Italics designate comments.
[Jar's Easy]
Waaay too goddamn short. Ended just before it started getting good. Extend to 1:30 like the normal or something. Why does nobody do full length easies anymore?
The thing is so short that I can find nothing wrong with it other than being short. :V
[Normal]
00:32:10 (1) - This is perfect. Use this in reference to the mod below:
00:37:43 (3) - This applies to all sliders of this construction - there are many - All you gotta do to achieve perfection is shift the mid point over to the left by one unit. Then they're perfectly curved and delicious all round - they look fine as is, but they can be just that tiny bit better.
You could have made this a full-length normal too
Why stop so abruptly?
[Hard]
00:13:07 (5) - A silent hitsound inherited timing section would fit nicely with the song and this slider here. Or if you're really classy, a gradual volume rise array of inherited timing sections.
00:23:56 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flip this vertically for perfect pattern symmetry!
00:29:25 (10) - New combo
00:31:39 (1) - Remove new combo
00:44:37 (5) - Interesting variation on the tilde slider. The only thing wrong with it is that the end point is not at the minimum possible length for that timing point. It's perfect if you fix that.
00:47:93 (1) - Make this a star slider. You know you want to..
02:23:58 (3) - You can flatten this out to a true tilde slider and achieve the same effect, but it's purely an aesthetics thing.
02:30:88 (7) - One more note after this coupled with a kiai flash for a rather climatic ending. Do it!
You need to map drunk more often. This is easily one of your best maps yet.
[Jar's Easy]
Waaay too goddamn short. Ended just before it started getting good. Extend to 1:30 like the normal or something. Why does nobody do full length easies anymore?
The thing is so short that I can find nothing wrong with it other than being short. :V
[Normal]
00:32:10 (1) - This is perfect. Use this in reference to the mod below:
00:37:43 (3) - This applies to all sliders of this construction - there are many - All you gotta do to achieve perfection is shift the mid point over to the left by one unit. Then they're perfectly curved and delicious all round - they look fine as is, but they can be just that tiny bit better.
You could have made this a full-length normal too
Why stop so abruptly?[Hard]
00:13:07 (5) - A silent hitsound inherited timing section would fit nicely with the song and this slider here. Or if you're really classy, a gradual volume rise array of inherited timing sections.
00:23:56 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flip this vertically for perfect pattern symmetry!
00:29:25 (10) - New combo
00:31:39 (1) - Remove new combo
00:44:37 (5) - Interesting variation on the tilde slider. The only thing wrong with it is that the end point is not at the minimum possible length for that timing point. It's perfect if you fix that.
00:47:93 (1) - Make this a star slider. You know you want to..
02:23:58 (3) - You can flatten this out to a true tilde slider and achieve the same effect, but it's purely an aesthetics thing.
02:30:88 (7) - One more note after this coupled with a kiai flash for a rather climatic ending. Do it!
You need to map drunk more often. This is easily one of your best maps yet.
but that's just me, i absolutely adore the whole of this map 
*Thumbs Up*