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Dark_Ai

Frostmourne wrote:

add tag : Transformer ?
I remember that this song appears in that movie
Oh yes I knew the song from the movie. Transformers yeah <3
btw it is better to add it in source?
Darksonic
Would be nice, I love that ending with this song, also fits well with the movie imo xD.
BrokenArrow
It's not the source, tags would fit it perfectly fine.
riffy
I've played it and I LOVE IT!
Here's some things that might help you a bit.

[General]
  1. Add some more tags to characterise genre of the song? alternative nu metal
  2. And probably you should think about Slider Tick Rate 2 here. I'm sure it will improve sound of your patterns.
  3. Try to reduce volume of hitsounds for intro-part? It feels kinda too loud till 00:15:964 (2) - I think
[Truth]
  1. 00:02:969 (1) - nazi - try to Ctrl+G (reverse) this one? I'm pretty sure that it's not ok to start such a calm part with a jump.
  2. 01:54:423 (3) - sice that looong "COOOOOME" starts at 01:54:923 - you can break this slider! You will get one circle and awesome slider. an example
    Note: you should do the same with similar patterns, trust me, it'll fit here!
  3. 01:49:675 (2,3) - Ctrl+G them to follow vocals closer? I feel like it will fit much better. Don't forget to fix spacing, if you'll do it. <3
  4. 03:02:895 (1,1) - try to replace them with sliders? To make this part a bit easier to play/read. I'm pretty sure it'll be ok here.
[Lie]
not Lies o3o/
  1. 00:16:464 - try to add a circle here? I'm pretty sure that it'll fit with the music better. What's more it will help you to keep consistent 1/1 rhythm here! Btw, you have imilar pattern at 00:29:958 (4,5) - with oject at that beat, so, pleasse keep rhythm consistent!
    Note: same for 00:20:462 - 00:26:460 - 00:29:958 (4,5) -
  2. 03:02:895 (1,1) - same as [Hard], I guess? for consistency
  3. 03:10:891 (1,4) - I'd swap new combos here for consistency. By the way, it looks much better,imo.
[Regret]
  1. Try to reduce AR by one tick? It feels too fast with such a slow Slider Velocity.
  2. 02:57:147 (1,1,1) - three spinners in a row will stress beginners. Try to replace? \:D/
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Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you for the support everyone, really.

You guys made me so happy <3 Love you all >_<

And updated :3
narakucrimson
Aaawww Andrea so moe :3
ztrot
moe master?
Kurai
*-------------------------* moedrea
Jak64
nothing will destroy what exists between us...
Thank you so much for this gift :D
I really appreciate this :P
love ♥
Kodora
Star! :3
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks everyone once again ♥
Saten
o3o

[General]
Some places are really loud imo (especially the beginning). I suggest you try this
00:02:969 - 20%
00:06:968 - 30%
00:14:965 - 40%
00:22:961 - 80%
00:41:453 - 50%
01:23:436 - 60%
02:24:660 - 50%
02:37:405 - 30%
02:38:405 - 50%

[Truth]
00:39:079 - is this break really needed?
01:33:432 (3) - add a repeat
01:43:678 (2,3,4,5,6) - You usually do something symmetric, but I can't see any connection here lol. Maybe something like this?
SPOILER


This required a higher spacing so I picked 1,1x
01:47:426 (1,2) - spacing less than 1,0x on 1/1 sections feels a bit odd imo. You can copy 01:48:176 (2) - and flip it horizontally. The jump might be to big for your taste, but you can always try it out.
02:28:909 (1,2,3) - make a slightly difference and custom stack (2) and (3). It doesn't have to be diagonally, it can be straight down.
03:11:891 (3,4,5,6) - Flip the 3 first objects 90° and place (6) above
SPOILER


You can also NC (6) since it a new stanza
03:13:015 - add a green section with 60% vol

[Regret]
00:39:079 - Again. Is the short break really needed?
02:20:412 (1,2,3) - how about copy 02:21:912 (1,2,3) - and flip it both vertically and horizontally 02:22:911 (4) - if you did the above, center this note
02:25:410 (2,3) - are these not on the middle lines on purpose?
03:05:144 (1,1) - Normally this would be alright. But after so much spinning, it would take much longer to locate the cursor.
03:13:140 - add a green section with 60% vol

[Lie]
offbeat patterns o3o
00:39:079 - break needed? o3o
03:02:895 (1,1) - I really think this is too close. End this at 03:06:893 - instead? and add something at 03:08:892 - if you want
03:13:140 - add a green section with 60% vol


Solid map. I hope you find this helpful
good luck!

cake
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks a lot Saten for your really helpful mod, I've fixed everything! <3
119410501
Spread da love
Suimya
Andrea thanks a lot for this map ;w;

Andrea <3
Topic Starter
Andrea

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Andrea thanks a lot for this map ;w;

Andrea <3
Glad you like it :3

And thanks everyone again for the nice comments <3
Zare
Sorry for being rude, you are free too ignore me. I almost hope you do, because I'd like not to start a fight or something, but I just have to leave my opinion on this here.

Talking about the Insane.
I hate it. It's not only a pure symmetry map, which I will always dislike anyway, but this map has also so many errors and is terribly unfitting.
It has rhytmical errors, like sliderends on downbeats, which is just wrong in most cases because a downbeat usually is a strong sound starting a new phrase etc.
These often result from the usage of 1/2 sliders on red ticks. Why would you want the gameplay-wise strong object, the sliderhead, to be mapped on the musically weaker sound, the red tick, and the gameplay-wise weak object, the sliderend, to be on the musically strong white tick, whether it's a downbeat or upbeat doesn't matter.
Additionally, because of the massive usage of symmetry, you have so many spacing issues that the map isn't fun to play at all anymore. I mean 01:25:435 (1,2,3) - what is this
Also, at parts like 01:24:685 - you simply didn't map according to the music, you just left out the vocals there.
Let aside the nonexistent flow.
It really looks like it was mapped for the sake of mapping something. Anything. Anyone who will analyze this objectively will see that.
Topic Starter
Andrea
First of all, this is a Hard and not an Insane.

Secondly, downbeats doesn't have to be mapped all the time, sometimes you can follow the lyrics instead, as I can see you haven't really mapped if you say something like this.

Third and not last, how can you say to someone that mapped it with his heart and soul that he made it just for the sake of doing it? You don't even have a ranked map so you shouldn't judge in this way, really.

That said, I disagree with everything else you said.

Thanks for looking at my map, though.
Zare
00:18:713 (9) -
00:24:710 (3) -
00:26:710 (3) -
00:30:708 (5) -
A few examples. No vocals here you could have mapped. This is simply rhytmically wrong.

as for the parts where vocals are existent:

02:00:670 (1) - he sings "what" on the downbeat, this needs to be mapped properly with a slider or circle to emphasize the strength instead of a sliderend, which will make this feel weak and awkward to play.
02:33:657 (1) - this is similar
02:45:152 (1) - and this
02:53:149 (2) - and this
etc.
I don't really see how you followed the lyrics here.

Also, care to explain why having no ranked maps means I don't map "with my heart and soul"?
Topic Starter
Andrea
You misunderstood me, I just said that you shouldn't say that this was mapped just for the sake of making a map, it's not nice to say, especially for a map with such special reason.

Anyways, I've already checked the places you've mentioned and they're totally fine to me, not gonna change anything.

As I said before, thank you for your comment.
Loooctav
Nice
IceBeam
you've done 175 awesome maps,Andrea!
love it <3
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you so much <3
rEdo
a cool IRC mod for a cool Andrea.

SPOILER
16:42 *Andrea is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/231922 Linkin Park - What I've Done]
16:42 Andrea: try this bro
16:43 Andrea: ♥
16:43 rEdo: i did
16:43 rEdo: its fine
16:43 rEdo: :p
16:43 Andrea: ;w;
16:43 Andrea: already?
16:43 Andrea: xDXC
16:43 Andrea: xD*
16:43 rEdo: yeah
16:43 Andrea: I've changed it a bit
16:43 rEdo: zzzzzzzzzz
16:46 Andrea: wwwww
16:46 rEdo: where are the ninjaspinners ._.
16:46 Andrea: they told me to remove them
16:46 Andrea: xD
16:46 rEdo: lol fk them
16:46 rEdo: set them up again
16:46 Andrea: :V
16:47 rEdo: 02:39:9­04 (3,4,5) - make a nice jump here or stuff
16:47 Andrea: pics?
16:47 Andrea: I dunno what
16:47 rEdo: umm
16:47 rEdo: sec
16:47 rEdo: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/672136 like that
16:48 rEdo: i deleted the previous sliders for the visibility
16:48 Andrea: oh ok
16:48 rEdo: but you'l get my point
16:48 Andrea: fixorz
16:48 rEdo: 03:02:89­5 (1) - add a clap at the reverse arrow
16:48 Andrea: gogo irc mod
16:48 Andrea: so you get sexy kudo
16:48 rEdo: sigh
16:48 rEdo: okay
16:48 Andrea: doneee
16:49 rEdo: just asking, did you make all of these spinners with a 1/4 interval on purpose?
16:49 rEdo: I'm a person that prefers having at least a 1/2 break
16:49 Andrea: I followed instruments for ending them
16:49 rEdo: like uh
16:49 rEdo: 00:13:09­0 (1) -
16:49 rEdo: this one
16:49 rEdo: it should start on the red tick
16:50 Andrea: ok
16:50 Andrea: fixed
16:50 rEdo: aight so ill point them all out
16:50 rEdo: 00:28:70­9 (6) - nc here
16:51 Andrea: fixed
16:51 rEdo: 01:44:­427 (4) - maybe delete this
16:51 rEdo: and add an another note covered with (3)
16:52 rEdo: 01:03:6­94 (2,3) - analogy
16:53 rEdo: 01:47:­426 (1,2,3) - could be just me, but I dislike this... kinda destroys the linear flow
16:53 rEdo: 02:05­:044 (1) - spinner
16:54 rEdo: actually end it at 2:40, with a finish
16:54 rEdo: i know you're following the vocals, but meh
16:54 Andrea: 2:10 you meant?
16:54 rEdo: ah, yes xD
16:55 Andrea: 02­:10:167 ?
16:55 rEdo: http://puu.sh/2nKo9 OP
16:55 rEdo: yeah
16:55 rEdo: had a screenshot under osu! window
16:55 rEdo: and it kinda blended
16:55 rEdo: ahaha
16:55 rEdo: 02:38:9­05 (1,2,3,4,5) - already mentioned them jumps
16:55 Andrea: yep
16:56 rEdo: 02:57:­022 (1) - spinner
16:56 rEdo: 03:0­5:019 (1) - ^
16:56 rEdo: 03:13­:015 (1) - ^
16:56 rEdo: tell me once you're done so we switch to [Lies]
16:58 Andrea: ready I guess
16:58 Andrea: XD
16:58 rEdo: umm sec
16:59 rEdo: im playing homm3 with Galkan and fartownik
16:59 rEdo: and it's my turn ahaha
16:59 Andrea: rofl ok :D
17:00 rEdo: okay
17:00 rEdo: umm
17:00 rEdo: argh
17:00 rEdo: loud hitsounds at the beginning
17:00 rEdo: loud as fuck
17:01 Andrea: waaaaat
17:01 rEdo: wait
17:01 rEdo: theyre not?
17:01 rEdo: o.o
17:01 rEdo: oh I see
17:01 rEdo: >Not submitted
17:01 rEdo: lemme redl
17:01 Andrea: it's Lie
17:01 Andrea: need to rename again to lies
17:01 Andrea: xD
17:01 rEdo: Lies sounds better
17:01 Andrea: yeah
17:02 rEdo: let me mod it anyway
17:02 rEdo: no need to upload now
17:02 Andrea: in lyrics, cause I regret, from a thousand lies
17:02 Andrea: so yeah
17:02 Andrea: wait, let me update then
17:02 Andrea: XD
17:02 rEdo: ah
17:02 rEdo: so you did
17:02 rEdo: @.@
17:02 Andrea: done o3o
17:02 rEdo: well whatever
17:03 rEdo: so yeah it's good and quiet now
17:03 Andrea: sorry haha
17:03 Andrea: \:D/
17:03 rEdo: 00:15:4­64 (2) - x:32
17:03 Andrea: Lies right?
17:03 rEdo: y
17:04 Andrea: fixed
17:05 rEdo: 02:0­5:169 (1) - again that spinner\
17:05 rEdo: 2:10
17:06 Andrea: red tick right
17:06 rEdo: y
17:06 rEdo: and imo it should end at 2:10
17:06 rEdo: on the big white tick
17:06 rEdo: i know you're following the vocals and stuff, but it doesnt really play right :p
17:07 rEdo: nothing bad besides from that
17:08 rEdo: [Regret]
17:09 Andrea: ok ready~
17:09 rEdo: 00:35­:456 (2) - ain't really blanketing with (1)
17:09 rEdo: and stuff
17:09 rEdo: 00:­43:453­ (2) - nc
17:10 rEdo: uhh i dont like the nc spacing on this one in general
17:10 rEdo: looks pretty random to me
17:10 rEdo: but whatever
17:11 Andrea: trying to fix them
17:11 rEdo: 00:59­:446 (1) - http://puu.sh/2nKO2
17:11 rEdo: 01:41­:428 (1) - ^
17:12 rEdo: 01:41­:428 (1) - again, 2:10 end
17:12 rEdo: guess that's it
17:13 rEdo: nothing much i could be complaining about
17:13 rEdo: imma post this then
good luck, honey!
Topic Starter
Andrea
Really helpful, thank you.

*-*
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Suggestion.
You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

  • Invece di usare il giallo chiaro come colore per le combo che ne dici di usare un colore più dark? Ad esempio un verde scuro o un bordeaux, si abbinano meglio col tema della canzone, anche un giallo più scuro volendo ci starebbe bene.

Lies

  • AR +1 in modo da creare uno spread perfetto con le altre diff.
    00:15:464 (2,3) - Io convertirei questi cerchi in uno slider, giusto per dare l'idea al player di quale sia il ritmo da seguire.
    02:20:912 (2) - Rimuovi la ripetizione, fai partire uno slider a 02:22:911 e fallo finire a 02:24:411.
    02:25:910 (3) - Stessa cosa qui, elimina il cerchio e aggiungi uno slider, secondo me dovresti enfatizzare queste vocali prolungate con degli slider, il vuoto che hai lasciato qui non mi piace molto. (sarebbe davvero bello se facessi anche qualche slider art, fa suppongo chieda troppo)
    02:40:904 (1) - Nei ritornelli precedenti non c'era uno spinner qui, convertilo in uno slider per tenere una consistenza fra i vari kiai.
    03:02:895 (1) - Prova a modificare la forma di questo slider in modo da formare una blanket perfetta col cerchio nel BG.

Regret

  • 00:03:969 (3,4) - Uhh il ritmo qui non è proprio facile da intuire, prova questa pattern:
    00:06:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - Come sopra, non seguire la batteria qui ma continua con lo stesso ritmo, magari prova ad usare lo stesso ordine di cerchi/slider della pattern precedente.
    01:07:443 (1) - Manca il mark della new combo, aggiungilo.
    01:11:941 (4) - Elimina questo slider, aggiungi un cerchio dove iniziava e dove finiva fai partire uno slider che finisce a 01:12:690.
    01:31:933 (3,4) - Ruotali un pò in modo da seguire perfettamente la linea che hai creato con il (1) e il (2).
    02:22:911 (4) - Come nella Easy, prova a riempire questi buchi con degli slider.
    03:02:895 (1) - Stessa suggerimento della Easy.

Truth

  • 00:31:708 (2) - lol che è sto slider, una M moscia? Prova a farlo così:
    00:49:450 (2,3,4) - Flippali orizzontalmente.
    01:14:940 (1) - ^
    01:31:433 (3,4,5) - ^
    01:47:426 (1) - Manca il mark della new combo, aggiungilo.
    01:56:922 (1) - Flip orizzontale.
    02:22:911 (x) - Troppi buchi, ma essendo una Hard degli slider lunghi risulterebbero noiosi, prova ad aggiungere qualche cerchio magari? O uno slider 1/1 con ripetizioni e volume decrescente.
    02:48:900 (1) - Flip orizzontale.
La mappa è ok, un pò noiosa visto che hai usato un bel pò di copypaste. Inoltre, quando imparerai a mettere le new combo in modo che seguino la musica e non le pattern? D:
Flanster
If this gets speedranked, my avatar speaks for my actions ;> jk ;D
Topic Starter
Andrea

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

If this gets speedranked, my avatar speaks for my actions ;> jk ;D
I laughed hard at this xD

Btw I already told hero to don't recheck this, I only asked him for a mod. :P
Irreversible

Andrea wrote:

Third and not last, how can you say to someone that mapped it with his heart and soul that he made it just for the sake of doing it?
and i lol'd hard about this <.<

Andrea wrote:

You don't even have a ranked map so you shouldn't judge in this way, really.
Only because you have so many ranks, he's not allowed to judge? really, i really don't get that argument..
Topic Starter
Andrea

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Suggestion.
You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

  • Invece di usare il giallo chiaro come colore per le combo che ne dici di usare un colore più dark? Ad esempio un verde scuro o un bordeaux, si abbinano meglio col tema della canzone, anche un giallo più scuro volendo ci starebbe bene.

Lies

  • AR +1 in modo da creare uno spread perfetto con le altre diff.
    00:15:464 (2,3) - Io convertirei questi cerchi in uno slider, giusto per dare l'idea al player di quale sia il ritmo da seguire.
    02:20:912 (2) - Rimuovi la ripetizione, fai partire uno slider a 02:22:911 e fallo finire a 02:24:411.
    02:25:910 (3) - Stessa cosa qui, elimina il cerchio e aggiungi uno slider, secondo me dovresti enfatizzare queste vocali prolungate con degli slider, il vuoto che hai lasciato qui non mi piace molto. (sarebbe davvero bello se facessi anche qualche slider art, fa suppongo chieda troppo)
    02:40:904 (1) - Nei ritornelli precedenti non c'era uno spinner qui, convertilo in uno slider per tenere una consistenza fra i vari kiai.
    03:02:895 (1) - Prova a modificare la forma di questo slider in modo da formare una blanket perfetta col cerchio nel BG.

Regret

  • 00:03:969 (3,4) - Uhh il ritmo qui non è proprio facile da intuire, prova questa pattern:
    00:06:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - Come sopra, non seguire la batteria qui ma continua con lo stesso ritmo, magari prova ad usare lo stesso ordine di cerchi/slider della pattern precedente.
    01:07:443 (1) - Manca il mark della new combo, aggiungilo.
    01:11:941 (4) - Elimina questo slider, aggiungi un cerchio dove iniziava e dove finiva fai partire uno slider che finisce a 01:12:690.
    01:31:933 (3,4) - Ruotali un pò in modo da seguire perfettamente la linea che hai creato con il (1) e il (2).
    02:22:911 (4) - Come nella Easy, prova a riempire questi buchi con degli slider.
    03:02:895 (1) - Stessa suggerimento della Easy.

Truth

  • 00:31:708 (2) - lol che è sto slider, una M moscia? Prova a farlo così:
    00:49:450 (2,3,4) - Flippali orizzontalmente.
    01:14:940 (1) - ^
    01:31:433 (3,4,5) - ^
    01:47:426 (1) - Manca il mark della new combo, aggiungilo.
    01:56:922 (1) - Flip orizzontale.
    02:22:911 (x) - Troppi buchi, ma essengo una Hard degli slider lunghi risulterebbero noiosi, prova ad aggiungere qualche cerchio magari? O uno slider 1/1 con ripetizioni e volume decrescente.
    02:48:900 (1) - Flip orizzontale.
La mappa è ok, un pò noiosa visto che hai usato un bel pò di copypaste. Inoltre, quando imparerai a mettere le new combo in modo che seguino la musica e non le pattern? D:
Tutto fixato, grazie. :3

@Irreversible: Read my post on previous page, maybe I explained myself in the wrong way. >_<
Itachi27015
=D very good map :D
Topic Starter
Andrea

Itachi27015 wrote:

=D very good map :D
Thank you :)
pw384
WHAT I'VE DONE!!!!!
Stefan

384059043 wrote:

WHAT I'VE DONE!!!!!
I don't know. Tell it to us. :P
pw384

Stefan wrote:

384059043 wrote:

WHAT I'VE DONE!!!!!
I don't know. Tell it to us. :P
this is the first time that i have caught up with rock-speedranking and andrea's rock map :D
Topic Starter
Andrea
This isn't going to be speedranked, so don't expect anything.

Also, this is my last map for now, so I hope you will like it.
Kryptogram
Hello !


Lies

  1. 02:03:420 (3) - I think that this slider must be a 1/1 slider if you're follow the instrumental, listen carefully, here is a suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/683702
  2. 02:27:409 (1) - Its this space rankeable ? maybe fix it.
  3. 02:34:906 (1) - Add finish to follow the instrumental.

I really would like to see you following the vocals more often, but the diff its lovely.


Regret
  1. 00:36:206 (4) - 2 grids up to line it with (3), don't change if its intentional.
  2. 01:36:680 (5,6) - 1 grid down to line it with (4), don't change if its intentional
  3. 01:59:421 (3) - Move the tail of the silder to x:276 y:296 to make a perfect blanket for (1)
  4. 02:51:399 (2) - Move the tail of the slider to x:236 y:296 to make a perfect blanket for (1)
Truth

  1. 00:02:969 (1) - I really like how it sounds if you add whistle's every red tick until here 00:12:965 (5), try it.
  2. 02:30:908 (3) - Add finish, to follow the instrumental and to be consistent with the other diffs.
  3. 02:34:906 (4) - A finish here sounds good for me, try it.
Really nice mapset, just suggestions because the map ROCK's

Good Luck ! And Star !
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you for the useful mod, updated.
Lally
What I've Done .. te lo dovresti chiedere no?

[Lies]
  1. 01:02:945 (1,2) - ctrl + j per non avere sempre il ritorno alla stessa pattern per cambiare un po'
  2. 02:40:904 - questo spinner è troppo corto per una easy cerca di rimpiazzarlo con 1 - 2 slider o cerchi invece di far stressare i poveri nabbi C:
[Regret]
  1. 00:02:969 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - questo ritmo sinceramente suona malissimo dato che a 00:04:469 - si sente per fettamente che c'è un suono di una nota bella forte del piano e tu lo hai lasciato vuoto questo pezzo,per migliorare un po' prova a fare una cosa del genere:
  2. 00:06:968 (1) - stessa cosa qui manchi il suono principale del piano cerca di aggiungere la reverse a questo slider o di allungarlo fino a 00:07:468 -
  3. 01:40:929 (3,1) - you no blanket?
  4. 02:20:912 (3,1) - spacing pls o3o
  5. 02:40:904 - stessa cosa riguardo a questo spinner come nella easy
  6. 02:51:399 (2,1) - potresti fare una blanket no?
  7. 02:56:147 (3,4,5) - secondo me è meglio una cosa del genere:
[Truth]
  1. nothing to say copy pasta e simmetria meh
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for modding, updated.
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