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sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
sesito71
mikhe, muchas gracias por tu ayuda, lo que había pasado en [Easy] es que había cambiado el BPM y el Offset y se me habían movido las notas de sitio. Las cambié, pero parece que me olvide del final xDD Ya está cambiado y ahora suena bien ^^ Gracias a ti que me lo has recordado ;)

Respecto a [Hard], ya he arreglado esos sliders, tenías razón, estaban mal colocados >.<

Te doy un kudosu por tu ayuda :D

A propósito, voy a intentar hacer una insane, aunque será un poco díficil ya que se me dan un poco mal :3 pero haré lo que pueda ^^


salu2
Beuchi
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Beuchi
I like it! :D

Relaxing song, maybe i'll try to mod it XD

*gives star* ;)
Krlos_old
11 posts
Joined June 2009
Krlos_old
Good map sesito

*Star*
Vexed_old
162 posts
Joined January 2009
Vexed_old
Well. I just modded easy and half of hard and lost the page so im not doing it again.
Make the Tickrate (2) for all difficulties. You will have to mess with the sliders a bit after you change it but im sure you can handle it. It's not that big of a deal.

[Easy]
Basicly there was nothing here other than some obvious issues with spacing that im sure i don't need to mention.
The biggest thing with this difficulty is that you have far too much wasted space. Especially the break in the middle. You are gonna have to map some of that.

[Hard]
I will however remod this section.
00:12:19 (5) - New combo
00:14:53 (1) - ^
00:26:22 (3) - ^
00:56:04 (1,2,3) - add whistle. Just try it. sounds good.
01:14:16 (1,2,3) - Remove clap and try same as above with whistle.
01:23:37 (3,4,5,6) - Whistle
01:41:05 (9) - New combo. You did not go over but still. Just try it :].
01:42:81 (1) - Add finish
01:56:25 (1) - This is a 3x jump. Is this intentional?
02:24:32 (1) - Remove new combo
02:24:32 (4) - ^
02:24:90 (5) - Add combo
02:26:07 (5) - ^
02:26:66 (1) - Remove new combo
02:27:24 (5) - New combo
02:39:52 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add hit sounds?
03:15:76 (4) - New combo

[Crazy]
00:10:73 (5,6) - spacing to close.
00:12:19 (11) - New combo. The combo stream is longer than allowed.
00:40:84 (4) - New combo.
00:47:85 (6) - ^
00:49:02 (4) - ^
01:15:04 (4) - ^
01:32:28 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:40:76 (10) - New combo. Limit exceeded.
01:52:75 (1,2,3) - keep these staggered but line them up parallel with eachother.
01:58:89 (6) - New combo.
02:18:47 (12) - Pfft..... New combo.
Well that's it for now. Looks like you went a bit wild with the spacing and i just don't have it in me to point out every spacing issue. I suggest you back through and use distance spacing except for where you want jumps. I don't think this difficulty being named crazy is enough of an excuse to make the spacing ok.
sesito71
398 posts
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Topic Starter
sesito71
thank you, I've changed all you said ^^

About this in [Hard]: 01:56:25 (1) - This is a 3x jump. Is this intentional?

Yes, it is intentional xD It sounds good for me :P


bye and thanks again ^^
Vexed_old
162 posts
Joined January 2009
Vexed_old

sesito71 wrote:

thank you, I've changed all you said ^^

About this in [Hard]: 01:56:25 (1) - This is a 3x jump. Is this intentional?

Yes, it is intentional xD It sounds good for me :P


bye and thanks again ^^
hmm. I just went to play it and it's not asking me to update. Maybe they have not taken effect but it should have by now. Maybe upload again full.
sesito71
398 posts
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Topic Starter
sesito71
It worked for me. Anyways, I have re-uploaded it again. It should work now ^^
vivere
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vivere
that good map I hope to see but of these! :?: :P
mrtn
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mrtn
[easy]
00:18:33 (2) - sounds weird
00:25:05 (4) - ^
00:28:27 (2) - ^
00:39:38 (2,3) - bad spacing
00:57:51 - reinsert break
01:14:16 (1) - sounds weird
01:20:45 (4,6) - sound weird
spacing is weird through the entire difficulty. take a look at it again and use distance snap to make life easier

[hard]
spacing is weird through the entire difficulty. take a look at it again and use distance snap to make life easier
00:56:92 - reinsert break

[crazy!]
spacing is weird through the entire difficulty. take a look at it again and use distance snap to make life easier
faster sliders please
00:36:16 (6) - new combo
00:57:21 - reinsert break
01:43:69 - reinsert break
03:28:92 (7) - new combo

starred
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
sesito71
thanks ^^

about the space, is there a special part which is really needed to change the spacing??


bye ^^
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
don't know how to mod this

too slow for me

but starred anyway..cuz i trust the other's who modded it already 8-) :lol: ;) 8-) :lol:
DeathxShinigami
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DeathxShinigami
:D
Mukku
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Mukku
Easy
[00:28:273] (2) This slider is too close to 1. Since this is easy, the players will be beginners and are easily confused by these kinds of spacing issues (I have the expierence D:)
[00:39:381] (2) Make this slider 1/2 beat shorter and make it repeat. (Follows the lyrics better)
[00:41:428] ( ) add an extra note here?
[00:42:012] (1) Finish
[00:42:597] (2) Clap whole slider
[02:20:814] (3) Clap the first repeat circle and ending. (Sounds better imo)

Hard
[00:47:858] (3) Clap this repeat circle
[01:32:874] (1) Make this slider 1/4 beat longer
[01:37:551] ( ) Add an extra note here?
[01:56:259] (1) This circle is way too far away.
[01:56:551] (2) A big jump here too. You want this jump to be here?
[02:37:913] (6) Spacing issue. Its too far away.

Crazy!
[00:50:781] (1) Clap the ending
[01:33:166] (2,3,4) This stack is too close to 1
[02:06:782] (2) Whistle the repeat and ending.
[02:07:513] (2) Whistle this circle
[02:09:413] (5) Clap
[02:09:851] (2) Whistle
[02:10:290] (4) Clap
[02:10:728] (6) Whistle
[02:20:813] (3,7,9) Clap the circles and slider beginning
[03:20:445] (14) Clap the ending



Nice map, starred.
Starrodkirby86
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sesito71
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Topic Starter
sesito71
Thanx for your comments ^^


Now waiting for rank !!! :D
Mashley
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Joined September 2008
Mashley
This map is very boring, though I guess that's because the song isn't all that mappable imo. Use offset 503

]Easy]
Make these hitcircles bigger. Needs LOTS more hitsounds.

[Normal]
Bigger hitcircles and hitsounds. This difficulty is very poorly spaced. Please space it because as it is it's very uneven and confusing. T_T
00:15:41 (3) - back 1/4 and add one more reverse
00:30:90 (1) - Spacing?
01:53:92 (2) - shortern by 1/4
02:07:07 (1) - lengthen by 1/4
03:07:58 (1,1,1) - Replace these spinners with a break

[Crazy]
I think these tiny hitcircles are ok here. HITSOUNDS!
Lots of spacing incosistencies, please use distance snap!
00:22:86 (7) - forward 1/4
02:24:32 (1,2,3) - move these up a bit?
03:02:61 (15) - new combo

Why did so many people star this? It needs a LOOOT of work.
sesito71
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sesito71
I'm fed up of using distance snap, I can fix some timing incosistences but not the whole map because it'd destroy my work U_U

Just in Easy and Hard ¬¬


I think there are worse maps that has been ranked, and the mine one isn't as bad to not be ranked...
ignorethis
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ignorethis
Mmm strange song but nice map.

star'd
alvisto
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alvisto
EASY
01:28:342 - Let slider start at 1/4 earlier, it match with "in" vocal
01:31:412 - elider ends here, it match with "ride"

HARD
00:35:580 - This slider, which is shorter than the previous slider, make it sounds weird
02:17:597 - add a note here ?
02:39:374 - I think it will sound better if you add a sound here

CRAZY
00:12:780 - clap at end of slider ?
00:34:995 - align slider properly
01:27:612 - I thought I will hear a clap here, coz it's very obvious. Consider adding it ?
01:29:365 (2.7) - Add clap too ?
01:55:966 - imo, slider ends here better

Ok, I will be frank, this song is boring, but kudos for you because in CRAZY, you actually map those really well, it makes CRAZY really interesting. As in EASY, I nearly dozed off... lol. no offense here =D

Star for awesome CRAZY difficulty !
sesito71
398 posts
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Topic Starter
sesito71
Alvisto, thank you very much!! ^^

I looked your map (again) and I saw no problems, anyways I gave you a star ^^

bye
EEeee
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EEeee
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Teara
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Teara
Easy:

Ok, I modded with the mindset of a new player since only new players really play easy, already spotted a few confusing parts :D

00:27:39 (1) - Hiding under a slider, this is no good :)

01:54:79 (3) - Only part in the song that requires fast clicking, and a newbie will miss this 1/5 times ( not really a problem )

02:02:68 (1) - With pretty long sliders one can be creative :D not that its bad, but I think you can do better. ^^

02:14:38 (3) - < another hiding note ( even if its pretty slow, I think its best to keep appearing notes always visible )

Otherwise pretty well done, even though I almost fell asleep, nice relaxing song

Hard:

01:20:59 (1) - Align with 01:17:96 (4) ?
01:37:11 (2) - Remove finish? doesn't sound nice clap sounds worse, if you have to have a hitsounds, maybe make it a finish again :)
03:18:10 (2) - Copy 03:16:93 (1) maybe and flip it?
03:19:27 (3) - ^
03:20:44 (4) - ^ of course, make it a mirror?
03:36:91 - add 1 note here?

Crazy!:

00:27:10 (4) - Move up the grid (Grid 3) three times? ( with distance snapping at 0.8x )
01:21:47 (9) - Move right once? (Grid 3) ?
01:30:24 (4,5,6) - Stack with slider?
01:34:04 (6) - Not aligned nicely with (4,5)
01:39:88 (3) - Add new combo
01:40:18 (1) - Remove new combo
01:42:22 (1) - New Combo? ( makes Tag coop a little more challanging :D )
02:22:85 (4) - Move one to the right? (Grid 3)
02:52:96 (3) - Align with 1,2
02:53:25 (4) - Stack on 3 ( only works nice if you have ^ aligned with 1,2
03:35:35 - Add note \/
03:35:64 - Add note > I can see a nice jump here :)

I enjoyed crazy, good job ^^
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
- Easy:
02:23:15 (1) - why new combo?

- Hard:
00:37:62 (1) - i think it's kinda weird because the spacing changes suddently (it should be OK, anyway)
02:45:65 (3,4) - move 1 or 2 square(s) to the right, it's more readable that way
03:28:62 (1,2) - wow for sudden cruel jump xD

- Crazy:
01:40:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try moving this stack down and right, so that the first beat starts in a better position
2:15:00 - 2:20:00 don't you think this sections misses some hitsounds? xD
02:28:99 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - WHAT? If you used 1/6 divisor, you failed D: Fix pls

Consider this starred when the 1/6 stack is fixed somehow.
sesito71
398 posts
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sesito71

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Easy:
02:23:15 (1) - why new combo?

- Hard:
00:37:62 (1) - i think it's kinda weird because the spacing changes suddently (it should be OK, anyway)
02:45:65 (3,4) - move 1 or 2 square(s) to the right, it's more readable that way
03:28:62 (1,2) - wow for sudden cruel jump xD

- Crazy:
01:40:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try moving this stack down and right, so that the first beat starts in a better position
2:15:00 - 2:20:00 don't you think this sections misses some hitsounds? xD
02:28:99 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - WHAT? If you used 1/6 divisor, you failed D: Fix pls

Consider this starred when the 1/6 stack is fixed somehow.
Thx for modding ^^
0_o
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Joined December 2008
0_o
Hard
01:37:11 (2) - don't like the clap
02:36:59 (5) - sounds weird, try shortening it to the length of 4, then adding a hitcircle where 5 ends now?
My problem with this difficulty is the inconsitency. 90% of the difficulty plays like a Normal, but the big jumps at the end and some of the stacks/streams play like a Hard. The problem with this is that people who are at the Normal level are gonna be beat by the hard parts, and people going into it looking for a "hard" difficulty are gonna be bored. Personally I would take out some of the tricky bits and just call this Normal.

Crazy
00:18:04 (1) - Too short, I would just take it out
00:19:50 (3) - Lengthen to white tick?
00:27:54 (1) - Overlapping the previous note, start this 1/4 ahead
00:55:45 (12) - Can you move this so it doesn't overlap? Looks/plays better that way
02:33:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Centre these so they are all equidistant...
I like jumps, but really, the jumps at the end just don't make a lot of sense to me; doesn't really fit the music or the rest of the map =/
sesito71
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sesito71
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minyeob
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minyeob
Give a kudosu to 0_o

[Normal]
01:24:68 (1) - Start this spinner on the red tick (make 1/2 beat faster)
02:28:99 (1~9) - This part isn't like normal.

[Hard]
02:31:18 (2) - Extend 1/4 beat!

Star for you :D
sesito71
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sesito71
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ztrot
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ztrot
modded in irc Yay! nice relaxing map Star
If you need another modd after taking care of that slider problem ask me
sesito71
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sesito71

ztrot wrote:

modded in irc Yay! nice relaxing map Star
If you need another modd after taking care of that slider problem ask me
Thanks for modding! Kudosu for U~
Symbolic
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Joined June 2008
Symbolic
[Easy]

00:20:96 (3) - Delete the last 2 bounces.
00:21:84 (x) - Add a note here.
00:42:59 (3) - Let this start 1/2 earlier and then extend it 1/2.
01:32:28 (x) - Add a note here with whistle.


[Normal]

00:11:90 (x) - Add a note here.
00:14:24 (x) - ^
00:21:25 (x) - ^
00:23:59 (x) - ^
00:35:58 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:21:76 (x) - Add note.
01:53:91 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:58:22 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps don't fit and aren't intuitive for [Normal], remove them.


[Crazy!]

00:01:08 (3) - Clap
00:03:42 (3) - ^
00:05:76 (3) - ^
00:06:05 (4) - Clap on endpoint
00:08:10 (6) - Clap
00:09:27 (x) - Add note with clap.
Add claps all over like that.
00:54:58 (6,7) - Clap
02:58:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Change this pattern lol..


Boring song but nice map.
Starred *
Gens
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Gens
[Overall]
  1. Hm, since you're not mapping the whole song, maybe cut the mp3? To save space... and stuff.
  2. Maybe as well lower hitvolume abit? YES I NOTICED.
[Timing]
  1. Offset is perfectly set, but BPM is slightly off. Change it to 102.62 and you should be good to go.
[Easy]
  1. Overall, it's pretty good... The only things I can complain about are *some* spinners, a few were in a weird place to me... Also, I think you could also use a final spinner. Aside from that, I think everything else is just a personal opinion.
[Normal]
  1. Isn't the HP Drain abit harsh for a Normal?
  2. Try to lower stack leniency.
00:37:62 (1,2,3) - IMO this is screwed. You need to make the spacing more notable. In other words, (1) is too close to (2).
01:33:75 (2) - I wouldn't leave the starting point of this slider hidden... It would look really better if you move it abit.

[Crazy!] (It isn't that crazy :P )

00:30:31 (1,2) - I wouldn't do this either.
03:21:90 (1,2) - Don'tcha know how to restack? You just use Distance snap with a multiplier of 0.0x, turn grid snap off, and tada~

~ ~ ~

I hate when people say it's a boring song.
sesito71
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sesito71
Thx Gens, I didn't know how to restack :O
K2J
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K2J
[Easy]
Great!

[Normal]
01:56:56 (2,3,4) - Try moving these out from beneath the slider.
03:21:92 (2) - A bit too close with the spacing just prior. Try moving down.

[Crazy!]
Awesome!

sesito71
398 posts
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Topic Starter
sesito71
Thx for modding :D
WyndII
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WyndII
Easy
Fine! =D

Normal
00:15:55 (3) - check spacing
01:56:26 (1,2,3,4) - check spacing here and 01:55:10 (1) - observe timeline D:
everything is fine to me xD

Crazy
00:53:12 (3) - Try to place this somewhere else?
00:54:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try to rearrange the pattern here too?
01:20:60 (4,5,6,7,8) - Recheck your spacing here, also try to respace the others too.
01:29:66 (3) - ^
02:02:11 (1) - groove~
03:02:63 (1) - center this please

Nice map! Starred
sesito71
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sesito71
thx ^^
Jarby
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Jarby
Normal:

It seems to be lacking hitsounds in a lot of sections. As a general rule here, each combo should have at least one sound.

00:15:12 (2) - Add finish.
00:56:04 (1,2,3) - It's a bit cruel, isn't it?
01:21:04 (3,4) - ^
01:23:38 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:27:62 (1) - 1/1 forward, having a note right after a spinner gives the player little time to react.
01:32:59 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:36:97 (1,2) - Cruel.
01:39:60 (4,8,4) - Remove to solve cruel.
01:42:52 (1) - 1/2 back, remove last circle.
01:53:93 (2) - Shorten 1/4.
01:55:10 (1) - Remove new combo, shorten 1/4.
02:02:26 (1) - 1/4 back.

And this song does my head in from here.
sesito71
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yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
Crazy!:
A few things I could point out, but they're nazi and are fine as they are, so i won't mention it. One thing I can suggest though it go a little bit easier on the claps. For a nice relaxing song the claps are really loud and there's quite a few of them. Maybe lower the volume and/or reduce the amount of claps.

Normal:
Fine

Easy:
Fine

Maps pretty cleaned up, not much modding I can do ^^ songs really nice btw!
sesito71
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sesito71

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Crazy!:
A few things I could point out, but they're nazi and are fine as they are, so i won't mention it. One thing I can suggest though it go a little bit easier on the claps. For a nice relaxing song the claps are really loud and there's quite a few of them. Maybe lower the volume and/or reduce the amount of claps.

Normal:
Fine

Easy:
Fine

Maps pretty cleaned up, not much modding I can do ^^ songs really nice btw!
Thanks ^^
Jesss
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Jesss
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kingcobra52
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kingcobra52
-You can up the hit volume a bit more.

Easy

00:56:04 (1) - Place back around 1/2 beat, extend by 1/2 beat.

Hard

-Lower hp drain 1 please.

*star*
sesito71
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sesito71
Thx kingcobra52! :D
vytalibus
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vytalibus
Resnap everything on the difficulties. I noticed a few notes being a bit off.

[Easy]
01:28:35 (1) - Move the starting point back to the white tick.
01:33:46 (1) - Move the starting point forward to the red tick.

You're almost there.
sesito71
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Yes_old
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Yes_old
relaxing
00:20:08 (3) - one more repeat?
00:47:86 (1) - clap?
00:49:03 (1) - ^
01:17:68 (5) - ^
01:33:75 (5) - whistle
01:34:05 (6) - whistle for slider beginning
01:41:06 (3) - clap
01:41:65 (7) - ^
01:41:94 (9) - ^
03:06:72 (1) - ^
03:30:69 (4) - finish

hm some people say it needs less claps but i think adding these hitsounds would sound nice. not really sure about them though ,_, they are just suggestions ^^
sesito71
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sesito71

Yes wrote:

relaxing
00:20:08 (3) - one more repeat? Done~
00:47:86 (1) - clap? I prefer the way it is now :P
00:49:03 (1) - ^ ^
01:17:68 (5) - ^ Ok
01:33:75 (5) - whistle Ok
01:34:05 (6) - whistle for slider beginning Ok
01:41:06 (3) - clap Ok
01:41:65 (7) - ^ Ok
01:41:94 (9) - ^ Wow, this sounds really good :D
03:06:72 (1) - ^ Ok
03:30:69 (4) - finish I prefer how it is now :P

hm some people say it needs less claps but i think adding these hitsounds would sound nice. not really sure about them though ,_, they are just suggestions ^^
Thanks for modding ;)
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
Pretty good map.

General:
The only breaks are in the first half. You might want to spread them out more.

Relaxing:
First of all, The difficulty of the map is anything but relaxing :P

01:20:60 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I find these really irritating to decipher. That's not really saying much though, so it's not really important :P
02:02:11 (1) - This slider could be more symmetrical and neat.
02:12:05 (2,3,4) - You can't tell which beat is the slider.

Otherwise, wonderful.

*star'd*
sesito71
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sesito71
Thx for modding, and for the star ;)
cyanberryio
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cyanberryio
I'm not a picky modder. These are just suggestions!

[Easy]
00:57:80 (Break) - Damn thats one long break. D; Add something to shorten it please! :D
01:37:56 (1) - Please change this, it's kinda boring. D; (Even though Easy is usually boring. ;p)
02:24:33 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:57:22 (Break) - Kinda long too. :(
02:15:56 (1) - Yawn...? (Boring, change it up a bit!)
02:37:92 (7) - Pull back 1/2th and extend 1/2th?

[Relaxing!]
02:02:11 (1) - Length 1/4th? (So that it ends at 02:06:794)
02:06:79 (2) - If ^ remove this.
02:07:08 (x) - If ^ add a beat here, and on the following blue tick.

Star!
sesito71
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Thx, I fixed some things ;)

Kudosu'd~
Shulin
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Here are my suggestions, all hitsounds the spacing plays well to me:

Easy

00:21:84 - Add a beat?
01:16:51 (2) - Clap the end of the slider so it matches, 01:14:17 (1) -
01:32:29 (1) - Clap
01:54:80 (3) - Remove the clap at the end of the slider so it matches, 01:53:93 (2) -
02:16:14 (3) - Remove the clap at the start and then put a clap and every other beat like at 02:20:82 (3) -

Normal:
00:15:12 (2) - Add a clap instead of finish.
00:17:45 (2) - ^
00:24:47 (2) - Clap end of slider.
00:42:01 (2) - Clap middle beat.
00:45:52 (3) - Clap
00:56:924 - 01:13:149 - Very long break, you could do something here, but I'm going to stop being captain obvious.
01:15:04 (4) - Clap end of slider.
01:22:94 (2) - Clap
01:36:68 (3) - Clap
03:02:63 (8) - Finish?

Relaxing!

01:21:77 (10) - Finish?
01:52:76 (1,2,3) - Align these sliders?


That''s all, this was a really relaxing and peaceful map, star!
jericho2442
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[Easy]

fine to me

[Normal]

fine to me

[Relaxing]

01:28:20 (8) - spacing is too close to (7)
01:33:75 (5,6) - this part was iratating to play because the combo makes it so blind, maybe find a better way to put these 2 notes?

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very good maps, star :)
mrtn
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set a preview time for all difficulties
use bpm 102,61

[normal]
02:02:11 (1,1) - recovery time is too short
sesito71
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mrtn wrote:

set a preview time for all difficulties
use bpm 102,61

[normal]
02:02:11 (1,1) - recovery time is too short
Done~

Thx for modding!! ^^
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[General]

Source? Tags?
Consider changing the background colour to white or the off-white in the background image.
I would remove the countdown; it doesn't really fit.
You don't have a storyboard, so you can delete the .osb file if you'd like.
Consider adding inherited sections to change hitsound volume, some parts are too quiet.

NOTE: Many of the things below might just be a byproduct of the fact that this isn't the average kind of song to beatmap to. Take things with a grain of salt.

Spinners felt inappropriately placed.

[Easy]

If you keep the countdown, don't make it half-speed here.

00:21:055 (4) - This might sound better 1/2 later.
00:55:076 (1) - Awkward time, maybe shift it 1/2 later, although that'd make it awfully short.
02:20:084 (3,4) - Move these 1/2 earlier?

Felt really empty, although that may just be a byproduct of the song.

[Normal]

00:46:098 (3) - Shorten by a repeat, and add a note on 00:49:032?
01:28:079 (2,3), 01:33:076 (2,3,4) - Sudden increase in spacing? Please fix.
01:55:011 (3,1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.
02:20:025 (2) - Move this 1/2 back, add a note where it was.
02:30:078 (1) to 02:47:073 (1)- Here, the notes feel counterintuitive. Consider remapping it a different way.
02:58:026 (1) - Random increase in spacing again, although it's a bit more predictable here.
03:05:028 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - These didn't really seem to fit.
03:14:063 (1) - Once again, mapping feels a bit weird from here to the end.

[Relaxing!]

This isn't the hardest map around, 8m might be a bit much.
I dislike the small hitcircles.

00:25:093 (2,3) - Line up with 1?
01:27:004 (2,3,4) - Sudden change in spacing here, I recommend not doing this and keeping 1/4s touching.
02:02:012 (1) - The length of this slider felt awkward.

Overall, I felt that Relaxing! felt the best out of all the difficulties in terms of flow.

Have a star.
sesito71
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thanks for modding!
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O_O
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Hola Amigos!

[General]
Fix this FIRST!!
Source?
I think BPM is 102,63 (Remember, resnap all note first and make sure all difficulty is set this BPM)
Use 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor (Remember, resnap all note first too and make sure all difficulty is this beat snap divisor)

[Easy]
00:44:076 (4) - Move backward to white tick
00:46:022 (1) - Move backward to white tick
00:50:090 (2) - ^
00:56:016 (1) - ^
01:27:000 (2) - Move backward to red tick
01:33:014 (1) - Move forward to white tick and extend 01:36:006
02:10:041 (1) - Move backward to white tick
02:11:058 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Move backward to white tick

[Normal]
00:56:062 (2) - Remove clap hitsound and add finish hitsound

[Relaxing]
00:07:081 (5) - Make parallel

I think this song is comfortable for Me
STAR
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Thanks for modding <3
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its ok for me
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Wow, I have not checked this map in a long time

Remove all commas in the tags since they are not needed.
I would probably remove of the current tags since they are already covered in the artist and title field.
You could put the album name "Inspiration Information" as the source. If it is not the source, add it to the tags.

Easy:
Combo mod:
00:30:318 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:20:964 (3)

Normal:
Combo mod:
02:19:351 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to follow the lyrics?

Relaxing!
Normal mod:
01:20:596 (4,5,6,7,8) - lower stack leniency to the 2nd notch to make this look nicer

Combo mod:
00:06:641 (1,3) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to follow the music better
I did not understand how you added combos to this diff. It seemed sort of random, so I stopped doing combo modding after I went a little bit into the song.

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The song is a lot better than I remember it.
Call me back after you finish these mods so I can see if this is ready for a proto-bubble.
sesito71
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Ok, done! Also I fixed some combos in Relaxing!

Thanks, blissfulyoshi ^^
blissfulyoshi
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Sorry, forgot a few things in my previous mod

Easy:
00:34:411 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:25:057 (4)

Relaxing!
00:06:641 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:04:303 (6)
00:11:903 (8,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new to 8 to be be consistent with 00:16:580 (1)?
I feel like I am forcing my style upon you, but I don't understand how you added combos too much in this diff. As a result, I am not going to combo mod the rest of the diff.

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Everything else looks fine to me, so fix these things and I'll probably give you a proto-bubble.
I am also surprised that I never starred the map. Star.
sesito71
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Ok, Done! and I fix again some new combos in Relaxing!, I think it's ok now ;)

Thanks~
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sesito71
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Lizbeth wrote:

I suggest you to use normal-hitclap, instead of soft-hitclap using a custom override. sounds better imo. then low the volume a bit.

I prefer soft-hitclap, but thanks for the suggestion ;)

Lizbeth wrote:

02:58:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i sonsider this mini jumps, dont do it on normal diff
Oh come on, do I have to remove this?? I think it's the best part of this diff >_< And it's not that hard...

Thanks for the modding ^^
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sesito71 wrote:

Lizbeth wrote:

I suggest you to use normal-hitclap, instead of soft-hitclap using a custom override. sounds better imo. then low the volume a bit.

I prefer soft-hitclap, but thanks for the suggestion ;)

Lizbeth wrote:

02:58:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i sonsider this mini jumps, dont do it on normal diff
Oh come on, do I have to remove this?? I think it's the best part of this diff >_< And it's not that hard...

Thanks for the modding ^^
Is not extremely necessary to remove it, i guess this change on spacing isn't too drastic, anyway let see if anyone else complains about it.
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Offset feels more around 523~524; check it and tell me what do you think about it.
The last time I suggested a BPM of 102.62, but now I get 102.627. Please check this.

Also, low stack leniency looks ugly in my opinion, but I guess it can stay. Just sayin'.

Hmm, the mini-jumps Lizbeth mentioned seem pretty fitting to me... the normal difficulty was already getting harder anyway.

[Relaxing!]

01:40:473 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The spacing gets messed up because stacking moves the notes up.

That's it, I guess. I'm still wondering about the BPM though, let me see if I can get a timing pro for you.
sesito71
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Gens wrote:

Offset feels more around 523~524; check it and tell me what do you think about it.
The last time I suggested a BPM of 102.62, but now I get 102.627. Please check this.
I think it sounds fine how it is now, I tried the timing you said and it sounds similar to the one I'm using now >_<

[Relaxing!]

01:40:473 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The spacing gets messed up because stacking moves the notes up.

argh, how can I fix this? D:



thanks for the modding ^^
Gens
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I had Zekira to check timing; (s)he approves of the current timing, so I guess it's alright.

sesito71 wrote:

[Relaxing!]

01:40:473 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The spacing gets messed up because stacking moves the notes up.

argh, how can I fix this? D:
Just move that stack down, silly. :P
sesito71
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haha, but not only down, I had to move it to the left too xD

thanks anyways Gens :D
Gens
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Set up some things through IRC. Proto-bubbled! :)
sesito71
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yeahhhh! thank you very much Gens!!!! :D
mrtn
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~overdrive modding~

No offence but I'm like 99% sure that this timing is off
If you check the timing around 2 minutes or so, it's offbeat.
I think bpm 102,61. Once bancho works again I'll see if I can get a good timer to check it.

cyclone's guess is 102,61 aswell but he only looked at the map partially so don't hold him to it.

Personally I think 102,61 works best for the map.
sesito71
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OK, fixed!
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bubbled
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Good :)

..Star+
sesito71
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Who popped the bubble!!!! :evil:
sesito71
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sesito71 wrote:

Who popped the bubble!!!! :evil:
mrtn
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i don't know but rebubbled.
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Thank you very much, mrtn :roll:
kingcobra52
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Wow. I remember modding this a while back. hehe.

Relaxing

00:24:184 (2) - Would you consider moving this so that the burst from 00:23:015 (7) doesn't cover the repeat as much? (test the map here and you'll see what I mean)

Just 1 suggestion. Whether you fix or not, I'll rank afterwards.
sesito71
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Fixed, thanks! ^^
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I consider above just a minor fix, so I'll rank. :)
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