YO!
[Easy]
(*) 00:29:518 (1) - I recommend putting finish instead of a clap as the instrumental is heard that BOOOM!
(*) 00:34:318 (1) - go back to where you've put a note like, can be a bit boring for the player
(*) 00:42:718 (3) -
Check the distance snap (*) 00:43:918 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is very boring you should try to move the player a little more
SPOILERyou could try something like this
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Distance snap D:! (*) 01:07:918 (1) -
^ U.U(*) 01:10:318 (1,2) -
^ you really do not respect the distance? (*) 01:12:718 (1,2,1,2) -
NO NO NO! ^(*) 01:39:118 (1) - NC Combo Here :3!
(*) 01:42:118 (2) -
Distance :I! this could really confuse players(*) 01:44:518 (2) -
^ (*) 02:04:318 (1) - This slider is too confusing for new players you could shorten perhaps reverse in 2 sliders or two circles
[Normal]
in easy and normal difficulties recommend putting distance snap enabled
Average distance spacing of 0.8(*) 00:17:518 (1) - Finish in spinner sounds about right
(*) 00:29:518 (1) - Finish Here
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(*) 00:31:918 (1) - ^
(*) 00:31:918 (1) -
erhh! ._. checks the distance!(*) 00:33:718 (4,5,1)
^(*) 00:32:818 (2) - very difficult for a normal, two cicles could put there instead of a slider revers confusing
(*) 00:34:318 (1) - finish, at the tip of the slider
(*) 00:36:718 (1) - ^
(*) 00:39:118 (1) - ^
you need to check the distance fine adjustment because they are too many and that is unranked(*) 00:52:018 (2) - this is terribly difficult for a normal, why not try this:
(*) 00:53:518 (1) - this slider its ugly why not try other ways?
look here :3!
Making Delicious Sliders: A Guide.(*) 00:55:918 (6) - many here could reverse too confusing to new player, you try this:
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You should also do more sliders are good for normal (*) 01:01:318 (1,2) - but this is a suggestion to make it look a little nicer you could do this with these two sliders
(*) 01:08:818 (1) -
Check Check the distance please Please T.T this is unranked if you handle the snap distance always activated(*) 01:11:818 (2,3,4,5) -
^(*) 01:10:318 (3,1,2,3,4,5) -
I like these sounds very good (*) 01:20:518 (1) - Clap
(*) 01:21:118 (3,4) - Remove Claps sound very bad x.x
(*) 01:21:418 (4) - clap at the end of the slider :3
(*) 01:34:318 (1) - a slider so long for a normal D: , You could do this
and you can do these forms:
(*) 01:39:118 (1) - Finish at the beginning of the slider
(*) 01:53:518 (1) - ^
(*) 02:03:118 (1,1) -
NO NO NO this is very bad As I mentioned before this is confusing for new players[Hard]
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I feel that all this break is unnecessary difficulties could add more notes in this space(*) 01:17:518 (3) - finish on the head slider, and at the end clap
(*) 01:20:518 (2) - removed at the end of the slider clap sounds very bad
(*) 01:19:918 (1) - Finish
(*) 01:22:318 (1) - ^
(*) 01:24:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
Ohhh I Like that :3But you could do differently, for example this:
(*) 01:25:618 (7) - NC here
(*) 01:25:768 (1) - Remove NC
Nice Song :3! Strive a little more on your map and soon you'll see ranked Good Lucky~