yo guys
General- EDIT: offset should be 79(-4) , it plays so much better from this (noticed after playing through the insane with OD9)
don't forget to resnap all greenlines, notes and preview point if necessary
- probably add tag : "drum and bass ram" to specify from abbreviated word "dnb" and ram that's from
Ram RecordsRue's Easy01:08:455 (3) - this slider doesn't sound well much , still good though that you created the new intuitive rhythm
but problem arises when the end of this slider also doesn't end well either
so basically this slider should start at 01:08:629 instead. the end of this slider with Sampleset : Normal , Additions : Soft to be corresponding with 01:08:106 (2) - as well
(don't forget to replace with whistle on the tail of slider instead and beware of spacing at 01:09:501 (4) - as well !)
01:18:222 (1,2) -
ohh spacing 
, decrease it from 1.6 to 1.2 as well since this is the easiest diff D:01:21:013 (1,2) -
spacing01:23:803 (1,2,1) -
spacing, do something please..01:30:780 (2) - this slider ends better at 01:31:303 , the obvious sound appears at this point , beware of spacing after fixing this
01:36:362 (4) - apply the same logic with the above. It sounds obviously better at 01:36:885
01:41:943 (4) - ^
01:44:734 (2) - I would move this slider to x:68 y:307 or something to avoid spacing error, it isn't that issue when you can make the blanket look good but I would avoid it for the easiest diff
01:47:524 (2) - same logic as mentioned
01:53:106 (2) - ^
01:58:687 (2) - ^
02:14:559 (1,2) -
BIG02:15:431 (3) - same logic as mentioned
02:16:827 (1,2,1) - spacing a bit big, but not an issue
02:26:594 (2) - ^
02:32:176 (5) - this slider on the tail (repeat point) ends really well like what I mentioned ._. so that's why I want you to fix them I mentioned for this kind of rhythm
I personally don't get why some spacings are broken, they don't look neat to me, the rhythms are nice but some of them that I mentioned were misplaced imo
I hope you will do something about this Rue and I know you will do well after this
RLC's Normal02:31:129 (2) - I would whistle on the head for this slider, quite similar to 02:32:699 (5) - but different reason? maybe
because I can hear some high pitch on the head that sounds similar to the end of this slider so that's why I mentioned
Vass' Hard00:46:478 (5) - I would change this to a circle instead because the end of slider isn't that necessary when it doesn't anything in the music
but actually it's comfortable to play with slider
so your choice to fix it or not
00:49:269 (5) - in my opinion, this slider isn't necessary, the latter somewhat like 00:51:710 (4) - 00:54:501 (4) - 00:57:292 (6) - are enough as you see
I tried removing it and it was fine totally
, you may want to keep this for consistency with 00:46:478 (5) - (probably)
01:55:896 (4,5) - I would change the rhythm to this screenshot. what I felt was it follows the exactly same sound with 01:54:501 (1,2,3) - . I felt it empty when the slider at 01:55:896 (4) - doesn't give a sound on 01:56:071, if you changed to a circle, it would sound more fitting
Nsanesome positions that I felt uncomfortable will be mentioned , nothing related to the rhythms themselves so take this as a suggestion
01:37:408 (5,6) - I find them hard to read personally but they were well-constructed so let you consider fixing it or follow this 01:59:210 (3,4,5,6,7) - ?
02:07:931 (5,6) - I would remove 02:08:367 (6) - and end this slider at 02:08:367 instead because the sound from this point 02:07:931 to 02:08:367 gives me the feel somewhat dragging (hard to explain, like holding) for some reason as you did in other points such as 02:24:850 (5) - 02:27:641 (6) -
I think holding the slider and then hook at 02:08:455 (1) - will give the better feel
(current stream a bit breaking the flow imo)
nice jump map, I so love it xD
call me back after applying these
