Amazing- I love it!
Thank you~peterQ wrote:
Well, it is a good beatmap
Thank for modding!Andrea wrote:
~General~
Too many kiai fountains through the difficulties, please reduce them. Reduced the kiai fountains~
~Easy~
02:31:205 (1) - Remove new combo. I think don't fit.
~Hard~
Increase OD by at least 1 tick. Fixed
Nice map, keep working on it.
Thank you for modding!Andrea wrote:
~Giffen's Shotgun~
00:35:245 (2) - Partially hidden slider. Fixed
00:47:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream doesn't really follow anything, please remove it.Fixed
01:17:546 (1) - Missing clap at the end of this slider.Fixed
01:20:282 (1) - Remove this useless new combo.Fixed
01:25:123 (1) - This slowdown doesn't make sense to me.Fixed
01:34:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Again, this part feels overmapped. None
02:23:207 (1) - Remove new combo.Fixed
02:26:575 (7) - Sounds pretty bad in such a calm part like this.Fixed
02:29:311 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Again, this is overmapped and doesn't follow anything.Fixed
02:57:722 (1) ~ 03:07:613 (4) - This part is missing hitsounds, please make sure to add them.Fixed
Thank you!Kaona wrote:
Really nice map.
Hope to see it ranked one day.
Thanks for modding!luxoDeh wrote:
Hi from my queue
GENERAL
delete the OSB file if you don't need it Why? There is a Story Board in this map.
EASY
01:21:755 (1,2,3) - What do you think of making this?SPOILERjust for symmetry. I dont think is good.[img=][/img]
01:41:959 (1,2,1) - make them symmetric it will be better to see It is symmetrical...
Good diff, not much to say
HARD
00:36:508 (1) - NC, remove next None
00:40:928 (5) - hm... maybe delete the note and replace whit a slider that start at 00:40:717 - ^
01:28:069 (5) - ^ ^
01:45:326 (4,5) - there notes are hard to read, delete them and replace whit a slider No, i do not want to change this.
02:32:467 (5) - move one grid left It is symmetrical...
very good map! and also good song! hope I helped you a bit. good luck
Andrea wrote:
~Bakari's Normal~
02:54:354 (1,2,3) - These stacks could be confusing for beginners, please do something else. beginners? But this is a Normal diff and I'm pretty sure player are able to understand rhythm here!
luxoDeh wrote:
NORMAL
00:42:611 (3) - roteate of -27 it will be have a better flow in my opinion
00:51:871 (2) - also this if you move it like 7-8 grid down will be well aligned whith the previous note
01:13:337 (4) - roteate of -27 and fix spacing of caurse
02:42:148 (2) - maybe move the second point of the slider two grid down, so that's it's simmetryc whit the previous slider fixed ~
I actually can't see anything wrong with current placement of sliders. They're easy readable and looks ok for me. As for my flow, it looks a bit outdated but this diff is quite old and I'd like to keep flow here the way it is.
also this is good, I only would say that maybe some sliders are strangely alligned... maybe it's only me but I think they are better to play if they are well alligned whith other notes. Anyway it's very good I'm pretty sure it's done on purpose!
osu file format v12
[General]
AudioFilename: Nightcore - Angel With A Shotgun.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 149292
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12948
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
[Metadata]
Title:Angel With A Shotgun (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Angel With A Shotgun (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:The Cab
ArtistUnicode:The Cab
Creator:Piscis
Version:Bakari's Normal
Source:
Tags:techno trance rave remix -bakari- foreverends giffen
BeatmapID:163090
BeatmapSetID:53317
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1
[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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ok~-Bakari- wrote:
P.S. you know, you are free to edit my diff as you want. :3
Thanks for modding!LKs wrote:
hi
[General]
offest-2~4, tiny adjustment Changed to offset -2.
enable epilepsy warn I'd say, the shotgun effect and the usage is coool but also dizzying I didnt now notice until... thank you!
[Hard]
00:21:987 (3) - tips on doing sliders http://puu.sh/2nAKK Fixed
01:05:130 (2,3,4,5,6) - again, deficiency on basic skills, triagle looks ugly Changed
01:06:392 (1,2,3,4,5) - a flat pentagon here, compared with a normal pentagon it makes your map more tedious. i.e less stereo perception Changed
too many 1/2s, as for hard you can refer to kevin's hyper in this map http://osu.ppy.sh/b/204601 I try to refer~
[taiko]
00:29:563 (2) - too loud D orz
01:16:704 (2) - ^ don't point more I lowered the overall.
Thank you for modding!LKs wrote:
[Giffen's Shotgun]
00:14:411 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - for more smooth sound experience and following the music, you'd better silence(volume down) all slider ends. or silence some of them in a sequence Fixed
01:02:815 (4,5,6) - 00:29:247 (4,5) - some triplets like this I don't regard as good design tbh. music doesn't require such rhythm but anyway Fixed
00:46:399 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/2nAxu I wish you could have mapped this way, clearer placement and better looking Fixed
00:49:767 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - again, these two, you could have made more fun rhythm instead of 2 triplets start at white tick Fixed
01:00:079 (3,4) - move whistle to beginings, sounds more suitable Fixed
01:00:920 (5) - whistle if above applied Fixed
01:13:969 (3,4,5,6) - the triangle. hm looks strange Fixed
02:41:517 (7,8,9,10,1) - ^ Fixed
01:25:123 (1,1) - didn't get you here Fixed
whistle needs to be used more consistently during kiai Fixed
refer to sumisola's maps since he has a similiar thoughts on jumps with you, if you don't mind. you could do better on rhythm and placement okey, thank you for teaching me
All fixed~jomnhnk wrote:
Taiko mod~
[Kantan]
01:42:799 (1) - del
and
01:43:219 (2) - add k
02:43:409 (1) - k
back...
00:31:666 (3) - add k
00:32:087 (4) - del
00:32:928 (2) - add d
GoGo Ranked!!
moddingありがとうございました!Rare wrote:
m4m
[Easy]
00:32:507 - ノート追加 なしで
00:46:397 (2) - 00:47:239 - 音がない部分にホイッスルが鳴っているのが気になります。Kiai Timeにも合わせてこういう音取りはどうでしょう http://puu.sh/2rDOJ ホイッスルはそのままにしたいので、noteだけ変更しました
01:01:550 (1,2) - コンボが曲調に合っていないため少し違和感があります。01:03:233 (1,1) - この2つのコンボをはずして01:04:917 (3) - ここにコンボを追加してみてください。 配置を大きく変えました
01:33:539 (3) - 00:46:397 (2) - の指摘と同じ 変更しました
02:29:203 - もしかしたらSpinnerとノートの間隔が狭いと言われるかもしれません。おそらく大丈夫だと思いますが言われたら考えてみてください。 そのままにします
02:43:409 (1) - 終始点にホイッスルを入れたのはなぜでしょう?何かの音をとっているわけでもないと思うので僕ならホイッスルをはずします。 hardと同じく音取りをしているのでホイッスルを追加してます そのままで
[Normal]
01:41:957 (1) - do you like symmetry? http://puu.sh/2rGCh fixed
02:10:578 (1) - you should replace this slider http://puu.sh/2rGEd fixed
02:29:940 (3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/2rGGx is better fixed
02:34:149 (1,2,3) - try make a triangle http://puu.sh/2rGJB fixed
[Hard]
00:17:776 (1,2) - 1/1スライダーにして折り返しにしてみてはどうでしょう http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684229 今のがしっくりきているので無変更で
00:39:663 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音取りに違和感があったのでここも提案 http://puu.sh/2rGQc 変更しました
00:47:450 (2,3) - Easyでも指摘しましたが音がない部分にホイッスルが鳴っているのは気になるのでここのホイッスルは全てはずしましょう。 easyと同じ通りです
01:26:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:39:663 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同じ指摘 変更しました
01:33:328 (4) - 拾える音があるのでこういうのでどうでしょう http://puu.sh/2rGVM
01:34:591 (2,3) - 00:47:450 (2,3) - 同じ指摘 変更しました
01:37:116 (6) - もしボーカルカバーならここの(6)を消して01:35:222 (1,2,3) - ここと同じような音取りにしてはどうですか 変更しました
02:31:834 (4,5,6) - スライダーをコピペするだけでは少し物足りなく感じます。ニューコンボは少し崩れますがこういう音取りはどうでしょうか http://puu.sh/2rH22 配置に迷っていたので助かります それっぽく配置しました
03:03:402 (1,2,3,4) - 綺麗に配置できていないんですが、こういう感じでスライダーで円を形作ってみては? http://puu.sh/2rH5q 同じように変更しました
Thanks for modding!KiyoshiX101 wrote:
Hello there! Hello~
Here's a random mod
[StoryBoard]
The constant pulses in the Kiai time are annoying. I suggest you to decrease the pulses and put some other special effects as color replacement or flashing. Is difficult for me... I want to leave it
[Easy] All fixed
00:22:827 (3,4) - Work out this slider, it doesn't look good in comparison with the previous one at 00:21:143 (1,2) - :3
00:44:714 (1) - Move the fourth sldier point 2 grids to right and it will fix the slider curve: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684361
00:49:344 (2) - Doesn't it look better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684363 ? o=
02:45:092 (1,2) - Move those two just 2 grids up because they are not symmetrical with 02:43:409 (1,2)
02:32:044 (3,1,2) - This one looks kinda ugly because the slider curves are not very well made. Consider working on them a bit more.
[Hard]
00:43:030 (5) - Move this at x:109 y:319 because it doesn't look nice being overlapped by the slider. Fixed
02:14:577 (2,3) - I believe those two should change order cause they fit better with the vocal. Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684402 Fixed
02:16:366 - Circle there, the stream sounds very pro with the sound *-* Fixed
02:26:573 (6) - That slider needs work. It's more fat at the end q-q Fixed
02:31:518 - I believe a circle would fit there, and in all similar parts, the double hit sounds better in my opinion and it's not that hard. o.o hmm,none
Good luck :3
Rare wrote:
[Normal]
01:41:957 (1) - do you like symmetry? http://puu.sh/2rGCh nah, it's not supposed to be vlanket slider here. it's just a flow-pattern
02:10:578 (1) - you should replace this slider http://puu.sh/2rGEd why?
02:29:940 (3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/2rGGx is better why? did you just moved them 1-2 grids down? It doesn't really looks better for me!
02:34:149 (1,2,3) - try make a triangle http://puu.sh/2rGJB aren't I already have one?
Sorry, guys. I really don't want to apply those suggestions. :<KiyoshiX101 wrote:
[Normal]
01:00:708 (4,1) - Work the curve, make it according to the circles slider - Easier view at 01:01:129 what's wrong with current one? :V
01:10:389 (5) - Since the slider has a reverse and doesn't affect the distance spacing, work the curve a bit more like the one above ^ i don't think so, this one alrady looks cute for me.
01:13:335 (4,5,1,2,3) - The whole shape could be symmetrical don't you think? Like this for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684388 yea. and the whole style could be different. unfortunately, I don't want to use symmetrical patterns here, because it is not my style. Please, give some respect to my old mapping style :<
01:18:807 (1,3) - Make them symmetrical? o.o why? I mean, it flows quite good here, so symmetrical pattern may hurt flow here :<
01:29:750 (4) - 1 Grid up. why? I can't see any difference
01:41:957 (1,2) - The curve D:< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/684390 I've already rejected similar suggestions. I mean..i don't want to change, it's just a slider, afterall.
02:13:946 (1,2) - Like this ^ D: ^ D:
Lally wrote:
[Normal]
- 00:23:668 (5,1) - why don't you try to make a blanket with (5) - for the next slider? i think it will much better to see and to play :V moved it away. I didn't like blankets so much, in my past :<
- 00:30:824 (6) - what about to move this circle to 00:31:034 - to have consistence with prev pattern 00:28:930 (3,4) - sure
- 00:45:976 (2,3) - what about a blanket here? both blanket and current one doesn't really looks good here. But I'd prefer my pattern, sorry!
- 00:57:551 (4,5) - what about something like this? what's so wrong with my pattern? :V I mean, my pattern is easy to read and looks good to me, so I can't see any reason to change it!
- 01:00:708 (4,1) - you no blanket?
i am pillowalready here o3o- 01:10:389 (5,1) - ^ k, i'll fix this one ;_;\~
- 01:41:957 (1,2) - ^ oh god,5 grid left, 5 grids up ;_;
- 02:13:946 (1,2) - this blanket could be done better it couldn't o3o
- 02:17:313 (1,2) - same about this one it's not even a blanket!
- 02:20:680 (5) - i think it will be more cutter if you do this slider like this one 02:21:522 (6) - k
osu file format v12
[General]
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372,348,66180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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332,236,67863,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,336,68284,6,0,B|204:296|132:304,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,256,68916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,204,69126,2,0,B|104:144,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,140,69968,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,88,70389,2,0,B|392:40|460:52,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,71652,5,4,0:0:0:0:
456,284,72072,2,0,B|332:320,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,244,72914,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,196,73335,2,0,B|156:136|120:72,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,316,74598,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,344,75019,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,280,75440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,204,75861,2,0,B|408:168|420:80,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,44,76702,2,0,B|180:56,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,140,77544,2,0,B|88:212|20:240,2,120,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,78807,6,0,B|288:168|344:128,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,120,79649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,240,80070,2,0,B|376:260|368:348,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,304,80911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,276,81332,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,184,81753,6,0,B|128:136|112:60,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,40,82595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,83016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,52,83437,2,0,B|432:120|496:184,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,280,84279,2,0,B|376:296|348:352,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,268,85121,5,4,0:0:0:0:
164,340,85541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,272,85962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,160,86383,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,96,86804,2,0,B|288:104|340:60,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,88067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,164,88488,5,4,0:0:0:0:
476,216,88909,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,320,89330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,324,89750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,356,90171,2,0,B|140:320|68:332,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,220,91013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,144,91434,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,32,91855,6,0,B|144:48|204:28,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,100,92697,2,0,B|360:80|416:112,2,120,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,212,93960,2,0,B|424:220,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,94801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,312,95222,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,248,95643,2,0,B|104:192|80:128,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,96906,1,4,0:0:0:0:
260,132,97327,2,0,B|196:116|176:36,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,96,98589,5,4,0:0:0:0:
472,164,99010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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288,268,100273,2,0,B|232:240|148:260,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,192,101115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,72,101536,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,108,101957,6,0,P|236:68|304:52,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,176,103219,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,188,103640,2,0,B|484:156|480:64,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,304,104903,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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100,124,107008,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,184,107428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,236,107849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,196,108270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,80,108691,6,0,B|340:104|280:72,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,109533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,132,109954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,224,110375,2,0,B|176:288|116:328,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,252,111638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,184,112058,6,0,B|500:240,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,113321,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,64,113742,2,0,B|480:124,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,52,115005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,128,115426,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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88,112,129526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,168,133104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,284,133525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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320,364,135208,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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260,108,136892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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232,116,139838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,64,140259,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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492,124,142364,5,4,0:0:0:0:
384,72,142785,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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368,164,145731,6,0,B|448:160|484:216,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,285,146573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,336,146994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,320,147414,2,0,B|120:264|56:272,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,220,148677,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,156,149098,5,0,0:0:0:0:
76,48,149519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,68,149940,2,0,B|260:104|340:64,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,64,150571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,96,150782,6,0,B|492:112|512:180,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,212,152044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,268,152255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,300,152465,2,0,B|168:288,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,153728,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,168,154149,5,4,0:0:0:0:
88,56,154570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,80,154991,2,0,B|264:72|320:40,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,40,155622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,88,155833,2,0,B|444:212,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,296,156674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,248,157095,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,336,157516,6,0,B|140:284|60:272,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,156,158358,2,0,B|76:96|156:80,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,84,159200,1,4,0:0:0:0:
376,32,159621,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,132,160042,2,0,B|412:200|452:256,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,304,160883,6,0,B|200:296,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,196,162146,2,0,B|152:188,2,120,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,144,163409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,44,163830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,84,164251,6,0,B|148:92|92:44,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,172,165092,2,0,B|76:312,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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232,184,166355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,272,166776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,160,167197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,68,167618,6,0,B|492:112|480:184,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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292,300,169722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,340,170143,2,0,B|148:276|88:264,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,170985,12,0,173511,0:0:0:0:
256,316,174352,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,316,175194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,176036,1,4,0:0:0:0:
164,236,176457,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,120,176878,2,0,B|212:120|236:40,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,177720,6,0,B|460:164,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,178982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,336,179403,2,0,B|244:308|180:304,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,180245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,160,180666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,112,181087,6,0,B|364:64|448:88,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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116,228,183402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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208,44,184454,5,4,0:0:0:0:
100,96,184875,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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252,340,186138,2,0,B|312:200,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,312,186980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,187821,12,0,191609,0:0:0:0:
Thank you for modding!Lally wrote:
i dunno why i'm here o3o maybe nightcore power (~ 0 w 0 ) ~
[General][Easy]
- all is ok o3o
All fixed
- 00:21:143 (1,2) - a minor thing but this blanket can really be done better:
- 00:41:346 (1) - why don't you try to make it like this? :
- 00:54:815 (1) - look good it's a little bit far from the next circle
- 02:14:787 (2) - a bit close to thenext object
- 02:15:629 (1) - what about a doing a blanket here like this: and if you do like this copy paste it for 02:17:734 (1) -
- 02:44:251 (2) - a little bit close to the next object
- 02:50:985 (1,2,3,4) - this is the same pattern of 00:21:143 (1,2,3,4) - so do a better blanket for they and just use the copy pasted version AND maje sure that they look similar because if i look to 02:50:985 (1,2) and to 02:52:669 (3,4) - they look totaly not same also try to make it better a bit :3
[Taiko Katan]All fixed
- 00:48:081 (2) -
- 00:54:394 (4,1,1,1) -
- 01:08:284 (1) -
- 01:15:019 (1) -
- 01:35:222 (2) -
- 01:47:428 (2,1,1,1) -
- 01:49:112 (1) - delete this one
- 02:30:782 (2) -
- 02:37:095 (2,1,1) -
- 02:38:358 (1) - delete this one
- 03:05:085 (2) -
[Hard]
- 00:14:409 - i think 20% volume is to low,how about to start with 30% volume? This state is good
- 00:32:928 (1,2,3) - i think something like that will be more better: Fixed
- 00:54:815 (1) - try to make it like: Fixed
- 01:31:645 (4,1) - this blanket can be done better with the new 3 point formula o3o Not change~
- 02:10:578 - something more in this way? Fixed
- 02:53:721 (1) - what about something like: Fixed
good luck with it \o3o/
丁寧なModありがとうございます 参考になりました!Rare wrote:
[Shotgun]
1箇所に3つの音付けをしていて個人的にはちょっとうるさく感じたりしたので考えてみてください。SPOILER00:21:143 (1) - 始点にフィニッシュ Fixed01:04:917 (1) - Fixed
01:08:284 (5) - None
01:28:488 (1) - None
01:35:222 (1) - None
01:41:957 (1) - None
01:52:058 (1) - None
01:55:426 (5) - None
02:30:782 (1) - None
02:37:516 (1) - None
02:44:251 (1) - None
02:47:618 (1) - None
02:50:985 (1) -None
00:24:721 (1) - 90℃ほど回転させてみてはどうでしょう http://puu.sh/2rHeg None
00:32:087 (3) - 初見では1/4スライダーだと思ってしまいます。直したほうがいいです。Fixed
00:47:239 (1,2) - 音がないのでヒットサウンドはhitnormalだけのほうがいいと思います。また、2サビの01:34:380 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ここでも(1)以外音はついていないのでなので僕ならヒットサウンドはつけません。None ボーカルに合わせているので違和感はありませんでした
00:59:656 (2,4) - それぞれ終始点入れ替え?None
01:20:280 (5) - もっと綺麗にシンメトリーにしましょう http://puu.sh/2rHrd Fixed リンクが切れてしまっているので本意から逸れてしまっているかもしれません
02:22:364 - (1)の始点以外音がついていないので他の部分ではピアノの音をホイッスルの音を拾ってみてはどうでしょう None 極力抑えたいパートなのでヒットサウンドはつけないようにしました
02:57:720 - softを使ったほうが曲調にあってると思います。 Fixed
Thank you for thoughtful modding ! helpful moddingKiyoshiX101 wrote:
[Giffen's Shotgun]
00:47:134 (4,1) - Inconsistent spacing. It's a stream and there's no beat break there which makes it unreadable to hit the stream and slider afterwards. Although the spacing between the sliders is not a problem as a slider it's a Clik'n'Hold but streams are repeating clicks and it's not easy nor enjoyable to concetrate to the slider after the circle to that that small jump. It's bad in my opinion and I explain as better as I could. :/
01:48:586 - I would put a circle there ._.Fixed
02:36:885 (7,8) - CTRL + G makes the flow more epic o3o. Fixed
02:57:720 - From that time and afterwards I would suggest Soft hitsounds with less volume, the normal hitsounds sound too loud for that part. .-. Fixed
03:00:456 (2,3) - Work the Slider curve more. None
Thank you for modding !Lally wrote:
[Insane]
- i'll suggest to use tickrate 2 since you have many SV in this diff to make more simplier to read it's better if you use it None
- cute diff o3o Thank you
Thank you for modding!Byakugan249 wrote:
[Easy]
00:17:776 (1,2) - i feel that the volume increase is unnecessary with the finishes. they don't fit with this part since nothing changes here, so in this case, decrease the volume of these timing points to 40%. in other words, delete the timing points for these 2 notes because they're unnecessary and it sounds too loud in this calm part IMO. i think don't want to change this, and I this leave timing points.
00:22:827 (3) - remove the finish at the beginning. it sounds too loud and it feels unfitting to follow in this part during gameplay IMO. make a mistake... fixed!
00:31:245 (1) - i think that flipping it the other way or making it straight would flow a lot smoother and fun for beginners during gameplay IMO. what you said is a little different, but I've changed~
00:32:928 (2) - if you make (1) straight, make this slider straight as well for consistency in this part. ^
00:37:558 - i feel that a circle should be here so that this pattern would be consistent with (2) in this part since it's a slider-circle pattern. add circle
00:48:081 (1) - this slider could look a lot smoother than this because it looks ugly and it doesn't flow properly to the song during gameplay. fixed.
00:52:290 (3) - i think that making this slider straight would keep the flow steady and it'll be smoother as well during gameplay IMO. fixed straight slider.
01:06:601 (2) - i say that you make this look symmetrical like (3). in other words, make this slider look like (3) so that the pattern here looks more flowy during gameplay IMO. changed.
01:24:700 - same as 00:37:558. add circle.
01:55:005 (3,4) - for this one, i think it'd be nicer if you can move this around so that it'd be smoother to follow during gameplay. something like this is close enough to being perfectly smooth IMO. I don't know...
02:12:262 (1) - i think the finish at the repeat should be removed since it's too loud and it feels unfitting to follow here like i said before. ok, removed.
02:29:940 (1) - i think it'd be a lot easier for beginners if you can get rid of the slider since you may need to give beginners time to recover, and also, the suspense would increase if you add a circle at the kiai spot to increase the suspense for "i'm an angel with a shotgun" IMO. changed significantly~
i like this easy diff, but this is a suggestion. i think it'd be better if you can add more notes to make it look flowy and easier to follow during gameplay. this is up to you if you want to follow this. I will maintain this state.
[Kantan]
00:24:931 (20) - d here. no cymbals are heard when this note is in sync with the drums. ok
00:29:561 (28) - make this a d. you're breaking consistency with the other d's in this part of the song. ok
00:31:245 (31) - ^ ok
00:54:815 (67) - same as 00:29:561. ok
01:16:702 (104) - no cymbals are heard in this part, so make this a d instead. ok
01:41:957 (144) - what do you think of making this a d to make it easier for players instead? changed kdK.
[Hard]
00:14:409 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 40% should be enough like on easy for all these notes because ik that it's supposed to represent the "increase" in the vocals and BGM, but there's no change on each combo and phrase in this part of the song. i think don't want to change this, and I this leave timing points.
00:21:774 (2,3) - re-arrange the pattern like this. it'll be even smoother to follow and more fun to play during gameplay IMO since the transition is--like i said smoother to follow. change is different.
00:27:036 (4) - i think that you should make this a curved slider, aligning it to the previous slider so that the flow in this part is steady during gameplay. yes.
00:29:772 (1) - consider spacing out this note since it's a new combo, as well as a new phrase in this part of the song. none.
00:30:192 (2) - if you can stack this note on (3), it'll be a lot smoother to follow during gameplay in this part of the song. moving it to the side feels awkward to follow for me. no.
00:48:817 - i think you can add a circle here to follow the drums because i feel like something is missing here to follow that part of the song. There is a my own way, I think don't want to add.
00:50:501 - ^ ^
01:02:181 (2) - replace this for a triplet or a 1/4 repeat slider because you can hear the drums going by 1/4 in this part of the song. no.
01:03:970 - add a circle here because i can hear the sound of the drums, and i believe that it'll make the diff more fun during gameplay IMO. There is a my own way, I think don't want to add.
01:05:654 - ^ ^
01:07:337 - ^ ^
01:35:222 (1) - i highly recommend that you fix the minor spacing error because right now, it's spaced out and it plays inconsistent with your other patterns. if this is intentional, then space it out a bit more because again, it's a NC and a new phrase in the song. it is not intentional, is a mistake.
01:49:743 (3) - flip it the other way--in other words, do Ctrl+J so that it'll be smoother and fun to follow for players during gameplay IMO. changed.
02:14:577 (2) - you have to space this note out because the overlap looks bad and ugly to follow during gameplay. spacing this out would make the pattern neater and easier to follow in this part during gameplay. returned to the place of the previous.
03:02:770 (4,1) - add a whistle at the end of (4) and remove it at (1) because it breaks consistency with the current whistle pattern in this part. mistake...
not bad, although i can see more jumps in this diff. not too much however, i'm not saying that you should re-map, but add more jumps to make it more fun for players. in the future make the map, I want to make map that makes full use of jump.
that's all i got. GL and don't give up on this map .
Thank you!Byakugan249 wrote:
[Bakari's Normal]
00:31:034 (6) - this clap here ruins the clap pattern in this part of the song, so in this case, you should remove the clap for that purpose, also add a note at 00:30:824 to follow the drums, but that's up to you. Fixed clap, not the note. I'd prefer to keep it that way, sorry
00:31:666 (2) - i think you should flip the slider like this because personally, i find this flow awkward to follow considering that the slider here is facing the opposite direction and it made me feel uncomfortable during gameplay. yes, my style was kinda hard to read. That's exactly the reason why this pattern looks like this.
00:37:137 (5) - here too. instead i say that you flip the slider like this instead. same reason as above. same as above
00:43:872 (4,5,6) - perhaps you can move these 3 notes down so that it'd be a lot easier to follow for players during gameplay? it should look like this. same reason as above. Sorry, but I do want to keep it like that
01:05:759 (3) - how about going this way because aesthetically, it'll be a lot smoother to follow during gameplay. It's all about style, and I'd like to keep my triangle-pattern here!
01:08:916 (2,3) - maybe you can re-arrange the pattern like this? same reason as above. same reply as above, sorry :<
01:15:861 (3) - what do you think of flipping it the other way instead? same reason as above. ^ :<
02:50:985 (1) - personally i find that this spinner gives a sudden halt in the flow. yes ik you're following the vocals, but 02:44:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has a hold in the vocals, but there are notes here. what i'm saying is that you should replace this spinner for a pattern similar to the combo i mentioned for consistency in this part.
02:57:720 (1) - the clap should be removed at the repeat slider because again, it ruins the whole mood of the song in this part of the song. in other words, since this part is somewhat quiet and since the vocals are at a low volume, i feel that the clap pattern here ruins the whole feeling of the song during gameplay. in fact, t's here to give some rest to players. I really want to keep it that way, sorry :<
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thank you!Leorda wrote:
Hi there
[Easy]
00:59:445 - Add note here? ok
[Hard]
00:23:248 (2) - Spacing error oh fixed
00:27:036 (4) - Flip horizontally&vertically and reverse it for better flow? yes
00:52:290 (1) - These bezier slider is ugly. Make it real curve like other slider? ok~
00:55:236 (2) - Why finish here? Because there is a part placement is wrong, I fixed.
01:41:536 (4) - Move 1 grid up for perfect polygon pattern? (nazi) I fix the form
02:45:934 (1) - Why new combo? ok remove NC.
If the Angel was muscular male, do I take to take it home? /run
Byakugan249 wrote:
[Giffen's Shotgun]
use a slidertick rate of 2. it'll flow a lot smoother to the vocals during gameplay. Fixed
00:20:722 (5,6,7,8) - hmm...this doesn't fit with the music in this part. it feels as if this part is added for the sake of the difficulty. in this part, replace all this for 2 circles like at (2,3), but at the same time, make it a jump pattern since this is the hardest diff in the set. Fixed
00:22:511 (5) - similar as above, this time, just remove the circle here. Fixed
00:27:457 (6,7,8,9) - replace this for a 1/2 slider or delete (7,9) because there are no drums here and it doesn't follow anything in this part. None
00:29:245 (4,6) - same as 00:22:511. None
00:35:243 (2) - make this a curved slider like (4) for a smoother transition in this part of the song during gameplay. Fixed
00:47:239 (1,2) - i highly suggest that you replace this for 2 1/2 sliders with a jump pattern because doing that would follow the vocals and it'll be fun to follow as well during gameplay. Fixed
00:48:817 - consider adding a circle here because you can hear the drums and the transition would be smoother during gamrplay if it's properly placed IMO. None
00:52:395 (7) - remove this circle because it breaks that smooth feeling to this part of the song during gameplay. it feels unnecessary as it doesn't follow anything here. Fixed
01:04:181 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:09:652 (4) - same as 00:22:511. None
01:31:539 (4,6) - ^ None
01:34:380 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is overmapped and it doesn't fit with this part of the song, especially with the vocals. go for a 1/2 slider jump pattern instead so that it'd be easier to follow and fun as well for players. Fixed
02:29:309 (1,2,3) - come up with patterns like this. they're more fitting than the majority of the streams during gameplay.
02:49:302 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 01:34:380. None Because I like this pattern
03:01:718 (1,2,3,4) - replace this for a 1/1 slider and a circle because right now, this part ruins the whole mood in this part of the song during gameplay. Fixed
03:04:033 (8) - a 1/2 slider should be enough to fit the mood of this part like i said above. Fixed
you need to get rid of the majority of the circles because they're overmapped. i'm not saying that you should re-map, but you should re-arrange/replace the patterns so that it'd be similar to 02:29:309 (1,2,3) - since they flow smoothly to the vocals during gameplay.
Thank you for modding!Leorda wrote:
[Giffen's Shoutgun]
01:34:801 (5) - Add whistle? Fixed