Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ popner ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Remove unused OSB file. fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:20:175 (2) - Stack on 00:21:234 (6) - end point,looks much better. ok
2. 00:45:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest you increase spacing and change to jump parttern. ok, change to a new pattern here
3. 00:48:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. 00:21:234 (4) - Flip slider,make more better blanket(fixed next note spacing),like this. ok, thx for code
   
   Screenshot and Code

   
   

   284,40,21234,2,0,P|304:76|343:98,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   204,40,21763,2,0,P|224:112|288:164,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   368,168,22293,2,0,P|448:156,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   452,236,22646,6,0,P|432:316,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

[Normal]

1. 00:42:410 (6) - Add new combo,it's a bit long IMO. orz miss a NC here, fixed
2. 00:45:234 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I highlight suggest don't overlapping these circle,hard to read for beginner. tried to use 1/2 of normal spacing but find the pattern is more like to 1/1 beats

OK ~ That's all ~ Really nice flow map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

These slider ends are snapped ~ another bug ~!

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Oh.. Bubbled :/. Well, I'll mod it anyways because this map is in my queue. Sorry for the delay popner.

[General:]

• 01:21:940 (T) - The Spinner end is really muted at the end, when I can already listen a sound at the end of it. If I were you I'd remove this last Inherited timing point, ending the Spinner with 10% in the Volume. ok
• A little opinion.. Why don't you mix the hitsounds in your difficulties? You can make great patterns with them in all the difficulties.. This 'Just Whistle' in Normal and this 'just Clap' in Hard and Insane make the difficulty a bit boring. Give it a try please, it is a short song, you won't have to add a lot of hitsounds anyways. (I read your why you don't added Claps in Normal, but sincerely I prefer some 'empty claps' instead of all 'empty claps' in the map) From the very beginning I decided the hitsounds set, based on which I put the patterns. So if I changed this, I need to change some patterns too

[Normal:]

• With the new update with the AiMod we can check all the snap.. In this case you have some unsnapped slider ends in this diff. by just 1ms.. but as far as I know all the snapping mistakes are unrankable so let's fix that before the rank. fixed, thanks for your code

Unsnapped Slider ends in:

1. 00:58:645 (3) -
2. 01:03:586 (2) -
3. 01:04:998 (4) -
4. 01:09:939 (3) -
5. 01:10:645 (4) -
6. 01:15:586 (4) -

• 00:24:410 (2,3): In a 'non-stacked patterns map' this Stacked object doesn't flow that good. Would be better if you unstack these Notes moving x:500 y:204 or doing another thing that you want ok, moved a little
• 00:45:234 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4): I do agree with Rika in this point. This can cause confusion in New Players since it is the easiest diff in the mapset, A better idea (in my opinion obviously) is doing the same that you did at the beginning of the map using a (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) pattern instead with 0.8x spacing between the Notes ok

[Insane:]

• 00:26:881 (5,6,7): Reversed patterns are not the best option if you want to base your mapping in the flow.. Try doing something like this: stack (6) on 00:27:410 (8), should flows better now

SPOILER

That's about it for now..
In general it is a well constructed map.. I don't want to nazing you anyways xD.
Call me back then!

1. Remove Vocaloid from source

1. 00:00:587 (2) - how about to use NC like Hard diff here?
2. 00:16:646 (1) - End slider on downbeat is felt weird here... compared with, 00:22:646 (1) - is much better
3. 00:46:293 - the blank here is sudden a bit... unexpected
4. 00:49:822 (7) - also suggest to move it to next red tick
5. 01:18:410 (1,2,3,4,5) - i prefer increasing-spacing overlap jump here to reducing-spacing because the tune here is higher
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:16:646 (5) - same as Insane, end slider on downbeat is not a good choice imo

1. 00:02:881 (5) - NC here or the combo is too long
2. 00:08:528 (5) - ^
3. 00:53:705 (5) - ^

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ random bubble check~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Remove Vocaloid from source fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:00:587 (2) - how about to use NC like Hard diff here? the pattern is different here, so i dont want to add NC for this
2. 00:16:646 (1) - End slider on downbeat is felt weird here... compared with, 00:22:646 (1) - is much better changed the pattern, also flows better imo
3. 00:46:293 - the blank here is sudden a bit... unexpected i'm following the piano? here, by using note and slider head
4. 00:49:822 (7) - also suggest to move it to next red tick ^
5. 01:18:410 (1,2,3,4,5) - i prefer increasing-spacing overlap jump here to reducing-spacing because the tune here is higher applied
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:16:646 (5) - same as Insane, end slider on downbeat is not a good choice imo there is a 1/1 blank after this, so I think it is fine

[Normal]

1. 00:02:881 (5) - NC here or the combo is too long 8 is not so long..so i want to keep consistency of NCs
2. 00:08:528 (5) - ^
3. 00:53:705 (5) - ^