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Capital Inicial - Natasha (Acoustic Ver.)

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Rafaelmtolegal
00:43:305 (4,5,6) - add whistle
02:40:093 (1) - Remove this fuckin finish retardado
01:44:100 (5) - ^
[Luanny]
af cade mat?
afafafafafafafafaf posta em cueui
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

rickyboi wrote:

Hello from mod4mod

General
- How about making a normal difficulty?

34sy
00:12:108 (4) - This looks awkward with an arc like that. It's best to make things simple, just give it a good curve. its good
00:17:307 - If you're going wth consistent clapping every 1/4 note then add clap here. You can do this by clicking the slider then clicking the end again so it's going to focus on that part. sure
00:18:907 - ^ same
00:19:707 - ^
00:20:507 - ^
00:30:506 (5) - Could you position this a bit higher? It's too low on screen.its good
00:36:106 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:30:506 it's too low on screen.its good
00:38:505 (1) - CTRL+J? This should be placed further away from your previous slider. Please fix the spacing.idk, i think its understandable
01:10:503 (1) - Add finishok
01:10:503 (1) - to 01:22:502 (4) - It would be a good idea to also add claps in this part.hm, i think it is ok
01:23:301 (1) - Add finish sure
01:36:100 (1,2) - Add more curve like this? http://puu.sh/PtD7 sure
01:42:500 (1) - Add finish ok
01:48:899 (1) - ^ok
02:04:898 (1) - ^ok
02:06:498 (3,4,5,6) - How about this? http://puu.sh/PtGr i thinks its good
02:19:349 - Delete uneeded green line.its needed
02:20:909 (1) - to 02:58:092 (5) - Add claps? nah
02:59:692 (1) - Silence this spinner with 5% volume ok


h4rd
00:31:106 (8) - Too low on screen, position it a little bit higher. its good
00:40:005 (1) - Add finish ok
00:43:305 (4,5,6) - Remove finishes. It doesn't fit the song. its good
00:49:304 (3,4,5) - ^ same its good
01:23:302 (1) - Add finish ok
01:29:701 (1) - ^ok
01:37:700 (5) - I suggest you add a new combo here.ok
01:40:900 (5) - ^ok
01:44:100 (5) - ^ok
01:50:599 (1) - Add finishok
01:53:999 (4,5) - remove finishno
02:00:398 (6,7) - ^no
02:07:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Might be better if this wasn't stacked. How about forming a curve with it?i like it stacked haha
02:17:297 (1) - Remove New combo.its good
2:19:349 - Remove uneeded green line. its needed
02:20:909 (1) - Add finish ok
02:24:709 (3,4) - Too low on screen. position it a bit higher. its good
02:40:093 (1) - Add finish ok
This hard diff is pretty good already, you just need to work on your hitsounds and keep them consistent as much as possible.


This is all I got, good map and good luck \o/
Thanks your mod was really helpful
Frozen Child
34sy
00:38:505 (1) - não acho que um slider desse deva ser usado nesses casos, no fim dele é um novo combo.

h4rd
00:09:708 (1,2) - não é um combo legal.
00:25:306 (1) - remove new combo
00:25:906 (1) - poe new combo
02:07:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - porque?
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

Frozen Child wrote:

34sy
00:38:505 (1) - não acho que um slider desse deva ser usado nesses casos, no fim dele é um novo combo. ficou lgl

h4rd
00:09:708 (1,2) - não é um combo legal. e s
00:25:306 (1) - remove new combo ok
00:25:906 (1) - poe new combo ok
02:07:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - porque? se ouvir ao fundo vai perceber
MouseEasy
h4rd

00:07:108 (2) - pq esse hitsound? huehue
00:09:708 (1,2) - não é um combo legal mesmo ^
00:09:708 (3,4,5) - esses sliders são meio estranhos, tão deixando a música mais lenta do que já é
01:31:701 (7) - essa nota escondida atrapalha e MUITO quando alguém vai jogar de hidden, dá pra mover ela dali?

Tá bem mapeado, não deu pra achar muitos erros aí não :D
E vê se faz uma diff normal pra isso aí também :x
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

ALust wrote:

h4rd

00:07:108 (2) - pq esse hitsound? huehue é lgl ta td bem agr
00:09:708 (1,2) - não é um combo legal mesmo ^ é sim mano n mete o loco
00:09:708 (3,4,5) - esses sliders são meio estranhos, tão deixando a música mais lenta do que já é nd a ve ta mo daora
01:31:701 (7) - essa nota escondida atrapalha e MUITO quando alguém vai jogar de hidden, dá pra mover ela dali? aposto que o silvia n diria isso

Tá bem mapeado, não deu pra achar muitos erros aí não :D
E vê se faz uma diff normal pra isso aí também :x
valeu mlk
Katsuri
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pq meu pulso e meu pinto são iguais?
Alarido
O 34sy tá muito bem mapeado mesmo! Fosse por mim, taria RANKED 'gorinha!

o h4rd ainda testarei ^^
[Luanny]
VAMO Q VAMO MLK
Topic Starter
fabriciorby
obrigado pelo incentivo pessoal
[Luanny]
no more kudos
Alarido
A melhor canção da MPB/Pop-rock em osu! Postada por um de nós!

fabriciorby wrote:

obrigado pelo incentivo pessoal
Vc merece...
Alarido
+ h4rd que a 34sy
&
+ 34sy que a h4rd.

n0rm41

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452,132,107299,1,8,0:0:0
428,180,107499,1,0,0:0:0
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316,76,115899,1,0,0:0:0
268,52,116099,1,2,0:0:0
164,88,116499,1,0,0:0:0
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412,132,118898,5,8,0:0:0
312,84,119298,1,8,0:0:0
200,84,119698,1,0,0:0:0
100,132,120098,1,8,0:0:0
100,132,120298,1,0,0:0:0
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192,272,122298,1,0,0:0:0
236,308,122498,1,2,0:0:0
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312,228,123698,2,0,P|252:220|204:236,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,228,124498,2,0,P|344:192|336:116,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
252,56,125298,5,0,0:0:0
208,96,125498,1,8,0:0:0
88,84,125898,1,0,0:0:0
100,144,126098,1,8,0:0:0
156,252,126498,1,8,0:0:0
172,192,126698,1,0,0:0:0
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204,212,128298,5,2,0:0:0
164,260,128498,1,0,0:0:0
104,260,128698,1,0,0:0:0
52,232,128898,1,2,0:0:0
156,168,129298,1,0,0:0:0
40,128,129698,2,2,P|193:57|277:198,1,363.000011077881
260,324,131697,5,0,0:0:0
308,288,131897,1,8,0:0:0
428,308,132297,1,0,0:0:0
416,248,132497,1,8,0:0:0
368,136,132897,1,8,0:0:0
332,184,133097,1,0,0:0:0
256,92,133497,2,8,P|200:192|256:296,1,242.000007385254
372,332,134697,5,2,0:0:0
428,304,134897,1,0,0:0:0
468,260,135097,1,0,0:0:0
472,200,135297,1,2,0:0:0
352,192,135697,2,0,P|296:172|284:96,1,121.000003692627,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,192,136497,2,0,P|408:172|420:96,1,121.000003692627,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,192,137297,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,137697,12,6,139247,0:0:0
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196,252,141709,2,0,P|136:224|116:164,1,131.99999597168,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,228,142509,2,0,P|232:168|280:176|256:96,1,131.99999597168,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,252,143309,2,0,P|376:224|400:160,1,131.99999597168,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,64,144309,6,0,P|168:88,1,65.9999979858399,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,136,144709,1,8,0:0:0
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340,188,145709,2,0,P|328:236|256:260,1,131.99999597168,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,146309,1,2,0:0:0
364,112,146709,1,2,0:0:0
408,236,147109,1,2,0:0:0
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172,196,152094,2,0,P|184:148|256:124,1,131.99999597168,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,72,153894,5,0,0:0:0
312,108,154094,1,8,0:0:0
256,144,154294,1,0,0:0:0
200,108,154494,1,8,0:0:0
256,228,154894,1,0,0:0:0
388,208,155294,2,0,P|368:264|304:288,1,131.99999597168,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
124,208,156094,2,0,P|144:264|208:288,1,131.99999597168,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,152,159294,2,0,P|280:84|332:60,1,131.99999597168,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,292,172892,5,2,0:0:0
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320,272,173492,1,8,0:0:0
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256,92,174492,1,2,0:0:0
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228,156,177692,1,2,0:0:0
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72,108,178292,2,2,P|140:56|140:92|208:80,1,131.99999597168
256,192,179292,12,0,181692,0:0:0



[Luanny] wrote:

no more kudos
no kudos needed.
kriers
just an European mod passing through

[34sy]

00:36:505 (3) - a double stack is way too hard for an easy diff. Please find another solution?
01:44:100 (3) - move this slider to x:196 y:240 so that it fits nicely to 01:43:300 (2) - :D


[H4rd]

First of all I would like to see slider tick rate 2! This is because many beats aren't getting enough attention in those longer sliders, and it's easily solved this way.

00:15:907 - remove whistle and add a clap here. Would sound nice imo
00:16:107 (1) - add whistle
00:17:307 (4) - remove clap and add a clap on 00:17:507 (5) - for consistency in claps!
00:25:306 (7) - Ending slider on downbeat feels pretty bad imo. But I can understand since you map symmetry :o
00:36:505 (5) - this clap sounds out of place, please remove it?
00:38:505 - have spinner start on this tick to give the player some time to get into position
00:43:305 (4) - new combo here since it's on a white tick
00:45:105 (1) - I think it's safe to remove this combo and instead add a combo on 00:44:905 (1) -
01:15:102 (6) - please remove this clap and instead place it on 01:14:902 (5) -
01:16:102 (9) - remove clap and add whistle so that it's consistent with 01:19:302 (1,2) -
01:31:301 (6) - add new combo here
01:38:900 (4) - should be a clap, not a whistle
02:07:498 (1) - add whistle
02:56:692 (3) - remove this finish so it follows the same pattern as the previous finishing hitsounds

Such a good map! Very nice symmetry style :)
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

kriers wrote:

just an European mod passing through

[34sy]

00:36:505 (3) - a double stack is way too hard for an easy diff. Please find another solution? - D: i think it's unnecessary but thanks for pointing
01:44:100 (3) - move this slider to x:196 y:240 so that it fits nicely to 01:43:300 (2) - :D - yeahh


[H4rd]

First of all I would like to see slider tick rate 2! This is because many beats aren't getting enough attention in those longer sliders, and it's easily solved this way. - isn't that prohibited? i mean, i read somewhere that all diffs must have the same tick rate (?) but ok heh

00:15:907 - remove whistle and add a clap here. Would sound nice imo
00:16:107 (1) - add whistle
00:17:307 (4) - remove clap and add a clap on 00:17:507 (5) - for consistency in claps! - i think it's better the way it is heh
00:25:306 (7) - Ending slider on downbeat feels pretty bad imo. But I can understand since you map symmetry :o - haha sorry for that
00:36:505 (5) - this clap sounds out of place, please remove it? - same for 'consistency in claps' i think it's fine hm
00:38:505 - have spinner start on this tick to give the player some time to get into position - sure
00:43:305 (4) - new combo here since it's on a white tick - troo
00:45:105 (1) - I think it's safe to remove this combo and instead add a combo on 00:44:905 (1) - sure (lazy to put colored stuff)
01:15:102 (6) - please remove this clap and instead place it on 01:14:902 (5) - sure
01:16:102 (9) - remove clap and add whistle so that it's consistent with 01:19:302 (1,2) - sure
01:31:301 (6) - add new combo here - sure
01:38:900 (4) - should be a clap, not a whistle - sure
02:07:498 (1) - add whistle - sure
02:56:692 (3) - remove this finish so it follows the same pattern as the previous finishing hitsounds - i can't this one is different

Such a good map! Very nice symmetry style :)
thank you kriersssssssssssss :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
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Frostmourne

kriers wrote:

just an EuropeanAsian mod passing through
General
add tag "acoustic" ? maybe Acustico = acoustic in English ?
remove one banana from your tag as well , just one banana is enough lol
your preview points aren't set for both diffs so it's unrankable
your TitleUnicode and ArtistUnicode are still blank , add them manually through .osu file using Notepad as well
if you mean 34sy = Easy then this map is still unrankable, can you rename to Normal ?
because Easy go to Hard in the mapset is unrankable and I think this Easy diff can be a Normal diff as well

34sy
HP Drain quite low for this diff, raise it by 1 plzz to make it closer to Normal diff
00:36:905 (4,1) - can you use 1.2x spacing here ? , it's not recommended for the easiest diff
01:19:702 (4) - remove whistle here and add on the 01:20:102 (1) - 's head instead ? (remove whistle at the tail of this slider too)
it sounds along with these sliders quite well 01:20:902 (2,3,4) -
01:26:901 (2) - clap at the head instead ?
01:27:701 (3) - clap ?
01:47:699 (5) - clap at the last point ?
01:58:898 (1) - this comes too fast after spinner imo , maybe could you make a larger gap ? or you map instead of spinner
02:20:909 (1) - add new combo here
02:41:693 (2,3) - this spacing isn't recommended , change it to smaller please
02:46:893 (1) - come too fast after spinner imo
02:54:892 (4) - whistle head instead of tail ? if you want to follow the piano , it should be 02:55:092 (5) (red) which you don't have a note ;_;
02:56:892 (4) - finish at the last point of the slider (02:57:692) according to the music yeah !

h4rd
difficulty setting quite unbalance
HP Drain +1 and Overall difficulty +2 please
00:10:508 (3,4) - maybe jump here ? larger distance because vocal accents heavily more than other position
this is what I think , jump from 5 to 6 and 7 looks nice too !
00:30:906 (7) - move left 2 grid to completely stack with 00:29:306 (3) - so you need to move 00:31:306 (9) - right 2 grid too for symmetry
01:10:503 (1) - finish on the head of slider to go along with whistle too !
01:42:500 (1) - ^
02:04:898 (1) - ^
02:07:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - can't agree with this overmapping = =" , can you remove (2) (4) (6) ?
02:33:694 (2) - finish head ?
02:51:892 (1) - finish tail too ? , follow guitar voice !, if you add here , you should add on 02:51:293 (5) - too for finish
02:57:692 (6) - finish head

Hard diff has nice symmetry style, Easy diff(must be Normal) rhythms are played quite comfortably but hitsounds quite inconsistent but it's ok in play-mode

get more mods (4-5 mods might be pretty enough) and call me for a recheck!
I'm still not sure about bubbling this as it is right now, sorry :(
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

Frostmourne wrote:

kriers wrote:

just an EuropeanAsian mod passing through
General
add tag "acoustic" ? maybe Acustico = acoustic in English ? - sure
remove one banana from your tag as well , just one banana is enough lol - lol that's true fixed
your preview points aren't set for both diffs so it's unrankable
your TitleUnicode and ArtistUnicode are still blank , add them manually through .osu file using Notepad as well
if you mean 34sy = Easy then this map is still unrankable, can you rename to Normal ? - sure
because Easy go to Hard in the mapset is unrankable and I think this Easy diff can be a Normal diff as well

34sy
HP Drain quite low for this diff, raise it by 1 plzz to make it closer to Normal diff - fixed
00:36:905 (4,1) - can you use 1.2x spacing here ? , it's not recommended for the easiest diff - fixed
01:19:702 (4) - remove whistle here and add on the 01:20:102 (1) - 's head instead ? (remove whistle at the tail of this slider too)
it sounds along with these sliders quite well 01:20:902 (2,3,4) - hmmm I think's better the way it is
01:26:901 (2) - clap at the head instead ? ok
01:27:701 (3) - clap ? ok
01:47:699 (5) - clap at the last point ? ok
01:58:898 (1) - this comes too fast after spinner imo , maybe could you make a larger gap ? or you map instead of spinner - i hope it's better now
02:20:909 (1) - add new combo here lol i didn't see that
02:41:693 (2,3) - this spacing isn't recommended , change it to smaller please i hope it's better now hm
02:46:893 (1) - come too fast after spinner imo i hope it's fixed now
02:54:892 (4) - whistle head instead of tail ? if you want to follow the piano , it should be 02:55:092 (5) (red) which you don't have a note ;_; hahaha ): fixed
02:56:892 (4) - finish at the last point of the slider (02:57:692) according to the music yeah ! haha that's right

h4rd
difficulty setting quite unbalance
HP Drain +1 and Overall difficulty +2 please
00:10:508 (3,4) - maybe jump here ? larger distance because vocal accents heavily more than other position
this is what I think , jump from 5 to 6 and 7 looks nice too ! yeah it's good :o
00:30:906 (7) - move left 2 grid to completely stack with 00:29:306 (3) - so you need to move 00:31:306 (9) - right 2 grid too for symmetry good point here haha fixed
01:10:503 (1) - finish on the head of slider to go along with whistle too ! ok
01:42:500 (1) - ^
02:04:898 (1) - ^
02:07:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - can't agree with this overmapping = =" , can you remove (2) (4) (6) ? - but it follows the guitar (?)
02:33:694 (2) - finish head ? - sure
02:51:892 (1) - finish tail too ? , follow guitar voice !, if you add here , you should add on 02:51:293 (5) - too for finish - sure
02:57:692 (6) - finish head - ok

Hard diff has nice symmetry style, Easy diff(must be Normal) rhythms are played quite comfortably but hitsounds quite inconsistent but it's ok in play-mode

get more mods (4-5 mods might be pretty enough) and call me for a recheck!
I'm still not sure about bubbling this as it is right now, sorry :(
thank you very much, that was a rly helpful mod 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
nimi
tenho preguiça de cortar a log então desculpa se tem algo que possa ofender alguém aí

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17:04 fabriciorby: WINTINHA
17:04 fabriciorby: PRECISO D+ DO SEU MOD
17:04 fabriciorby: LINDA
17:04 fabriciorby: get more mods (4-5 mods might be pretty enough) and call me for a recheck!
17:06 Wiinter: OI
17:06 Wiinter: OI
17:06 Wiinter: OI
17:06 Wiinter: ME MANDA AGR QUE DOU IRC MOD
17:06 fabriciorby: agr vo sair
17:07 fabriciorby: mentira
17:08 *fabriciorby is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/169843 Capital Inicial - Natasha (Acustico)]
17:08 fabriciorby: eu vou comer e ja volto
17:08 Wiinter: tá
17:08 Wiinter: avisa qdo voltar
17:08 fabriciorby: ta ok
17:13 fabriciorby: wintinhazinha
17:13 fabriciorby: to aqui!!!
17:13 Wiinter: mas já
17:13 fabriciorby: eu fiz uma marmita
17:14 fabriciorby: e vim aqui
17:14 fabriciorby: p agilizar ne
17:14 Wiinter: nossa haha
17:14 fabriciorby: é pq tinha strogonoff
17:14 fabriciorby: na geladera
17:14 fabriciorby: só que era um restinho
17:14 fabriciorby: ai tava num potinho
17:14 Wiinter: ai que delicia
17:14 fabriciorby: aí taquei arroz
17:14 fabriciorby: e botei no microonda
17:14 fabriciorby: ta bommmm
17:15 Wiinter: ah sim
17:15 Wiinter: perai rapidao só deixa eu arrumar minha cama
17:15 Wiinter: que meu pai vai me trazer pipoca e vai fiar puto se ele ver a abgunça
17:16 fabriciorby: afs
17:16 fabriciorby: pipoca + whisky = mod bom
17:18 Wiinter: HAHAHA sem whisky
17:19 Wiinter: okokokokok
17:19 fabriciorby: sei
17:23 Wiinter: slider feio 00:30:506 (5) -
17:24 fabriciorby: qual diff wintinha
17:24 Wiinter: normal
17:27 fabriciorby: é uma obra prima
17:27 fabriciorby: o bd que fez
17:27 Wiinter: é feio pra caralho
17:27 Wiinter: mas beleza
17:27 Wiinter: 00:36:905 (4,1) - ta esquisito
17:28 Wiinter: parece que tá faltando alguma coisa
17:28 Wiinter: e o slider tá super comprido e booring
17:28 Wiinter: os spinners do hard são mt melhores
17:29 fabriciorby: -oi meyu pc reiniciou
17:29 fabriciorby: tem alguma outra coisa
17:29 fabriciorby: desculp
17:30 Wiinter: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/605480
17:31 fabriciorby: m,as isso é um easy
17:31 fabriciorby: !!!
17:31 fabriciorby: que o frostmune quis transformar em normal
17:31 fabriciorby: tem q deixar assim
17:31 fabriciorby: foi o bd que fez
17:31 Wiinter: e daí?
17:31 Wiinter: não é só porque é easy/normal que tem que ser um saco
17:33 fabriciorby: vc quer que eu faça um spinner ou o q
17:33 Wiinter: si
17:33 fabriciorby: mas eu achei que ficou bom esse slider af
17:34 Wiinter: tp não ficou péssimo
17:37 Wiinter: mas também não ficou ótimo
17:37 Wiinter: os spinners ficam melhor
17:37 fabriciorby: ta eu arrumei
17:38 Wiinter: foi proposital não ter claps aqui 01:34:101 (4,5) - ?
17:38 fabriciorby: easy?
17:38 Wiinter: sim
17:39 fabriciorby: n llembro
17:39 Wiinter: coloca então
17:39 fabriciorby: mas aí ao inves de claps tem whistles
17:39 Wiinter: mas tem som de clap
17:40 Wiinter: clap ta na bagaça errada 01:39:700 (4) -
17:40 Wiinter: meu que bagunça que tu fez com os hitsounds HGAHA
17:41 fabriciorby: fixd
17:41 fabriciorby: foi o bd (?)
17:41 fabriciorby: acho que fui eu
17:41 fabriciorby: sl
17:41 Wiinter: 01:40:500 (5,6) - nesses dois tb ta tudo trocado
17:42 Wiinter: e ah esqueci nc aqui 00:42:305 (2) -
17:42 fabriciorby: eu arrumei ai ja
17:44 Wiinter: 02:14:497 (6) - nc
17:44 fabriciorby: ok
17:44 fabriciorby: esse normal ficou bom ate
17:44 Wiinter: 02:30:494 (3) - ctrl g nisso aqui ficaria melhor pra manter o flow
17:44 Wiinter: fora os hitsounds que eu não compreendo ficou bom mesmo
17:44 fabriciorby: n posso
17:45 Wiinter: pq tu tá com preguiça de arrumar o resto?
17:45 fabriciorby: preguiça?
17:45 fabriciorby: n tem como
17:45 fabriciorby: arrumar isso
17:45 Wiinter: como não
17:46 Wiinter: o spacing já não tá regular
17:46 fabriciorby: ta vo ve
17:46 Wiinter: bom ce que sabe
17:46 fabriciorby: se bem que essas pattern nem precisa mt de spacing
17:47 Wiinter: bom
17:47 Wiinter: tem uma porrada de inconsistencia em hitsound
17:48 Wiinter: dá uma olhada nisso
17:48 fabriciorby: o mat falou que ta td bem
17:48 Wiinter: bom ce quem sabe
17:49 Wiinter: ok hard
17:49 Wiinter: 00:25:906 (1,2) - arruma esses sliders, o blanket tá porco
17:49 Wiinter: 00:34:906 (8) - stackeia com 00:33:706 (5) -
17:50 fabriciorby: blanket?
17:50 Wiinter: uhh tipo
17:50 Wiinter: não tá encaixando direito no 00:25:306 (7) -
17:50 Wiinter: deixa mais arredondadinho e bonitinho
17:52 fabriciorby: a
17:52 fabriciorby: é pq é dos slider velho q n fica redondo
17:52 fabriciorby: ja arrumo
17:52 Wiinter: 00:43:905 (3,4) - tá esquisito esse slider. faz isso seguindo o mesmo ritmo que tu seguiu aqui 00:50:004 (4,5,6,7,8) -
17:52 Wiinter: e sim, tem que deletar e fazer novo
17:53 Wiinter: 01:21:102 (3) - nazi mas coloca essa nota tipo uma grid mais pra baixo pra não ficar quase encostando no 01:20:702 (2) -
17:53 Wiinter: 01:22:902 (1) - tira esse nc, não serve pra nada
17:54 Wiinter: 01:39:300 (1) - ajeita esse blanket tb
17:54 Wiinter: 01:41:700 (5) - ^
17:55 Wiinter: 01:47:599 (5) - tá esquisisto isso Dx eu tiraria essa nota e colocaria uma em 01:47:499 - e outra em 01:47:699 -
17:56 Wiinter: tá vivo ai?
17:56 fabriciorby: to
17:57 Wiinter: ah tá
17:57 Wiinter: é que tu tá quieto
17:57 fabriciorby: to tentando arrumar os slider
17:57 Wiinter: ah s
17:57 Wiinter: quer que eu espere?
18:02 fabriciorby: pode ser eu to
18:02 fabriciorby: no nazi agr
18:02 Wiinter: k
18:07 fabriciorby: vo deixar o nc ta
18:07 fabriciorby: 01:22:902 (1) -
18:07 Wiinter: ce quem sabe
18:10 fabriciorby: acabei
18:10 Wiinter: 01:52:699 (2,3) - sliders meio feios
18:10 Wiinter: 01:59:699 (5) - ^
18:14 fabriciorby: o
18:15 fabriciorby: k
18:15 fabriciorby: eu refiz eles com o novo jeito la
18:15 Wiinter: 02:13:497 (2,3) - deixa o slider antes e a nota depois
18:16 Wiinter: 02:16:097 (5,6,7) - faz um triângulo decente >:
18:16 Wiinter: 02:25:309 (4) - ctrl g?
18:18 fabriciorby: ok
18:18 Wiinter: 02:27:295 (1,2) - sliders feios
18:19 Wiinter: e fim
18:19 fabriciorby: pq feio
18:20 Wiinter: meio tortos
18:20 fabriciorby: a
18:20 fabriciorby: bls
18:21 fabriciorby: obg <3
18:21 Wiinter: por nada
[Luanny]
GOGO FAB
pimp
mod as requested

Geral

Inconsistency in Tags: - [h4rd] : banana banana - [n0rm41] : acoustic banana

ja que voce tem acoustic nas tags, que tal tirar do titulo? (ou o contrario)

n0rm41

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 02:19:346 - snap to 02:19:349

00:19:307 (3) - new combo
00:37:905 - esse espaço entre o spinner e o slider poderia ser preenchido, poderia usar o mesmo slider que em 00:34:706 (5) , mas invertido verticalmente e em x408 y364 pra espelhar com 00:36:505 (3)
00:42:905 (2) - mude o clap para o inicio do slider, faz muito mais sentido
00:44:505 (4) - ^ e talvez um finish no longo tick branco?
00:46:505 (3) - adicione mais um whistle no final do slider? parece melhor do que sem nada la
00:49:304 (2) - clap?
00:53:304 (4,6) - whistle ?
01:30:101 (2) - whistle aki, pois voce adicionou um em 01:33:301 (2) -
01:39:300 (3) - new combo
01:55:299 (4) - new combo
02:01:698 (4) - ^
02:03:298 (1) - remove new combo
02:25:709 (1) - ^
02:27:295 (2) - new combo
02:28:894 (1) - remove new combo
02:30:494 (6) - new combo
02:32:094 (1) - remove new combo
02:34:094 (3) - new combo
02:43:293 (3) - new combo
02:55:692 (1) - remove new combo
02:56:092 (2) - new combo

h4rd

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o maior problema aki pra mim sao os jumps lunaticos, me refiro aos 2,0x ~. eu acho que voce usa com muita frequencia
nao costumo precisar de no fail pra jogar hard ;_; pra mim se parece mais mais com 1ns4ne.

uma parte q achei muito bem feita e que usa jumps a nivel h4rd é 00:12:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - seria otimo se voce pudesse equilibrar a maior parte dos jumps junto do ds normal a esse nivel

acho que voce deveria checar seus nc's na parte entre a break e o kiai, eu nao estou entendendo a logica perfeitamente

01:25:501 (1) - remove nc
01:26:501 (3) - nc
01:30:901 (5,1) - a passagem de combo aki deveria ser o nc no 5 na minha opiniao, mesmo que nao seja em um longo tick branco, pois é la que começa o novo verço
01:47:899 parece mais correto adicionar um circle aki, remover o whistle na nota anterior e começar o spinner em 01:48:099
02:27:109 - circle aki? pode colocar ele aonde começa o proximo slider e girar horizontalmente 02:26:109 (6,7) -
02:46:093 (1) - remove nc
02:46:493 (3) - new combo para o começo do kiai
02:49:493 (6) - new combo para ficar consistente ao combo anterior
02:49:693 (1) - remove nc mesmo motivo
02:51:293 (5) - new combo
02:51:892 (1) - remove nc
02:52:892 (4) - new combo
02:54:492 (7) - new combo e remove o nc na proxima nota?
02:57:492 (5) - new combo

fora isso, é um exelente map, eu nao estou acostumado a ver esse estilo de mapping / hitsounding pra mim esse map é fantastico
boa escolha de musica tambem

boa sorte :)
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

pimpG wrote:

mod as requested

Geral

Inconsistency in Tags: - [h4rd] : banana banana - [n0rm41] : acoustic banana

ja que voce tem acoustic nas tags, que tal tirar do titulo? (ou o contrario) AH SIM, EU N SEI FAZER ISSO

n0rm41

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00:19:307 (3) - new combo - vai ficar mt colorido
00:37:905 - esse espaço entre o spinner e o slider poderia ser preenchido, poderia usar o mesmo slider que em 00:34:706 (5) , mas invertido verticalmente e em x408 y364 pra espelhar com 00:36:505 (3) - tentei arrumar acho que ficou bom, coloque um reverse arrow
00:42:905 (2) - mude o clap para o inicio do slider, faz muito mais sentido - vdd
00:44:505 (4) - ^ e talvez um finish no longo tick branco? - vdd
00:46:505 (3) - adicione mais um whistle no final do slider? parece melhor do que sem nada la - ok
00:49:304 (2) - clap? -s
00:53:304 (4,6) - whistle ? -bls
01:30:101 (2) - whistle aki, pois voce adicionou um em 01:33:301 (2) - boa, nem percebi isso asd
01:39:300 (3) - new combo - acho que vou deixar sem esse
01:55:299 (4) - new combo -bls
02:01:698 (4) - ^ -bls
02:03:298 (1) - remove new combo -ta
02:25:709 (1) - ^ -ta
02:27:295 (2) - new combo -boa
02:28:894 (1) - remove new combo
02:30:494 (6) - new combo
02:32:094 (1) - remove new combo
02:34:094 (3) - new combo
02:43:293 (3) - new combo
02:55:692 (1) - remove new combo
02:56:092 (2) - new combo

tentei arrumar os new combo do final

h4rd

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 02:19:346 - snap to 02:19:349 -ta certinho é que ta com o bagulho vermeho sl

o maior problema aki pra mim sao os jumps lunaticos, me refiro aos 2,0x ~. eu acho que voce usa com muita frequencia
nao costumo precisar de no fail pra jogar hard ;_; pra mim se parece mais mais com 1ns4ne.

uma parte q achei muito bem feita e que usa jumps a nivel h4rd é 00:12:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - seria otimo se voce pudesse equilibrar a maior parte dos jumps junto do ds normal a esse nivel

acho que voce deveria checar seus nc's na parte entre a break e o kiai, eu nao estou entendendo a logica perfeitamente

01:25:501 (1) - remove nc -ok
01:26:501 (3) - nc -ok
01:30:901 (5,1) - a passagem de combo aki deveria ser o nc no 5 na minha opiniao, mesmo que nao seja em um longo tick branco, pois é la que começa o novo verço -ok
01:47:899 parece mais correto adicionar um circle aki, remover o whistle na nota anterior e começar o spinner em 01:48:099 -assim ta bom, caseo eu coloque mais uma nota o spinner vai ficar pequenininho
02:27:109 - circle aki? pode colocar ele aonde começa o proximo slider e girar horizontalmente 02:26:109 (6,7) - n é tãao necessario, fica bom sem ele
02:46:093 (1) - remove nc
02:46:493 (3) - new combo para o começo do kiai -o kiai acaba aqui
02:49:493 (6) - new combo para ficar consistente ao combo anterior
02:49:693 (1) - remove nc mesmo motivo
02:51:293 (5) - new combo -acho melhor deixar assim msm
02:51:892 (1) - remove nc
02:52:892 (4) - new combo
02:54:492 (7) - new combo e remove o nc na proxima nota?
02:57:492 (5) - new combo

dei uma remapeada no finalzinho acho que ficou melhor



fora isso, é um exelente map, eu nao estou acostumado a ver esse estilo de mapping / hitsounding pra mim esse map é fantastico
boa escolha de musica tambem

boa sorte :)
obrigado, se mod foi muuuuito bom, isso porque você falou que não ia encontrar nada né aheuheauae
Mismagius
[Normal]

  1. 00:17:707 (2) - tira o finish do início desse slider, sla, não me soa muito bem
  2. 00:19:307 (3) - new combo pra enfatizar o "pelo caminho"
  3. 00:25:706 (1) - add whistle aqui pra soar melhor com o violão/guitarra/foda-se
  4. 00:29:306 (2) - clap aqui pq vc fez isso antes
  5. 00:38:505 (1) - imho esse spinner fica BEM melhor terminando 1/2 antes
  6. 00:43:905 (3) - adiciona um whistle aqui pra combinar melhor com o instrumental
  7. 00:54:104 (6) - esse whistle tá meio estranho imo
  8. 01:12:502 (4) - clap aqui
  9. 01:37:700 (2) - esse finish ta meio estranho
  10. 02:32:094 (1,2) - eu achei isso meio estranho da primeira vez que joguei mas sei lá, eu botaria sliders 1/1 aqui
  11. 02:53:692 (2) - ficaria melhor se vc usasse o whistle no início do slider e não no final
[Hard]

  1. 00:09:708 (1,2,3) - eu acho esse jump estranho pra cacete, daria um ctrl+g no (1)
  2. 00:14:307 (4) - eu acho melhor tirar esse clap e botar no final do (3)
  3. 00:44:705 (8) - isso ficaria melhor em x:256 y:264
  4. 01:22:902 (1) - não acho que precise de newcombo aqui, mas né
  5. 01:36:101 (1) - um ctrl+g aqui seria l0k0
  6. 01:47:300 (4,5) - eu acho isso bem estranho pra ser honesto... se eu fosse vc eu deletava o 01:47:899 (1) e fazia isso http://puu.sh/25Rig
  7. 01:55:299 (4) - esse finish é bem estranho na minha opinião
  8. 02:43:893 (5) - slider feio da porra
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fabriciorby

Blue Dragon wrote:

[Normal]

  1. 00:17:707 (2) - tira o finish do início desse slider, sla, não me soa muito bem = tabonitinh
  2. 00:19:307 (3) - new combo pra enfatizar o "pelo caminho" - ok
  3. 00:25:706 (1) - add whistle aqui pra soar melhor com o violão/guitarra/foda-se -sim
  4. 00:29:306 (2) - clap aqui pq vc fez isso antes -ta bom tabom
  5. 00:38:505 (1) - imho esse spinner fica BEM melhor terminando 1/2 antes -é tens razao
  6. 00:43:905 (3) - adiciona um whistle aqui pra combinar melhor com o instrumental -adicionasd
  7. 00:54:104 (6) - esse whistle tá meio estranho imo -ta nada
  8. 01:12:502 (4) - clap aqui -ta
  9. 01:37:700 (2) - esse finish ta meio estranho -n ta
  10. 02:32:094 (1,2) - eu achei isso meio estranho da primeira vez que joguei mas sei lá, eu botaria sliders 1/1 aqui -fished
  11. 02:53:692 (2) - ficaria melhor se vc usasse o whistle no início do slider e não no final -taok
[Hard]

  1. 00:09:708 (1,2,3) - eu acho esse jump estranho pra cacete, daria um ctrl+g no (1) -vc q manda
  2. 00:14:307 (4) - eu acho melhor tirar esse clap e botar no final do (3) -^
  3. 00:44:705 (8) - isso ficaria melhor em x:256 y:264-^
  4. 01:22:902 (1) - não acho que precise de newcombo aqui, mas né- PRECISA
  5. 01:36:101 (1) - um ctrl+g aqui seria l0k0 - fica estrnhos
  6. 01:47:300 (4,5) - eu acho isso bem estranho pra ser honesto... se eu fosse vc eu deletava o 01:47:899 (1) e fazia isso http://puu.sh/25Rig - afs tava assim antes
  7. 01:55:299 (4) - esse finish é bem estranho na minha opinião - pra mim tanto faz vou confiar em vcs
  8. 02:43:893 (5) - slider feio da porra -ele é normalll!!! mas vo ve o q eu faço

OBRIGADO ARRUMEI O SLIDER FEIO DA PORRA 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
Frostmourne
Recheck

only two things I am still picky

can you resize the BG to 1024x768 please ? , at least, it should have the correct ratio please let me know if 1228x767 fits any common ratio

and

h4rd
01:42:500 (1) - remove this finish and whistle from the slider body and add them on head instead
Alarido
Falta pouco pra rankear (: simplesmente PERFECT :3

(não vejo a hora de tirar SS nele 8)
Topic Starter
fabriciorby
IT'S ALL GLITCHED
[Luanny]
relaxa fab, ja arrumaram o bug e talz
Frostmourne
bubbled
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Frostmourne wrote:

bubbled
<3333333333333333333333 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
MouseEasy
Estourou
Mismagius
joguei uma star pra voltar pra primeira página pq so lgl
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Blue Dragon wrote:

joguei uma star pra voltar pra primeira página pq so lgl
te dei um kudosu pq eu so lgl
Alarido
Add in the Tags: Kiko Zambianchi
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fabriciorby

cFiszpan wrote:

Add in the Tags: Kiko Zambianchi
?????????????????????????????????
[Luanny]

fabriciorby wrote:

cFiszpan wrote:

Add in the Tags: Kiko Zambianchi
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????????????????????????????????????????????????

BATS PLS
Katsuri
hi hope u enjoy mah mod :o :o :o :o


00:16:107 (1) - 1 grid left :D :D :D :D


00:43:305 (1) - remove new combo since i think it's right tks :( :( :( :(

rly good map enjoyed modding it hope it get rank'd :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll:



if u think i was helpful kudosu this post!!!! 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
Snepif
I PUT LOTS OF SMILEYS PLS KUDOSU MY POST
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Snepif wrote:

I PUT LOTS OF SMILEYS PLS KUDOSU MY POST
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