This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, November 18, 2009 at 8:30:23 PM

Artist: Skillet
Title: Comatose
Source: Comatose
Tags: skillet comatose GbL
BPM: 170
Filesize: 8491kb
Play Time: 03:32
Difficulties Available:

1. Brutal (4.97 stars, 546 notes)
2. Easy (2.05 stars, 103 notes)
3. GbL's Normal (2.89 stars, 213 notes)
4. Hard (4.66 stars, 366 notes)

Download: Skillet - Comatose
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For rust45's [Album] Skillet - Comtose Project.

Thanks to all who have modded! Kudos for the effort!

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

hard
brutal

Loogiesquared wrote:

hard
00:22:62 (1) : Too long. no its not
00:35:54 : Break's too long. only 10 seconds...
01:04:541 : Too long of a Kiai-Time. no it isn't
02:31:62 (1,2,3) : Remove the whistle hitsound. it fits imo
02:49:225 : Another too-big break. 9 seconds? are you kidding me? this is a SHORT break! D:

brutal
00:35:54 : Break's too long. only 10 seconds...and the rest of the map is unbroken...almost...
02:49:225 : Another too-big break. uuhh.... can you please double check your modding, THERE IS NO BREAK! D:
02:55:09 : Spacing.

NOTE: You want me to help you improve your modding? Well, first of all, check your modding, you're telling me about a non-existing break, and spacing that isn't off. 10 or break isn't long, it's average, the note in the editor say 5-15 seconds per break is good. And the Kiai is the same for each diff., which I think it covers the chorus well. And double check your modding please. PLEASE. And use the fancy Ctrl-C format please!

I give kudosu for the effort.

ALSO DON'T USE SPOILERBOXES AND SMALL FONTS FOR MODDING!

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Here ya go!

Download: Skillet - Comatose (Alex0686) [GbL's Normal].osu

Alex0686 wrote:

Loogiesquared wrote:

hard
00:22:62 (1) : Too long. no its not
00:35:54 : Break's too long. only 10 seconds...
01:04:541 : Too long of a Kiai-Time. no it isn't
02:31:62 (1,2,3) : Remove the whistle hitsound. it fits imo
02:49:225 : Another too-big break. 9 seconds? are you kidding me? this is a SHORT break! D:

brutal
00:35:54 : Break's too long. only 10 seconds...and the rest of the map is unbroken...almost...
02:49:225 : Another too-big break. uuhh.... can you please double check your modding, THERE IS NO BREAK! D:
02:55:09 : Spacing.

NOTE: You want me to help you improve your modding? Well, first of all, check your modding, you're telling me about a non-existing break, and spacing that isn't off. 10 or break isn't long, it's average, the note in the editor say 5-15 seconds per break is good. And the Kiai is the same for each diff., which I think it covers the chorus well. And double check your modding please. PLEASE. And use the fancy Ctrl-C format please!

I give kudosu for the effort.

ALSO DON'T USE SPOILERBOXES AND SMALL FONTS FOR MODDING!

yeah, you BETTER giv me kudos.

Easy
00:11:33 (1) - add finish at end
00:12:74 (2) - ^
00:46:27 (4) - wtf with that little curve at start? @_@

GbL
perfect.

Hard
00:46:62 (5) - one more revert?

Brutal
Perfect.

Blue Dragon wrote:

Easy
00:11:33 (1) - add finish at end no, cause it isn't in the other diffs.
00:12:74 (2) - ^ ^
00:46:27 (4) - wtf with that little curve at start? @_@ fixed

Hard
00:46:62 (5) - one more revert? no, there's no beat there to place the reverse on

thanks!

Hi ^^
These are just suggestions like i would map it so you dont have to use them :p

[Easy]
01:20:155 - Add note?
01:20:508 - May remove slider and at note?
01:21:037 - if ^ then add note!
01:21:567 - if ^ then start spinner here!
01:31:802 - Remove slider and add note?
02:20:331 - End slider here?

[Normal]
00:38:861 (4,5) - Replace these with a slider?
I like the style of this diff

[Hard]
01:35:155 (2,3,4,5) - these circles seems weird to me
01:36:390 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders seems weird to me
02:28:272 (2,3,4,5,6) - Replace with one long slider?
02:30:390 (2,3,4,5) - ^

[Brutal]
I loved it *.*


Star~

Fixed~

Download: Skillet - Comatose (Alex0686) [GbL's Normal].osu

Delete/reinsert all of your breaks.

Easy
These are the weirdest sliders ever.
00:11:33 (1,2) - It bugs me that this isn't symmetric across the y-axis.. could you either make them symmetric or make 2 different from 1?
00:42:39 (1,2) - Move this all ahead a white tick, then add a hitcircle before 1
01:41:68 (1) - Add a hitcircle on the second red tick after
01:44:50 (1) - ^

GBL's Normal
00:18:39 (3,1,2,3,4) - Personally I would Ctrl-J all of this then move it up a little.
00:39:21 (5) - It feels better without this beat imo, the silence is cool. (move the next combo further away after)
01:42:39 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - All the white ticks is kind of dull, it would be nice if you followed the vocals a bit more here.
02:27:56 (1) - Shorten/move ahead 1/1
02:28:97 (2) - ^, then add a hitcircle in between 1 and 2
02:32:50 (1) - Start 1/1 later
02:43:80 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - zzzz
02:55:09 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Swap the 1's with the 2's so "don't wanna" is the repeat slider.
02:58:27 (3) - New combo
03:14:86 (1) - Get rid of the micro break and extend this 2 white ticks
There are a loooot of spinners in this..

Hard
00:12:74 (1) - Ctrl-R?
00:22:62 (1) - I think it'd be cool if moved the spinner ahead 1/2 or 1/1 and added a hitcircle here
00:47:68 (x) - Put something here
00:53:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is really choppy
01:30:92 (2,3,4,5) - Following the guitar isn't the best way to map this imo, it doesn't feel natural (same with the next part like this)
01:38:50 (x) - Add a beat?
01:38:86 (1,2,3) - same guitar thing
01:47:33 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It'd be great if you could fit 2 more beats in after 7, it feels like it stops short right now.
01:57:03 (2,3,4,5,6) - yeah yeah guitar you get it by now
01:59:68 (x) - add a beat
02:30:39 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think it would be cooler if this was a mirror of the last combo
02:43:80 (x) - Add a hitcircle with a soft finish in the centre? :3
03:19:97 (x) - Add a beat?
03:24:03 (1,2,3,4,5) -
03:25:27 (3,4,5) - sounds kinda weird
03:29:68 (x) - Add a beat

I'll get to Brutal later, I gotta sleep

0_o wrote:

Hard
00:12:74 (1) - Ctrl-R? Nah, this was purposly.
00:22:62 (1) - I think it'd be cool if moved the spinner ahead 1/2 or 1/1 and added a hitcircle here no, I have it the same in all diffs.
00:53:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is really choppy ?
01:30:92 (2,3,4,5) - Following the guitar isn't the best way to map this imo, it doesn't feel natural (same with the next part like this) I kinda like this. ._.
01:38:50 (x) - Add a beat? Nothing to map to...(I don't map to the vocals if I don't have to...)
01:38:86 (1,2,3) - same guitar thing I kinda like this. ._.
01:47:33 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It'd be great if you could fit 2 more beats in after 7, it feels like it stops short right now. how about just 1? >_<
01:57:03 (2,3,4,5,6) - yeah yeah guitar you get it by now ._.
01:59:68 (x) - add a beat no beat...
02:43:80 (x) - Add a hitcircle with a soft finish in the centre? :3 no thanks... ._. (dun like how it sounds)
03:19:97 (x) - Add a beat? beat is too soft
03:24:03 (1,2,3,4,5) - o_o

I'll get to Brutal later, I gotta sleep sleep well

thanks! changed ones aren't shown

[Easy]

OK ^^

[Gbl's Normal]

01:35:68 (5) - Ok, but move it a bit to the left and down (adjust it to the shape of the square) ^^


There too many breaks IMO

[Hard]

Pretty good ^^

[Brutal]

Wow, funny map

Star*

I think I found the perfect offset!
it's 9.906!

[Easy]

Start kiai on 62.861 (or 62.155)?

[Normal]

03:24:74 (3) - the endpoint should be 1/2 earlier or further (on a white tick at least)

[Hard]

nothing wrong

[Brutal]

I got the feeling there should be a white flash too where kiai starts.
(^ favourite part of the song)

03:31:78 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - fix the white flashes here

happy30 wrote:

Start kiai on 62.861 (or 62.155)? No, it start on the beat. >_> (btw, I had it starting there first but then I changed it)

thanks for the mod! (even though it went over 8 by the time you got here... o_o)

Download: Skillet - Comatose (Alex0686) [GbL's Normal].osu

~Star.

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Eddycted wrote:

Hey, awesome song/band!

Brutal
00:22:61 (1) - This is quite long and boring, maybe replace it with soft notes mapped to the piano? Or break here, and map the lyrics where the old break was. I don't really like mapping to the lyrics much... ._.' And I think it's just fine, it's the same in all diffs.
01:04:96 - Kiai time doesn't feel fitting, try starting it earlier (at 01:02:14). I don't see much how it fits there, it is the chorus, but I just don't like how it feels there.
02:07:08 - ^ ^ ._.'

Thanks for the mod+star! Every effort is appreciated! (Why everyone who posts something modding related gets kudosu! :3)

Easy
00:39:90 (1) - remove new combo, it would look cooler, since next combo ends at a 3, so if u remove this one, it'll end at 3
01:46:788 - add a note here, when he says "You" and place it so it's stacked on 01:46:43 (2)

Gbl's Normal
this diff looks okay, just fix all breaks starting with this one 01:10:788 - fix break and all breaks after this ^^

Hard
01:57:02 (2) - new combo
02:16:96 (1) - remove new combo here, add to next note, to help spacing
03:19:61 (5) - make rebound twice more? or make it look like 03:25:43 (4,5)
fix all breaks in this diff

Brutal
Awesome dude, , , just awesome

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
00:54:90 (3) - Move forward 1/2 beat?
01:32:14 (3) - Pull out the middle slider point a little to round the slider out a little?
No Problems found

[GbL's Normal]
00:29:31 (2) - This really doesn't fit very well,I'd swap (2) with (3), so that (3) is at 00:29:31 and the slider starts at 00:29:67.
I've provided your diff with these kiai changes below. Feel free to use it if you want, then apply the bolded change if you find it useful.
Download: Skillet - Comatose (Alex0686) [GbL's Normal].osu
No other problems found

[Hard]
hrm... I see similar kiai opportunities in [Hard] that I saw in GbL's Normal. The white storyboard really would be complemented we with kiai fireworks ;p. Your choice whether to change them though.
01:35:84 (6) - Maybe reverse twice more?
01:47:31 (1) - Make the curve a little more pronounced
No problems found

[Brutal]
03:20:31 - Note here?
No problems found

Overall, and excellent beatmap. hopefully my kiai suggestions will be implemented, but either way it's a great song, fantastic maps, and the simple storyboard makes it that much cooler. Great job. Starred!

sorry I'm being stubborn about the kiai changes, but I like how it is, and if I changed it, I'd have three bursts, maybe limiting it's rankablity...

that's why I added strobes, to give that effect... >_< I originally had it like you people are saying...but i didn't like it

when I get to a computer I'll fulfill those mods

Did Azure_Kyte's modd. Ty.

Download: Skillet - Comatose (Alex0686) [GbL's Normal].osu

Here's the SB I promised I was gonna make, was gonna do it for the whole map, the what the SB syncs to get overshadowed by the other instruments so

Download: Skillet - Comatose (Alex0686).osb