Tomohito Nishiura - St. Mystere · forum

Mashley

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

Mashley 2009-10-09T15:06:24+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 15 October 2009 at 13:21:08

Artist: Tomohito Nishiura
Title: St. Mystere
Source: Professor Layton and the Curious Village
BPM: 96.97
Filesize: 2103kb
Play Time: 01:14
Difficulties Available:

Curious (2.26 stars, 82 notes)
Puzzling (4.52 stars, 150 notes)

Download: Tomohito Nishiura - St. Mystere
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Mashley 2009-10-15T20:21:23+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

Teara

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Joined June 2009

Teara 2009-10-09T15:33:18+00:00

Loved this! I cant find anything to criticize.

Just that one cruel jump in Puzzling [00:37:24 (1)] or rather, surprising. Broke my combo there.

Timing seems to be on the spot.

but

Needs longer lead in time IMO. Starts to fast. =p

~star

Good job

Jinxy

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Joined February 2009

Jinxy 2009-10-09T15:37:17+00:00

I will give you a large star. Heck, just compare it with the Sun.

Lokamp

2,530 posts

Joined January 2009

Lokamp 2009-10-09T18:25:00+00:00

Just one word: Offset: 160

Everything else is WONDERFUL! Have an happy star. ^^

Matma Rex

586 posts

Joined March 2009

Matma Rex 2009-10-10T08:20:55+00:00

Weee~

[Curious]
Pretty random hitsounds. First half of map is almost completely silent, and the the second part is full of loud sounds. That doesn't play nice D:
00:06:93 (3) - (nazi) this can be straightened a bit to fit (1) better.
00:53:32 (4,5,6) - (nazi) make nicer triangle (6 one grid up)?

[Puzzling]
Seconds part's hitsounds are a bit weird, too, but here first part has some finishes and things, so it sounds much better.
00:14:66 (7) - move 1 grid up to make it overlap with (5) less.
00:17:44 (1,2,3) - I don't like this part. Make the 1/2 shorter.
00:31:05 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinda ugly jumps, made me hit 100 on most of these sliders.
00:36:62 (8,1) - that's a HUGE jump. Maybe flip 00:37:24 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) vertically to make it smaller?
00:44:66 (1) - if these are question marks, they should have dots under them. You can shorten them by 3/4 (ending on blue tick) and place notes 1/1 later (blue tick, too). For reversed q. marks do it likefor regular ones, but when you're finished press Ctrl+R to reverse.

Starred.

Sushi

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Joined October 2008

Sushi 2009-10-10T21:37:14+00:00

Layton <3

Offset : 150

[Curious]
Fine~

[Puzzling]
00:57:05 (1,3,7) - align these

Nicely mapped!
you have my star!

Jarby

2,963 posts

Joined August 2008

Jarby 2009-10-11T09:16:28+00:00

Increase the mp3's volume.

Puzzling:

00:10:04 (10) - New combo.
00:10:35 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why is this suddenly easier?
00:40:97 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:44 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:45:92 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:48:39 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:54:56 - Make a normal-sliderslide that is the same as the soft-sliderslide.

Curious:

The offset is different.

00:10:02 (6) - New combo.
00:10:64 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:21:77 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:44:66 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:47:75 (3) - New combo, curve it somehow.
01:11:88 (3) - New combo.
01:14:35 (1) - Remove new combo.

taihw

11 posts

Joined October 2009

taihw 2009-10-12T06:20:27+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Mashley

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Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

Mashley 2009-10-12T06:35:55+00:00

taihw wrote:
general:

1. I think the timing is a tad early. i'm average 35ms late when playing the easier difficulty.
2. I see a lot of copypasta sliders.

curious:

SPOILER
00:10:02 (6) - start combo
00:21:77 (1),
00:45:28 (1) - no new combo
00:54:56 (1) - woah where did these sound come from?

puzzling:

SPOILER
00:06:33 (5,6,7,8),
00:17:46 (1,2,3) - where are you getting these eighth notes (red tick) from? it makes it sound like swing (jazz). I would shorten those sliders by one red tick.
00:40:97 (1),
00:45:92 (1,1,1) - no new combo. and obvious copypasta.
same as above for the sudden loud hitsounds.

overall:

Playable, but sounds and looks weird. Vary the sliders a bit, it's the main thing holding me back from giving a star. Although it doesn't affect the playability it really impacts my perceived quality of the map.
Don't be afraid to make longer combos - It doesn't apply as much to this slow song, but it can get really confusing if there are more than one (1)s on the screen.

-tai

No.