add a finish on this spinner and remove your current hitsounds, it sounds way much better with the music.
4. 01:23:859 (1) - Same as above for this circle, though this is placed to the center at least.
5. 01:26:123 (1) - Add a finish on this spinner and remove your current hitsounds, it sounds way much better with the music.

1. Increase HP Drain and OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 00:14:519 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - So many stacks in a row, I'm not sure if that's a good idea for a Normal.
2. 01:03:481 (1) - Add a finish on this spinner and remove your current hitsounds, it sounds way much better with the music.
3. 01:21:595 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
4. 01:26:123 (1) - Once again, same as above.

1. Increase OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
2. This difficulty is missing many hitsounds, try adding some more.

1. 00:27:255 (2) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider to emphasize with the strong beat of the music.
2. 00:36:312 (5) - Same as above for this circle, though.
3. 00:41:972 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not needed.
4. 01:01:217 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider to emphasize with the strong beat of the music.
5. 01:02:349 (3) - Same as above for the same reason.
6. 01:03:481 (1) - Add a finish on this spinner and remove your current hitsounds, it sounds way much better with the music.
7. 01:05:746 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider to emphasize with the strong beat of the music.
8. 01:14:802 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
9. 01:19:330 (1) - Once again, same as above.
10. 01:20:462 (2) - Add a finish on this circle to emphasize with the strong beat of the music.
11. 01:21:595 (1) - Add a finish on this spinner and remove your current hitsounds, it sounds way much better with the music.
12. 01:23:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern could use a lot of awesome finishes, think about adding them.

1. Increase OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

~m4m from #modreqs~

1. 01:26:123 (1) - remove clap

1. 00:41:972 remove clap on this tick please
2. 01:23:859 (1) - remove whistle head
3. 01:24:991 (3) - ^

1. 00:27:255 (1) - add nc after spinner please
2. 00:35:604 - add note for whistle?
3. 00:35:746 (5) - add whistle tail
4. 00:36:312 (1) - add whistle
5. 00:53:293 (3) - forget whistle
6. 00:53:859 (5) - forget clap
7. 00:55:557 (3) - forget whistle head
8. 00:56:123 (4) - forget clap head
9. 00:56:689 (1) - forget whistle head
10. 00:57:821 (2) - forget wihstle
11. 00:58:387 (4) - forget clap
12. 00:58:953 (1) - forget whistle
13. 01:00:085 (2) - ^
14. 01:00:651 (3) - forget clap
15. 01:01:217 (1,3) - forget whistle head both
16. 01:05:746 (1) - add whistle head
17. 01:14:095 (4) - add whistle
18. 01:14:236 (5) - add whistle tail
19. 01:14:802 (1) - add whistle head
20. 01:19:330 (1) - ^
21. 01:20:462 (2) - add whistle

1. 00:17:632 (8) - add whistle tail
2. 00:20:462 (1,2) - 1 grid up
3. 00:26:972 (9) - add whistle tail
4. 00:35:604 (5) - add whistle
5. 00:36:312 (1) - add whistle head
6. 00:44:661 (5) - add whistle
7. 00:44:802 (6) - change clap to whistle at tail
8. 00:47:632 (1) - add whistle head
9. 00:50:746 (1) - forget whistle tail
10. 00:55:557 (2) - remove clap tail
11. 00:56:123 (4) - add whistle tail
12. 00:56:689 (5) - add whistle head
13. 01:03:481 (1,2,3,4) - add finish instead of whistle
14. 01:04:755 (4) - add clap tail too
15. 01:05:321 (5,6,7) - add clap instead of whistle
16. 01:05:746 (1) - add whistle head
17. 01:13:953 (3) - remove clap
18. 01:14:519 (6) - add whistle
19. 01:14:802 (7) - add whistle head
20. 01:21:595 (1,2,3) - add finish instead of whistle
21. 01:22:585 (4) - add finish tail
22. 01:26:123 (1,2,3,4) - add finish instead of whistle

• General

1. add anime in tags lol

• EASY

1. this map is perfect, all notes are symmetrical and all hitsounds are fit what am i even doing here

• NORMAL

1. 01:17:066 (1) - well i think connecting the slider and the circle fits better orz, move slider tail to x:60 y:156
2. the rest are already perfect~

• Collab

1. here, 01:17:066 (1) - why leave the flower pattern? move slider to x:336 y:248 maybe?

• INSANE

1. Well, only manage found this: 00:01:642 (4) - wouldn't it better by making a blanket? here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/731672

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Imo is more fluid

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[HitObjects]
148,132,29802,2,0,B|121:167|149:203|176:238|147:273,1,150

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[HitObjects]
252,336,63481,6,0,L|340:321,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,210,63906,2,0,L|314:225,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,148,64330,2,0,L|272:133,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,42,64755,2,0,P|229:38|165:46,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. mapset
   Easy HP2 AR3 OD2
   Normal HP3 AR5 OD3
   Hard HP5 AR7 OD5
   Insane HP7 AR8 OD7 is better?

1. 00:38:576 (4) - I think try "Ctrl+G" is Clean flow?
2. 01:09:708 (4) - move x256 y268 is better.
3. 01:14:236 (4) - ^

1. 00:23:576 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
2. 00:30:651 (5) - add note ( and my idea )
   00:27:255 (1,2,3,4) - this note and slider ctrl+H move x120 y208
   
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1. 00:18:198 (1) - 1grid down is better. nazi sorry
2. 00:19:330 (3) - and 2grid up? ( If you modify the above )

1. 00:20:462 (1) - 1grid up is fit nazi sorry
2. 01:08:010 (8) - add Nc
3. 01:08:859 (1) - remove Nc ( If you modify the above )
4. 01:10:274 (9) - add Nc ( If you modify the above )
5. 01:11:406 (1) - remove Nc ( If you modify the above )
6. 01:12:538 (7) - add Nc ( If you modify the above )
7. 01:13:387 (1) - remove Nc ( If you modify the above )
8. 01:14:802 (9) - add Nc ( If you modify the above )
   ~~~~~After much in the same interval Newcombo should be Fix it~~~~~
   I think I am strange NewCombo

but, you're map is really good

good luck star~

General

Easy

Normal

Hard

Nich's Insane

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- Do you mind reducing the video size a bit? 17MB video flie is a bit too big for 1:30mins song, (.osz is 20.3MB even if you remove that extra .mp3 flie) imo.

• General

1. Missing video in Hard, Normal and Easy. Please fix this.
2. "AKB0048 next stage" o.o what is this source, may i ask? i'm just curious~ and it looks like.. random lol. :p

• [Easy]
  
  Pretty solid difficulty. I agree with orion about this difficulty, but I think it's fine for a slow song!

• [Normal]

1. 00:13:387 (4) - This note doesn't flow good imo. If you move it more over here it will have much better flow with 00:13:670 (1). :3
   
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2. 00:30:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uh? Why so many notes all of a sudden? You can use sliders to follow the voice or something, that would be better imo. For example at 00:34:047 (4,5). These two notes can be replaced by a slider to follow more the music.
3. 01:21:312 (4) - A bit nazi consider moving this note a tad up for a slightly better flow. Like this:
   
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   Personally didn't like too much some 1/2 sliders at red tick (the short ones with repeat) but I guess they're fine.

• [Hard]

1. 00:09:991 (3) - This pattern would flow muuuch better if you move this note down, to x256 y176. Please try it out!
2. 00:49:330 (5) - Similar to above. This would flow better if you rotate this slider slightly up, to end up with a pattern like this:
   
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3. 00:55:274 (2) - This "jump" is so small.. it irks me everytime I see it. It doesn't look good nor fitting with the music imo so I suggest you to stick with DS here. You have to move 00:54:425 (1) a bit up (exactly at x132 y348), 00:55:274 (2) will hve to be placed a bit more to the left (i placed it at x48 y188) and then adjust the other three next sliders. You should end up with this:
   
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4. 01:02:066 (2) - Perhaps move this note where 01:03:198 (4) is placed for better flow?
5. 01:08:576 (2) - Again o3o for better flow with 01:08:010 (1)'s curve I suggest you to arrange 01:08:576 (2,3,4) with a more "curved shaped" pattern. Like this:
   
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6. 01:11:972 (4) - This slider flows bad imo. Please consider moving it up, like this for much better flow with 01:11:406 (3) and 01:12:538 (1). In the screenshot it looks like offscreen/touching the HP bar but it isn't. Just in case, if you agree with this try to move 01:11:406 (3) a bit down or to the right to avoid getting too close to the HP bar. This is just a example. :3
   
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   Like orion said again, I don't like too much jumps on hard diffs but the ones you made fit with the music and with the slow melody of it, that's why it plays good.

• [Insane]

1. 00:16:076 (2) - This triplet sounds kinda overmapped. Please consider removing this note.
2. 00:35:462 (4,5,6,7,8) - Those hitfinishes sound too loud and unfitting. The song is still calm here, so my suggestion is removing them. They don't fit here imo.
3. 00:53:576 (2) - Kinda nazi lol. I think this slider would flow slightly better with the previous notes and 00:54:425 (5) if you move the final of it a bit down. Like this:
   
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4. 01:02:632 (4) - Similar as above. I think this note doesn't flow good with 01:01:642 (2,3). It would flow much better if you move it over here imo. Please try it out and check :3
   
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   Good. I personally don't like so many jumps for a slow song, but at the same time most of them were fun to play.
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Kei wrote:

I'm still sad about my 1337 post :< it didn't last as much as I wanted lol

• General

1. Missing video in Hard, Normal and Easy. Please fix this.
   Feedback: Yes, that's becuase I was still changing the video file when you were modding it!
2. "AKB0048 next stage" o.o what is this source, may i ask? i'm just curious~ and it looks like.. random lol. :p

Feedback: It's from an anime, called "AKB0048" ("AKB0048 next stage" is season 2).

• [Easy]
  
  Pretty solid difficulty. I agree with orion about this difficulty, but I think it's fine for a slow song!

Feedback: Yay!

• [Normal]

1. 00:13:387 (4) - This note doesn't flow good imo. If you move it more over here it will have much better flow with 00:13:670 (1). :3
   
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   Feedback: Yes and Fixed!
2. 00:30:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uh? Why so many notes all of a sudden? You can use sliders to follow the voice or something, that would be better imo. For example at 00:34:047 (4,5). These two notes can be replaced by a slider to follow more the music.
   Feedback: I did just that and rearrange the notes for better spacing. Fixed!
3. 01:21:312 (4) - A bit nazi consider moving this note a tad up for a slightly better flow. Like this:
   Feedback: Thanks, but I'm going to keep it as it is for now.
   
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   Personally didn't like too much some 1/2 sliders at red tick (the short ones with repeat) but I guess they're fine.

• [Hard]

1. 00:09:991 (3) - This pattern would flow muuuch better if you move this note down, to x256 y176. Please try it out!
   Feedback: It was here originally, but someone told me to change it to here instead XD. Since you said so, Fixed!
2. 00:49:330 (5) - Similar to above. This would flow better if you rotate this slider slightly up, to end up with a pattern like this:
   Feedback: Decided to do something else o.o!
   
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3. 00:55:274 (2) - This "jump" is so small.. it irks me everytime I see it. It doesn't look good nor fitting with the music imo so I suggest you to stick with DS here. You have to move 00:54:425 (1) a bit up (exactly at x132 y348), 00:55:274 (2) will hve to be placed a bit more to the left (i placed it at x48 y188) and then adjust the other three next sliders. You should end up with this:
   Feedback: Fixed hopefully o.o!
   
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4. 01:02:066 (2) - Perhaps move this note where 01:03:198 (4) is placed for better flow?
   Feedback: Decided to do something else o.o!
5. 01:08:576 (2) - Again o3o for better flow with 01:08:010 (1)'s curve I suggest you to arrange 01:08:576 (2,3,4) with a more "curved shaped" pattern. Like this:
   Feedback: Fixed!
   
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6. 01:11:972 (4) - This slider flows bad imo. Please consider moving it up, like this for much better flow with 01:11:406 (3) and 01:12:538 (1). In the screenshot it looks like offscreen/touching the HP bar but it isn't. Just in case, if you agree with this try to move 01:11:406 (3) a bit down or to the right to avoid getting too close to the HP bar. This is just a example. :3
   Feedback: Again, fixed hpefully!
   
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   Like orion said again, I don't like too much jumps on hard diffs but the ones you made fit with the music and with the slow melody of it, that's why it plays good.

Thanks for the mod Kei! I remapped some parts to increase flow!

azu-nyan14 wrote:

[Nich's Insane]

00:01:217 (3,4): Current fits music good, but i think this rhythm will follow better the piano sound: I think it's fine.

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00:04:613 (1,2): A 1/4 slider don't sounds good here, maybe try this rhythm: It isn't weird sound for me

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orioncomet wrote:

[Nich's Insane]
01:22:585 (4,5) - Is this intend? It's kinda hard to tell spacing because it's using same spacing as 01:21:595 (1,2) with different beat. Yes, I intend to have fun.
01:23:576 (6) - ^ same spacing as 01:22:585 (4,5) with different beat. I felt it's no problem to read and play imo.

Kei wrote:

• [Insane]

1. 00:16:076 (2) - This triplet sounds kinda overmapped. Please consider removing this note. I will move at 00:16:359 instead, since I heard the rhythm here.
2. 00:35:462 (4,5,6,7,8) - Those hitfinishes sound too loud and unfitting. The song is still calm here, so my suggestion is removing them. They don't fit here imo. nope, since I heard something in the music here, and I think that it's fine to use finish.
3. 00:53:576 (2) - Kinda nazi lol. I think this slider would flow slightly better with the previous notes and 00:54:425 (5) if you move the final of it a bit down. Like this: It doesn't flow naturally on 00:53:293 (1,2). So no change.
   
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4. 01:02:632 (4) - Similar as above. I think this note doesn't flow good with 01:01:642 (2,3). It would flow much better if you move it over here imo. Please try it out and check :3 Okay, and I will fix pattern on (5) to easier to read.
   
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   Good. I personally don't like so many jumps for a slow song, but at the same time most of them were fun to play. yep, thank you for your comment :3
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