1. 03:06:244 (1,2) - If you use custom-slidertick on (1), please use on (2) too. Or, just remove from (1). It sounds better.
2. 03:15:555 (2,3,4) - Uhhmm, I know which sound they're following but I felt sliderticks are kinda noisy...

1. 00:09:348 (3,4,5) - (kinda nazi) Inconsistent spacing doesn't look beautiful here. Let's use the same space for these circles. It's not a hard work.
2. 00:21:503 (3) - I think this note should be at 00:21:632 rather than here, it fits the music more.
3. 01:26:675 (x) - Why not add a note too? Comparing with 01:28:486 (5) and 01:30:813 (5), etc, it feels better.
4. 01:38:313 (3,1,2,3,4) - Looks crowded. In this case, narrow spacing + overlapping = bad gameplay. Especially, here's a quick triple, so it's kinda difficult to read them in the current pattern.
5. 01:44:650 (x) - How about adding a note? It should fit the music, and makes reading the timing of next note (4) easier.
6. 01:58:744 (3,4,5) - A similar reason to 01:38:313.
7. 02:31:072 (5) - Finish would be better than whistle.

Suzully wrote:

I was tempted by a good song.

[Normal]

1. 03:06:244 (1,2) - If you use custom-slidertick on (1), please use on (2) too. Or, just remove from (1). It sounds better. added
2. 03:15:555 (2,3,4) - Uhhmm, I know which sound they're following but I felt sliderticks are kinda noisy... ticks' vol->23% in this section

[Hard]

1. 00:09:348 (3,4,5) - (kinda nazi) Inconsistent spacing doesn't look beautiful here. Let's use the same space for these circles. It's not a hard work. fixed
2. 00:21:503 (3) - I think this note should be at 00:21:632 rather than here, it fits the music more. ok
3. 01:26:675 (x) - Why not add a note too? Comparing with 01:28:486 (5) and 01:30:813 (5), etc, it feels better. ok
4. 01:38:313 (3,1,2,3,4) - Looks crowded. In this case, narrow spacing + overlapping = bad gameplay. Especially, here's a quick triple, so it's kinda difficult to read them in the current pattern. emm.. here is climbing up to a kiai-like section, and I think it is needed to have something to go with the feeling. like using jumps or streams to enter a kiai, here is a bit harder pattern to make it impressive. if it is not a convincing reason, I will try to change
5. 01:44:650 (x) - How about adding a note? It should fit the music, and makes reading the timing of next note (4) easier. not want to, for the consistency with 01:40:770 (6)
6. 01:58:744 (3,4,5) - A similar reason to 01:38:313. about to be the same reason, actually, take the BPM into consideration, I think it is not that hard in a Hard
7. 02:31:072 (5) - Finish would be better than whistle. fixed

fanzhen0019 wrote:

香蕉神mapper :O