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Chatmonchy - Renai Spirits

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Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 5 października 2009 at 09:19:50

Artist: Chatmonchy
Title: Renai Spirits
BPM: 142
Filesize: 3989kb
Play Time: 01:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.82 stars, 78 notes)
  2. Hard (4.43 stars, 309 notes)
  3. Normal (3.81 stars, 247 notes)
Download: Chatmonchy - Renai Spirits
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Chatmonchy <3

THOSE SLIDERS WHICH SEEM MISSPACED ARE MEANT LIKE THAT AND I AM NOT GONNA CHANGE THEM. Thanks for understanding. Eh.

Background is a collage of a bunch of photos I found on their homepage.

[edit 13.08 #1] done map.
[edit 13.08 #2] bg rescalled to 1024x768.
[edit 13.08 #3] mp3 cut, fixed timing (<3 x3ns0r)
[edit 14.08 #1] added Normal.
[edit 14.08 #2] added hitsounds and Kiais, custom star2.png.
[edit 14.08 #3] bunch of fixes by Armin and roxkyuubiforever.
[edit 19.08 #3] a lot of fixes by Malar, Symbolic, lesjuh, Agent Spin Here and tieff. Thanks, guys.
[edit 02.09 #1] a lot of fixes again.
[edit 02.09 #2] added Bass-easy.
[edit 11.09 #1] removed Bass-easy (Bassmaster is a dick). Added my Easy.
[edit 12.09 #1] fixed offset.
[edit 19.09 #1] JInxyjem's fixes.
[edit 05.10 #1] fixing background not showing on song select screen.
Last edited by Matma Rex , edited 25 times in total.
CrazyBanana
91 posts
Joined January 2009
CrazyBanana
00:45:637(3,4,5) - zmien to, nie do rytmu...popraw skroc slidery i wrzuc notki jakies
01:10:364 - wrzuc tu notke
01:23:467(break) - chyba ciutek za dlugi....
wszystko...
Starred
niedz
719 posts
Joined May 2008
niedz
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WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
The girl scream a lot O.o
But the song is cute <3

//Normal// - cool, the gameplay is pretty natural ^^
00:59:585(4) - weird... end at 01:00:008
01:00:431(x) - add a note here
02:01:720(6) - i think it's better end at 02:02:565
02:25:813(7) - too confusing to normal diff

Ps.: the song is not ending well. Make it end at 02:43:988, maybe?

//Hard// - cool too
Nothing wrong here o/

Star ^^
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
Offset: 1 773

Delete or edit these first notes... it doesn't fit.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
Armin: 00:57:04 (6) fixed. All spacing you mentioned is meant that way, so it stays.

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

//Normal// - cool, the gameplay is pretty natural ^^
00:59:585(4) - weird... end at 01:00:008 Fixed.
01:00:431(x) - add a note here Fixed.
02:01:720(6) - i think it's better end at 02:02:565 Not changed, i like it.
02:25:813(7) - too confusing to normal diff Fixed.

Ps.: the song is not ending well. Make it end at 02:43:988, maybe? Fixed.
fartownik: that offset is horrible.
Malar
70 posts
Joined October 2008
Malar
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
Normal:
01:21:15 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick on the timeline.
01:23:481 ~ 01:48:525 - 20 second break are you sure? :S

The only thing that really bothers me besides that are the spinners wich are just 2 ticks long. (like this one: 01:07:63 (1)) For an easiest difficulty it could be pretty hard for new players to 'recover' from a spinner or actually get 300 on it. You don't have to fix it you think it's alright.

Hard:
01:21:15 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick on the timeline.
01:23:481 ~ 01:48:525 - 20 second break are you sure? :S

Other than that, everything seems playable and ok to me :)
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Set a better preview point

Normal
01:21:15 (1) - End it 1/1 earlier
02:35:54 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit tbh. Map up to 02:42:31 and start it there.

Hard
02:35:54 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit tbh. Map up to 02:42:31 and start it there.

Decent map, star.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
BPM 142
Offset 1736

[Normal]
00:31:31 (3) - Add whistle.
00:31:52 (4) - Remove whistle.
00:45:67 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:46:52 (4,5) - ^
01:21:17 (1) - End slider here 01:22:86.

[Hard]
00:32:15 (3,4,5) - Spacing. But it's not a big problem.
00:38:91 (3,4,5) - Spacing.

Star. Very good map.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
Most fixed. And SPACING IS MEANT THAT WAY FOR GODS SAKE.
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
modding time!

[NORMAL]
break time is a little long.plz try to shorten it

[HARD]
same as normal

nice map.
starry*
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Hard:

02:23:07 - Move kiai off 1/2 back.
02:23:70 - Leave kiai on, don't disable it here.
02:29:62 - Kiai off here.
02:30:67 - Leave kiai on, don't disable it here.
02:35:53 (1) - WAY TOO LONG. Remove it, it doesn't fit the song too well, either.
02:40:60 - New spinner starts here.

Normal:

Same problems as Hard. Also, I would replace those short-ish spinners at the kiai time, they throw off Normal players too much, I think.
Mystearica
Mystearica
Simple and clean, not bad.

[Normal]

Overall I didn't have any problems playing through this.

01:57:08 (3) - Starting here the vocals become quiet, so I suggest you lower the volume of your hitsounds as well to follow the music.
02:13:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - You can add incremental volume here, sounds nice

[Hard]

Same suggestions to the parts above. Add more volume control to your hitsounds.

☆

I got a ton of 100s playing through this map though, I think you should request a timing check.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
Mystearica, nice idea, will be added.

JJJ, I want to have one repeat of chorus kiaid and just fontains at the others. Break filled. Spinner fixed. Shortish sliders left, they have just one repeat, which IMO is easy enough - and even if someone will miss first one, the rest of them is just same, so it'll be easy to get them.
GbL
332 posts
Joined February 2009
GbL
[Normal]

00:46:52 (4,5) - spacing

[Hard]

00:33:00 (4,5) - spacing
00:39:76 (4,5) - ^
00:46:52 (4,5) - ^
02:00:04 (4,5,6) - ^
02:08:07 (x) - add a note

Star~
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Matma Rex

GbL wrote:

02:08:07 (x) - add a note
Nope, it's fine.

GbL wrote:

[Normal]

00:46:52 (4,5) - spacing

[Hard]

00:33:00 (4,5) - spacing
00:39:76 (4,5) - ^
00:46:52 (4,5) - ^
02:00:04 (4,5,6) - ^
These sliders are all fine, I meant them that was, and they are freaking staying. I have already said it, eh.
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
Hello ;3

Star

Download: Chatmonchy - Renai Spirits (Matma Rex) [Bass-easy].osu
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Normal~
02:42:29 (1) - End this at 02:43:98

Bass-easy~
00:49:48 (3,4,5) - This doesn't seem easy...
01:19:48 (2,3) - Unrankable.
01:21:17 (1) - End at 01:22:86
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Imo this difficulty should have wider spacing because sometimes you can't tell if some of these spinners are actually two notes or not (That's not very easy ;_;). Possibly even add more slider velocity as well.
Examples:
00:31:31 (1)
00:49:48 (3,4)
01:02:36 (1,2)
￣￣￣￣￣￣
Add hit sounds.
Add "Bassmaster" to the Tags for this difficulty.
And try to get Easy to have less difficulty stars than Normal.

Insane~
02:42:29 (1) - Same suggestion as Normal
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
Mafiamaster, fixed.

I removed Bass' diff because he is a faggot and made my own Easy.
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod
Green = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
No problems found :)

[Normal]
00:41:45 (4) - Maybe place a note here as a slight jump
01:39:89 - Maybe place a note here
02:02:58 (7) - Maybe place a note here as a slight jump
02:22:01 (6), 02:28:77 (6) and 02:35:53 (6) - You can't really tell which directin these are coming from, but since they're so small I suppose it wouldn't really matter. if this could be made easier to tell, it'd be good. If not, it doesn't matter.
No problems found :)

[Hard]
00:41:45 (4) - Maybe place a note here as a jump
02:02:58 (7) - Maybe place a note here as a jump

I've found no problems in your map! :) Have a well deserved star
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Matma Rex

Azure_Kyte wrote:

[Normal]
00:41:45 (4) - Maybe place a note here as a slight jump Hm, I rather want to keep the two combos there separated. So - no :)
01:39:89 - Maybe place a note here I didn't use 1/8th in this diff. So - no :)
02:02:58 (7) - Maybe place a note here as a slight jump Hm, I rather want to keep the two combos there separated. So - no :)
02:22:01 (6), 02:28:77 (6) and 02:35:53 (6) - You can't really tell which directin these are coming from, but since they're so small I suppose it wouldn't really matter. if this could be made easier to tell, it'd be good. If not, it doesn't matter. I was thinking about it - if anyone will think it's needed, I'll storyboard small arrows to indicate where it's going to go.

[Hard]
00:41:45 (4) - Maybe place a note here as a jump
02:02:58 (7) - Maybe place a note here as a jump Both like in Normal - I want those combos to be separated.r
Thanks for modding and star :)
ztrot
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ztrot
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
Timing fixed, arrows storyboarded.
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[Easy]
01:11:44 (3,4) - This will confuse quite some newbs.

[Normal]
01:26:23 (4) - Add new combo.
01:27:07 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:27:92 (2) - Add new combo.

[Hard]
01:14:82 (5) - Stack on 01:13:13 (4) - to make it look nicer.
01:18:20 (8) - I don't think its on a grid.
01:19:04 (1,2,3) - Move beats so that (2) stacks on 01:18:20 (8).

Starred
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
(Bassmaster is a dick).
You yourself are a dick :twisted:
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Suggestions:
Sometimes a whistle isn't enough as a hitsound. Try using claps and finishes more.

Normal:
00:31:726 (5) - Finish
00:34:683 - Add note here with finish
00:38:486 (5) - Finish
00:41:444 - Add note here with finish
00:44:824 (6) - Finish
00:53:274 (8) - ^
00:57:500 (7) - Clap
01:00:880 (6) - Add Clap to both the start and the return arrow. (Keep the finish at the end part of the slider)
01:05:105 (8) - Finish
01:11:866 (7) - Clap
01:15:246 (6) - ^
01:18:626 (9) - Finish
01:24:542 (2) - Clap
01:27:922 (1) - ^
01:32:993 (3) - Clap the the end of the slider
01:33:838 (4) - ^
01:35:528 (7) - Clap
01:36:373 (1) - Finish at the end of the slider
01:40:598 (3) - Finish
01:42:288 (6) - ^
01:51:584 (7) - Finish at the end of the slider

01:56:232 - 02:16:303 : Try putting a clap each time the drum beat is heard.

02:22:007 - Finish at the end of slider
02:28:758 - ^
02:35:528 - ^

I'll mod the other diffs later. . .
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
Here's my mod~ nyah~
(And again, this is just suggestions)

Easy:

00:34:68 (4) - Add a beat here
01:05:52 (4) - ^
00:48:62 (1) - ^

Normal:

00:33:83 (3) - Please change it and delete the hitsound
00:40:59 (3) - ^
02:02:57 (7) - Add a beat here
02:08:27 (4) - ^

Hard:

00:33:83 (5) - Add a reverse arrow to the slider
02:02:57 (7) - Add a beat here

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

Both the song and the beatmap are good. For that, I give you a star~
m980
Elite Mapper
1,234 posts
Here since the beginning
m980
Looks good
peppy
19,315 posts
Here since the beginning
peppy
I'm not sure if this has been fixed or not, but the background displayed on song select for the difficulty with storyboarded directional guides was displaying badly. Please make sure to check this before ranking.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Matma Rex

peppy wrote:

I'm not sure if this has been fixed or not, but the background displayed on song select for the difficulty with storyboarded directional guides was displaying badly. Please make sure to check this before ranking.
Yeah, it's fixed. Actually, all backgrounds weren't displaying in song select mode.
Torran
724 posts
Joined November 2008
Torran
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Matma Rex
soradg123: it only moved three notes by one milisecond: two in Normal and one in Hard. I'm not gonna pop bubble to reupload that, it's probably like distance snap and grid snap - sometimes two notes get places on grid in different distances, even if they should be equal.
Blackiris
192 posts
Joined April 2009
Blackiris
Seal of approval.
starred~
RemmyX25
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Ranked.
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