moonlightleaf wrote:

Easy
很好

Normal

00:33:126 加note怎么样

00:35:526 ^

我认为可加可不加，如果别的mapper指出来我再考虑

Hard

要遵守distance-snap么 要的话 调整note间距吧 Hard是不用的……

结尾也用转盘吧 感觉不需要……

顺带一说 偷懒了吧...那些绿线都是复制的么 好像有些没起作用 我检查了下都是有用的 回头我再找人看看吧

没帮上忙 哦谢特 看到上面那些大神Mod 膜拜

wantuole wrote:

hi
来mod了
[General]
soft finish有点不给力 像 easy的 00:19:626 (1) -
[Easy]
很干净的难度 要吐槽是slider我就没找到一个直着的
[Normal]
00:14:526 +1 note? 感觉带入感会强很多
00:37:626 (3) - 斟酌下 改成红点在tick上 或者直接采用00:38:826 (1) 的弧度 ok
00:50:826 (3,4) - 这样如何
kiai有点故意拥挤的感觉 刻意使用让位梗
给点建议 00:07:026 (3,1) - 例如这种
3处在重音 1是弱音 1给3让位这样子会更好
00:11:826 (3,1) - 这里也试试[Hard]
00:10:326 - 这个位子需要个声音 类似00:12:126 (5)
00:08:826 (1,2,3,4) - 来个note的对跳如何2下移 3下移
nice diff
跳的有点力度了 配合软软的slider打起来很合适
考虑ar-1 界面上的note更多更能体现你所做的让位梗的美观 而且也容易读图 ok

除了写ok的以外都没改 因为没看懂orz
nice song and SB
good luck

1. Preview Time不一致 我在這邊留AIBAT吧
   
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   Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
   - [Easy] : 31626
   - [Hard] : 31584
   - [Normal] : 31640
2. 01:10:026 - kiai這裡開始

1. AR應該不必到8吧 SV不算很高
2. 00:11:076 (3) - 這應該對音樂(白線~紅線) 而不是執著在blanket上 可能縮短個1/4吧
3. 00:14:826 (3,4) - spacing太小了..你在00:14:226 (5,1) - 做個跳這裡卻沒有大點的spacing太違和 這裡才是vocal顯著改變點啊
4. 00:17:976 (2) - 真心覺得這個連來的太突然 這裡是vocal比較弱的地方 也沒有特別顯著音樂在藍線 就還是不要太坑人吧
5. 00:36:426 (1,2) - *nazi* "視線"兩個vocal應該用個slider連起來比較順耳 試試這個節奏? (不過blanket就消失了 >:)
   
6. 00:40:026 (4,5) - 擺明就是要跳的 這邊的音樂比起(3,4)之間高潮很多 我會建議(3,4)之間不要做跳改做(4,5) 給你個example看你
   
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   308,324,40026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   232,188,40326,2,0,P|220:243|237:281,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   388,108,40926,2,0,P|356:60|317:45,1,100,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. 00:48:426 (8) - clap你懂
8. 00:48:726 (1,2,3) - 沒必要不做等距跳 (2)可以放x:208, y:376看起來略等距
9. 00:50:826 (1,2) - ..這個跳真的太大了 就算這裡跳個很fit但太大跳也不太好 何況你後面突然接個anti-jump
10. 00:55:626 (4) - 真心覺得要跳一下
11. 01:21:426 - clap你懂
    有些該跳的地方沒跳到 不該跳的地方跳了 下次可能要注意下 lol

1. OD-1? 其實這SV跟CS都有點偏難 OD-1可能比較好SS
2. 00:10:026 - 這裏clap啊
3. 00:20:826 (3,4,5) - 感覺這裡可以全部1/2 反而一個slider帶過三個音有點怪
4. 00:34:626 (2) - 你又漏clap
5. 01:19:626 (1) - 這個真的太醜 紅錨點往左邊差不多4格

1. 00:16:626 - 漏whistle
2. 01:12:426 (1) - 其實沒太大必要NC

• General
  
  i'm highly recommend to move kiai start 01:10:026 - here, much better imo
  • Easy
    
    00:44:226 (3) - NC 00:44:826 (1) - delete NC and 00:46:626 (2) - NC
    01:12:426 (1) - missed clap on head
    01:19:026 (3) - add finish on end and 01:20:226 (1) - delete finish on head
    • Normal
      
      AR , HP -1
      00:54:426 (1) - delete NC 00:55:626 (3) - add NC
      • Hard
        
        00:09:126 (3) - here a missed note if you listen the song with 25% playaback rate
        00:11:076 (3) - this rhythm isn't good imo, try this? http://puu.sh/2v2a8 much better i guess
        00:14:526 (1) - delete whistle and adding it 00:14:826 (3) - on head
        00:17:976 (2) - using 1.0x DS is better since you used 1.0 distance on other parts
        00:42:426 (4,2) - you tried to stack these each ohter? looks unstacked little
        
        Good luck!

384059043 wrote:

占一个mod坑
SB无法直视

[Easy]

* HP+1?

* 00:35:826 (3,4) - blanket. 如果可能的话 00:37:626 (1) - 这里也blanket起来吧（和(3)的尾部，不想破坏对称的话就00:34:026 (1,2,3,4) - 一起调一下位置） nah. 感觉blanket比较破flow

其它没了 但是全部下白线节奏有些无聊._.


[Normal]
* 根本找不到什么东西;_;


[Hard]
* 00:11:826 (4,5,1,2,3) - 试试摆出一个正五边形？ 主要的梗是00:11:826 (4,5,1) - 的三角形 所以改了就等于换梗 感觉不是很舒服


[吐槽]
* 01:35:826 - 这里为什么音乐结束的那么突然._. 是原曲这样还是剪得不好？ 是原曲如此，请看动画片

* 色卡神麻婆

1. It would have been tons better to map all the way to 01:35:826 imho. There could be a spinner at 01:34:026 and ending at 01:35:826 with that loud flux right at the end of the song. That would fit perfectly. Maybe you like to have the music playing as the score screen appears, but in doing so the end to your map feels random, especially in the hard diff.
   
   
2. 00:16:626 - Why aren't you using your custom soft clap here like you do before this? That's the same sound in the music. Also why not at 00:19:026?
   
   
3. You use of soft-hitclap2 and your custom finish seem really inconsistent. In the hard diff you really don't use the clap at all until the kiai, but in the other diffs you use it a lot from 00:31:626 to 01:10:026. In the normal diff you don't really use any finishes in that part, but you do in the other diffs. I just couldn't really understand the pattern you were going for, it's totally different in each diff.

1. 00:19:626 (1) - Seems more interesting with the vocal flux if you make the first portion of the slider more curved like so:
   
   
   
   
2. 00:31:926 (1) - Delete finish on the head? Or maybe replace with a whistle. I'm not too fond of having the two finishes in a row here, it seems to be a bit too much echoing noise.
   
   
3. 01:04:626 (6) - Nazi~~~1 grid down is better imo, maybe rotated 3 degrees or so.
   
   
4. 01:15:726 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just a suggest, instead of two triplets in a row like this, you could follow the loud bass fluxes in the music at 01:16:026 and 01:16:326 a bit better with a jump pattern. So delete the 01:16:476 (7) and try something like this:
   
   
5. 01:19:626 (1) - Seems better with a slightly larger curve in the first portion. It makes the blanket better and gives a nice effect with the vocals.
   
   
   
   
6. 01:22:026 (1) - Nazi~~~Try to fix this blanket, it's really off. Move the red anchor to the right a few grids.
   
   
7. 01:26:226 (8) - Try Ctrl+G for this slider, it seems to be a little more interesting flow and gives a nicer jump to the 01:26:826 (1).

1. 00:05:226 (1) - Not the best placement imo.I feel like the curve from the 00:04:026 (3,4) is cut too soon and we come into the 1 at a weird angle. It would flow better as something like this:
   
   
   
   Also maybe:
   
   
   Both are better imo.
   
   
2. 00:14:826 (1) - Try to give it more a curve and move it a bit down so that it's a consistent blanket with the 00:15:726 (2,3). That looks much nicer.
   
   
   Also would fix spacingz
   
   
3. 00:17:826 (1,2) - Ugly imo. The flow feels more fitting if you make a blanket maybe like so:
   
   
   
   
   
4. 00:31:626 (1) - This is the only diff that uses the custom soft clap 2 here. Do you want to replace it with the custom finish, or maybe add a finish? Maybe you could add the clap here in the other diffs because it sounds quite nice.
   
   
5. 00:31:626 (1,2) - It might look sharper if you make the 1 the same angle as the straight portion of the 2.
   
   
   
   
6. 00:58:026 (1) - Remove the NC from here and add it to 00:59:226 (3) to follow the same pattern as previous at 00:55:326 (4,1).
   
   
7. 01:18:426 (3) - Try CTRL+G to make a little better flow. Then you could place the 01:19:626 (1) maybe underneath it and flowing into a blanket:
   
   
   
   
8. 01:21:426 (1) - This slider feels a bit out of place imo. The reason because the vocals start holding on the end of the slider. It would be nice if you could have a slider starting at 01:22:026 instead to hit as the vocals hold. This rhythm would be much more fitting imo:
   
   
   01:19:626 (1) to 01:24:426 (1)

1. 00:50:826 (1) - Add clap on the head along with finish?
   
   
2. 00:55:026 (3) - Add finish to slider end?
   
   
3. 01:22:026 (2) - Clap on the head?

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello~
M4M

[General]

1. It would have been tons better to map all the way to 01:35:826 imho. There could be a spinner at 01:34:026 and ending at 01:35:826 with that loud flux right at the end of the song. That would fit perfectly. Maybe you like to have the music playing as the score screen appears, but in doing so the end to your map feels random, especially in the hard diff. Nope, I intend to end playing at the point so that the player can watch the storyboard for a few seconds if they like.
   
   
2. 00:16:626 - Why aren't you using your custom soft clap here like you do before this? That's the same sound in the music. Also why not at 00:19:026? Obviously they aren't the same. I prefer soft whistle on it.
   
   
3. You use of soft-hitclap2 and your custom finish seem really inconsistent. In the hard diff you really don't use the clap at all until the kiai, but in the other diffs you use it a lot from 00:31:626 to 01:10:026. In the normal diff you don't really use any finishes in that part, but you do in the other diffs. I just couldn't really understand the pattern you were going for, it's totally different in each diff. clap added in Hard. I don't feel the necessary to keep the consistency of pattern using in different diffs. even Taiko don't simply add and remove notes to make different diffs.

[Hard]

1. 00:19:626 (1) - Seems more interesting with the vocal flux if you make the first portion of the slider more curved like so: done
   
   
   
   
2. 00:31:926 (1) - Delete finish on the head? Or maybe replace with a whistle. I'm not too fond of having the two finishes in a row here, it seems to be a bit too much echoing noise. there is no finish yet d:
   
   
3. 01:04:626 (6) - Nazi~~~1 grid down is better imo, maybe rotated 3 degrees or so. done
   
   
4. 01:15:726 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just a suggest, instead of two triplets in a row like this, you could follow the loud bass fluxes in the music at 01:16:026 and 01:16:326 a bit better with a jump pattern. So delete the 01:16:476 (7) and try something like this: umm... maybe not
   
   
5. 01:19:626 (1) - Seems better with a slightly larger curve in the first portion. It makes the blanket better and gives a nice effect with the vocals. done
   
   
   
   
6. 01:22:026 (1) - Nazi~~~Try to fix this blanket, it's really off. Move the red anchor to the right a few grids. done
   
   
7. 01:26:226 (8) - Try Ctrl+G for this slider, it seems to be a little more interesting flow and gives a nicer jump to the 01:26:826 (1). I think it may break flow with previous slider. so keep

[Normal]

1. 00:05:226 (1) - Not the best placement imo.I feel like the curve from the 00:04:026 (3,4) is cut too soon and we come into the 1 at a weird angle. It would flow better as something like this: done
   
   
   
   Also maybe:
   
   
   Both are better imo.
   
   
2. 00:14:826 (1) - Try to give it more a curve and move it a bit down so that it's a consistent blanket with the 00:15:726 (2,3). That looks much nicer. done
   
   
   Also would fix spacingz
   
   
3. 00:17:826 (1,2) - Ugly imo. The flow feels more fitting if you make a blanket maybe like so: I feel OK. the blanket is overuse to me.
   
   
   
   
   
4. 00:31:626 (1) - This is the only diff that uses the custom soft clap 2 here. Do you want to replace it with the custom finish, or maybe add a finish? Maybe you could add the clap here in the other diffs because it sounds quite nice. done
   
   
5. 00:31:626 (1,2) - It might look sharper if you make the 1 the same angle as the straight portion of the 2. less dynamic imo. keep
   
   
   
   
6. 00:58:026 (1) - Remove the NC from here and add it to 00:59:226 (3) to follow the same pattern as previous at 00:55:326 (4,1). was that conflict with some teara said? well who cares. done.
   
   
7. 01:18:426 (3) - Try CTRL+G to make a little better flow. Then you could place the 01:19:626 (1) maybe underneath it and flowing into a blanket: That's a disruption of the following blanket. I prefer no change.
   
   
   
   
8. 01:21:426 (1) - This slider feels a bit out of place imo. The reason because the vocals start holding on the end of the slider. It would be nice if you could have a slider starting at 01:22:026 instead to hit as the vocals hold. This rhythm would be much more fitting imo: I would consider this as a break in the vocal. current pattern is also played well, so keep
   
   
   01:19:626 (1) to 01:24:426 (1)

[Easy]

1. 00:50:826 (1) - Add clap on the head along with finish?
   
   
2. 00:55:026 (3) - Add finish to slider end?
   
   
3. 01:22:026 (2) - Clap on the head? all above done

That's all there, pretty nice diff.

Bleh, sorry poor mod. disagree. one of the greatest mods I ever get. Nice mapset! :>

Aleks719 wrote:

General
i'd map song to the end, just few seconds :O Same as I talked to UnitedWeSin, I intend to map until here to let the player watch some SB.
2nd and 4th colours are both blue(one of them is lighter, but still). did you make it on target? Yep. The four colors represents four main characters in the cartoon.
..if you need, we can replace time of show up artist/title. as example, in a break time Yeah. thanks in advance.
*.osb is messy, in next time try to use more notepad, okay? :3 it's really hard to read it I will try next time >w<

Hard
00:29:226 (1) - sound starts to increase before start of spinner. i suggest to make it longer (start earlier + same end) or use inis break like that : http://puu.sh/2Ervb.jpg (same suggestions for Normal) personally I think current start time fells better... so no change
00:51:126 (2,3) - it looks too close, maybe ctrl+g for 3 and 4 and fix hitsounds? there are few places with same small spacing, if you made it on target then it's okay it flows well imo.
01:16:626 (8) - try to add claps to the start and to the end? it gives more interesting rhythm, imo done

Normal
01:28:926 (4) - i'd remove clap and use something more softer. vocal starts from here, that beat of clap sound gives strange feeling clap removed.
nothing else to say, very nice Normal

Easy
you could use tickrate 2 here for consistency Since it's not compulsory, I prefer to keep STR 1 to make the rhythm as it's somehow different from the other two.
hp drain+1 for consistency in stats? Umm, does that really matter? XD
i'd add spinner as in other diffs~ added

rest is fine, poke me after fixes

ryuu wrote:

very gorgeous voice
is there a full version of the song?
and
congrulations ~

Flower wrote:

I'm afraid that I haven't find such version. However you can try this one, which is its original version featuring Luo Tianyi.