Makar wrote:

Sorry, gotta pop this.

Bolded suggestions are things that are unrankable or in some way related to the ranking criteria.

[General]

1. Your video has audio. This is unrankable and must be removed. If you need help, PM me. Done. Btw, pokie says it's just a guideline, so it's not unrankable I think. Still remove it yes.
2. sliderb0.png is larger than the template skin sliderb0. Please resize to 118x118 k
3. Your default numbers are also larger than the template skin. Resize them to have a height of 54. k
4. Remove "Taiko" from the difficulty names of the Taiko difficulties, since it is no longer needed (there are search functions and stuff online and in song select, as well as icons). idk about this but that's not a big problem so keep it

[Insane]

1. 00:48:722 (1) - This speedup is unfitting (seems like you are only doing it so that it blankets the circle). I suggest removing the speedup and setting it up like so http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/687013 nope I won't change the speed up since it fits the music, which's pretty urgent, and it's creative.

Makar wrote:

[Gu's Hard]

1. 00:08:070 (3,4) - Remove a repeat from (3) and start (4) on the downbeat. Starting (4) on the blue tick after the downbeat is awkward, unfitting, and unpredictable. It's his style as I know, so keep it.
2. 01:09:591 - Add a circle to match the vocals? It's pretty empty here. I don't think it's a big deal, since the finish sound appears at the downbeat, it's okay too leave a break there. Also this is a hard diff, too much 1/2 may ruin the parts (even the BPM isn't too high).

Makar wrote:

Sorry, gotta pop this.

[Muzukashii]

1. OD-1 fits this difficulty more imo. nope ._. citation: http://up.ppy.sh/files/qq3947.jpg

[Oni]

1. 00:16:222 (78) - move this to 00:16:113 so that your usage of doubles is consistent in the phrases. done
2. 00:26:657 (127) - if you do the above, do it here too. done
3. 00:42:635 (207,208) - add finish to go with the crash? done
4. 00:43:939 (212,213,214,215) - really unfitting double pattern here; I suggest ddk d http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/687026 done
5. 00:57:852 (292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308) - doesn't play very well. If you want to match the vocals and create a more playable pattern, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/687035. Incase it is hard to read, here is the code:
   
   SPOILER

   224,192,57635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,57961,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,58070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,58287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,58504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,58722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,58830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,58939,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,59157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,59374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,59700,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,59809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,60026,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,60243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,60461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,60570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,192,60678,1,8,0:0:0:0:

   I think the pattern is played well, at least in no mode. Don't find it necessary changing.

That's all. The Oni could use a few more mods too imo, so call me back after you get 2-3 for it and changes are applied.

[Kirisame-Marisa] wrote:

[Oni]
00:07:852 (35) - k? nope, consistent with 00:04:374 (18,19,20,21) -
00:55:243 (276,277,278,279) - change to ddk d ;or 00:55:570 (278) - move to 00:55:461 - I think this pattern is common, and is played well, so keep
00:59:157 (300) - k? Trying to make a consistent and fine-to-read pattern, so no change
00:59:591 (302,303,304,305,306) - change to dd dk k? ^

that's all. nice diff,加油!

Makar wrote:

Recheck

[Oni]

1. 00:48:504 (240,241,242,243,244,245) - Doesn't follow the accents very well. Delete 00:48:613, make 00:48:722 a big kat, and delete 00:48:939. Done.
2. 00:57:635 (292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307) - If you are going to ignore this, at least explain in detail why :v. It plays badly because it follows the vocals in a very strict and repetitive manner. Could you at least try my suggestion before to see if its okay, and if not then maybe we can reach an agreement on something else? I wrote my reason in https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2218046 and besides I think a repetitive pattern is good for players to read. If there is no critical reason I will keep my choice.

Talked in IRC about the Hard, Insane, and some general stuff.

1. romanized title: Prime number ~Kimi to Deaeru Hi~ (TV Size)
2. video quality too poor. try this: http://puu.sh/2u22G video offset: 217.
3. have you got any permission from sherrie_fay to use the skinset?

1. 00:57:200 (1) - you should try 3/4 rhythm at 00:57:961 to keep consistency with 00:58:504 (3,4) and the ones after it.
2. 01:09:809 (1) - this is kind of the same with 01:04:374 (1). try moving this to 01:09:591 and add note at 01:10:243 to fill the gap.

1. 00:43:070 (3) - turn this to a slider which ends at 00:43:287? just like 01:16:983 (3,4)

1. 00:30:896 (4,1) - not good in my eye. try this :
2. 01:13:287 (1) - maybe keep 3/4 thythm on this slider too? like 01:12:417 (5,6).

1. 00:05:026 (18) - as you placed 00:03:939 (14,15,16), and leave a gap at 00:04:591. I think this should be at 00:05:135. (This also happens in standard diffs but seems not a big problem.)
2. 00:08:504 (30) - should be at 00:08:613
3. 00:11:983 (42) - should be at 00:12:091

1. almost the samething in Muzukashii:
2. 00:05:135 - add don
3. 00:08:613 - add ka
4. 00:12:200 (61) - remove

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]

1. romanized title: Prime number ~Kimi to Deaeru Hi~ (TV Size) 好;__;
2. video quality too poor. try this: http://puu.sh/2u22G video offset: 217. k
3. have you got any permission from sherrie_fay to use the skinset? 我問過Fumika能不能用他OP1那套 他說行

[Insane]

1. 00:30:896 (4,1) - not good in my eye. try this : k
2. 01:13:287 (1) - maybe keep 3/4 thythm on this slider too? like 01:12:417 (5,6). 努力動了一下 /_\

cool set.

Colin Hou wrote:

[BCI's Easy]

1. 00:43:070 (3) - turn this to a slider which ends at 00:43:287? just like 01:16:983 (3,4) 他說沒有slider的音所以就擺一個note恩

Colin Hou wrote:

[Gu's Hard]

1. 00:57:200 (1) - you should try 3/4 rhythm at 00:57:961 to keep consistency with 00:58:504 (3,4) and the ones after it.　可
2. 01:09:809 (1) - this is kind of the same with 01:04:374 (1). try moving this to 01:09:591 and add note at 01:10:243 to fill the gap.　這裡有點不太一樣…前面的finish是在紅線開始, 這裡白線, 於是我乾脆在1/2的位置補了個note