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Mi-chan & Sekihan - Sunset Love Suicide

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Topic Starter
On_WanWan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 24 March, 2013 at 16:45:15

Artist: Mi-chan & Sekihan
Title: Sunset Love Suicide
Source: VOCALOID
Tags: MachigeritaP Megpoid Gumi
BPM: 280
Filesize: 9557kb
Play Time: 03:18
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.02 stars, 192 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 43 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 563 notes)
  4. Normal (4.3 stars, 324 notes)
  5. Suicide (5 stars, 733 notes)
Download: Mi-chan & Sekihan - Sunset Love Suicide
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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、Go for Graveyard

Easy - On_WanWan
Normal - On_WanWan
Hard - On_WanWan
Insane - On_WanWan
Suicide - On_WanWan
happy623
8-) from m4m queue
除了紅色是unrankable,其他都是建議w
開始ww

BPM應該是 : 132 / 264 ?

SPOILER
[General]
rules換了, Artist應該是Machigerita-P, 把gumi醬放在Tags那裡吧w
osu的mp3限制是128kbps - 192kbps, 超過了, 試找新的音源w
背景圖的尺寸限制為 1024*768 或 800*600
Preview Point的位置必須一樣
如果不做storyboard的話, 可以刪去osb檔
每個diff的slider velocity最好不要一樣w

[Easy]
Easy必須要跟著snapping 所以請長時間打開以下這個w

如果想選用高BPM的話, 請使用低的Slider Velocity

[Normal]
跟Easy一樣跟著snapping做
高BPM, 低SV w

改好了可以再找我來個完整的remod :) 加油www
Topic Starter
On_WanWan

happy623 wrote:

8-) from m4m queue
除了紅色是unrankable,其他都是建議w
開始ww

BPM應該是 : 132 / 264 ? 應該≒280 OAO

SPOILER
[General]
rules換了, Artist應該是Machigerita-P, 把gumi醬放在Tags那裡吧w FIXED
osu的mp3限制是128kbps - 192kbps, 超過了, 試找新的音源w FIXED
背景圖的尺寸限制為 1024*768 或 800*600 FIXED
Preview Point的位置必須一樣 FIXED
如果不做storyboard的話, 可以刪去osb檔 FIXED
每個diff的slider velocity最好不要一樣w EASY及NORMAL SV已REMAPPED

[Easy]
Easy必須要跟著snapping 所以請長時間打開以下這個w

如果想選用高BPM的話, 請使用低的Slider Velocity REMAPPED

[Normal]
跟Easy一樣跟著snapping做
高BPM, 低SV w REMAPPED

改好了可以再找我來個完整的remod :) 加油www
謝謝你的mod,幫助很大 感激不盡阿:33!
LunarSakuya
this is a cool song

General
- The Source and Artist need to be switched.
- Usually bpms are whole numbers. So try exactly 280bpm. (Though I kinda disagree with doubling the bpm with this kind of song but I think you're going for the challenge)

Easy
00:27:563 (1) - Move to x:160 y:168, the pattern will be centered~
01:04:417 (2) - Finish on reverse
01:08:810 (1) - Avoid spinner spam, i suggest you map out these 3 spinners
02:03:556 (1) - Finish
03:00:337 (1) - Clap

Normal
- the SV is too fast here imo; lower SV maybe by half even. This will also help lower difficulty level/star rating.

00:13:850 (1) - Finish on head
00:26:706 (1,1,1) - Space these out and avoid necessary antijumps, especially in a normal (if you fix, there are others like this)
00:29:706 (2) - Clap on head instead of tail
00:44:704 (1) - Finish on head
01:12:131 (1) - Clap; also, i'm not sure of this spinner spam like Easy
01:10:417 (1) - Finish on head. hear bg music
01:13:845 (1) - ^
01:17:274 (1) - ^
01:18:988 (1) - Finish
01:34:844 (1) - Delete NC
02:58:837 (1) - ^

Hard
00:10:421 (1) - Finish on head
00:40:848 (1) - unrankable slider, the ball path needs to be visible
00:54:239 (1) - Too short. Map this out
01:00:989 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is a pattern for Insanes imo, try to make it more gentle
01:46:414 (7) - NC
02:23:911 (1) - Save these 1/8ths for harder diffs; i suggest you use an easier type of slider

Sunset
00:20:278 (5) - Ctrl + G, gives distance from (4)
00:59:703 (2,3) - Move further away or at least equalize distance between (2,3,4)
01:21:987 (10) - Please don't ever use this 1/16. A cool slider would do just fine.
01:39:558 (1) - Delete NC
02:03:556 (2) - NC
02:32:161 (4) - again, don't use 1/16 please
03:05:694 (2,3) - Give some more distance, maybe Ctrl + G (2)
03:06:980 (1) - Finish on head
03:10:408 (1) - ^
03:20:693 (1) - ^

Suicide
00:12:135 (1) - Move to y-axis like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626929
00:30:884 (8) - Finish on tail
00:37:098 (3) - NC to indicate sudden distance change
00:40:848 (1) - unrankable, slider path needs to be seen!
01:04:524 (3) - NC
01:21:987 (10) - ^
01:33:344 (2,3) - Bring closer together to match spacing vs rhythm
02:16:841 (3) - Try not to go into the hp bar..
02:45:553 (13) - Ctrl + J might add some slider variety http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626946
02:57:338 (2,3) - again, spacing vs. rhythm; bring closer together
this is indeed a suicide diff

Very creative sliders and a nice challenge xD Good luck! :P
Cobra
YO
The BPM should be 280, not 280.02. If there is a small decimal like that you should usually round- remember that in the future :)
Nice map, good luck!
Topic Starter
On_WanWan

LunarSakuya wrote:

this is a cool song

General
- The Source and Artist need to be switched. I'll keep this 0.0
- Usually bpms are whole numbers. So try exactly 280bpm. (Though I kinda disagree with doubling the bpm with this kind of song but I think you're going for the challenge)FIXED

Easy
00:27:563 (1) - Move to x:160 y:168, the pattern will be centered~ FIXED
01:04:417 (2) - Finish on reverseFIXED
01:08:810 (1) - Avoid spinner spam, i suggest you map out these 3 spinners FIXED
02:03:556 (1) - FinishFIXED
03:00:337 (1) - ClapFIXED

Normal
- the SV is too fast here imo; lower SV maybe by half even. This will also help lower difficulty level/star rating.CHANGE TO 0.90

00:13:850 (1) - Finish on headFIXED
00:26:706 (1,1,1) - Space these out and avoid necessary antijumps, especially in a normal (if you fix, there are others like this)FIXED
00:29:706 (2) - Clap on head instead of tailFIXED
00:44:704 (1) - Finish on headFIXED
01:12:131 (1) - Clap; also, i'm not sure of this spinner spam like EasyREMAPPED
01:10:417 (1) - Finish on head. hear bg musicFIXED
01:13:845 (1) - ^FIXED
01:17:274 (1) - ^FIXED
01:18:988 (1) - FinishFIXED
01:34:844 (1) - Delete NCFIXED
02:58:837 (1) - ^FIXED

Hard
00:10:421 (1) - Finish on headFIXED
00:40:848 (1) - unrankable slider, the ball path needs to be visibleFIXED
00:54:239 (1) - Too short. Map this outFIXED
01:00:989 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is a pattern for Insanes imo, try to make it more gentleFIXED
01:46:414 (7) - NCFIXED
02:23:911 (1) - Save these 1/8ths for harder diffs; i suggest you use an easier type of sliderFIXED

Sunset
00:20:278 (5) - Ctrl + G, gives distance from (4)FIXED
00:59:703 (2,3) - Move further away or at least equalize distance between (2,3,4)FIXED
01:21:987 (10) - Please don't ever use this 1/16. A cool slider would do just fine.FIXED
01:39:558 (1) - Delete NCFIXED
02:03:556 (2) - NCFIXED
02:32:161 (4) - again, don't use 1/16 please FIXED
03:05:694 (2,3) - Give some more distance, maybe Ctrl + G (2)FIXED
03:06:980 (1) - Finish on headFIXED
03:10:408 (1) - ^FIXED
03:20:693 (1) - ^FIXED

Suicide
00:12:135 (1) - Move to y-axis like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626929 FIXED
00:30:884 (8) - Finish on tailFIXED
00:37:098 (3) - NC to indicate sudden distance changeFIXED
00:40:848 (1) - unrankable, slider path needs to be seen!FIXED
01:04:524 (3) - NCFIXED
01:21:987 (10) - ^FIXED
01:33:344 (2,3) - Bring closer together to match spacing vs rhythmFIXED
02:16:841 (3) - Try not to go into the hp bar..FIXED
02:45:553 (13) - Ctrl + J might add some slider variety http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626946FIXED
02:57:338 (2,3) - again, spacing vs. rhythm; bring closer togetherFIXED
this is indeed a suicide diff XD

Very creative sliders and a nice challenge xD Good luck! :P
Thanks for your moding >< it's very helpful :3



uscobra wrote:

YO
The BPM should be 280, not 280.02. If there is a small decimal like that you should usually round- remember that in the future :)
Nice map, good luck!FIXED
Thanks for your supporting :3
0gre_old
I like your sense and mapping style ~
LnDSuv
I was working on this map for a while, but gave up.
I'll share the video, use it if you want: http://puu.sh/2a3rA
Also I think that my mp3 sounds better, try it out and decide yourself: http://puu.sh/2a3t2
Change the source to VOCALOID (or keep it clean). This is a rule.
Change Machigerita-P to MachigeritaP. Check other tags here: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm13547567 (I don't know japanese so I can't help).
GL with the map :)
inb4 the real bpm is 140 :D
Foreverends
根本吾似1st map QAQ
超級神mapper ;w;
btw timing提醒
個人認為offset在10434會更好更準 8-)
Topic Starter
On_WanWan

0gre wrote:

I like your sense and mapping style ~
THANKYOU :) !!

LnDSuv wrote:

I was working on this map for a while, but gave up.
I'll share the video, use it if you want: http://puu.sh/2a3rA
Also I think that my mp3 sounds better, try it out and decide yourself: http://puu.sh/2a3t2
Change the source to VOCALOID (or keep it clean). This is a rule.
Change Machigerita-P to MachigeritaP. Check other tags here: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm13547567 (I don't know japanese so I can't help).
GL with the map :)
inb4 the real bpm is 140 :D
Thanks for the MP3 and the video very much, Your MP3 sounds better than I!
I changed the Artist name and Source, but i didn't change the BPM because i want to use a high BPM in this map,I'm sorry :(


Foreverends wrote:

根本吾似1st map QAQ
超級神mapper ;w;
btw timing提醒
個人認為offset在10434會更好更準 8-)

你先係超級神mapper啦OAO!
我轉左用LnDSuv嘅mp3所以offset變左 :o
[Luxord]
Hello from my Modding Queue~

[Easy]
00:26:607 (1,1,1) - Why 3 new combos? There's no need to spam the new combos. >.<;
00:33:464 (1,1,1) - ^
00:40:321 (1,1,1) - ^
and so on.
New combo is a set of Hit Circles and Sliders that come one after another, have the same color and correspond to a specific part of a beatmap's song.
01:46:321 (1) - Work a bit more this slider. The shape needs more work.
02:39:453 (1,2,3,4) - Fix this, make it a square shape or something else. The current one looks random~

[Normal]
I see you did the same thing here with Combos and so on for all difficulties. As mentioned above the new combo spamming is not needed. At the moment I'm the only one who say that so you can ignore it. But consider fixing it if next mods say the same.
Overall the Normal is nice.

[Hard]
Please don't use Black color for combos! It's really hard to read with that background and so with 100% Background Dim like a lot people use.
00:16:428 (5,6,7,1) - This looks totally confusing. I suggest you to change the placing so it will be more clear and read-able while playing.
03:26:597 (1,1) - Those sliders are unrankable. Their path is not clear and they are also very fast which makes it very hard to read.

  1. Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read. Additionally, the slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. However, sliders that cross over themselves are fine as long as the borders are clearly visible.
  2. Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider.
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria

[Suicide]
AR +1 ~ AR 9 is not enough for this difficulty. :/
01:27:892 (11,12,13,14) - This is unplayable for me~
01:27:892 (1) - NC there I guess. The Combo is too long.

[Insane]
00:33:464 (1,1) - The distance between those two is too high for their beat distance even for "Insane".
01:34:321 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Fix this, the current shape doesn't look nice. Maybe try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/648457
The rest is fine I guess.


For some reason I didn't feel very comfortable with this map set even though your mapping style is different. Good luck with your map!
Topic Starter
On_WanWan

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Modding Queue~
[Easy]
00:26:607 (1,1,1) - Why 3 new combos? Th re's no need to spam the new combos. >.<;
00:33:464 (1,1,1) - ^
00:40:321 (1,1,1) - ^
and so on.
New combo is a set of Hit Circles and Sliders that come one after another, have the same color and correspond to a specific part of a beatmap's song.
I changed a few of combo colour OAO
01:46:321 (1) - Work a bit more this slider. The shape needs more work.FIXED

02:39:453 (1,2,3,4) - Fix this, make it a square shape or something else. The current one looks random~FIXED

[Normal]
I see you did the same thing here with Combos and so on for all difficulties. As mentioned above the new combo spamming is not needed. At the moment I'm the only one who say that so you can ignore it. But consider fixing it if next mods say the same.
Overall the Normal is nice.

[Hard]
Please don't use Black color for combos! It's really hard to read with that background and so with 100% Background Dim like a lot people use.
00:16:428 (5,6,7,1) - This looks totally confusing. I suggest you to change the placing so it will be more clear and read-able while playing.FIXED
03:26:597 (1,1) - Those sliders are unrankable. Their path is not clear and they are also very fast which makes it very hard to read.FIXED

  1. Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read. Additionally, the slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. However, sliders that cross over themselves are fine as long as the borders are clearly visible.
  2. Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider.
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria

[Suicide]
AR +1 ~ AR 9 is not enough for this difficulty. :/ FIXED
01:27:892 (11,12,13,14) - This is unplayable for me~ FIXED
01:27:892 (1) - NC there I guess. The Combo is too long. FIXED

[Insane]
00:33:464 (1,1) - The distance between those two is too high for their beat distance even for "Insane". FIXED
01:34:321 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Fix this, the current shape doesn't look nice. Maybe try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/648457 FIXED
The rest is fine I guess.


For some reason I didn't feel very comfortable with this map set even though your mapping style is different. Good luck with your map!
QAQ
THANK YOU :3!
yurunneram
Does this thing have an elipsey warning? I found the video pretty dizzying.

Easy
Oh wow, what a scary vid. Could've been a lower Slider V but dun think ya can change it now.
00:26:607 (1,1,1) - If you can try not to abuse NC but yea I see ur pattern so you may leave it there
00:33:464 (1,1,1) - ^
00:40:321 (1,1,1) - ^
01:00:892 (1,1,1) - ^
01:48:893 (1,1,1) - ^
02:58:311 (1,1,1) - ^
02:39:025 - Add note?

Normal
00:20:607 (1) - Spacing uneven.
00:23:821 (4,1,2) - ^
01:00:036 (1) - ^
03:16:954 (4) - ^

Hard
00:40:107 (3,4,1) - Should be on the same spot?
01:21:463 (3,4,5) - I would rather space it out...
01:46:214 (6) - Didn't really notice this note. Delete?

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~ <3
Topic Starter
On_WanWan

yurunneram wrote:

Does this thing have an elipsey warning? I found the video pretty dizzying.

Easy
Oh wow, what a scary vid. Could've been a lower Slider V but dun think ya can change it now.
00:26:607 (1,1,1) - If you can try not to abuse NC but yea I see ur pattern so you may leave it there yea I NC them because of the pattern and the sound,so i don't fixed it sorry

00:40:321 (1,1,1) - ^ ^
01:00:892 (1,1,1) - ^ ^
01:48:893 (1,1,1) - ^ ^
02:58:311 (1,1,1) - ^ ^
02:39:025 - Add note? FIXED

Normal
00:20:607 (1) - Spacing uneven. I follow to the distance snap so no fix sorry,,
00:23:821 (4,1,2) - ^ ^
01:00:036 (1) - ^ ^
03:16:954 (4) - ^ ^

Hard
00:40:107 (3,4,1) - Should be on the same spot? FIXED,I like it:3
01:21:463 (3,4,5) - I would rather space it out... no fix here sorry
01:46:214 (6) - Didn't really notice this note. Delete? I think there should have a note because of the song , I remapped this part for eaiser to notice this notes~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~ <3
Thank you for your modding :33
Onisakura
Hi~
from #modreqs

[General]

Song's start at 00:10:321 , really?) cut this. if you need few sec at the beginning - use Lead-in: Song setup/Audio/Music Track
Remove Epilepsy Warning in Easy
Inconsistency Kiai Time

Now / Correct
01:22:316 - 01:32:607 / 01:22:321 - 01:32:607

[Easy]

Unsnapped green sections:

SPOILER
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:321
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:035
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454

00:15:035 - 00:16:750 - 00:18:464 - 00:21:892 - 00:23:607 - and 00:25:321 - "circle must have" i think) look's better
00:28:321 (1) - edit start of the slider at 00:28:535
00:29:821 - add circle
00:30:249 (2) - cut at 00:30:249 - 00:31:535
00:32:178 (3) - move slider at 00:31:964 then, add circle at 00:33:249
00:35:178 (1) - edit start of the slider at 00:35:392
00:36:892 (2) - same thing, edit start of the slider at 00:36:678
00:38:821 (3,4) - weird part, maybe should change on 1/4 tick slider with 3 reverse then add slider 00:40:107 - 00:40:749 and 00:40:749 (5) - remove (if u think this's weird, just listen) but yea, this epic part will be remove 00:40:321 (1,2,3)
02:03:458 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is too boring
ok so if u like it or u will needed - say me and i'll repost this stuff more in detail, because i see same problem on the entire bitmap



[Normal]

Unsnapped green sections:
SPOILER
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:321
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:607
01:34:315 - snap to 01:34:321
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:035
02:23:169 - snap to 02:23:171
02:23:812 - snap to 02:23:814
02:58:309 - snap to 02:58:311
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454

02:03:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same thing, boring part
maybe it will be looks like this:


[Hard]

Unsnapped objects:
SPOILER
01:23:607 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:23:821 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:24:464 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:25:321 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:821 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:27:464 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:28:321 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:28:964 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:607 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:30:464 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:31:321 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:32:607 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:33:464 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:321 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:750 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:964 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:35:607 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:464 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:40:214 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:43:321 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:44:607 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:45:036 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:45:357 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:45:571 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:45:893 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:46:321 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:46:750 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:47:071 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:47:393 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:47:607 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:47:821 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:464 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:49:321 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).

Unsnapped green sections:
SPOILER
00:33:462 - snap to 00:33:464
00:34:212 - snap to 00:34:214
00:34:319 - snap to 00:34:321
00:40:319 - snap to 00:40:321
00:41:176 - snap to 00:41:178
00:54:032 - snap to 00:54:035
00:54:354 - snap to 00:54:357
00:54:461 - snap to 00:54:464
00:54:782 - snap to 00:54:785
00:54:889 - snap to 00:54:892
01:00:889 - snap to 01:00:892
01:01:746 - snap to 01:01:749
01:07:746 - snap to 01:07:749
01:08:603 - snap to 01:08:607
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:320
01:28:321 - snap to 01:28:319
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:605
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:034
01:36:089 - snap to 01:36:105
01:48:886 - snap to 01:48:891
01:49:207 - snap to 01:49:212
01:49:314 - snap to 01:49:319
01:49:636 - snap to 01:49:641
02:23:169 - snap to 02:23:171
02:23:812 - snap to 02:23:814
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596
03:26:914 - snap to 03:26:918
03:27:021 - snap to 03:27:025
03:27:343 - snap to 03:27:346
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454

01:39:464 (2) - NC
02:30:671 (2) - NC
02:03:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - well, you know know what's the problem :3 So I will not write this thing below

[Insane]

Unsnapped green sections:
SPOILER
00:33:462 - snap to 00:33:464
00:34:212 - snap to 00:34:214
00:34:319 - snap to 00:34:321
00:40:319 - snap to 00:40:321
00:41:176 - snap to 00:41:178
01:00:889 - snap to 01:00:892
01:01:746 - snap to 01:01:749
01:08:603 - snap to 01:08:607
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:321
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:607
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:035
01:49:207 - snap to 01:49:214
01:49:636 - snap to 01:49:642
02:23:169 - snap to 02:23:171
02:23:812 - snap to 02:23:814
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596
03:26:914 - snap to 03:26:918
03:27:021 - snap to 03:27:025
03:27:343 - snap to 03:27:346
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454

01:39:357 (2) - NC

[Suicide]

Unsnapped green sections:
SPOILER
00:33:462 - snap to 00:33:464
00:34:319 - snap to 00:34:321
00:40:319 - snap to 00:40:321
00:41:176 - snap to 00:41:178
01:00:889 - snap to 01:00:892
01:01:746 - snap to 01:01:749
01:07:746 - snap to 01:07:749
01:08:603 - snap to 01:08:607
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:321
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:607
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:035
01:48:886 - snap to 01:48:892
01:49:207 - snap to 01:49:214
01:49:314 - snap to 01:49:321
01:49:636 - snap to 01:49:642
02:23:169 - snap to 02:23:171
02:23:812 - snap to 02:23:814
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596
03:27:021 - snap to 03:27:025
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454

01:39:249 (2) - NC

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Change what you think is right :3 And Good luck ^_^
Topic Starter
On_WanWan

Onisakura wrote:

Hi~
from #modreqs

[General]

Song's start at 00:10:321 , really?) cut this. if you need few sec at the beginning - use Lead-in: Song setup/Audio/Music Track Start at 00:10:321 because I want to show the full video, so no fix~
Remove Epilepsy Warning in Easy FIXED

Inconsistency Kiai Time

Now / Correct
01:22:316 - 01:32:607 / 01:22:321 - 01:32:607 FIXED


[Easy]

Unsnapped green sections:

SPOILER
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:321 FIXED
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:035 ^
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025 ^
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596 ^
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454 ^

00:15:035 - 00:16:750 - 00:18:464 - 00:21:892 - 00:23:607 - and 00:25:321 - "circle must have" i think) look's better FIXED, there are some same problem so I FIXED them too:3
00:28:321 (1) - edit start of the slider at 00:28:535 I think It's too hard in Easy
00:29:821 - add circle^
00:30:249 (2) - cut at 00:30:249 - 00:31:535 ^
00:32:178 (3) - move slider at 00:31:964 then, add circle at 00:33:249 ^
00:35:178 (1) - edit start of the slider at 00:35:392^
00:36:892 (2) - same thing, edit start of the slider at 00:36:678 ^
00:38:821 (3,4) - weird part, maybe should change on 1/4 tick slider with 3 reverse then add slider 00:40:107 - 00:40:749 and 00:40:749 (5) - remove (if u think this's weird, just listen) but yea, this epic part will be remove 00:40:321 (1,2,3) I want to keep this epic part sorry,,
02:03:458 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is too boring I want to follow the pattern in Insane,Suicide OAO
ok so if u like it or u will needed - say me and i'll repost this stuff more in detail, because i see same problem on the entire bitmap



[Normal]

Unsnapped green sections:
SPOILER
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:321 FIXED
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:607 ^
01:34:315 - snap to 01:34:321 ^
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:035 ^
02:23:169 - snap to 02:23:171 ^
02:23:812 - snap to 02:23:814 ^
02:58:309 - snap to 02:58:311 ^
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025 ^
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596 ^
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454 ^

02:03:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same thing, boring part
maybe it will be looks like this: I want to follow the pattern in Insane,Suicide too QAQ


[Hard]

Unsnapped objects:
SPOILER
01:23:607 (4) - Unsnapped circle. FIXED
01:23:821 (5) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:24:464 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:25:321 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:26:821 (3) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:27:464 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:28:321 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:28:964 (4) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:29:607 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:30:464 (4) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:31:321 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:32:607 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:33:464 (2) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:34:321 (1) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:34:750 (3) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:34:964 (4) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:35:607 (6) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:39:464 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:40:214 (4) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:43:321 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:44:607 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:45:036 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:45:357 (3) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:45:571 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:45:893 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:46:321 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:46:750 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:47:071 (3) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:47:393 (4) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:47:607 (5) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:47:821 (6) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:48:464 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:49:321 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^

Unsnapped green sections:
SPOILER
00:33:462 - snap to 00:33:464 FIXED
00:34:212 - snap to 00:34:214 ^
00:34:319 - snap to 00:34:321 ^
00:40:319 - snap to 00:40:321 ^
00:41:176 - snap to 00:41:178 ^
00:54:032 - snap to 00:54:035 ^
00:54:354 - snap to 00:54:357 ^
00:54:461 - snap to 00:54:464 ^
00:54:782 - snap to 00:54:785 ^
00:54:889 - snap to 00:54:892 ^
01:00:889 - snap to 01:00:892 ^
01:01:746 - snap to 01:01:749 ^
01:07:746 - snap to 01:07:749 ^
01:08:603 - snap to 01:08:607 ^
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:320 ^
01:28:321 - snap to 01:28:319 ^
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:605 ^
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:034 ^
01:36:089 - snap to 01:36:105 ^
01:48:886 - snap to 01:48:891 ^
01:49:207 - snap to 01:49:212 ^
01:49:314 - snap to 01:49:319 ^
01:49:636 - snap to 01:49:641 ^
02:23:169 - snap to 02:23:171 ^
02:23:812 - snap to 02:23:814 ^
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025 ^
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596 ^
03:26:914 - snap to 03:26:918 ^
03:27:021 - snap to 03:27:025 ^
03:27:343 - snap to 03:27:346 ^
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454 ^

01:39:464 (2) - NC FIXED
02:30:671 (2) - NC FIXED
02:03:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - well, you know know what's the problem :3 So I will not write this thing below
I want to follow the pattern in Insane,Suicide too
[Insane]

Unsnapped green sections:
SPOILER
00:33:462 - snap to 00:33:464 FIXED
00:34:212 - snap to 00:34:214 ^
00:34:319 - snap to 00:34:321 ^
00:40:319 - snap to 00:40:321 ^
00:41:176 - snap to 00:41:178 ^
01:00:889 - snap to 01:00:892 ^
01:01:746 - snap to 01:01:749 ^
01:08:603 - snap to 01:08:607 ^
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:321 ^
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:607 ^
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:035 ^
01:49:207 - snap to 01:49:214 ^
01:49:636 - snap to 01:49:642 ^
02:23:169 - snap to 02:23:171 ^
02:23:812 - snap to 02:23:814 ^
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025 ^
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596 ^
03:26:914 - snap to 03:26:918 ^
03:27:021 - snap to 03:27:025 ^
03:27:343 - snap to 03:27:346 ^
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454 ^

01:39:357 (2) - NC FIXED

[Suicide]

Unsnapped green sections:
SPOILER
00:33:462 - snap to 00:33:464 FIXED
00:34:319 - snap to 00:34:321 ^
00:40:319 - snap to 00:40:321 ^
00:41:176 - snap to 00:41:178 ^
01:00:889 - snap to 01:00:892 ^
01:01:746 - snap to 01:01:749 ^
01:07:746 - snap to 01:07:749 ^
01:08:603 - snap to 01:08:607 ^
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:321 ^
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:607 ^
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:035 ^
01:48:886 - snap to 01:48:892 ^
01:49:207 - snap to 01:49:214 ^
01:49:314 - snap to 01:49:321 ^
01:49:636 - snap to 01:49:642 ^
02:23:169 - snap to 02:23:171 ^
02:23:812 - snap to 02:23:814 ^
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025 ^
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596 ^
03:27:021 - snap to 03:27:025 ^
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454 ^

01:39:249 (2) - NC FIXED

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Change what you think is right :3 And Good luck ^_^

Thank you >< I really forget the green sections :? :?
smallboat
嗨 您好~來幫你MOD:D
我從我們的Queue接你的case:)


Easy 音要對好@@"
SPOILER
00:27:464 (3) - 刪掉 加slider拉到00:27:892 這段NC
00:30:035 (2) - 移到00:29:821會比較好吧?尾端是在00:31:535
00:32:178 (3) - 移到00:31:964 整個移
00:35:178 (1) - 移到00:35:392 尾端00:36:035
00:36:892 (2) - 移到00:36:678 尾端00:37:749
00:38:178 (3) - 加note
這邊slider是在00:54:892 尾端00:55:964
這邊slider是在00:56:392 尾端00:58:321

01:02:178 (4) - 加note
01:03:892 (2) - ^
這邊slider是在01:04:321 尾端01:04:321
這邊slider是在01:06:249 尾端01:07:321
01:09:035 (1) - 加slider 尾端大白線 之前的note刪掉
01:09:892 (2) - 加note
01:12:035 (3) - 加slider 尾端01:12:464
01:13:321 (5) - 加note
01:15:464 (1) - 這邊也刪掉加slider吧 尾端01:15:892
01:16:749 (3) - 加note
01:36:035 (3) - 畢竟是Easy 不要離轉盤太遠唷..
02:31:743 (1) - 加slider 尾端02:32:171
02:36:454 (2) - 加note
02:34:739 (2,4) - 加note吧
02:41:597 (2,4) - ^
02:48:454 (2,4) - ^
02:50:168 (2) - 加note
02:52:953 (3) - NC
02:55:311 (2) - 加note
03:00:025 (3) - 太遠..
03:04:739 (2,4) - 加note
後面這些slider中間
應該都可放note吧? 都有拍子呢
就放下去吧 上面這些應該是不會超過3

Normal
SPOILER
唔 速度好多倍率..忽快忽慢..滑條容易滑過頭歐
可用Aimod檢查一下..建議調1~2種速度就好 Insane以上則不受此限..

要注意03:00:025 (5) - 太近 或把note刪掉把轉輪放這
其它相同的地方也是
Hard
SPOILER
建議平常timing速度倍率1.0就好(? 慢的話0.5~.75選一種 快的話1.1或1.3
這也是跟Normal一樣 好多種速度@@"

00:11:285 (5) - 這邊兩個note有一股看漏的感覺
而且跟背景顏色一致 看不太到圈圈 間距要定好
00:16:321 (5) - +note +clap
00:16:964 (8) - 間距 NC
00:28:535 (4,5,6) - 間距~疊太多了..測試時好容易100..
00:23:178 (5) - +note +clap
00:40:321 (1) - 好快!
01:00:892 (1) - ^
01:04:427 (3) - ^
01:07:750 (1) - ^ (怎麼看到大黑的感覺..XD
01:12:035 (1) - 很難抓準點01:12:464 (2) 的時機 改?
01:21:892 (6) - 這邊好容易落空@@
01:34:321 (1) - 排列再多點變化
01:55:635 (7) - 加note +clap
01:59:064 (6) - ^
02:17:385 (1) - 稍微移後面一點?
後面還ok 只是速度..
ok 先mod這些 斟酌使用 如有問題可PM給我 謝謝:)
Topic Starter
On_WanWan

smallboat wrote:

嗨 您好~來幫你MOD:D
我從我們的Queue接你的case:)


Easy 音要對好@@"
SPOILER
00:27:464 (3) - 刪掉 加slider拉到00:27:892 這段NC 想留著這部份哦
00:30:035 (2) - 移到00:29:821會比較好吧?尾端是在00:31:535 認為Easy來說比較難掌握 所以沒FIX SORRY,,
00:32:178 (3) - 移到00:31:964 整個移^
00:35:178 (1) - 移到00:35:392 尾端00:36:035 ^
00:36:892 (2) - 移到00:36:678 尾端00:37:749^
00:38:178 (3) - 加note FIXED
這邊slider是在00:54:892 尾端00:55:964 Easy比較難掌握
這邊slider是在00:56:392 尾端00:58:321 ^

01:02:178 (4) - 加noteFIXED
01:03:892 (2) - ^FIXED
這邊slider是在01:04:321 尾端01:04:321 Easy比較難掌握
這邊slider是在01:06:249 尾端01:07:321 ^
01:09:035 (1) - 加slider 尾端大白線 之前的note刪掉 FIXED
01:09:892 (2) - 加noteFIXED
01:12:035 (3) - 加slider 尾端01:12:464 FIXED
01:13:321 (5) - 加note FIXED
01:15:464 (1) - 這邊也刪掉加slider吧 尾端01:15:892 FIXED
01:16:749 (3) - 加note FIXED
01:36:035 (3) - 畢竟是Easy 不要離轉盤太遠唷.. 距離這還可以
02:31:743 (1) - 加slider 尾端02:32:171 加note FIXED
02:36:454 (2) - 加note NO FIXED
02:34:739 (2,4) - 加note吧 FIXED
02:41:597 (2,4) - ^ FIXED
02:48:454 (2,4) - ^ FIXED
02:50:168 (2) - 加note NO FIXED
02:52:953 (3) - NC NO FIXED
02:55:311 (2) - 加note FIXED
03:00:025 (3) - 太遠.. 這按distance snap的,,
03:04:739 (2,4) - 加note 本來有哦
後面這些slider中間
應該都可放note吧? 都有拍子呢
就放下去吧 上面這些應該是不會超過3 想弄個比較簡單的, 而且不想跟normal太相近

Normal
SPOILER
唔 速度好多倍率..忽快忽慢..滑條容易滑過頭歐
可用Aimod檢查一下..建議調1~2種速度就好 Insane以上則不受此限.. FIXED, 現在用0.75,1.0這2種~

要注意03:00:025 (5) - 太近 或把note刪掉把轉輪放這
其它相同的地方也是是指轉盤太接近嗎? FIXED
Hard
SPOILER
建議平常timing速度倍率1.0就好(? 慢的話0.5~.75選一種 快的話1.1或1.3
這也是跟Normal一樣 好多種速度@@" FIXED, 現在用0.75,1.0,1.1這3種~

00:11:285 (5) - 這邊兩個note有一股看漏的感覺
而且跟背景顏色一致 看不太到圈圈 間距要定好 FIXED
00:16:321 (5) - +note +clap NO FIXED
00:16:964 (8) - 間距 NC FIXED
00:28:535 (4,5,6) - 間距~疊太多了..測試時好容易100.. FIXED
00:23:178 (5) - +note +clap NO FIXED
00:40:321 (1) - 好快! FIXED
01:00:892 (1) - ^ 1.10還好還好,,
01:04:427 (3) - ^ 這沒有變速 速度還可以吧
01:07:750 (1) - ^ (怎麼看到大黑的感覺..XD FIXED 之前沒發現這用了1.5...
01:12:035 (1) - 很難抓準點01:12:464 (2) 的時機 改? FIXED
01:21:892 (6) - 這邊好容易落空@@ FIXED
01:34:321 (1) - 排列再多點變化 FIXED
01:55:635 (7) - 加note +clap NO FIXED
01:59:064 (6) - ^ NO FIXED
02:17:385 (1) - 稍微移後面一點? FIXED
後面還ok 只是速度.. 忘了變速過份多了嘿..
ok 先mod這些 斟酌使用 如有問題可PM給我 謝謝:)
感謝你的mod哦 :oops:
wonders
先说几句对图的看法,mod这两天给上。
SV偏高,加上音乐本身的段落性很强,导致整张图连贯性不佳,好像一片一片的。
有不少巧思比如 01:10:267- 01:11:767,但不成体系。如果更注意些细节还有整张图的谋篇布局会更好一些。本人比较喜欢01:41:124- 01:53:975 这一段。比较奇怪的是曲子里标志性的那一段旋律你都没有mapping?
个人比较喜欢的一张280,http://osu.ppy.sh/b/155777

自以为是的做了一些评论,希望你不要生气<(_ _)>
happy623
有空我來了w 神遲到(喂
上次bpm測錯歌對不起!!m(_ _)m
這藍色代表強烈建議/unrankable

我能力範圍內只能mod easy跟normal了Q Q 對不起

[General]
換了翻唱, Artist換做Mi-chan & Sekihan (みーちゃん & 赤飯)
把MachigeritaP, Megpoid Gumi 放在Tags
Tags 刪去vocaloid, 因為Source已經出現了 :)
hard,insane,suicide的開始點為00:01:696 , 而easy跟normal的是00:05:125 ,請把它們一致w
sliders可以再扭圓滑一點

[Easy]
個人覺得SV可以再低點, 不然新手玩不了w
還有一些unsnapped的notes和sliders
01:35:982 (4) - NC
01:54:832 (1) 至 02:08:545 (1) Easy來說基本上不能出現ds和sv轉換
02:27:400 (1) - remove NC
02:28:257 (2) - NC
02:29:114 (1) - remove NC

[Normal]
請開住distance snap重排一下 :?
normal來說有點太難了Q_Q
01:08:982 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - normal來說有點難讀w

map的節奏感是有的w 可以參考一下ranked map的easy跟normal
加油 8-) 有問題可以PM/In game me w :)
Hellzero
Hi from ♥Moe Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[General]
Revome "VOCALOID" from tags
Audio Lead-In must be minimum of 2000 ms so add 500ms in every diffs except "easy"
Add in "easy" EpilepsyWarning

[Easy]
02:51:398 - unsnapped kiai section
01:41:124 - remove useless green section
03:17:973 - unsnapped green section
Also slider velocity too fast for "Easy" all the more so 280BPM
00:08:125 (4,1) - On "Easy" you should use distance snap. Jumps on easily diff unacceptable
00:08:553 (1,2,3) - Use more pretty shape (With new slider shape system this very easy)
00:29:982 (4) - try avoid overlap. Particularly overlap "reverse-arrow"
[Normal]
00:21:624 (3) - avoid double reverse-slider. It's hard to read in particular for new players.
00:21:624 (3,1) - Also this spacing with double reverse-slider very confuse players
00:28:482 (3) - avoid double reverse-slider
01:09:410 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - omg, even I can't to read it D: Too many overlap
01:10:267 (1) - Also why this another spaning?
03:06:829 (1) - unsnapped slider end
Remember "Easy" and "Normal" diffs make for new and low-skills players so they should be easy to read.
[Hard]
01:13:696 - remove useless red section
01:09:410 (3,4,5) - stack them
01:11:981 (1,2) - It absolutely not sounds >.< Use another pattern For examle just slider on 1/1 beat
[Insane]
00:45:410 (1) - spinner very short
00:59:125 (1,2,3,4) - here should be 1/2 but not 1/4
01:11:982 (1,2) - Yeah, it's not sounds. Use another pattern
01:13:267 (6) - Before you use 1/4 and it sounds better ( 00:04:696 (5) - )
01:26:553 (5) - add NC
01:27:410 (3) - Move to centre ( x: 256 y:325 )
01:43:260 (6,7) - this overlap confuse :<
01:46:261 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:43:475 (7,1,2,3,1) - these anti-jumps very hard to play.
02:07:689 (1,2,3,4) - last jumps 4.0x I know it's "insane" but it really many and big jumps
02:15:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1st) it's 1/6 2nd) it's suddenly and hart to catch so better use reverse-slider
02:50:543 (5) - NC
[Suicide]
00:17:982 (1,2) - Yeah, it's not sounds. Use another pattern
01:11:982 (1,2) - ^
01:40:267 (1,2) - ^
01:41:118 (3) - NC
02:15:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - look insane
00:59:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 1/2
Need many works. Maybe remap Easy with lower slider velocity. Anyway good luck!
happy30
Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replays

Easy
A lot of sliders could be tidied up a bit. some are not really symmetrial.
Also, the sliders feel a bit too fast for me. the pacing of the whole map is a bit weird because of that.
there are also some ugly overlaps which should be easy to be taken care of, examples are 00:13:696 (3) - (too close to slidertrack of (1)) and 00:29:982 (4) -

Normal
Higher AR please
some patterns were hard to read, i also spotted some distance snap errors, please recheck the spacing.
you have to watch out with the repeat sliders, it's impossible to see how many repeats some sliders have which caused me some confuseness at some parts in the map.
I would suggest you to ask a few more people to mod your map.

Hard
this is an insane not a hard :O. the difficulty curve from normal to this is very steep.
the sliders are nice, a bit random though D:.
there are 2 diffs harder than this? you kidding me :o
let's play..

Insane
this diff is badly overmapped, sorry D:
the 1/8 repeat sliders didn't fit in the whole map, I think you tried to map this harder than [Hard]
It's still very similar to hard but with a higher AR, even faster x_x sliders and weird 1/8 repeats.
Just Hard would have been fine as the last difficutly, I think you tried a bit too much on this one.
Also on the slow part, watch out that you don't use hidden sliders

Suicide
basically everything I said for Insane. Hard should have been Insane and Insane and Suicide shouldnt exist imo.
wonders
前面给过KD就不要再给了~
[Suicide]
00:07:375 这个感觉和1靠的太近了,把1往下移一些?
00:20:982 (2,3,4) 摆的太随便了。很难接
00:52:267 感觉摆到左半区比较好
01:15:303 这个往下来点?不要叠起来感觉跟好一点
01:20:446 不顺手
01:24:839 x:256 y:144?
01:34:160 不顺手
02:24:936 视野挡的比较厉害
02:30:400 NC
02:53:007 NC
03:01:686 叠在上一个note下面比较好
03:06:936 有卡顿的感觉,add a note?
03:13:257 不要摆那,太不顺手了

[Insane]
00:20:232 不要遮挡,放出来
01:11:017 NC
01:14:767 这个还是做前一个的blanket好看点
01:15:192 (1,2) 换成slider
01:43:260- 01:44:546 nice
02:26:757 slider的完全重叠式是unrank的
03:01:579 间距略大
03:08:971 左边来点,离1太近了
03:09:829 下面去点

[Hard]
间距太大,SV过高,过难,建议重做

[Normal]
AR+2
01:09:410- 01:11:533 读图太难了
02:46:257- 02:47:543 偷懒了?

[Easy]
没啥大问题,如果摆的更规整一点的话会好看一点。
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