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Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
~General~
  1. It would be better to make the kiai consistent on all the difficulties for consistency.
  2. Add trance to tags and something else if you can.
~249's Love~
  1. Decrease OD by 1 tick, it's too high right now for an Easy difficulty to me.
  1. 00:06:640 (1) ~ 00:18:240 (3) - This part feels really empty without hitsounds, please add some whistles or something.
  2. 00:31:040 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
  3. 00:57:840 (4) - Add a whistle on this circle to emphasize with the end of the chorus.
  4. 01:01:040 (1) - Add a finish on this circle to emphasize with the strong beat of the song.
  5. 01:25:440 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
  6. 01:51:440 (3) - After this slider, I'd prefer if you make a break like the other difficulties, especially because this is an Easy, beginners might need some time to recover more than others, don't you think? Please do it.
  7. 02:43:440 (5) - Add a whistle on this circle to emphasize with the end of the chorus.
~My Love~
  1. 00:19:440 (1) - This slider is way too soon after spinner even for a Normal, please reduce the spinner lenght or let the slider begin afterwards instead, your choice.
  2. 00:32:240 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
  3. 00:54:640 (1) - Add a whistle instead of a finish at the end of this spinner, it sounds way too loud right now.
  4. 01:26:640 (1) - This slider is way too soon after spinner even for a Normal, please reduce the spinner lenght or let the slider begin afterwards instead, your choice.
  5. 01:49:040 (1) - I almost can't hear this finish at all, try to increase the volume by 20% at least.
  6. 02:05:040 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner and not a whistle, follows more with the song.
  7. 02:08:240 (1) - Again, another slider way too soon after spinner.
  8. 02:17:840 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner and not a whistle, follows more with the song.
  9. 02:25:040 (2,4) - Try avoid the overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good.
  10. 02:27:440 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if you can please.
  11. 02:30:640 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner and not a whistle, follows more with the song.
~Our Love~
  1. 00:18:640 (1) - This spinner feels a bit too short for a Hard difficulty, try making something else instead.
  2. 00:34:040 (1,2,3,4) - I'd try to avoid such sudden jumps, they don't really fit for this difficulty imo.
  3. 00:37:240 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above for the same reason.
  4. 00:40:440 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern is way too jumpy for a Hard difficulty, try reducing the spacing a bit.
  5. 00:43:640 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, please make sure to fix it with using the distance snap carefully.
  6. 00:45:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, some more random jumps that you should avoid.
  7. 00:48:640 (2,3) - Try to avoid this small overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good.
  8. 00:53:040 - It feels like you're missing a note here on the main beat, make sure to add it if you think it's good.
  9. 01:01:040 (1,2) - Why such random jump here? It doesn't make sense at all, just space them normally together.
  10. 01:02:640 (1,2) - Same as above for the same reason.
  11. 01:04:240 (1,2) - Really, you overused many random jumps on your parts, Shadow.
  12. 01:05:840 (1,2) - And once again.
  13. 01:13:840 (1,2) - Another time, please avoid them, they're really bad to play and doesn't flow good.
  14. 01:20:240 (1,2) - Same as above once and once again.
  15. 01:21:840 (6,1) - Again, though this one might be acceptable.
  16. 01:23:440 (5,1) - And here too, though this one might be acceptable as well.
  17. 01:28:440 (1,2,3,4) - Again, why have you used such random jumps? I seriously dislike them.
  18. 01:51:040 (1) - I almost can't hear this finish at all, try to increase the volume by 20% at least.
  19. 02:10:240 - It feels like you're missing a note here on the main beat, make sure to add it if you think it's good. Also, add a clap on said note if you do add it.
  20. 02:41:440 (3,4) - This jump seems a bit too large for a Hard difficulty, try to reduce the spacing a bit.
Lally
3,176 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Lally
@Andrea: personally i don't see any changes in your diff maybe 1-2 slider but the rest is the same à.à btw updated your diff too

mod reply

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. It would be better to make the kiai consistent on all the difficulties for consistency. dunno will think about u.u''
  2. Add trance to tags and something else if you can.added o3o
~My Love~
  1. 00:19:440 (1) - This slider is way too soon after spinner even for a Normal, please reduce the spinner lenght or let the slider begin afterwards instead, your choice. it's ok here no changes and all the next spinner that will be mentioned too
  2. 00:32:240 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
  3. 00:54:640 (1) - Add a whistle instead of a finish at the end of this spinner, it sounds way too loud right now. ok
  4. 01:26:640 (1) - This slider is way too soon after spinner even for a Normal, please reduce the spinner lenght or let the slider begin afterwards instead, your choice.
  5. 01:49:040 (1) - I almost can't hear this finish at all, try to increase the volume by 20% at least. +10 will be ok
  6. 02:05:040 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner and not a whistle, follows more with the song. added normal sampleset
  7. 02:08:240 (1) - Again, another slider way too soon after spinner.
  8. 02:17:840 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner and not a whistle, follows more with the song. added normal sampleset
  9. 02:25:040 (2,4) - Try avoid the overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good. fixed
  10. 02:27:440 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if you can please. fixed together with^
  11. 02:30:640 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner and not a whistle, follows more with the song.added normal sampleset
~Our Love~
  1. 00:18:640 (1) - This spinner feels a bit too short for a Hard difficulty, try making something else instead. for now no changes but will think about
  2. 00:34:040 (1,2,3,4) - I'd try to avoid such sudden jumps, they don't really fit for this difficulty imo.k
  3. 00:37:240 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above for the same reason.k
  4. 00:40:440 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern is way too jumpy for a Hard difficulty, try reducing the spacing a bit. fixed here
  5. 00:43:640 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, please make sure to fix it with using the distance snap carefully. kk
  6. 00:45:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, some more random jumps that you should avoid. ''we can't take it back'' e va avanti e ditro e ci sta :U imo
  7. 00:48:640 (2,3) - Try to avoid this small overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good. kay
  8. 00:53:040 - It feels like you're missing a note here on the main beat, make sure to add it if you think it's good. added
  9. 01:01:040 (1,2) - Why such random jump here? It doesn't make sense at all, just space them normally together.
  10. 01:02:640 (1,2) - Same as above for the same reason.
  11. 01:04:240 (1,2) - Really, you overused many random jumps on your parts, Shadow.awawawa
  12. 01:05:840 (1,2) - And once again.
  13. 01:13:840 (1,2) - Another time, please avoid them, they're really bad to play and doesn't flow good.
  14. 01:20:240 (1,2) - Same as above once and once again.
  15. 01:21:840 (6,1) - Again, though this one might be acceptable.
  16. 01:23:440 (5,1) - And here too, though this one might be acceptable as well.
  17. 01:28:440 (1,2,3,4) - Again, why have you used such random jumps? I seriously dislike them.fixed 90% of the jumps some ore ok for me so no changes for some in kiai time
  18. 01:51:040 (1) - I almost can't hear this finish at all, try to increase the volume by 20% at least.+10 is ok
  19. 02:10:240 - It feels like you're missing a note here on the main beat, make sure to add it if you think it's good. Also, add a clap on said note if you do add it. kk
  20. 02:41:440 (3,4) - This jump seems a bit too large for a Hard difficulty, try to reduce the spacing a bit.kk


Update :3
Roxas
osu! Alumni
1,354 posts
Joined August 2011
Roxas
Ok this is the sb

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For modders: There are big loops like 64 because offset is an integer number so don't say "break loops" lol
Lally
3,176 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Lally
Ty Roxas \( > u < )/

Updated :3
Nemis
854 posts
Joined May 2012
Nemis
[Andrea's Love]
00:10:040 (2,3) - Suggerisco di riflettere questi due sliders verticalmente per creare un blanket 00:09:440 (1,2) - qui
00:11:640 (5,6) - Non mi piacciono per nulla le ondine così corte, fossi in te le cambierei in qualcos'altro
00:14:640 (5,6,7,1) - Prova a metterli al centro, si vedono molto meglio esteticamente (fixa l'intero pattern di conseguenza)
00:34:040 (5) - CTRL + G mi sembra più bello :P di conseguenza CTRL + G anche 00:34:440 (6) - qui
01:04:440 (2,3) - Suggerisco di riflettere questi due sliders verticalmente per creare un blanket 01:03:840 (1,2) - qui
01:06:040 (5,6) - Non mi piacciono per nulla le ondine così corte, fossi in te le cambierei in qualcos'altro
01:09:440 (6,7) - Prova a metterli al centro, si vedono molto meglio esteticamente (fixa l'intero pattern di conseguenza)
01:28:440 (5,6) - A differenza di prima quà mi sembrano già belli così
02:18:640 (4) - CTRL + G e sposti 02:19:240 (5) - questo beat altrove? Non ho mai visto jumps come 02:18:440 (3,4) - da te, o sbaglio? xD
02:24:240 (1,2) - Ti prego fixa queste forme, le trovo abbastanza bruttine (mi riferisco alla fine, dove prendono la curvatura)
02:31:440 (3,4) - Suggeristo di invertirli di posizione, flowano meglio con (2)
02:32:240 (5,6) - Se hai cambiato come ho scritto sopra lascia così, in caso contrario invertili di posizione. In aggiunta suggerisco di cambiare le due forme in quanto è il sesto slider 1/2 che la ha ricurva
02:37:840 (3,4) - Anche qui consiglio di invertire i sue sliders
02:38:640 (5,6) - Se hai cambiato come ho scritto sopra lascia così, in caso contrario invertili di posizione. In aggiunta suggerisco di cambiare le due forme in quanto trovo bruttine le ondine corte
02:39:440 (7) - Consiglio di cambiare anche questa forma
awesome

[Our Love]
00:19:640 (1) - I suggest to add a note here
00:22:640 (1,2,3) - Try to make the blanket better
00:37:840 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make a perfect triangle
00:46:440 (6) - I suggest to add a note here and remove 00:45:640 (2,3,4,5,6) -
00:48:240 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make the blanket better
00:51:840 (1,2,3) - I suggest to change this rythm in:

00:55:840 (2,3,4) - And this is:

01:14:640 (5,1) - Fix this stack
01:21:040 (5) - I suggest to use CTRL + G here
01:23:440 (5,1) - Sincerly I don't think this jump would be nice there; 01:23:440 (5,1,2,3) - this could make players a bit angry D:
01:28:440 (1,2) - Fix this blanket and I suggest to change 01:29:040 (2,3,4) - since it's not really fun to play
01:31:840 (2) - CTRL + G ? And fix the blanket 01:31:440 (1,2) - here
01:32:640 (5,1) - Try to fix the spacing a bit here, 01:32:440 (4,5,1) - this seems a jumpy singletap when it's not
01:37:440 (3) - Stack this under 01:36:240 (1) - 's end
01:51:040 (5) - I suggest to add a note here and start the spinner after
02:10:240 (5,6,7) - I suggest to make this slider symmetric
02:15:240 (2) - CTRL + G wouldn't be bad
02:39:440 (4) - Make this slider more adherent with 02:38:640 (1) - 's begin
02:41:840 (4,5,6) - This overlap is unrankable
02:41:840 (1) - What about add a new combo here?

[My Love]
00:53:840 (4,5) - Muovili sotto 00:51:440 (1) -
02:05:040 (1) - Trovo davvero insensato porre uno spinner quì ad inizio kiai... come mai non l'hai messo prima come nelle altre difficoltà? Ci sta benissimo, ti consiglio di spostarlo e mappare questo pezzo di inizio kiai
02:17:840 (1) - Suggerisco di eliminare pure quest'altro spinner

[249's Love]
00:08:640 (1) - Remove new combo
00:24:640 (1) - Remove new combo
00:31:040 (1) - Remove new combo
01:03:040 (1) - Remove new combo
01:15:840 (1) - Remove new combo
From 01:52:640 (1) - to 02:01:840 (1) - : why not a break? This song is long like 3 minutes, beginners need a break D:
Nice map and awesome remix/song *-* Good luck
Lally
3,176 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Lally
Nemis

Nemis wrote:

[notice]
[Our Love]
00:19:640 (1) - I suggest to add a note here meh
00:22:640 (1,2,3) - Try to make the blanket better kay
00:37:840 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make a perfect triangle imo is good
00:46:440 (6) - I suggest to add a note here and remove 00:45:640 (2,3,4,5,6) - =w= uff ok
00:48:240 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make the blanket better uhm here is not supposed to be a blanket
00:51:840 (1,2,3) - I suggest to change this rythm in: kk

00:55:840 (2,3,4) - And this is:kk

01:14:640 (5,1) - Fix this stack kk
01:21:040 (5) - I suggest to use CTRL + G here nah
01:23:440 (5,1) - Sincerly I don't think this jump would be nice there; 01:23:440 (5,1,2,3) - this could make players a bit angry D: dimenticato prima fixed
01:28:440 (1,2) - Fix this blanket and I suggest to change 01:29:040 (2,3,4) - since it's not really fun to play fixato un po
01:31:840 (2) - CTRL + G ? And fix the blanket 01:31:440 (1,2) - here fixed only blanket
01:32:640 (5,1) - Try to fix the spacing a bit here, 01:32:440 (4,5,1) - this seems a jumpy singletap when it's not meh ok
01:37:440 (3) - Stack this under 01:36:240 (1) - 's end lo è ...
01:51:040 (5) - I suggest to add a note here and start the spinner after nah non mi ispira sinceramente o3o
02:10:240 (5,6,7) - I suggest to make this slider symmetric k
02:15:240 (2) - CTRL + G wouldn't be bad why create a jump here?
02:39:440 (4) - Make this slider more adherent with 02:38:640 (1) - 's begin hmm
02:41:840 (4,5,6) - This overlap is unrankable ups
02:41:840 (1) - What about add a new combo here? k

[My Love]
00:53:840 (4,5) - Muovili sotto 00:51:440 (1) - ups fixed
02:05:040 (1) - Trovo davvero insensato porre uno spinner quì ad inizio kiai... come mai non l'hai messo prima come nelle altre difficoltà? Ci sta benissimo, ti consiglio di spostarlo e mappare questo pezzo di inizio kiai
02:17:840 (1) - Suggerisco di eliminare pure quest'altro spinner
perchè volevo fare la normal con molti spinner e nel ''awwwwwwwwwwww'' ci sta benissimo secondo me o3o amo gli spinner io o3o


  1. added SB names o3o
  2. fixed mods
  3. waiting for moe-nya and Andrea's update :3

Update
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,148 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

Andrea wrote:

~249's Love~
  1. Decrease OD by 1 tick, it's too high right now for an Easy difficulty to me. if i do that, then there's gonna be no flow shown in this diff for beginners.
  1. 00:06:640 (1) ~ 00:18:240 (3) - This part feels really empty without hitsounds, please add some whistles or something. Done. i thought it'd be fitting to the mood for the song but looks like it isn't.
  2. 00:31:040 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary. whoops this was a mistake. fixed.
  3. 00:57:840 (4) - Add a whistle on this circle to emphasize with the end of the chorus. but i'm not following the vocals, i'm following the BGM in this part.
  4. 01:01:040 (1) - Add a finish on this circle to emphasize with the strong beat of the song. fixed.
  5. 01:25:440 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary. ^
  6. 01:51:440 (3) - After this slider, I'd prefer if you make a break like the other difficulties, especially because this is an Easy, beginners might need some time to recover more than others, don't you think? Please do it. ok to make it like the other diffs, done.
  7. 02:43:440 (5) - Add a whistle on this circle to emphasize with the end of the chorus. same as 00:57:840.
ty for the mod, and Nemis, i only applied 1 combo Andrea mentioned, and the break, everything else is ignored because they follow the change in the vocals.

<3
osu file format v12

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Creator:Lally
Version:249's Love
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Tags:ShadowSoul Byakugan249 Andrea osuplayer111 trance
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380,148,19840,2,0,P|404:220|364:300,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,344,21040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,368,21440,2,0,L|68:368,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,292,22640,5,0,0:0:0:0:
44,212,23040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,132,23440,2,0,P|88:96|132:88,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,68,24240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,60,24640,6,0,L|368:60,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,44,25440,2,0,L|488:44,2,40,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,124,26240,6,0,P|460:216|344:304,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,312,27840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,28240,2,0,P|132:304|84:220,1,160
92,148,29440,5,8,0:0:0:0:
152,96,29840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,30240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,96,30640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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260,332,33840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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40,108,37440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,188,37840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,260,38240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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168,44,41440,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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244,184,43640,2,0,L|380:184,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,240,44640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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220,352,45840,2,0,L|100:352,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,276,47440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,200,47840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,132,48240,6,0,L|176:44,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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452,108,50240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,184,50640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,260,51040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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340,216,53240,2,0,P|320:148|340:104,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,36,54240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,80,54640,6,0,P|484:128|484:196,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,136,57840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,220,61040,5,4,0:0:0:0:
140,284,61440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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356,284,62640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,224,63040,6,0,P|420:184|408:148,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,88,63840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,44,64240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,36,64640,6,0,P|132:40|68:100,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,168,65840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,196,66240,2,0,P|196:192|260:132,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,64,67440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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284,304,69040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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144,288,75040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,240,75440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,300,79440,2,0,P|284:324|244:324,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,268,80240,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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64,120,82240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,196,82640,2,0,L|40:284,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,316,83440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,344,83840,6,0,L|280:344,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,264,85040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,85440,2,0,P|144:128|232:68,1,160
292,48,86640,6,0,L|380:48,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,102,87440,2,0,P|447:166|419:262,1,160
360,304,88640,2,0,P|284:312|204:284,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,236,89840,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,172,90240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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172,72,96240,6,0,P|248:104|296:104,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,97440,2,0,P|408:124|384:172,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,36,99040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,112,99440,6,0,P|280:152|296:196,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,236,100240,2,0,P|356:300|268:344,1,160
200,332,101440,2,0,L|112:332,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,264,102640,6,0,L|240:172,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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440,100,104640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,176,105040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,105440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,316,105840,6,0,P|348:356|292:352,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,200,107640,2,0,L|376:80,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,36,108640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,76,109040,6,0,L|108:76,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,110840,1,4,0:0:0:0:
244,280,111440,2,0,P|200:320|100:320,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,121840,12,2,123440,0:0:0:0:
40,60,125040,6,0,L|40:148,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,220,125840,2,0,P|88:284|168:300,1,160
244,280,127040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,252,127440,2,0,L|408:252,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,212,128240,6,0,P|492:132|460:56,1,160
396,24,129440,2,0,L|312:24,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,32,130240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,80,130640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,152,131040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,228,131440,6,0,L|120:352,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,160,133240,2,0,P|288:136|348:136,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,156,134240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,216,134640,6,0,P|484:280|456:328,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,112,136440,2,0,L|276:112,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,137440,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,104,137840,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,152,138240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,224,138640,2,0,P|36:300|116:328,1,160
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396,304,141040,5,0,0:0:0:0:
436,232,141440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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308,76,143040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,108,143440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,108,143840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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364,228,147040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,168,147440,6,0,L|420:40,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,280,149240,2,0,P|328:332|272:332,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,312,150240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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260,296,154440,2,0,P|320:292|376:248,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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232,120,156640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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208,152,160840,2,0,P|144:192|92:192,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,92,162640,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,160,163040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,228,163440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,163640,12,0,166640,0:0:0:0:
Lally
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Lally
Ty moe-nya \o3o/

Updated o3o
119410501
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119410501
Good job.
Lally
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Lally
\o3o/ yay ty
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Modding as your request

[Andrea's Love]

00:06:640 (1) - I don't really get why this slider is there. It's just unfitting, and confusing :c
00:07:840 (4,5,6) - this is kinda similar to 00:11:040 (4,5,6) -, I think you're enough creative to think about another pattern here? :3
:!: 00:36:640 (5) - place this to x: 256 y: 208
01:31:040 (5) - ^ same thing here

the rest seems ok

[Our Love]

00:19:640 - She starts to sing here, so why don't you put a circle here? i suggest this:
00:18:640 (1) - let the spinner end 00:19:040 - here
00:19:440 - add a circle,
00:19:640 - add a circle as well.
00:43:640 (4,5,6) - in fact that you never put any triplets, this just doesn't fit, i would remove it
00:46:240 (5,1) - in this part you should go with the lyrics as well. 00:46:240 (5) - shorten this slider by 1 tick,
then place a slider from 00:46:840 - to 00:47:240 -
00:47:440 - and add a circle here
00:49:439 (4,1) - this is just overmapped, idk why you're not going with the lyrics, in fact that it really fits better ><
01:25:440 (2,4) - try to move 4 that it doesn't touch 2 that weird, it looks odd, even if you're ingame
02:13:240 (4,5,6) - remove this, replacing by other things

Well the main issue in this diff is the rhythm you placed, especially in your parts, Lally. Try to remove then, listen to the lyrics more closely, it will get better imo. (no offend)

[My Love]

00:11:640 - same thing, the lyrics tells us that you have to place smth here :P
00:41:840 (1,2,3,4) - this isn't good. lyrics xD
00:46:640 - remove this slider here,
00:46:840 (4) - add a slider from here to00:47:240 -
add a slider from 00:47:440 - to00:47:640 -

the second and third kiai time are better, they sound nice and are well placed.
the placing overall is also nice, so ididn't have to point out anything

[249's Love]

no.. kiai? oô
00:19:440 (1) - not sure if wrong placing o,o

Got nothing else to say here :) it's ok~

good luck lally! have a star, since i love this song xD i hope i could help a bit :3
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Lally
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Lally
Irreversible

Irreversible wrote:

Modding as your request

[Our Love]

00:19:640 - She starts to sing here, so why don't you put a circle here? i suggest this:
00:18:640 (1) - let the spinner end 00:19:040 - here wtf? i hope it's a joke.. this is a unrankable think since the spinner not doing 1000 points
00:19:440 - add a circle,^
00:19:640 - add a circle as well.^

Not all have to follow lyrics how i said,and please try to give atleast not unrankable suggestions òwò

00:43:640 (4,5,6) - in fact that you never put any triplets, this just doesn't fit, i would remove it if you look after you can find other too.
00:46:240 (5,1) - in this part you should go with the lyrics as well. 00:46:240 (5) - shorten this slider by 1 tick,
then place a slider from 00:46:840 - to 00:47:240 -
00:47:440 - and add a circle here same about the rhythm here and not lyrics
00:49:439 (4,1) - this is just overmapped, idk why you're not going with the lyrics, in fact that it really fits better >< what? o.o
01:25:440 (2,4) - try to move 4 that it doesn't touch 2 that weird, it looks odd, even if you're ingame

i don't think so


02:13:240 (4,5,6) - remove this, replacing by other things why?

Well the main issue in this diff is the rhythm you placed, especially in your parts, Lally. Try to remove then, listen to the lyrics more closely, it will get better imo. (no offend)
Imo the rhythm is fine,since for now nobody said something about.

[My Love]

00:11:640 - same thing, the lyrics tells us that you have to place smth here :P this is a normal and i don't wanna do it do difficult
00:41:840 (1,2,3,4) - this isn't good. lyrics xD i don't follow always lyrics
00:46:640 - remove this slider here, no because it sounds good and you should listen the rhythm of the song and not look only at lyrics
00:46:840 (4) - add a slider from here to00:47:240 -
add a slider from 00:47:440 - to00:47:640 - no,same reason as^

the second and third kiai time are better, they sound nice and are well placed.
the placing overall is also nice, so ididn't have to point out anything
It's your opinion,i don't follow always the lyrics in a map but i try to follow also the rhythm too.

good luck lally! have a star, since i love this song xD i hope i could help a bit :3

Ty for support o3o/

à3à
Irreversible
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Irreversible
I'm sorry for that spinner suggestion, I didn't see that, yes it was a mistake.

but still, you accepted none of my suggestions, really asking me why i was modding it? Also I don't understand why you're talking for shadow.
Konei
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Joined March 2012
Konei
Just saying, just becasue noone says something against something, it doesn't mean, that it is good lol.
No offense, I'm not talking to anyone, just wanted to say this owo
Lally
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Lally
this is true ofc,but i didn't fixed nothing because for me this things are ok,and because i don't find it so wrong to follow the rhythm sometimes and not the lyrics.this is the only reason not because i didn't fix anything,and about the triplets they are ok,since in the map they are some not only one random.
riffy
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riffy
heeey!

[General]
  1. You need tags remix and Monroe because it makes finding this beatmap easier. Also you need some more tags like Nyally BakaSoul Bakandrea Nyandrea and Tsundrea
  2. Consider using Slider Tick Rate 2 for all diffs. It fits with background music.
[249's Love]
  1. I'd recommend you to use HP Drain 2 because it makes diff settings better-balanced and more enjoyable for beginner players. I'd say that HP Drain 3 is too hard here :<
  2. 00:08:640 (1) - try to remove this combo, it feels better here. You don't have new combo at 00:11:840 (3) - 00:15:040 (3) - and so on, so remove this one to keep consistency.
  3. 00:25:440 (2) - I wouldn't use 1/2 sliders for [Easy] diff since they're too short and may confuse beginners a bit. It's up to you, tho.
[Your Love]
  1. 00:51:840 (2) - for sliders like this one, I'd recommend you to separate vocals from music. example
    Note: it may be a bit too hard. But this is kiai time and I think it makes it even more enjoyable for players!
  2. 01:38:040 - same as above, some more 1/2 notes won't hurt too much. It will fit with music, too!
  3. 02:13:440 (5,2) - ULTRA-NAZI - this overlap looks a bit messy. it looks even more awkward because you have no similar overlaps :< Try to fix it, please!
[Nyally X SS]
  1. 00:14:840 (1) - nazi - I'd say that x2.0+ jumps are quite hard. It's doesn't really fis with calm part of the song and it's too hard for [Hard] diff. This is not [Insane], remember!
  2. 00:19:040 - that "spin" sounds ends here. If you will try to cut spinner - it'll be unrankable. Try to replace it with a slider?
    try this? (1/1 slider at 00:18:640 + circles at 00:19:440 - 00:19:640
  3. 00:41:840 (1,2) - x3.0+ jumps are NOT okay for [Hard] diff. It's too hard and it'll stress players too much! Try to reduce spacing and keep it under x2.5 at least :<
  4. 02:34:440 (2) - sae as above here! This pattern sure looks good, but it's too hard. I'd be glad to see this pattern on [Insane] diff, tho. o3o/[
  5. 02:37:840 (1) - nazi - in fact, this new comb looks a bit extra here. I'd remove it to keep comboing consistent. Just a suggestion, anyway
[Nyandrea's Love]
I smell some lazy mappers here \:3/
  1. Probably it will hurt balance between diffs, but try to use HP Drain 7 here. It feels the way better and makes this diff a bit more enjoyable and balanced.

    I'd say that jumps are overused. But it's just my opinion. Have nothing else to say, anyway.
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BCI
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Joined May 2011
BCI
random mod because I can huehue
/me got stalked so sorry if I suggested the same ;_;

[General]
  1. 02:46:440 - how about ending this spinner here? here's the last "oh-oh~"o3o
  2. collab collaboration in tags because Hard - Collab
[249]
  1. OD-1. I saw your comment about flow, but still, OD2 gives you more flow than 3, now it's more like a Normal diff + OD3 ruins all the consistency in diff settings for whole map
  2. welp again different kiai times ;_; how about making full kiai at the end with fountains in the middle and end (look here) now it's too boring imo :<
  3. 00:06:640 (T) - i'd make here 40/50% volume, it's more smoothy and you can feel the difference between slow and not that slow part. +it's too noizy right now
  4. 00:17:440 (2,3,1) - is all the overlaps here intentional? it looks ugly+ruins the spacing, I'd remake this pattern. like in here
  5. 00:25:440 (2) - no no and no pls. don't use sliders with 1/2 repeat in Easy especially it's VERY necesscary. now it isn't because it's only one 1/2 slider in whole map, consider to remake this into 1/1 slider
  6. 00:26:240 (1) - I don't even know which thing this slider is following, fore- or background, vocals or BGM... tl;dr this slider should end 1/1 before (00:27:040 - ) it fits with both vocals and BGM. don't forget to add a clap at the end if you agree
  7. 00:41:440 (3) - how about adding a clap instead of whistle here? whistle fits nothing especially it doesn't even hear here + music still has that strong clap sound + it follows your clap pattern so... \o3o/
    1. if you agree with me, do this for 00:44:640 (3) ; 00:54:240 (3) ; 00:57:440 (3) - and so on too
  8. 00:57:840 (4) - i'd remove this note and drag the break to here, it fits better with the song because now this circle follows absolutely nothing
  9. 01:12:640 (3) - that clap here feels too noizy because there begins small calm part where these clap sounds is missing (tl;dr how about deleting clap and adding whistle instead)
clear diff, I hope you can explain how do you put whistles instead of claps in 00:41:440 (3) :<

[Normal]
  2. 00:06:640 (T) - same as Easy, 60% is too noizy for intro part
  3. 00:17:440 (1) - welp too short spinner + next (1) is too close + too early beginning (it should be at the next white tick) how about delete this spinner and map this part
  4. 00:29:040 (1) - again next (1) is too close after spinner asdfghjk, how about moving the end 1/1 back
  5. 00:48:240 (1,2,3,4) - oh well, I approve, you'd better following vocal here instead of just making symmetry pattern (http://puu.sh/2yBjB)
  6. 01:12:640 (4) - same as Easy
  7. 01:23:440 (1) - same as 00:29:040 (1) -
  8. 01:41:440 (3,4) - asdfghjk this pattern, there's no any flow and it's frustrating to play by me, how about http://puu.sh/2yBqA
  9. 02:05:040 (1) - why this spinner at the begin of kiai time :V that eeeeahhh eeeeahh sound is here for the whole part of the kiai time, it's not a reason, so map this pls
  10. 02:17:840 (1) - ^ (or atleast add claps on these two for keeping clap pattern)
  11. 02:30:640 (1) - oh u sure? it's soooo short, y u no make just slider
  12. 02:33:840 (4) - NC for strong vocal?
  13. 02:37:040 (3) - NC+finish would be awesum
  14. 02:40:240 (1) - delete spinner, map this part and begin le spinner like in other diffs, don't even know why do you put spinner here o3o
[Hard]
Lally:
  1. 00:49:040 (3) - ctrl+g?
ShadowSoul:
  1. 00:13:840 (4) - how about curve it in another way (http://puu.sh/2yBCn) now this pattern have no flow at all
  2. 00:18:640 (1) - too short spinner :< it's not awesome and it doesn't fit, map this spinner pls
  3. 00:34:640 (2,3,4) - make this triangle perfect using DS 1.8 at all circles
  4. 00:37:840 (2,3,4) - ^ also this jump is a bit too big for a Hard so use 1.8 DS again o3o
  5. 00:38:640 (1,2,3) - ... don't do it in Hards next time please, it's Insane pattern o3o (00:41:840 (1,2,3) - same)
  6. 02:35:640 (4) - it fits nothing :U you'd better to follow vocal here, make it liek http://puu.sh/2yBS2
@SS: personally I don't like your parts, I wish you can work on this more o3o

[Andrea]
  1. AR9 is TOO fast. AR8 pls, it fits even better here, you're following the vocals in fact, so you got not-so-crazy diff, no matter this is Insane
  2. I don't get your logic in NC placement, sometimes you follow vocal sometimes you don't o3o
    useless box of NC swapping >.<
    1. 00:15:440 (1,2) - swap NCs
    2. 00:21:840 (1,2) - ^
    3. 00:23:240 (1,2) - ^
    4. 00:35:040 (1,2) - ^
    5. 01:03:840 (1,2) - ^
    6. 01:09:840 (1,2) - ^
    7. 01:16:240 (1,2) - ^
    8. 01:19:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is good but for the sake of consistency I suggest to make le combos like (9,10,11,1,2)
    9. 01:29:440 (1,2) - swap again
    10. 02:20:640 (1,2) - ^
awesum diff huehue
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Here's my update, thanks everyone for modding.

http://puu.sh/2yEYl <- Download.
Lally
3,176 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Lally
Baka o3o

-Bakari- wrote:

heeey! hi moeri o3o/

[General]
  1. You need tags remix and Monroe because it makes finding this beatmap easier. Also you need some more tags like Nyally BakaSoul Bakandrea Nyandrea and Tsundrea ok added o3o
  2. Consider using Slider Tick Rate 2 for all diffs. It fits with background music. you know how i think about TR 2 i don't like it ;_;

[Your Love]
  1. 00:51:840 (2) - for sliders like this one, I'd recommend you to separate vocals from music. example
    Note: it may be a bit too hard. But this is kiai time and I think it makes it even more enjoyable for players!it's a bit hard but i think is ok for a normal
  2. 01:38:040 - same as above, some more 1/2 notes won't hurt too much. It will fit with music, too! ok
  3. 02:13:440 (5,2) - ULTRA-NAZI - this overlap looks a bit messy. it looks even more awkward because you have no similar overlaps :< Try to fix it, please! fixed
[Nyally X SS]
  1. 00:19:040 - that "spin" sounds ends here. If you will try to cut spinner - it'll be unrankable. Try to replace it with a slider? will think about
    SPOILER
  2. 02:37:840 (1) - nazi - in fact, this new comb looks a bit extra here. I'd remove it to keep comboing consistent. Just a suggestion, anyway fixed
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Star! ~
Ty very much baka *D*
moeCI

BCI wrote:

random mod because I can huehue
/me got stalked so sorry if I suggested the same ;_; don't worry thanks moeCI <3

[General]
  1. 02:46:440 - how about ending this spinner here? here's the last "oh-oh~"o3o nice idea
  2. collab collaboration in tags because Hard - Collab
[Normal]
  2. 00:06:640 (T) - same as Easy, 60% is too noizy for intro part ok
  3. 00:17:440 (1) - welp too short spinner + next (1) is too close + too early beginning (it should be at the next white tick) how about delete this spinner and map this part hmm i dunno but will think about to do changes here
  4. 00:29:040 (1) - again next (1) is too close after spinner asdfghjk, how about moving the end 1/1 back ^
  5. 00:48:240 (1,2,3,4) - oh well, I approve, you'd better following vocal here instead of just making symmetry pattern (http://puu.sh/2yBjB) i used moeri suggestion here
  6. 01:12:640 (4) - same as Easy uuuh i really like how it sounds with whistles *-*
  7. 01:23:440 (1) - same as 00:29:040 (1) - will think about
  8. 01:41:440 (3,4) - asdfghjk this pattern, there's no any flow and it's frustrating to play by me, how about http://puu.sh/2yBqA fixed
  9. 02:05:040 (1) - why this spinner at the begin of kiai time :V that eeeeahhh eeeeahh sound is here for the whole part of the kiai time, it's not a reason, so map this pls i did it intentionaly to put a spinner here i like how it fits with the vocal in this part
  10. 02:17:840 (1) - ^ (or atleast add claps on these two for keeping clap pattern) there is a normal sampleset o3o
  11. 02:30:640 (1) - oh u sure? it's soooo short, y u no make just slider i'm not that sure about this spinner,but i love how it follow the vocal here
  12. 02:33:840 (4) - NC for strong vocal? u-u ok
  13. 02:37:040 (3) - NC+finish would be awesum true true
  14. 02:40:240 (1) - delete spinner, map this part and begin le spinner like in other diffs, don't even know why do you put spinner here o3o kay
[Hard]
Lally:
  1. 00:49:040 (3) - ctrl+g? kk
ShadowSoul:
  1. 00:13:840 (4) - how about curve it in another way (http://puu.sh/2yBCn) now this pattern have no flow at all y
  2. 00:18:640 (1) - too short spinner :< it's not awesome and it doesn't fit, map this spinner pls how i said in baka mod i'll fix it later maybe
  3. 00:34:640 (2,3,4) - make this triangle perfect using DS 1.8 at all circles kk
  4. 00:37:840 (2,3,4) - ^ also this jump is a bit too big for a Hard so use 1.8 DS again o3o imo is not that problem here
@SS: personally I don't like your parts, I wish you can work on this more o3o

Things that not get fixed in Hard from baka mod:
  1. 00:41:840 (1,2) - x3.0+ jumps are NOT okay for [Hard] diff. It's too hard and it'll stress players too much! Try to reduce spacing and keep it under x2.5 at least :<
  2. 02:34:440 (2) - sae as above here! This pattern sure looks good, but it's too hard. I'd be glad to see this pattern on [Insane] diff, tho. o3o/
Things that not get fixed in Hard from moeCI mod:
  1. 00:38:640 (1,2,3) - ... don't do it in Hards next time please, it's Insane pattern o3o (00:41:840 (1,2,3) - same)
  2. 02:35:640 (4) - it fits nothing :U you'd better to follow vocal here, make it liek http://puu.sh/2yBS2
@Andrea: updated :3 ty

Update :3
XinCrin
2,845 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Hmmm for me , this song is Speed Up Ver. , not Nightcore Mix :|
Kryptogram
600 posts
Joined December 2010
Kryptogram
Hi o/

General
  1. The notes for me are off, ask someone to check the timming to confirm
  2. The Names of the difficults confuses me, try somethign else, be creative
249's Love

  1. 00:19:440 (1) - Move this note to x:336 y:80 i think it looks better because its touching the slider 00:18:240 (3)
  2. 00:41:440 (3) - Maybe replace the whistle for a clap, it follows the instrumental and sounds good
  3. 00:44:640 (3) - ^
  4. 00:54:240 (3) - ^
  5. 00:57:440 (3) - ^
  6. 00:57:840 (4) - this note for me doesn't flow to good here, remove it and star the break there http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/702169
  7. 01:35:840 (3) - Try to replace the whistle for a clap, it follows the instrumental and sounds good
  8. 01:39:040 (3) - ^
  9. 01:48:640 (3) - ^
  10. 02:14:240 (3) - ^
  11. 02:17:440 (3) - ^
  12. 02:27:040 (3) - ^
  13. 02:30:240 (3) - ^
  14. 02:36:640 (4) - ^
  15. 02:43:040 (4) - ^
Good Diff only nazi and hitsound stuff :)

My Love

  1. 00:17:440 (1) - This spinner end for me its too close to the next slider 00:19:440 (1), try to end it here 00:18:640 (x) since its a 150 bmp its maybe too fast for a Normal
  2. 00:29:040 (1) - The same thing as above
  3. 00:54:640 (1) - Why don't you try ending this spinner here 00:57:440 (x) and remove whistle, the start the break here 00:57:840 (x), it sounds better to me for some reason, please try it
  4. 01:23:440 (1) - The spinner end its too earlier for me sorry if i am bothering you whit this xD
  5. 02:05:040 (1) - ^
  6. 02:17:840 (1) - ^
  7. 02:30:640 (1) - Add a clap, it follows the instrumental and sounds great
  8. 02:40:440 (2) - This note its for me like overmapped try removing it

Our Love

OD +1 for me its more like a Easy Insane whit those jumps and streams

  1. 00:57:940 (x) - Insert a break time here to be consistents whit the other diffs
  2. 01:15:640 (1) - This note may cause some confuse in players (well if you're playing whit HD), but its not something to fix
  3. 01:33:040 (1) - A finish at the begin sounds lovely <3
  4. 02:11:440 (1) - ^
  5. 02:43:040 (4) - To stack it perfectly move to x:415 y:273 :D

Andrea's Love
  1. Nothing found, Andrea you map really good, please show us more by don't doing copy and paste :D ! (A constructive opinion btw)
Really good song, and nice mapset hope to see this ranked soon.

Good Luck!
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,148 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

-Bakari- wrote:

heeey!

[249's Love]
  1. I'd recommend you to use HP Drain 2 because it makes diff settings better-balanced and more enjoyable for beginner players. I'd say that HP Drain 3 is too hard here :< whoops--mistake. fixed D:.
  2. 00:08:640 (1) - try to remove this combo, it feels better here. You don't have new combo at 00:11:840 (3) - 00:15:040 (3) - and so on, so remove this one to keep consistency. i can't argue over that. fixed.
  3. 00:25:440 (2) - I wouldn't use 1/2 sliders for [Easy] diff since they're too short and may confuse beginners a bit. It's up to you, tho. i did this becauxe i though it'd be more fun for beginners since adding too much of 1/1 sliders would be boring for them.
Star! ~

BCI wrote:

random mod because I can huehue
/me got stalked so sorry if I suggested the same ;_;

[249]
  1. OD-1. I saw your comment about flow, but still, OD2 gives you more flow than 3, now it's more like a Normal diff + OD3 ruins all the consistency in diff settings for whole map ahh i thought it was the HP D:. fixed either way.
  2. welp again different kiai times ;_; how about making full kiai at the end with fountains in the middle and end (look here) now it's too boring imo :< i don't find those kinds of kiai times exciting anymore then kiai fountains.
  3. 00:06:640 (T) - i'd make here 40/50% volume, it's more smoothy and you can feel the difference between slow and not that slow part. +it's too noizy right now ok i'll decrease it to 50%.
  4. 00:17:440 (2,3,1) - is all the overlaps here intentional? it looks ugly+ruins the spacing, I'd remake this pattern. like in here how did that happen :/. fixed it myself.
  5. 00:25:440 (2) - no no and no pls. don't use sliders with 1/2 repeat in Easy especially it's VERY necesscary. now it isn't because it's only one 1/2 slider in whole map, consider to remake this into 1/1 slider ik that it's the only 1/2 repeat, but i did this to change things up. personally, i don't wanna make this a boring diff if it's just x/1 sliders.
  6. 00:26:240 (1) - I don't even know which thing this slider is following, fore- or background, vocals or BGM... tl;dr this slider should end 1/1 before (00:27:040 - ) it fits with both vocals and BGM. don't forget to add a clap at the end if you agree fixed. i knew this was bad in the first place.
  7. 00:41:440 (3) - how about adding a clap instead of whistle here? whistle fits nothing especially it doesn't even hear here + music still has that strong clap sound + it follows your clap pattern so... \o3o/ i disagree because this whistle follows the "yeah~" and adding the finish would be too much here.
    1. if you agree with me, do this for 00:44:640 (3) ; 00:54:240 (3) ; 00:57:440 (3) - and so on too
  8. 00:57:840 (4) - i'd remove this note and drag the break to here, it fits better with the song because now this circle follows absolutely nothing i want this circle to go along with the vocals, but i added a timing point and decreased it to 20%.
  9. 01:12:640 (3) - that clap here feels too noizy because there begins small calm part where these clap sounds is missing (tl;dr how about deleting clap and adding whistle instead) then it'll break consistency with the clap pattern in this part of the song.
clear diff, I hope you can explain how do you put whistles instead of claps in 00:41:440 (3) :< read 00:41:440 and i hope that sums it up.
ty for the mods :D

EDIT: Te Amo i'll look at your mod once Lally updates.

SPOILER
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 32240
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:True Love (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:True Love (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Destinee & Paris
ArtistUnicode:Destinee & Paris
Creator:Lally
Version:249's Love
Source:
Tags:ShadowSoul Byakugan249 Andrea osuplayer111 trance remix Monroe Collab
BeatmapID:238684
BeatmapSetID:87367

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
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Lally
3,176 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Lally
i'll update tomorrow morning :3 ty for modding Tea :3
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI

Byakugan249 wrote:

00:41:440 (3) - how about adding a clap instead of whistle here? whistle fits nothing especially it doesn't even hear here + music still has that strong clap sound + it follows your clap pattern so... \o3o/ i disagree because this whistle follows the "yeah~" and adding the finish would be too much here.
welp I said clap not finish
Lally
3,176 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Lally
  1. Updated 249's diff :3
  2. Updated all the other diffs too o3o
Ty for modding TeA :3

TeA *D*)/

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi o/

General
  1. The notes for me are off, ask someone to check the timming to confirm ok i'll ask
  2. The Names of the difficults confuses me, try somethign else, be creative
My Love

  1. 00:17:440 (1) - This spinner end for me its too close to the next slider 00:19:440 (1), try to end it here 00:18:640 (x) since its a 150 bmp its maybe too fast for a Normal i'll think about
  2. 00:29:040 (1) - The same thing as above here yes
  3. 00:54:640 (1) - Why don't you try ending this spinner here 00:57:440 (x) and remove whistle, the start the break here 00:57:840 (x), it sounds better to me for some reason, please try it ok
  4. 01:23:440 (1) - The spinner end its too earlier for me sorry if i am bothering you whit this xD here it's ok since i think it fits with kiai
  5. 02:05:040 (1) - ^-^
  6. 02:17:840 (1) - ^-^
  7. 02:30:640 (1) - Add a clap, it follows the instrumental and sounds great ok
  8. 02:40:440 (2) - This note its for me like overmapped try removing it ok

Our Love

OD +1 for me its more like a Easy Insane whit those jumps and streams
OD is ok for me since it's like HP
  1. 00:57:940 (x) - Insert a break time here to be consistents whit the other diffs i dunno why it get removed O.O
  2. 01:15:640 (1) - This note may cause some confuse in players (well if you're playing whit HD), but its not something to fix will think about
  3. 01:33:040 (1) - A finish at the begin sounds lovely <3 ofc :D
  4. 02:11:440 (1) - ^-^
  5. 02:43:040 (4) - To stack it perfectly move to x:415 y:273 :D uh ok u.u

Good Luck!


Update :3
Loooctav
1,070 posts
Joined January 2012
Loooctav
Hi! From me Modding Queue (Mutual ¬¬''xD)

~249's Love~
-1 AR?
00:36:240 (2,3,4,5,1) Mold so it looks like a "C"
01:12:240 (2,3,4,5) Molde to have a curve that's more attractive
01:30:240 (2,4)No like Overlap? o3o
KIAI (Code)
6640,400,4,2,1,50,1,0
19440,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
32240,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
32440,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
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137840,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
138040,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
150640,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
150640,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
150840,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
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163640,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
165040,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
166640,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0

~My Love~
00:15:740 (5) x:256 y:184
00:50:240 (4) x:128 y:168
00:53:840 (6,7) NO OVERLAP PLZ XD
01:19:040 (5)
Screenshot + Code
308,276,78640,2,0,P|304:232|312:180,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,152,79040,2,0,B|312:96|312:96|352:112|400:96,2,140

~Our Love~ & ~Andrea's Love~
Perfect ._.!

Star~
Byeeeeeeee
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,148 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi o/

249's Love

  1. 00:19:440 (1) - Move this note to x:336 y:80 i think it looks better because its touching the slider 00:18:240 (3) fixed it myself.
  2. 00:41:440 (3) - Maybe replace the whistle for a clap, it follows the instrumental and sounds good but i'm following the vocals, not the BGM.
  3. 00:44:640 (3) - ^ ^
  4. 00:54:240 (3) - ^ ^
  5. 00:57:440 (3) - ^ ^
  6. 00:57:840 (4) - this note for me doesn't flow to good here, remove it and star the break there http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/702169 ahh you too? ok then i'll remove it if it bothers people.
  7. 01:35:840 (3) - Try to replace the whistle for a clap, it follows the instrumental and sounds good same as 00:41:440.
  8. 01:39:040 (3) - ^ ^
  9. 01:48:640 (3) - ^ ^
  10. 02:14:240 (3) - ^ ^
  11. 02:17:440 (3) - ^ ^
  12. 02:27:040 (3) - ^ ^
  13. 02:30:240 (3) - ^ ^
  14. 02:36:640 (4) - ^ ^
  15. 02:43:040 (4) - ^ ^
Good Diff only nazi and hitsound stuff :)

Really good song, and nice mapset hope to see this ranked soon.

Good Luck!

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hi! From me Modding Queue (Mutual ¬¬''xD)

~249's Love~
-1 AR?
00:36:240 (2,3,4,5,1) Mold so it looks like a "C" i prefer my pattern since i want it to be more straightforward than flowy here.
01:12:240 (2,3,4,5) Molde to have a curve that's more attractive nope i did this intentionally because the downward pattern represents the drums in this part. the claps stop in the BGM, so this pattern represents the flow in the drums.
01:30:240 (2,4)No like Overlap? o3o as long as the hitburst disappears in this part, then it shouldn't be a problem.
KIAI (Code)
6640,400,4,2,1,50,1,0
19440,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
32240,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
32440,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
45040,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
45240,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
57440,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
57840,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
61040,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
86640,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
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99440,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
99640,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
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125240,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
137840,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
138040,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
150640,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
150640,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
150840,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
163440,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
163640,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
165040,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
166640,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
sorry no i don't like using kiai times as i don't find them exciting anymore.
ty for the mods :D. and made changes to the hitsounds.

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Destinee & Paris - True Love (Nightcore Mix).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 32240
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:True Love (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:True Love (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Destinee & Paris
ArtistUnicode:Destinee & Paris
Creator:Lally
Version:249's Love
Source:
Tags:ShadowSoul Byakugan249 Andrea osuplayer111 trance remix Monroe Collab
BeatmapID:238684
BeatmapSetID:87367

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464,120,26240,6,0,P|476:212|432:268,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,308,27440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,328,27840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,332,28240,2,0,P|152:320|104:236,1,160
96,164,29440,5,8,0:0:0:0:
148,104,29840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,84,30240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,92,30640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,100,31040,2,0,L|384:16,2,80
420,172,32240,6,0,P|428:232|408:332,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,356,33440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,332,33840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,292,34240,2,0,L|96:292,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,248,35440,6,0,L|260:160,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,92,36240,2,0,P|200:56|92:52,1,160
40,108,37440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,188,37840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,260,38240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,316,38640,6,0,P|188:348|244:348,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,204,40440,2,0,L|100:72,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,41440,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,64,41840,6,0,L|368:64,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,184,43640,2,0,L|380:184,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,240,44640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,300,45040,6,0,L|296:340,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,352,45840,2,0,L|100:352,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,276,47440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,200,47840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,132,48240,6,0,L|176:44,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,49040,2,0,P|340:24|424:40,1,160
452,108,50240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,184,50640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,260,51040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,320,51440,6,0,P|340:360|288:360,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,216,53240,2,0,P|320:148|340:104,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,36,54240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,80,54640,6,0,P|484:128|484:196,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,32,56440,2,0,L|212:32,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,80,57440,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,220,61040,5,4,0:0:0:0:
140,284,61440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,324,61840,2,0,P|252:332|296:320,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,284,62640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,224,63040,6,0,P|420:184|408:148,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,88,63840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,44,64240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,36,64640,6,0,P|132:40|68:100,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,168,65840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,196,66240,2,0,P|196:192|260:132,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,64,67440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,108,67840,6,0,P|376:152|376:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,256,68640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,304,69040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,340,69440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,304,69840,2,0,P|92:264|92:160,1,160
140,112,71040,6,0,L|140:24,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,136,72240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,112,72640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,152,73040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,220,73440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,288,73840,5,4,0:0:0:0:
292,328,74240,2,0,L|204:328,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,75040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,240,75440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,172,75840,6,0,P|36:100|120:68,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,64,77040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,36,77440,6,0,L|360:36,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,88,78240,2,0,L|404:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,240,79040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,300,79440,2,0,P|284:324|244:324,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,268,80240,1,4,0:0:0:0:
244,208,80640,6,0,L|244:124,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,81440,2,0,P|160:56|116:72,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,120,82240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,196,82640,2,0,L|40:284,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,316,83440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,344,83840,6,0,L|280:344,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,264,85040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,85440,2,0,P|144:128|232:68,1,160
292,48,86640,6,0,L|380:48,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,102,87440,2,0,P|447:166|419:262,1,160
360,304,88640,2,0,P|284:312|204:284,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,236,89840,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,172,90240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,104,90640,2,0,P|216:64|256:60,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,172,92240,2,0,L|48:248,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,316,93040,6,0,P|152:356|196:356,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,204,94840,2,0,L|28:80,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,44,95840,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,72,96240,6,0,P|248:104|296:104,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,97440,2,0,P|408:124|384:172,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,36,99040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,112,99440,6,0,P|280:152|296:196,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,236,100240,2,0,P|356:300|268:344,1,160
200,332,101440,2,0,L|112:332,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,264,102640,6,0,L|240:172,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,104,103440,2,0,P|328:48|396:40,1,160
440,100,104640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,176,105040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,105440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,316,105840,6,0,P|348:356|292:352,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,200,107640,2,0,L|376:80,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,36,108640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,76,109040,6,0,L|108:76,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,110840,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,280,111440,2,0,P|200:320|100:320,1,160,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,121840,12,2,123440,0:0:0:0:
40,60,125040,6,0,L|40:148,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,220,125840,2,0,P|88:284|168:300,1,160
244,280,127040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,252,127440,2,0,L|408:252,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,212,128240,6,0,P|492:132|460:56,1,160
396,24,129440,2,0,L|312:24,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,32,130240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,80,130640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,152,131040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,228,131440,6,0,L|120:352,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,160,133240,2,0,P|288:136|348:136,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,156,134240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,216,134640,6,0,P|484:280|456:328,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,112,136440,2,0,L|276:112,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,137440,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,104,137840,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,152,138240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,224,138640,2,0,P|36:300|116:328,1,160
172,288,139840,2,0,P|248:256|320:288,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,304,141040,5,0,0:0:0:0:
436,232,141440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,156,141840,2,0,P|460:88|380:52,1,160
308,76,143040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,108,143440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,108,143840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,144,144240,6,0,P|52:212|64:272,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,224,146040,2,0,P|224:248|300:248,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,228,147040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,168,147440,6,0,L|420:40,2,120,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,280,149240,2,0,P|328:332|272:332,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,312,150240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,264,150640,6,0,P|76:144|200:40,2,320,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,296,154440,2,0,P|320:292|376:248,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,192,156240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,120,156640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,68,157040,6,0,P|424:68|488:224,2,320,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,160840,2,0,P|144:192|92:192,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,92,162640,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,160,163040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,228,163440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,163640,12,0,166640,0:0:0:0:
Lally
3,176 posts
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Topic Starter
Lally
finaly back o3o also moe-nya i updated your diff too C:
ThoomyyxD

ThoomyyxD wrote:

~My Love~
00:15:740 (5) x:256 y:184 k
00:50:240 (4) x:128 y:168 i don't like how it looks
00:53:840 (6,7) NO OVERLAP PLZ XD is not a overlap o.o is just a simple stack
01:19:040 (5) i prefer to keep the prev (2) blanket with (5) - o3o
SPOILER
308,276,78640,2,0,P|304:232|312:180,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,152,79040,2,0,B|312:96|312:96|352:112|400:96,2,140

~Our Love~ & ~Andrea's Love~
Perfect ._.!
ty :3
Star~
Byeeeeeeee

^-^ <3


updated :3
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
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Andrea
http://puu.sh/2NJ5S.rar <- My difficulty, updated.

IRC Modding with Roddie, fixed some combos here and there, nothing else. ^^
Lally
3,176 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Lally
k ty andre will update with the rest later o3o
Roddie
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1,468 posts
Joined June 2009
Roddie
IRC modding over My Love and Andrea's Love. Here's the chatlog below for both:


Chatlog1
11:38 Roddie: now, I want to talk to you about your My Love diff
11:39 Lally: ok
11:41 Roddie: 00:16:240 (1)-It would be best to remove this combo. Doesn't make much sense to me because that new combo is short.
11:41 Lally: yap true,removed
11:43 Roddie: 00:46:640 (4)-a finish on the beginning doesn't sound right in my opinion. Just doesn't seem fitting to the song
11:43 Roddie: I suggest removing it
11:44 Lally: yap removed since i didn't put one in hard
11:54 Roddie: 02:40:240 (1)-Forgot to add a finish? (:
11:54 Lally: yap true added
11:57 Roddie: 02:43:440 (1)-Wouldn't it make sense to end the spinner on 02:46:640?
11:58 Roddie: all other diffs end at that time; your's isn't ):
11:58 Lally: yap,fixed in all diffs
11:59 Lally: like*
12:03 Roddie: sadly, I'm gonna have to stop here since I have to get going soon
12:03 Lally: :3 ok no prob C:
12:03 Roddie: I'll put our chat in my mod post. I'll mod the rest later
12:04 Roddie: thank you for your time, lally
12:04 Lally: ^-^)/ ty for modding and have a nice day o3o/

Chatlog 2
21:30there are a few things I wanted to talk to you about
21:30 Roddie: this regards to your guest diff from lally's map
21:30 Roddie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/238685 Destinee & Paris - True Love (Nightcore Mix) [Andrea's Love]]
21:31 Andrea: sure thing
21:33 Roddie: it's about the new combos you've placed
21:33 Roddie: don't take this the wrong way but they're unusual
21:34 Andrea: oh yeah, many people doesn't like my comboing
21:34 Roddie: but that's where I come in lol
21:34 Roddie: I'm gonna do my best to help you out on that
21:34 Andrea: yay bro <3
21:35 Roddie: 00:15:440 (1)-I have a feeling that this new combo here is appearing too soon. Doesn't seem to fit well like that. Would be a good idea to remove it.
21:35 Andrea: and add on next?
21:35 Roddie: 00:16:440 (2)-This object could very well have a new combo since the next set of lyrics starts here. Fits nicely that way. :D 
21:35 Roddie: yup
21:35 Andrea: fixed
21:36 Andrea: 01:09:840 (1,2) - ^ did the same
21:36 Roddie: 00:21:840 (1, 2)-these too
21:36 Roddie: 00:25:040 (1, 2)-^
21:37 Andrea: 01:16:240 (1,2) - ^
21:37 Andrea: done too
21:37 Roddie: 00:35:040 (1, 2)-^
21:37 Andrea: fixed
21:38 Roddie: it's a good thing those won't affect the spacing you put in... for the most part lol
21:41 Roddie: 01:19:040 (1)-It would be best to remove this new combo here. Sure, it'll be hard to play but that won't be a problem lol
21:41 Roddie: hard to play without a new combo* sorry 
21:42 Andrea: removed yeah
21:43 Roddie: 01:20:440 (1, 2)-:D
21:43 Roddie: oops
21:43 Roddie: wrong one
21:44 Roddie: I meant to type was
21:44 Roddie: 01:20:440 (1)-How 'bout addin' a new combo here, man? :D
21:45 Roddie: 01:29:440 (1, 2)-I'm sure you'll know what to do here.
21:45 Andrea: already all done
21:45 Andrea: fixed all the copy-paste as well xD
21:46 Andrea: thought you would mention then :D
21:46 Roddie: 02:20:640 (1, 2)-Here as well
21:46 Andrea: yup
21:46 Andrea: done already
21:46 Andrea: :D
21:46 Andrea: I got your comboing >w<
21:47 Roddie: and that is it
21:47 Andrea: ok let me test
21:47 Roddie: I've test played it before I came to you
21:48 Andrea: thanks a lot man :D
21:48 Roddie: It plays alright. Nothing wrong came up while I was playin' your diff
21:48 Andrea: <3
21:50 Andrea: posted my diff in thread
21:51 Roddie: k
21:52 Roddie: thanks for your time, Andrea
21:52 Roddie: (:
21:53 Andrea: nono, I should thank you for helping me!
21:53 Andrea: :D

249's Love
  1. 01:27:440 (2, 3)-Might I suggest moving the end point of slider 2 1/2 back and put a repeat on it? It'll sound good that way since it follows the vocals nicely. As for slier 3, you can create a slider starting from 01:29:040 - to 01:29:440 - . It isn't half bad in my opinion.
Our Love
  1. 02:35:640 (4, 5)- [ShadowSoul]: Hm... I have a suggest that can be better for you. Try removing the repeat of slider 4 and note 5. Then, add a slider from 02:36:240 to 02:36:640. And finally, add a note on 02:36:840. Doing this is gonna improve the rhythm of this part. You can adapt those within this combo's flow, you know? Try it out and see! Here's what it looks like.
If you have questions regarding to my mod post, don't hesitate to ask. 8-)

And that's it. Here's a star on me. Good luck to you, Lally! ;)
Lally
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Lally
Ty for modding and for star Roddie >u< fixed your suggestion in Our Love and updated Andrea's diff o3o/ ty
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu
Roddie i'm gonna have to disagree with you because if i do that, it wouldn't flow nicely to the vocals and i can't see the feeling shown if i move it back 1/2.
LunarSakuya
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LunarSakuya
hi!

General
- In all your .osu files under Events, change the bg code line from 0,0,"owo.jpg",1,1 to 0,0,"owo.jpg",0,0
Also Our Love has a duplicate line. Make sure you delete that.

249's Love
hai Byaku =v=

01:08:640 (2,3,4,5) - Make this pattern more curved i guess lol http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/746716
01:15:840 (1) - Delete NC
01:17:040 (2) - then NC here, and delete NC on next note; This will match your NC patterns earlier in the map
01:23:440 (5) - NC and delete NC on next note, i referenced 00:22:640 (1) - ; if so, there are other spots
02:43:440 (5) - a bit too soft/silent? Maybe increase the volume to be safe

My Love
00:11:440 - Add note, I don't see a gap like this anywhere else
00:50:040 (4) - Try moving this back to the red tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/746738, matches vocals better
00:57:840 - Drag the break time line to here? =v=
01:13:440 (5) - Nice hitsound here! xD
02:05:040 (1) - Clap on this spinner
02:17:840 (1) - ^
02:41:240 (3) - i dunno about these 1/2 rhythms, seems like it kinda breaks the flow from the rest of the song, no?

Our Love
00:38:040 (3,4) - it'd look nicer imo if you could bring these closer together by a couple grids http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/746756
00:45:840 (3,4,5) - try this rhythm instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/746761 (ignore note placement)

Andrea's Love
02:11:440 (1) - Finish on head, like the other similar sections

sweet map ^^
feel free to call me back~
Lally
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Topic Starter
Lally
LunarSakuya

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi! ohayo :3

o3o = comments
o3o = not fixed things
o3o = fixed

General
- In all your .osu files under Events, change the bg code line from 0,0,"owo.jpg",1,1 to 0,0,"owo.jpg",0,0 fixed in all diff
Also Our Love has a duplicate line. Make sure you delete that. after looking the .osu file i get what you mean,deleted

Extra: deleted .osb since i don't have any and i have a diff specific one

My Love
00:11:440 - Add note, I don't see a gap like this anywhere else k
00:50:040 (4) - Try moving this back to the red tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/746738, matches vocals better kk
00:57:840 - Drag the break time line to here? =v= fixed
01:13:440 (5) - Nice hitsound here! xD \o3o/
02:05:040 (1) - Clap on this spinner i prefer to keep a normal sampleset here
02:17:840 (1) - ^same about^
02:41:240 (3) - i dunno about these 1/2 rhythms, seems like it kinda breaks the flow from the rest of the song, no? changed

Our Love
00:38:040 (3,4) - it'd look nicer imo if you could bring these closer together by a couple grids http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/746756 moved by some grinds
00:45:840 (3,4,5) - try this rhythm instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/746761 (ignore note placement) ok i like it done

Andrea's Love
02:11:440 (1) - Finish on head, like the other similar sections I tanked about with andrea about this finish and we think is not neded since in the prev similar part of the songs and in the prev pattern was not a finish and it will create inconsistence

sweet map ^^
feel free to call me back~

*D*)/ ty very much <3

  1. updated all mine and Andrea's diff
  2. deleted .osb
  3. waiting for byaku o3o
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
Hi Lally o/

General
  1. Nothing wrong here
249's Easy
  • -- Looks great
My Love
  • -- I feel the slider velocity is too high for being a normal in my opinion
    - 00:17:440 (1) - My suggestion is move this spinner to 00:17:840 and adding a note here 00:17:440, sounds good with the music
    - 00:25:840 (1) - Replace this whistle for a finish since like you did it here 00:22:640 to keep the consistency
Our Love
  • - 00:29:040 (6,1) - Spacing?
    - 00:43:640 (4) - A new combo here perhaps? Because is the only big combo I've seen
    - 00:53:040 (5) - ^
Andrea's Love
  • -- AR: 9?, It's not a good idea, I'd suggest reduce to one tick
Good luck :)
Lally
3,176 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Lally
MoodyRPG

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hi Lally o/ ohai >u<

General
  1. Nothing wrong here :3
249's Easy
  • -- Looks great \o3o/
My Love
  • -- I feel the slider velocity is too high for being a normal in my opinion i don't think so and for this reason if is too difficoult we have a easy
    - 00:17:440 (1) - My suggestion is move this spinner to 00:17:840 and adding a note here 00:17:440, sounds good with the music i don't wanna make spinner shorter as it is now ;_;
    - 00:25:840 (1) - Replace this whistle for a finish since like you did it here 00:22:640 to keep the consistency good idea
Our Love
  • - 00:29:040 (6,1) - Spacing? yappa but i wanna keep the symmetrie in this pattern
    - 00:43:640 (4) - A new combo here perhaps? Because is the only big combo I've seenyappa
    - 00:53:040 (5) - ^-^
Andrea's Love
  • -- AR: 9?, It's not a good idea, I'd suggest reduce to one tick AR 9 is fine imo
Good luck :)

Ty Moody :3 updated
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,148 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi!

249's Love
hai Byaku =v= hai Saku-nya--lookin sexy in orange, js o3o.

01:08:640 (2,3,4,5) - Make this pattern more curved i guess lol http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/746716 fixed. realized that it looked too bland to play ><.
01:15:840 (1) - Delete NC for consistency, fixed.
01:17:040 (2) - then NC here, and delete NC on next note; This will match your NC patterns earlier in the map ^
01:23:440 (5) - NC and delete NC on next note, i referenced 00:22:640 (1) - ; if so, there are other spots ^
02:43:440 (5) - a bit too soft/silent? Maybe increase the volume to be safe nahh it sounds audible so it shouldn't be that much of a problem.

sweet map ^^
feel free to call me back~
ty for the mod Saku-nya <3333333333.

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Lally
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Lally
ok o3o updated and fixed events
LunarSakuya
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Good luck <3


@Byaku: but the purple looks prettier asdsjkcfnjdskmz
Lally
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OAO waaaah omg ty <3
YTYuyu
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yay~ gogo rank <3.

@Saku-nya: and orange is even sexier fnafjdorfajnf
Andrea
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Omg, it's bubbled! <3
Frostmourne
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Andrea AR8 pls >:(

also offset is late , this needs -8 ~ -12 or something, waiting Nyquill for checking.
Nyquill
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I checked the offset with frostmourne and I think offset -9 is the best.

Also, AR9 is really not that great for

1. 150 bpm, low note density,
2. the kind of mapping style andrea has, which has everything neat and tidy (nice to look at for longer periods of time)

I really think you should use AR8 on andrea's diff to better bring out his mapping style and play better.
Andrea
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Andrea
Okay, change the AR of my difficulty to 8 please.
Lally
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hai hai o3o/ all done ty very much and updated u.u
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brb crying
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nuuuh ;______;)/ baiiiibeeeh dun cri
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LunarSakuya wrote:

brb crying
aww poor Saku-nya //hugs <3
Nyquill
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Nyquill
We're good.

Here's your bubble back! ~
Lally
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Lally
Ty \o3o/
Andrea
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Andrea
Lots of bubbles.
Lally
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Lally
gia' che rimangono tali... mi sto romprendo molto <.< uff... vabbè who cares...
lolcubes
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lolcubes
Yo.

[Andrea]
02:31:428 (3,4) - For gameplay and flow reasons, I would suggest to reverse each of these. Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/763220

02:32:228 (1,2) - After doing the above (if you do it), I would suggest to flip these vertically. Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/763224
I believe the flow improvements are major and is much more nicer to play, especially on doubletime.

02:38:628 (1,2) - I would like you to reverse the order of these two. Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/763227
Another very massive flow improvement.

[Lally+SS]
00:57:428 (7) - I would recommend to remove the clap from this slider. This part didn't have those beats mapped so this one feels out of place.

01:18:628 (6) - This note feels completely out of place because the music here is very insignificant compared to 01:18:828. In my opinion, just move it to that tick, stack it on top of 01:19:028 (1) and change the combo here so it has a new combo. Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/763240

01:43:828 (4) - You can make this slider look better, it is not really symmetrical. ;)

02:06:828 (1) - If you compare it to 02:09:628 (4,5), it's kinda the same thing, but you have a new combo and a jump here and you don't have it there. Maybe introduce consistency and make them more similar? I mean both ways work but eh, up to you.

[My Love]
02:05:028 (1) - End it at 02:07:428? It's kinda too close to the next object for a normal like this.

02:17:828 (1) - Same thing, end at 02:20:228 imo. :p

[249]
Use OD3? Songs like this are extremely easy to acc and OD2 is effortless imo.

Nothing here worth popping for and the changes should be minor, I guess I can rank it once you check these out.
Lally
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Lally
lolcubes

lolcubes wrote:

Yo. Hi o3o/
[Lally+SS]
00:57:428 (7) - I would recommend to remove the clap from this slider. This part didn't have those beats mapped so this one feels out of place. yap removed

01:18:628 (6) - This note feels completely out of place because the music here is very insignificant compared to 01:18:828. In my opinion, just move it to that tick, stack it on top of 01:19:028 (1) and change the combo here so it has a new combo. Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/763240 ok done

01:43:828 (4) - You can make this slider look better, it is not really symmetrical. ;) T___T did my best to do it better

02:06:828 (1) - If you compare it to 02:09:628 (4,5), it's kinda the same thing, but you have a new combo and a jump here and you don't have it there. Maybe introduce consistency and make them more similar? I mean both ways work but eh, up to you. changed 02:06:228 (5,1) - pattern and removed the jumps

[My Love]
02:05:028 (1) - End it at 02:07:428? It's kinda too close to the next object for a normal like this.

02:17:828 (1) - Same thing, end at 02:20:228 imo. :p
i prefer more to follow the vocal, it sounds like an unnatural end where you suggested
[249]
Use OD3? Songs like this are extremely easy to acc and OD2 is effortless imo.
talked with byaku and done for him

Nothing here worth popping for and the changes should be minor, I guess I can rank it once you check these out.

Ty for modding \o3o/ updated this for now waiting for Andrea :3
Andrea
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Andrea
All fixed, thank you cubes.

http://puu.sh/2W6Gc.osu

Sorry for the delay.
Lally
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Lally
\o3o/ updated <3 we're ready
lolcubes
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lolcubes
I guess that's that, then.

And now, I disappear for a while again.

._.
Andrea
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Andrea
30th guest difficulty ranked \o.o/
Loooctav
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Loooctav
Congratulations!!
Lally
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Lally
\o3o/ yay
Irreversible
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Irreversible
this song is true love :3

gz
Lally
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Lally
this can't be true love >3<)//
Kryptogram
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Kryptogram
Congratsss !!
Lolicakey
Lolicakey
Congratz Moelally <3
Irreversible
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Irreversible

Lally wrote:

this can't be true love >3<)//
it is! >w<
BrokenArrow
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BrokenArrow
Yay, another ranked map by my true love <33
Stella
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Stella
aww gratz ~ i love this song so much ♥
Konei
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Konei
Congratz xD
Satellite
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Satellite
congratz~ xD
Tari
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Tari
Congratz!
riffy
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riffy
Good job, congratulations!
Piscis
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Piscis
nightcore :D
congratulations~
Verlaren
Verlaren
Congrats!
_VLaD__old
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Congrats! Lally :3
Roxas
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Roxas
Gratz :)
Celsifer
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Celsifer
can I be a pain..I guess Im not really be one but where's the picture from? I really like it :) great map btw aha one of the first songs I downloaded for the game :D
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