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Basic:
no mistakes.
Darri:
00:31:68 (1,2,3,4) - make a parallelogram
Difficult:
00:14:96 (8) - make parallel to 6?
00:46:52 (9) - relalign with the ends of 7 and 8
01:22:30 (2) - change the placement of 2 so the start is centered between the starts of 1 and 3
Expert:
00:12:93 (1) - make a 90 degrees counterclockwise turn of 3
00:15:11 (13) - make a vertical reflection of next combo's 3, or make this a line with 11 and 12
00:17:14 (6,7,8,9) - very hard to read
00:18:08 (1,2) - reposition both of these so they end on the exact same location
00:23:86 (5) - y does this start at a different location than 10
00:35:43 (3) - make a horizontal reflection of 2
00:48:39 (7) - make a horizontal reflection of 5
00:49:18 (1) - nazi post: center this slider on the y-axis
00:53:55 (8) - not the same distance from 5 as 6 is (few pixels off)
I would advise you turn down the drain 1 or 2 notches because the parts without notes or slow sliders really drain your guage.
Great beatmap. Star.
Basic:
no mistakes.
Darri:
00:31:68 (1,2,3,4) - make a parallelogram
Difficult:
00:14:96 (8) - make parallel to 6?
00:46:52 (9) - relalign with the ends of 7 and 8
01:22:30 (2) - change the placement of 2 so the start is centered between the starts of 1 and 3
Expert:
00:12:93 (1) - make a 90 degrees counterclockwise turn of 3
00:15:11 (13) - make a vertical reflection of next combo's 3, or make this a line with 11 and 12
00:17:14 (6,7,8,9) - very hard to read
00:18:08 (1,2) - reposition both of these so they end on the exact same location
00:23:86 (5) - y does this start at a different location than 10
00:35:43 (3) - make a horizontal reflection of 2
00:48:39 (7) - make a horizontal reflection of 5
00:49:18 (1) - nazi post: center this slider on the y-axis
00:53:55 (8) - not the same distance from 5 as 6 is (few pixels off)
I would advise you turn down the drain 1 or 2 notches because the parts without notes or slow sliders really drain your guage.
Great beatmap. Star.
COOL！I like it
expert:1:04:336~1:05:586 add a slider?
Because in I play behind cannot catch the rhythm Star
Topic Starter
fixed some things
it's not supposed to be a parallelogram
here's some fix
Download: Jun - Silver Dream (supergarlic) [DaRRi Difficult].osu
here's some fix
Download: Jun - Silver Dream (supergarlic) [DaRRi Difficult].osu
Basic
More like "Hard" for most map sets. Make an easier one. (This is good though; keep it.)
DaRRi Difficult
Not a DaRRi Mix D=
Looks great though.
Difficult
00:22:46 (2) - New combo and maybe unstack.
00:39:18 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Ugly stacking. Decrease Stack Leniency one tick.
00:50:58 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Unreadable because of (5), thus requires memorization. I dunno if you need to do something about this though.
00:54:18 (1) - Put timing section before the note.
01:04:18 (1) - Same here.
01:06:68 (1) - Same here.
Expert
00:34:80 (2,3) - H-flip.
00:59:18 (1,3,4,5,6,7,1,3,1,3,4,6,7) - Clap?
I didn't get too far into this map because it's too fast for my wings. xD Was tons of fun while it lasted though.
More like "Hard" for most map sets. Make an easier one. (This is good though; keep it.)
DaRRi Difficult
Not a DaRRi Mix D=
Looks great though.
Difficult
00:22:46 (2) - New combo and maybe unstack.
00:39:18 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Ugly stacking. Decrease Stack Leniency one tick.
00:50:58 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Unreadable because of (5), thus requires memorization. I dunno if you need to do something about this though.
00:54:18 (1) - Put timing section before the note.
01:04:18 (1) - Same here.
01:06:68 (1) - Same here.
Expert
00:34:80 (2,3) - H-flip.
00:59:18 (1,3,4,5,6,7,1,3,1,3,4,6,7) - Clap?
I didn't get too far into this map because it's too fast for my wings. xD Was tons of fun while it lasted though.
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Just suggestions.
~Beginner~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
~Basic~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
01:05:58 (2,3,4) - hitnormal or hitfinish
Try use custom hitsounds to silence some unused sounds.
~DaRRi Difficult~
00:44:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - omg O_O
01:14:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
Whatever... all fine.
~Expert~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
01:05:58 (2,3,4) - hitnormal or hitfinish
Try use custom hitsounds to silence some unused sounds.
~Difficult~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
01:05:58 (2,3,4) - hitnormal or hitfinish
Try use custom hitsounds to silence some unused sounds.
+Star
~Beginner~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
~Basic~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
01:05:58 (2,3,4) - hitnormal or hitfinish
Try use custom hitsounds to silence some unused sounds.
~DaRRi Difficult~
00:44:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - omg O_O
01:14:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
Whatever... all fine.
~Expert~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
01:05:58 (2,3,4) - hitnormal or hitfinish
Try use custom hitsounds to silence some unused sounds.
~Difficult~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
01:05:58 (2,3,4) - hitnormal or hitfinish
Try use custom hitsounds to silence some unused sounds.
+Star
Topic Starter
i like my little slient sections 
Topic Starter
expert and difficult were at 7. its not that high :<
Dropping by to say I love this map/song. Sorry this is late. >:
I'm not going to mod this just yet, but oh my god the star ratings are all so high.
I'm not going to mod this just yet, but oh my god the star ratings are all so high.
I don't feel like modding this right now but you get a star.
[Beginner]
this is a bit difficult for a lowest diff
00:29:33 (4) - kill whistle plz
00:54:18 (1) - bpm changes in lowest diff???
00:59:80 (2,4) - remove claps
01:04:18 (1) - insert break
im going to go ahead and say this is too hard for a lowest difficulty to be rankable
[Basic]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
theres a lot of unnecessary whistles but other than that pretty nice
[darri]
00:22:61 (1) - overusing hitsounds
01:33:86 (1) - kill the whistle
[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,4,6) - clusterfucky
00:18:08 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[Difficult]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive
w/e zzzz
not exactly stellar but have a star anyways *sleep*
this is a bit difficult for a lowest diff
00:29:33 (4) - kill whistle plz
00:54:18 (1) - bpm changes in lowest diff???
00:59:80 (2,4) - remove claps
01:04:18 (1) - insert break
im going to go ahead and say this is too hard for a lowest difficulty to be rankable
[Basic]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
theres a lot of unnecessary whistles but other than that pretty nice
[darri]
00:22:61 (1) - overusing hitsounds
01:33:86 (1) - kill the whistle
[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,4,6) - clusterfucky
00:18:08 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[Difficult]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive
w/e zzzz
not exactly stellar but have a star anyways *sleep*
Topic Starter
Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Beginner]
this is a bit difficult for a lowest diff
00:29:33 (4) - kill whistle plz done
00:54:18 (1) - bpm changes in lowest diff??? killed
00:59:80 (2,4) - remove claps done
01:04:18 (1) - insert break no
im going to go ahead and say this is too hard for a lowest difficulty to be rankable
made drain lower by 2
[Basic]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive bpm change its fine
theres a lot of unnecessary whistles but other than that pretty nice
[darri]
00:22:61 (1) - overusing hitsounds
01:33:86 (1) - kill the whistle
these are fine imo >.>
[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,4,6) - clusterfucky readable imo
00:18:08 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints its fine >.>
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same
[Difficult]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive its fine
w/e zzzz
not exactly stellar but have a star anyways *sleep*
Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Beginner]
this is a bit difficult for a lowest diff
00:29:33 (4) - kill whistle plz
00:54:18 (1) - bpm changes in lowest diff???
00:59:80 (2,4) - remove claps
01:04:18 (1) - insert break
im going to go ahead and say this is too hard for a lowest difficulty to be rankable
[Basic]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
theres a lot of unnecessary whistles but other than that pretty nice
[darri]
00:22:61 (1) - overusing hitsounds no it's not
01:33:86 (1) - kill the whistle it's fine
[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,4,6) - clusterfucky
00:18:08 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[Difficult]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive
w/e zzzz
not exactly stellar but have a star anyways *sleep*
okay very good star :3
Beginner
The difficulty settings are fine but the layout is far too heavy for a "beginner" map.
00:36:68 (1) - Maybe separate the endpoints on these sliders. When playing, I thought the timing on these would be closer together like on the three sliders a bit before it.
Basic
Feels more like a "hard" than a "normal", which is what I'm assuming "basic" to mean. Not as big an issue as with beginner, though.
Overall
The difficulty names are kind of bad. Are they lifted from another game or something? I'd recommend sticking with traditional easy/normal/hard/insane.
Griping about difficulty names aside, this is a nice mapset. It definitely deserves a star!
The difficulty settings are fine but the layout is far too heavy for a "beginner" map.
00:36:68 (1) - Maybe separate the endpoints on these sliders. When playing, I thought the timing on these would be closer together like on the three sliders a bit before it.
Basic
Feels more like a "hard" than a "normal", which is what I'm assuming "basic" to mean. Not as big an issue as with beginner, though.
Overall
The difficulty names are kind of bad. Are they lifted from another game or something? I'd recommend sticking with traditional easy/normal/hard/insane.
Griping about difficulty names aside, this is a nice mapset. It definitely deserves a star!
Topic Starter
the names are from ddr hence the tag says ddr
Topic Starter
cmon i need a bat beginner has no 1/2 note now >.>
[Beginner]
nothing you wont refuse to change
[Basic]
as above
[Darri]
unchanged
[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - cluttered
[Difficult]
unchanged
nothing you wont refuse to change
[Basic]
as above
[Darri]
unchanged
[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - cluttered
[Difficult]
unchanged
Topic Starter
ok sfg i fixed the expert cluster >.>
I wanna let you know how much I really love you~ darri makes the map <3
Hesitant to bubble because of the way the difficulty are set up. I see no reason why Difficulty should be the last difficulty, and why DaRRi isn't the hardest. >> Just see if you can do anything about that, or try explaining to be. I dunno, I'm just confused right now.
Hesitant to bubble because of the way the difficulty are set up. I see no reason why Difficulty should be the last difficulty, and why DaRRi isn't the hardest. >> Just see if you can do anything about that, or try explaining to be. I dunno, I'm just confused right now.
Topic Starter
i dont know how to move it up and down >.>
Topic Starter
screw it ill just delete difficult. ill just post it here for memoriesssss
Download: Jun - Silver Dream (supergarlic) [Difficult].osu
Download: Jun - Silver Dream (supergarlic) [Difficult].osu
Topic Starter
ok uploaded your new version darri. i dont know what you changed though >_>. probably some hitsound stuffies.
and did you think i was going to delete your dif? because i would never do that <_<
and did you think i was going to delete your dif? because i would never do that <_<
Topic Starter
im sorry but i wont add it in ><.
1)there arent any sounds at all (i dont if the hisounds are super good. i just want some)
2)its just a bunch of noted in a vertical or horizontal stream :<
3)there a few illegal things
4)whats up with those random 3/4 length sliders?
you should try mapping a map by yourself first before you make difficulties. There arent really major faults so try making your own map first.
sorry ><
1)there arent any sounds at all (i dont if the hisounds are super good. i just want some)
2)its just a bunch of noted in a vertical or horizontal stream :<
3)there a few illegal things
4)whats up with those random 3/4 length sliders?
you should try mapping a map by yourself first before you make difficulties. There arent really major faults so try making your own map first.
sorry ><
[Beginner]
00:20:74 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing?
00:44:80 (3) - Nazi. Up a bit.
00:59:18 (1,2) - Spacing.
[Basic]
All cool.
[DaRRi Difficult]
Awesome!
01:01:68 (1) - Clap?
[Expert]
It's rock.
00:59:02 (3,1) - Spacing?
Star!
00:20:74 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing?
00:44:80 (3) - Nazi. Up a bit.
00:59:18 (1,2) - Spacing.
[Basic]
All cool.
[DaRRi Difficult]
Awesome!
01:01:68 (1) - Clap?
[Expert]
It's rock.
00:59:02 (3,1) - Spacing?
Star!
Topic Starter
tieff wrote:
[Beginner]
00:20:74 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing? whats wrong with it?
00:44:80 (3) - Nazi. Up a bit. its fine D:
00:59:18 (1,2) - Spacing. i didnt see any problems with this but i changed some stuff around because the 1,2,3,4,1 being unsymmetric pissed me off
[Basic]
All cool.
[DaRRi Difficult]
Awesome!
01:01:68 (1) - Clap? ill leave this to darri~
[Expert]
It's rock.
00:59:02 (3,1) - Spacing? well the music got a bit faster so the spacing got a bit wider
Star! ty
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
you smell
Topic Starter
loooove yooouuuu
Beginner:
01:06:68 (1) - The beginning of the slider is silent. Is this intended? If not, please fix it.
01:06:68 (1) - The beginning of the slider is silent. Is this intended? If not, please fix it.
Topic Starter
its not silent i even clicked it earlier than the hitcircle lining up with the approach circle and it still make a hitnormal.
so its fine
so its fine
That's odd - it was for me before. Then again I did have some problems with my own map.. ah, well. Ranked (only because of darri)!
Ahhh meanie xDTakuma wrote:
Ranked (only because of darri)!
Expert is great ^_^
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
i know this is waaaaaaay late but, shouldn't it be "jun - SILVER DREAM"
Topic Starter
no go away