nullPointLOL wrote:

Hi again!

[GbL's Difficulty] (Nicely done, too~)

[01:18:463] -

This doesn't sound good at all. I highly recommend moving those Three one tick back. Starting right on [01:18:371]. And they should sound like Finish - nothing - Clap. That 4th beat after those three, it's nice, you should repeat the same thing at [01:19:852]. Fix

[01:23:925] (5-11) - You're not following rhythm here and definitely not following lyrics either... Fix

[01:29:664] - Add a note there? (With finish) Done

[01:57:066] - Clap? Done
[02:00:028] - Clap? Done
[02:07:434] - ^ Done
[02:08:915] - ^ Done
[02:10:396] - Spinner with ^ Done
[02:11:692] - Maybe add at the beginning, Finish. Done
[02:12:433] - Finish Done
[02:13:173] - Finish Done


Well, I don't like patterns to be broken. Maybe add Claps every four white ticks?

[02:44:277] - Maybe end the final slider at this point? Done
[03:04:643] - remove this? Done
[03:05:014] - Finish Done
[03:05:754] - Finish Done
[03:06:495] - Finish Done
[03:13:993] - add a note? Done
[03:17:048] - End slider here? (I don't like it though, but sounds better) Done

This of course, it's my opinion...

minyeob wrote:

Give kudosu to deepsea/nullpoint

[GBL]
01:18:64 (1) - Timing is not good:; it's unreadable (Make this 1/4 beat later, to red tick)

That's all for me!
Nice Linkin Park map!
Kudosu star for great new mapper

minyeob wrote:

Give kudosu to deepsea/nullpoint

[GBL]
01:18:64 (1) - Timing is not good:; it's unreadable (Make this 1/4 beat later, to red tick)

That's all for me!
Nice Linkin Park map!
Kudosu star for great new mapper

tieff wrote:

[GbL's Diff]
00:45:97 (7,8,9) - Fix spacing. done
00:51:71 (7,8) - ^ done
00:52:08 (9,10) - ^ done
01:05:78 (3,4) - ^ done

Star.

tieff wrote:

[Easy]
01:28:55 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:58:72 (1,2) - ^

[gdeath's Normal+]
01:28:73 (3) - How about add finish on end of slider?
02:10:95 (3) - Place slider here 02:11:13, add note here 02:10:95.
02:17:80 (5) - Whistle?

[Hard]
All good. I love it.

[GbL's Diff]
00:45:97 (7,8,9) - Fix spacing.
00:51:71 (7,8) - ^
00:52:08 (9,10) - ^
01:05:78 (3,4) - ^

Star.

fartownik wrote:

~Starry

mrtn wrote:

set a preview point

[easy]
increase the hitsound volume at the chorus fixed

[gdeath's normal]
00:24:49 - add a note here fixed

[hard]
reinsert the breaks all fixed

[gbl difficulty]
00:58:00 (8) - new combo
01:01:33 (4) - ^
01:03:18 (11) - ^
01:03:92 (14) - ^
01:04:67 (17) - ^
01:50:58 (4) - ^
01:51:32 (7) - ^
01:52:06 (10) - ^
03:10:01 (6,1) - this overlap is not allowed. Let the spinner start 1/4 later
03:20:75 (1) - add a finish waiting for GbL

mrtn wrote:

[gbl difficulty]
00:58:00 (8) - new combo
01:01:33 (4) - ^
01:03:18 (11) - ^
01:03:92 (14) - ^
01:04:67 (17) - ^
01:50:58 (4) - ^
01:51:32 (7) - ^
01:52:06 (10) - ^
03:10:01 (6,1) - this overlap is not allowed. Let the spinner start 1/4 later
03:20:75 (1) - add a finish

gdeath wrote:

[GbL's Difficulty]
01:39:29 (11) - new combo Done
01:45:58 (9) - ^ Done
02:37:42 (1,2) - del two notes and make spinner start on 02:37:42 Fix

Agent Spin Here wrote:

GbL's Dificulty
00:45:60 (1) - Spacing Done

tieff wrote:

BPM: 162
Offset: 12 635

Fix and I'll bubble.

[GbL]
02:19:85 (1,2) - Spacing.
02:50:04 (5,6,7) - Fix spacing.

xxheroxx wrote:

GbL:

03:20:783 (1) = end at 03:25:227 (i'm not sure)

xxheroxx wrote:

Easy:

is this a Easy?... looks a Normal D: it's Easy , really ! @_@

gdeath:

It's ok

Hard:

It's ok

starred

Larto wrote:

Kiai:
I noticed you guys place the Kiai start at the beginning of the vocals in each chorus. That looks a bit weird. I'd let the
First Kiai start here: 01:05:968
Second Kiai start here: 01:53:375
(Another Kiai fountain here? 02:17:079. Optional)
Third Kiai start here: 02:46:709
Also, if you DON'T follow my advice, at least make the Kiai the same on all difficulties. At the moment, the Kiai in gdeath's difficulty is a bit different.

All about kiai was fixed.

Timing:
Offset +5. It's not important though. I don't change, cuz i prefer james decide this

Overall:
All diffs except gdeath's normal could use more hitsounds. There are only few claps and finishes on all diffs, which makes the map sound a bit boring. Fixed, i think~

GBL's difficulty:
Decrease the Overall Difficulty a bit? I don't know. Done.

abalee wrote:

GBL's
02:37:26 (10) - 我更喜欢删了这个note... Deleted.

gdeath wrote:

everyone unify KIAI time,plz

the first KIAI:01:05:41-->>01:27:63
the second KIAI:02:04:67-->>02:15:04

i have fixed.x.x

Larto wrote:

Kiai:
I noticed you guys place the Kiai start at the beginning of the vocals in each chorus. That looks a bit weird. I'd let the
First Kiai start here: 01:05:968
Second Kiai start here: 01:53:375
(Another Kiai fountain here? 02:17:079. Optional)
Third Kiai start here: 02:46:709
Also, if you DON'T follow my advice, at least make the Kiai the same on all difficulties. At the moment, the Kiai in gdeath's difficulty is a bit different.

Timing:
Offset +5. It's not important though.

Overall:
All diffs except gdeath's normal could use more hitsounds. There are only few claps and finishes on all diffs, which makes the map sound a bit boring.

Hard:
00:45:41 (5) - That's the only note that threw me off. It doesn't sync anything in the song imho. Remove?

Easy:
I'd call this Normal but suit yourself.

Popping for hitsounds and kiai.

abalee wrote:

hey man, when i had help you lol
hmm i will have some mod ATM....
i'd better use Chinese =_______________=

offset的确早了点，我加了近15ms。不过实际上你现在用的offset我玩起来也不太差，按larto的加一点吧。记得resnap all note..

normal+:
00:13:37 (2,3) - 间距问题
00:23:74 (2,3,4) - 不同时间间隔的note叠放的一起很难抓timing的...在slider尾更是如此...分开放会好点。
00:53:74 (1) - 如果按人声的话放前1/2然后延长1/2。当然也可不改。
02:00:41 (X) - 按人声的话这里有note。不加也罢

GBL's
02:37:26 (10) - 我更喜欢删了这个note...

others' all fine.

plz follow Larto's suggestion , it will have a big improvement to your map

anyway stard

GbL wrote:

Ty too. ;}

1. This is too hard for a newbie! The slider velocity and Overall Difficulty is too high

1. Maybe use more finishes?

Gens wrote:

[Easy]

1. This is too hard for a newbie! The slider velocity and Overall Difficulty is too high

yea , i remake the Easy diff
02:13:93 (1,1) - I'd merge these 2 spinners. nope

[Hard]
Awesome~

Good beatmap! Hard was the difficulty I liked the most. Good job!

Dakeyrus wrote:

Normal

01:53:195 - (3,4) - The gap between these two is too large for the timing. Should be closer together, like how you had them at 01:17:639 (3,4).
01:54:677 - (3,4) - ^
01:59:121 - (3,4) - ^


The other difficulties are good, GbL's Hard is worth the 10 million points considering the difficult spacing. Fix those errors in Normal and I'll bubble.

JarJarJacob wrote:

Easy:

01:53:38 - Add kiai.
02:05:23 - Add kiai.

Hard:

00:47:63 - Move inherited section 1/4 back.
00:50:04 (3) - Move inherited section 1/4 back.
00:53:56 - Move inherited section 1/4 back.
00:59:49 - Move inherited section 1/4 back.
01:03:28 (6) - Remove. All 1/4 circles in this difficulty are pretty annoying.
01:53:38 - Add kiai.
02:05:23 - Add kiai burst.

minyeob wrote:

[GBL]
01:05:41 (Kiai) -> Compare with 01:53:38 (kiai)
I suggest adding this kiai from 01:05:97 (4) instead of 01:05:41(1)
kudo starred for old map.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[GbL's Difficulty]
03:13:38 (1,2,3) - Everything from here to the end flows terribly and doesn't go with the music at all.