Nemis
Nemis wrote:
[cRyo's Hard]
00:15:248 (4) - You should remove this, copy 00:14:779 (3) - and reverse it at 180°, it's better
00:34:612 (2,3,4) - You should reduce spacing a little 'cause this 00:35:706 (5,1) - seems a 1/2 jump too while holding 1/1 spacing is fine for me here
00:45:700 (2) - CTRL + G i like current one
00:53:821 (5) - CTRL + G (it flows a lot!) but after you need to fix 00:54:290 (1,2) - to flow
01:24:118 (1) - This spinner should finish at 01:28:491 (1) -
Lally
Lally wrote:
[Hard]
- first of all 01:27:866 - here finish your kiai and i'll suggest to make it more consistent like in the other diff
- 00:54:858 - unsnapped green line snap to 00:54:836 -
- 00:56:108 - unsnapped green line snap to 00:56:086 -
- 00:57:357 - unsnapped green line snap to 00:57:335 - greenlines fine o3o!
Maddy
Maddy wrote:
Hard:
Fix the kiai's.
00:04:940 (4) - Beginning has too many stacked notes, Unstack this one.
00:15:248 (4) - This is pretty ugly, try a different approach, or simmetry with previous slider.
00:25:945 (3,4) - This type of stack is confusing , I would stack (2) too, otherwise unstack (3). i using this kind of stacks very often, and i think they plays easier then http://puu.sh/22AgI
01:10:922 (3,4) - Same
popner
Thanks!popner wrote:
[cRyo's Hard]
00:01:817 (1) - 00:06:814 (1) - 00:17:746 (1) - etc. consider remove these NCs since they are not consistent with the other combos you used(every two big white tick). i like the way it looks
00:14:623 (2,3) - a little weird during test-play: the note is between two 1/1 sliders, so the beat of this single note is emphasized. As a result, when you put the note on red tick, it can't present the downbeat music properly, which leads to a flaw in rhythm - that is not good enough. For me, I prefer exchange the slider and note, like:
When I do this, there is a note at 0:15:091 - (2/4 white tick, where there should be drum) and the rhythm plays better for me. Meanwhile I can easily change the pattern for new rhythm. i hear current rhytm (following guitar)
00:28:990 (1) - I don't recommend a 1/1 slider here: there is a vocal at 00:29:147 - (the big white tick) but it is ignored due to the 1/1 slider. Repeat slider/slider and note is better imo. i think vocal at downbeat not important, thats why ignored it
00:40:391 (1) - finish on slider head? dont hear finish in music
00:52:884 (3,4,5) - the blanket here can be improved: the spacing between (4,5) is different from (3,5), so try to make them same. Moving and rotating 00:53:821 (5) will fix this. changed this before
00:53:821 (5) - I prefer ctrl+g to this slider to make a better flow. changed this before
01:01:630 (1,2,3) - the space between these sliders are not same, so they looks not so neat. Try to move 01:01:942 (2) to keep the consistency of spacing.
01:02:567 (1,2) - looks like they are put randomly..to make a better note arrangement, I would rather put 01:02:567 (1,2,3) in a line.
In this example I moved 01:01:942 (2,3) a little to fix the spacing issue. i prefer current angle instead of straight line
http://puu.sh/22AEO