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Owl City - When Can I See You Again?

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nomen
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Joined March 2012
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nomen
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on otrdiena, 2013. gada 11. jūnijā at 12:48:19

Artist: Owl City
Title: When Can I See You Again?
Source: Wreck-it Ralph
Tags: disney adam young
BPM: 128
Filesize: 5579kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,59 stars, 208 notes)
  2. Hard (4,77 stars, 465 notes)
  3. Normal (3,96 stars, 243 notes)
Download: Owl City - When Can I See You Again?
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Difficulties:
  • Hard - done
    Normal - done
    Easy - done
Thanks to, for mods:
  • Forseen, Entreal, ShadowSoul, -Bakari-, PyramidX, Hellzero, DELiS
more mods are apriciated
Last edited by nomen , edited 39 times in total.
Forseen
363 posts
Joined November 2010
Forseen
Īss aplīšu mods
06:55 *nomen is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/220134 Owl City - When Can I See You Again?]
06:55 nomen: pamēģini tagad
07:00 Forseen: 02:54:284 (9) -
07:00 Forseen: Smukāku vajag :D
07:00 Forseen: 02:56:862 (1) - un šis daudz par tuvu iepriekšējam
07:01 Forseen: Pārējais ir ok D:
07:03 nomen: nu paskaties, varbūt ir kāds sīkums
07:03 nomen: or no, rādīja ka editorā esi
07:08 Forseen: 00:55:221 (2) - nav nostackots zem (8) slaidera
07:10 Forseen: 01:25:924 (3,4,5,6) - Erm, nu šie kaut kā pēkšņi baigi tuvu
07:10 Forseen: Spacinga ziņā
07:11 nomen: jā zinu
07:11 nomen: vispār nesaprotu kapēc tā izdarīju
07:11 Forseen: xD
07:11 nomen: pirms tam bija 1,2,3 space 4,5,6
07:11 nomen: tā arī nepatika
07:12 Forseen: 02:17:956 (8) - Smukāku ;_________;
07:13 nomen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610258
07:14 Forseen: Yep, ir labi
07:14 Forseen: 02:30:378 (7) - šo varētu kaut kā virs (5) dabūt
07:15 Forseen: 00:10:456 (3) - Unnnn šo vajag labāk turpat kur (1) bija
07:16 Forseen: Tfu
07:16 Forseen: 00:10:456 (8) -
07:20 Forseen: 01:22:409 (6) - Dunno, sāc te jaunu combo
07:20 Forseen: 01:24:987 (5) - Un te
07:21 nomen: būs man tev kudosu jadod
07:21 Forseen: Ok, pietiek, eju postot
07:21 Forseen: lol
07:22 Forseen: Es nezinu ar tiem combo, bet nu tajās 2 vietās jaunu vajag
Entreal
136 posts
Joined July 2011
Entreal
Ummm... This is my first time Modding so please go lenient :)?
OVERALL:
I think you need to make the hit effects louder.
Should definitely add some beats, having no claps or whistles makes it sound bland.

Hard (Only one there is haha...)
00:04:596 - Should place a circle there, it sounds a little weird if there isn't.
00:05:534 - ^
00:10:456 - Circle 8 should be aligned with circle 6.
00:16:315 - I don't think you need this slider to have a repeat. From 00:16:315 to 00:16:784 is good.
00:17:253 - Probably should add some beats like clapping, (for example 00:17:253 and 00:17:721).
00:17:487 - Maybe add a circle here?
00:25:456 - I don't think you need a slider here.
00:47:721 - You should add some beats like clapping, when the music has a little beat (like 00:47:721 and 00:48:659)
01:03:893 - That slider is kind of unnecessary, just a circle will do.
01:04:362 - The placement of the three circles can be confusing to people, try to make it aline.
01:10:221 - Shouldn't the circles of 01:10:221 and 01:10:924 be symmetrical? Kind of my opinion though lol
01:24:753 - Add a circle here.
01:49:362 - Move the circle from 01:49:362 to 01:49:596 and add a clap or something.
01:49:596 to 01:50:768 - Add some kind of circle or slider here, maybe in rhythm of the voice?
01:55:456 - Wrong placement, should be moved to 01:55:573.
02:31:784 - The slider doesn't have to turn back, probably add a circle at 02:32:253.
03:05:299 - Should move that circle a little below the slider, can be confusing to people.
03:15:378 - Maybe add something around here so it won't be lonely.
nomen
539 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
nomen
Thanks Forseen <3

@Entreal:

Yeah I know about hitsounds, now I just wanted to put circles and sounds I'll add later.
Thanks for mod it made map better. Here's your kudosu.
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
ShadowSoul
Dat Thingy
07:53 ShadowSoul: So
07:53 *ShadowSoul is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/220134 Owl City - When Can I See You Again? [Hard]]
07:53 ShadowSoul: First of all
07:54 ShadowSoul: You should delete the whole part before your first red section
07:54 ShadowSoul: second
07:54 ShadowSoul: 00:17:219 -
07:54 ShadowSoul: the offset should be 17219
07:54 ShadowSoul: not 172553
07:54 ShadowSoul: 17253*
07:54 ShadowSoul: 00:02:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
07:55 ShadowSoul: this part should be deleted
07:55 ShadowSoul: it sounds weird
07:56 ShadowSoul: Also you should use Normal hitsounds instead of soft
07:56 ShadowSoul: 50% for Non-Kiai Sections and 70% for Kiai-Sections
07:57 ShadowSoul: Also don't forget to Move all your Timing Sections -34 after changing the Offset
07:58 ShadowSoul: You can just mark them all and move them (Just in case u don't know)
07:59 nomen: you sure I don't that?
08:00 nomen: beginning part
08:00 ShadowSoul: it's fine to delete it sicnce the offset starts at 17219
08:00 nomen: well, I did
08:01 ShadowSoul: 00:18:390 (5,6,7,8,9) - Try something in this way http://puu.sh/21Obh Looks better to me than this weird overlap
08:03 ShadowSoul: 00:34:563 (4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/21Odc looks better uh?
08:05 ShadowSoul: 00:48:859 (6) - Stack this one on (5) instead of (4)
08:05 ShadowSoul: 00:49:797 (2) - Stack the start of this on the previous (7)
08:05 ShadowSoul: 00:50:265 (3) - And this on 5,6
08:06 ShadowSoul: 00:50:734 (4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/21OfZ meh
08:07 ShadowSoul: 00:55:187 (2) - Stack this on the beginning of 00:54:015 (7) -
08:09 ShadowSoul: 00:58:937 - It's kinnda emtpy here but the song is going on so
08:09 ShadowSoul: http://puu.sh/21Ohp
08:09 ShadowSoul: juust add a slider with a reverse there
08:10 ShadowSoul: 01:04:328 (4) - add a new combo here
08:11 ShadowSoul: 01:08:078 (4) - ^
08:13 ShadowSoul: 02:04:328 (5) - ^
08:13 ShadowSoul: 02:08:078 (5) - ^
08:13 ShadowSoul: 02:49:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks weird try to change it
08:14 ShadowSoul: the parts before looked better
08:15 nomen: yeah, but I didn't want the same pattern everywhere
08:15 nomen: but true this one sucks
08:15 ShadowSoul: you don't need to copy it all the time
08:15 ShadowSoul: wait
08:16 nomen: I should just flip the previous pattern 90 degrees
08:17 ShadowSoul: http://puu.sh/21Opx
08:17 ShadowSoul: :3
08:18 nomen: I'll try that
08:18 ShadowSoul: also fits with the next incoming slider
08:18 ShadowSoul: so
08:19 ShadowSoul: Also you should add hitsounds xD
08:20 nomen: yeah I know that
08:20 ShadowSoul: Just add claps on the 2nd and 4th white tick
08:20 nomen: Circles just for now.
08:21 ShadowSoul: kk
08:21 ShadowSoul: should be allfor now
08:21 nomen: ok, post for kudosu
08:21 ShadowSoul: i will check sometime again when you got all diffs done xD
nomen
539 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
nomen
Thanks <3
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
hey

[General]
  1. BG resolution must not be bigger than 1024x768. (also I can find you some better backgrounds, just poke me in-game)
  2. You have inconsistency in Source, make sure it's the same for ALL diffs.
  3. Here's some of the tags you can use: disney adam young
  4. Both of your diffs have the same slider velocity. Why don't you make Hard diff faster? Or Normal Slower? It will make map MUCH more interesting!
  5. Use Slider Tick Rate 2, please! It will make thythm the wawy better, I swear!
  6. You need a difff under 3,24 star rating to make rankable mapset! Think about bakas beginners!
  7. Do not change slider velocity too often!


    Any slider velocity change MUST be reasonable and intuitively playable and it's not recommened to change it more than twice in easier diffs because it's too stressful players. Try to keep Slider Velocity changes reasonable, personally, i think you can map it without ANY velocity changes.
[Normal]
  1. Firstly, there's TONS of 1/2 patterns.

    00:22:844 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - example.

    They will stress players, remember, Normal diffs are NOT for pro-players. And they're unable to follow non-stop 1/2 rhythm. Rhythm here is not even close to Normal diff! Try to make it MUCH Harder. By the way, diff settings and rhythm feels TOO hard for Normal diff! Normal is the easiest diff here, that's why you should think about beginners.
  2. Do not use jumps for easy/normal diffs!

    02:10:187 (1,2,3,4) - example

    Jumps will stress low-skilled players. They break spacing, they confuse players and of course it's TOO hard for Easy/Normal diffs! If it's possible - avoid them!
  3. Personally, I'd recommend you to mix vocals and music. Empty space like 02:02:219 - is not a good idea! HP Drain is killing us, and this part is also boring. If you will follow music here, or at least place long slider for vocals it'll be great! Keep rhythm consistent.
  4. Never ignore guidelines! They contain a lot of helpful suggestions and some interesting ideas, check it out! osu!wiki/Normal
[Hard]
  1. Do NOT ignore vocals. It feels really weird and confuses players a lot! Example - 02:13:469 - loud beat is ignored and it confiuses me A LOT.
  2. Do NOT ignore distance snap! Of course you can use some jumps/anti-jumps! But, please, make sure everything is readable and FITS with music. For example - 02:13:234 (10,1,2,3,4) - it's REALLY hard to read, and makes players angry.
~~~~~~~~~~
general suggestions for now, feel free to call me again when you'll fix it! I'll do my best to explain you more things. Everything mentioned here is REALLY important, please make sure you understand it properly! >3<
nomen
539 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
nomen
Thanks a lot. I will fix everything as soon as I can.
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
re-mod. Since you've added Easy and made a lot of changes in Normal
13:55 nomen: Hi.
13:55 -Bakari-: Hi
13:55 nomen: Tell me when you are done modding~~
13:56 nomen: I have some questions about my map.
13:56 -Bakari-: If you have questions, feel free to ask now. :3
13:56 nomen: It's more like you have to see map.
13:56 nomen: I was wondering if my Normal diff is "easy enough"
13:57 nomen: I have completed Easy tho
13:57 nomen: and I thought maybe Normal diff don't need to be that easy
13:58 nomen: It's still easy tho, I made it easier
13:58 -Bakari-: Who's your favourite mapper? :)
13:58 nomen: I have no idea
13:58 nomen: I liked DJPops and Andreas new maps
13:58 nomen: when I started to play osu!
13:59 -Bakari-: Take a look at Andrea's Normals! They're awesome.
13:59 nomen: oh
13:59 nomen: sec
13:59 nomen: I have to update
13:59 nomen: I have made changes
13:59 -Bakari-: sure
14:00 nomen: Ok done.
14:01 nomen: please take a look at Easy too
14:01 -Bakari-: Try Approach Rate + 1 (Normal)
14:01 nomen: ok
14:02 -Bakari-: 01:59:875 (8,9) - inconsistent sppaaaaaacing >3<
14:02 nomen: forgot to swap sliders starting end
14:03 nomen: Do I need to reduce 1/2's count?
14:04 -Bakari-: Yes, just a bit more. 
14:05 nomen: and do I need a note on every single big white thick?
14:06 -Bakari-: not really, just follow rhythm! :)
14:06 nomen: 02:38:312 (3,4,5,6) - 
14:07 nomen: do you think this is ok?
14:07 nomen: if I skip red thick
14:07 nomen: if I reverse slider one more time then it's confusing
14:08 -Bakari-: uh.. try something like [http://puu.sh/23Xn3 this]
14:09 nomen: puush...
14:09 -Bakari-: any problems with puush? 
14:09 nomen: offline I guess
14:09 nomen: can you open it?
14:10 -Bakari-: yes
14:10 nomen: hmm
14:10 nomen: I can open in mozilla
14:10 nomen: qeird
14:10 nomen: weird
14:11 -Bakari-: I use chrome
14:11 nomen: now it opened
14:11 nomen: weird
14:11 nomen: xD
14:11 -Bakari-: maaagic \o3o/
14:13 nomen: ok did what you suggested, now it's better
14:14 -Bakari-: now for the [Easy]
14:14 -Bakari-: by the way, I asked one of my friends to check it tomorrow. :) 
14:15 nomen: okay, Here it comes, I brace myself, what's with Easy
14:15 -Bakari-: It's quite cute. 
14:15 nomen: only white ticks :o
14:15 -Bakari-: Consistent 1/1 rhythm is exactly what I like for Easy diffs :3
14:15 nomen: <3
14:16 -Bakari-: Try to put new combos more often? (big numbers on circles are stressful for beginners)
14:16 nomen: ok
14:17 nomen: Like 6 max?
14:17 -Bakari-: Uh.. Yea
14:17 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/23Xxc 
14:17 -Bakari-: ^ example
14:18 nomen: Oh, ok
14:19 nomen: 1 sec afk
14:21 nomen: back
14:22 -Bakari-: ok, some cosmetic-nazi things for Easy
14:22 -Bakari-: 00:26:594 (3) - It's better if you try to avoid overlap like this (a bit overlapped with 00:28:937 (2) - )
14:23 -Bakari-: 00:37:375 (4,6) - probably hard to read. (6) is covered by 300.png 
14:24 -Bakari-: 01:37:844 (1) - this one is quite important - too soon after spinner!
14:24 -Bakari-: beginners need some time to recover
14:25 nomen:  made spinner shorter
14:26 -Bakari-: isn't spinner is too short now? :)
14:26 nomen: nope
14:26 nomen: it end on red thick
14:26 nomen: check
14:26 -Bakari-: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616705 try this >3</
14:28 -Bakari-: 03:06:437 (1) - same thing. too soon
14:28 nomen: I think every spinner is like that if there isn;t break after it D:
14:28 -Bakari-: 02:51:437 (1) - same + (1) is covered by 300! It will stress beginners a lot
14:29 nomen: Yeah I had to thought that Begginers will most likely play with default skin
14:30 nomen: Is stacks ok tho?
14:32 -Bakari-: I'd recommend you to avoid them in your future maps, but it's ok.
14:36 -Bakari-: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616718 what do you think about this BG?
14:37 nomen: I would love it if it was digital art
14:38 nomen: I want drawn bg
14:38 nomen: D:
14:40 -Bakari-: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616725 o3o
14:40 -Bakari-: I want to see something bright >3</
14:40 nomen: still isn't drawn 
14:41 nomen: QQ
14:41 -Bakari-: [http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-xuxOjaxHH-o/TtxVAiQIo_I/AAAAAAAABJU/AcwoUT7esns/s1600/field-wallpaper-hd-10-729689.jpg looong link]
14:42 nomen: http://wallbase.cc/wallpaper/778
14:43 nomen: http://wallbase.cc/wallpaper/1753625 ^^ bright
14:44 -Bakari-: http://wallbase.cc/wallpaper/1753625 this one is awesome
14:44 nomen: lol
14:44 nomen: the same I linked
14:44 nomen: so this is it
14:44 nomen: and it ended up with anime girl in it anyway xD
14:45 nomen: I have paint
14:45 nomen: pain in the ass to resize
14:46 -Bakari-: wait a minute >3<
14:48 -Bakari-: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616731 let's use it as your BG :3/
14:48 nomen: yes yes
14:49 nomen: can u link resized one
14:49 -Bakari-: sure 
14:49 nomen: In paint I have to drag it to exact size
14:49 nomen: cuz it doesn't allow me to put in values anywhere
14:49 nomen: scumbag Microsoft
14:49 -Bakari-: lol
14:50 -Bakari-: uploading. I have terrible connection speed
14:50 nomen: kk
14:50 nomen: Should I change combo colors
14:50 -Bakari-: well, i think yes
14:51 -Bakari-: I can send you some cute colours
14:51 nomen: First they should contrast bg
14:51 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/23Y5v
14:52 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/23Y7e
14:53 nomen: You really like this song, don't you
14:53 nomen: or you always help this lot
14:54 -Bakari-: I'm just trying to be helpful :)
14:54 nomen: <3
14:54 nomen: That's what your sig says
15:00 nomen: also I have some questions about Hard diff
15:01 nomen: 01:45:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -  is this ok?
15:01 -Bakari-: sure
15:01 nomen: 01:55:656 (6) - 
15:01 nomen: and this
15:02 -Bakari-: let me re-dl it first
15:02 nomen: k
15:03 nomen: oh and I hate when I stack circles under sliders perfectly in editor
15:03 nomen: they aren;t that perfectly in game
15:04 nomen: more likely they are totaly out of position not just by a bit
15:04 -Bakari-: i know
15:04 nomen: looks unpretty D:
15:04 -Bakari-: it's in-game stack. 
15:04 -Bakari-: It helps us to read. 
15:04 nomen: yeah
15:04 -Bakari-: just deal with it :<
15:05 -Bakari-: also, both patterns are ok
15:05 -Bakari-: 01:55:656 (6) - but NC here
15:05 nomen: 02:40:890 (1) - 
15:05 nomen: and here?
15:05 -Bakari-: just to point out velocity changes!
15:05 nomen: NC?
15:05 nomen: newcombo
15:05 nomen: ok
15:05 nomen: xD
15:06 -Bakari-: yea
15:09 nomen: I think you have earned one huge and juicy kudosu
15:09 -Bakari-: I already have it! :P
15:10 nomen: It's not allowed to give more per person D: 
15:10 nomen: ?
15:10 -Bakari-: It's ok if you remap diffs or add more diffs. Or if you've done huge changes after first mod
15:11 nomen: Well, I have add new diff
15:11 nomen: and did huge changes on Normal
15:11 nomen: oh yeah, I still need to reduce 1/2's in Normal
15:12 -Bakari-: Yea.
15:12 -Bakari-: by the way, 02:43:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for patterns like this one you can use Ctrl+Shitf+D 
15:13 nomen: 02:51:437 - 
15:13 nomen: In easy
15:13 nomen: aww
15:13 nomen: I have it different
15:13 nomen: well, there is this spinner
15:13 nomen: should I replace it with sliders and circles
15:14 -Bakari-: If you want to.
15:15 nomen: oh wait, well it has that tricky voice and beat pattern
15:15 nomen: I can't use circles there
15:16 -Bakari-: Uh.. Yea. 
15:16 -Bakari-: You're right.
15:16 nomen: 02:49:094 (1,1) - 
15:16 nomen: well I need help here
15:16 nomen: http://puu.sh/23YB7
15:16 nomen: if it's like this
15:17 nomen: that blank spot sounds weird
15:17 nomen: if I make spinner longer next note is too close
15:18 -Bakari-: let's try something weird http://puu.sh/23YCX
15:19 nomen:   hmm, really think it's ok?
15:20 nomen: really don't want to skip those white thicks
15:20 nomen: ticks*
15:20 nomen: I was typing thicks all the time
15:20 nomen: silly me
15:21 nomen: what if I use break instead of spinner
15:21 -Bakari-: nah, it's ok as long as i can understand you :D
15:21 -Bakari-: wait
15:21 nomen: it would be too short break
15:21 -Bakari-: it's ok to place notes [http://puu.sh/23YHa this way] just make sure it's readable
15:22 -Bakari-: if anyone else will complain, ask them for different ideas \:D/
15:22 nomen:   maybe Slider after spinner
15:22 nomen: it's easier to hit slider
15:22 -Bakari-: ^ yes
15:23 nomen: http://puu.sh/23YJf
15:23 nomen: like this
15:24 -Bakari-: oh, and one IMPORTANT thing
15:25 -Bakari-: I'll try to explain it on normal, but think about it in other diffs, too!
15:25 nomen: that Ctrl+Shift+D thingy lol
15:26 nomen: I didn't knew there was it
15:26 -Bakari-: >3<///
15:26 -Bakari-: another thing
15:26 -Bakari-: Flow
15:26 nomen: D:
15:26 -Bakari-: let me draw some screenshots >3<
15:27 nomen: ok
15:28 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/23YPo 00:25:187 (2,3) - 
15:29 -Bakari-: see, it confuses some players. 
15:29 -Bakari-: When you play some crazy maps, you can't even see approach-hitcircles
15:30 -Bakari-: but you can play them because of flow
15:31 nomen: So I shouldn't place sliders so I have to move cursor over end of slider to get to start of slider
15:31 -Bakari-: and another example http://puu.sh/23YU9 00:37:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
15:33 nomen: how is that not in flow? D:
15:33 -Bakari-: It IS flow. 
15:33 nomen: oh you just said the previous wasn't
15:33 nomen: now now you said "another example"
15:33 nomen: so I got confused D:
15:33 -Bakari-: intuitively readable object-placement = flow
15:35 nomen: http://puu.sh/23YYv
15:36 -Bakari-: looks good
15:37 nomen: about that shift ctrl d
15:37 nomen: it make me 1/4 notes
15:37 nomen: how can I change them to 1/2's
15:37 -Bakari-: just switch beat snap divisor to 1/1 or 1/2
15:38 nomen: oh
15:41 -Bakari-: disconnected :< 
15:41 nomen: D:
15:42 -Bakari-: There's a thread about flow, but it's mostly for "advanced mappers"
15:42 -Bakari-: let me show you some examples!
15:43 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/23Z7p this one is quite easy to understand
15:44 nomen: yeah
15:44 -Bakari-: and maybe [http://puu.sh/23Z9d this one]
15:44 -Bakari-: Actually, don't worry about flow THAT much, try to have some fun! 
15:45 -Bakari-: First of all, you should enjoy mapping. :)
15:48 nomen: okay ^^
15:50 -Bakari-: hope it helps you! >3</ 
15:50 -Bakari-: I guess that's enough for today. Feel free to PM me any time you want :)
15:53 nomen: so this isn't as flow as it was if slider was starting from other side http://puu.sh/23Zjo
15:53 nomen: ok ok
15:54 -Bakari-: yes <3
15:54 nomen: :3
15:57 nomen: I shall add you to friends :3
15:59 -Bakari-: Yay! Mutual friendship! <3
15:59 nomen: <3
16:39 nomen: So I made Easy and Normal more flow
16:39 -Bakari-: that's great <3
16:39 nomen: Are you sure you don't want to post for kudosu?
16:40 -Bakari-: i've lost the log, anyway. \:D/
16:41 nomen: :(
16:42 nomen: and I didn't have option enabled to save them
16:43 -Bakari-:  /savelog
nomen
539 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
nomen
So thank to -Bakari- I understood that randomly putting circles won't get me anywhere.
You have made my map and my grasp about mapping better.
Origami_Munchkin
66 posts
Joined October 2011
Origami_Munchkin
I was working on this song at one point. Love it so much but then the who storyboard got messed up and I couldn't ever fix it and I didn't want to remap it. If you want to look at it: t/105941

Good job on your map!

Origami_Munchkin
2211178
2211178
I like the map, it was pretty smooth.

As far as I'm concerned, the hard diff needs a bit more changes... I mean, some 1/4 streams and some short breaks would make the map more attractive.
This is my 2nd modding, and I don't really familiar with mapping, so I'll just give a general idea.

Anyway, great job.

Btw I'm looking forward to the insane diff XD
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-
nice song good choice!

in Normal diff, some of the sliders are missing, so you may want to check that and resubmit.

also the hit sound is a bit loud.
nomen
539 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
nomen

B-52 wrote:

I like the map, it was pretty smooth.

As far as I'm concerned, the hard diff needs a bit more changes... I mean, some 1/4 streams and some short breaks would make the map more attractive.
This is my 2nd modding, and I don't really familiar with mapping, so I'll just give a general idea.

Anyway, great job.

Btw I'm looking forward to the insane diff XD
I really want that this map doesn't have 1/4 streams in it and I think break times are enough.

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

nice song good choice!

in Normal diff, some of the sliders are missing, so you may want to check that and resubmit.

also the hit sound is a bit loud.
You are right, sliders have gone when I was editing it while editor was buggy I guess...
Pyramid
7 posts
Joined July 2011
Pyramid
Bad mod
14:31 PyramidX: nu ko, vajag mods, ne?
14:32 nomen: davaj
14:32 PyramidX: link pls
14:32 *nomen is editing Owl City - When Can I See You Again? [nomalnormal]
14:32 nomen: opā
14:32 *nomen is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/220239 Owl City - When Can I See You Again?]
14:32 PyramidX: no link, hax
14:32 nomen: es Normal remap
14:32 nomen: tam mod nevaig
14:32 PyramidX: ok
14:33 PyramidX: k, test play
14:37 PyramidX: paldies par troll 100
14:37 nomen: haha
14:37 nomen: u suck
14:37 nomen: kāds troll 100
14:37 PyramidX: :(
14:37 PyramidX: no mod 4u
14:37 nomen: I take it back
14:37 PyramidX: ok ok
14:37 PyramidX: timing imo perfect
14:37 PyramidX: kads OD?
14:38 PyramidX: varbut palielinat
14:38 nomen: 7 or 8
14:38 nomen: hz
14:38 nomen: 5
14:38 nomen: wtf
14:38 PyramidX: un btw neesmu pro moder tapec viss shi nav 100% ko vajag izdarit
14:38 PyramidX: lol
14:38 PyramidX: mazak par 7 neliek
14:39 nomen: es 5 noteikti neliku
14:39 nomen: sapisies esmu
14:39 PyramidX: peppy uzlieka
14:39 PyramidX: kad tu neskatijies esi
14:39 nomen: mhmm
14:40 PyramidX: ok ta ka timing perfect
14:40 PyramidX: jaskatas placing
14:40 PyramidX: tur es pamaniju
14:40 PyramidX: pie beigam
14:41 PyramidX: bija mazliet accelerated spacing
14:41 PyramidX: ta vajag? vai nejaushi
14:41 nomen: kurā vietā taisini?
14:41 PyramidX: paga, atradishu tulit
14:42 PyramidX: 02:04:204
14:43 PyramidX: tur kur yellow combo sakas
14:43 nomen: tu vari copy
14:43 PyramidX: tur visiem spacing vienads?
14:43 PyramidX: 02:04:328 (1) -
14:43 PyramidX: shi
14:43 PyramidX: 02:08:078 (1) -
14:43 PyramidX: un shito
14:43 nomen: itkā jā, bet tad es labāk tur kkādus star jampus
14:43 PyramidX: var gan
14:44 PyramidX: tikai ja star
14:44 PyramidX: tad nopietni tur ideal placing vajag
14:45 PyramidX: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629138
14:45 PyramidX: 5 un 7
14:45 PyramidX: tas es vai tur 7 mazliet parak padaudz pa labi?
14:46 nomen: iezīmē abus un CTRL+H
14:46 nomen: varēs redzēt
14:47 PyramidX: bet tas vienk swapo
14:47 nomen: nu ja spaidi ctrl+h un viņi abi stāv uz vietas
14:47 nomen: tad ir simetriski
14:47 nomen: ja viņi tur nekustas pa vienu pikseli
14:48 PyramidX: nu ja itka normali tur, sorry
14:48 PyramidX: hitsoundus nav ja?
14:50 nomen: ir
14:50 nomen: nu savi nē
14:50 PyramidX: 02:42:765 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
14:50 PyramidX: kkads patterns neipashi skaists
14:50 PyramidX: var labnak uztaisit
14:50 PyramidX: labak*
14:51 PyramidX: imo parak daudz doubletapus uz vienas vietas
14:52 PyramidX: dazhus var sadalit uz divam kuri citas vietas stav
14:53 PyramidX: 03:07:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
14:53 PyramidX: shi piemeram
14:53 PyramidX: vienk kkadu konkretu problemu mapei nav
14:53 PyramidX: gandriz ideala
14:54 PyramidX: tikai var vairak interesantus patternus un ipashi vairs neko
14:54 PyramidX: es vel pec shi visa paskatishos ka ta taiko spele, tur timing ideali uztverams
14:59 nomen: maybe tur tās beigas var kkā savādāk,
14:59 nomen: tik nezinu kā
14:59 PyramidX: aaaa, tavs pm man FC taiko salauza :(
14:59 nomen: uzliec lai nerāda kamēr spēlē
14:59 nomen: :3
15:03 PyramidX: vienalga uz FC
15:04 PyramidX: bet labi ka es paspeleju to ar taiko
15:04 PyramidX: es pamaniju
15:04 PyramidX: ir daudz daljas kura vienk tukshas
15:04 PyramidX: uz 2 sek apmeram
15:04 PyramidX: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629168
15:04 PyramidX: timing 100%
15:05 PyramidX: un ritms loti vienads gandriz 70% no mapes
15:06 PyramidX: vot paskaties to auto uz taiko, sapratisi par ko es runaju
15:07 nomen: nu tas ka taiko ritms vienāds... nav jau pašmapota tā taiko mape
15:08 PyramidX: ne es saprotu
15:08 PyramidX: ne par taiko runa
15:08 PyramidX: osu tapat, vienk taiko vieglak redzet
15:08 nomen: kā tu domā ritms vienāds
15:08 PyramidX: ne nu shi hards, nevis insane tapec tas ir vienalga ok
15:08 PyramidX: nu gruti ar vardiem patiekt
15:10 nomen: 02:43:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
15:10 nomen: ko tad ar šo man darīt
15:11 PyramidX: paga kamer neesmu aizmirsis vietu
15:11 PyramidX: 00:56:125 (5,6) -
15:11 PyramidX: varbut pec 5 beigam
15:11 PyramidX: uz slideri beigam ielikt vel vienu apli?
15:12 nomen: ok
15:12 nomen: 00:57:297 -
15:12 nomen: tad te ar lieku
15:12 PyramidX: ja var ari tur
15:13 PyramidX: ar par to ko tu man devi 2:43
15:13 PyramidX: kas tur par problemu?
15:13 nomen: tu teici ka patterns nesmuks
15:13 PyramidX: a
15:13 PyramidX: hmm
15:14 PyramidX: nu ja tur 7 nevis 6
15:14 PyramidX: varbut kka
15:14 PyramidX: simetriski tos 6 un 7 centra?
15:14 nomen: ok
15:14 nomen: 01:26:828 (1) -
15:14 nomen: te pēkšņi spacing mainas
15:15 nomen: domā ir ok?
15:15 nomen: no 8 uz 1
15:15 PyramidX: nu varbut pietuvinat mazliet ja, tas nav insane
15:15 PyramidX: es nevaru teikt vai parak gruti vai ne, man viegli
15:16 nomen: nu nav jau grūts
15:16 PyramidX: nu ja
15:16 nomen: bet vai neliekas jocīgi
15:17 nomen: ka pēkšņi tikai 1 slaideris tālāk
15:17 PyramidX: a kapec gan ne?
15:17 PyramidX: bet imo
15:18 PyramidX: tapat jau parak viegls ka hard xD
15:18 nomen: varbūt kautkur 1/4's ielikt
15:18 nomen: bet nu nezinu...
15:18 PyramidX: ja, butu loti labi ja atradisi kkur
15:19 nomen: vienā vitā jau neder
15:19 nomen: visa mape 1/2's un pēkšņi kkur random 1/4's
15:19 PyramidX: a tu taisisi insane? vai shi hardest diff bus?
15:19 PyramidX: nu a ko?
15:19 nomen: šī hardest
15:19 nomen: 128bpm
15:19 PyramidX: ok, nu tad vajag kkur vismaz 2 vietas
15:19 nomen: negribas insane uz 128bpm taisīt
15:19 PyramidX: ielikt 1/4
15:21 nomen: kkur kiai
15:21 PyramidX: beigas
15:21 nomen: visos trīs kiai kkur jasaliek
15:21 PyramidX: tris?
15:21 PyramidX: a diffos
15:21 nomen: es beigas uztaisīju ar 1/2 mazu spacingu
15:21 nomen: man ir trīs kiai vietas
15:21 PyramidX: shi viena diffa?
15:22 nomen: nu jā
15:22 nomen: tak redzi oražās līnijas
15:22 nomen: 3
15:23 PyramidX: a ne parak daudz?
15:23 nomen: nope
15:23 PyramidX: dazhi vairak par 2 neliek
15:23 PyramidX: hmm
15:23 PyramidX: nu ok ja tie izskatas labi
15:25 PyramidX: bus update?
15:25 PyramidX: lol
15:25 PyramidX: labi paskatishos easy tad
15:25 nomen: salikšu 1/4's
15:25 nomen: tad update
15:25 PyramidX: ok
15:27 PyramidX: 01:32:219 (2,3) -
15:27 PyramidX: easy diffa
15:27 PyramidX: ctrl + h tos maina vietam mazliet
15:28 PyramidX: jasaliek tos labak
15:28 nomen: ā, pag man Hard japabeidz
15:28 nomen: xD
15:28 PyramidX: a ok
15:28 PyramidX: saki kad pabeigsi
15:35 nomen: ok pabeigts
15:35 nomen: es viņu update lai vari vēlreiz paskatīties
15:35 PyramidX: ok
15:35 PyramidX: tu jau updeitoji?
15:36 nomen: sec
15:36 nomen: tūlīt
15:36 PyramidX: ok
15:36 nomen: ir
15:36 PyramidX: ok updated
15:41 PyramidX: ok
15:41 PyramidX: muuuch better
15:41 nomen: 01:09:367 -
15:41 nomen: manliekas te arī vaig apli
15:41 nomen: vai to triplu pārvietot
15:41 PyramidX: pec dzeltena kombo?
15:42 nomen: jā, pašam neptatīk ka tripls zems apļa
15:42 PyramidX: ja manuprat to labak cita vieta
15:42 PyramidX: triplu
15:42 PyramidX: vai aplju zem ta
15:43 PyramidX: tripls lai paliek ka stack
15:43 nomen: es to triplu uz (1) pārvietoju
15:43 nomen: dzelteno 1
15:43 PyramidX: a ja, ta ari ok
15:44 PyramidX: tur bija viens stacks uz kura es visi 100 dabuju
15:44 PyramidX: bet man liekas tas mana kluda
15:44 nomen: 02:28:234 (5) -
15:45 nomen: kad pats spēlēju knapi pamanīju viņu
15:46 nomen: ai labi, salaboju to
15:46 PyramidX: 01:14:640 (2,3,4) -
15:46 PyramidX: shitais
15:46 PyramidX: hmm
15:46 nomen: likt 4 uzreiz aiz slaidera?
15:47 PyramidX: ne es ne par to
15:47 PyramidX: tur timing ir ok?
15:47 PyramidX: kka izskatas mazliet off
15:47 nomen: nu tur vokālu galīgi neiet kopā
15:47 nomen: tapēc
15:48 PyramidX: nu lai paliek tad
15:48 nomen: tur ir izstiepts viens vārds
15:48 nomen: bet es tur atstarpi uzlicis esmu
15:49 PyramidX: ja ok, atstarpe risinas to problemu
15:49 nomen: ja lieku četrus pēc tā slaidera tad labak izkalusas
15:49 nomen: http://puu.sh/289ol
15:49 nomen: šitā ir ok
15:49 PyramidX: jap ir ok
15:52 PyramidX: ipashi neko citu problematisko ar hardu neredzu
15:52 nomen: kādus pāris 1/4's ielikšu kur iederas
15:53 PyramidX: ok xD
15:53 PyramidX: lai citiem butu ko modot
15:53 nomen: ā un hitsound tagad jasaliek vietās kuras labotas D:
15:53 nomen: labi varam Easy paskatīties
15:54 PyramidX: ja, tur kur radiju paga
15:54 PyramidX: 01:32:219 (2,3) -
15:54 PyramidX: sheit
15:54 PyramidX: paskaties ar ctrl + h
15:54 nomen: nu jā
15:54 nomen: jo (4) nav mapei pa vidam
15:55 PyramidX: hmm
15:55 PyramidX: varbut tad uzlici to pa vidam lai uzskatitos labak?
15:55 nomen: varu 3 ar 4 vietām samainīt
15:55 PyramidX: var ari ta
15:55 nomen: tad varu simetriski dabūt
15:55 PyramidX: easy diffus maz kas modo xD
15:56 nomen: nu tur visu uz baltajiem tickiem
15:56 nomen: un lai flow ir
15:56 nomen: easy gatavs
15:56 PyramidX: ja, ta ari visi dara xD
15:56 PyramidX: es skatijos
15:56 PyramidX: tur dazhi slider
15:57 PyramidX: negludi curved kka mazliet
15:57 PyramidX: 02:06:906 (4) -
15:57 PyramidX: piemeram shitais
15:57 PyramidX: ta var?
15:57 PyramidX: 02:05:500 (2) -
15:58 PyramidX: piemeram tadi ir gludi
15:58 nomen: domā visus bez sarkanā kvadrātiņa?
16:01 PyramidX: ja
16:01 PyramidX: ja ta var tad ok
16:01 nomen: D:
16:01 PyramidX: vienk izskatas labak imo
16:01 PyramidX: ne tas vienk suggestion
16:01 PyramidX: es neesmu pro mapper vai modder xD
16:03 nomen: es domāju vari post topikā
16:03 PyramidX: ok tad
Kyouren
5,687 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
can i am post video?
nomen
539 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
nomen

gokugohan12468 wrote:

can i am post video?
Sorry, I am not following.
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Hi, from ♥Moe Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[All diffs]
00:47:219 - add finish
01:02:219 - ^
01:17:219 - ^
01:50:969 - ^
02:05:969 - ^
02:20:969 - ^
02:50:969 - ^
03:05:969 - ^
03:20:969 - ^
[Hard]
01:50:969 - Start Kiai here
00:24:953 (2) - to round about 00:25:422 (3)
00:26:125 (6) - ^
00:30:578 (1) - to round about 00:31:047 (2)
01:02:687 (2,3,4) - this triplet don't fit music
01:06:437 (1,2,3) - ^
01:10:187 (1,2,3) - ^
01:52:492 (6) - move to 01:52:726
02:06:437 (1,2,3) - this triplet don't fit music
02:15:109 (2) - make triplet instead this slider
02:28:469 (5,1) - switch NC
[Normal]
01:50:969 - Start Kiai here
03:05:969 (4,1) - switch NC
[Easy]
00:31:750 (1,2) - switch NC
00:32:219 (2) - remove NC
00:35:969 (4,1) - switch NC
nomen
539 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
nomen
Thanks you.
primrose
primrose
Mod :o

Hard diff
00:19:328 (7) - Don't stack this with 00:18:859 (6) - , looks confusing imo..
00:33:156 (6) - Delete this, I think it's better
Sorry for short mod, I hope this map ranked soon :D
Delis
1,442 posts
Joined May 2012
Delis
from in-game PM~

[General]

02:35:734 - Kiaitime start?

03:23:078 ~ 03:24:719
03:26:828 ~ 03:28:469
Do not you make?

[Easy]

HD +1 ?
00:29:406 (1,3) - symmetry slider
00:34:094 (2) - 00:35:031 (3) this same
00:50:031 (1) - move to x:348 y:184
00:50:500 (2) - ^ x:304 y:92
00:52:375 (1) - 2glid left
01:09:250 (3,3) - same slider with other
01:25:656 (4) - cave slider ?
01:31:281 (1,5) - symmetry slider
01:42:062 (4) - same slider with other
01:56:594 (2) - move to x:112 y:272
01:57:531 (3) - move to x:204 y:112
01:58:469 (4) - move to x:296 y:272
02:01:750 (4) - 1glid left and spacing
02:14:406 (2) - same slider with other ;w;
02:36:906 (4) - same as the previous slider
02:42:531 (3) - ^
02:53:312 (3,4) - 02:52:844 (2) same as y: position
02:54:250 (5,2) - symmetry slider
03:08:312 (3) - symmetry to 03:06:437 (1) ?
03:11:594 (4) -
SPOILER
03:17:219 (3) - 1glid left

[Normal]

00:20:031 (5) - 1glid right
00:23:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - slider form same with other
00:39:250 - add object and add finish
00:56:359 (4) - move to x:220 y:284
01:17:219 (2) - remove clap ?
01:56:594 (3,4) - 1glid down ?
02:10:187 (4) - same slider to 02:08:078 (1)
02:11:828 (3) - 2glid right
02:12:062 (4) - 1glid right
02:14:875 (2) - symmetry to 02:13:937 (1)
02:16:750 (5) - hmm.. 2glid up ?

[Hard]

AR -1 ?

00:26:125 (5) - add clap sliderend ?
00:31:984 (5) - slider end point 1glid up and 00:33:156 (6) stack
00:34:797 (5,7) - not symmetry ;w;
00:39:484 (2,3) - 1glid up
00:47:219 - volume +5 ?
00:48:859 (6) - move to x:246 y:96 ?
00:54:015 (7,8) - hmm.. more beautiful
SPOILER
00:55:422 (3) - 00:56:125 (5) this object rotate and Ctrl + G
00:58:234 (3) - move to x:368 y:68 ?
01:01:750 (6) - 1glid left ?
01:15:344 (1) - add finish ?
01:30:344 (2) - 2glid left
01:31:047 - add object
01:34:797 (4,5) - spacing
01:35:734 (1,5) - symmetry slider ?
01:37:609 (1) - slider end point 1glid left
01:43:234 - I like this
SPOILER
01:52:609 (1,2,3) -
SPOILER
01:57:765 (1) - spacing ?
02:01:047 (5,6) - 2glid up and right
02:01:281 (6,8) - i like symmetry slider
02:07:726 (7) - move to x:96 y:160 ?
02:10:187 (1,2) - bad slider ;_;
02:16:047 - hmm.. here is lonesome
02:16:281 (1) - stack to 02:15:344 (4)
02:28:469 (1,2,3,4) - Some look bad..
02:32:219 (4,5,6) - ^
02:43:703 (3) - x:164 y:192
02:47:453 (2) - x:308 y:260
03:09:719 (1,4) - that straight slider is more fit 'w'

poor modding sorry,i'm beginner :P
nomen
539 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
nomen

Awoken- wrote:

Mod :o

Hard diff
00:19:328 (7) - Don't stack this with 00:18:859 (6) - , looks confusing imo..
00:33:156 (6) - Delete this, I think it's better
Sorry for short mod, I hope this map ranked soon :D
Well, you tried but sorry, your mod is too poor and also I like the way I have better.

DELiS wrote:

from in-game PM~

[General]

02:35:734 - Kiaitime start?

03:23:078 ~ 03:24:719
03:26:828 ~ 03:28:469
Do not you make?

[Easy]

HD +1 ?
00:29:406 (1,3) - symmetry slider
00:34:094 (2) - 00:35:031 (3) this same
00:50:031 (1) - move to x:348 y:184
00:50:500 (2) - ^ x:304 y:92
00:52:375 (1) - 2glid left
01:09:250 (3,3) - same slider with other
01:25:656 (4) - cave slider ?
01:31:281 (1,5) - symmetry slider
01:42:062 (4) - same slider with other
01:56:594 (2) - move to x:112 y:272
01:57:531 (3) - move to x:204 y:112
01:58:469 (4) - move to x:296 y:272
02:01:750 (4) - 1glid left and spacing
02:14:406 (2) - same slider with other ;w;
02:36:906 (4) - same as the previous slider
02:42:531 (3) - ^
02:53:312 (3,4) - 02:52:844 (2) same as y: position
02:54:250 (5,2) - symmetry slider
03:08:312 (3) - symmetry to 03:06:437 (1) ?
03:11:594 (4) -
SPOILER
03:17:219 (3) - 1glid left

[Normal]

00:20:031 (5) - 1glid right
00:23:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - slider form same with other
00:39:250 - add object and add finish
00:56:359 (4) - move to x:220 y:284
01:17:219 (2) - remove clap ?
01:56:594 (3,4) - 1glid down ?
02:10:187 (4) - same slider to 02:08:078 (1)
02:11:828 (3) - 2glid right
02:12:062 (4) - 1glid right
02:14:875 (2) - symmetry to 02:13:937 (1)
02:16:750 (5) - hmm.. 2glid up ?

[Hard]

AR -1 ?

00:26:125 (5) - add clap sliderend ?
00:31:984 (5) - slider end point 1glid up and 00:33:156 (6) stack
00:34:797 (5,7) - not symmetry ;w;
00:39:484 (2,3) - 1glid up
00:47:219 - volume +5 ?
00:48:859 (6) - move to x:246 y:96 ?
00:54:015 (7,8) - hmm.. more beautiful
SPOILER
00:55:422 (3) - 00:56:125 (5) this object rotate and Ctrl + G
00:58:234 (3) - move to x:368 y:68 ?
01:01:750 (6) - 1glid left ?
01:15:344 (1) - add finish ?
01:30:344 (2) - 2glid left
01:31:047 - add object
01:34:797 (4,5) - spacing
01:35:734 (1,5) - symmetry slider ?
01:37:609 (1) - slider end point 1glid left
01:43:234 - I like this
SPOILER
01:52:609 (1,2,3) -
SPOILER
01:57:765 (1) - spacing ?
02:01:047 (5,6) - 2glid up and right
02:01:281 (6,8) - i like symmetry slider
02:07:726 (7) - move to x:96 y:160 ?
02:10:187 (1,2) - bad slider ;_;
02:16:047 - hmm.. here is lonesome
02:16:281 (1) - stack to 02:15:344 (4)
02:28:469 (1,2,3,4) - Some look bad..
02:32:219 (4,5,6) - ^
02:43:703 (3) - x:164 y:192
02:47:453 (2) - x:308 y:260
03:09:719 (1,4) - that straight slider is more fit 'w'

poor modding sorry,i'm beginner :P
And thanks to you~~
LimeGreenTeknii
188 posts
Joined March 2008
LimeGreenTeknii
Don't forget the video! http://www.mediafire.com/?1ea694mpxdqoiie A beatmap with a background video is always more interesting than a beatmap with a static background, in my opinion.
Ceani
169 posts
Joined February 2012
Ceani
Terrible mod :D
Hard
00:30:578 (1) - add whistle at end?
00:31:984 (5) - whistle?
00:33:625 (1,5) - whistle on 1 and at end on 5
00:35:265 (6) - whistle againn?
there's more whistles...
00:35:969 (1) - whistle here too?
00:38:547 (5,6) - whistle?
00:39:719 (3) - whistle (really not necessary thought)

kthanksbai
pleasedon'tkillmeeee
Natureshadow
26 posts
Joined May 2013
Natureshadow
I really like this beatmap. Background video would be nice like Jackubi said, but overall it sounds and plays very nicely. :D
Maybe a few hit circles here and there that I would change, but I've played way worse songs that are already ranked. ^.^
Forseen
363 posts
Joined November 2010
Forseen
Davaj, vēlreiz.

General
  1. Varētu piestrādāt pie blanketiem, piemēram, 00:32:219 (1) Easy diffā atstāj palielu caurumu un tā īsti smuki ''neapsedz'' 00:31:750 (4), tas pats arī ar 00:52:375 (1) - ''neapsedz'' 00:51:906 (4), bet nu es te pārāk piekasos. Pirmajā gadījumā daudz izskatīgāk būtu kaut kas līdzīgs: http://puu.sh/3cHKr.jpg, bet tad tev nāktos daudz vietās mainīt spacingu, tāpēc lai nu paliek. Palabošu tikai tos slaiderus, kuri tur daudz neko neietekmētu (pārāk piekasīgs, hue).
Easy
  1. 00:21:437 (1,2,3) - paprovē kaut ko tamlīdzīgu, lai viss nav nostackots: http://puu.sh/3cGQs.jpg.
  2. 00:26:594 (3) - trīs gridus pa labi, vienu uz leju, lai (1,2,3) izskatītos ''taisnāki''.
  3. 00:35:969 (4) - nepatīk man tas lielais tukšums tam blanketam vidū, paprovē tādu: http://puu.sh/3cHdR.jpg.
  4. 00:35:969 (4) - liec jaunu combo, lai ir kā tam iepriekšējam garajam 00:32:219 (1) slaiderim
  5. 00:37:375 (1) - noņem jaunu combo.
  6. 00:58:000 (2) - būtu labi, ja šī slaidera vietā varētu nokopēt 00:56:594 (4), tad Ctrl+H un Ctrl+G.
  7. 01:05:969 (2) - divus gridus uz leju.
  8. 01:21:437 (2,3,4) - tā: http://puu.sh/3cIGD.jpg.
  9. 01:38:312 (3) - smukāk ''apsdz'' 01:37:375 (1).
  10. 01:41:125 (3) - parāk tuvu iepriekšējam slaiderim.
  11. 02:15:344 (3,4) - tas stacks parāk ''uzmācas'' 02:13:937 (1), izdari tā: http://puu.sh/3cJge.jpg.
  12. 03:07:375 (2) - izdzēs slaideri, aizstāj ar diviem apļiem: http://puu.sh/3cNXV.jpg (neaizmirsti pievienot clapu vietā, kur iepriekš beidzās slaideris).
  13. 03:14:875 (4) - viens grids pa labi, viens uz augšu.

    Kopumā tipisks Easy, vēl sazin ko piebilst, bet nu ar tiem slaideriem varētu kaut kā nedaudz kreatīvāk un akurātāk. 02:28:937 (2,3,4) daudz labāk izskatītos, ja abi slaideri būtu vienādi, apmēram tā: http://puu.sh/3cKq8.jpg, un tamlīdzīgi sīkumi.
Normal
  1. 00:38:312 (4,5,6) - novieto kā taisnu līniju virs slaidera: http://puu.sh/3cKFN.jpg.
  2. 01:07:609 (1) - šo noliec vienā taisnē ar 01:06:672 (2), kaut kas tāds: http://puu.sh/3cKPd.jpg. Līdz ar to pabīdot 01:08:312 (2), arī tas būs vienā taisnē ar 01:06:437 (1). Izdomā, kā pārvietot tālākos elementus, kas seko pirms 01:13:234 (1) spinera.
  3. 01:30:344 (1) - apsedz smukāk nākamo slaideri: http://puu.sh/3cL4m.jpg.
  4. 01:33:859 (3) - pārvieto vienā taisnē ar iepriekšējo apli, tas ir, trīs gridus lejup.
  5. 02:31:750 (5) - šo būtu vēlams nolikt pa kreisi no 02:30:812 (4): http://puu.sh/3cLdK.jpg.
  6. 03:16:281 (1) - aizstāj ar slaideri, kas būtu simetrisks y asij. 03:09:250 (6) šis būtu labs piemērs. Īsti nezinu, vai šeit ir nepieciešams jauns combo. Skaties pats.

    Man šķiet nedaudz pagrūts priekš Normal diffas, bet tas ir no big deal, ritmam seko un spēlēt var.
Hard
  1. 00:20:031 (1) - noņem jaunu combo.
  2. 00:21:203 (3) - pievieno jaunu combo.
  3. 00:21:906 (1) - noņem jaunu combo.
  4. 00:31:984 (5) - pievieno whistle. Tas ir, pašam slaiderim, ne slaidera sākumam (beigās whistle lai paliek).
  5. 00:54:953 (1,2) - Ctrl+G.
  6. 01:29:406 (8) - pievieno reverse, izdzēs 01:29:875 (9).
  7. 01:39:719 (6) - arī te pievieno whistle, kaut kā tīk vairāk nekā bez.
  8. 02:05:851 - triplets izklausās labāk, tāpēc novieto te apli.
  9. 02:27:297 (2) - pārlieku tuvu iepriekšējam slaiderim, pabīdi zemāk, un atstarpi starp 02:27:765 (3,4) pataisi lielāku.
  10. 02:30:109 (7,8,9) - novieto, lai visi nebūtu stackoti.
  11. 02:31:047 (1) - izdzēs un pieaddo apli 02:31:281. Tu šeit seko vokālam (neaizmirsti par jaunu combo).
  12. 02:39:484 (1,2,3,4,5) - šādi: http://puu.sh/3cMx2.jpg (neaizmirsti hitsoundus).

    Te jau ar patterniem nedaudz kreatīvāk un jautrāk. Pievērs uzmanību, kad tu gribi sekot vokālam un kad mūzikai. Neizklausās labi, ka, sitot pa vokāla noti, aši parādās melodijas nots, kaut gan vokālā nav pabeigts konkrētais teikums/vārds. No big deal
Vsjo, never again. Divas stundas.
Gan jau esmu nejauši nepareizos ciparus iekavās iekopējis, bet laiki ir pareizi, tā kā visam vajadzētu būt ok.
nomen
539 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
nomen
Labi, labi, še tev 2 kudosu.
Pheydenz
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Joined February 2013
Pheydenz
Please add a Video :D
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