blissfulyoshi wrote:

Offset: 21342 (but I'm not that good at this)

Easy:
snap everything to the timeline, it does not look like you resnapped things after you changed the offset
00:21:52 (1) - this is going to make people very sad to restart the song. You are going to have to do a spinner, wait 15s, and then play the rest of the map. You might as well just not have this spinner. deleted
00:51:16 (5,6,7) - move back half a beat to follow the lyrics because all your sliders seem to follow the lyrics not the drums fixed
01:13:56 (1,1,1) - this new combo spam seems random fixed
01:25:41 (1,1,1) - " " fixed

Hard:
01:13:18 (1,1,1,1) - same as easy fixed
01:18:74 (6) - new combo fixed
01:25:03 (1,1,1,1) - same as easy fixed
01:52:06 (1) - 1k bonus spinner (illegal) don't need ,THX
01:57:62 (6) - shorten by half a beat fixed
02:00:58 (1,1,1,1) - this new combo spam seems random fixed
02:12:43 (1,1,1,1) - " " fixed
02:37:79 (1) - illegal to have a note and a spinner overlap fixed
02:37:79 (1,1,1,1) - illegal to have spinners overlap don't need ,THX
get rid of the final timing section because there is no need to turn off kiai when the song ends

Star.

tsukamaete wrote:

oh danmmit add reply faild

I have to rewite

hmm..
The beatmap not bad ,anything goes well
but just a little boring
may be u can make this map more interesting?
example jumps note or more high distance spacing

It's just my suggestions
have a star!

Teara wrote:

gdeath's normal+

00:14:12 (4) - New Combo
00:15:60 (1) - ^
00:17:08 (1) - ^
00:18:56 (1) - ^
00:19:68 (1) - Remove combo
00:20:05 (1) - New Combo
00:21:53 (1) - ^
00:23:01 (1) - ^
01:06:89 (1) - New Combo?

I would use kiai here > 02:29:281 to 02:34:835 ? this is a epic part of the song. should have kiai!

Nice beatmap. Maybe put Overall Difficulty on 5? it feels so slow otherwise, it it plays a lot better for me and more fun

eee wrote:

[gdeath]
00:24:40 (break) - you want this break like that? or reinsert?, if you want to keep it "ouendan/eba style" I would start it 00:24:49
01:50:21 (6) - one more reverse would be nice to match the following slider :/

GbL wrote:

[gdeath]:

00:24:72 - fix break

eee wrote:

[Easy]
No real concerns here~
I just felt that it was very short ><. 40-50 seconds is fine, but very short for a non TV-Size


[Hard]
00:52:51 (8) - why doesn't this begin on the 1/4 red tick here 00:52:450
01:04:67 (1) - this MUST begin back 1/2 or removed or whatever to make it longer. There is a rule in which a spinner must be long enough to get 2000+ bonus points when auto plays it, this spinner gets 1000
02:37:79 (1,1,1,1) - sorry, this is Illegal by osu rules and regulations too. Spinner ends and beginnings cannot be stacked on top of each other. you can begin every additional spinner 1/4-1/8 after the end of the previous one.
etna sliders are a nice touch ><

GbL wrote:

Very nice map, i liked it.

[Hard]:

02:19:65: circle here
02:25:76: ^


Star.

Armin wrote:

Let's mod! D:
[Hard]
01:52:06 Unrankable spinner
02:38:63 ^
02:39:37 ^
02:40:11 ^

That's all.
(oh, and star.)

Breeze wrote:

Linkin Park, great

说中文没问题吧?
黑色的note建议改下颜色,不大看得清楚 把黑色换成绿色，不知道效果如何
OFFSET也是建议三个diff.都用同一个的比较好,OFFSET:12645 我自己感觉没太大必要:)

[easy]
02:14:835 - 这个timing section貌似没什么意义,不过这个不是什么问题... 我弄小了一点声音

[hard]
02:53:905 (5,6,7,8) - 这里可以用jump规则排列到角落,只是纯建议而已... 我个人不太喜欢JUMP，所以谢谢你的意见:)


很棒的map
star for you
and another kudosu star~

and thx for your stars and kds

nullPointLOL wrote:

Hi again!

I have some suggestions if you like.

I think the last kuai section should start 02:45:203 (I prefer only That section with kuai, but that's probably just me xD)

And from there... you definitely have to make a hitsound pattern that's reaally constant and a little annoying, but since almost everybody likes it....... (And I... lllllove it, HAHA). That's because it's the ending, it should be more and more exciting.

At least that's what I think... ._.

This is what I do to make a "nice" pattern:
First, after the spinner, Max volume (Or increasing it before the spinner, progressively).
And I definitely would have done the same thing as you: put a Clap at 02:59:274 and 03:00:755 (......uhm, after a while I figured Finish sounds better, doesn't it?); but from there I would have remapped the beats, in order I can set Claps every two White ticks, but if you miss one hitsound, notice the pattern it's absolutely lost...

(And the Finish sounds are pretty cool, you should set those on white ticks also, but every four ticks, replacing of course the claps on those ticks.)

Then,
I don't like final spinners. But knowing that this is a hard, you could make it crazy after those (but with the same distance spacing), so there would be no 'final' spinners really, and it would be an awesome ending.

Well, I didn't have a problem with the combo colors on white and black, but whatever, that's not important.

That's all I can think of.
See, this is all what I would have done. Nothing you actually HAVE to change, tough. Just suggestions ^^. If you like them, just use it.

Byebye ~~

I'll try to shoot my first kudosu star


Edit: I forgot, It's already a lovely and rankeable (I think... let's BATs to decide, lol), map.

Another thing: There shouldn't be so many white ticks (on Normal and Hard), without beats on it. You could find a way to follow lyrics and rhythm at the same time. (though there's no need to. But it would be a hell of a improve.)

GbL wrote:

Can i make one diff? :/

nullPointLOL wrote:

I just meant CLAPS every two White ticks. (some FINISH here and there - could be White or Red ticks)

But that's just for make a pattern. You could use hitsounds wherever you think it's right.

Like this image: (This is from 02:59:274)

jamesleao wrote:

GbL wrote:

Can i make one diff? :/

Yea , of course , do it

alvisto wrote:

Hi ! Breeze recommend this map for me, so, I am gonna help you mod it ! :3

EASY
00:50:96 (2) - A bit hard for Easy. You can convert it to sliders with u turn. it's not "Beginner Style" so i think it's enough
01:13:55 (1,1,1) - Again, it's supposed to be EASY. XD
01:25:40 (1,1,1) - ^

GDEATH'S NORMAL
The 1st break is a bit too long, anyway, I like the opening beats and hitsounds, well done !
00:53:561 - Either add a note here or let the slider starts here
01:03:55 (7,8) - Convert this to slider ? When I play, it seems weird to not have a slider here.

HARD
Perfect

Impressions :
Song - So this is the song that i have always heard about ! Nice choice !
Map design - Quite ok, not exactly breathtaking and super memorable to play, but it's ok. =D
And also I strongly dislike (just personal flavour) GREY combo colour, it makes multiplaying co-op a pain, if you know what I mean. Plus, white and Grey looks too similar in colour.

Anyway, I can see this map being ranked... Great job ! Star !

Symbolic wrote:

Use the same hitcircle colours in all difficulties.


[Easy]

01:13:92 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:29 (1) - ^
01:25:77 (1) - ^
01:26:14 (1) - ^


[Hard]

Set Overall Difficulty 1 level lower.

01:06:89 (6) - New combo.
01:54:28 (6) - ^
02:19:83 (6) - ^
02:37:79 (1,1,1,1) - Overlapping spinners aren't rankable, remove them or make them 1 long spinner, because if you shorten them they wont be rankable because of the Auto + 2000 rule being broken.
02:59:45 (6) - New combo.


Nice song,
Starred *

Symbolic wrote:

[GbL's Difficulty]

01:06:89 (6) - New combo. Done
01:08:09 (10,11,12) - This sounds crap, remove them. Done
01:20:03 (6,7) - Remove clap. Done
01:54:28 (7) - New combo. Done
02:37:79 (1,1,1,1) - Overlapping spinners aren't rankable, remove them or make them 1 long spinner, because if you shorten them they wont be rankable because of the Auto + 2000 rule being broken. Done
02:59:45 (7) - New combo.Done

nullPointLOL wrote:

Hi again!

[GbL's Difficulty] (Nicely done, too~)

[01:18:463] -

This doesn't sound good at all. I highly recommend moving those Three one tick back. Starting right on [01:18:371]. And they should sound like Finish - nothing - Clap. That 4th beat after those three, it's nice, you should repeat the same thing at [01:19:852]. Fix

[01:23:925] (5-11) - You're not following rhythm here and definitely not following lyrics either... Fix

[01:29:664] - Add a note there? (With finish) Done

[01:57:066] - Clap? Done
[02:00:028] - Clap? Done
[02:07:434] - ^ Done
[02:08:915] - ^ Done
[02:10:396] - Spinner with ^ Done
[02:11:692] - Maybe add at the beginning, Finish. Done
[02:12:433] - Finish Done
[02:13:173] - Finish Done


Well, I don't like patterns to be broken. Maybe add Claps every four white ticks?

[02:44:277] - Maybe end the final slider at this point? Done
[03:04:643] - remove this? Done
[03:05:014] - Finish Done
[03:05:754] - Finish Done
[03:06:495] - Finish Done
[03:13:993] - add a note? Done
[03:17:048] - End slider here? (I don't like it though, but sounds better) Done

This of course, it's my opinion...

minyeob wrote:

Give kudosu to deepsea/nullpoint

[GBL]
01:18:64 (1) - Timing is not good:; it's unreadable (Make this 1/4 beat later, to red tick)

That's all for me!
Nice Linkin Park map!
Kudosu star for great new mapper

minyeob wrote:

Give kudosu to deepsea/nullpoint

[GBL]
01:18:64 (1) - Timing is not good:; it's unreadable (Make this 1/4 beat later, to red tick)

That's all for me!
Nice Linkin Park map!
Kudosu star for great new mapper

tieff wrote:

[GbL's Diff]
00:45:97 (7,8,9) - Fix spacing. done
00:51:71 (7,8) - ^ done
00:52:08 (9,10) - ^ done
01:05:78 (3,4) - ^ done

Star.

tieff wrote:

[Easy]
01:28:55 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:58:72 (1,2) - ^

[gdeath's Normal+]
01:28:73 (3) - How about add finish on end of slider?
02:10:95 (3) - Place slider here 02:11:13, add note here 02:10:95.
02:17:80 (5) - Whistle?

[Hard]
All good. I love it.

[GbL's Diff]
00:45:97 (7,8,9) - Fix spacing.
00:51:71 (7,8) - ^
00:52:08 (9,10) - ^
01:05:78 (3,4) - ^

Star.

fartownik wrote:

~Starry

mrtn wrote:

set a preview point

[easy]
increase the hitsound volume at the chorus fixed

[gdeath's normal]
00:24:49 - add a note here fixed

[hard]
reinsert the breaks all fixed

[gbl difficulty]
00:58:00 (8) - new combo
01:01:33 (4) - ^
01:03:18 (11) - ^
01:03:92 (14) - ^
01:04:67 (17) - ^
01:50:58 (4) - ^
01:51:32 (7) - ^
01:52:06 (10) - ^
03:10:01 (6,1) - this overlap is not allowed. Let the spinner start 1/4 later
03:20:75 (1) - add a finish waiting for GbL

mrtn wrote:

[gbl difficulty]
00:58:00 (8) - new combo
01:01:33 (4) - ^
01:03:18 (11) - ^
01:03:92 (14) - ^
01:04:67 (17) - ^
01:50:58 (4) - ^
01:51:32 (7) - ^
01:52:06 (10) - ^
03:10:01 (6,1) - this overlap is not allowed. Let the spinner start 1/4 later
03:20:75 (1) - add a finish

gdeath wrote:

[GbL's Difficulty]
01:39:29 (11) - new combo Done
01:45:58 (9) - ^ Done
02:37:42 (1,2) - del two notes and make spinner start on 02:37:42 Fix

Agent Spin Here wrote:

GbL's Dificulty
00:45:60 (1) - Spacing Done

tieff wrote:

BPM: 162
Offset: 12 635

Fix and I'll bubble.

[GbL]
02:19:85 (1,2) - Spacing.
02:50:04 (5,6,7) - Fix spacing.

xxheroxx wrote:

GbL:

03:20:783 (1) = end at 03:25:227 (i'm not sure)

xxheroxx wrote:

Easy:

is this a Easy?... looks a Normal D: it's Easy , really ! @_@

gdeath:

It's ok

Hard:

It's ok

starred

Larto wrote:

Kiai:
I noticed you guys place the Kiai start at the beginning of the vocals in each chorus. That looks a bit weird. I'd let the
First Kiai start here: 01:05:968
Second Kiai start here: 01:53:375
(Another Kiai fountain here? 02:17:079. Optional)
Third Kiai start here: 02:46:709
Also, if you DON'T follow my advice, at least make the Kiai the same on all difficulties. At the moment, the Kiai in gdeath's difficulty is a bit different.

All about kiai was fixed.

Timing:
Offset +5. It's not important though. I don't change, cuz i prefer james decide this

Overall:
All diffs except gdeath's normal could use more hitsounds. There are only few claps and finishes on all diffs, which makes the map sound a bit boring. Fixed, i think~

GBL's difficulty:
Decrease the Overall Difficulty a bit? I don't know. Done.

abalee wrote:

GBL's
02:37:26 (10) - 我更喜欢删了这个note... Deleted.

gdeath wrote:

everyone unify KIAI time,plz

the first KIAI:01:05:41-->>01:27:63
the second KIAI:02:04:67-->>02:15:04

i have fixed.x.x

Larto wrote:

Kiai:
I noticed you guys place the Kiai start at the beginning of the vocals in each chorus. That looks a bit weird. I'd let the
First Kiai start here: 01:05:968
Second Kiai start here: 01:53:375
(Another Kiai fountain here? 02:17:079. Optional)
Third Kiai start here: 02:46:709
Also, if you DON'T follow my advice, at least make the Kiai the same on all difficulties. At the moment, the Kiai in gdeath's difficulty is a bit different.

Timing:
Offset +5. It's not important though.

Overall:
All diffs except gdeath's normal could use more hitsounds. There are only few claps and finishes on all diffs, which makes the map sound a bit boring.

Hard:
00:45:41 (5) - That's the only note that threw me off. It doesn't sync anything in the song imho. Remove?

Easy:
I'd call this Normal but suit yourself.

Popping for hitsounds and kiai.

abalee wrote:

hey man, when i had help you lol
hmm i will have some mod ATM....
i'd better use Chinese =_______________=

offset的确早了点，我加了近15ms。不过实际上你现在用的offset我玩起来也不太差，按larto的加一点吧。记得resnap all note..

normal+:
00:13:37 (2,3) - 间距问题
00:23:74 (2,3,4) - 不同时间间隔的note叠放的一起很难抓timing的...在slider尾更是如此...分开放会好点。
00:53:74 (1) - 如果按人声的话放前1/2然后延长1/2。当然也可不改。
02:00:41 (X) - 按人声的话这里有note。不加也罢

GBL's
02:37:26 (10) - 我更喜欢删了这个note...

others' all fine.

plz follow Larto's suggestion , it will have a big improvement to your map

anyway stard

GbL wrote:

Ty too. ;}

1. This is too hard for a newbie! The slider velocity and Overall Difficulty is too high

1. Maybe use more finishes?

Gens wrote:

[Easy]

1. This is too hard for a newbie! The slider velocity and Overall Difficulty is too high

yea , i remake the Easy diff
02:13:93 (1,1) - I'd merge these 2 spinners. nope

[Hard]
Awesome~

Good beatmap! Hard was the difficulty I liked the most. Good job!

Dakeyrus wrote:

Normal

01:53:195 - (3,4) - The gap between these two is too large for the timing. Should be closer together, like how you had them at 01:17:639 (3,4).
01:54:677 - (3,4) - ^
01:59:121 - (3,4) - ^


The other difficulties are good, GbL's Hard is worth the 10 million points considering the difficult spacing. Fix those errors in Normal and I'll bubble.

JarJarJacob wrote:

Easy:

01:53:38 - Add kiai.
02:05:23 - Add kiai.

Hard:

00:47:63 - Move inherited section 1/4 back.
00:50:04 (3) - Move inherited section 1/4 back.
00:53:56 - Move inherited section 1/4 back.
00:59:49 - Move inherited section 1/4 back.
01:03:28 (6) - Remove. All 1/4 circles in this difficulty are pretty annoying.
01:53:38 - Add kiai.
02:05:23 - Add kiai burst.

minyeob wrote:

[GBL]
01:05:41 (Kiai) -> Compare with 01:53:38 (kiai)
I suggest adding this kiai from 01:05:97 (4) instead of 01:05:41(1)
kudo starred for old map.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[GbL's Difficulty]
03:13:38 (1,2,3) - Everything from here to the end flows terribly and doesn't go with the music at all.