merchat7 wrote:
[Hard]
00:33:606 (2) - Seems like you wanted to stack this with 00:31:632 (1) - Nope, I didn't want to.
00:35:382 (1) - Prefer if finish was add at begin Added.
00:35:777 (2,1) - Listening to music here, sounds like it should be clap at begin and end of these two sliders. ...I'm not sure about this, actually.
00:37:751 (1) - Music is 1/6 so change beat snap to 1/6 and shorten by a tick. I also recommend moving 00:38:540 (2) - 1/8 back and adding another repeat although I find 1/6 snap fits best with vocal here. ...Did my own things.
01:01:435 (1,2) - Consider finish instead at begin Done.
01:03:014 (1,2) - Finish instead of the whistle here if you do above.^
Now for flow:
00:02:126 (5,1) - I prefer if the bass guitar is followed here. It follows vocal right now, but the vocal rhythm is not a very nice rhythm to follow, something like this http://puu.sh/2Bdgc. A simple slider on 00:02:422 (and be sure to stack this slider on 00:02:027 (4) - for a nice effect. ...I seriously don't see anything weird here... What.
00:05:481 (2) - Prefer if you add a note here (stack with previous note) and do a jump on this stack [00:05:382 (1,2,3) - Move further down] Added a note, but I decided to keep the current placement since I see no point to do that.
00:06:172 (4,5,6) - I like this more when it's a repeating slider. It's a feel thing, either you do all repeating slider, or you do all hit circle, but since you did repeating slider here 00:05:580 (3) - I think you should continue to do so and lot of hit circles in a row seems more fitting for Insane. It's better to use hitcircles here, and I don't think it's more fitting on an Insane diff. They're just the same.
00:07:948 (2) - I believe you did a jump on this for the clap sound here, but if you listen to this part in comparison to 00:08:146 (3) - There is no bass drum playing here, so I suggest no jump here and just do jump only on (3). Or a smaller jump (e.g. 1.5x) instead. Reduced, but only to 1.8x, since making it 1.5x will make the pattern broken.
00:07:948 (2,3) - I also recommend changing to default soft-sampleset to use the default soft-clap here. Done.
00:08:146 (3,1,2) - Not too fond of this, seems like you want to follow the bass guitar, but it isn't followed properly since the bass guitar sound is at the end of 00:08:146 (3) - So I recommend changing that to a hit circle and then do this rhythm http://puu.sh/2BdBT Nah, I still prefer my own rhythm. It just feels better that way...
00:20:382 (3,4) - No jump on (3) then a big jump on (4) gives a nicer effect e.g. like this http://puu.sh/2BdIx (adjust rotation to how you wish, I simply try rotating by 45 degrees here, but if you prefer a less rough curve, rotate by less degree and vice versa). Making them a series of jumps is still more preferable for me, so I'll stick to it... for now.
00:22:553 (4) - Try stacking on the repeat of 00:21:369 (2) - instead? ...Seriously? It's too far, you know...
00:44:264 (2) - Feel like there should be a jump over stack. I don't think so.
00:44:066 (1) - I like how it feel more when you stack it with begin of 00:43:277 (1) - ^
00:51:172 (1,2) - Really prefer this to be place further away from 00:50:974 (4) - Done.
00:53:343 (4) - I'm not fond of how the jump feel to this note and it's a pretty big jump, try something like this placement so jump's a bit smaller? http://puu.sh/2Be2i Did it my own way.
01:03:803 (2) - Prefer if this was stacked to begin of 01:04:001 (3) - Done.
01:05:777 (3,4) - Don't really see why there's a jump here, prefer if distant snap was kept from previous note, and to next note. ^
01:22:356 (2) - Reduced spacing intentional? (I prefer higher spacing here) Yes, and I want to keep it that way because that's the best way to put the notes there, IMO.
Where you choose to do the jumps and stacks doesn't always feel right to me. Maybe I'm a bit tired right now so I'm a bit more strict on how the flow is so take the suggestions how you will.
Whistle is barely audible and clap is too loud so I highly recommend doing something about this. No real major problem for me and I try out Collab diff, it looks nice so far.
Have a star, good luck!
Thanks for modding guys (:kajiyatta wrote:
Hinsvar's Hard
Placement
00:40:119(3) curved to follow the next slider? Done.
00:47:224(1) just suggestion, changed direction like this? maybe more playable ^
Rhythm
00:35:382 unsnapped green line Snapped.
00:44:658(3,4) to follow the vocal, maybe reverse better. Nope, I'm following how the music goes here.
overall fine but I suppose a bit work needed. good luck and star~
Diff
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