yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Insane:
00:10:22 (5,6,7) - Space these downward to the right like 00:08:69 (7,8,9) - (except to the right)
fixed
00:11:30 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Fair.. but kind of unexpected.. maybe centering 00:11:09 (2) - in the middle would make the jump more expecting as the player can see the jump spacing from 2 to 1.
no
00:17:61 (1) - Hmm suggestion, but don't stack this
~nazi~ 00:39:35 (7) - grid 3 one to the right.
fixed
~nazi~ 00:58:91 (10) - ^ but up, not to the right.
fixed
02:03:37 (9) - Extend to white tick.
no

02:06:74 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5) - I really like how this part sounds/is mapped
thank you >O<

Hard:
00:38:91 - Note here?
fixed
~nazi~ 01:07:61 (5) - down right one on grid 3
fixed
~nazi~ 01:08:69 (8) - to the left one on grid 3
fixed

~design suggestion~
01:31:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since it's a hard, I think a jump could be used here. Kind of what you have at 00:42:61 (1,2,3,4) - Here's a kind of idea you can go with, map it how you will.

SPOILER

[attachment=0:09f93]screenshot017.jpg
nice idea.done[/attachment:09f93]

Overall I think difficulty feels more a bit of a normal, not too much hard. But this is always opinionated, so don't take this to heart.

Normal:
All fine!
:D

1. Redo both breaks. They'll shorten quite a bit.
2. 00:44:35 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the start of this slider. It's to get that longer drawn out sound feeling which sounds pretty nice in this song.
3. 01:30:00 (7) - Suggestion: Add a clap at the end.
4. 01:41:74 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the start of this slider.
5. 01:48:69 (1) - ^
6. 01:51:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe add some whistles here and there?
7. 02:11:74 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the start of this slider.

1. 01:07:39 (4) - Add finish.
2. 01:32:17 (4) - Suggestion: New combo?
3. 01:41:74 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of slider.
4. 01:48:69 (1) - ^
5. 02:11:74 (6) - ^
6. 02:36:52 (4) - Suggestion: New combo.

1. 00:41:63 (6) - Suggestion: Shorten to the nearest white tick?
2. 00:44:35 (1) - Finish
3. 00:52:06 (11) - Suggestion: Shorten to the nearest white tick~
4. 00:59:02 (11) - ^ ;_; Maybe?
5. 01:07:39 (5) - Finish!
6. 01:32:82 (6) - Oo, this note is kind of cut from the bottom. Can you move it up a little bit?
7. 01:41:74 (1) - Finish.
8. 01:45:98 (7) - Suggestion: Shorten to the nearest white tick. Suggestionsss.
9. 01:48:69 (1) - Finish.
10. 02:03:37 (9) - Suggestion: Maybe lengthen to the nearest white tick?
11. 02:11:74 (6) - Finish yay!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~

1. Redo both breaks. They'll shorten quite a bit.
   done
2. 00:44:35 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the start of this slider. It's to get that longer drawn out sound feeling which sounds pretty nice in this song.
   done
3. 01:30:00 (7) - Suggestion: Add a clap at the end.
   done
4. 01:41:74 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the start of this slider.
   done
5. 01:48:69 (1) - ^
   done
6. 01:51:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe add some whistles here and there?
   no
7. 02:11:74 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the start of this slider.
   no

Hard~

1. 01:07:39 (4) - Add finish.
   done
2. 01:32:17 (4) - Suggestion: New combo?
   done
3. 01:41:74 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of slider.
   done
4. 01:48:69 (1) - ^
   done
5. 02:11:74 (6) - ^
   done
6. 02:36:52 (4) - Suggestion: New combo.

done

Insane~

1. 00:41:63 (6) - Suggestion: Shorten to the nearest white tick?
   done
2. 00:44:35 (1) - Finish
   no
3. 00:52:06 (11) - Suggestion: Shorten to the nearest white tick~
   done
4. 00:59:02 (11) - ^ ;_; Maybe?
   done
5. 01:07:39 (5) - Finish!
   no
6. 01:32:82 (6) - Oo, this note is kind of cut from the bottom. Can you move it up a little bit?
   done
7. 01:41:74 (1) - Finish.
   no
8. 01:45:98 (7) - Suggestion: Shorten to the nearest white tick. Suggestionsss.
   done
9. 01:48:69 (1) - Finish.
   no
10. 02:03:37 (9) - Suggestion: Maybe lengthen to the nearest white tick?
    done
11. 02:11:74 (6) - Finish yay!

no

minyeob wrote:

[Hard]
01:01:52 (4) - 01:03:48 (1) -> This part feels kind of empty
Add a note on 01:02:93 ( ) and 01:03:26 ( )?

01:56:52 (4) - Personally I don't like this slider:; Compare with (1,2,3)

all fixed,nice mod^^

Hanyuu wrote:

gdeath

i like this map star!
thank you^O^

for the offset im not sure! i feel it too early for me +5ms offset sound better
maybe you can look at it

the offset is mensurated by kiou2.i asked him again.(thank you,kiou2>w<)and he thinks its no problem.
so i dont change it.
still thanks for your playing my map and mod^^

vincerio wrote:

nice map >v< b

+star~

1. hard的BG在歌曲选择界面看起来最左边不太爽,不过不是什么大问题,我nazi了

1. 00:06:742 (8) - 感觉有点奇怪,slider开头match歌词的句尾,后接clap,这个就没前面那个00:02:612 (6) repeat的slider感觉好了
2. 00:14:568 (4) - 建议放出来,不要和(3)的结尾重叠,新手看见重叠很容易着急点快miss掉(于是暴露了我新手的心态orz)
3. 01:29:351 (4) - 新手建议...放出来
4. 02:09:351 (1,2,3) - 好模式,不过其实5个重叠就好了,真的...我是新手囧

1. 00:03:916 (1) - 这个删掉应该还好些
2. 01:17:612 (1,2,3,4) - 完全没有想到的大jump,spacing是不是太大了点?
3. 02:21:960 (1,2,3,4) - ^

1. 01:23:699 (10) - new combo, 大数字看起来不怎么好看
2. 02:08:264 (7) - ^
3. 02:30:438 (5) - 和(4)结尾对齐,取消grid snap按着Alt去拖慢慢对齐就好

Breeze wrote:

ロリロリ～～大好き～>o<

mod start go go !! >w<

Overall

1. hard的BG在歌曲选择界面看起来最左边不太爽,不过不是什么大问题,我nazi了

^^

[Normal]

1. 00:06:742 (8) - 感觉有点奇怪,slider开头match歌词的句尾,后接clap,这个就没前面那个00:02:612 (6) repeat的slider感觉好了
   我试过缩短slider吧结尾和最后一个歌词对齐，不过感觉也不太和谐。还是决定不改了Orz
2. 00:14:568 (4) - 建议放出来,不要和(3)的结尾重叠,新手看见重叠很容易着急点快miss掉(于是暴露了我新手的心态orz)
   done
3. 01:29:351 (4) - 新手建议...放出来
   这里的节奏都相同，还是不放出来了。故意稍微做点陷阱的.>w<
4. 02:09:351 (1,2,3) - 好模式,不过其实5个重叠就好了,真的...我是新手囧

done

[Hard]

1. 00:03:916 (1) - 这个删掉应该还好些
   想把节奏凑得挤一点，删掉的话，中间感觉有些松垮
2. 01:17:612 (1,2,3,4) - 完全没有想到的大jump,spacing是不是太大了点?
   不不，其实不难x.x
3. 02:21:960 (1,2,3,4) - ^

^

[Insane]

1. 01:23:699 (10) - new combo, 大数字看起来不怎么好看
   done
2. 02:08:264 (7) - ^
   done
3. 02:30:438 (5) - 和(4)结尾对齐,取消grid snap按着Alt去拖慢慢对齐就好

done

loli star for you!

ztrot wrote:

YO~

Okay most of this is just me being picky okay?
Normal:
00:00:87 (2) - line this up with the slider before it 00:00:22 (1).no.it's intentional
00:01:74 (3,4) - place these next to the Y axis that's the line that goes down the middle.^
00:02:17 (5) - place this on the other side of the y axis.^
00:02:61 (6) - make a Reflection of 00:00:87 (2) aka flip horizontally.done
00:04:13 (1,2,3) - spread these out in x1.3.done
00:05:00 (4,5) - Align with 00:04:13 (1,2,3).no.it's intentional
00:08:26 (2) - move the end a tick to the left.done
00:09:35 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spread these out with x1.3.done
00:10:87 (1) - Jump in normal? o.O???.no.its really not a jump
BTW I think you should just resnap in 1.3 it lets you make alot of symmetric fixes.done

Hard:
Note Align your notes lol.
00:00:65 (3) - Align with 00:00:43 (2).no.it's intentional
00:00:87 (4) - Align with 00:00:22 (1).^
00:13:91 (4,5,6) - Spacingdone
00:47:61 (3) - Align with 2 before it.no.it's intentional
00:47:82 (4) - align with 00:47:17 (1).]color=#0000FF]^ [/color]
01:11:09 (5) - align with 01:10:22 (1,3).done
01:18:48 (3) - New combo to show jump.
no.its the same jump as 01:17:61 (1,2).i think new combo is unnecessary


Overall seems good but still hav a few to many spacing problems.
Bug me later to mod insane and hard still has a few errors but im tired sorry :<
I will star in hopes for a rank tho

S i R i R u wrote:

:oops:

mrtn wrote:

[normal]
01:33:05 - reinsert break

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
a little bit on the hard side but acceptable

[Hard]
01:18:48 (3) - new combo done
02:00:65 (1) - too soon after spinner ends i think no problem here
02:22:82 (3) - new combo done
02:29:13 (1) - too soon after spinner i think no problem here
02:32:39 (1) - ^ ^


[Insane]
01:42:17 (4) - unintuitive bpm change ^
02:00:65 (1) - too soon after spinner ^
02:29:13 (1) - ^ ^
02:32:39 (1) - ^ ^


popped
~.~

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
decent

[Hard]
02:00:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - sudden spacing jump from nowhere...this is like the third random spacing jump in here and theyre all a bit disorienting
disorienting?
sorry,i dont think so.
i used the different spacing in order to distinguish them.
its easy to beat 300 for me and others who moded my map except you
and this diff is [Hard],not [Normal] or [Easy].okay?

[Insane]
sorry, i just watched this map going down and im going to have to say
if i have to guess as to where the speed up and slow down sliders are instead of being able to either visually interpret them or feel them in the music, theyre wrong.
let me break it down a bit
00:41:63 (6) - 00:52:06 (11) - 00:59:02 (11) - consistent
01:12:82 (9) - 01:16:41 (11) - 01:30:32 (9) - same idea as those but not halftime
01:42:17 (4) - no precedent whatsoever and shortly following 01:41:30 (4), which is same length but twice speed
01:45:98 (7) - return to earlier consistency
01:50:32 (9) - 01:56:41 (10) - and immediately break from it again
02:02:61 (8) - random unprecedented slowdown directly following high-speed jumps. protip: speeding up with jumps implies exactly the opposite of a slower slider
02:20:76 (12) - according to the opening three slowdowns, this should also be slow...but it isnt
i used 0.5 BPM speed where i think its suitable.
"why dont i set half timing in the same place?"its a problem?
Nope.i wanna ask why i must use the same pattern?because of the same rhythm here and there?
i always try my best to think about different patterns and make the map all different.
if i fix these as your favorite,the map will be monotone and mechanical.
well,if i do so,i think what i should do is to copy my former patterns.its relaxing for me.right?
however i dont.'cos i wanna make my map more fun.
its my style.you dont like it though
anyway,it can be played well even if i dont change anything you moded.kk?

btw:the same things also was done in my ranked maps.those are not any problems.

now.lets wait for other BATs how to say.

im not going to pop twice for the same thing but i really think that you should consider these points, as well as whoever next mods this

Mystearica wrote:

The source is actually "Shukufuku no Campanella."
you translate カンパネラ to english.
i translate it to roma.
you and i are all right.xD

The artist is 杏子御津 or Anzu Mitsu, who is the voice actor for Minette.
u r right.fixed

The correct song name is *twinkle*twinkle*
yeah,i check it again.what you point is right.

I searched a lot of sites to gather this information XD

Ex Boy wrote:

做好了> < 你看看怎麼樣，可以的話就帶我一份吧~~~拜託了！

gdeath wrote:

mod one diff only ---> Ex Boy's Love
thankz in advance
viewtopic.php?f=6&t=16884&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

WyndII wrote:

Insane
00:47:177 - this section dont have hitsounds
:Try this 00:47:39 (2,5) - add clap hitsound, 00:49:13 (8) - finish, whistle on red ticks
nice idea.done
01:00:22 (1) - end of slider must have finish hitsound?
01:01:09 (3) - ^
01:01:74 (4) - ^
01:06:74 (3) - slider must have finish hitsound?
01:14:78 (6) - extend 1/4?
:If you wanna do that you need to remove 01:15:43 (7) - and respace the part. D:
01:17:61 (1,2) - finish?
01:18:48 (1,2) - ^
01:19:35 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:21:96 (4,5) - ^
02:21:96 (4) - new combo
02:22:82 (9,10) - finish
02:22:82 (9) - new combo
02:23:69 (1,2,3,4) - finishess
01:51:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this section dont have hitsounds
:Try this 00:47:39 (2,5) - add clap hitsound, 00:49:13 (8) - finish, whistle on red ticks (lol)
^
02:11:30 (1) - new combo and add finish
done
otherwise,not fixed.thanks for your mod