Hello~
[Hard]
No kiai?
00:30:223 (1) - make the stack look better in game play
01:17:151 (3) - move this slider down so it doesn't overlap with the end of the previous one, because looks kinda careless
01:52:508 (1,2,3,4) - the jump from 1 to 2 doesn't make sense to me, I think these sliders should have same spacing in between
02:53:150 (5) - unpredictable jump here, a new combo will help a lot to make it more readable, if not, give more spacing to 5,6,7
02:59:150 (3) - a bit off-screen (I noticed when we were playing it earlier, looked more off-screen than now tho)
03:02:793 (5,6) - this was confusing, I thought they were at 1/4, mainly because notes in the previous and the next combo are at 1/4 and the spacing is the same as those, is not unrankable BUT threw me off 3 times
Nice~~
[Marcin's Insane]
No kiai?
00:05:363 (1,2,3) - I think the song suggest more a jumpy combo than anti-jump here (hey my opinion there, cuz I would of use jumps on that combo)
00:12:434 (5,6) - not a good way to use anti-jumps, that was very unpredictable, you have notes at 1/4 with more spacing that those in the same combo, and like above, music suggest jumps here rather than anti-jump
00:19:184 (5) - wrong spacing, should be spaced like 00:18:434 (2,3,4) -
00:29:791 (4,5) - same as 00:12:434 (5,6) -
02:01:720 (4) - wrong spacing
ok a general suggestion, check on maps that use the anti-jump technique and analyze them, see how were used and where, also see other players playing your map, see in which points they get confused, etc. so you can improve it. I think you need to work a bit more on your diff, but apart from the anti-jumps and those little wrong spacing is fine for me
[Ultimate's Remix]
00:04:071 (5) - I wasn't expecting a note here, only a note at 00:04:071 - works way better, I kinda like keeping it simple at the start of the map, then you can make it more complicated
00:28:928 (1,2,1,2) - If these new combos are for making the patter more readable I think the spacing is readable enough, also you made it kinda like that before without the new combos, right here 00:18:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - and here 00:53:999 (1,2,3,4) -
01:48:857 - maybe add note here? Feels like it need one, I really can't play that part but listening to it, it does feels like it
02:16:285 (1) - I would prefer if this note is in jump too (like the first notes of the previous combos), to not stop the jumpy flow, up to you tho, is just my taste
stop the kiai at the end of the map, ppl will tell you to do so
Crazy style, it fits the song, nice.
[Shagstep]
no kiai?
03:03:971 - feels like is missing a note here 03:03:971 - maybe rearranges the combo so you can add it, like here 02:52:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - , 02:56:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - , 02:59:793 (1,2,3,4,5) - and here 03:06:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
Nice diff ^^
[Roxas' Normal]
01:18:223 (1) - add a reverse? I kinda was expecting that
Good Normal diff, simple but entertained.
[Teara's Easy]
checked this diff quickly, only thing I found
02:17:150 (1) - I see ppl complaining about this later, maybe separate into 2 slider, so is not so long. Up to you tho.
Nice diff~
Good luck guys~