ykcarrot wrote:

[Flask's Normal]
00:36:790 (1) - Remove NC to be consistent with 00:23:364 (6) k

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
So many sliders have the whistle on the whistle slide. ;_; Sounds horrible all remove >.<
Otherwise this is fine.

Armin wrote:

[Normal]

01:00:497 (1,2,3) - ugh these whistles on the sliderbody are just weird to be listened! Remove it when checking Garven's mod :3

Lally wrote:

gift o3o

o3o
[Easy]
00:40:357 (1) - x:138 y:198 - then fix the next slider and then did some nazis here

stack 00:42:035 (3) with 00:38:679 (3) - and fix spacing with the next slider o3o i think is better that way
01:10:567 (1) - i dunno if it's really need a new combo here to make pattern cute :O
02:17:700 (1) - ^ same ^
[Insane]
00:32:385 (4) - stack it with 00:32:385 (2) ~
00:41:406 (4) - stack this slider with 00:40:147 (6) ~
01:10:567 (1) - same as i said in Easy for the new combo but i like it the way it is :V
01:20:637 - finish o3o isn't too loud, imo >.</
01:54:203 (1) - stack with 01:55:042 (3) >.<

♥ good luck ♥

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
01:23:993 (1) - Still too soon after a spinner. At least move it closer to the center to aid in recovery. moved
02:07:630 (1,2) - Spacing is too far ~

[Normal]
00:40:357 (1) - You missed a whistle on the sliderslide ~

[Insane]
00:42:035 (1,2) - This overlap is pretty ugly it's ultra ugly. fixed

1. Honestly I don't like the letterbox during breaks on this BG. I would disable them.
2. You should add a custom slider tick with the same sound of NC:1 whistle to keep hitsound consistency during the player is hitting a slider. I mean, in the easy diff (for example) on: 01:41:196 / 01:42:035 / 01:47:909 / etc. there should be that custom whistle. You can fill them using a custom slider tick. Don't be lazy and do it please ;P

1. 00:12:455 (2) - Whistle on reverse arrow? It'd emphasize that sound in the music.
2. 00:26:091 (x) - There should be a circle here to fill the "clap" in the music
3. 00:36:371 (3) - (nazi) move the last sliderpoint 1 grid down to make that slider symmetrical
4. 00:46:231 (4,5) - You could add 2 finishes on these 2 slider heads to keep consistency with finishes you used on 00:44:762 (4,5). The sound is awesome.
5. 00:47:909 (6) - I would do the same here. Add finishes on head and tail
6. 00:50:427 (1) - Missing finish, it should be consistent with 00:43:714 (1)
7. 00:52:944 (5,6) - Read about 00:46:231 (4,5)
8. 00:54:623 (4,5) - ^ to keep consistency with 00:47:909 (6) if you have followed it
9. 01:01:126 (5) - Whistle on the tail?
10. 01:04:378 (2) - This slider should be reduced by 1/4 as the previous pattern with 1/4 circles
11. 01:07:839 (3) - Whistle on the tail?
12. 01:41:406 (2) - This reverse arrow is covered by 01:40:567 (6)'s hitburst and it's unrankable. It should be moved else where :\
13. 02:08:259 (2) - ^

1. 00:33:014 (4) - I'm not sure about this slider because it's totally covered by hitbursts: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/532316 It can be positioned better (I talked about this slider with other XAT members, we think it would be better to move it else where)

Chewin wrote:

Hi there

~General~

1. Honestly I don't like the letterbox during breaks on this BG. I would disable them. I use them here because it looks ok and it's more common to use letterboxes. So, yeah. keeping them here because I like it.
2. You should add a custom slider tick with the same sound of NC:1 whistle to keep hitsound consistency during the player is hitting a slider. I mean, in the easy diff (for example) on: 01:41:196 / 01:42:035 / 01:47:909 / etc. there should be that custom whistle. You can fill them using a custom slider tick. Don't be lazy and do it please ;P
   
   It's not because of my laziness, it's because I don't want to stress beginners. Easy diff should be as simple, as possible!

~BCI's Hard~

1. 00:12:455 (2) - Whistle on reverse arrow? It'd emphasize that sound in the music. ~
2. 00:26:091 (x) - There should be a circle here to fill the "clap" in the music ~
3. 00:36:371 (3) - (nazi) move the last sliderpoint 1 grid down to make that slider symmetrical ~
4. 00:46:231 (4,5) - You could add 2 finishes on these 2 slider heads to keep consistency with finishes you used on 00:44:762 (4,5). The sound is awesome. I've added finish only at the first slider. second should have whistle for consistency in hitsounding!
5. 00:47:909 (6) - I would do the same here. Add finishes on head and tail ~
6. 00:50:427 (1) - Missing finish, it should be consistent with 00:43:714 (1) ~
7. 00:52:944 (5,6) - Read about 00:46:231 (4,5) ~
8. 00:54:623 (4,5) - ^ to keep consistency with 00:47:909 (6) if you have followed it sort of
9. 01:01:126 (5) - Whistle on the tail? No way! It breaks hitsound pattern and doesn't fits here well, imo.
10. 01:04:378 (2) - This slider should be reduced by 1/4 as the previous pattern with 1/4 circles nope. Sounds good the way it is now! I don't see any reasons to change it! Map shouldn't be just consistent! It should be creative and interesting. Some variations of patterns is a good idea, too!
11. 01:07:839 (3) - Whistle on the tail? how about no? It breaks pattern and consistency. and sounds not really good here!
12. 01:41:406 (2) - This reverse arrow is covered by 01:40:567 (6)'s hitburst and it's unrankable. It should be moved else where :\ :/ it's still readable but I move it to make it easier
13. 02:08:259 (2) - ^_^

~Insane~

1. 00:33:014 (4) - I'm not sure about this slider because it's totally covered by hitbursts: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/532316 It can be positioned better (I talked about this slider with other XAT members, we think it would be better to move it else where) fixed

Fix red parts and I will rank

Flask wrote:

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