From my Queue (: Let's Go!

[Stella]

01:30:714 (1) - add clap at 2nd repeat
01:32:126 (2) - ^
01:33:538 (1) - add clap at foot
01:34:597 (2) - ^
01:36:361 (1) - add clap at 2nd repeat
01:37:773 (2) - ^

[Sana]

I feel the S:C1 claps fits better to the song than standard Soft claps... simple test and see by yourself (: I feel S:C1 claps brings harmony from quiet & calm Chinese songs

01:31:067 (1) - add clap at 1st repeat
01:32:832 (3) - ^ at head
01:32:832 (3) - ^ at foot
01:36:714 (2) - ^ at 1st repeat
01:38:479 (4) - ^ at head

[Arche]

01:31:420 (3) - add clap
01:32:832 (3) - ^
01:34:244 (2) - ^
01:34:244 (2) - ^
01:38:479 (7) - ^ at slider's head
01:39:891 (2) - add clap

There's a testplay too ---> http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?mb3q8nltspcwm3s <--- I gone bad, since made this after some tries at least with no difficulty reducing mods (: and considering it's a low BPM song

Truly, it's rare I play insanes
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That's it ^.^

GOOD Luck on Ranking soon (: I liked truly the song

Att.

Sana was supposed to have S:C1 like other diffs too, thanks for pointing out. Also claps were added, I don't know why did I never put them, but I added the custom clap sound in folder.

Hi, mod from my queue.

[Stella]
00:36:361 (4,5) - odd that this is 0.9 spaced, change to 1.0
01:05:303 (1) - make this have a white midpoint, I think it looks a bit odd having just this one with the red anchor.
02:01:773 (2,3) - nazi, but fix this spacing a bit, (476,220) seems fine, adjust spacing to next object also.
02:18:009 (3) - move this to (312,144) so that it is centered like 02:20:832 (1) is.

[Sana]
00:52:597 (3,4,5) - I think this would look nice if this arrangement was made symmetrical across the y-axis
01:10:950 (1) - maybe remove the NC here?
01:11:656 (2) - and put it here instead so that that section of 4 1/2 notes are all the same color
01:58:950 (2) - nazi, but center this.
02:30:714 (6,1) - make these identical shapes across the y-axis for some nice symmetry

[Arche]
00:58:950 (4,1) - nazi, fix this this overlap

That's all, good luck!

All fixed for my parts, thanks!

Hi M4m
Static Noise Bird
Nash Studio Inc. - The Stone Unsealed
General
I’m sure the 2nd offset is off and it’s too much early than it should
And I’ve check and suggest this
BPM 73 176878
BPM 61 178110
Don’t forgot MANUAL Snap if you change it.
And highly suggest to use silent soft-sliderslide.wav file

Easy
This diff is ok but some blank between note can add more note like
00:16:950 and 00:19:773 00:39:538 00:42:361 and so on can add more note
It’s not too hard it’s just 85 bpm I think it’s fine to add more but it’s up to you.

Normal

It ‘s fine.

Hard ( I think this diff has too much OD and Drain is too low I suggest +2 Drain and – 1 OD)
01:41:656 (6) – delete this object?
02:36:009 (5,6,7,8) – 5 is not centre and it should be at x256y40
And I think you can arrange it better.


map for m4m
Various Artists - SUPER SHOT Compilation
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51037

well huh, my timing indeed was wrong, but so is yours, fixed in my way
soft-sliderslide.wav is already silent
there's not really anything else for my parts in your mods, so uh

due to massive demand, OD9 removed, I hope someone like Garven says that it's fine, though, so I can add it back

Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replays

Arche
The pacing felt a bit weird, the sliiders are a bit too fast for this song imo.
00:13:067 (5,1) - about this, I think you used hitosunds nicely here. I'm not a big fan of this pattern because it's often overmappingly used, but it's covered pretty well here.
I hope you can use the same pattern here too: 00:46:950 (5,1) - and 00:48:361 (3,4) - and 00:49:773 (6,1) -

in D.N.Angel's part the pacing felt slightly better to me.Thesliders still feel too fast for me though x_x
About the SB names, I had to tilt my head to read what it wrote. An outline on the names wouldn't hurt much either I think, to distinguish it more from the background.

Stella
on the contrary to arche, the pacing felt a bit too slow here o_o
I think, keeping the same slider velocity but making the spacing bigger so that overlaps would be avoided, won't be much harder for new players than what it is currently, but will enhance the pacing greatly.

Sana
ahh, and in the middle diff the pacing feels good to me, lol
nice diff here. now i want to go to bed too >~>

I never thought about outlining the names, thanks for the suggestion (and other comments)!

Modding queue~




So nice mapset

take star

OD is already 8, it cannot be any lower.

But others changed.

Hi from ♥Moe Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[Stella]
02:56:832 (3) - move to 02:56:879
02:58:522 (1) - start at 02:58:569
[Sana]
02:56:832 (5) - move to 02:56:879
02:58:522 (1) - start at 02:58:569
[Arche]
02:56:879 (3,4,5,6) - Unsnapped

Also you need someone who can help you with timing, because it's bad

Stella and Sana fixed, Arche had nothing unsnapped.

Hellzero wrote:

Also you need someone who can help you with timing, because it's bad

what are you implying :-)

嗨 您好~來幫你MOD:D
我從我們的Queue接你的case：）
稍微晚回 不好意思@@a

整體
無錯誤 沒什麼問題 下的音都有在拍子上 不錯

Easy
OK

Sana
01:04:950 (5) - +note

Hard


Ok 先mod這些 斟酌使用 如有問題可PM給我 謝謝:)

smallboat wrote:

嗨 您好~來幫你MOD:D
我從我們的Queue接你的case：）
稍微晚回 不好意思@@a

整體
無錯誤 沒什麼問題 下的音都有在拍子上 不錯

Easy
OK

Sana
01:04:950 (5) - +note - 插入的

Hard

SPOILER

00:13:773 (1) - +whistle - 修好的
00:16:597 (1) - ^ - ^
00:20:832 (4) - ^ - ^
00:26:126 (2) - +note - 不修好
00:44:832 (1) - +whistle - 修好的
00:47:656 (1) - ^ - ^
00:49:067 (4) - ^ - ^
00:50:479 (1) - ^ - ^
02:40:597 (4) - 尾端拿掉whistle應該比較好? - 却我喜欢它

Ok 先mod這些 斟酌使用 如有問題可PM給我 謝謝:)

关于来晚了不要担心

谢谢〜

Request from Forum PM

I'm sorry, but I can't provide a full modding ...btw I've checked the timing, here's my suggestion of timing on the last section:


Good luck

sounds fine to me~

feel free to recheck anytime you can provide a full mod

Hi~ from my M4M queue

i think the maps good enough so just suggestions._.

[Stella]
CS+1?
00:14:479 (2) - 觉得很奇怪
00:52:597 (1) - ^
02:27:891 (2) - ^
00:49:773 - 加whistle

[Sana]
CS-1?
00:48:361 (6) - 觉得略丑
00:52:950 (4) - 太弯了吧= =
whistle在最后加的很奇怪, 改掉这些:
02:39:538 - 放到 02:39:185
02:41:656 - 放到 02:42:009
02:45:185 - 放到 02:44:832
02:47:303 - 放到 02:47:656
02:50:832 - 放到 02:50:479
02:52:950 - 放到 02:53:303
02:56:479 - 放到 02:56:126

[Arche]
我觉得没必要这么跳= =
00:19:420 (1) - 放到 00:18:714 (5) 下面
00:39:185 (1) - 放到 00:39:185 (1) 下面
00:44:126 (6) - 略丑
02:38:479 (1) - 放到 02:37:066 (8) 下面
02:42:361 (1,2,3) - 真鬼畜
02:48:361 (2,3,4) - ^


Good luck and wait for you mod

Hi there~~ mod from popner's queue

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. the minimum resolution of background is 800*600

[Arche]

1. 00:51:185 (3,4,5) - here's a "misplacement beat" that i would suggest to make the beat around here like this:
   
2. 01:00:361 (2) - weird repeat tick...split it and try this beat?
   
3. 01:03:185 (3) - change to a 1/1 slider?
4. 01:14:479 (3) - similar to 01:00:261 -

[Sana]

1. a general suggestion: try to avoid stop slider on long-white ticks
2. 00:52:597 (3,4,5) - two 1/2 sliders may be better than current
3. 01:52:597 (1,2) - try this beat?
   

[Stalla]

1. 02:57:700 (4) - unsnapped

that's all.. and i suppose you map still needs more works~~ good luck :>

trying new simpler changelog thing
[buhei]
00:49:773 in Stella fixed
00:44:126 and 02:38:479 - 02:37:066 stack fixed from Arche
[Scorpiour]
it needs more work yet you did leave me with a small mod? ;A;
well whatever, I'll look for few more mods, I just hope I don't need 60SP for a bubble like on Dreamland Dub heauheuhuae.
all fixed, BGs resized because couldn't find a bigger version of them, and I'm not changing them

thanks~

long mod =/= useful mod, just try the beats i showed to u and apply them to other places where i didn't mention.

some more general suggestions:

your SV is too high for such a peaceful music that make your map felt "plate".

symmetrical placement is not always bad but i don't think it is suitable here.

I wasn't doubting about it being useful, especially as I fixed everything mentioned

SV is not too high, opinions, I guess

I'll check what I can do with Arche (and maybe Sana), judging by no suggestions in Stella at all, means it's fine for you

few adjustments done in Arche

hi!

General
Add Yasora and DarknessAngel to tags

Stella
02:41:303 - Add something here; i think it'll be more natural to hit here with the emphasis, especially for beginners

Sana
01:28:597 (1) - Whistle on head if ur following the whistle-every-2 white-tick pattern

Arche
00:23:656 (4) - Ctrl + G, for better cursor flow imo
00:44:832 (1) - Make this touch the (6) like the other 1/4 patterns
01:39:185 (1) - Delete NC and put it on the next note?
02:01:773 (2) - Maybe somehow stick (2) here like this lol http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691574
02:58:532 (1) - Hmm I don't really agree with completely silencing this? the guitar's kinda special here =v=; also use 1/12, i screwed the warning & if you hear closely, I think there should also be another reverse

very lovely and relaxing

everything fixed
also the last slider already is a 1/12 slider
thanks~

ok oops lol

missing tags sry

yus, had misspelt darknessangel in arche and completely missed yasora

updated

compensation cup

What's with the super short kiai time? O.o And there is a duplicate of your easy diff. Also, u usually need only one point in the middle for normal curved sliders. You sliders have like 5 points of which many are unnecessary

STELLA
00:30:009 (1) - Move to x344 y228
That's all

SANA
00:46:244 (3,4,5) - Make it curve smoother (most likely move 5 up a bit)

Not much. Sorry... :T

You have been modded out by Yurun Neram~

Sana is mainly made with old slider system, that's why there are a lot of sliderpoints. They are not unnecessary, as they help me to make the design smoother.

Updated, searching for a rebub.

heh, I'll try to not pop it again

thanks =w=

Hi.

This needs to be popped for now.
Seems there's something going on with your timing here.

With the assistance of Garven, here's what we got.

BPM: 80 Offset: 176,126
BPM: 77 Offset: 176,501
BPM: 75 Offset: 177,280
BPM: 70 Offset: 177,680
BPM: 62 Offset: 178,108
BPM: 66 Offset: 178,591

Also at - 02:58:591 - the repeat slider is in 1/6 by the way (Applies to Arch difficulty)

I don't mean to impose anything or any sort, but we do sense some noticable timing discrepancies.

Do you mean 1/16? It most definitely isn't 1/6. Well anyway, switched from 1/12 to 1/16.

Timing fixed, also. Thanks~

Hello SNB, my part of the m4m!

[General]

The BG looks kinda blurry since its small but i guess it's okay
I really really dislike your combo colors. You used only 2, and they are too brown-ish. Maybe you could add a somehow reddish combo colour or add some variation.. it's too boring like this. These are the combos i'd use:
^the red combo colour there fits with the gem that the girls have in the hands in easy diff:3
Folder seems okay

[Easy]

00:17:303 (2,3) - You could improve this blanket, move the end of the slider 1 grid down.
00:30:009 (1) - Don't think this NC is really necessary
00:54:714 (2) - In order to have better flow, i'd put this slider here:
01:22:950 (4) - Maybe put it a bit more up? D: its too low
01:25:067 (2,3) - This looks better imo:
01:39:891 (1) - Move the return point to x228 y132 for a smoother curve
01:53:303 (2) - 1 grid up
01:53:303 (2,1) - This looks ugly like this, try to copy (1) and paste it on the place of (2) or something like that so they are equal and nicer looking.
02:01:067 (1) - Make it curved like this for a nicer shape? You can add a middle point at x180 y316. Then fix DS with the next slider
02:18:009 (1) - If you wanna make this more consistent, put it exactly where 02:15:185 (1) - was.

Nothing else, I like how you used the slider ticks for some beats.

[Normal]

00:18:009 (2) - This should be at x260 y248 for a better blanket
00:30:009 (3,4,5) - In order to flow better with (2,1)s line, move it a bit down:
00:55:420 (6) - Looks much better at x268 y56 imo
01:04:244 (3,4,5,1) - This curve could be better, like this:
01:24:361 (3) - As this note sound more quiet in the music, i would remove the whistle, sounds much better :3
01:32:126 (2) - Ehh this shape looks ugly with (1) :c maybe make a linear slider:
You decide whether or not you copypaste it to (3) afterwards :3
01:39:185 (1) - Move to x412 y220 for better flow
02:04:244 (8,1) - I would move both of these more to the left, like, put (8) at x164 y284 or something
02:44:832 (2) - Whistle sounds better at start instead of end
02:48:361 (3,4) - They look unpolite, make their curves nicer :3 maybe delete them and add them again so they use the new slider algorythm
02:49:773 (1,2,3,4) - As i pointed out in the previous whistle suggestion, following the 1/1 white tick for whistles would be better. Like, you can put the whistle at 02:50:126 (2) - 's return, and so on.

Nicely done.

[Hard/Insane last diff]

00:19:420 (1) - Maybe this note should be further away from 00:18:714 (5) - ?
00:32:479 (2) - It touches the slider too much, move to x199 y186
00:46:950 (5,1) - Don't think it fits to curve it that much, do this:
00:52:597 (5) - NC?
01:01:773 (4,5,1,2,3) - Make a perfect square
01:06:361 (2) - I would delete whistle
01:10:950 (1) - Again, is it necessary to curve it that much D:?
01:22:244 (1) - I think it's funnier to play if you add a simple note here and another one at 01:22:950 (x) - with nothing in between, or a long slider there.
01:25:773 (2) - The blue tick feels weird :/ try a different thing? Like 2 small sliders so you dont put anything at the blue tick
02:43:244 (2) - I don't say it doesn't fit but.. it's kinda.. unexpected o_o as it's the first of many triplets you could make it a small return slider or something
02:58:591 (1) - I love this sound but you made the volume to low, maybe increase to 40ish.

Nothing else, nice and relaxing stuff.

If you apply some of these changes (which, in some cases, are kinda vital for the map) Kei will most likely come and take a look at this because the map will be much better. I'll talk to her.
Good luck!

Most things changed. Thanks~

Hi ~ Static Noise Bird ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions




OK ~ That's all ~ soooo relax map/bgm ~

Call me back recheck ~ When you are ready ~

Asking DarknessAngel about that thing in Arche when possible. Will adjust OD to 7.
Everything in Stella fixed.
Thanks~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Arche]

[*]02:36:361 (6) - Stack on 02:36:361 (6) -,looks much better.

//because 02:36:009 (5) should be y-axis, and 02:35:656 (4,5,6,7,8) should be pentagon, I cannot move this note.
btw,I think time between 02:34:597 (1,6) are large enough so there is no difference between none stacking and stacked perfectly.
[/list]

ty for mod ~ ^^

Go Rank! !

Thought I'd drop by to recheck this map.

Was alright the last time I ran this through, except maybe I still find the sliders at - 01:04:597 (5,1) - on the Arche difficulty kinda odd.
As a note, the repeat slider at the end of that is going on 1/16*

With nothing else, here you go.

I don't understand, why is the user ranking so low? The maps fit the song just fine, and apart from some far jumps in the Arche difficulty, I have no trouble passing all three maps, and I'm not even a good Hard level osu player.

Don't let the score mislead you, give this song a go before deciding.

yeah haters gonna hate

gratz snb

that rating* ;_;

yay!

Congrats SNB :3

Requetecongratz~

Kurowolfe wrote:

I don't understand, why is the user ranking so low? The maps fit the song just fine, and apart from some far jumps in the Arche difficulty, I have no trouble passing all three maps, and I'm not even a good Hard level osu player.

Don't let the score mislead you, give this song a go before deciding.

Kuro haters everywhere. SnB's map is cool :3

Haters everywhere, oh my god.
Gratz for ranking, I quite enjoyed the map.

thanks~

was muted when this was ranked gg

gg.

Really enjoyed this song and map. Congrats on rank