From Korean Modding Team
- Easy
00:59:465 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/2ufwx this pattern is more readable imo ( since this is Easy diff, and you didn't use redticks many )- Normal
01:12:756 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/2ufth considering this
01:26:047 (1) - same as Other diffs
01:18:832 (5,6,7) - same as 01:12:756 (5,6,7) - here- Hyper
Considering AR -1 , current AR is bit fast imo
00:44:275 (5) - touching hp bar
01:06:110 (5) - i think NC here and 01:06:300 (1) - delete NC is better ( considering music and pattern )
01:29:085 (1) - Default FInish isn't better?- Hard
00:07:819 (3) - touching HP bar
00:27:756 (5) - i think 1/2 slider is better than 1/4
01:26:047 (1) - same as Insane ( but default )
01:28:705 (4) - how about adding a note like 00:03:642 (4) - here?- Insane
01:07:819 (1) - i'm recommend this slider make stack with 01:07:438 (7) - this slider , current pattern is nice but little bit hard to hit this slider when playing , since there are no sliders which have 1/8 beatsnap, it will be better if you changing it ( or at least reudce 1 reoeat 01:07:438 (7) - this slider )
01:26:047 (1) - how about finish?
Good luck~