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Topic Starter
<3 Nyaaa~ Thankyou!tasli wrote:
nice map
[Overall]
- What Starrodkirby86 said about hitsounds. It is purely optional though.
[Skin]
- For a basic skin, it's pretty well done.
[Kiai Time]
- Use it sparingly through the whole map? (Ex. chorus)
- If you're keeping the kiai time as is, it should start at 03:27:25, to look better.
- Check that the kiai time is used the same way on all difficulties.
[Timing]
- Offset feels abit early for me... Shouldn't be a problem anyway.
[All Difficulties]
01:23:47 (1) - A heart? IMO this is kinda... off. Heart sliders are pretty much overused, but that's just me.
[Whisper]
01:23:47 (1) - This doesn't sounds good... I am pretty sure length is incorrect, but it's still acceptable (rankable).
03:29:61 (2) - After playing [Fluently], this doesn't feels good. Shorten by 3 whole beats?
[Fluently]
00:44:73 (1) - Is this really necessary?
[Distinctly]
00:44:73 (1) - Same as [Fluently].
[Xen's Talkative]
- Hmm, yes... Don't focus on making the beatmap hard, focus on making it enjoyable. There are some triplets (That's what they're called right?) totally out of place. I must ask you to make them more consistent through the map, especially on the chorus.
- Play with the difficulty settings more. The current ones are identical as [Distinctly].
00:44:25 (1,2,3) - Same as [Fluently].
~ ~ ~
Ergh, I have a personal issue about sliders with many repeats, but no people is caring about it. So whatever...
- What Starrodkirby86 said about hitsounds. It is purely optional though.
[Skin]
- For a basic skin, it's pretty well done.
[Kiai Time]
- Use it sparingly through the whole map? (Ex. chorus)
- If you're keeping the kiai time as is, it should start at 03:27:25, to look better.
- Check that the kiai time is used the same way on all difficulties.
[Timing]
- Offset feels abit early for me... Shouldn't be a problem anyway.
[All Difficulties]
01:23:47 (1) - A heart? IMO this is kinda... off. Heart sliders are pretty much overused, but that's just me.
[Whisper]
01:23:47 (1) - This doesn't sounds good... I am pretty sure length is incorrect, but it's still acceptable (rankable).
03:29:61 (2) - After playing [Fluently], this doesn't feels good. Shorten by 3 whole beats?
[Fluently]
00:44:73 (1) - Is this really necessary?
[Distinctly]
00:44:73 (1) - Same as [Fluently].
[Xen's Talkative]
- Hmm, yes... Don't focus on making the beatmap hard, focus on making it enjoyable. There are some triplets (That's what they're called right?) totally out of place. I must ask you to make them more consistent through the map, especially on the chorus.
- Play with the difficulty settings more. The current ones are identical as [Distinctly].
00:44:25 (1,2,3) - Same as [Fluently].
~ ~ ~
Ergh, I have a personal issue about sliders with many repeats, but no people is caring about it. So whatever...
Topic Starter
> Gens
Thankyou~
(●´ω｀●) I fixed @all.
Thankyou~
(●´ω｀●) I fixed @all.
ไม่ได้มาดูอ่า โทดเน้อพลอย พอดีลงwindows ยังไม่เสด -3- 49 ดาวละ สู้ๆ
Topic Starter
แก้ให้แล้วนะ มันน้อย = =Xen wrote:
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Topic Starter
> taNa
ありがとおお〜 ☆⊂(´∀｀ )
たにいちゃん。 (/ω＼)
ありがとおお〜 ☆⊂(´∀｀ )
たにいちゃん。 (/ω＼)
Topic Starter
> zerosmart
Thanks! XD
ก็ไม่รู้นี่น่า ก็เลยถามดูว่าจะให้เพลงนี้ไหม
Thanks! XD
ก็ไม่รู้นี่น่า ก็เลยถามดูว่าจะให้เพลงนี้ไหม
First of, please dont put the first note on the exact offset. Make the offset 1 white tick earlier and for the coming offsets place them like 1/4 earlier.
[Whisper]
01:23:47 (1) - Maybe improve the design abit?
[Fluently]
01:23:47 (1) - Maybe improve the design abit?
02:04:57 (1,2) - Missing potentional notes/slider here?
03:13:55 (3) - Perfect example of why notes should be exactly on the offset. Try hitting this note sooner and you won't hear a soft sound I assure you.
[Distinctly]
I think the hitsounds are too soft here.
01:23:47 (1) - Maybe improve the design abit?
02:40:48 (1,2,3) - I don't like these triplets. I think I slider would be more appropiate. (You decide of course)
02:41:42 (1,2,3) - ^
[Xen's Talkative]
01:23:47 (1) - Maybe improve the design abit?
Cant find anymore here.
Very Nice map! Starred ^^
[Whisper]
01:23:47 (1) - Maybe improve the design abit?
[Fluently]
01:23:47 (1) - Maybe improve the design abit?
02:04:57 (1,2) - Missing potentional notes/slider here?
03:13:55 (3) - Perfect example of why notes should be exactly on the offset. Try hitting this note sooner and you won't hear a soft sound I assure you.
[Distinctly]
I think the hitsounds are too soft here.
01:23:47 (1) - Maybe improve the design abit?
02:40:48 (1,2,3) - I don't like these triplets. I think I slider would be more appropiate. (You decide of course
)02:41:42 (1,2,3) - ^
[Xen's Talkative]
01:23:47 (1) - Maybe improve the design abit?
Cant find anymore here.
Very Nice map! Starred ^^
Topic Starter
Thanks! >x<..Jeffro wrote:
First of, please dont put the first note on the exact offset. Make the offset 1 white tick earlier and for the coming offsets place them like 1/4 earlier.
[Whisper]
01:23:47 (1) - Maybe improve the design abit?
[Fluently]
01:23:47 (1) - Maybe improve the design abit?
02:04:57 (1,2) - Missing potentional notes/slider here? < done
03:13:55 (3) - Perfect example of why notes should be exactly on the offset. Try hitting this note sooner and you won't hear a soft sound I assure you. < done
[Distinctly]
I think the hitsounds are too soft here. < done
01:23:47 (1) - Maybe improve the design abit?
02:40:48 (1,2,3) - I don't like these triplets. I think I slider would be more appropiate. (You decide of course
02:41:42 (1,2,3) - ^ < no
[Xen's Talkative]
01:23:47 (1) - Maybe improve the design abit?
Cant find anymore here.
Very Nice map! Starred ^^
I want this beatmap ranked.
[Distinctly]
01:41:89 (1) - New Combo.
02:53:23 (1) - Remove new combo
02:53:70 (2) - New combo goes on here.
This map has many stars so I think I don't have to use a kudosu star
Starred
01:41:89 (1) - New Combo.
02:53:23 (1) - Remove new combo
02:53:70 (2) - New combo goes on here.
This map has many stars so I think I don't have to use a kudosu star
Starred
Topic Starter
> Nakata Yuji
Thank you >w< (and i want too XD)
> minyeob
my time* i'll come back to fixed in evening.
and.... u can give kudos star to me, if u want. lolz
u get kodus 1ea XD
Thank you >w< (and i want too XD)
> minyeob
my time* i'll come back to fixed in evening.
and.... u can give kudos star to me, if u want. lolz
u get kodus 1ea XD
เหอะๆ ลองเทสแล้วนะ เอฟเฟ็ค (สู่โค่ย) - -*
โอเคแล้วพลอย เหอะๆ
เป็นกำลังใจให้นะ ^^
โอเคแล้วพลอย เหอะๆ
เป็นกำลังใจให้นะ ^^
[Whisper]
01:23:47 (1) - There are times when slider art can be purely appreciated. This is the exact opposite. You can either move this by the end where it fits better or just scrape it altogether.
Don't put kiai on 03:27:72! Actually, don't put any kiai at all on this song... It just doesn't fit!
[Fluently]
01:23:47 (1) - Same as last difficulty.
01:46:62 (1) - Starting point is way too early.
Like I said before, the song doesn't seem to need any kiai at all.
[Distinctly]
The spacing seems to be ever-changing in this difficulty. There's no consistency. If you don't know what I'm talking about, just look at the horizontal streams and compare them to the diagonal streams. You'll see the difference.
Again with the unappreciative slider art on 01:23:47 (1).
01:46:62 (1) - Starting point is way too early.
Like I said before, the song doesn't seem to need any kiai at all.
[Xen's Talkative]
Again with the unappreciative slider art on 01:23:47 (1).
01:49:45 (1,2,3,4) - If you're aiming for symmetry, the last three notes don't seem to be in order.
Like I said before, the song doesn't seem to need any kiai at all.
Still needs more work, but this map might get through. Might.
01:23:47 (1) - There are times when slider art can be purely appreciated. This is the exact opposite. You can either move this by the end where it fits better or just scrape it altogether.
Don't put kiai on 03:27:72! Actually, don't put any kiai at all on this song... It just doesn't fit!
[Fluently]
01:23:47 (1) - Same as last difficulty.
01:46:62 (1) - Starting point is way too early.
Like I said before, the song doesn't seem to need any kiai at all.
[Distinctly]
The spacing seems to be ever-changing in this difficulty. There's no consistency. If you don't know what I'm talking about, just look at the horizontal streams and compare them to the diagonal streams. You'll see the difference.
Again with the unappreciative slider art on 01:23:47 (1).
01:46:62 (1) - Starting point is way too early.
Like I said before, the song doesn't seem to need any kiai at all.
[Xen's Talkative]
Again with the unappreciative slider art on 01:23:47 (1).
01:49:45 (1,2,3,4) - If you're aiming for symmetry, the last three notes don't seem to be in order.
Like I said before, the song doesn't seem to need any kiai at all.
Still needs more work, but this map might get through. Might.
Topic Starter
> vytalibus
Thankyou for suggestion and mod~ ^^
Thankyou for suggestion and mod~ ^^
2:57:488 - Kiai Time please. It works well here, I assure you. Just need 1 toggle here, bam, done. See what ya think.
It fits. Kiai Time looks *sweet* on this map, what with the BG and skin. It's perfect.
It fits. Kiai Time looks *sweet* on this map, what with the BG and skin. It's perfect.
Topic Starter
> Ekaru
Thx for Suggestion <3
> jamesleao
Thank you ~ *
Thx for Suggestion <3
> jamesleao
Thank you ~ *
Whisper
Fine to me
Distinctly
01:34:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Not spaced at all.
01:39:06 (3) - Not spaced to the last slider.
01:42:37 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Not spaced.
01:45:20 (1,2,3) - Better if it were a jump around the whole screen centered to the grid's center?
02:09:77 (4) - Not spaced.
02:11:66 (4) - Same as ^.
02:48:74 (1,2) - Not spaced.
02:49:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not spaced.
02:51:81 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Not spaced.
03:01:26 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not spaced.
Xen's Talkative
01:51:58 (2) - Not spaced.
03:32:33 (1) - The spinner sounds weird on where it ends, and shortening it to sound nice would be braking the bonus x2 guideline which you could try to break.
starre'd
Fine to me
Distinctly
01:34:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Not spaced at all.
01:39:06 (3) - Not spaced to the last slider.
01:42:37 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Not spaced.
01:45:20 (1,2,3) - Better if it were a jump around the whole screen centered to the grid's center?
02:09:77 (4) - Not spaced.
02:11:66 (4) - Same as ^.
02:48:74 (1,2) - Not spaced.
02:49:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not spaced.
02:51:81 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Not spaced.
03:01:26 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not spaced.
Xen's Talkative
01:51:58 (2) - Not spaced.
03:32:33 (1) - The spinner sounds weird on where it ends, and shortening it to sound nice would be braking the bonus x2 guideline which you could try to break.
starre'd
Topic Starter
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No problems were found in this map!
Topic Starter
Oh, Thankyou ~ Mafiamaster ^.^)/*
[Hard]
01:51:58 (2,3) This slide note is short than BGM. (この'silide note'はBGMより短いです。)
Tell me~ Tell me~
I like this music.
star さしあげますね。
01:51:58 (2,3) This slide note is short than BGM. (この'silide note'はBGMより短いです。)
Tell me~ Tell me~
I like this music.
star さしあげますね。
[Easy]
fine
[Hard]
fine
[insane]
03:32:21 (1) - I'd make this spinner totally quiet
that's all i can find.
really nice map
star
fine
[Hard]
fine
[insane]
03:32:21 (1) - I'd make this spinner totally quiet
that's all i can find.
really nice map
star
Topic Starter
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Easy:
01:40:952 (x) = place a circle
02:00:795 (1) = end --> 02:04:574
Hard:
00:29:850 (5) = new combo
02:58:669 (2, 3) = D: these circles are hidden
03:01:267 (1, 2, 3) = + 1/4
03:03:157 (1, 2, 3)= ^
Insane:
it's ok
starred
01:40:952 (x) = place a circle
02:00:795 (1) = end --> 02:04:574
Hard:
00:29:850 (5) = new combo
02:58:669 (2, 3) = D: these circles are hidden
03:01:267 (1, 2, 3) = + 1/4
03:03:157 (1, 2, 3)= ^
Insane:
it's ok
starred
Topic Starter
>xxheroxx
thankyou so much ^^
thankyou so much ^^
Tell~me~ Tell~me~
I love this map >w< <3
by the way, how about set preview point at 00:48:984?
Star~★
I love this map >w< <3
by the way, how about set preview point at 00:48:984?
Star~★
[Easy]
increase hitvolume by half a tick
hitsounds are used very badly
try to put them on the high points of the lines, not on every note for a phrase or two
map is very repetitive and boring
02:08:35 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,1,2) - this section is actually rather enjoyable and interesting, can you expand this concept into the rest of the map?
Alternately, I would be willing to create an Easy for this map to replace yours if you have too much trouble making them
[Hard]
01:01:74 (7,8,1,2) - hitsounds?
01:16:85 (7,8,1,2) - ^
01:36:93 (11) - NO. this is illegal self-overlap because it completely disguises the length of the slider
01:40:48 (8) - also illegal self-overlap
02:12:60 (2) - a bit ugly
02:17:33 (1,2,1,2,3) - hitsounds?
02:34:81 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - clapspam
03:01:26 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
03:32:44 (6) - try a finish instead
[Insane]
00:05:04 (6,6.etc) - try clap
00:21:11 (2) - half hidden
01:08:35 (2) - ^
01:57:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - clapspam
02:04:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:34:81 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:32:44 (1) - silent ending?
increase hitvolume by half a tick
hitsounds are used very badly
try to put them on the high points of the lines, not on every note for a phrase or twomap is very repetitive and boring
02:08:35 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,1,2) - this section is actually rather enjoyable and interesting, can you expand this concept into the rest of the map?
Alternately, I would be willing to create an Easy for this map to replace yours if you have too much trouble making them
[Hard]
01:01:74 (7,8,1,2) - hitsounds?
01:16:85 (7,8,1,2) - ^
01:36:93 (11) - NO. this is illegal self-overlap because it completely disguises the length of the slider
01:40:48 (8) - also illegal self-overlap
02:12:60 (2) - a bit ugly
02:17:33 (1,2,1,2,3) - hitsounds?
02:34:81 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - clapspam
03:01:26 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
03:32:44 (6) - try a finish instead
[Insane]
00:05:04 (6,6.etc) - try clap
00:21:11 (2) - half hidden
01:08:35 (2) - ^
01:57:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - clapspam
02:04:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:34:81 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:32:44 (1) - silent ending?
Topic Starter
thank you ^^Saturos-fangirl wrote:
Alternately, I would be willing to create an Easy for this map to replace yours if you have too much trouble making them
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Topic Starter
JJJ your mod is really Nice, Thankyou ^O^/
but this map don't have a Normal
but this map don't have a Normal
I really don't want to bubble unless there is a Normal. The difference in difficulty between Easy and Hard in this map alienates its playerbase to either people who are experienced at osu! or very new.
Topic Starter
oh, okay i will Done^^/
00:48:98 - Set audio preview.
There we go.
Topic Starter
lol i forgot >A<
*Thanks alot :3
*Thanks alot :3
fun map.. korean music go go!
nameless private from cat army stars~
nameless private from cat army stars~
Good map :3
Here's my extra star to increase your stars :3
Good luck XD
Here's my extra star to increase your stars :3
Good luck XD
Topic Starter
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Very well done. Ranked.
GJ. ;)
Topic Starter
thank you >/\<