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Avril Lavigne - When You're Gone

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riffy
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riffy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 8 сентября 2013 г. at 17:41:31

Artist: Avril Lavigne
Title: When You're Gone
Tags: The Best Damn Thing Dark_Ai Love ballad you are
BPM: 71
Filesize: 7287kb
Play Time: 03:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dark_Ai's Normal (2,36 stars, 248 notes)
  2. Hard (4,38 stars, 380 notes)
Download: Avril Lavigne - When You're Gone
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Last edited by riffy , edited 76 times in total.
Flask
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Flask
First aha!
riffy
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riffy
my message is too short, sorry
Last edited by riffy , edited 2 times in total.
audrianore
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audrianore
Heya Bakari! Hope you still remember me. xD (lol)
Haha! Nice map btw! :3 And the timing is good. But I think the offset is 100 hehe (just my opinion). x3
riffy
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riffy
ofc, i remember you :3

thank you for check, fixed
riffy
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Pending!
Niko-nyan
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Niko-nyan
from my moe queue
can't see anything :D just give suggest

Little
01:43:270 - NC
try this if you like
if there 12 combo note try to make 6 - 6
riffy
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riffy
Fixed NC. Keep 1/1 pattern as is for now.
UnitedWeSin
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UnitedWeSin
Hello -Bakari-~
Modding via M4M.

[General]

  1. Consider using a slidertick clap for spots where the offbeat clap falls in the middle of a slider. This would sound very nice, especially in the normal diff where we miss out on many offbeat claps because of all the long sliders.

  2. Hitsounds are a bit soft imo. It wouldn't hurt to raise the volume in all timing sections by 10% or so.

  3. 00:46:929 - I really don't like having a break like this, especially when it's so early in the map. I don't think it's necessary, you should map it in both diffs imo.
[Big]

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 01:30:831 (4) - How about adding a NC here to accent this new vocal idea just like you do in the hard diff. I think it might be nice because this combo gets a bit long and this vocal line is epic here and deserves a NC.

  2. 01:33:026 (1) - I don't really like this NC because it's still the same vocal verse here. I'd say remove this NC and have 01:30:831 (1,2,3,1) all in one combo since there are essentially four hits in the vocals to complete this verse. It feels nicer if each is in the same combo. Just like you have at 02:41:075 (1,2,3,4).

    01:30:465 (3) to 01:34:490 (2)

  3. 01:37:051 (1) - To me, it feels awkward to start this long slider on the red tick. The rhythm of the song and the vocals make we want to hit another circle there and then hit the slider on the white tick at 01:37:417. Can you move the 1 to there and shorten it and add a circle at 01:37:051?

    This just plays so fluidly with the rhythm of the song.

  4. 01:54:612 (1) - Again I feel a bit uncomfortable when playing this rhythm. Can you move the 1 to 01:54:978 and make it a 1/2 slider, and then add a circle at 01:54:612?

  5. 01:56:807 (3) - Since the vocals stop in the middle of this slider, I think it would be much better if the slider ended at 01:57:173. The pause would feel very nice when the vocals stop.

  6. 01:57:904 (1,2,3) - I think these three circles would be better to follow the vocals as a slider just like at 01:59:002 (4). This way we could use the same slider length at each spot to follow the "dreams" vocals as it repeats twice which would feel much better than these three circles imo.

  7. 02:09:246 (1) - To me it would follow the vocals better if this slider were at 02:09:612 and we had a single circle at 02:09:246. Within the lyrics "It's -- seems," the "it's" is very short and accented, which would fit perfect with a single circle, and the "seems" is held which would make it perfect for a slider. Having both lyrics melded into the same slider like you have doesn't feel very good.
Hitsounds

  1. You could really afford to use more whistles imo. Maybe find a nice whistle pattern to fit with the vocals and follow it throughout the map. Maybe offbeat whistles like in the hard diff.

  2. 01:30:831 (1,2,3,4) - Some whistles might sound really nice here.

  3. 00:46:929 (3) - The finish is pretty loud to me since there isn't one in the music. I suggest removing it because you don't have one here in the hard diff and it sounds nicer that way imo. Either that or add one in the hard diff, and maybe reduce volume for it in both diffs.

  4. 01:44:734 (3) - Maybe add a finish to the end here like you have in the hard diff. It sounds really nice to me.

  5. 02:32:295 (3) - Consider a finish here just like in the hard diff.

  6. 02:41:075 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm, maybe add some whistles here just like in the hard diff. Sounds nice to me.
[Little]

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 01:22:417 - This song has a very nice steady beat that is very nice to flow to, but this gap here is breaking it imo. Consider adding a circle here stacked on the 01:22:782 (1) so that we can keep the flow of the rhythm in this kiai time. Even if the vocals aren't sounding, it still feels really nice as a metronome beat with the drums.

  2. 01:28:636 (3) - This slider is very awkward to play because it ends on the blue tick and we haven't seen a slider like that. It just doesn't play very well imo, it would be better as a 1/2 slider like so:

    I plays nicer because all we've seen in the section are 1/2 sliders.

  3. 01:52:051 (4) - This slider with a bunch of repeats is really breaking flow and rhythm for me because nothing in the music is really calling for a slider like this. It would be much nicer as a 1/1 slider and two circles imo:

  4. 01:54:246 (9) - This combo gets way too long. How about a NC here to go along with the new sentence in the vocals.

  5. 01:54:978 (4) - Same thing here, this slider feels really bad to play and breaks flow. I think the same rhythm works quite well.

    Just a suggestion there, I copied the 1 and flipped it over. Please don't follow my bad placements.
    01:54:246 (1) to 01:56:441 (6)

  6. 01:57:904 (1,2) - These sliders look a little bit strange to me. Maybe make them identical in angle, just flipped 180 degrees from each other. It would look nicer if they perfectly reflected each other imo.

  7. 02:03:758 (1) - Same thing as 01:28:636 (3). It would play much better if the slider ended at 02:04:490 and we had another circle at 02:04:673.

  8. 02:07:782 (10,11) - Awkward placement imo. The 10 and the 11 are shaped differently yet they are angled the same, it just doesn't look very nice. Can you try to place them in a blanket pattern with the 02:09:612 (3)? Example:

  9. 02:09:429 (2) - The 2 is not sounding in the vocals, it would play much better if you deleted it imo.

  10. 02:41:075 (6) - Maybe consider a NC here just like you did in the normal and at 01:30:831 (1) to accent this vocal idea better.
Hitsounds

  1. 00:23:514 (1) - Maybe add a whistle to the head just like in the normal diff.

  2. 01:30:831 (1,2,3,4) - Some whistles would fit nicely here with the vocals just like you have at 02:41:075 (6,7,8,9).

  3. 01:33:758 (5) - To me, a whistle sounds better here instead of a finish just like you have done in the normal diff. The finish is a bit noisy imo.
Ok I hope that helps a bit.
riffy
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riffy
Applied everything except two things.
  1. I'll try to add custom slider tick soon
  2. I don't want to map this break because we need some time to have a rest.
Thank you for mod!
Aurele
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Aurele
Is there a problem with "Huge"?
Try to make an upload and see if it can reappear.
riffy
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magic

total remap. WiP again!
Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai
Fight Bakari ^^

I know how you feel but you have to fightoo!! >o<//
riffy
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\:3/ thank you
Kodora
Kodora
It going to be your best one. I'm serious. Its beautiful.

Sadly cant kudos right now :\

Going to be my last faw map :3 ~
haha
Lally
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Lally
go go baka <3
Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai
Hey Baka(ri) >w<
Here! I'll give you something
(ノ*◡*）ノ ~


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riffy
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riffy
Uploaded, still need hitsounds
Kodora
Kodora
Star for you, baka o/

remind me tomorrow to tell you something
riffy
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Hitsounded \o/
Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai
\o3o/
Rotten yellow
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Rotten yellow

Kodora wrote:

It going to be your best one. I'm serious. Its beautiful.

Sadly cant kudos right now :\

Going to be my last faw map :3 ~
haha
Everybody loves symmetry, huh?
Kodora
Kodora
Good symmetrial maps usually are the best maps.
riffy
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not really. flow's a great thing, too.

Let's keep this discussion beatmap-related, 'kay?
watashino_old
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watashino_old
first mod...hope i can help you :)

hard
00:33:051 (6,7) - here may be considered to change...have a little bit strange i think

00:33:896 - change to note

00:33:896 (8) - start at 00:34:108 ?

00:44:460 00:45:305 00:46:150 00:46:995 00:47:840 00:48:685 ...- maybe can add whistle or clap

00:50:798 (1,2,3) - strange

if u think it is not useful, just ignore it
riffy
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watashino wrote:

first mod...hope i can help you :)

hard
00:33:051 (6,7) - here may be considered to change...have a little bit strange i think 1/4 triplet here added

00:33:896 - change to note but why? I don't feel like changing it at all!

00:33:896 (8) - start at 00:34:108 ? it fits with vocals, so I don't feel like changing it, sorry

00:44:460 00:45:305 00:46:150 00:46:995 00:47:840 00:48:685 ...- maybe can add whistle or clap thanks for reminding, recoverd my hitsounds here!

00:50:798 (1,2,3) - strange why? I guess it's pretty easy-playable!

if u think it is not useful, just ignore it
Thank you!
watashino_old
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watashino_old

-Bakari- wrote:

watashino wrote:

first mod...hope i can help you :)

hard
00:33:051 (6,7) - here may be considered to change...have a little bit strange i think 1/4 triplet here added

00:33:896 - change to note but why? I don't feel like changing it at all!

00:33:896 (8) - start at 00:34:108 ? it fits with vocals, so I don't feel like changing it, sorry

00:44:460 00:45:305 00:46:150 00:46:995 00:47:840 00:48:685 ...- maybe can add whistle or clap thanks for reminding, recoverd my hitsounds here!

00:50:798 (1,2,3) - strange why? I guess it's pretty easy-playable!

if u think it is not useful, just ignore it
Thank you!
just my feel only...just change those you agree :)
riffy
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Already :3/
Edwee
Edwee
Hey~
Unexpected mod from me, ye?

[General]
- Add "Love ballad" to tags because it's a genre of the song!
- Why do you have 2 audio files? :I
- Change "1,1" to "0,0"?
SPOILER
- COUNTDOWN SUCKS


[Dark_Ai's Normal]
- 00:08:967 - Maybe this, because 3 reverses look awkward: http://puu.sh/2LeC8.jpg
- 00:29:671 - Add a note here, because of guitar!
- 01:11:502 - Ehm? http://puu.sh/2LeJv.jpg
- 01:14:037 - ^ http://puu.sh/2LeK7.jpg
- 01:21:220 (4,5) - Change this to slider. (By the way, I sneezed at this mod moment, so it is better to replace! :D)
- 01:43:192 - Vocal is starting here, ye? Maybe put a slider here?
- 01:55:446 - This loud sliderticks awkward me :\
- 02:03:897 (2) - Finish
- 02:11:925 - 02:17:840 - WOW WOW WOW YOU'RE DANGEROUS!

[Hard]
- 00:07:488 - Add a note here, like this 00:11:502 (2,3,4)?
- 00:33:051 - I think it would be better http://puu.sh/2Lenz.jpg
- 00:35:587 - 00:36:432 - I think slider would be better than notes, because of vocal. http://puu.sh/2LeqY.jpg
- 00:56:291 (5) - Finish, instead of whistle. So it will be better because of the imminent start of kiai.
- 01:40:868 - Add a note here.
- 02:17:418 (5) - Finish, instead of whistle. So it will be better because of the imminent start of kiai.
- 02:32:629 - This loud slidertick awkward me :\
- 02:53:333 - Just suggestion: http://puu.sh/2LeyS.jpg

Good luck, Baka-sensei o/
riffy
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Edwee wrote:

Hey~ yo
Unexpected mod from me, ye? yea, I'm glad to see it

[General]
- Add "Love ballad" to tags because it's a genre of the song! sure
- Why do you have 2 audio files? :I D:
- Change "1,1" to "0,0"? It's called BG offset, i guess. I have to fix it, you know
SPOILER
- COUNTDOWN SUCKS YES IT IS

[Dark_Ai's Normal]
Ai didn't check this thread for more than 2 weeks, I can change it, I guess.
- 00:08:967 - Maybe this, because 3 reverses look awkward: http://puu.sh/2LeC8.jpg can't display puush, sorry :P
- 00:29:671 - Add a note here, because of guitar! well..it's quite hard to read, but let's do it for consistency
- 01:11:502 - Ehm? http://puu.sh/2LeJv.jpg D: puush can't be displayed
- 01:14:037 - ^ http://puu.sh/2LeK7.jpg guess what? :<
- 01:21:220 (4,5) - Change this to slider. (By the way, I sneezed at this mod moment, so it is better to replace! :D) uh.. I'm not sure, because Ai-chan wants to have a star-shaped pattern here :<
- 01:43:192 - Vocal is starting here, ye? Maybe put a slider here? slider feels here pretty weird, we'll look for another way
- 01:55:446 - This loud sliderticks awkward me :\ see [Hard] diff for detailed reply about this :3
- 02:03:897 (2) - Finish whistle
- 02:11:925 - 02:17:840 - WOW WOW WOW YOU'RE DANGEROUS! OH MY GOD YOU SURE ARE


[Hard]
- 00:07:488 - Add a note here, like this 00:11:502 (2,3,4)? yes.
- 00:33:051 - I think it would be better http://puu.sh/2Lenz.jpg no. I'm mixing vocals and music here to get better effect during gameplay. What's more I feel like guitar goes a little bit faster here, that's why I have 1/4 triplet here
- 00:35:587 - 00:36:432 - I think slider would be better than notes, because of vocal. http://puu.sh/2LeqY.jpg yea
- 00:56:291 (5) - Finish, instead of whistle. So it will be better because of the imminent start of kiai. nice catch, done!
- 01:40:868 - Add a note here. I can't hear any reasons to do it. I feel like it sounds kinda extra here
- 02:17:418 (5) - Finish, instead of whistle. So it will be better because of the imminent start of kiai. ~ :3
- 02:32:629 - This loud slidertick awkward me :\ It's here on purpose to follow background music closer. Try to remove this slider and listen to the song!
- 02:53:333 - Just suggestion: http://puu.sh/2LeyS.jpg I'd like to separate those beats to follow vocals closer, sorry

Good luck, Baka-sensei o/ who knows, maybe one day I'll learn how to map from you :)
Thank you!

Edit: HAIHAI o7
mancuso_JM_
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From my queue! (Sorry for the delay :(. I was kinda busy the past month, and I had to clean other requests too)

[General:]

• You are missing the Preview Point in Normal difficulty. You must add it in 57942 for consistency with the Hard diff.

[Hard:]

• Slider Tick Rate: In a lot of part I feel that Slider Tick Rate 4 fits, especially in the Kiai sections. I'd like to know your opinion about that xD

• Settings:
--> I prefer Approach Rate 7 due to the really low BPM. I know the Slider Velocity is kinda high but still, with 7 is enough in my opinion (AR-1)
--> I'd reduce the Overall difficulty in 1 Tick as well (OD-1)

• 00:04:742 (3,4) - Follow much better the music if you switch the placement of the objects in the timeline (I mean first the Slider and then the note), I know that you did that for symetry but the rhythm is more important in my opinion. So, would be better if you change that
•
In some parts, the map sounds lack of whistles, let me help you to add some of them
• 00:06:432 (6) - I think you can add some more whistles to make the difficulty more enjoyable looking the hitsounding, if I were you I'd add a Whistle at the slider end since follow properly the 'bells'
• 00:08:122 (4) - Add a Whistle at the Slider start for consistency
• 00:09:812 (6) - Add a Whistle at the slider end as I said you in 00:06:432
• 00:11:502 (2) - Whistle
• 00:12:347 (5) - Whistle at the beginning
• 00:13:615 (8) - And whistle.
- In some of these parts I got your point, to add whistle on the highest pitch of the piano, but without this whistles the music map sounds pretty monotonus imo. With them, provide a better sound.
• 00:25:023 (4) - I'm really nazi, but move this note 1grid right for symetry :P
• 00:33:896 (9) - I don't like a lot the rhythm, this repetition over the downbeat doesn't make sense and affect a bit your comboing. I think you should remove the reptition and move this Slider 1/2 forward (add a NC in it) and then add a Note in 00:33:896. This will encourage your symetry and comboing
Here a screenshoot
• 00:47:840 (1) - The drum sound at the slider start is unpredictable during the gameplay. I'd use a soft whistle instead :|
• 00:51:220 (2,5) - Yeah, nazi again! xD. Move both notes 1 grid left for symetry
• 00:59:249 (2,3) - Hmm.. This jump is a bit exaggerated for this slow song, I think it is better if you reduce it a bit.
• 01:18:263 (3) - This Slider sounds too high comparing with the voice, I think you need to reduce the volume in this Slider at least a bit to make it coherent with the voice, especially after the reverse arrow, before of that the slider sounds suitable tho
• 01:19:953 (T) - The hitsounds sound a bit high in this green line too. Reduce the hitsounds till 30%, sounds more suitable
• 01:21:854 (T) - And don't make this inaudible pls, the music doesn't dissapear completely. Increase the volume till 15% here.
• 01:25:023 - *Nazi* Resnap the inis-break properly in this downbeat
• 01:42:770 (2) - Use a Normal sound instead of a Soft whistle at the slider beginning
• 01:46:995 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern flows really forced to me. I highly recommend you a Reverse Selection (Ctrl+G) in (5,7) for a better flow. Btw, the jump between (7,1) works and flow fine so you don't need to change that.
• 02:08:122 (4) - I think you are missing a Normal sound in this Note.
• 02:09:812 (2) - Same at this Slider beginning
• 02:18:263 (2) - (^). You have other missed Claps, would be better if you find and add them by yourself
• 02:20:587 (x) - I really expected a Note here, it follows really well the drums. What do you think?
• 02:57:558 (5) - Meh.. This combo is useless. Remove it please
• 03:03:051 (1,2,3) - This pattern in an upside, flow fine in general but in a downside flow pretty weird to me. I'm kinda sleepy right now, I don't have in mind any suggestion, would be good if you can do a better and fluent thing here
• 03:14:460 (2,3,4,5,6) - To be the last kiai, I really hoped a more enjoyable pattern with more objects covering all the sounds in the music, not just this 1/2 notes. I recommend you to add more beats here, instead of doing a simple 1/2 to keep symetry
• 03:31:995 (3,4,5,1) - I dislike this linear pattern, really. I'm sure that you can make other thing
• 03:40:235 - 03:49:953 - No hitsounds!? Why!? ;__;
• 03:49:530 (4,5,6) - Can you make this pattern more like this? I really dislike the flow of this linear pattern, in addition looks bad.
SPOILER

- In general is not bad, but the hitsounding need more improvement I think. In some part is inconsistent, in other parts the beats sounds really empty without them. I think you can imporve that by yourself but feel free to talk to me in-game if you need some feedback or some other thing :)

[Dark_Ai's Normal:]

• Settings:
--> I'd reduce the overall difficulty in 1 tick, because it is supposed for a low level Normal (OD-1)

• 00:47:840 (5) - I recommend a New Combo in this note due to the music change and to avoid the long combo.
• 01:10:657 (1,3) - Remove the New Combo in (1) and add it in (3) to make this combo shorter and more suitable with the music
• 01:16:573 (1) - Remove this New Combo, is not consistent with your comboing
• 01:21:854 (T) - As I said in Hard, don't make this totally inaudible, it doesn't match the music properly. Increase the volume till 15% here
• 01:25:023 - *Nazi* - Re-snap properly this inis-break over the downbeat
• 01:49:530 (Spin) - Ugh.. This spinner sounds random to me, you could map this spinner without any kind of problems. It'll follow much better the song, try it
• 02:11:925 (1,2) - I think if you stack this Note with (2), the flow will increase. Plus, I think you should switch the combo placement between these Notes
• 02:29:249 (6) - Add a New Combo to avoid the long combo
• 03:25:868 (1,3) - Same as 01:10:657
• 03:26:713 (3) - I think you are missing a finish in this Note
• 03:39:389 (Spin) - Mother of Spinners :P. I'd reduce the length of it till 03:43:615. It is better in my opinion.
• 03:49:108 - *Nazi* - Resnap the end of this break properly over the red tick.

- Nothing Critical in this diffs. Just some combos should be shorter in this diff, and some other whistle doesn't hurt. But it is up to you.

As I said hitsounds in Hard can be still much better.
That's all from me, hope it helps you :) (I'm kinda sleepy right now xD).
Good Luck with this project, Baka ;)
riffy
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Fixed everything about rhythm and flow in my diff. As for hitsounds, I'll just re-hitsound the whole diff. :3
Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai
well I'm sorry Baka-chii that I didnt check this thread for so long ;w; totemo totemo gomene >.<
but here I am c: and thank you for fixing it for me >.<

to the mod I've changed everything thank you~ c:

chiii owo
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: i am so sorry .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57942
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 141604
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:When You're Gone
TitleUnicode:When You're Gone
Artist:Avril Lavigne
ArtistUnicode:Avril Lavigne
Creator:-Bakari-
Version:Dark_Ai's Normal
Source:
Tags:The Best Damn Thing Dark_Ai Love ballad
BeatmapID:224634
BeatmapSetID:64702

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"i miss you .jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
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2,223815,229108
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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288,112,66432,6,0,P|340:116|388:92,1,100
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148,280,77840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,176,99389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
297,267,99812,2,0,P|336:300|384:304,2,100
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164,76,101925,2,0,P|256:44|352:76,1,200,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,252,103615,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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340,192,106995,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,348,107840,1,0,1:0:0:0:
172,292,108263,2,0,P|128:268|100:224,2,100,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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56,192,112066,21,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,272,117136,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,240,117558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,144,117981,2,0,P|448:208|428:304,1,200,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,119671,1,0,1:0:0:0:
200,120,120094,6,0,P|148:128|104:160,2,100
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316,120,121784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,276,123051,21,0,1:0:0:0:
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340,192,125164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,288,125587,6,0,B|408:288,2,100,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,40,128967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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96,160,131925,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,132347,2,0,P|256:56|416:160,1,400
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308,220,134882,2,0,L|200:220,1,100
256,192,135727,12,0,138263,0:0:0:0:
344,72,139108,6,0,P|432:108|452:208,1,200,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
372,260,140375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,320,140798,2,0,P|244:340|180:340,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
372,260,142066,2,0,L|424:172,1,100
408,76,142911,2,0,L|308:76,1,100,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
208,76,143756,2,0,L|104:76,1,100
92,176,144601,5,0,0:0:0:0:
156,252,145023,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,268,145446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,252,145868,2,0,P|452:248|492:160,2,200,4|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,152,147981,2,0,P|308:152|276:192,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,252,149249,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,149671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,252,150094,2,0,P|160:272|104:272,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,176,150939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,72,151784,21,0,1:0:0:0:
400,108,152206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,200,152629,2,0,P|404:288|308:296,1,200,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,212,153897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,296,154319,2,0,P|108:288|72:200,1,200,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,155587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,108,156009,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,108,156432,2,0,P|256:92|304:108,1,100,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
364,188,157277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,244,157699,2,0,P|412:280|364:288,1,100
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40,172,159812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,100,160235,2,0,P|156:80|212:72,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,72,161080,2,0,P|358:79|402:99,1,100
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424,260,162347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,320,162770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,163192,12,4,166150,0:0:0:0:
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116,252,167418,2,0,P|164:260|216:252,2,100
36,192,168685,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,132,169108,2,0,P|236:56|356:140,1,300,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,171220,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,171643,2,0,L|256:104,1,100,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
156,112,172488,2,0,P|256:20|356:116,1,300,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,174601,5,0,0:0:0:0:
156,276,175023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,204,175446,2,0,P|60:164|48:112,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,176291,12,2,178826,0:0:0:0:
48,192,179671,6,0,P|128:140|208:192,1,200,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,180939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,190,181361,2,0,P|384:140|464:192,1,200,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
384,252,182629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,308,183051,6,0,P|256:332|216:308,2,100,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,184319,2,0,B|256:116,2,100,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,185587,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,316,186009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,312,186432,5,4,0:0:0:0:
72,252,186854,1,0,0:3:0:0:
36,160,187277,1,0,1:0:0:0:
72,68,187699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,76,188122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,188544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,76,188967,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,68,189389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,189812,12,2,192347,0:0:0:0:
344,48,193192,6,0,P|256:88|168:48,1,200,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
120,136,194460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,236,194882,2,0,P|172:236|216:272,1,100
303,263,195727,2,0,P|340:236|392:236,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,136,196573,2,0,P|440:136|484:100,2,100,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,48,197840,2,0,P|284:48|240:84,1,100
256,176,198685,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,199108,1,0,1:0:0:0:
320,248,199530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,156,199953,2,0,P|420:224|384:320,1,200,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
296,336,201220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,201643,6,0,P|172:268|124:292,1,100
72,208,202488,1,0,1:0:0:0:
104,112,202911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,68,203333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,104,203756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,200,204178,2,0,P|344:184|376:140,2,100,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,72,205868,1,0,1:0:0:0:
92,156,206291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,252,206713,5,0,0:0:0:0:
220,284,207136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,224,207558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,124,207981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,56,208404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,72,208826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,156,209249,1,0,1:0:0:0:
128,252,209671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,328,210094,6,0,P|288:324|332:236,1,200,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,232,211361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,228,211784,2,0,P|177:144|273:140,1,200,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
364,104,213051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,48,213474,2,0,P|456:144|372:208,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,308,215164,5,2,0:0:0:0:
132,248,215587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,216009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,108,216432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,176,216854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,219389,12,0,223615,0:0:0:0:
256,192,230375,12,0,233756,0:0:0:0:
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