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Mitsuneko

Joined July 2011

Mitsuneko 2012-03-27T15:53:40+00:00

Here's my mod

Easy

00:12:199(1) Remove NC
00:35:243(1) ^
00:36:982(2) NC
00:50:025(1) Remove NC
00:52:634(2) NC
01:23:069(3) Move this slider to 01:23:504 and take out that repeat. I think it sounds better.
01:38:286(3) (Nazi) Align with 3, like this-

SPOILER

02:03:504(1) Spacing

Normal

AR 4
00:15:243(x) Add note?
00:17:417(2) Spacing
00:19:156(3) ^
00:20:895(4) ^
00:22:634(1) ^
00:24:373(2) ^
You know what, to avoid a bunch of spacing mod, there's a lot of spacing that's off,but I guess it ends at 00:28:721

I guess Hard and Insane are ok. GL~

[Luxord]

503 posts

Joined August 2011

[Luxord] 2012-04-04T14:17:42+00:00

Hello! Mod request from My Queue

Insane
00:55:569 - Go the slider to the next line and put a 2nd circle between
01:37:743 - use 1/8 and put circle to blue, yellow, white line after the slider[01:37:199 (7)](suggestion)

Hard
Perfect!

Normal
01:19:156 (6) - Extend this slider by 1 line in 1/2
02:34:373 - Move this slider to [02:34:156] and add a circle at [02:34:808]

Easy
Perfect!

Good luck with your map! Deserves rank in my opinion :3 Im also gonna shoot a star :3

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2012-04-30T14:47:25+00:00

Holy Soup it's ENS!!!

[General]
* Add "kirin" into tags, because he is arrange of this song

[Easy]
01:23:069 (3) - Clap for this slider?

[Normal]
* AR +1? Your current approach rate seems bit slow

00:15:243 - Add note here? It feels empty for me
01:19:156 (6) - Add 1 repeating slider? You seems forgot it
02:21:764 (2) - The head slider is almost touch HP Bar (just a warning)

[Hard]
00:17:417 (2) - Make a same slider as 00:15:678 (1) for better rhythm
01:19:156 (1) - Extend this slider to red tick for following vocal
01:25:243 (1) - Whistle are useless here

[Insane]
00:34:699 (5,6) - Remove (5) and move (6) to blue tick?

Bye now

Frostmourne

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3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2012-06-02T01:40:55+00:00

Hi , from my queue

Easy
00:41:764 (2) - tiny grid is always good for me though , I think moving to x:124 y:208 is better. It makes more balancing the distance between (1) and (1) (the current is (2) touched (1) looks not clear)
01:06:112 (1) - spacing from last note , I'm not sure it's fine or not. 0.68?
02:24:373 (1) - move tail 1 grid left (tiny), the reason is still same , more balancing and good looking , I compare with 02:25:243 (2,3) -

Normal
00:29:156 (4) - 1 grid right (small) , current spacing is not good

Hard
01:11:330 (1) - finish at the start, I think you forgot cuz you add at 01:21:764 (1) - , for consistency..

Insane
Why don't be "Lunatic :<"
01:18:721 (1) - personally , end this note with volume 30% makes it better (I didn't mention in other diff , fix other diff if you choose to fix in this diff)
01:21:764 (4) - new combo ? looks good to new combo for me
02:17:851 (2) - add whistle at the end
02:18:504 (3) - add whistle at the start and remove clap (or not) these 2 whistle combine very well imo , like this 02:26:112 (1,2) -

Nice mapset ! as always , need to shoot star

Good luck for ranking !

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

hoLysoup 2012-06-02T02:58:45+00:00

>Frostmourne
Thanks! all done~

Wreath

435 posts

Joined February 2012

Wreath 2012-08-03T11:17:57+00:00

sorry for late
cuz i has overseas travel

hi, hoLysoup

thx for request

[General]

not same Kiai Time

Lunatic
Starts on 02:06:982 ends on 02:20:460

Other diffs
Starts on 02:06:982 ends on 02:20:786

[Lunatic]

00:39:156 (1,2,3) - distance is not so good, many ppl cant first play this. i hope fix this

[Hard]

02:18:069 - add note
02:31:982 - ^

[Normal]

Fine

[Easy]

Nothing to say

really good map

star~☆
good luck

Lizbeth

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2008

Lizbeth 2012-08-10T02:30:25+00:00

Hi~

02:06:547 - SB load goes over 5 here, you have to lighten it to avoid that.

[Lunatic]
00:39:156 (1,2,3) - This threw me off while playing, I think you should make it more readable, maybe swapping these two 00:39:482 (2,3) -

[Hard]
02:17:851 (2) - I think you should unstack from slider end, was confusing to play, but this is just a suggestion. Same for the others like this.

[Easy]
I think you should use more single notes.

That's all for now, lovely mapset.

Kawayi Rika

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3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-08-21T00:32:02+00:00

Hi ~ hoLysoup ~

Mod time for my Random Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lunatic]

00:26:764 (5) - End to 00:27:199 and Add a circle on 00:27:417.
02:20:786 - Change kiai time end point to here,same as other diff.

[Hard]

AR+1 much better with play.

That's all ~ Pretty nice map and song ~ good job ~!

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

hoLysoup 2013-03-05T03:15:55+00:00

Wreath

Wreath wrote:

sorry for late
cuz i has overseas travel
:D! US no hou ga ii?? :>!
hi, hoLysoup
thx for request

[General]
not same Kiai Time

Lunatic
Starts on 02:06:982 ends on 02:20:460

Other diffs
Starts on 02:06:982 ends on 02:20:786
[Lunatic]
00:39:156 (1,2,3) - distance is not so good, many ppl cant first play this. i hope fix this
[Hard]
02:18:069 - add note
02:31:982 - ^
[Normal]
Fine
[Easy]
Nothing to say
really good map
star~☆
good luck

fixed some~
Thanks Wreath!!

Lizbeth

Lizbeth wrote:
Hi~

02:06:547 - SB load goes over 5 here, you have to lighten it to avoid that. removed SB HEHEH!

[Lunatic]
00:39:156 (1,2,3) - This threw me off while playing, I think you should make it more readable, maybe swapping these two 00:39:482 (2,3) -
I think this is actually pretty fine
[Hard]
02:17:851 (2) - I think you should unstack from slider end, was confusing to play, but this is just a suggestion. Same for the others like this.
this one too!
[Easy]
I think you should use more single notes.
meh.. don't really feel the difference here
That's all for now, lovely mapset.

Thanks!!

Rika<3

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ hoLysoup ~

Mod time for my Random Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lunatic]

00:26:764 (5) - End to 00:27:199 and Add a circle on 00:27:417.
02:20:786 - Change kiai time end point to here,same as other diff.

[Hard]

AR+1 much better with play.

That's all ~ Pretty nice map and song ~ good job ~!

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

All fixed! :>

Roddie

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Joined June 2009

Roddie 2013-03-08T00:45:51+00:00

General

I believe the song's title is incorrect. It should be Oueisaien, not Quei Saien. Here'e proof.

Easy

01:32:199-Consider adding a new combo here. The way I see it, a new combo here seems fitting enough. If you do that, remove new combo from the next slider.
01:36:112-Add a new combo here perhaps?
01:53:069 (1)-Forgot to add a finish?
02:04:373 (2)-On Easy difficulties, it's not a good idea to have this note be stacked. It would be best to move this object to a different spot.
02:13:938 (1)-Forgot to add a finish?

Normal

01:10:895 (3)-Forgot to add a finish on the end, huh?
01:22:199-It doesn't hurt to add a new combo here, right?
01:53:069 (1)-It seems that you forgot to add a finish here too, correct?
02:13:938 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning?
02:27:851 (1)-^?

Hard

01:21:330-Too soon to have a new combo here, don't you think? It would be best to remove it.

Lunatic

Seems fine enough with me.

Catch me in-game. We'll discuss more about your map.

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

hoLysoup 2013-03-19T18:18:07+00:00

Roddie wrote:
General
I believe the song's title is incorrect. It should be Oueisaien, not Quei Saien. Here'e proof.
fixed~
Easy
all fixed~
Normal
all fixed~

Hard
01:21:330-Too soon to have a new combo here, don't you think? It would be best to remove it.
This I didn't do because I want the NC to distinguish between the kick slider

Seems fine enough with me.

Catch me in-game. We'll discuss more about your map.

Thanks! :>!

Roddie

osu! Alumni

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Joined June 2009

Roddie 2013-03-19T18:24:21+00:00

During in-game chat, one small change is made over Lunatic, epilepsy warning removed, and the combo colors were rearranged due to one of them blending in with kiai time

And that's it. Overall, your map looks good to me. So... bubbled!

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2013-03-19T19:15:30+00:00

Recheck for old request ~ Nice job ~

Enjoy your moe chata <3