1. Blue Easy (0,72 stars, 48 notes)
2. Red Hard (4,36 stars, 313 notes)
3. Yellow Normal (3,19 stars, 176 notes)

1. This is also from SSBB! I love this song. ♥
2. If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to PM me on the forum or in-game!

1. Use tick 1. Set this in the Timing tab.
2. AR+1 via Song Setup.
3. Same comment with distance snapping and sliders.

1. The same comment with distance snapping in Hard goes with this diff.
2. I'd also like to link this guide to you, it helps with slider construction immensely. If not, just use the slider assistance tool by using three points in your slider!
3. The break also doesn't match Hard (which you should match, but it's not required!)

1. 00:07:861 (1,2,3,4,5) - Did you use distance snap for this? 1,2 is awfully close to each other while 3,4,5 is pretty spaced out. It's confusing to hit from first play. Try re-arranging with the snap on.
2. 00:09:809 (6,7,8) - Instead of having these two sliders go towards each other, you could have 7 hit in parallel with 6, or alternatively, just have it away from 7 in general so it doesn't mask up 8. (it's also very cluttery and an eyesore to look at/play)
3. 00:14:095 (3,4,5,6,7) - Don't keep these the same spacing as the previous combos, they're spaced out on the timeline, therefore they should be on the grid as well.
4. 00:19:744 (6) - Perhaps place this on the left side of 5,7; instead of on the right. The hitburst from the slider masks this a little.
5. You get what I mean by distance snap, right? Use it. It makes your maps 5x better, even if it's your first map! Let me know if you decide to follow this or not. Until then, I'll leave it like this.

leon1341414 wrote:

Hello~
Here is my M4M mod.
And this is my first mod , it all suggestion.

General

You need to set the preview Time , I suggest 00:57:731


Blue Easy

Circle Size-1
AR+1


Yellow Normal

Spacing distance can be more far.
00:11:368 (6,7) - You can try to move right , it will look more comfortably.
00:33:576 - add a note here.
00:33:965 - ^
(I suggest you can set a slider from 00:33:576 to 00:33:965)
00:44:874 - (1,2) Slider are too straight , try to make them curved.
00:51:692 - slider finsh at 00:52:861 , and add a note at 00:53:056 and 00:53:251
(I suggest you can set a slider from 00:53:056 to 00:53:640)
00:58:511 - add a note here.
01:22:082 - 01:47:212 Break time seen too long.
01:58:316 - add a note here.
02:31:627 - ^
02:35:329 (2) - you can start this slider at 02:35:524 and add a note here.


Red Hard

Circle Size-1 will seens more comfortably.
00:17:991 - add a note here.
01:00:653(1) - delete nc.
01:01:238(2) - add nc.
02:19:160 - add a note.

That's all I can suggest.

CDFA wrote:

Overall:
Since this is from brawl, maybe put "Super Smash Brothers Brawl Bros SSBB" in the tags?
The BG is not 4:3, so it looks stretched. Use This one or This one, or find another one that is 1024x768?
Hitsounds should stay consistent. I suggest a whistle on counts 2 and 4 owo
02:48:381 - I'm on a hunch that the BPM changes around here somewhere
End the diffs at the same time!

Hard:
00:12:342 (4) - The way this note comes after the slider is awkward for players, and doesn't look good. Have it follow the natural flow of the slider (aka going to the right.)
00:14:874 (4) - Move this elsewhere so it doesn't overlap with (3)
00:17:991 (3,4,5) - Keep consistant distance spacing so this doesn't look so cramped
00:19:939 (8) - Move this so it's not overlapping (6). It's slightly hidden and plays awkwardly
00:29:485 (11) - NC (It's hard since the way you mapped this, it doesn't directly follow the lyrics, so the place where I would have NCed is during this slider.)
00:40:589 (4) - This sounds and looks better as a longer sliders without as many repeats
00:46:433 (1) - I'm never a fan of two spinners in a row. Maybe make it a long slider, and at the second "ah", put a repeat
00:51:692 (7) - Make this a regular ) curve.
00:53:251 (8) - Doesn't fit with the song
01:08:251 (6) - If you're going to have this slider, either stack it under (4)'s end (which I wouldn't reccoment personally, but it fits with the style of the previous section), or move 5 below (4)'s end so 6 can just flow in there.
01:15:653 (9) - NC
01:28:121 (1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2) - Delete these notes. There's nothing wrong, but to go with the full musical phrase, it'd be better to just leave these as part of the break.
01:40:589 (6) - NC
01:52:277 (8) - Make this slider more interesting
02:51:498 (1) - Remove NC

Normal:
Biggest issue I have with this is that this seems way too similar to Hard.
00:29:679 (3,4,5) - Umbelievable amounts of confusing
00:33:576 (7,8,9,10) - ^. Also, NC on 7
00:53:056 (5) - Move back to the white tick
00:53:835 (6,7,8) - ^
01:03:965 (3,4,5) - Make it so these don't overlap

Easy:
Seems really easy and boring compared to normal. Which means make this slightly more interesting and tone down normal by a lot.
Also, just as a general thing, for most sliders with repeats, make them longer with less repeats
SV can afford to go up a bit.

Cool.

1. it is very recommended to use 4:3 resolution for the BG, current is 960 x 768 and moreover the quality isn't that good. Perhaps you can use this?
2. Please use grid size: small (Press G) or don't use grid! lol I often use grid only for stacking
3. Reference for slider and pattern
4. If you want to make curved slider then please only use 3 anchor point it would gives more curved shape and neat slider (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645668)
5. This song still haven't Kiai Time yet, please set it for every diff

1. This is Hard, and the hardest diff. Don't be afraid to put some jumps here, overlap notes will make the flow feels so bad (exception for easy/normal diff lol)
2. 00:10:199 - stack it correctly (move to x:268 y:112)
3. 00:11:368 - Remove this NC, because you've already put that in 00:13:316
4. 00:22:277 - ^ well I think you're following the vocal. but at least if you don't have any reason please keep 1 NC for 1 stanza
5. 01:16:822 (3) - make like this instead? http://puu.sh/2ekj2
6. 01:19:550 (9) - I think you can NC here
7. 01:37:082 (1) - It would be nice if you can make another pattern than only leave it like this. IMO reverse slider works best for 1/4 but this song has slow BPM so 1/4 still not fit too much. How about a little stream? it would be more fun
8. 02:02:796 (1) - Removes NC and move it to 02:05:913
9. 02:17:991 (1) - Removes NC and move it to 02:18:770
10. 02:21:887 (10) - lol too long. please add NC here
11. 02:37:472 - start from here you can hear what I mean... please put whistle on (1) (3) (4) (5) and (6) and after that you put whistle for the rest objects (until here 02:47:796)
12. - Move it to here and extend the slider by 1 reverse (you'll need to change the beatsnap divisor to 1/8 first)

1. I think the way you put notes in this diff are more neat instead the Red Hard
2. 00:22:472 (2,3) - I don't recommend to put these notes like this, you can make it into slider for a better flow. since (3) are placed in blue tick it would be a little hard I think
3. 01:07:082 (8) - Put NC here
4. 01:12:147 (1) - Removes NC
5. 01:51:498 (6) - put Finish at the slider's tail

1. 00:09:809 (3) - If it possible, please don't make reverse slider more than 2 in Easiest diff, I think most of amateurs will be confused
2. 00:12:537 (4) - Finish is more fit than clap?
3. 00:14:095 (3) - same like 00:09:809 (3)
4. 00:21:887 (3) - ^
5. 01:14:874 (4) - put finish