May overlap with above mod
[Normal]
01:32:952 (1,2) - The repeat doesn't really follow the song, i suggest extending the repeating slider
http://puu.sh/2w2MD. Sound better to me. If you don't have ideas for placement
http://puu.sh/2w2Pm01:37:238 (3,3) - Add claps
01:40:452 (2) - Clap at end, both suggestion should be done as you put claps here 01:42:380 (3,3) -
02:34:666 (1,2) - Sliders look better to me if the middle slider point is move a couple grid to the right.
02:38:952 (2) - Not too fond of this shape, play around with the shape a bit?
http://puu.sh/2w3fe If you want to use;
360,160,158095,6,0,B|304:128|304:128|281:142|224:132,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,158952,2,0,B|130:210|130:210|136:184|115:147,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
03:03:595 (1) - Rotate 90 degree anti clockwise/point it to (2), I feel would improve flow. Naturally, adjust placement so that this slider doesn't overlap with 03:02:095 (5) -
03:04:238 (2,3,4) - Also please do whistle like here 01:14:523 (2,3,4) - or vice versa (keep consistency).
Good, the missing claps and 01:32:952 (1,2) I highly recommend fixing. The others are just polishing.
[
Hard]
-1 hp so it different from Insane (MAX)?
00:07:452 (2,6) - Althrough minor, I recommend fixing the spacing by turning grid snap off.It's noticeable since right now, one pattern is overlapping ,one pattern isn't. E.g. 00:07:238 (1,2) - not overlapping 00:07:452 (2,3) - overlapping.
01:14:523 (1,2,3) - You map all the diffs right? if you keep whistle here in Normal, I recommend to do whistle here too. And if you did whistle here, do whistle at 03:04:238 (1,2,3) -
01:27:595 (3) - Try to point it a bit more to the next note would help with flow imo.
02:32:952 (1,3) - Prefer if you do 1/6 slider here too.
03:27:809 (2) - Not too fond of this anti jump I think keeping distant snap and having jump on 03:29:309 (3) - play nicer. If you find jump too big, then try snapping this note to 0.9x/0.8x/0.7x etc. I feel increasing spacing a bit here would be better.
*A couple things bother me, but as these suggestions are based of my preference and style, I'll list them in italics. Consider them if you wish.
SPOILER00:35:523 (3,5) - I would do jumps on these. E.g. something like this placement http://puu.sh/2w3RO. There's a clear accent in music on the white tick so it feel weird to play all the notes to the same distant snap to me.00:37:666 (7) - I prefer this stack since it let you play with the cursor a bit and for me, this help me feel the song more. Your choice through.00:38:952 (3,5) - Same as 00:35:52300:41:095 (7) - Stack if you did for previous suggestion.00:42:381 (3,5) - Same as 00:35:523, something like this if you are clueless for ideas http://puu.sh/2w3Yk00:49:881 (2) - I prefer that you don't stack this, instead place it a way so that there is a jump to the slider, e.g. here http://puu.sh/2w40a. This give emphasis to the white tick (where music is accented) and as you can see by spacing, give less emphasis to the red tick. I feel this fit better to song. If you feel (2) is too close to (1) and the jump to (3) is too big, simply move it more up. For me, either way feel better than how it is now.00:51:595 (4) - ^00:55:023 (3,4,1) - I would definitely do jump to the stream here, for me, the notes feel too close together. I can't help but get an uncomfortable feeling so I prefer if you move it more up, or more to the right, which ever way you find easier to fix the pattern you have here. 00:56:738 (2) - Same as 00:49:88101:02:952 (3,6) - Really prefer slider (1/2, or whatever length you think is best/repeating slider) here, while I see you're following the drums, since guitar is pretty prominent here, I think slider should be done to represent it and you are still following the drums by doing this
01:06:380 (3) - ^
01:09:809 (2,5) - ^
01:13:238 (3) - ^
01:16:666 (2,5,8) - ^, if you truly do not prefer to do this, then I really prefer if you do some jumps here to reduce the empty feel (I feel like I need to hold or click something, but if there is a jump, I have to focus on getting that jump).
01:35:952 (6,7,1) - Prefer slightly higher spacing to ease the spacing change from the jump on 01:35:523 (5) -
03:10:452 (2,4) - etc., same as Same as 00:49:881
03:15:595 (3,4,1) - same as 00:55:023 Map looks fine to me, but I prefer a different mapping approach to some parts (read italics).
[
Max]
To refrain from disrespecting the mapping style, I'll just be a bit more general. How I feel about this diff is similar to Hard. I feel some parts need jumps/sliders to fill in the gaps. I'll just give some quick examples. 02:02:095 (4,5,6) - This part seems like an awesome part to put jumps, but no jumps
Or here, like I mention in Hard, 03:15:595 (4,5,1) - after a jump, I prefer if you increase the spacing a bit of the following notes to help make the transition more gradual. 4.85x > 1.0x feel really sudden and flow breaking to me. Just a few points, but I hope you get the idea.
Insane is really not my sort of map, but I notice this is your first beatmap. Pretty awesome job. Remember that this is my opinion.
Star, map is quite nice for a new mapper.