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ZUN - The Road of the Apotropaic God ~ Dark Road

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__Jonah
Bravo bravo, mappa le original ost di Touhou che ce sono poche in giro. Ti potessi dare una stella te la darei.
Revy
Little mod.

[Hard]

Hai dimenticato gli hitsounds all'inizio -w-

00:03:861 (1) - Clap
00:04:631 (5) - Clap
00:05:400 (8) - Clap
00:06:938 (1) - Whistle
00:07:708 (5) - Whistle solo all'inizio dello slider
00:08:477 (6) - Whistle ^
00:08:861 (7) - Whistle
00:10:015 (2) - Whistle
00:10:785 (6) - Whistle
00:11:554 (7) - Whistle
00:12:323 (8) - Whistle
00:13:092 (1) - Whistle
00:13:861 (3) - Whistle
00:14:631 (4) - Whistle
00:15:400 (7) - Whistle
00:16:169 (1) - Whistle
00:16:938 (3) - Whistle
00:17:708 (1) - Whistle
00:18:477 (5) - Whistle
00:43:765 (4) - Finish
01:15:785 (3) - Clap
01:17:323 (3) - Clap
01:20:400 (7) - Clap
01:58:092 (1) - Clap
01:58:381 (4) - Finish

[Easy]

00:05:400 - Lo spinner è troppo corto per un beginner ;____;
00:06:938 (1) - Whistle
00:10:015 (1) - ^
00:13:092 (1) - ^
00:16:169 (1) - ^
00:22:708 (1) - Clap
00:25:400 (2) - ^
00:31:554 (1) - ^
00:32:323 (3) - ^
00:34:015 (1) - ^
00:35:785 (1) - ^
00:37:323 (3) - ^
00:43:092 - Stessa cosa di 00:05:400 lo spinner è troppo corto per un beginner skdjkldjak
Topic Starter
Leader
Revy

Revy wrote:

Little mod.

[Hard]

Hai dimenticato gli hitsounds all'inizio -w-

00:03:861 (1) - Clap
00:04:631 (5) - Clap
00:05:400 (8) - Clap
00:06:938 (1) - Whistle
00:07:708 (5) - Whistle solo all'inizio dello slider
00:08:477 (6) - Whistle ^
00:08:861 (7) - Whistle
00:10:015 (2) - Whistle
00:10:785 (6) - Whistle
00:11:554 (7) - Whistle
00:12:323 (8) - Whistle
00:13:092 (1) - Whistle
00:13:861 (3) - Whistle
00:14:631 (4) - Whistle
00:15:400 (7) - Whistle
00:16:169 (1) - Whistle
00:16:938 (3) - Whistle
00:17:708 (1) - Whistle
00:18:477 (5) - Whistle
00:43:765 (4) - Finish
01:15:785 (3) - Clap
01:17:323 (3) - Clap
01:20:400 (7) - Clap
01:58:092 (1) - Clap
01:58:381 (4) - Finish

[Easy]

00:05:400 - Lo spinner è troppo corto per un beginner ;____;
00:06:938 (1) - Whistle
00:10:015 (1) - ^
00:13:092 (1) - ^
00:16:169 (1) - ^
00:22:708 (1) - Clap
00:25:400 (2) - ^
00:31:554 (1) - ^
00:32:323 (3) - ^
00:34:015 (1) - ^
00:35:785 (1) - ^
00:37:323 (3) - ^
00:43:092 - Stessa cosa di 00:05:400 lo spinner è troppo corto per un beginner skdjkldjak
Fixato tutto, grazie ><
Nemis
[Hard]

* ELEMENTI
• 00:07:708 (5) - Prova a rifarlo (questo slider è stato fatto prima dell'update degli sliders) rendendolo aderente al beat • 00:07:515 (4) -
• 00:18:092 (3) - Spostalo 1 quadrato verso sinistra ed uno verso l'alto nella griglia
• 00:34:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - Proverei con qualcos'altro, forse è carino da giocare ma esteticamente non lo è per nulla
• 00:51:169 (5,1) - Non trovo questo jump sensato in questo punto della map (soprattutto perchè la new combo è sbagliata). Fai una singletap con distanza omogenea (tutte queste note 00:50:785 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) oppure sposta il jump tra 00:51:361 (1,2) - e 00:51:554 (2) -
• 00:57:708 (1,2) - Non trovo il senso di questo jump
• 01:06:938 (1,2,3,4) - CTRL + J scorre molto di più
• 01:20:785 (1,2,3,4,5) - Potresti fare una stella
• 01:46:746 (2,3,4,5) - Fixa lo spacing
• 01:56:554 (5) - Cambierei questa forma

* RITMO
• 00:08:861 (7) - Quì andrebbe seguito lo stesso ritmo di che hai seguito 00:07:323 (3,4,5) - qua
• 00:11:554 (6) - Questo 1/4 non esiste!
• 00:12:323 (7) - Questo slider andrebbe sostituito con questo ritmo:
• 00:15:208 (7) - Quì andrebbe seguito lo stesso ritmo di che hai seguito 00:07:323 (3,4,5) - qua
• 00:18:477 (5) - Andrebbe allungato fino ad 1/4 prima del prossimo slider
• 00:31:458 (8) - Andrebbe aggiunto un beat per completare lo stream
• 00:40:881 (1) - Parte a 00:40:785 (1) - e finisce a 00:42:708 (1) - (stessa fine di prima praticamente, ma siccome hai spostato lo spinner di 1/4 indietro è necessario sistemare la fine)
• 00:43:765 (4) - Non esiste, togli il beat
• 00:56:554 (2,3,1) - Dovresti sostituire questo ritmo con
• 01:00:015 (6) - Dovresti sostituire questo ritmo con
oppure aggiungendo una nota su 01:00:592 (7) - . Due opzioni perchè hai usato sia il primo ritmo sia l'altro nei pattern prima
• 01:01:746 (5) - Sento una nota qui ed uno stream partire dalla fine di 01:01:554 (4) - fino all'inizio di 01:02:323 (1) - , quindi fai un ritmo come questo:
• 01:04:919 (7) - Toglierei questa nota ed aggiungerei uno slider 1/2 che parte 01:05:015 (8) - qui. Se non vuoi togliere la nota per tenere lo stream è comunque necessario modificare il pattern aggiungendo una nota su 01:05:015 (8) -
• 01:23:092 (9,1) - E' molto scomodo giocare una distanza che vale 3/4 nel tempo, soprattutto quando si parte da un tick blu (la fine dello slider (9))
• 01:23:861 (2,3) - Stessa cosa di prima
• 01:25:400 (7,8) - Stessa cosa di nuovo
• 01:29:823 (9) - Sento una nota
• 01:32:131 (6) - Sento una nota
• 01:33:669 (4) - Questa nota andrebbe sostituita con uno slider 1/8 che vada fino a 01:33:813 (5) - (se togli lo slider che c'è dopo fai finire lo slider 1/8 su 01:33:861 (1) - )
• 01:35:400 (6) - Metti una nota quì
• 01:37:708 (5,6) - Scomodo da giocare come ho già detto
• 01:40:977 (4) - Nota
• 01:58:381 (4) - Sposta questa nota 1/4 avanti e fixa spacing

* COMBO
• 00:05:400 (1) - New
• 00:06:169 (1) - Remove
• 00:17:708 (1) - Remove (fino ad ora non l'hai mai messa dopo 1 tick bianco grande)
• 00:28:092 (9) - Remove
• 00:28:477 (11) - New
• 00:30:785 (1) - Remove
• 00:37:323 (1) - Remove
• 00:37:708 (3) - New
Siccome fino ad ora come ho già detto hai messo una new combo ogni 2 tick grandi bianchi anzichè 1 ti faccio togliere tutte le new combo di troppo (la maggior parte sono anche sbagliate)
• 00:51:361 (1) - Remove
• 00:54:631 (1) - Remove
• 00:57:515 (1) - Remove
• 01:00:785 (1) - Remove
• 01:03:669 (1) - Remove
• 01:06:938 (1) - Non te la faccio togliere perchè ci sta bene, ma
• 01:07:708 (1) - questa dovresti rimuoverla perchè mi sembra di troppo
Da 01:15:015 (1) - potranno sembrarti strane le new combo che ti farò aggiungere/togliere perchè partono ad ogni metà dei due tick bianchi. Infatti dovresti aggiungere un tick rosso (Timing Point) quà 01:09:246 (3) - per far in modo che tu capisca meglio le new combo (ma a parte questo, credo sia proprio necessario mettere questo tick!)
• 01:19:631 (5) - New
• 01:20:785 (1) - Remove
• 01:21:554 (8) - New
• 01:23:669 (6) - Remove
• 01:24:631 (9) - New
• 01:33:092 (1) - Remove
• 01:39:630 (1) - Remove
• 01:40:015 (3) - New
• 01:42:708 (1) - Remove
• 01:43:092 (3) - New
• 01:44:054 (2) - Remove
• 01:49:054 (1) - Remove
• 01:49:246 (2) - New
• 01:51:938 (1) - Remove
• 01:52:323 (2) - New
• 01:55:015 (1) - Remove
• 01:55:400 (3) - New

* HITSOUNDS (moddo quel che riesco...)
• 00:00:785 (1,2,3,4) - In ogni slider togli il piatto che c'è al centro e mettilo alla fine
• 00:25:400 (1) - Clap
• 00:26:554 (4) - Clap
• 00:26:746 (5) - Rimuovi clap
• 00:29:631 (5) - Clap
• 00:31:169 (5) - Io aggiungerei anche quì il clap ma non so... io li metto sempre negli streams se ci devono essere, ma sta a te decidere
• Da 00:31:554 (1) - a 00:40:015 (8) - hai cambiato il modo di inserire i clap... a mio parere ci stavano parecchio bene nell'impostazione di prima. Quindi toglierei tutti i clap che ci son da qua in poi e partendo dal tick bianco grande metterei clap alternati (senza clap, clap, senza clap, clap...). Per facilitarti metti beat snap divisor su 1/1. Per capirci:
Dove ho messo i pallini rossi bisogna mettere clap
Stessa cosa nelle parti:
Da 00:56:169 (1) - a 01:08:477 (2) -
Da 01:44:054 (1) - a 01:58:381 (4) -
Prima di procedere ti consiglio di sistemare come ti ho detto, perchè questi pezzi non li ho moddati siccome i problemi degli hitsounds sono questi
• 00:43:765 (4) - Prima qui vi era un beat con finish, ora mettilo su 00:43:669 (3) -
• 00:55:785 (6) - Metterei un clap quà, ma come ho giò detto prima non so... io li metto sempre, sia se sono 1/2 o 1/4
• 01:33:477 (2) - Stessa cosa
• 01:40:015 (3) - Clap
• 01:41:745 (6) - Clap
• 01:43:092 (3) - Clap
Per ora mi fermo... tornerò a moddare le altre 2 diff e a ricontrollare questa diff più avanti
Topic Starter
Leader
Nemis

Nemis wrote:

[Hard]

* ELEMENTI
• 00:07:708 (5) - Prova a rifarlo (questo slider è stato fatto prima dell'update degli sliders) rendendolo aderente al beat • 00:07:515 (4) -
Sistemato
• 00:18:092 (3) - Spostalo 1 quadrato verso sinistra ed uno verso l'alto nella griglia Done
• 00:34:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - Proverei con qualcos'altro, forse è carino da giocare ma esteticamente non lo è per nulla A me piace così com'è ora, se qualcun altro chiede di fixare lo farò
• 00:51:169 (5,1) - Non trovo questo jump sensato in questo punto della map (soprattutto perchè la new combo è sbagliata). Fai una singletap con distanza omogenea (tutte queste note 00:50:785 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) oppure sposta il jump tra 00:51:361 (1,2) - e 00:51:554 (2) - Sistemato con una distanza omogenea ~
• 00:57:708 (1,2) - Non trovo il senso di questo jump Preferisco tenere così
• 01:06:938 (1,2,3,4) - CTRL + J scorre molto di più Fatto, anche se mi piaceva com'era prima ;_;
• 01:20:785 (1,2,3,4,5) - Potresti fare una stella Done
• 01:46:746 (2,3,4,5) - Fixa lo spacing Done
• 01:56:554 (5) - Cambierei questa forma In effetti.. ora dovrebbe andare meglio

* RITMO
• 00:08:861 (7) - Quì andrebbe seguito lo stesso ritmo di che hai seguito 00:07:323 (3,4,5) - qua Done

• 00:11:554 (6) - Questo 1/4 non esiste! Ooops, sistemato :x
• 00:12:323 (7) - Questo slider andrebbe sostituito con questo ritmo: Fixed
• 00:15:208 (7) - Quì andrebbe seguito lo stesso ritmo di che hai seguito 00:07:323 (3,4,5) - qua Preferisco tenere così
• 00:18:477 (5) - Andrebbe allungato fino ad 1/4 prima del prossimo slider Fixed
• 00:31:458 (8) - Andrebbe aggiunto un beat per completare lo stream ^
• 00:40:881 (1) - Parte a 00:40:785 (1) - e finisce a 00:42:708 (1) - (stessa fine di prima praticamente, ma siccome hai spostato lo spinner di 1/4 indietro è necessario sistemare la fine) ^
• 00:43:765 (4) - Non esiste, togli il beat ^
• 00:56:554 (2,3,1) - Dovresti sostituire questo ritmo con ^
• 01:00:015 (6) - Dovresti sostituire questo ritmo con Sistemato con la prima opzione che hai detto
oppure aggiungendo una nota su 01:00:592 (7) - . Due opzioni perchè hai usato sia il primo ritmo sia l'altro nei pattern prima
• 01:01:746 (5) - Sento una nota qui ed uno stream partire dalla fine di 01:01:554 (4) - fino all'inizio di 01:02:323 (1) - , quindi fai un ritmo come questo:
Fatto
• 01:04:919 (7) - Toglierei questa nota ed aggiungerei uno slider 1/2 che parte 01:05:015 (8) - qui. Se non vuoi togliere la nota per tenere lo stream è comunque necessario modificare il pattern aggiungendo una nota su 01:05:015 (8) - Aggiunto lo slider
• 01:23:092 (9,1) - E' molto scomodo giocare una distanza che vale 3/4 nel tempo, soprattutto quando si parte da un tick blu (la fine dello slider (9)) Fixed
• 01:23:861 (2,3) - Stessa cosa di prima ^
• 01:25:400 (7,8) - Stessa cosa di nuovo ^
• 01:29:823 (9) - Sento una nota No
• 01:32:131 (6) - Sento una nota ^
• 01:33:669 (4) - Questa nota andrebbe sostituita con uno slider 1/8 che vada fino a 01:33:813 (5) - (se togli lo slider che c'è dopo fai finire lo slider 1/8 su 01:33:861 (1) - ) Fixed
• 01:35:400 (6) - Metti una nota quì No
• 01:37:708 (5,6) - Scomodo da giocare come ho già detto Fixed
• 01:40:977 (4) - Nota No
• 01:58:381 (4) - Sposta questa nota 1/4 avanti e fixa spacing Done

* COMBO
• 00:05:400 (1) - New
• 00:06:169 (1) - Remove
• 00:17:708 (1) - Remove (fino ad ora non l'hai mai messa dopo 1 tick bianco grande)
• 00:28:092 (9) - Remove
• 00:28:477 (11) - New
• 00:30:785 (1) - Remove No
• 00:37:323 (1) - Remove
• 00:37:708 (3) - New
Siccome fino ad ora come ho già detto hai messo una new combo ogni 2 tick grandi bianchi anzichè 1 ti faccio togliere tutte le new combo di troppo (la maggior parte sono anche sbagliate)
• 00:51:361 (1) - Remove
• 00:54:631 (1) - Remove
• 00:57:515 (1) - Remove
• 01:00:785 (1) - Remove
• 01:03:669 (1) - Remove
• 01:06:938 (1) - Non te la faccio togliere perchè ci sta bene, ma lol
• 01:07:708 (1) - questa dovresti rimuoverla perchè mi sembra di troppo
Da 01:15:015 (1) - potranno sembrarti strane le new combo che ti farò aggiungere/togliere perchè partono ad ogni metà dei due tick bianchi. Infatti dovresti aggiungere un tick rosso (Timing Point) quà 01:09:246 (3) - per far in modo che tu capisca meglio le new combo (ma a parte questo, credo sia proprio necessario mettere questo tick!)
• 01:19:631 (5) - New
• 01:20:785 (1) - Remove
• 01:21:554 (8) - New
• 01:23:669 (6) - Remove
• 01:24:631 (9) - New
• 01:33:092 (1) - Remove
• 01:39:630 (1) - Remove
• 01:40:015 (3) - New
• 01:42:708 (1) - Remove
• 01:43:092 (3) - New
• 01:44:054 (2) - Remove
• 01:49:054 (1) - Remove
• 01:49:246 (2) - New
• 01:51:938 (1) - Remove
• 01:52:323 (2) - New
• 01:55:015 (1) - Remove
• 01:55:400 (3) - New

* HITSOUNDS (moddo quel che riesco...)
• 00:00:785 (1,2,3,4) - In ogni slider togli il piatto che c'è al centro e mettilo alla fine Fixed
• 00:25:400 (1) - Clap
• 00:26:554 (4) - Clap
• 00:26:746 (5) - Rimuovi clap
• 00:29:631 (5) - Clap
• 00:31:169 (5) - Io aggiungerei anche quì il clap ma non so... io li metto sempre negli streams se ci devono essere, ma sta a te decidere Penso possa andare
• Da 00:31:554 (1) - a 00:40:015 (8) - hai cambiato il modo di inserire i clap... a mio parere ci stavano parecchio bene nell'impostazione di prima. Quindi toglierei tutti i clap che ci son da qua in poi e partendo dal tick bianco grande metterei clap alternati (senza clap, clap, senza clap, clap...). Per facilitarti metti beat snap divisor su 1/1. Per capirci:
Dove ho messo i pallini rossi bisogna mettere clap Perfetto, grazie mille
Stessa cosa nelle parti:
Da 00:56:169 (1) - a 01:08:477 (2) -
Da 01:44:054 (1) - a 01:58:381 (4) -
Prima di procedere ti consiglio di sistemare come ti ho detto, perchè questi pezzi non li ho moddati siccome i problemi degli hitsounds sono questi
• 00:43:765 (4) - Prima qui vi era un beat con finish, ora mettilo su 00:43:669 (3) -
• 00:55:785 (6) - Metterei un clap quà, ma come ho giò detto prima non so... io li metto sempre, sia se sono 1/2 o 1/4 Non saprei, lascio così atm :\
• 01:33:477 (2) - Stessa cosa
• 01:40:015 (3) - Clap
• 01:41:745 (6) - Clap
• 01:43:092 (3) - Clap
Per ora mi fermo... tornerò a moddare le altre 2 diff e a ricontrollare questa diff più avanti
That was long. Grazie mille per la mod :3
Lucyii
M4m per quel nabbo di Lead

[Easy]
No ti prego, metti almeno ar3 D:
00:05:400 (3) - New combo?
00:20:015 (2) - Adda un clap anche sulla fine
00:21:169 (3) - Togli il clap
00:21:554 (4) - Adda un clap sull'inizio
Con i clap devi andare avanti seguendo sempre lo stesso ritmo, ovvero Clap-Niente-Clap-Niente, controlla che sono tutti sbagliati lol
00:30:785 (1) - Delete nc
00:35:400 (1) - ^
00:39:246 (6) - Io metterei la nc qui, togliendola a 00:40:400 (1) -
00:56:169 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Non sarebbe meglio farli finire tutti un tick prima, sul tick bianco? (Anche 01:05:400 (1,2) - che ho saltato per sbaglio lol)
01:08:861 (1) - Qui è messo nel vuoto, non ha senso, mettilo a 01:09:246

[Chewin's Normal]
00:41:169 (2) - YEAHHOTROVATOQUALCOSADAMODDARE Non è perfettamente simmetrico, fixalo
01:09:246 - Io adderei un beat con finish e new combo

[Hard]
>Hard >Od7 Drain8. Mettili almeno a 6, sono buoni per un'insane così D:
00:15:208 (11) - Unredable con 2 reverse, leva un reverse e adda un beat
00:21:169 (5) - Stackalo con 00:20:400 (3) -
00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Attento allo spacing, hanno tutti uno spacing diverso, mettili tutti con lo stesso spacing (Ho detto 3 volte spacing omfg)
00:40:400 - Adda uno slider e sposta lo spinner sul tick blu, così: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/643810
00:43:669 (3) - Togli il finish
00:43:861 - Adda un beat con nc+finish

Complimenti, la hard è fatta bene, la easy è un po' una merda però </3
Topic Starter
Leader
Kiyro

Kiyro wrote:

M4m per quel nabbo di Lead

[Easy]
No ti prego, metti almeno ar3 D: ok w
00:05:400 (3) - New combo? Non ha senso lol
00:20:015 (2) - Adda un clap anche sulla fine
00:21:169 (3) - Togli il clap
00:21:554 (4) - Adda un clap sull'inizio
Con i clap devi andare avanti seguendo sempre lo stesso ritmo, ovvero Clap-Niente-Clap-Niente, controlla che sono tutti sbagliati lol
00:30:785 (1) - Delete nc
00:35:400 (1) - ^
00:39:246 (6) - Io metterei la nc qui, togliendola a 00:40:400 (1) -
00:56:169 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Non sarebbe meglio farli finire tutti un tick prima, sul tick bianco? (Anche 01:05:400 (1,2) - che ho saltato per sbaglio lol) Per ora preferisco tenerli così, aspetto altre mod :V
01:08:861 (1) - Qui è messo nel vuoto, non ha senso, mettilo a 01:09:246 Ops, fixato!

[Hard]
>Hard >Od7 Drain8. Mettili almeno a 6, sono buoni per un'insane così D: Messo OD6 e HP7
00:15:208 (11) - Unredable con 2 reverse, leva un reverse e adda un beat </3
00:21:169 (5) - Stackalo con 00:20:400 (3) - Fixed
00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Attento allo spacing, hanno tutti uno spacing diverso, mettili tutti con lo stesso spacing (Ho detto 3 volte spacing omfg) Dovrebbe andare meglio
00:40:400 - Adda uno slider e sposta lo spinner sul tick blu, così: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/643810 Rende meglio, fatto
00:43:669 (3) - Togli il finish Pensavo di averlo sistemato prima, vabbé, fixed
00:43:861 - Adda un beat con nc+finish ^

Complimenti, la hard è fatta bene, la easy è un po' una merda però </3 ty ghei <3
Thank you \o\
Melan Blue
I'll mod this, okay? :3

[General]
• Add prewiev point to the map. I suggest you add it on this part 00:19:246 -
• "th10" in tags.

[Hard]
00:06:554 (5) - Add normal sampleset on this whole slider.
00:09:246 (8) - Add whistle on the beginning.
00:09:246 (8,1) - This jump is too sudden and out of place. Reduce it to at least 1.60x.
00:09:823 (1) - Also, remove nc.
00:10:015 (10) - Add nc.
00:10:785 (5) - Add whistle on the end.
00:11:554 (6,10) - Add whistle.
00:12:708 (1,2,3,4) - Add normal sampleset on these notes.
00:14:631 (8) - Move 1 grid to the right.
00:19:246 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:25:400 (1) - Replace clap at the beginning with finish, add clap in the middle and remove clap at the end.
00:30:785 (1) - Add finish.
00:31:554 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:32:900 (4,5) - This works better: http://puu.sh/2e4Sn
00:37:708 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:40:400 (7) - Remove the repeat from this slider and move the spinner 1 tick to the left. And don't forget to place the end of the spinner back on the white tick.
00:50:015 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:55:400 (5) - Add normal sampleset on this whole slider.
01:00:015 (6,7) - Whoa, this is too much and out of place 0_0 Don't jump here, or at least reduse the distance.
01:05:400 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
01:06:938 (1) - Add finish.
01:08:477 (1) - Add nc and make the repeat end on the white tick. http://puu.sh/2e52E
01:15:015 (1) - Add clap.
01:15:400 (2) - Add finish.
01:16:554 (1,1) - Add clap.
01:18:861 (4) - Add clap on the beginning.
01:19:631 (1,3) - Add clap.
01:20:785 (4,5,6,7) - Add normal sampleset on these notes.
01:21:554 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
01:33:861 (1) - ^
01:37:708 (5) - Add clap at the end.
01:40:015 (1) - Replace clap at the beginning with finish and add clap in the middle.
01:45:015 (4,5,6) - Add normal sampleset on these notes.
01:45:400 (1) - Replace clap at the beginning with finish.
01:46:169 (1) - ^
01:50:592 (7) - Move it 1 grid down.
01:52:323 (1) - Replace clap at the beginning with finish.

[Chewin's Normal]
What's up with the combo colors? @w@' It's just a simple normal diff, do you really need all those fancy kiai colors?
00:19:246 - The main melody of the song starts here, so there should be no break time. Map this part please.

[Easy]
00:05:785 - Add a slider here? http://puu.sh/2e5n6
00:19:246 (1) - Replace clap at the beginning with finish.
00:25:400 (2) - ^
00:28:092 (1,2) - This rhythm is too difficult for the beginners. Do this: http://puu.sh/2e5sW
00:30:785 (3) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:31:554 (1) - Replace clap with finish.
00:37:708 (5) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:41:746 (6) - Move it on the white tick. http://puu.sh/2e5uN
00:43:092 (7) - Add finish at the end.
00:50:015 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:56:169 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - It bothers me that these slider end on the red ticks...
01:15:400 (2) - Add finish.
01:20:785 (1) - May confuse beginners. Remove it and add notes. http://puu.sh/2e5zf
01:21:554 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
01:25:015 (5) - Add nc.
01:33:861 (1) - Replace clap with finish.
01:40:015 (2) - Add finish on the beginning.
01:45:400 (1) - ^
01:46:169 (1) - Replace clap at the beginning with finish.
01:49:246 (4) - Add nc.
01:52:323 (2) - Add finish on the beginning.
01:56:361 (2) - May confuse beginners. Do something like this: http://puu.sh/2e5CM
Topic Starter
Leader
Leyko

Leyko wrote:

I'll mod this, okay? :3 Thank you very much ><

[General]
• Add prewiev point to the map. I suggest you add it on this part 00:19:246 -
• "th10" in tags.

[Hard]
00:06:554 (5) - Add normal sampleset on this whole slider.
00:09:246 (8) - Add whistle on the beginning.
00:09:246 (8,1) - This jump is too sudden and out of place. Reduce it to at least 1.60x.
00:09:823 (1) - Also, remove nc.
00:10:015 (10) - Add nc.
00:10:785 (5) - Add whistle on the end.
00:11:554 (6,10) - Add whistle.
00:12:708 (1,2,3,4) - Add normal sampleset on these notes.
00:14:631 (8) - Move 1 grid to the right.
00:19:246 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:25:400 (1) - Replace clap at the beginning with finish, add clap in the middle and remove clap at the end.
00:30:785 (1) - Add finish.
00:31:554 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:32:900 (4,5) - This works better: http://puu.sh/2e4Sn
00:37:708 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:40:400 (7) - Remove the repeat from this slider and move the spinner 1 tick to the left. And don't forget to place the end of the spinner back on the white tick. I prefer it in this way
00:50:015 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:55:400 (5) - Add normal sampleset on this whole slider.
01:00:015 (6,7) - Whoa, this is too much and out of place 0_0 Don't jump here, or at least reduse the distance.
01:05:400 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
01:06:938 (1) - Add finish.
01:08:477 (1) - Add nc and make the repeat end on the white tick. http://puu.sh/2e52E Done except nc.
01:15:015 (1) - Add clap.
01:15:400 (2) - Add finish.
01:16:554 (1,1) - Add clap.
01:18:861 (4) - Add clap on the beginning.
01:19:631 (1,3) - Add clap.
01:20:785 (4,5,6,7) - Add normal sampleset on these notes.
01:21:554 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
01:33:861 (1) - ^
01:37:708 (5) - Add clap at the end.
01:40:015 (1) - Replace clap at the beginning with finish and add clap in the middle.
01:45:015 (4,5,6) - Add normal sampleset on these notes.
01:45:400 (1) - Replace clap at the beginning with finish.
01:46:169 (1) - ^
01:50:592 (7) - Move it 1 grid down.
01:52:323 (1) - Replace clap at the beginning with finish.

[Easy]
00:05:785 - Add a slider here? http://puu.sh/2e5n6
00:19:246 (1) - Replace clap at the beginning with finish.
00:25:400 (2) - ^
00:28:092 (1,2) - This rhythm is too difficult for the beginners. Do this: http://puu.sh/2e5sW
00:30:785 (3) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:31:554 (1) - Replace clap with finish.
00:37:708 (5) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:41:746 (6) - Move it on the white tick. http://puu.sh/2e5uN
00:43:092 (7) - Add finish at the end.
00:50:015 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
00:56:169 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - It bothers me that these slider end on the red ticks...
01:15:400 (2) - Add finish.
01:20:785 (1) - May confuse beginners. Remove it and add notes. http://puu.sh/2e5zf
01:21:554 (1) - Add finish on the beginning.
01:25:015 (5) - Add nc.
01:33:861 (1) - Replace clap with finish.
01:40:015 (2) - Add finish on the beginning.
01:45:400 (1) - ^
01:46:169 (1) - Replace clap at the beginning with finish.
01:49:246 (4) - Add nc.
01:52:323 (2) - Add finish on the beginning.
01:56:361 (2) - May confuse beginners. Do something like this: http://puu.sh/2e5CM
Thank you for mod :3
BCI
good luck with the map <3
Topic Starter
Leader

BCI wrote:

good luck with the map <3
Link doesn't work :\
BCI
it's the original pic ;__; b-but it works good and quality don't get missed Q.Q /runs
Verlaren
From Aincrad's Modding queue.

General:
Use grid level 3


Easy:
00:24:246 - add note
00:40:040(5) - NC
01:25:015(5) - ^
01:37:323(6) - NC
01:38:861 - add note
01:48:092 - ^


Chewin's normal:
Oh Chewin, excellent work!


Hard:
00:14:631(8) - NC
00:15:977 - add note
00:28:477(1) - nove NC to 00:28:092(9)
00:37:708(1) - move NC to 00:37:323(7)
00:43:477(1) - remove NC
01:00:758(7) - NC
01:15:015 - remove red line. It is not needed. Select inherit previous timing settings in timing panel.
01:40:015(1) - move NC to 01:39:631(8)
01:43:092(1) - move NC to 01:42:708(9)
01:52:323(1) - move NC to previous pattern
01:55:400(1) - move NC to 01:55:015(10)
01:58:092(1) - remove NC


Nice map. Good luck.
Topic Starter
Leader
Verlaren

Verlaren wrote:

From Aincrad's Modding queue.

General:
Use grid level 3 uh, 'kay


Easy:
00:24:246 - add note Nah o.o
00:40:040(5) - NC k
01:25:015(5) - ^ nope
01:37:323(6) - NC ^
01:38:861 - add note ^
01:48:092 - ^ Added

Hard:
00:14:631(8) - NC
00:15:977 - add note
00:28:477(1) - nove NC to 00:28:092(9) better, fixed
00:37:708(1) - move NC to 00:37:323(7) ^
00:43:477(1) - remove NC I don't think it's needed
01:00:758(7) - NC ^
01:15:015 - remove red line. It is not needed. Select inherit previous timing settings in timing panel. Removed
01:40:015(1) - move NC to 01:39:631(8)
01:43:092(1) - move NC to 01:42:708(9)
01:52:323(1) - move NC to previous pattern
01:55:400(1) - move NC to 01:55:015(10)
01:58:092(1) - remove NC Same as before


Nice map. Good luck. Thank you ^^

Thank you very much :3
Saten
Hey~ I'm here

[Hard]
00:08:477 (6) - NC here
00:11:554 (6) - ^
00:17:708 (5) - ^
00:34:823 (2,4) - space it out more? It becomes much easier to read imo 00:35:977 (6) - odd 1/1 slider that skips an important beat in the middle. It should be an 1/2 instead of 1/1 because this slider starts on an offbeat which make it awkward. if you wanna keep the slider as it is, I suggest doing what you did here 01:38:285 (6,7) -
00:37:708 (3) - finish on start
00:43:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this stream makes the last note very deceiving. I recommend moving the last note much further away
00:57:515 (4,5) - A NC on either of them, but I would say (4) imo
01:00:785 (7) - The combo seems a bit long here. A NC would be good here. I'm not sure if it's intended really. But if you did the previous ones, don't stop here.
01:06:938 (1,2,3,4) - scale this square jump a bit. The jump somewhat big for being in a Hard difficulty
01:07:708 (5,6) - Center this so the head of (5) is in the centre
01:08:477 (6) - NC this so it becomes easier to read
01:09:054 - move the break to 01:09:246 -
01:27:708 (3) - finish on start
01:28:285 (4,5) - this part looked like if there were gonna be 2 repeats
01:33:092 (6,7,8,9) - I'd chose to either put a 4-repeat slider or a regular stream until you reach the 1/8 slider
01:33:092 (6) - add a NC on this
01:35:208 (5) - same as 00:35:977 (6) -
01:50:592 (7) - ^same as above
01:52:322 (2) - is a finish really necessary here?
01:57:708 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as before about the last note. But I would prefer a full 1/4 stream instead (same goes for the previous part mentioned)

[Chewin' gum]
I see you love triangles too
It might sound unreasonable to you, but I do think AR +1 would be much better for the flow
00:19:246 - this break is rather long, don't you think? You should map this part as well imo. Even the Easy has this part mapped.
00:30:785 (1) - I would try something else than having this 2-repeat slider here. it's kinda confusing, especially right after a break. I think it's safe to remove this imo (unless you map the break)
01:45:400 (4,5) - make this either like 01:33:092 (1) - or make both like this 01:45:400 (4,5) - to stay consistent

[Easy]
00:29:631 (2,1) - this overlap looks kinda bad. Try to re-arrange a bit
00:37:708 (5) - finish on start
00:41:746 (2) - This is placed on the wrong beat. It should be moved to 00:41:938 - . Also do something about the spacing when you've moved it
01:20:785 (1) - change the direction of this so it doesn't touch the next object to make it less confusing 01:21:554 (1) - finish on start
01:27:708 (1) - ^
01:33:861 (1) - finsih
01:40:015 (2) - finish on start
01:42:708 (1,2) - don't try this at home The spacing is very misleading here. Do the same as you did here 01:31:169 (2,3) - . Have a look at the previous part and compare 00:29:631 (2) -
01:52:323 (2) - finish on start


That's all. I personally would like having 1,0x spacing rather than 0,8x (on Hard). But what's done is done :p
Hope you have any use of this mod

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Leader
Saten

Saten wrote:

Hey~ I'm here

[Hard]
00:08:477 (6) - NC here mhm ok
00:11:554 (6) - ^ ^
00:17:708 (5) - ^ ^
00:34:823 (2,4) - space it out more? It becomes much easier to read imo much better, fixed 00:35:977 (6) - odd 1/1 slider that skips an important beat in the middle. It should be an 1/2 instead of 1/1 because this slider starts on an offbeat which make it awkward. if you wanna keep the slider as it is, I suggest doing what you did here 01:38:285 (6,7) - done like 01:38:285 (6,7)
00:37:708 (3) - finish on start ok
00:43:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this stream makes the last note very deceiving. I recommend moving the last note much further away moved 2 grid down, don't know if i should move more D:
00:57:515 (4,5) - A NC on either of them, but I would say (4) imo No, i'd rather keep like this
01:00:785 (7) - The combo seems a bit long here. A NC would be good here. I'm not sure if it's intended really. But if you did the previous ones, don't stop here. Like before ^
01:06:938 (1,2,3,4) - scale this square jump a bit. The jump somewhat big for being in a Hard difficulty Not now, waiting for more mods that will point that
01:07:708 (5,6) - Center this so the head of (5) is in the centre Ok
01:08:477 (6) - NC this so it becomes easier to read Done
01:09:054 - move the break to 01:09:246 - Moved
01:27:708 (3) - finish on start Ok
01:28:285 (4,5) - this part looked like if there were gonna be 2 repeats Should be better now
01:33:092 (6,7,8,9) - I'd chose to either put a 4-repeat slider or a regular stream until you reach the 1/8 slider There's a stream noe \o/
01:33:092 (6) - add a NC on this Ok
01:35:208 (5) - same as 00:35:977 (6) - Done
01:50:592 (7) - ^same as above ^
01:52:322 (2) - is a finish really necessary here? Mhm, sounds better now
01:57:708 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as before about the last note. But I would prefer a full 1/4 stream instead (same goes for the previous part mentioned) I prefer in this way, for now


[Easy]
00:29:631 (2,1) - this overlap looks kinda bad. Try to re-arrange a bit Ok
00:37:708 (5) - finish on start Ok
00:41:746 (2) - This is placed on the wrong beat. It should be moved to 00:41:938 - . Also do something about the spacing when you've moved it It should be better now
01:20:785 (1) - change the direction of this so it doesn't touch the next object to make it less confusing fixed like in screenshot01:21:554 (1) - finish on start Ok
01:27:708 (1) - ^ ^
01:33:861 (1) - finsih ^
01:40:015 (2) - finish on start ^
01:42:708 (1,2) - don't try this at home The spacing is very misleading here. Do the same as you did here 01:31:169 (2,3) - . Have a look at the previous part and compare 00:29:631 (2) - uh ;_; fixed
01:52:323 (2) - finish on start Ok


That's all. I personally would like having 1,0x spacing rather than 0,8x (on Hard). But what's done is done :p Yeah, when I took the map after months in graveyard I was thinking the same
Hope you have any use of this mod

Good luck!
Thank you >w<
Chewin
thank you, mapped the break

SPOILER
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Topic Starter
Leader

Chewin wrote:

thank you, mapped the break

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Updated!
Chewin
Oh shiet.
Baka Scimo Neko, ho dimenticato qualcosa ieri perchè andavo di fretta, scusa.

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492,288,104631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,328,105400,2,0,L|152:360,2,70
284,340,105977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,284,106169,54,0,P|404:288|460:244,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,188,106746,1,2,2:0:0:0:
436,128,106938,2,0,L|312:40,1,140
256,80,107515,1,2,2:0:0:0:
190,46,107708,6,0,L|76:128,1,140
36,188,108285,1,2,2:0:0:0:
72,248,108477,2,0,B|88:304|56:376|56:372,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,216,109246,53,0,0:0:0:0:
292,328,109631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,200,110015,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,216,110400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,328,110785,6,0,P|384:336|448:272,2,140
152,344,111938,2,0,L|108:280,1,70
76,224,112323,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,88,112708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,188,113092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,224,113477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,88,113861,54,0,P|148:96|200:68,1,70
240,56,114246,2,0,P|271:46|307:54,1,70
356,104,114631,2,0,P|420:120|512:88,2,140
316,236,115785,5,0,0:0:0:0:
228,344,116169,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,292,116361,2,0,L|172:208,2,70
256,192,116938,12,0,118477,0:0:0:0:
Leorda
Hi there

[General]
* Set the Audio-Lead In to 2000 for all diff. Because all diff is having an inconsistency in Audio Lead-In


[Easy]
* I feel this diff has a random clap. Consider to add clap at object when it snap at 3rd white tick

00:37:708 (5,1) - Swap new combo for following stanza and music part
00:51:554 (2,3) - Spacing are error here, also stacking for easiest diff are not recommended. It causes beginners are confusing during gameplay
00:55:400 (3,4) - Stacking for easiest diff are not recommended
01:20:785 (1) - Why NC?
01:57:323 (1) - This spinner is too short, it can be hard to complete it for beginners. Consider to replace it with slider


[Chew's Normal]
00:30:015 (3) - Add clap at tail slider
01:52:323 (1) - Add finish?


[Hard]
* Your starup position of background must be 0,0. Otherwise, your BG is at the wrong position. Fix this by copy this into your OSU file

0,0,"bghina.png",0,0

00:17:708 (5) - New combo?
00:34:054 (7) - Why clap at start slider? It supposed at repeating slider
01:19:631 (1) - Clap?
01:33:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These stream pattern needs to be perfectly curve, BTW (nazi)
01:41:745 (6) - Why clap at start slider? It supposed at end slider
01:44:054 (4) - ^


Good luck~
Topic Starter
Leader
Leorda

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* Set the Audio-Lead In to 2000 for all diff. Because all diff is having an inconsistency in Audio Lead-In Ok o3o


[Easy]
* I feel this diff has a random clap. Consider to add clap at object when it snap at 3rd white tick Mhm, I'm not sure, I will look better later.

00:37:708 (5,1) - Swap new combo for following stanza and music part Fixed
00:51:554 (2,3) - Spacing are error here, also stacking for easiest diff are not recommended. It causes beginners are confusing during gameplay Changed
00:55:400 (3,4) - Stacking for easiest diff are not recommended ^
01:20:785 (1) - Why NC? I thought I fixed this before.. Well, removed.
01:57:323 (1) - This spinner is too short, it can be hard to complete it for beginners. Consider to replace it with slider I kept the spinner, but now is 1/2 longer, it should be okay now.

[Hard]
* Your starup position of background must be 0,0. Otherwise, your BG is at the wrong position. Fix this by copy this into your OSU file

0,0,"bghina.png",0,0 Done :3

00:17:708 (5) - New combo? Right, fixed.
00:34:054 (7) - Why clap at start slider? It supposed at repeating slider Done
01:19:631 (1) - Clap? Done
01:33:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These stream pattern needs to be perfectly curve, BTW (nazi) It should be better now
01:41:745 (6) - Why clap at start slider? It supposed at end slider Fixed
01:44:054 (4) - ^ ^


Good luck~
Thank you <3
pandaikon
hi

mostly suggestions down below

[Easy]
00:03:861 (1,3,4) - it's a really minor thing, but maybe you could move 00:05:400 (3,4) - a bit so it won't look too close to 00:03:861 (1) . i tried to fix it, see if you like it
code
292,276,4246,2,2,P|344:332|420:320,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,248,5400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,180,5785,2,0,P|372:120|276:112,1,160
212,92,6938,6,0,P|149:192|198:300,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,264,8477,2,0,P|336:228|424:248,1,160
00:28:092 (1) - try extending this slider so it will finish at 00:29:246 - it sounds better imo, since as it is now, you are missing that point, which makes a really strange gap in the rhythm.
00:40:400 (1) - same as above, though here is pretty ok as it is. it's up to you whether you want to change it or not.
01:31:746 (3) - this is a bit strange to play. why not move it at 01:31:938 - it'll sounds really ok there
01:50:785 (4,1) - move 01:51:938 (1) - a bit so it won't touch the slider

[Chewin's Normal]
01:07:708 (3) - just a silly thing. maybe you could end this slide at 01:08:861 ?
01:18:285 (1) - move this at 01:18:092 - and make it a reverse slider. it sounds better imo.

[Hard]
00:06:169 (4,5) - i'd suggest you to make these two sliders into a single one that covers 00:06:458.
00:09:823 (4) - this jump is kinda strange to read/feel. try moving this note at the end of 00:08:861 (2) - so the jump will be at the start of the NC.
00:23:861 (7) - NC?
00:28:477 (3) - extend this slider so the reverse will occur at 00:28:861
00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - small thing, but maybe instead of a stream here you can insert jumps. remove the notes from the blue ticks and add jumps between the rest, since it will go better with the loud notes of this part.
00:40:881 (1) - maybe you could map this part, instead of leaving that slider there? it just looks a bit out of it's place imo.
01:00:785 (7) - NC?
01:04:919 - add a note here
01:30:785 (3) - extend the slider so the reverse will be on 01:31:169
01:43:861 - feels kinda empty. maybe add a note here? or you could make 01:43:092 (3) - a reverse slider.
01:51:746 - add a note here? if so, NC at 01:50:785 (8) - so the combo counter won't go past 10
01:55:400 (3) - same as 01:30:785 (3)

that's a really nice mapset, so good luck in ranking it :D
Topic Starter
Leader
pandaikon

pandaikon wrote:

hi

mostly suggestions down below

[Easy]
00:03:861 (1,3,4) - it's a really minor thing, but maybe you could move 00:05:400 (3,4) - a bit so it won't look too close to 00:03:861 (1) . i tried to fix it, see if you like it Much better
292,276,4246,2,2,P|344:332|420:320,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,248,5400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,180,5785,2,0,P|372:120|276:112,1,160
212,92,6938,6,0,P|149:192|198:300,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,264,8477,2,0,P|336:228|424:248,1,160
00:28:092 (1) - try extending this slider so it will finish at 00:29:246 - it sounds better imo, since as it is now, you are missing that point, which makes a really strange gap in the rhythm. Ok
00:40:400 (1) - same as above, though here is pretty ok as it is. it's up to you whether you want to change it or not. Mhm, I keep it in this way
01:31:746 (3) - this is a bit strange to play. why not move it at 01:31:938 - it'll sounds really ok there It was there! Fixed the mistake :v
01:50:785 (4,1) - move 01:51:938 (1) - a bit so it won't touch the slider Whoops, fixed

[Hard]
00:06:169 (4,5) - i'd suggest you to make these two sliders into a single one that covers 00:06:458. Nah, I like them as they are
00:09:823 (4) - this jump is kinda strange to read/feel. try moving this note at the end of 00:08:861 (2) - so the jump will be at the start of the NC. Better, fixed
00:23:861 (7) - NC? No
00:28:477 (3) - extend this slider so the reverse will occur at 00:28:861 Ok~
00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - small thing, but maybe instead of a stream here you can insert jumps. remove the notes from the blue ticks and add jumps between the rest, since it will go better with the loud notes of this part.Mhm, nice idea, I'll see later o3o
00:40:881 (1) - maybe you could map this part, instead of leaving that slider there? it just looks a bit out of it's place imo. Nah, i'll leave the spinner
01:00:785 (7) - NC? No :v
01:04:919 - add a note here ^
01:30:785 (3) - extend the slider so the reverse will be on 01:31:169 Done
01:43:861 - feels kinda empty. maybe add a note here? or you could make 01:43:092 (3) - a reverse slider. It is worse, imo
01:51:746 - add a note here? if so, NC at 01:50:785 (8) - so the combo counter won't go past 10 ^
01:55:400 (3) - same as 01:30:785 (3) Done~

that's a really nice mapset, so good luck in ranking it :D wow, thanks >w<
Thank you very much ~
riffy
yo

[General]
  1. Your audioLedIn is inconsistent. (check it in .osu file). Not a big problem, but you'd better fix it. see? Audio Lead In 1500 will be enough for all diffs, I think.
  2. Since Cheiwn's diff has the same background, why can't it use the same combo colours?
  3. I'd recommend you to use slider tick rate 2 it feels much better here.
  4. Disable countdown, it is kinda weird to have it enabled here.
[Easy]
  1. Try to reduce OD by one tick, it feels like current one is too high an may stress beginners.
  2. 00:08:477 (2,1) - try to avoid patterns like this one. 00:10:015 (1)'s end is too close to 00:08:477 (2) - so beginners might mistakenly click it.
    flow in easy diffs
    Green is a correct flow which is hardly understandable for beginners.
    Red is wrong flow. it's easy for beginners, so they will follow wrong flow and miss the slider here.
  3. 00:13:092 (1) - nazi - since 00:14:631 (3) - is curved with two red slider-points, do the sae with (1) for onsistent pattern. something like this
  4. 00:22:323 - 00:23:092 (2) - 00:23:861 - there's no any claps in music, so placing claps here doesn't make any sense and sounds weird, to be honest. Try to follow music and remove these claps!
  5. 00:24:246 - I'd place a circle here to be more consistent. (btw, put a clap on a circle here) it will fit with backgound music
  6. 00:57:708 (2,2) - only these two sliders have claps which is off music. Reove capls here, to be consistent and replace them with whistls if you want to.
  7. 01:15:400 (2) - normmally, I'm not so picky with hitsounds. But that finish sounds too loud here, try to replace it with whistle? Or don't place any hitsound here at all.
  8. 01:21:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this combo feels th way too long. I'm sure that you've missd an NC somewhere and it ruined your consistent comboing :<
  9. 01:31:938 (3) - You'd better and this slider at 01:32:708 - because strong beat and clap hitsound are here. It will make rhythm more consistent, too!
  10. 01:38:861 - how about a circle for that clap sound in music? It will fit here quite good.
  11. 01:44:054 (3) - during the whole diff you have cute 1/1 rhythm with some 2/1 patterns Don't ruin it, keep this diff easy-playable, start this slider at 01:44:246
  12. 01:44:054 (3,1,1) - this comoing here is too much inconsistent. It will confuse/stress beginners. they don't expect TOO SHORT combo, try to remove one of these NCs
  13. 01:56:169 (2) - try to replace this slider with circle and slider (remove repeat, start slider at 01:56:554 - and put a circle at 01:56:169 - picture it will fit with music better,
  14. 01:57:131 (1) - I'd say that this spinner is too short for [Easy] diff, try to discuss it with other modders. I'm not sure about this one.
[Chewin's Normal]
  1. Your current OD is the same as on [Easy] Try to increase OD by 1 tick. To keep diffs balanced.
  2. 01:33:092 (1) - Second reverse appears too fast and it's quite unexpected here. I'd recommend you to replace this pattern with something else. Those sliders are uncommon for E/N diffs and they may stress players

    Nice boat diff.
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:208 (4) - [b]Second reverse appears too fast and it's quite unexpected here. I'd recommend you to replace this pattern with something else. It's not that bad for [Hard] diff but it's quite hard to read it :<
  2. 00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'm not really sure if it is okay for a [Hard] diff, I'd recommend you to replace it with 1/4 slider (reversed), so it'll be easier fr players
  3. 00:35:400 (5) - nazi - for sliders like this one, you can use new algorithm. It will make sliders much better-looking and easier to construct.
  4. 00:43:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) ? Can't you just finish spinner at 00:43:861? It's a hard diff, so I don't recommend you to use a lot of streams here :<
  5. 01:00:785 (7) - nazi - have you missed a NEw Combo here? It feels like you should place New Combo here.
  6. 01:05:785 (2,3,4) - nazi - try to keep jump distance under x2.0, this is not [Insane] diff, remember! I'm not really sure if it's needed but I feel like it's better to keep [Hard] diff playable
  7. 01:33:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - same as 00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1). I'm quite sure that 1/8 gap between 01:33:669 (7,1) - is too hard and stream doesn't makes it easier. Try to keep things easier!
  8. 01:45:400 (1,2) - this combo is the way too short. It feels quite inconsistent towards other combos, can't you fix it somehow?
  9. 01:57:708 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - if you have fixed previous suggestion about streams, replace this one with sliders, as well. So, you'll keep consistent patterns.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Leader
-Bakari-

-Bakari- wrote:

yo
[General]
  1. Your audioLedIn is inconsistent. (check it in .osu file). Not a big problem, but you'd better fix it. see? Audio Lead In 1500 will be enough for all diffs, I think. Well, now is consistent but I chose 2000
  2. Since Cheiwn's diff has the same background, why can't it use the same combo colours? I'll let him decide :v
  3. I'd recommend you to use slider tick rate 2 it feels much better here. Ok
  4. Disable countdown, it is kinda weird to have it enabled here. Disabled
[Easy]
  1. Try to reduce OD by one tick, it feels like current one is too high an may stress beginners. Done
  2. 00:08:477 (2,1) - try to avoid patterns like this one. 00:10:015 (1)'s end is too close to 00:08:477 (2) - so beginners might mistakenly click it. Well, fixed, it should be easier to read now
    SPOILER
    Green is a correct flow which is hardly understandable for beginners.
    Red is wrong flow. it's easy for beginners, so they will follow wrong flow and miss the slider here.
  3. 00:13:092 (1) - nazi - since 00:14:631 (3) - is curved with two red slider-points, do the sae with (1) for onsistent pattern. something like this k
  4. 00:22:323 - 00:23:092 (2) - 00:23:861 - there's no any claps in music, so placing claps here doesn't make any sense and sounds weird, to be honest. Try to follow music and remove these claps! Fixed
  5. 00:24:246 - I'd place a circle here to be more consistent. (btw, put a clap on a circle here) it will fit with backgound music Nice idea
  6. 00:57:708 (2,2) - only these two sliders have claps which is off music. Reove capls here, to be consistent and replace them with whistls if you want to. Removed claps
  7. 01:15:400 (2) - normmally, I'm not so picky with hitsounds. But that finish sounds too loud here, try to replace it with whistle? Or don't place any hitsound here at all. No more finish now
  8. 01:21:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this combo feels th way too long. I'm sure that you've missd an NC somewhere and it ruined your consistent comboing :< Add NC at 01:21:554 :3
  9. 01:31:938 (3) - You'd better and this slider at 01:32:708 - because strong beat and clap hitsound are here. It will make rhythm more consistent, too! My mistake, it was like that, I think xD fixed
  10. 01:38:861 - how about a circle for that clap sound in music? It will fit here quite good. Ok
  11. 01:44:054 (3) - during the whole diff you have cute 1/1 rhythm with some 2/1 patterns Don't ruin it, keep this diff easy-playable, start this slider at 01:44:246 Done
  12. 01:44:054 (3,1,1) - this comoing here is too much inconsistent. It will confuse/stress beginners. they don't expect TOO SHORT combo, try to remove one of these NCs Fixed
  13. 01:56:169 (2) - try to replace this slider with circle and slider (remove repeat, start slider at 01:56:554 - and put a circle at 01:56:169 - picture it will fit with music better, Much better, fixed
  14. 01:57:131 (1) - I'd say that this spinner is too short for [Easy] diff, try to discuss it with other modders. I'm not sure about this one. I asked two BATs and they said it's okay.
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:208 (4) - Second reverse appears too fast and it's quite unexpected here. I'd recommend you to replace this pattern with something else. It's not that bad for [Hard] diff but it's quite hard to read it :< Uh, it's readable
  2. 00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'm not really sure if it is okay for a [Hard] diff, I'd recommend you to replace it with 1/4 slider (reversed), so it'll be easier fr players [b]Fixed with 1/2 jumps as pandaikon suggested me in the previous mod
  3. 00:35:400 (5) - nazi - for sliders like this one, you can use new algorithm. It will make sliders much better-looking and easier to construct. Done
  4. 00:43:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as 00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) ? Can't you just finish spinner at 00:43:861? It's a hard diff, so I don't recommend you to use a lot of streams here :< Nah, it's fine :v
  5. 01:00:785 (7) - nazi - have you missed a NEw Combo here? It feels like you should place New Combo here. Added NC
  6. 01:05:785 (2,3,4) - nazi - try to keep jump distance under x2.0, this is not [Insane] diff, remember! I'm not really sure if it's needed but I feel like it's better to keep [Hard] diff playable I'll think about them later
  7. 01:33:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - same as 00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1). I'm quite sure that 1/8 gap between 01:33:669 (7,1) - is too hard and stream doesn't makes it easier. Try to keep things easier! ^
  8. 01:45:400 (1,2) - this combo is the way too short. It feels quite inconsistent towards other combos, can't you fix it somehow? Fixed
  9. 01:57:708 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - if you have fixed previous suggestion about streams, replace this one with sliders, as well. So, you'll keep consistent patterns. I'll keep them
~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Good luck!

Very helpful mod, thank you :3
MillhioreF
[Hard] testplay as requested in my queue~

Pretty alright map, seems fun enough.

Major complaints:
* There are a couple of places with no notes that feel hella awkward. The gap after 00:05:785 (3) might be all right since it somewhat fits the music, but there's no excuse for there not to be a 00:55:400 (5).

Minor complaints:
* 01:05:400 (1,2,3,4) - is probably all right since it's sliders and not very demanding for clicks, but 01:06:938 (1,2,3,4) - seems excessive for a Hard. I'd make the square smaller or remap it entirely.
* 01:20:785 (4,5,6,7,1) - This really ought to be a proper star, the distance is all wrong on it and it looks wonky (yes, I noticed this while playing)

Awesomeness:
* 01:19:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Despite looking kinda bad, this plays really nice, so kudos! Fix it up and it'll be awesome.

Solid map! Just needs a bit of polish and it should be good to go.
Marcin
Let's see what can I do:
[Easy]
01:05:400 (1,2) - I can hear finishes on both slider starts, how about putting a finish hitsound on them?
00:43:092 (3) - I'd shorten it by 1/1, and put reverse arrow to show the 1/4 stream being in music.
^ And finish on slider end
00:17:708 (3) - There is ... a finish in music on slider start, and you used whistle 00:16:169 (1) - on this, so: Put whistle on this slider start too.
01:19:438 (3) - I'm not sure, why there is wrong spacing here.... I don't see a reason.
Well, nothing really wrong.
Next:
[Chewin's Normal]
Nothing seems to be wrong, except:
01:06:938 (1) - I'd ctrl+h it.
00:21:938 (5) - Why have you used normal finish here, while:
00:25:400 (1) - here is soft finish?
00:51:554 (3,4,1) - why it's not aligned perefectly... (nazi /me runs)
01:15:400 (1,1,1) - I would use a little bit bigger spacing (like, 0,1?). I thought that they're perfectly stacked, but after playing them in editor, I spotted that they have 0,01 spacing. Either stack them, Unstack them, and place all around the map, or make the spacing a little bit bigger.
01:56:169 (2,3) - Well, I don't know why, but I'd more like them stacked like that: http://db.tt/fSoesC7b
[Hard]
00:06:554 (6) - It feels so.... strange, because before that, you could put atleast 4 1/4 circles. And not mentioning anty jump on that... If you space it better, this pattern (ofc. not putted like that, it's just example) http://db.tt/4HNcK7lQ Would fit very good here.
00:16:169 (1) - Finish on slider start.
00:17:708 (1) - ^ (except, this is a circle :P)
00:30:785 (1,2,3,4) - ... hm... I find this http://db.tt/CHNWobCu pattern fitting much better.
00:55:400 - ... undermapping? http://db.tt/f7Siwijy adding this, won't break anything, and It'll complete the rhythm.
01:04:919 - I find this moment, not having a circle.... strangely playing. How about stacking this triplet before, with a slider, and adding one more circle in place where I linked? (If you don't understand: http://db.tt/lJ0kdtEA ofc. not the same pattern, you'll need to rearrange it)
01:20:785 (1) - Daddy, Daddy look! It really wants new combo here! (oh come on... :D )
00:17:708 (1,2,3,4) - http://db.tt/r7zpR8zM It will really fit to the music here, screw that it's used almost everywhere.

I think, everything ... Star ~ cause I like this music, and map, and both <3
Topic Starter
Leader
MillhioreF

MillhioreF wrote:

[Hard] testplay as requested in my queue~

Pretty alright map, seems fun enough.

Major complaints:
* There are a couple of places with no notes that feel hella awkward. The gap after 00:05:785 (3) might be all right since it somewhat fits the music, but there's no excuse for there not to be a 00:55:400 (5). Added a slider

Minor complaints:
* 01:05:400 (1,2,3,4) - is probably all right since it's sliders and not very demanding for clicks, but 01:06:938 (1,2,3,4) - seems excessive for a Hard. I'd make the square smaller or remap it entirely. Square is now smaller
* 01:20:785 (4,5,6,7,1) - This really ought to be a proper star, the distance is all wrong on it and it looks wonky (yes, I noticed this while playing) It should be okay now

Awesomeness:
* 01:19:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Despite looking kinda bad, this plays really nice, so kudos! Fix it up and it'll be awesome. I like how it is D:

Solid map! Just needs a bit of polish and it should be good to go.

Marcin

Marcin wrote:

Let's see what can I do:
[Easy]
01:05:400 (1,2) - I can hear finishes on both slider starts, how about putting a finish hitsound on them? Don't agree, sorry
00:43:092 (3) - I'd shorten it by 1/1, and put reverse arrow to show the 1/4 stream being in music.
^ And finish on slider end Nice, changed
00:17:708 (3) - There is ... a finish in music on slider start, and you used whistle 00:16:169 (1) - on this, so: Put whistle on this slider start too. Ok
01:19:438 (3) - I'm not sure, why there is wrong spacing here.... I don't see a reason. Uh, fixed
Well, nothing really wrong.

[Hard]
00:06:554 (6) - It feels so.... strange, because before that, you could put atleast 4 1/4 circles. And not mentioning anty jump on that... If you space it better, this pattern (ofc. not putted like that, it's just example) http://db.tt/4HNcK7lQ Would fit very good here. Well, there was a slider, but i removed it by mistake, fixed ><
00:16:169 (1) - Finish on slider start. Whistle is better imo
00:17:708 (1) - ^ (except, this is a circle :P) ^
00:30:785 (1,2,3,4) - ... hm... I find this http://db.tt/CHNWobCu pattern fitting much better. I don't like it :\
00:55:400 - ... undermapping? http://db.tt/f7Siwijy adding this, won't break anything, and It'll complete the rhythm. As suggested before, added a slider :D
01:04:919 - I find this moment, not having a circle.... strangely playing. How about stacking this triplet before, with a slider, and adding one more circle in place where I linked? (If you don't understand: http://db.tt/lJ0kdtEA ofc. not the same pattern, you'll need to rearrange it) Okay, fixed
01:20:785 (1) - Daddy, Daddy look! It really wants new combo here! (oh come on... :D ) Added
00:17:708 (1,2,3,4) - http://db.tt/r7zpR8zM It will really fit to the music here, screw that it's used almost everywhere. Nah

I think, everything ... Star ~ cause I like this music, and map, and both <3
Thank you!
Andrea
~General~
  1. Easy has a different Audio Lead-In compared to the rest of the difficulties, please make sure to make it consistent.
~Easy~
  1. 00:01:169 (2) - I'd prefer if you remove the whistle from this slider body, it sounds too noisy.
  2. 00:04:246 (2) - Same as above for the same reason.
  3. 00:43:092 (3) - Remove the finish from this slider repeat and add a clap instead, fits much better with the music.
  4. 00:52:323 (4,1) - Wrong spacing, please make sure to fix it properly through using the distance snap.
  5. 00:56:169 (1) ~ 01:06:938 (2) - This part is missing hitsounds, please make sure to add them.
  6. 00:59:246 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if you can.
  7. 01:15:400 (2) - Add a finish on this circle to emphasize with the strong part of the song.
  8. 01:19:438 (3) - It would be better if you make this slider end on the next white tick, it fits much better and follows the instrumentals much more than now.
  9. 01:36:169 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change, also because otherwise it would be too long.
  10. 01:40:015 (2,3) - Wrong spacing, please make sure to fix it properly through using the distance snap.
~Chewin's Normal~
  1. 00:30:785 (1) - Even though you've added a new combo here, this slider have too many slider repeats, and that's way too confusing for a Normal, please try to make this part on a different way.
  2. 01:15:400 (1,1,1) - Try to space these notes a bit more, it would look better imo, like this.
  3. 01:33:092 (1) - Even though you've added a new combo here, this slider have too many slider repeats, and that's way too confusing for a Normal, please try to make this part on a different way.
~Hard~
  1. Increase OD by 1 tick at least, it's way too low for a Hard difficulty right now.
  1. 00:15:977 (5) - This circle is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.
  2. 00:28:477 (3) - Add a clap on this slider repeat, it seems that you're missing it.
  3. 00:36:169 (7) - Same as above for the same reason.
  4. 00:38:861 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't really like how you've spaced this pattern, try to make it like this, it flows better and plays much better as well.
  5. 01:06:938 (1) - Add a finish on this circle to emphasize with the strong part of the music.
  6. 01:07:515 (4) - Remove this finish then afterwards if you're going to follow the suggestion above.
  7. 01:15:208 - It feels like you're missing a circle here, why don't you add it? It would be nice to have it here.
  8. 01:36:361 (9,10) - Why such sudden jump here? It feels really random and unexpected, space it normally please.
  9. 01:46:746 (2) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.
  10. 01:50:785 (8,9,10) - Spacing is wrong here, please make sure to fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
Hope this can help you.
Topic Starter
Leader
Andrea

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. Easy has a different Audio Lead-In compared to the rest of the difficulties, please make sure to make it consistent. =w=
~Easy~
  1. 00:01:169 (2) - I'd prefer if you remove the whistle from this slider body, it sounds too noisy. Done
  2. 00:04:246 (2) - Same as above for the same reason. ^
  3. 00:43:092 (3) - Remove the finish from this slider repeat and add a clap instead, fits much better with the music. Changed
  4. 00:52:323 (4,1) - Wrong spacing, please make sure to fix it properly through using the distance snap. Fixed
  5. 00:56:169 (1) ~ 01:06:938 (2) - This part is missing hitsounds, please make sure to add them. I totally have no idea what to put, I'll try ;_;
  6. 00:59:246 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if you can. Whoops
  7. 01:15:400 (2) - Add a finish on this circle to emphasize with the strong part of the song. Too loud imo
  8. 01:19:438 (3) - It would be better if you make this slider end on the next white tick, it fits much better and follows the instrumentals much more than now. Ok :3
  9. 01:36:169 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change, also because otherwise it would be too long. Done
  10. 01:40:015 (2,3) - Wrong spacing, please make sure to fix it properly through using the distance snap. [b]Fixed[/b]
~Hard~
  1. Increase OD by 1 tick at least, it's way too low for a Hard difficulty right now. [b]HP7 now[/b]

  1. 00:15:977 (5) - This circle is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible. Ok
  2. 00:28:477 (3) - Add a clap on this slider repeat, it seems that you're missing it. Added
  3. 00:36:169 (7) - Same as above for the same reason. ^
  4. 00:38:861 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't really like how you've spaced this pattern, try to make it like this, it flows better and plays much better as well. Followed your advice, thank you :P
  5. 01:06:938 (1) - Add a finish on this circle to emphasize with the strong part of the music. Done
  6. 01:07:515 (4) - Remove this finish then afterwards if you're going to follow the suggestion above.
  7. 01:15:208 - It feels like you're missing a circle here, why don't you add it? It would be nice to have it here. Mhm, I'm not sure but added
  8. 01:36:361 (9,10) - Why such sudden jump here? It feels really random and unexpected, space it normally please. Better now
  9. 01:46:746 (2) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible. Moved
  10. 01:50:785 (8,9,10) - Spacing is wrong here, please make sure to fix it properly with distance snap enabled. Is that really necessary?
Hope this can help you.
Grazie mille :3
BCI
I want my kd back so here we go :<

[General]
  1. i'd also add MoF in tags as a abbreviation of Mountain of Faith
  2. you know, ZUN loves metronome changes :U 01:09:246 - here should be a red point with 4/4 metronome o3о
  3. how about adding ~in title (original) ?
  4. I suggest some combocolours o3ob
    click me pls

    lel I tried to move it so you'll see that 1 color follows 1 thing (hair/sky/dress)
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 107,143,48
    Combo2 : 86,94,158
    Combo3 : 101,39,70
    Combo4 : 226,5,5
[Easy]
  1. try to add claps at 2-4 white ticks, it fits awesum! I'm not gonna mention claps here o3o
  2. 00:05:400 (3) - add a NC for keeping your combopattern in this part (you go with 1,2,1,2)
  3. 00:16:169 (1,3) - add finish at both sliderstarts, you can hear it in music
  4. 00:25:015 (1) - add a clap
  5. 00:25:015 (1,2) - i'd reverse NCs
  6. 01:03:861 (2) - i noticed wrong spacing both with next and previous slider, fix pls
  7. 01:05:400 (1,2) - i'd add finishes at both sliderstarts
  8. 01:08:861 (1) - whistle instead of finish? finish seems too noizy
  9. 01:09:246 - drag break to here?
  10. 01:15:400 (2) - finish?
  11. 01:36:169 (1,2) - i'd reverse NC (it follows combopattern "NC at second big white tick" and also it fits more)
  12. 01:39:631 (1,2) - same (add finish at sliderstart of (2) too)
  13. 01:51:938 (1,2) - ^
  14. 01:57:131 (1) - this spinner is too short for beginners, make it like http://puu.sh/2t90v
[Chewin]
  1. how about HP4 OD4? just for the sake of consistency www
  2. if you're not gonna change combocolours I'll slap you =w= there isn't any light pink/light blue colours asdasklsaklava
  3. 00:16:169 (1) - soft finish at start is better, not so noizy
  4. 00:17:708 (1) - ^
  5. 00:21:938 (5) - ^ (end)
  6. 00:25:400 (1) - if you disagree atleast change this one to normal finish (well if you disagree check the map for soft finishes and make them normal)
  7. 00:30:785 (1) - don't like this overlap, maybe something like http://puu.sh/2t9kf ?
  8. 00:31:554 (1) - from here and to 00:56:169 (1) - y u map this at 0.8? it feels like you forgot to make spacing 1.0 during mapping o3o I'd remap this part using 1.0 spacing
  9. 00:41:169 (2) - not symmetrical DDD:<
    I make this better for you <3
    132,92,41169,2,0,B|168:128|216:128|256:88|256:88|296:128|344:128|380:91,1,280
  10. 00:57:708 (1) - i'd move end 1 grid right to avoid le ugly overlap
  11. 01:18:285 (1) - i'd move it 1/2 back and make it 1/1 http://puu.sh/2t9y0 if you do this, add soft clap at the beginning
  12. 01:19:631 - how about adding a note with NC & soft clap? put it in 256|256 (wow two 256)
  13. 01:43:092 - i'd make this rhytmn http://puu.sh/2t9Es
  14. 01:45:400 - urgh how about end kiai here instead of 01:43:092 if you want a fountain? it's better place + this part feels missed w/o kiai now
  15. 01:52:323 (1) - finish? (idk which finishes do you choose here =w=)
I want to hear your answer about which finishes do you prefer, this music is simple enough for adding 1 type of finishes

[Hard]
  1. try to recheck your claps (same as Easy) =w=
  2. 00:09:246 (3,4) - I'd remove (4) and let (3) be with 1/4 repeat
  3. 00:12:708 (1,5) - how about reversing NCs? ww
  4. 00:15:208 (4,5) - remove (5) and do (4) with 1/4 repeat, well I don't like two repeats in Hard
  5. 00:16:169 (1) - finish instead of whistle in sliderstart pls
  6. 00:28:092 (1,3) - how about reversing NCs? ww [2]
  7. 00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,1) - do it like http://puu.sh/2t9YP and you'll get awesum pattern :Q__
  8. 00:33:285 (5) - remove clap at sliderstart, it fits nothing =w=; also I'd curve it in another way http://puu.sh/2ta3U
  9. 00:37:323 (1,3) - how about reversing NCs? ww [3]
  10. 00:43:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - oh... this is weird D:
    1. how about remaking this like http://puu.sh/2ta7h ? (you can also stack 1,2,3 with each other, same goes to 4,5,1)
    2. if you disagree atleast reverse NCs at 00:43:476 (1,4) -
  11. 01:05:400 (1,2,3,4) - it's too big jump even for Lunatic if you ask me D: Edit => Scale by => 0,795 pls
  12. 01:15:400 (3) - how about NC? о3о
  13. 01:21:554 (1) - move it 2 grids left for the sake of making nice pattern o3o
  14. 01:22:131 (2,3) - choose them all and move it using distance spacing
  15. 01:23:092 (5) - seems like you forgot to add clap at end
  16. 01:23:861 (7) - ^
  17. 01:25:400 (4) - ^
  18. 01:27:323 (1,3) - how about reversing NCs? ww [4]
  19. 01:30:400 (1,3) - how about reversing NCs? ww [5] lel i'm mad
  20. 01:33:669 (7) - it's too hard for a Hard, catch 1/8 after stream then slider ;__; delete it and add two circles 01:33:669 - and 01:33:765 -
  21. 01:39:630 (1,3) - how about reversing NCs? ww [6]
  22. 01:42:708 (1,3) - ^ [7]
  23. 01:51:938 (1,2) - ^ [8] also delete finish at end
  24. 01:55:015 (1,3) - ^ [(9)]
  25. 01:57:708 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as 00:43:092
well I tried to be serious but I can't =w=/
good luck uke tsundere baka Leader :3 /runs
Topic Starter
Leader
BakaCI

BCI wrote:

I want my kd back so here we go :<

[General]
  1. i'd also add MoF in tags as a abbreviation of Mountain of Faith added
  2. you know, ZUN loves metronome changes :U 01:09:246 - here should be a red point with 4/4 metronome o3? uh ok
  3. how about adding ~in title (original) ? k
  4. I suggest some combocolours o3ob Perfect!
    SPOILER

    lel I tried to move it so you'll see that 1 color follows 1 thing (hair/sky/dress)
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 107,143,48
    Combo2 : 86,94,158
    Combo3 : 101,39,70
    Combo4 : 226,5,5
[Easy]
  1. try to add claps at 2-4 white ticks, it fits awesum! I'm not gonna mention claps here o3o
  2. 00:05:400 (3) - add a NC for keeping your combopattern in this part (you go with 1,2,1,2) Done
  3. 00:16:169 (1,3) - add finish at both sliderstarts, you can hear it in music Ok
  4. 00:25:015 (1) - add a clap Added
  5. 00:25:015 (1,2) - i'd reverse NCs Nah
  6. 01:03:861 (2) - i noticed wrong spacing both with next and previous slider, fix pls Fixed
  7. 01:05:400 (1,2) - i'd add finishes at both sliderstarts Done
  8. 01:08:861 (1) - whistle instead of finish? finish seems too noizy Oh, yes, There was a finish because it was in a different position and i forgot to fix
  9. 01:09:246 - drag break to here? Fix'd
  10. 01:15:400 (2) - finish? Done
  11. 01:36:169 (1,2) - i'd reverse NC (it follows combopattern "NC at second big white tick" and also it fits more) It doesn't fit imo, well, I'll wait for more mods
  12. 01:39:631 (1,2) - same (add finish at sliderstart of (2) too) ^
  13. 01:51:938 (1,2) - ^ ^
  14. 01:57:131 (1) - this spinner is too short for beginners, make it like http://puu.sh/2t90v It should be okay now
[Hard]
  1. try to recheck your claps (same as Easy) =w=
  2. 00:09:246 (3,4) - I'd remove (4) and let (3) be with 1/4 repeat I'd prefere in this way
  3. 00:12:708 (1,5) - how about reversing NCs? ww No to all of them you said ;_;
  4. 00:15:208 (4,5) - remove (5) and do (4) with 1/4 repeat, well I don't like two repeats in Hard I like that..
  5. 00:16:169 (1) - finish instead of whistle in sliderstart pls Ok
  6. 00:28:092 (1,3) - how about reversing NCs? ww [2]
  7. 00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,1) - do it like http://puu.sh/2t9YP and you'll get awesum pattern :Q__ Great!
  8. 00:33:285 (5) - remove clap at sliderstart, it fits nothing =w=; also I'd curve it in another way http://puu.sh/2ta3U Done
  9. 00:37:323 (1,3) - how about reversing NCs? ww [3]
  10. 00:43:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - oh... this is weird D:
    1. how about remaking this like http://puu.sh/2ta7h ? (you can also stack 1,2,3 with each other, same goes to 4,5,1)
    2. if you disagree atleast reverse NCs at 00:43:476 (1,4) - Changed NCs
  11. 01:05:400 (1,2,3,4) - it's too big jump even for Lunatic if you ask me D: Edit => Scale by => 0,795 pls Okay
  12. 01:15:400 (3) - how about NC? ?3? Wut, no.
  13. 01:21:554 (1) - move it 2 grids left for the sake of making nice pattern o3o Okay
  14. 01:22:131 (2,3) - choose them all and move it using distance spacing Done
  15. 01:23:092 (5) - seems like you forgot to add clap at end Fixed
  16. 01:23:861 (7) - ^ ^
  17. 01:25:400 (4) - ^ ^
  18. 01:27:323 (1,3) - how about reversing NCs? ww [4]
  19. 01:30:400 (1,3) - how about reversing NCs? ww [5] lel i'm mad
  20. 01:33:669 (7) - it's too hard for a Hard, catch 1/8 after stream then slider ;__; delete it and add two circles 01:33:669 - and 01:33:765 - Fixed replacing streams with two sliders
  21. 01:39:630 (1,3) - how about reversing NCs? ww [6]
  22. 01:42:708 (1,3) - ^ [7]
  23. 01:51:938 (1,2) - ^ [8] also delete finish at end Deleted finish
  24. 01:55:015 (1,3) - ^ [(9)]
  25. 01:57:708 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as 00:43:092 Changed NCs
well I tried to be serious but I can't =w=/
good luck uke tsundere baka Leader :3 /runs

Ty :3
Chewin
fixed some, arigatou.

SPOILER
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292,96,26938,2,0,P|252:92|220:96,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,63,27323,2,0,P|128:68|92:56,2,70,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,60,54246,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Kodora
[General]

Chewin's Normal missed red section at 01:09:246

[Easy]

00:19:246 (1) - clap to the end
00:20:015 (2) - remove clap for beginning? sounds so weird for me.
EDIT: remove all claps from this slider
00:21:169 (3) - clap
00:21:554 (4) - clap in end fits better for me
00:22:323 (1) - clap to the end
00:25:400 (2) - remove clap
00:26:554 (3) - add clap to the beginning and to the end
00:29:631 (2) - ^
00:30:785 (3) - clap to the end
00:31:938 (2) - clap goes here
00:32:323 (3) - clap to the end
00:33:092 (4) - ^
00:34:631 (1) - remove from beginning and add to the end
00:35:400 (2) - clap to the end
00:36:169 (3) - remove claps here
00:40:400 (1) - clap to the beginning
00:41:554 - add note?
00:41:938 (2) - to the beginning and to the end
01:08:861 (1) - finish fits for me better
01:19:438 (3) - nc it or move better to white tick, it can confuse beginners, also clap to the end
01:31:938 (3) - clap to beginning
01:33:861 (1) - remove clap
01:39:631 (1) - add clap
01:42:708 (1) - clap to beginning
01:44:246 (3) - clap to beginning
01:45:400 (4) - clap to beginning and end?
01:46:169 (1) - clap to end
01:46:938 (2) - remove clap from beginning
01:48:092 (3) - add clap
01:48:477 (4) - clap to end
01:55:015 (1) - clap to beginning
01:56:169 (2) - clap to the end
01:56:746 (1) - finish to spinner?

[Chewin's Normal]
due to your triangles it more looks like normal+ for me... nvm

00:30:785 (1) - Not sure but i think this slider will confuse beginners.
00:43:477 (5) - i think better use clap here instead normal-sampleset.

[Hard]

00:06:169 (4) - nc due to instruments and new pattern
00:11:554 (1,2,3,4,5) - better if you will continiue it with just spacing without stacks. also for better symmethry
00:22:611 (3) - useless note
00:34:823 (2,4) - try to stack this notes, seems good for me.
00:43:861 (1) - move it please in other place, this note so close to stream and can confuse
00:51:073 - add note for better rhytm
00:52:323 (5) - maybe change rhytm here?
00:53:381 (3) - delete note
00:54:054 (5) - change to triple (for better rhytm again)
00:54:434 - add note
00:59:535 (3) - delete note
01:33:092 (6,7,8) - personally dont like placement here, it just hard to hit and look not good.
01:41:168 (4) - nc due to instruments and new pattern
01:43:765 - add note
01:45:400 (7) - nc for same reasons
01:49:342 (2) - delete note
01:57:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i dont like copypasta actually you can make this stream more creative imho:

about hs here: reply me please do you accept my rhytm suggestions ("add note delete note") then i'll look on it for this - with my changes it will sounds different.
Topic Starter
Leader
Kodora

Kodora wrote:

[General]

Chewin's Normal missed red section at 01:09:246

[Easy]

00:19:246 (1) - clap to the end
00:20:015 (2) - remove clap for beginning? sounds so weird for me.
EDIT: remove all claps from this slider
00:21:169 (3) - clap
00:21:554 (4) - clap in end fits better for me
00:22:323 (1) - clap to the end
00:25:400 (2) - remove clap
00:26:554 (3) - add clap to the beginning and to the end
00:29:631 (2) - ^
00:30:785 (3) - clap to the end
00:31:938 (2) - clap goes here
00:32:323 (3) - clap to the end
00:33:092 (4) - ^
00:34:631 (1) - remove from beginning and add to the end
00:35:400 (2) - clap to the end
00:36:169 (3) - remove claps here
00:40:400 (1) - clap to the beginning
00:41:554 - add note?
00:41:938 (2) - to the beginning and to the end
01:08:861 (1) - finish fits for me better
01:19:438 (3) - nc it or move better to white tick, it can confuse beginners, also clap to the end
01:31:938 (3) - clap to beginning
01:33:861 (1) - remove clap
01:39:631 (1) - add clap
01:42:708 (1) - clap to beginning
01:44:246 (3) - clap to beginning
01:45:400 (4) - clap to beginning and end?
01:46:169 (1) - clap to end
01:46:938 (2) - remove clap from beginning
01:48:092 (3) - add clap
01:48:477 (4) - clap to end
01:55:015 (1) - clap to beginning
01:56:169 (2) - clap to the end
01:56:746 (1) - finish to spinner?

[Hard]

00:06:169 (4) - nc due to instruments and new pattern No, it will be too short and it's fine as it is.
00:11:554 (1,2,3,4,5) - better if you will continiue it with just spacing without stacks. also for better symmethry No D:
00:22:611 (3) - useless note Yeah.. removed
00:34:823 (2,4) - try to stack this notes, seems good for me. They are fine.
00:43:861 (1) - move it please in other place, this note so close to stream and can confuse Moved some grid down.
00:51:073 - add note for better rhytm Quite unsure but yeah, added
00:52:323 (5) - maybe change rhytm here? Nah, it's fine.
00:53:381 (3) - delete note Ok
00:54:054 (5) - change to triple (for better rhytm again) Ok
00:54:434 - add note Nope
00:59:535 (3) - delete note Ok
01:33:092 (6,7,8) - personally dont like placement here, it just hard to hit and look not good. I'll see about that..
01:41:168 (4) - nc due to instruments and new pattern Much better
01:43:765 - add note No >.<
01:45:400 (7) - nc for same reasons Same as before
01:49:342 (2) - delete note 'kay
01:57:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i dont like copypasta actually you can make this stream more creative imho: I like it as it is.

about hs here: reply me please do you accept my rhytm suggestions ("add note delete note") then i'll look on it for this - with my changes it will sounds different.
Followed almost every suggestion in Easy diff, thank you :3
Roxas
Arriva la mia mod :D

[General]

Nothing :D

[Easy]

00:20:400 - In punti come questi dove ci dovrebbe stare un soft-hitclap2 potresti tipo creare un soft-slidertick2 come il clap e con le linee verdi far suonare lo slidertick2 in questi punti
00:59:246 (1) - Avvicinalo allo slider precedente xD

[Chewin's Normal]

Ciao sono tanto nazi e ti dico di fare un miglior blanket qua 00:23:861 (4) - /me runs
Non ho trovato nulla qua

[Hard]

00:12:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - Se qua tipo fai una cosa del genere? Non mi piace molto come hai fatto tu perché i circle in automatico li manda a destra lol 00:22:131 (7) - Stacka meglio *oramiammazza*
00:26:746 (5,6) - Sposta un po' più a destra
00:38:669 - Aggiungi un circle qui
01:02:323 (1) - Oddio non fare antijump qua e segui lo stream D:

Good luck o/
Tari
Random map check~ ;3


[General]

  1. Your Audio lead-in are inconsistent , easy has an audio lead-in of 1996 , please change the audio lead-in in this diff to 2000 so it can be the same as the other diffs
  2. AiBat says your using different combo colors , I dont think different combo colors are needed when the bg in each diff is the same. please unify the combo colors at least in your diff >3<
  3. There are also inconsistency in your tags as well , please make sure all your tags are the same.
[Easy]

  1. 00:05:785 (4) - Personally , I like the way you put whistles like this , Maybe you can also add a whistle here? The whistles sound really nice in this part ^^
  2. 00:22:323 (1) - I think you missed a whistle in this beat , It kinda disrupts your whistle pattern , cause you put whistles in the big white ticks where the beat is strong
  3. 00:40:400 (1) - I'd rather you end in the slider in the previous white tick and add a circle in this slider's current position , it follows the music and rhythm much better :<
  4. 00:41:938 (2) - Same as above , I'd suggest make it end on important beats and like in this case , the downbeat
  5. 00:56:169 (1) - Whistle somewhere here or some hitsound addition here?
  6. 01:02:323 (1) - ^
  7. 01:08:861 (1) - The finish sounds is too amphitious here , it doesn't really blend in the music and the finish sound is abundant here , Should just remove it :< but I guess its not bad to have a finish before break
  8. 01:18:861 (2,3) - I think this rhythm would work better here : http://puu.sh/2zAdU it fits with the claps and seems to emphasize all the important beats here
  9. 01:30:400 (1) - Finish sounds nice here , its like the previous finish you added ^^
  10. 01:55:015 (1) - ^ to the repeat
  11. 01:31:938 (3) - You missed a clap in the start
  12. 01:54:246 (4,1) - Make them symmetrical , like this : http://puu.sh/2zEYk
[Chewin's Normal]

  • 00:06:938 (1) - Add finish to start , this is different music section and it'll be a good idea to add a finish because it makes sense to do so because the music is changing
  1. I won't really say exactly where to put whistles , but whistles sound good with the song and can be added throughout the song , consider adding whistles (please do logically and sense-fully) this goes for all diffs by the way
  2. 01:07:708 (3) - Ahh , there alot of possibilites for claps in this slider , but there only 1 tick , so maybe add a clapish sound to the tick?
  3. 01:18:285 (1) - This isn't technically the easiest thing to follow in the map , i'd suggest you start this in white tick instead and maybe add a reverse to this slider to make up for that empty beat you want
  4. 01:24:631 (1,2,3) - This rhythm gets really really boring when used again and again , but I guess there no way to change it because this song is already repetitive as it already is :(
  5. 01:29:246 (3) - You have open room to try something else here unlike the above , I'd rather you use that open room to do different rhythms rather than just do this really simple rhythm , but if it ruins your patterns then feel free to ignore this . (Rhythm like this 00:51:554 (3) - keeps getting repeated when you can do something else in simpler words
  6. 01:33:861 (1) - I just want to know your reasoning on changing the combo colors in this part.
  7. 00:51:554 (3,4,1) - Line up 3 and 1 correctly for perfect symmetry , (the location of (x) needs to be changed to x:280 for both those sliders)
    This diff is greatly done :>


[Hard]

  1. 00:06:169 (4) - Whistle to this whole sliders works well with the piano song in the map :>
  2. 00:13:861 (7) - Ehhh , I'd rather you make this whole thing into two sliders , maybe something like this : http://puu.sh/2zFVo It fits the music better and puts a little spice into rhythm and gameplay :D
  3. 00:32:900 (4,5) - Poff this is a tough choice , it fits all the beats fine , but the downbeat on the end of slider 4 should be where a circle or slider starts because it feels weird after because there a pause after that downbeat , T-T
  4. 00:40:400 (10) - I think you should just make this an separate combo , this note isn't part of the previous pattern to be honest.
  5. 01:01:938 (5) - Just make this a separate combo , 01:00:785 (1,2,3,4) - That combo in generally is part of a symmetrical pattern , this notes and notes after are not.
  6. 01:22:323 (3,4,5) - Just make this symmetrical please , its already close to being so
  7. 01:29:631 (8) - It feels great if you replace with 3 circles , the 3 beats on this make it great for this . I've testplayed couple of times and came to this conclusion.
  8. 00:19:246 (1) - I almost forgot , if you do the above you should do this as well for consistency
  9. 00:35:400 (5) - Not too entirely sure , but on previous combo you made 00:30:785 (1,2,3,4) - a separate combo , maybe for a better combo effect you can do the same here?
  10. 00:56:169 (1) - I guess you missed a finish here
  11. 01:30:784 (3) - ^
  12. 01:54:630 (9) - Unstacking this would be better, putting this note at the direction this slider end points is a possible position you can put the note , it flows better to me
ZUN <3

Good luck from me~
Topic Starter
Leader
Roxas

Roxas wrote:

Arriva la mia mod :D

[General]

Nothing :D

[Easy]

00:20:400 - In punti come questi dove ci dovrebbe stare un soft-hitclap2 potresti tipo creare un soft-slidertick2 come il clap e con le linee verdi far suonare lo slidertick2 in questi punti Uh.. non saprei come fare, ma non vedo il bisogno comunque @_@
00:59:246 (1) - Avvicinalo allo slider precedente xD [color=#00BF00]Fixato[/color]

[Hard]

00:12:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - Se qua tipo fai una cosa del genere? Non mi piace molto come hai fatto tu perché i circle in automatico li manda a destra lol Non mi piace :\00:22:131 (7) - Stacka meglio *oramiammazza* /kills
00:26:746 (5,6) - Sposta un po' più a destra okay
00:38:669 - Aggiungi un circle qui Done
01:02:323 (1) - Oddio non fare antijump qua e segui lo stream D: Fixato il pattern

Good luck o/
Tari

Tari wrote:

Random map check~ ;3


[General]

  1. Your Audio lead-in are inconsistent , easy has an audio lead-in of 1996 , please change the audio lead-in in this diff to 2000 so it can be the same as the other diffs Fixed
  2. AiBat says your using different combo colors , I dont think different combo colors are needed when the bg in each diff is the same. please unify the combo colors at least in your diff >3< Ops, my fault
  3. There are also inconsistency in your tags as well , please make sure all your tags are the same. Fixed
[Easy]

  1. 00:05:785 (4) - Personally , I like the way you put whistles like this , Maybe you can also add a whistle here? The whistles sound really nice in this part ^^ Done
  2. 00:22:323 (1) - I think you missed a whistle in this beat , It kinda disrupts your whistle pattern , cause you put whistles in the big white ticks where the beat is strong Uh.. I already stopped using whistle in that part, I put them only on beginning
  3. 00:40:400 (1) - I'd rather you end in the slider in the previous white tick and add a circle in this slider's current position , it follows the music and rhythm much better :< Ok
  4. 00:41:938 (2) - Same as above , I'd suggest make it end on important beats and like in this case , the downbeat Nope, it doesn't fit much
  5. 00:56:169 (1) - Whistle somewhere here or some hitsound addition here? Added finish
  6. 01:02:323 (1) - ^ ^
  7. 01:08:861 (1) - The finish sounds is too amphitious here , it doesn't really blend in the music and the finish sound is abundant here , Should just remove it :< but I guess its not bad to have a finish before break Reduced volume, now it's much better
  8. 01:18:861 (2,3) - I think this rhythm would work better here : http://puu.sh/2zAdU it fits with the claps and seems to emphasize all the important beats here Yay, that's great, fixed
  9. 01:30:400 (1) - Finish sounds nice here , its like the previous finish you added ^^ Kept the clap
  10. 01:55:015 (1) - ^ to the repeat ^
  11. 01:31:938 (3) - You missed a clap in the start Fixed
  12. 01:54:246 (4,1) - Make them symmetrical , like this : http://puu.sh/2zEYk
Fixed[Hard]

  1. 00:06:169 (4) - Whistle to this whole sliders works well with the piano song in the map :> Done
  2. 00:13:861 (7) - Ehhh , I'd rather you make this whole thing into two sliders , maybe something like this : http://puu.sh/2zFVo It fits the music better and puts a little spice into rhythm and gameplay :D I like it, no.
  3. 00:32:900 (4,5) - Poff this is a tough choice , it fits all the beats fine , but the downbeat on the end of slider 4 should be where a circle or slider starts because it feels weird after because there a pause after that downbeat , T-T Uh.. they're fine
  4. 00:40:400 (10) - I think you should just make this an separate combo , this note isn't part of the previous pattern to be honest. Done
  5. 01:01:938 (5) - Just make this a separate combo , 01:00:785 (1,2,3,4) - That combo in generally is part of a symmetrical pattern , this notes and notes after are not. Done
  6. 01:22:323 (3,4,5) - Just make this symmetrical please , its already close to being so Better now
  7. 01:29:631 (8) - It feels great if you replace with 3 circles , the 3 beats on this make it great for this . I've testplayed couple of times and came to this conclusion. Mhm.. no, I don't really like it
  8. 00:19:246 (1) - I almost forgot , if you do the above you should do this as well for consistency ^
  9. 00:35:400 (5) - Not too entirely sure , but on previous combo you made 00:30:785 (1,2,3,4) - a separate combo , maybe for a better combo effect you can do the same here? It's fine imo.
  10. 00:56:169 (1) - I guess you missed a finish here Yeah
  11. 01:30:784 (3) - ^ ^
  12. 01:54:630 (9) - Unstacking this would be better, putting this note at the direction this slider end points is a possible position you can put the note , it flows better to me Done
ZUN <3

Good luck from me~

Thank you :3
Kodora
00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,1) - try to make perfect star here
00:33:285 (5) - pls use any note on white tick here, ith brokes the rhytm
00:52:323 (5) - ^
00:56:938 (3,4) - imho for better rhytm better make one looong slow slider or something
01:21:554 (1) - feels like unneeded overmap
01:43:861 - need note here
01:04:631 (3) - feels weird follow rhytm, remove it and change to note


fully rehitsounded. i dont change the notes but maybe with new hs you personally will change rhytm in some parts here

SPOILER
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TitleUnicode:厄神様の通り道 ~ Dark Road
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Creator:Leader
Version:Hard
Source:Touhou
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Topic Starter
Leader

Kodora wrote:

00:30:785 (1,2,3,4,1) - try to make perfect star here
00:33:285 (5) - pls use any note on white tick here, ith brokes the rhytm
00:52:323 (5) - ^
00:56:938 (3,4) - imho for better rhytm better make one looong slow slider or something
01:21:554 (1) - feels like unneeded overmap
01:43:861 - need note here
01:04:631 (3) - feels weird follow rhytm, remove it and change to note


fully rehitsounded. i dont change the notes but maybe with new hs you personally will change rhytm in some parts here

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164,340,52323,2,0,B|244:348|328:296,2,135
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152,264,58092,2,0,B|188:380|188:380,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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440,116,60015,2,0,P|428:48|360:28,2,135,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,316,60977,2,0,B|236:336|184:316,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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464,160,62708,2,0,B|404:124|344:108,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,168,63092,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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420,168,63477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,112,63669,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,112,63861,6,0,B|416:80|412:24,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,72,64919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,40,65015,2,0,P|216:28|160:28,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,90,65400,6,0,B|96:166,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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354,80,66554,2,0,B|278:32,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,299,66938,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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56,88,75015,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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160,92,78285,1,4,0:0:0:0:
116,148,78477,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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424,336,79631,5,8,0:0:0:0:
416,192,80015,1,4,0:0:0:0:
288,108,80400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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183,192,80977,1,0,1:0:0:0:
43,230,81169,1,0,1:0:0:0:
134,116,81362,1,0,1:0:0:0:
128,264,81554,6,0,B|84:308,4,45,4|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,296,82131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,82323,2,0,B|376:288|464:232,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,188,82900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,128,83092,2,0,B|364:84|256:84,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,108,83669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,156,83861,2,0,B|104:256|140:352,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,336,84438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,332,84631,6,0,B|284:376,2,45
344,308,85015,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,288,85208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,220,85400,2,0,B|396:136|292:96,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,84,85977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,84,86169,2,0,P|84:132|84:228,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,312,87323,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,312,87515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,312,87708,2,0,B|232:336|120:304,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,276,88285,2,0,B|24:320,2,45
40,216,88669,2,0,B|32:168|68:116,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,136,89054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,89246,2,0,B|227:174|219:222,1,90
228,292,89631,2,0,B|332:328|432:276,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,148,90400,5,8,0:0:0:0:
440,148,90593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,148,90785,2,0,B|352:164|248:140,2,180,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,68,91746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,68,91939,2,0,B|104:116|80:232,2,180,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,352,93092,2,0,L|296:388,2,45
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368,312,93669,2,0,L|404:324,3,22.5
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452,172,94246,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,100,94438,2,0,B|436:60|452:8,2,90
452,172,95015,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,188,95208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,188,95400,2,0,B|324:188|252:180,1,90
220,168,95785,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,160,95977,2,0,B|96:168|56:220,1,90
32,264,96361,2,0,B|-8:304,2,45,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,280,96746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,280,96938,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,276,97323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,332,97515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,268,97708,2,0,B|424:188|432:88,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,84,98285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,84,98477,2,0,B|256:60|144:88,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,196,99630,5,8,0:0:0:0:
452,268,99823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,340,100015,2,0,B|360:356|236:340,2,180,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,220,101168,6,0,B|360:104|360:104,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,116,101553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,220,101745,2,0,B|152:104|152:104,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,264,102130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,102322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,188,102708,5,8,0:0:0:0:
56,188,102900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,188,103092,2,0,B|48:100|120:24,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,104054,2,8,B|384:56|444:56,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,72,104438,2,0,B|500:180|392:244,1,180
356,268,105015,2,0,L|384:312,2,45
284,284,105400,6,0,B|180:340,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,224,105785,2,0,B|112:120,1,90
176,92,106169,6,0,B|248:124|360:100,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,32,106746,2,0,B|256:12|256:12,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,84,107323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,156,107515,2,0,B|320:224|320:224,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,212,108092,2,0,B|460:256|424:300,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,328,108477,2,0,B|244:324|172:236,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,109054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,164,109246,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,104,109438,2,0,B|180:48|236:32,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,40,109823,2,0,B|336:28|396:48,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,88,110208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,152,110400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,208,110592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,228,110785,2,0,P|316:268|240:268,1,90
204,280,111169,2,0,B|136:280,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,208,111554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,76,111938,6,0,B|152:96|200:72,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,112322,2,0,B|360:32|448:44,2,180,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,113284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,113380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,113477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,200,113669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,113861,2,0,B|160:328|160:328,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,114246,2,0,B|120:112|120:112,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,68,114630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,60,115015,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,60,115208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,60,115400,2,0,B|416:156|400:268,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,128,116361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,136,116553,2,0,P|176:152|72:132,2,180,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,308,117708,5,0,0:0:0:0:
184,272,117804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,236,117900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,200,117996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,180,118092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,144,118188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,108,118285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,16,118477,5,4,0:0:0:0:
Changed most of hitsounds in Hard diff, big thanks ;_;
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