Otome Shintou - Mousou Koukan Nikki (TV Size)‬ · forum‬

Natsu

8,088 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 12 years ago

Redownload vicho gift me a better video o3o

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 12 years ago

Changed everything according to Dekaane and Colin's mods; thanks all!

Btw, the BG's size is 953 KB... That's too large, you know. But then again, the aspect ratio of the BG (4:3) is different with the video (16:9), so I recommend to find another BG with a 16:9 ratio ._.

I'll give my diff once you do something about this, since I don't want to re-DL this map dozens of times...

I'll place the latest version of my diff so I won't forget to swap it with the one updated with new stuff though, but DON'T update with this: http://puu.sh/2B9eo

Last edited by Hinsvar 12 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 12 years ago

DakeDekaane wrote:
Hi~
Well, as I said, gonna give a mod here ;3

[General]
Clean~

[Xinely's Easy]
Nothing big to say here, it's a nice Easy ;3 >w<
No spinner here? Let's give some variety to the scores D; You can replace the last slider to put one :3 aa the last, it will be fast spin and hard for newbie imo. so i prefer use slider ~
00:23:145 (1) - Fix the hitsounds here :p (whistle in the reverse and claps in the start/end) omg, fixed
00:37:751 (2) - As I'll explain in Hard/Insane, the gap in 00:35:382 - 00:39:330 - should be snapped in 1/3, actually this slider sounds off due to this, you can make this instead.
changed with my own
01:10:119 (1) - You could delete this circle, with the previous slider following vocals, this circle may come in too soon as it is following the drums. You can do this or put a circle in 01:09:329 (3) instead a slider. done

Colin Hou wrote:
[Easy]
01:06:172 (4) - consistency with 01:09:329 (3)? changed in01:09:329 (3)

thanks 4 mod all~ :3

update nyan ~

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Mousou Koukan Nikki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 64593
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13271
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mousou Koukan Nikki (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:もうそう★こうかんにっき (TV Size)
Artist:Otome Shintou
ArtistUnicode:乙女新党
Creator:Natsu
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:GJ-Bu
Tags:opening xinely hinsvar DakeDekaane Gero
BeatmapID:237787
BeatmapSetID:83504

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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merchat7

1,676 posts

Joined December 2010

merchat7 12 years ago

M4M

[General]

- soft-clap sounds too loud and whistle is barely audible. I highly recommend lowering the volume of the custom clap and increasing the timing point volume. However, this may make the finish too loud so a easier way to fix this is to add a louder custom whistle (e.g. amplify the default whistle a bit). For reference, here's the default soft-whistle. http://puu.sh/2BchY

[Easy]

00:24:330 (2,3) - Pretty hard to catch (3) due to the red > white tick transition. I would prefer adding a repeat to (2) or do a short slider starting on 00:25:317.
00:35:382 (1) - Good place for finish (begin)
00:51:961 (3) - I hear cymbal here so I prefer finish (with a timing point to lower the volume if you wish).
01:06:172 (4) - Prefer to see this slider extend by 1/2 and change the clap at end to whistle.
01:09:329 (3) - Adding a repeat makes 01:10:119 (1) - easier to catch and follows the guitar
01:15:645 (3,1) - Same as 00:24:330.
Some other places I feel finish fits
00:56:698 (4) - at end
01:01:435 (1,2,3) - On (1.2), begin and end of (3). I also prefer no clap on the repeat here.
01:26:698 (2,3,4) - Finish on all begins. I definitely recommend putting on (4) as there's a clear cymbal sound there.

Looks good, but notice some red tick > a hit circle on white tick stuff which is not easy to catch at this approach rate, I highly recommend to change. Also notice some additional places where finish fits.

[Normal]

00:02:817 (4) - Prefer if you add a repeat, all the notes here follow the bass guitar so far, so it sounds like something is missing when you don't have something on 00:03:211.
00:11:698 (1,2) - I prefer if you move this a bit more up to be honest, feel too close to the previous note.
00:20:382 (3,5) - To make the rhythm a bit more interesting, consider variating by doing 1/2 repeating slider here.
00:21:172 (4) - Whistle on the stanza here sound nice, so I feel you should put whistle at begin
00:24:330 (2,3) - I prefer if lyric is followed here, e.g. this rhythm http://puu.sh/2Bcyk.
00:35:382 (1) - Prefer finish at begin and prefer no whistle at end
00:38:442 (4) - There's no clear sound on the blue tick, but on the white tick, I can hear a bell sound, a drum sound, etc. so I prefer if you start this slider there instead.
00:39:330 (1) - Feel like finish should be here
00:40:908 (4) - Whistle at begin
00:42:487 (1) - ^
00:44:066 (4) - Whistle on repeat
00:59:856 (3) - Whistle at begin and remove from begin of 01:00:645 (4). The music here has a pretty clear focus on stanza (listen to vocal)
01:03:014 (4,5) - I prefer if finish was used rather than clap.
01:07:751 (4) - Whistle here
01:08:935 (6) - Whistle at end
01:13:277 (5) - You always put whistle only on the stanza so I don't see why you decide to put it on here.
01:15:645 (2,3) - Extend slider by 1/2 or hit circle, move 1/2 back to be on red tick
01:16:632 (4,5,6) - And if you want to do something like this, the rhythm should be like this http://puu.sh/2BcKB
01:26:698 (1) - Consider finish at begin

Trying to keep whistle logic a bit more consistent here and mention the parts where I find the rhythm was weird. Placement seems good to me.

[Hard]

00:33:606 (2) - Seems like you wanted to stack this with 00:31:632 (1) -
00:35:382 (1) - Prefer if finish was add at begin
00:35:777 (2,1) - Listening to music here, sounds like it should be clap at begin and end of these two sliders.
00:37:751 (1) - Music is 1/6 so change beat snap to 1/6 and shorten by a tick. I also recommend moving 00:38:540 (2) - 1/8 back and adding another repeat although I find 1/6 snap fits best with vocal here.
01:01:435 (1,2) - Consider finish instead at begin
01:03:014 (1,2) - Finish instead of the whistle here if you do above.
Now for flow:
00:02:126 (5,1) - I prefer if the bass guitar is followed here. It follows vocal right now, but the vocal rhythm is not a very nice rhythm to follow, something like this http://puu.sh/2Bdgc. A simple slider on 00:02:422 (and be sure to stack this slider on 00:02:027 (4) - for a nice effect.
00:05:481 (2) - Prefer if you add a note here (stack with previous note) and do a jump on this stack [00:05:382 (1,2,3) - Move further down]
00:06:172 (4,5,6) - I like this more when it's a repeating slider. It's a feel thing, either you do all repeating slider, or you do all hit circle, but since you did repeating slider here 00:05:580 (3) - I think you should continue to do so and lot of hit circles in a row seems more fitting for Insane.
00:07:948 (2) - I believe you did a jump on this for the clap sound here, but if you listen to this part in comparison to 00:08:146 (3) - There is no bass drum playing here, so I suggest no jump here and just do jump only on (3). Or a smaller jump (e.g. 1.5x) instead.
00:07:948 (2,3) - I also recommend changing to default soft-sampleset to use the default soft-clap here.
00:08:146 (3,1,2) - Not too fond of this, seems like you want to follow the bass guitar, but it isn't followed properly since the bass guitar sound is at the end of 00:08:146 (3) - So I recommend changing that to a hit circle and then do this rhythm http://puu.sh/2BdBT
00:20:382 (3,4) - No jump on (3) then a big jump on (4) gives a nicer effect e.g. like this http://puu.sh/2BdIx (adjust rotation to how you wish, I simply try rotating by 45 degrees here, but if you prefer a less rough curve, rotate by less degree and vice versa).
00:22:553 (4) - Try stacking on the repeat of 00:21:369 (2) - instead?
00:44:264 (2) - Feel like there should be a jump over stack.
00:44:066 (1) - I like how it feel more when you stack it with begin of 00:43:277 (1) -
00:51:172 (1,2) - Really prefer this to be place further away from 00:50:974 (4) -
00:53:343 (4) - I'm not fond of how the jump feel to this note and it's a pretty big jump, try something like this placement so jump's a bit smaller? http://puu.sh/2Be2i
01:03:803 (2) - Prefer if this was stacked to begin of 01:04:001 (3) -
01:05:777 (3,4) - Don't really see why there's a jump here, prefer if distant snap was kept from previous note, and to next note.
01:22:356 (2) - Reduced spacing intentional? (I prefer higher spacing here)

Where you choose to do the jumps and stacks doesn't always feel right to me. Maybe I'm a bit tired right now so I'm a bit more strict on how the flow is so take the suggestions how you will.

[Insane]

00:06:764 (1) - Finish at end
00:22:751 (1) - Wanted to see a jump here. If you do jump, be sure to move 00:23:145 (2) - to the middle of (1,3) or to the place where Prev: = Next:
00:26:303 (2,3) - Prefer slider first, then hit circle
00:38:014 (2,3) - Prefer if spacing was more equal, I recommend increasing the spacing on (2), try placing it more up and a bit more to the left.
00:51:961 (3) - Finish at begin
01:11:698 (1) - I think it's nicer if you change to hit circles and do a jump pattern here, try something like this http://puu.sh/2BerX

Plays nicely, I don't have much to mention. Notice some minor stuff, but decide not to mention them since they are based of my preference and I don't think it'll improve the beatmap by that much. I'm not too fond of the finish logic here. Since I already mod the finish on the guest diffs several time, check out how the finish was done in the other diff + my suggestions and apply it to this if you wish.

Whistle is barely audible and clap is too loud so I highly recommend doing something about this. No real major problem for me and I try out Collab diff, it looks nice so far.

Have a star, good luck!

Natsu

8,088 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 12 years ago

Hinsvar wrote:
Changed everything according to Dekaane and Colin's mods; thanks all!

Btw, the BG's size is 953 KB... That's too large, you know. But then again, the aspect ratio of the BG (4:3) is different with the video (16:9), so I recommend to find another BG with a 16:9 ratio ._. i know will change soon orz ok is 543 kb and is 16:9 since i want a hq bg but is done now so is the last change about stuff also i add the whistle who modder suggest me o3o

Last edited by Natsu 12 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

Natsu

8,088 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 12 years ago

merchat7 wrote:
M4M

[General]

- soft-clap sounds too loud and whistle is barely audible. I highly recommend lowering the volume of the custom clap and increasing the timing point volume. However, this may make the finish too loud so a easier way to fix this is to add a louder custom whistle (e.g. amplify the default whistle a bit). For reference, here's the default soft-whistle. http://puu.sh/2BchY yup added

[Insane]

00:06:764 (1) - Finish at end ok
00:22:751 (1) - Wanted to see a jump here. If you do jump, be sure to move 00:23:145 (2) - to the middle of (1,3) or to the place where Prev: = Next: done is a mini jump but done
00:26:303 (2,3) - Prefer slider first, then hit circle i keep this in my way i feel it good
00:38:014 (2,3) - Prefer if spacing was more equal, I recommend increasing the spacing on (2), try placing it more up and a bit more to the left. done
00:51:961 (3) - Finish at begin ok
01:11:698 (1) - I think it's nicer if you change to hit circles and do a jump pattern here, try something like this http://puu.sh/2BerX did somethink symilar there

Plays nicely, I don't have much to mention. Notice some minor stuff, but decide not to mention them since they are based of my preference and I don't think it'll improve the beatmap by that much. I'm not too fond of the finish logic here. Since I already mod the finish on the guest diffs several time, check out how the finish was done in the other diff + my suggestions and apply it to this if you wish.

Whistle is barely audible and clap is too loud so I highly recommend doing something about this. No real major problem for me and I try out Collab diff, it looks nice so far. kk

Have a star, good luck!

thanks for star and mod o3o

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 12 years ago

M4M from your queue
General
almost suggetions
Xinely's Easy
Placement
00:18:014(3) to make a blanket is nice

SPOILER

00:44:856(1) the flow seems to last rotational so I suppose you can put this to keep them

SPOILER

01:24:329(1) just weird to change the spacing without change of song or vocal. maybe put a note at 01:24:132 on the next slider's head?
Rhythm
00:11:699 unnecessary green line
00:10:910^
01:07:151(1) the slider acrosses the long white line and hears a bit weird. e.g.)

SPOILER

Daakane's Normal
Placement
00:16:435(4) NC here to follow your pattern?
01:07:751(4)^
01:16:435(3,4,) I just feel better if you follow the vocal more, but you'll think a bit overmapped on Nomral?

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:04:593(2,3) try this, maybe it follows the song well

SPOILER

01:28:277(1) a bit short on Nomral diff imo
Hit Sonud
01:03:014(4.5) player will excpect to hear finish at head since you added prvious notes with it.
01:11:698(3) add whistle at head

Hinsvar's Hard
Placement
00:40:119(3) curved to follow the next slider?

SPOILER

00:47:224(1) just suggestion, changed direction like this? maybe more playable

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:35:382 unsnapped green line
00:44:658(3,4) to follow the vocal, maybe reverse better.

SPOILER

Insane
Placement
00:12:882(1,2) swap NC better to follow the music, and sliders at 00:12:882 and 00:14:461 is same direction, I don't feel it's nice. so put previous note away better. e.g.)

SPOILER

00:51:961(3,1) swap NC better
Rhythm
00:10:811 unnecessary green line
00:11:699 ^
Hit Sonud
00:13:277(2) I'll expect a finish not whistle at head
01:04:593 (1) finish at head better since this part is a beginning of KIAI
01:17:224(3) whistle→finish

overall fine but I suppose a bit work needed. good luck and star~

Natsu

8,088 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 12 years ago

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M from your queue
General
almost suggetions
Insane
Placement
00:12:882(1,2) swap NC better to follow the music, and sliders at 00:12:882 and 00:14:461 is same direction, I don't feel it's nice. so put previous note away better. e.g.)
SPOILER
i no change this since the actual rhythm is the way i feel the music in that part thats why keep it
00:51:961(3,1) swap NC better yeah you right changed previous combo too
Rhythm
00:10:811 unnecessary green line removed
00:11:699 ^ ^
Hit Sonud
00:13:277(2) I'll expect a finish not whistle at head yeah why not fit better
01:04:593 (1) finish at head better since this part is a beginning of KIAI :o was a finish here anyways added
01:17:224(3) whistle→finish done

overall fine but I suppose a bit work needed. good luck and star~

thanks for mod

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 12 years ago

merchat7

merchat7 wrote:
M4M

[Normal]

00:02:817 (4) - Prefer if you add a repeat, all the notes here follow the bass guitar so far, so it sounds like something is missing when you don't have something on 00:03:211. /*Ok
00:11:698 (1,2) - I prefer if you move this a bit more up to be honest, feel too close to the previous note. /*Not really, there's a long gap in time
00:20:382 (3,5) - To make the rhythm a bit more interesting, consider variating by doing 1/2 repeating slider here. /*Made something here.
00:21:172 (4) - Whistle on the stanza here sound nice, so I feel you should put whistle at begin /*Ok
00:24:330 (2,3) - I prefer if lyric is followed here, e.g. this rhythm http://puu.sh/2Bcyk. /*Used the suggeste (2) with a repeat.
00:35:382 (1) - Prefer finish at begin and prefer no whistle at end /*It'd be too loud for the piano imo
00:38:442 (4) - There's no clear sound on the blue tick, but on the white tick, I can hear a bell sound, a drum sound, etc. so I prefer if you start this slider there instead. /*There are the vocals, but put in the white tick.
00:39:330 (1) - Feel like finish should be here /*Oops.
00:40:908 (4) - Whistle at begin /*Ok
00:42:487 (1) - ^ /*Ok
00:44:066 (4) - Whistle on repeat /*Ok
00:59:856 (3) - Whistle at begin and remove from begin of 01:00:645 (4). The music here has a pretty clear focus on stanza (listen to vocal) /*Ok
01:03:014 (4,5) - I prefer if finish was used rather than clap. /*Used only in 1st and 3rd beat, the whole as finish would be too loud.
01:07:751 (4) - Whistle here /*Ok
01:08:935 (6) - Whistle at end /*Ok
01:13:277 (5) - You always put whistle only on the stanza so I don't see why you decide to put it on here. /*Oops.
01:15:645 (2,3) - Extend slider by 1/2 or hit circle, move 1/2 back to be on red tick /*Made something similar as in 00:24:330
01:16:632 (4,5,6) - And if you want to do something like this, the rhythm should be like this http://puu.sh/2BcKB /*^
01:26:698 (1) - Consider finish at begin /*Ok

Trying to keep whistle logic a bit more consistent here and mention the parts where I find the rhythm was weird. Placement seems good to me.

Have a star, good luck!

kajiyatta

kajiyatta wrote:
Daakane's Normal
orz
Placement
00:16:435(4) NC here to follow your pattern? /*Ok
01:07:751(4)^ /*Ok
01:16:435(3,4,) I just feel better if you follow the vocal more, but you'll think a bit overmapped on Nomral? /*Not overmapped, it's only a 1/2 pattern, but made something else to follow vocals here.
SPOILER

Rhythm
00:04:593(2,3) try this, maybe it follows the song well /*Not really, 00:05:185 (3) feels better being hit than being in a slider's end, as I did in 00:02:027 (3)
SPOILER
01:28:277(1) a bit short on Nomral diff imo /*All diffs are finishing at the same time, I'll leave it for the sake of consistency
Hit Sonud
01:03:014(4.5) player will excpect to hear finish at head since you added prvious notes with it. /*Added some, I think people will suggest more finishes here, but I'll leave only in 1st and 3rd beat for now.
01:11:698(3) add whistle at head /*I'm putting whistles in each downbeat, putting one in a 3rd beat sounds a bit odd.

Thanks both for modding :3

Update here: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

Hinsvar

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3,826 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 12 years ago

merchat7 wrote:
[Hard]

00:33:606 (2) - Seems like you wanted to stack this with 00:31:632 (1) - Nope, I didn't want to.
00:35:382 (1) - Prefer if finish was add at begin Added.
00:35:777 (2,1) - Listening to music here, sounds like it should be clap at begin and end of these two sliders. ...I'm not sure about this, actually.
00:37:751 (1) - Music is 1/6 so change beat snap to 1/6 and shorten by a tick. I also recommend moving 00:38:540 (2) - 1/8 back and adding another repeat although I find 1/6 snap fits best with vocal here. ...Did my own things.
01:01:435 (1,2) - Consider finish instead at begin Done.
01:03:014 (1,2) - Finish instead of the whistle here if you do above.^
Now for flow:
00:02:126 (5,1) - I prefer if the bass guitar is followed here. It follows vocal right now, but the vocal rhythm is not a very nice rhythm to follow, something like this http://puu.sh/2Bdgc. A simple slider on 00:02:422 (and be sure to stack this slider on 00:02:027 (4) - for a nice effect. ...I seriously don't see anything weird here... What.
00:05:481 (2) - Prefer if you add a note here (stack with previous note) and do a jump on this stack [00:05:382 (1,2,3) - Move further down] Added a note, but I decided to keep the current placement since I see no point to do that.
00:06:172 (4,5,6) - I like this more when it's a repeating slider. It's a feel thing, either you do all repeating slider, or you do all hit circle, but since you did repeating slider here 00:05:580 (3) - I think you should continue to do so and lot of hit circles in a row seems more fitting for Insane. It's better to use hitcircles here, and I don't think it's more fitting on an Insane diff. They're just the same.
00:07:948 (2) - I believe you did a jump on this for the clap sound here, but if you listen to this part in comparison to 00:08:146 (3) - There is no bass drum playing here, so I suggest no jump here and just do jump only on (3). Or a smaller jump (e.g. 1.5x) instead. Reduced, but only to 1.8x, since making it 1.5x will make the pattern broken.
00:07:948 (2,3) - I also recommend changing to default soft-sampleset to use the default soft-clap here. Done.
00:08:146 (3,1,2) - Not too fond of this, seems like you want to follow the bass guitar, but it isn't followed properly since the bass guitar sound is at the end of 00:08:146 (3) - So I recommend changing that to a hit circle and then do this rhythm http://puu.sh/2BdBT Nah, I still prefer my own rhythm. It just feels better that way...
00:20:382 (3,4) - No jump on (3) then a big jump on (4) gives a nicer effect e.g. like this http://puu.sh/2BdIx (adjust rotation to how you wish, I simply try rotating by 45 degrees here, but if you prefer a less rough curve, rotate by less degree and vice versa). Making them a series of jumps is still more preferable for me, so I'll stick to it... for now.
00:22:553 (4) - Try stacking on the repeat of 00:21:369 (2) - instead? ...Seriously? It's too far, you know...
00:44:264 (2) - Feel like there should be a jump over stack. I don't think so.
00:44:066 (1) - I like how it feel more when you stack it with begin of 00:43:277 (1) - ^
00:51:172 (1,2) - Really prefer this to be place further away from 00:50:974 (4) - Done.
00:53:343 (4) - I'm not fond of how the jump feel to this note and it's a pretty big jump, try something like this placement so jump's a bit smaller? http://puu.sh/2Be2i Did it my own way.
01:03:803 (2) - Prefer if this was stacked to begin of 01:04:001 (3) - Done.
01:05:777 (3,4) - Don't really see why there's a jump here, prefer if distant snap was kept from previous note, and to next note. ^
01:22:356 (2) - Reduced spacing intentional? (I prefer higher spacing here) Yes, and I want to keep it that way because that's the best way to put the notes there, IMO.

Where you choose to do the jumps and stacks doesn't always feel right to me. Maybe I'm a bit tired right now so I'm a bit more strict on how the flow is so take the suggestions how you will.

Whistle is barely audible and clap is too loud so I highly recommend doing something about this. No real major problem for me and I try out Collab diff, it looks nice so far.

Have a star, good luck!

kajiyatta wrote:
Hinsvar's Hard
Placement
00:40:119(3) curved to follow the next slider? Done.
SPOILER
00:47:224(1) just suggestion, changed direction like this? maybe more playable ^
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:35:382 unsnapped green line Snapped.
00:44:658(3,4) to follow the vocal, maybe reverse better. Nope, I'm following how the music goes here.
SPOILER
overall fine but I suppose a bit work needed. good luck and star~

Thanks for modding guys (:

Diff

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BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 12 years ago

Hi, M4M!

Easy + Normal

Nothing to say about rankability wise. Only its very bland mapped and not many curves.

Hard

Spacing is not really fitting with the jumps from one combo end to a new combo, consider to make normal spacing, but it's your choice.

00:03:014 (1) - Remove NC
00:06:172 (4,5,6) - Spacing isnt consistent
00:17:224 (1) - Remove NC
00:17:619 (2,1) - This spacing is too random to fit the song one bit, you shouldnt have a jump here
00:35:382 (1,2) - Unrankable
00:43:277 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This circle pattern is a little weird, you should try improving it with a slider between them
01:03:014 (1) - Remove NC
01:28:277 (1) - ^

Insane

Too many spacing mistakes, thats just random and not normal jumps anymore
Needs whole recomboing, its totally messed up. You first have it right but then you mixed it
Beginning is too overmapped, because main thing you hear is them talking and not singing or much music.

00:12:882 (1,2) - Reverse NC
00:40:908 (5,1) - ^
00:42:487 (5,1) - ^
00:44:066 (6,1) - ^
00:45:645 (5,1) - ^
and so on

00:38:540 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:119 (1) - ^
01:02:816 (1,2,3,1) - 3 to 1 is too big compaired to the other one
01:26:698 - Try this, fits much better and isnt too overmapped
(01:26:501 - Circle 01:26:599 - Circle 01:26:698 - 1/1 Slider with reserve and 01:27:882 - Circle)

Natsu

8,088 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 12 years ago

BounceBabe wrote:
Hi, M4M!

Insane[/b]

Too many spacing mistakes, thats just random and not normal jumps anymore is not random in mym point of view is like i feel this song also alot of test players enjoy it orz
Needs whole recomboing, its totally messed up. You first have it right but then you mixed it I know something happen when i add the second timing line
Beginning is too overmapped, because main thing you hear is them talking and not singing or much music. gonna be cool if you can point they

00:12:882 (1,2) - Reverse NC
00:40:908 (5,1) - ^
00:42:487 (5,1) - ^
00:44:066 (6,1) - ^
00:45:645 (5,1) - ^
and so on

00:38:540 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:119 (1) - ^
i remake all the combos orz
01:02:816 (1,2,3,1) - 3 to 1 is too big compaired to the other one the sound is stronger in 3º thats why i add more distance also look nice and is ok when you play it
01:26:698 - Try this, fits much better and isnt too overmapped
(01:26:501 - Circle 01:26:599 - Circle 01:26:698 - 1/1 Slider with reserve and 01:27:882 - Circle)

mmm i try to keep the end of the song in my way f another modder say this i will do thanks for mod i will mod your soon o3o

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 12 years ago

BounceBabe wrote:
Hard

Spacing is not really fitting with the jumps from one combo end to a new combo, consider to make normal spacing, but it's your choice.

00:03:014 (1) - Remove NC The spacing changes on the combo.
00:06:172 (4,5,6) - Spacing isnt consistent Oops. Fixed.
00:17:224 (1) - Remove NC Done.
00:17:619 (2,1) - This spacing is too random to fit the song one bit, you shouldnt have a jump here ...It clearly fits, IMO.
00:35:382 (1,2) - Unrankable ...How did that happen? Fixed.
00:43:277 (1) - Remove NC The spacing changes on the combo, same as 00:03:014 (1).
00:50:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This circle pattern is a little weird, you should try improving it with a slider between them I don't think so. The pattern here fits the song, IMO.
01:03:014 (1) - Remove NC I'm following the stanza here.
01:28:277 (1) - ^ ^

Thanks for modding

wa

osu file format v12

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Mythiax

637 posts

Joined August 2012

Mythiax 12 years ago

Hi. oh ogd i hate my mods.

poor and horrible mod here, don't give me kudosu for this.

[General]
Audio Lead in is too short imo. Increase it to 1500 ms.

[Xinely's Easy]
01:15:645 (3) - Ctrl + J Improves flow.

[DekaDeakaane's Normal]
00:11:698 (1,2) - This notes looks too random imo. You could perfectly delete them and place a spinner that start at 00:11:106 - and finish at 00:12:882 -
^ If you do this, Ctrl + H to 00:13:277 (1) - so it won't start too far from the center.
01:15:645 (2) - slider touching the hp bar. fix it.

Nothing in Hard.

[Insane]
00:21:172 (1,2,3,4) - Weird pattern.
Try this maybe.

The code:

366,192,21172,6,0,P|415:169|416:108,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,52,21567,2,0,L|216:92,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,21961,2,0,P|166:241|228:242,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,312,22356,2,0,L|388:268,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Gonna drop a star ~~so i won't feel so bad for my horrible mod~~ to this mapset owo

gl natsu bye~

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Kotone 12 years ago

M4m from your queue
[General]

Zeroarg wrote:
Audio Lead in is too short imo. Increase it to 1500 ms.

I agree with this.

[Xinely's Easy]

00:23:145 (1) - A clap is missing at start point.I guess you just forgot to add it...?
01:04:198 (4) - little spacing.

[Dekaane's Normal]

00:18:211 - It's a bit strange to make a 2.5 beat(?) space here.And it may confuse new players:they don't know when should they hit the next note.Please put something in there or extend the slider.
01:09:527 (4) - Same as above.

[Hinsvar's Hard]

Consider the hitsound suggestion which i write in Insane
The difficult is pretty nice:clean note placing,good flow and easy to read.It's a good example of hard.
But be careful of new combo.Some of the combo are short(someof them have only 2 note) ,and it doesn't matter anything if you remove it.So try to reduce them yourself.

[Insane]

Hitsound suggestion
00:07:751 (5,6) - Could you hear the double clap here?
I just wonder why you dont add clap on them-.
There are some double clap after this too:00:09:527 (4,6) - ,00:15:843 (4,5) - 00:20:580 (6,7) - etc.
I find a clap to use on those place,use it if you want: http://puu.sh/2ClKY
I pefer to raise up hitsounds volume.That's a bit low now.
00:05:580 (2,4,6,8,10,12,13) - As the drum of music,add clap of them.
00:06:665 (13,1) - I can hear clearly that there is no sound on 00:06:764.To fit the music,you may change like this: http://puu.sh/2CkaK
00:10:514 - The steam should be start at here.Use the 50%playback rate,we can hear that the drum sound on there.
00:12:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - *nazi*Stack correctly
00:21:961 (3,4) - I find that change their place each other flow better
00:43:277 (4,5,1,2) - *nazi*Stack correctly
00:50:579 (2) - To follow the music,add a clap here.
00:53:540 (1) - (end point)If you listen the music careful,you will find that there is no clap sound.
00:55:908 (3) - (end point)Same as above.
00:57:093 (2) - (start point)Same as above.
00:58:277 (1,2) - Since I hear there is a finish sound on (1),it's better to add a finish to instead clap on (1) and add a clap on(2) imo.
01:06:961 (3) - I cant find any reason to add a finish here orz.The finish is just noisy here.Remove it?
01:08:540 (1) - Same as above.And reove the Newcombo too.The combo is short and unmeaning.
01:23:540 (1,2) - Too close.It will confuse the players.Make the spacing longer please.
01:25:119 (1) - Remove the new combo?6 combo isnt so long.

good luck~

Alumetorz

408 posts

Joined October 2011

Alumetorz 12 years ago

yo, from your M4M queue o/

[General]

Ok

[Xinely's Easy]

00:23:145 (1) - Clap
00:35:382 (1) - You could try replacing this slider with a spinner.
00:37:751 (2) - I'd 1/3 that.
01:21:172 (3,4) - How about replacing this with something like this: http://puu.sh/2Cm5i sounds better imo.

[Dekaane's Normal]

00:36:567 (2) - Whistle Slider?
00:38:540 (4) - This sounds off. I think it's on a 1/6 beat. Listen closely.
01:04:198 (6) - Remove Circle?

[Hinsvar's Hard]

OD -1?
00:05:382 (1,2,3) - Remove (1).
00:59:856 (1) - It's better if this is reversed a second time too imo.
~~01:17:224 (1) - This circle is right on her eye LOL.~~
01:18:606 (4,1) - I think the spacing is too big.

[Insane]

00:00:645 (1) to 00:05:185 (8) - Remove all claps (Better without imo, and other diffs aren't clapped there either)
00:05:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Try making this stream perfectly shaped. (Make a curvy slider and convert it to a stream)
00:10:810 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Rotate this so the stream follows the previous slider's curve, if you know what I mean.
00:12:882 (1) - Either remove this NC or add 01:04:198 (4) NC there, since it's the same. I don't recommend latter.
00:36:435 (1) - I'd replace this with two circles, but it's good either way.
00:50:579 (2,3,4,5) - Shape this more like a curve.
01:23:540 (1,2) - Space properly. It's too close...

Well that's it...
I hope I was of any help.

Good Luck with your beatmap!

Last edited by Alumetorz 12 years ago, edited 2 times in total.

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 12 years ago

Zeroarg

Zeroarg wrote:
[DekaDeakaane's Normal]
orz
00:11:698 (1,2) - This notes looks too random imo. You could perfectly delete them and place a spinner that start at 00:11:106 - and finish at 00:12:882 -
^ If you do this, Ctrl + H to 00:13:277 (1) - so it won't start too far from the center. /*That circles were for bass, changed in something else that follows the drums.
01:15:645 (2) - slider touching the hp bar. fix it. /*Fixed, I think.

Kotone

Kotone wrote:
[Dekaane's Normal]
00:18:211 - It's a bit strange to make a 2.5 beat(?) space here.And it may confuse new players:they don't know when should they hit the next note.Please put something in there or extend the slider. /*I don't think so, I think 2.5 beats is enough to notice the approach circle and being able to react and know when to hit.
01:09:527 (4) - Same as above. /*^

Alumetor

Alumetor wrote:
[Dekaane's Normal]
00:36:567 (2) - Whistle Slider? /*Oops, retired the whistle from the body in the previous slider.
00:38:540 (4) - This sounds off. I think it's on a 1/6 beat. Listen closely. /*I had that before but well, going back to it, done.
01:04:198 (6) - Remove Circle? /*There's a noticeable beat in the music, removing it would sound weird imo.
Well that's it...
I hope I was of any help.

Good Luck with your beatmap!

Thanks for mod ;3

My update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

Natsu

8,088 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 12 years ago

Zeroarg

Zeroarg wrote:
Hi. oh ogd i hate my mods.

[General]
Audio Lead in is too short imo. Increase it to 1500 ms. gonna keep it for now gonna se what the other modders say about this

[Insane]
00:21:172 (1,2,3,4) - Weird pattern. i keep this in my way for now

Gonna drop a star ~~so i won't feel so bad for my horrible mod~~ to this mapset owo

gl natsu bye~

thanks for mod and start also i gift you kudos cuz dekanne change something in your mod

Kotone

Kotone wrote:
M4m from your queue
[General]
Zeroarg wrote:
Audio Lead in is too short imo. Increase it to 1500 ms.
I agree with this.
okay

[Insane]
Hitsound suggestion]00:07:751 (5,6) - Could you hear the double clap here?
I just wonder why you dont add clap on them-.
There are some double clap after this too:00:09:527 (4,6) - ,00:15:843 (4,5) - 00:20:580 (6,7) - etc.
I find a clap to use on those place,use it if you want: http://puu.sh/2ClKY
I pefer to raise up hitsounds volume.That's a bit low now.
00:05:580 (2,4,6,8,10,12,13) - As the drum of music,add clap of them.
00:06:665 (13,1) - I can hear clearly that there is no sound on 00:06:764.To fit the music,you may change like this: http://puu.sh/2CkaK
00:10:514 - The steam should be start at here.Use the 50%playback rate,we can hear that the drum sound on there.
00:12:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - *nazi*Stack correctly
00:21:961 (3,4) - I find that change their place each other flow better
00:43:277 (4,5,1,2) - *nazi*Stack correctly
00:50:579 (2) - To follow the music,add a clap here.
00:53:540 (1) - (end point)If you listen the music careful,you will find that there is no clap sound.
00:55:908 (3) - (end point)Same as above.
00:57:093 (2) - (start point)Same as above.
00:58:277 (1,2) - Since I hear there is a finish sound on (1),it's better to add a finish to instead clap on (1) and add a clap on(2) imo.
01:06:961 (3) - I cant find any reason to add a finish here orz.The finish is just noisy here.Remove it?
01:08:540 (1) - Same as above.And reove the Newcombo too.The combo is short and unmeaning.
01:23:540 (1,2) - Too close.It will confuse the players.Make the spacing longer please.
01:25:119 (1) - Remove the new combo?6 combo isnt so long.
good luck~

all the most fixed

Alumetor

Alumetor wrote:
yo, from your M4M queue o/

[General]
Ok
[Insane]
00:00:645 (1) to 00:05:185 (8) - Remove all claps (Better without imo, and other diffs aren't clapped there either) they fit for me
00:05:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Try making this stream perfectly shaped. (Make a curvy slider and convert it to a stream) done
00:10:810 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Rotate this so the stream follows the previous slider's curve, if you know what I mean. keep in my way
00:12:882 (1) - Either remove this NC or add 01:04:198 (4) NC there, since it's the same. I don't recommend latter. okay
00:36:435 (1) - I'd replace this with two circles, but it's good either way. keep it slider have a break after stream
00:50:579 (2,3,4,5) - Shape this more like a curve. done
01:23:540 (1,2) - Space properly. It's too close...
done

Well that's it...
I hope I was of any help.

Good Luck with your beatmap!

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 12 years ago

fix all in kotone ~
and refuse all in other , sorry, i prefer mine >_<

nyan~

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Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 12 years ago

Kotone wrote:
[Hinsvar's Hard]
Consider the hitsound suggestion which i write in Insane Increased the volume on some parts.
The difficult is pretty nice:clean note placing,good flow and easy to read.It's a good example of hard. Good to hear that~
But be careful of new combo.Some of the combo are short(someof them have only 2 note) ,and it doesn't matter anything if you remove it.So try to reduce them yourself. They're mostly there to indicate spacing changes, but I'll look at them later.

Alumetor wrote:
[Hinsvar's Hard]
OD -1? OD5 is too easy, seriously.
00:05:382 (1,2,3) - Remove (1). Why should I---
00:59:856 (1) - It's better if this is reversed a second time too imo. I don't want to use that too much lol
~~01:17:224 (1) - This circle is right on her eye LOL.~~ Oh you.
01:18:606 (4,1) - I think the spacing is too big. Uh idk. I'll keep this for now, I suppose.

Thanks for modding everyone

Stuff

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Flower

1,728 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 12 years ago

Hi~ m4m~

[General]
vocal from 00:13:080 - to 00:32:224 - has a 1/2 off with drum so I don't think mapping rigidly on 2,4-downbeats is the best choice.
From 00:13:080 - to 00:37:751 - I suggest using claps on white lines instead which is also a track in the song. Otherwise you can follow guitar (suggested by wcx) or vocal.

[Easy]
00:13:080 - to 00:32:224 - Maybe you should follow vocal instead... not sure. Current rhythm is quite confusing to players. Suggest remap.
00:54:724 (1) - DS inconsistency

[Normal]
00:13:080 - to 00:32:224 - same as Easy

[Hard]
00:11:698 (1,2,3) - what does this pattern mean...? I think it's overmapping. delete 2 and 3.
00:13:277 (1) - I suggest change to 1/2 sliders instead due to the 1/2 off beat vocal.

[Insane]
I suggest remapping this diff, at least the note placement from 00:33:803 - to 01:17:224 - , because the placement lacks flow, and looks like sliders are made into random shapes.
00:05:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - use normal sample instead. soft sample does not fit the strong drums.
00:10:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream shapes awful. please rearrange the notes.
00:13:080 - to 00:37:751 - reduce hitsound volume and place claps on red lines (non-downbeats) may sound better (current hitsound is like papapa)
00:38:540 (1) - should start at 00:38:409 - , same as Hard
00:38:540 (1,1) - by the way the sliders' shapes are ugly.
00:50:579 (2,3,4,5,6) - not sure if intended but the stream shapes bad. using a fluent arc looks better.
00:57:487 (3) - what is this? please make a better shape.
01:12:290 (1) - does not blanket well with 01:12:093 (6) -
01:26:501 - add a note

Good luck~

Natsu

8,088 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 12 years ago

Flower wrote:
Hi~ m4m~

[General]
vocal from 00:13:080 - to 00:32:224 - has a 1/2 off with drum so I don't think mapping rigidly on 2,4-downbeats is the best choice. im following bg music here so that fit well imo...
From 00:13:080 - to 00:37:751 - I suggest using claps on white lines instead which is also a track in the song. Otherwise you can follow guitar (suggested by wcx) or vocal. maybe i dont understand you but already are clap in 2 and 4 white line orz

[Insane]
I suggest remapping this diff, at least the note placement from 00:33:803 - to 01:17:224 - , because the placement lacks flow, and looks like sliders are made into random shapes. I did the placements and the slider shapes also the pattern how i feel the music orz this is not a valid reason for reamap a diff im good with it and alot of other test players love the map to and find it good so i gonna kee that part in my way
00:05:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - use normal sample instead. soft sample does not fit the strong drums. if you see im using soft hitsound custom 2 you can hear that clap fit alot with this part
00:10:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream shapes awful. please rearrange the notes. is fine follow thww flow of before and after pattern
00:13:080 - to 00:37:751 - reduce hitsound volume and place claps on red lines (non-downbeats) may sound better (current hitsound is like papapa) i gonna keep it for now
00:38:540 (1) - should start at 00:38:409 - , same as Hard i add a circle there but i dont move the slider
00:38:540 (1,1) - by the way the sliders' shapes are ugly. they are nice for me o3o
00:50:579 (2,3,4,5,6) - not sure if intended but the stream shapes bad. using a fluent arc looks better. since i like hw i did it i gonna keep it too
00:57:487 (3) - what is this? please make a better shape. i try to make some original slider here also are fine for me and fit the song very well
01:12:290 (1) - does not blanket well with 01:12:093 (6) - fixed
01:26:501 - add a note ok

Good luck~

thanks for mod gonna do your soon

DakeDekaane

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3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 12 years ago

I find following just vocals for most of the song a bit boring, 3/2 sliders in that part you suggested are following vocals though, and I'm surprised because you didn't say that for the kiai.
Still made some changes, update pls: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 12 years ago

finally~ someone is mapping a GJ-bu song <3. mod requested on my queue

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Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
i think that the preview time should be moved to 64001 because right now, "tomodachi" is cut off and it doesn't sound good for a preview IMO.
i feel that a 1000 lead-in feels too sudden for players, so i think a 1500 lead in is enough so that players can get ready in time IMO.
i think that you should go for combo colors that match the hair for the girls. use the code in the box to see. note that i tried to match Kirara's hair, but this is the best i can come up with ><.

SPOILER

Combo1 : 255,202,79
Combo2 : 255,170,94
Combo3 : 255,81,168
Combo4 : 190,125,255

[Xinely's Easy]
00:00:646 (1) - maybe you can flip this slider so that the transition is a lot smoother to follow during gameplay?
00:03:803 (1) - ^
00:06:567 - i think that you should add a circle with the clap because i feel that something is missing in this part of the song. it'll be smoother as it follows the clap in the BGM during gameplay IMO.
00:11:303 - same as above, but with no clap, and to follow the drums.
00:12:882 (4) - i highly suggest that you replace this pattern for 2 circles because the 2nd part(the end of the slider) is where the kiai starts and it's also where the pitch of the vocals change in this part.
00:19:198 (4) - it'll flow a lot smoother if you align this slider to (3), as well as make it look like (3) for that smooth transition in the pattern during gameplay.
00:23:145 (1) - to me, the flow in this part flows awkwardly during gameplay due to the transition of these 2 curved sliders. i suggest that you make this curved slider a straight slider so that the flow is steady in this part during gameplay.
00:32:224 (1) - replace this whistle for a finish because not only that it'll be consistent, but it'll show emphasis in the pitch of the vocals during gameplay.
00:33:803 (3) - i think aligning this to (1) would make the flow steady and somewhat smoother to follow during gameplay.
00:37:751 (2) - remove the clap at the repeat because right now it feels unfitting to follow with the vocals like this.
00:43:277 (3) - align this to (2). it'll be a lot smoother to follow from (3) during gameplay. personally, i find this transition uncomfortable to follow during gameplay IMO.
00:45:645 (2) - if you wanna make the flow a lot smoother to follow in this, you should make sure that the end of this slider is aligned to the beginning of (3), as well as adjusted properly. it should look something like this.
00:51:172 (1) - replace the whistle for a clap. yes it'll break consistency, but it'll follow the drums in the BGM and it's really fitting with this part of the song.
00:55:514 (2) - same as 00:43:277.
00:59:066 (2) - move this to the middle of 00:56:698 (4) - like this for neatness in this part during gameplay.
01:04:593 (1) - you're forgetting a clap at the end. add it for consistency in the clap pattern during gameplay.
01:06:172 (4) - move this note up by 1/2 because that's where the vocals end here. it'll be a nice challenge to beginners in their timing and reaction IMO.
01:27:487 (2) - you should stack this on 01:25:119 (3) - because i find it a lot neater and smoother to follow during gameplay. if you do this, then you have to move (1,3) as well if you want to do this.

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:10:119 (5) - i think that you can do a s stack on (1) because although it disappears, i feel that it'll look a lot neater. just note that if you do this, then you have to move (4) around to do this, also make this a NC because it'll be consistent with 00:05:580 (1) - since it follows something in the BGM.
00:12:093 - consider adding 3 circles at the 1/1 ticks(including this one) because you can hear the "thump" in the drums, and i think that the circles would fit with this part IMO.
00:16:830 (2) - add a whistle at the end because it'll be consistent with (1), as well as that it'll go along with the clap in this part of the song. in other words a clap-whistle pattern during gameplay.
00:17:619 (3,4) - for this one, the whistle should be at (3), not at (4). adding it at (4) sounds really unfitting as it doesn't fit with this part of the vocals, or add the whistle at the end of (3) so that it'd be consistent with 01:08:935 (3) -
00:25:711 (3) - you should remove this circle because now it feels unnecessary as it doesn't fit with the BGM, and the vocals as well IMO.
00:38:474 (4) - the beginning of this slider is unsnapped. re-snap it back to the 1/1 tick so that it'll be rankable.
00:56:303 (4) - NC here. it'll be consistent with 00:52:553 (1) - since the lyrics change here as well as the one at 00:52:553 (1) - .
01:08:145 (2) - same as 00:16:830.
01:11:698 (3) - do the same thing here, this time at the beginning of this slider.
01:13:277 (5) - ^
01:17:027 (3) - same as 00:25:711.
01:21:172 (2) - same as 01:11:698.

[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:17:619 (4) - perhaps you can do Ctrl+H while moving the end up so that the diff would be more fun to play IMO?
00:31:830 (2) - a linear pattern like this may not flow properly and it might catch players off guard in their transitioning. i think that you should move this note around so that it'd look like a triangular pattern as that would make the diff more fun and easier to follow for players IMO.
01:02:224 (2) - i think you can space this out just because of the change dna emphasis in the vocals in this part during gameplay IMO.

[Insane]
00:05:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - ik that this stream is for the sake of the diff, but the majority of the notes don't follow anything and it feels unnecessary, so for this one, do this as it makes a lot of sense by following the music during gampeplay.
00:12:882 (1) - remove the NC for this. yes it's connected to the vocals, but if you listen carefully, the "ni" is more emphasized than the other notes, indicating that there's a change in the vocals here.
00:38:540 (1) - i think for this one, you should follow the drums, so it should be a circle at the 1/6 tick, followed by a 1/4 repeat slider so that it'll follow the drums accurately during gameplay.
00:40:514 (4) - maybe Ctrl+G because i can see a possible jump pattern in this part, and i think it'll be more fun during gameplay IMO.
00:41:895 (4) - align this to the end of (2) because it'll be neater and it'll keep the flow steady here during gameplay.
00:51:961 - you should add a 0.75 slider multiplier here because this is where the vocals slow down and it feels more fitting to the mood of the song during gameplay.
00:55:119 (1,3) - make these wave sliders symmetrical because they flow awkwardly and they look ugly as well. it took a few mins but the sliders should look similar to this for a smoother transition in the diff during gameplay.

and that's all i got. i'll admit this map is not bad o.o it just needs more polishing up and minor changes and it'll be good to go. here, take this star because i feel that it's almost ready and GL on the rank

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Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 12 years ago

Byakugan249 wrote:
[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:17:619 (4) - perhaps you can do Ctrl+H while moving the end up so that the diff would be more fun to play IMO? Sorry if this sounds a bit offensive, but I think you could just tell me to Ctrl+G it lol. Done though~
00:31:830 (2) - a linear pattern like this may not flow properly and it might catch players off guard in their transitioning. i think that you should move this note around so that it'd look like a triangular pattern as that would make the diff more fun and easier to follow for players IMO. I'm following how the music flows here, and a linear pattern definitely fits here. The flow feels a bit weird, yes, but the weird flow goes very, very well with the song itself, so I think it's acceptable.
01:02:224 (2) - i think you can space this out just because of the change dna emphasis in the vocals in this part during gameplay IMO. I'm actually thinking about that too, here. Done.

Thanks for the mod

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 12 years ago

fix all expect 01:06:172 (4) -
Thanks byaku~ :3
Omg starred.. Natsu is pro.. Go Go!

fix

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 64593
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13271
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mousou Koukan Nikki (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:もうそう★こうかんにっき (TV Size)
Artist:Otome Shintou
ArtistUnicode:乙女新党
Creator:Natsu
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:GJ-Bu
Tags:opening xinely hinsvar DakeDekaane
BeatmapID:237787
BeatmapSetID:83504

[Difficulty]
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creampuff

438 posts

Joined August 2012

creampuff 12 years ago

Yo. Mod request from my queue.

[General]
Ok

[Xinely's Easy]
00:37:751 (2) Try this?

SPOILER

[Dekaane's Normal]
Good

[Hinsvar's Hard]
Good

[Insane]
Ok

Nice map. GL on rank.

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 12 years ago

Byakugan249 wrote:
finally~ someone is mapping a GJ-bu song <3. mod requested on my queue .

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:10:119 (5) - i think that you can do a s stack on (1) because although it disappears, i feel that it'll look a lot neater. just note that if you do this, then you have to move (4) around to do this, also make this a NC because it'll be consistent with 00:05:580 (1) - since it follows something in the BGM. /*Ok, done
00:12:093 - consider adding 3 circles at the 1/1 ticks(including this one) because you can hear the "thump" in the drums, and i think that the circles would fit with this part IMO. /*I decide to keep this part, I like how my tiny break fits with the increasing sound in the background
00:16:830 (2) - add a whistle at the end because it'll be consistent with (1), as well as that it'll go along with the clap in this part of the song. in other words a clap-whistle pattern during gameplay. /*Ok, done
00:17:619 (3,4) - for this one, the whistle should be at (3), not at (4). adding it at (4) sounds really unfitting as it doesn't fit with this part of the vocals, or add the whistle at the end of (3) so that it'd be consistent with 01:08:935 (3) - /*Ok, done
00:25:711 (3) - you should remove this circle because now it feels unnecessary as it doesn't fit with the BGM, and the vocals as well IMO. /*It matches for vocals but removed.
00:38:474 (4) - the beginning of this slider is unsnapped. re-snap it back to the 1/1 tick so that it'll be rankable. /*It's snapped in 1/6 due to vocals, I don't know why but it sounds off when I let it in the white tick ;_;
00:56:303 (4) - NC here. it'll be consistent with 00:52:553 (1) - since the lyrics change here as well as the one at 00:52:553 (1) - . /*It's the same phrase in vocals :I I'll keep
01:08:145 (2) - same as 00:16:830. /*Ok, done
01:11:698 (3) - do the same thing here, this time at the beginning of this slider. /*Ok, done
01:13:277 (5) - ^ /*Ok, done
01:17:027 (3) - same as 00:25:711. /*Ok, done
01:21:172 (2) - same as 01:11:698. /*Ok, done

and that's all i got. i'll admit this map is not bad o.o it just needs more polishing up and minor changes and it'll be good to go. here, take this star because i feel that it's almost ready and GL on the rank .

Thanks for modding :3

My update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

Natsu

8,088 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 12 years ago

Byakugan249 wrote:
finally~ someone is mapping a GJ-bu song <3. mod requested on my queue . I know i was surprised no one mapped this nice song orz

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
i think that the preview time should be moved to 64001 because right now, "tomodachi" is cut off and it doesn't sound good for a preview IMO.
i feel that a 1000 lead-in feels too sudden for players, so i think a 1500 lead in is enough so that players can get ready in time IMO.
i think that you should go for combo colors that match the hair for the girls. use the code in the box to see. note that i tried to match Kirara's hair, but this is the best i can come up with ><.
SPOILER
Combo1 : 255,202,79
Combo2 : 255,170,94
Combo3 : 255,81,168
Combo4 : 190,125,255
all changed here also thanks alot for the combo colours fit alot with bg and video

[Insane]
00:05:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - ik that this stream is for the sake of the diff, but the majority of the notes don't follow anything and it feels unnecessary, so for this one, do this as it makes a lot of sense by following the music during gampeplay. Yup changed some symilar tou you suggest
00:12:882 (1) - remove the NC for this. yes it's connected to the vocals, but if you listen carefully, the "ni" is more emphasized than the other notes, indicating that there's a change in the vocals here. done
00:38:540 (1) - i think for this one, you should follow the drums, so it should be a circle at the 1/6 tick, followed by a 1/4 repeat slider so that it'll follow the drums accurately during gameplay. i was confuse with this i hope i fix it how you say o3o
00:40:514 (4) - maybe Ctrl+G because i can see a possible jump pattern in this part, and i think it'll be more fun during gameplay IMO. yeah the jump feel better when you play done
00:41:895 (4) - align this to the end of (2) because it'll be neater and it'll keep the flow steady here during gameplay. done
00:51:961 - you should add a 0.75 slider multiplier here because this is where the vocals slow down and it feels more fitting to the mood of the song during gameplay. i really dont like sv changes orz i want to keep this T-T
00:55:119 (1,3) - make these wave sliders symmetrical because they flow awkwardly and they look ugly as well. it took a few mins but the sliders should look similar to this for a smoother transition in the diff during gameplay. done

and that's all i got. i'll admit this map is not bad o.o it just needs more polishing up and minor changes and it'll be good to go. here, take this star because i feel that it's almost ready and GL on the rank . thanks o3o for the start and mod o3o

okamiratsu

714 posts

Joined August 2011

okamiratsu 12 years ago

[Xinely's Easy]
No video

that's about all I could find

Natsu

8,088 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 12 years ago

okamiratsu wrote:
[Xinely's Easy]
No video

that's about all I could find

oh i see i will fix in the next updated mmm i will fix this then i think i should give you a kudo

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 12 years ago

mannnnn my mod quality is poor. don't slap me. btw o3o/

General

Add video on easy diff.

Xinely's Easy

00:11:303 (3) - Add clap

00:29:067 (1,2,3) - Not bad. but I recommend more blanket this shapes. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/717857
This is code.

SPOILER

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380,92,29856,2,0,P|386:138|372:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,248,30646,2,0,P|292:228|200:260,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:37:751 (2) - NC? it's sound is changed.
01:03:014 (3) - Add finish on slider's first? it will become more rhythmical before kiai part
01:06:172 (4) - How about lengthen this to double? it is fit better in this vocal. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/717867
01:14:856 (2) - Overlap looks a little bad. how about move to x:280, y:104?

Dekaane's Normal

00:10:119 (1) - Add clap on slider's end.
00:11:698 (2) - I think, spinner is better than this circle. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/717893
00:18:211 (4) - Empty rhythm is so awkward from me. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/717879
00:37:751 (3) - NC. sound was suddenly changed.
01:09:527 (4) - Same reason. how about this? look at number 4 http://puu.sh/2FrMy.jpg

Hinsvar's Hard

00:35:382 - 00:38:935 - Sound is too low. +10~20% fits better in this part.
00:50:382 (1,2,3,4) - How about makes jump? it will become more funny. it has many drum sounds on. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/717899
This is code.
SPOILER
```
364,48,50382,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,180,50580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,68,50777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,84,50974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
```

Insane

00:12:882 (5) - Clear finish at slider's first.
00:15:843 (4) - Change S:C1 sound.

00:34:396 (2,3,4) - How about this? flow is a little bad. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/717910
This is code.

SPOILER

324,88,34396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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00:38:738 (5,6,7) - Using 1/8 beat slider? I can't hear any sound on 00:38:738 here. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/717913
00:41:698 (3) - Why add finish? clearly fits better.
01:15:251 (5) - Move to x:181, y:235. not perfect stacked.
01:25:119 (1,2) - I think, 1/1 slider fits more well. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/717916

yeah. nice mapset & moe song. GL on rank

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 12 years ago

Fix all, moe scanter thanks 4 mod nyan ~

fix

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TitleUnicode:もうそう★こうかんにっき (TV Size)
Artist:Otome Shintou
ArtistUnicode:乙女新党
Creator:Natsu
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:GJ-Bu
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Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 12 years ago

scanter wrote:
Hinsvar's Hard
00:35:382 - 00:38:935 - Sound is too low. +10~20% fits better in this part. Increased the volume.
00:50:382 (1,2,3,4) - How about makes jump? it will become more funny. it has many drum sounds on. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/717899
This is code. I'd like to keep my pattern here. A linear formation of circles works and goes better with the song, IMO.
SPOILER
364,48,50382,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,180,50580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,68,50777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,84,50974,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Thanks for modding

lol

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:もうそう★こうかんにっき (TV Size)
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ArtistUnicode:乙女新党
Creator:Natsu
Version:Hinsvar's Hard
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Tags:opening xinely hinsvar DakeDekaane
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Natsu

8,088 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 12 years ago

scanter wrote:
mannnnn my mod quality is poor. don't slap me. btw o3o/ /me slaps the slapter

General
Add video on easy diff.
fixed

Insane
00:12:882 (5) - Clear finish at slider's first. done
00:15:843 (4) - Change S:C1 sound. yup
00:34:396 (2,3,4) - How about this? flow is a little bad. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/717910
This is code. great i love it o3o
SPOILER
324,88,34396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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162,102,34988,2,0,P|154:55|119:18,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:38:738 (5,6,7) - Using 1/8 beat slider? I can't hear any sound on 00:38:738 here. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/717913 since byakugan suggest me he actual rhytm and i agree with him so i keep this
00:41:698 (3) - Why add finish? clearly fits better. done
01:15:251 (5) - Move to x:181, y:235. not perfect stacked. ok
01:25:119 (1,2) - I think, 1/1 slider fits more well. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/717916 baka im starting sliders with the vocals in this part i think my current way fit better T-T
yeah. nice mapset & moe song. GL on rank thanks and thanks for mod baka hep me to improve alot

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 12 years ago

Added a spinner in a different place and put the suggested NC, the empty parts match with vocals imo, thanks o/
Update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,735 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 12 years ago

Hi guys My queue

General
- Offset (+5) sounds much and plays better
- hehhh... you said you used 848x480 in Colin's post but what I'm seeing is 640x360 , it's 16:9 indeed but the higher resolution would be nice

because it won't look odd , just mention in case you forgot

- eh Dekaane's Normal but I saw your previous diffs were that name too \o/ so ok , I will pass it xD

Xinely's Easy
Just in case if you didn't check his/her mod. Might it be useful o.o?ahere
00:06:961 (1) - increase volume from this note to 40-45% , the drum (clap) 's volume is really low and barely to hear

00:37:751 (1) - a.. this slider should be 1/3 orz.. , it will sound much better and fit the music. It isn't too hard I believe because it fits the music so it won't be anything vague to understand at all xD, Do not forget to adjust the spacing a bit, it won't be strange and unrankable if you don't :\

SPOILER

[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/719953[/img]

01:03:014 (3) - ^, 1/3 plzz

01:08:540 (2) - left and up 1 grid, the head of slider won't overlap with the previous and look good !

Dekaane's Normal
good

but the last spinner is super fast D:

Hinsvar's Hard
ehh sounds good for most of parts in the map except for one triplet that I feel it's quite sudden+unfitting = =~
00:05:481 (2) - I feel this note out of place like the 00:05:580 (3) - should be 1/6 but ehh I will assume that you simplified it using 1/4
other than that is seemingly good

Insane
00:06:764 (1) - remove NC and NC at 00:07:356 (1) - instead. It looks really confused and odd to have NC there since it doesn't start a new phrase at all
you can hear 00:07:356 (1) - bass (not bass drum) on this that introduces new part more clearly so I think it's better since it fits with the spacing you used to (NC punishes confusion here imo)
00:35:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -

HOW could player notice this is 1/3 since the spacing like 00:10:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is 1/4
I will start using 1/3 sliders starting on 00:35:382 and 00:35:909 so introduce first

so 00:36:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - will be what people can guess and expect xD

SPOILER

call me back for this

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 12 years ago

Frostmourne wrote:
Hinsvar's Hard
ehh sounds good for most of parts in the map except for one triplet that I feel it's quite sudden+unfitting = =~ Hmm, can you show which triplet do you find weird?
00:05:481 (2) - I feel this note out of place like the 00:05:580 (3) - should be 1/6 but ehh I will assume that you simplified it using 1/4 ...Yeah, this is supposed to be 1/6. I think Hard players will find this sudden transition jarring though, so I decided to simplify it.
other than that is seemingly good \:D/

Well, thanks for taking a look~ (:

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 12 years ago

Fix all in frost's mod.
Aaaa Frost. i already checked that mod but i not accept that.. oh i forget to reply (:3)rz
hue u are so diligent 8)
@Natsu : if you fix the offset. Fix in my diff too >< thanks ~

fix

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Mousou Koukan Nikki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 64001
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13271
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mousou Koukan Nikki (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:もうそう★こうかんにっき (TV Size)
Artist:Otome Shintou
ArtistUnicode:乙女新党
Creator:Natsu
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:GJ-Bu
Tags:opening xinely hinsvar DakeDekaane
BeatmapID:237787
BeatmapSetID:83504

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 12 years ago

Frostmourne wrote:
- eh Dekaane's Normal but I saw your previous diffs were that name too \o/ so ok , I will pass it xD

I don't know what did you mean by that D:
But extended the last spinner 1/2 beat.

My update :3 http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

scanter

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scanter 12 years ago

Go Go \o/

Natsu

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Natsu 12 years ago

Frostmourne wrote:
Hi guys My queue

General
- Offset (+5) sounds much and plays better done sound better
- hehhh... you said you used 848x480 in Colin's post but what I'm seeing is 640x360 , it's 16:9 indeed but the higher resolution would be nice because it won't look odd , just mention in case you forgot since i talk with vicho (he encode the video) and is ok also the video got a nice quality and is like when you see the anime o3oabout coulin when he told me that video was 4:3 so i ask vicho to do 16:9
- eh Dekaane's Normal but I saw your previous diffs were that name too \o/ so ok , I will pass it xD

Insane
00:06:764 (1) - remove NC and NC at 00:07:356 (1) - instead. It looks really confused and odd to have NC there since it doesn't start a new phrase at all
you can hear 00:07:356 (1) - bass (not bass drum) on this that introduces new part more clearly so I think it's better since it fits with the spacing you used to (NC punishes confusion here imo) done
00:35:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
HOW could player notice this is 1/3 since the spacing like 00:10:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is 1/4
I will start using 1/3 sliders starting on 00:35:382 and 00:35:909 so introduce first so 00:36:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - will be what people can guess and expect xD done in my way hope you liked
SPOILER

call me back for this

ok i change the stream for some sliders o3o after see alot of players fail at that point xD

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 12 years ago

sry for lateness

As you see the 1,1 after ""bg.jpg" , please change it to 0,0 for every diffs. I used to be a bug that woc already fixed it.
also the Source should be "GJ-bu" , I did investigate for the resources and they mostly have written as GJ-bu instead of GJ-Bu

I hope I can bubble this afterwards when BSS works properly, and I have time to check it regardless of my exam.

Natsu

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Natsu 12 years ago

Frostmourne wrote:
sry for lateness

As you see the 1,1 after ""bg.jpg" , please change it to 0,0 for every diffs. I used to be a bug that woc already fixed it.
also the Source should be "GJ-bu" , I did investigate for the resources and they mostly have written as GJ-bu instead of GJ-Bu

I hope I can bubble this afterwards when BSS works properly, and I have time to check it regardless of my exam.

all fixed als source o3o about BSS is working fine for me since i update and redownload all see fine thanks o3o

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 12 years ago

there are some unsnapped green lines on 00:38:479 (2) - which actually sound fine (just about volume changes not SV changes)
so here you go , good luck

Natsu

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Natsu 12 years ago

Frostmourne wrote:
there are some unsnapped green lines on 00:38:479 (2) - which actually sound fine (just about volume changes not SV changes)
so here you go , good luck

thanks o3o

Fluabu

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Fluabu 12 years ago

Hi, I noticed a few minor errors as I was playing it

[Xinely's Easy]

00:27:197 (2) - I don't think this is timed or snapped properly
01:07:459 (5) - Same as above

That's all I have to say. It's a good map but those parts feel weird to me.

Natsu

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Natsu 12 years ago

ok we talk it on chat lets xinely check it o3o if she want to change i will do when some BAT come

edir: she agree with you will fix when some else check this

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 12 years ago

you can fix it , I will return a bubble afterwards :3

Natsu

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Natsu 12 years ago

Frostmourne wrote:
you can fix it , I will return a bubble afterwards :3

okay okay thanks already fixed

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 12 years ago

:3

Natsu

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Natsu 12 years ago

Frostmourne wrote:
:3

\:D/

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 12 years ago

Hi ~ Natsu ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Please remove unused hitsound file 'normal-hitclap,normal-hitclap-2'

[Insane]

OD7 is much better,because of some 1/3 rhythm.

00:39:335 (1) - This slider made flow bad,try use this one.

374,345,39335,6,0,B|436:312|444:272|452:232|512:204,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:58:282 (1,2) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.

[Hinsvar's Hard]

00:09:039 (2) - Wrong snapped slider,should move to 00:08:940(don't forgot remove clap in end slider's end).
00:36:374 (3) - ^,should move to 00:36:440 - .
00:38:479 (2) - Try reduce 1 repeat,sound much better.

[Dekaane's Normal]

00:59:170 (2) - Wrong snapped slider,should move to 00:59:071.
01:07:558 (4) - Remove this note,sound much better.
01:28:282 (1) - The spinner should end to 01:29:269 - .
00:58:282 (1) - Remove clap and Add whistle.
00:58:677 (2) - Remove whistle and Add clap.
01:01:440 (1) - Remove new combo,it's unnecessary.

[Xinely's Easy]

00:32:229 (1,2,3,4) - More better blanket,like this.

Screenshot and Code

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144,304,33414,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,208,34993,1,8,0:0:0:0:

01:28:282 (3) - Same as above,here is code.

80,300,88282,2,0,P|44:212|124:152,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:02:229 (2) - Change a 1/2 slider on 01:02:032 - ,follow with lyrics.

OK ~ That's all ~ not bad map ~

Call me back ~

Natsu

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Natsu 12 years ago

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Natsu ~ Hi

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Please remove unused hitsound file 'normal-hitclap,normal-hitclap-2'
done
[Insane]
OD7 is much better,because of some 1/3 rhythm.
00:39:335 (1) - This slider made flow bad,try use this one.
374,345,39335,6,0,B|436:312|444:272|452:232|512:204,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:58:282 (1,2) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.

all fixed there
OK ~ That's all ~ not bad map ~ [color=#0000FF]thanks

Call me back ~[/color]

ok ok i just waiting to hinsvar and xinely your mod :3 then i will updated

Last edited by Natsu 12 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 12 years ago

Kawayi Rika wrote:
[Dekaane's Normal]

00:59:170 (2) - Wrong snapped slider,should move to 00:59:071. /*Oops, I really wonder what happened there.
01:07:558 (4) - Remove this note,sound much better. /*Ok
01:28:282 (1) - The spinner should end to 01:29:269 - . /*Frost said the spinner was quite short, but I think I'll make a slider here.
00:58:282 (1) - Remove clap and Add whistle. /*There's a finish here o3o
00:58:677 (2) - Remove whistle and Add clap. /*^There's already a clap o3o
01:01:440 (1) - Remove new combo,it's unnecessary. /*I find that combo necessary, if I do, the combo will be too long xc

Thank you Rika :3

My update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=S2QUYg7n

Edited a few minutes after posting, forgot some tiny details, it's all ready now.

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Hinsvar 12 years ago

Fixed everything; thanks for your mod, Rika!

lol

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Mousou Koukan Nikki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 64006
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4

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Title:Mousou Koukan Nikki (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:もうそう★こうかんにっき (TV Size)
Artist:Otome Shintou
ArtistUnicode:乙女新党
Creator:Natsu
Version:Hinsvar's Hard
Source:GJ-bu
Tags:opening xinely hinsvar DakeDekaane
BeatmapID:239957
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Xinely fixed everything too and asked me to get her diff here (she's just lazy to post lol). She told me to say: "Thanks moe Rika

" \o\

Xinely's Easy

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120,168,27098,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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380,92,29861,2,0,P|386:138|372:172,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,248,30650,2,0,P|292:228|200:260,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,348,32229,6,0,P|64:312|80:256,2,80,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,33414,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,280,33808,2,0,P|259:290|299:279,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,34993,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,128,35387,6,0,P|164:88|54:144,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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292,208,38940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,144,39335,6,0,P|208:68|108:60,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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348,312,42098,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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380,188,43282,2,0,P|349:140|313:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,44071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,36,44861,2,0,P|68:40|32:72,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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500,196,48413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,128,48808,6,0,P|374:110|301:154,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,292,51177,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,260,51571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,208,51966,6,0,P|288:172|268:56,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,84,53545,2,0,P|79:180|35:216,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,280,54729,6,0,P|124:288|184:272,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,204,55519,2,0,P|189:181|221:127,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,92,56308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,152,56703,2,0,P|404:176|484:144,2,160,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,72,58677,5,8,0:0:0:0:
396,88,59071,2,0,L|396:256,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,304,60256,2,0,P|264:328|172:296,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,260,61440,5,6,0:0:0:0:
160,144,62032,2,0,L|198:154,1,40,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,63019,2,0,L|309:260,3,53.3333333333333,6|0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,300,64203,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,312,64598,6,0,P|104:312|72:296,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,220,65387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,140,65782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,104,66177,2,0,P|204:64|296:72,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,84,67361,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,164,67756,6,0,P|380:209|362:250,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,280,68545,2,0,P|256:292|212:280,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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120,116,70519,6,0,P|180:72|284:88,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,124,71703,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,188,72098,2,0,P|220:232|116:216,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,104,74861,2,0,P|251:64|212:41,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,76,75650,2,0,P|84:92|20:68,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,140,78413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Natsu

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Natsu 12 years ago

Updated :3

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 12 years ago

OK ~ Looks much better ~

GJ ~~~~~ BU ~ Here you go <3

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Natsu 12 years ago

Kawayi Rika wrote:
OK ~ Looks much better ~

GJ ~~~~~ BU ~ Here you go <3

thanks alot <3

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Hinsvar 12 years ago

So I have eight ranked guest diffs now...

...and still no ranked mapset.

ok

Thanks Rika, and congrats to everyone involved in this mapset \:D/

*Yep, Xinely wants to say that too, she's just too lazy to post lol

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Mythiax 12 years ago

Gratz for rank \:D/

Natsu pro

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Zeroarg wrote:
Gratz for rank \:D/

Natsu pro

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P A N 12 years ago

gratz! ><

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P A N wrote:
gratz! ><

thanks :3

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Oyatsu 12 years ago

Congratz, Natsu-nee

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Loki-san wrote:
Congratz, Natsu-nee

thanks :3

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Birdy 12 years ago

Anime map with 6 dislikes? I've seen everything now.

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Static Noise Bird wrote:
Anime map with 6 dislikes? I've seen everything now.

idk orz maybe i did somethink wrong orz

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ReySHeL 12 years ago

gratz Natsu ﾟ.+:｡(*´ｪ`*)ﾟ.+:｡

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ReySHeL wrote:
gratz Natsu ﾟ.+:｡(*´ｪ`*)ﾟ.+:｡

thanks :3

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Satellite 12 years ago

gratz~!

Lolicakey

Lolicakey 12 years ago

Congratz Natsu >w<
/late

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DakeDekaane 12 years ago

Hinsvar wrote:
So I have eight ranked guest diffs now...

...and still no ranked mapset.

Never give up

Grats Natsu Xinely and Hinsvar and me, hue

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Lolicakes wrote:
Congratz Natsu >w<
/late

thanks :3

DakeDekaane wrote:
Grats Natsu Xinely and Hinsvar and me, hue

Yes we need to dance now o3o

Satellite wrote:
gratz~!

thanks

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Makyu

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Makyu 12 years ago

it seems like you rank the song
/me slaps Natsu

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Natsu 12 years ago

Makyu wrote:
it seems like you rank the song
/me slaps Natsu

/me slap back x10000000000000

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scanter 12 years ago

baka ! gratz \o/

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scanter wrote:
baka ! gratz \o/

thanks o3o /me slaps you

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Garven 12 years ago

What's up with this mp3? The start has this blip. Quality seems low too...

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Garven wrote:
What's up with this mp3? The start has this blip. Quality seems low too...

orz :l

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Andrea 12 years ago

I have to agree with Garven here, quality is really bad imo.

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Andrea wrote:
I have to agree with Garven here, quality is really bad imo.

orz what should i do? :c

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-Neipezi 12 years ago

Natsu congrats ¡!

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-Neipezi wrote:
Natsu congrats ¡!

thanks :3

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Gero 12 years ago

OMG OMG Gorda Gongrats - desu o3o /me slaps late natsu *Run*

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Gero wrote:
OMG OMG Gorda Gongrats - desu o3o /me slaps late natsu *Run*

Thanks gorda malcriada

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Saten 12 years ago

I checked the Blu-ray's version, but I can't say that the audio was any better there.

The full version have a much better audio quality~~, but it's also 1 bpm slower~~

Nothing can really be done, just leave it as it is \:>/

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Natsu 12 years ago

Saten wrote:
I checked the Blu-ray's version, but I can't say that the audio was any better there.

The full version have a much better audio quality~~, but it's also 1 bpm slower~~

Nothing can really be done, just leave it as it is \:>/

Also ths mp3 sound like the one in the anime orz just the start sound is bad imo but if is necesary i can look for other xd

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Xytox 12 years ago

I heavily doubt there's any better versions of this TV Size out there. The anime opening sounds as horrible as this mp3. There's no way to get around it since the original raw file is the source of the problem. The full version sounds a lot better, but it's way too different to just cut out a small bit of it and call it "TV Size". And as Saten said, for some reason, the full version is one bpm slower, so it's literally impossible, huehue.

Also, grats on rank, I guess! \:>/

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Natsu 12 years ago

Xytox wrote:
I heavily doubt there's any better versions of this TV Size out there. The anime opening sounds as horrible as this mp3. There's no way to get around it since the original raw file is the source of the problem. The full version sounds a lot better, but it's way too different to just cut out a small bit of it and call it "TV Size". And as Saten said, for some reason, the full version is one bpm slower, so it's literally impossible, huehue.

Also, grats on rank, I guess! \:>/

ahhaah i feel bad since i did somethink wrong orz :l

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Xytox 12 years ago

Natsu wrote:
ahhaah i feel bad since i did somethink wrong orz :l

Nooo, this isn't your fault, it's the makers of the mp3's. Presumably, they recorded everything from scratch when making the TV Size or something like that, and that's why it ended up at a slightly higher bpm and worse quality. Although, the "worse quality" is mostly just a lowered bass, which I guess is something that might have been necessary to make the song fit the anime opening better without it sounding like an overkill or something.

This is just me guessing away though, and it doesn't really matter if it's true or not. What matters and seems to be accurate, is that the original TV Size mp3 of this song is of surprisingly bad quality and there's nothing to do about it. The mp3 that you're using now seems to be the best there is for this particular version of the song.

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Natsu 12 years ago

Xytox wrote:
Natsu wrote:
ahhaah i feel bad since i did somethink wrong orz :l
Nooo, this isn't your fault, it's the makers of the mp3's. Presumably, they recorded everything from scratch when making the TV Size or something like that, and that's why it ended up at a slightly higher bpm and worse quality. Although, the "worse quality" is mostly just a lowered bass, which I guess is something that might have been necessary to make the song fit the anime opening better without it sounding like an overkill or something.

This is just me guessing away though, and it doesn't really matter if it's true or not. What matters and seems to be accurate, is that the original TV Size mp3 of this song is of surprisingly bad quality and there's nothing to do about it. The mp3 that you're using now seems to be the best there is for this particular version of the song.

I know i gonna try to check the mp3 files in my futures maps im really sorry for this

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