Wreath wrote:

[General]

1. 気合タイムのずれ
   
   1. KSHR's Easy : 01:02:010
   2. Rare's Normal : 01:02:010
   3. Ryafuka's Hard : 01:02:011
   4. Insane : 01:02:010

[Insane]

1. 00:08:238 (3) - Ctrl+G 私はこの流れのほうが好きです
2. 00:20:879 (9) - 右上にあった方が流れがより自然になると思うのですが、どうでしょうか
   
   この辺です、位置も角度も適当ですが

   
3. 00:37:106 (6) - 音源にバスドラかな？の音があるのでNormal音追加して、大きい音が気になるようでしたら音量調整したほうが合うと思います
4. 00:37:389 (8) - 同じくNormal音追加（音量調整も）したほうが合うと思いました　ちょっとうるさく感じたので今のままで...
5. 01:20:658 (2) - ここはジャンプさせるのが曲に合うかな、と個人的に思いますのでCtrl+Gを提案します

• 00:54:464 (7) - 3,4,5,6の単発の流れの延長線上に置いたほうがいいかとー
  01:34:243 (4) - 1,2,3とジャンプ来て4の間隔が狭かったのでプレイしにくかったです。離すか重ねてみては?
  01:44:243 (1) - NCいらないかも

R a r e wrote:

@Takos
:3

Takos wrote:

Hi MiLu,
Insane

• 00:54:464 (7) - 3,4,5,6の単発の流れの延長線上に置いたほうがいいかとー fixed
  01:34:243 (4) - 1,2,3とジャンプ来て4の間隔が狭かったのでプレイしにくかったです。離すか重ねてみては? 離してみました :3
  01:44:243 (1) - NCいらないかも 全難易度そろえてるので保留で

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
Easy has different video offset
unified it to the same
add "hentai eroge game visual novel" to tags
it's up to MiLu

[Easy]
01:28:205 - this volume change is too sudden and feels weird, i suppose you can decrease it in a better way
increase it from 30% to 55%

Melophobia wrote:

NO KDS

[General]
The video has wrong ratio; it should be 16:9 thxthxthxthxthxthx<3
Easy has different video offset
add "hentai eroge game visual novel" to tags i dont like them ;_;

[Insane]
00:24:936 - consider unmuting
01:15:941 - ＾
01:16:319 - ＾
01:16:696 - ＾
01:23:111 (1,2) - feels too narrow, better to space them at higher DS

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
AR +1 fits your general velocity better. If you do this, OD +1 or 2 please. I'm uneasy that normal diff will be harder. and I'm afraid that normal diff will get complicated too much and t he difficulties gap between normal and easy will be also too huge.
00:58:992 (1,2,3) - I think the pace would be more natural if you used just two circles at 00:58:992 - and 00:59:747 - , then moving to the 1/2 hits at 01:00:313 (1) - to give a better juxtaposition. 00:59:558 (2) - I'm following the piano here. and 01:00:313 (1) - I'm following the vocal here.

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
00:12:011 (4,1) - This anti-jump doesn't play very well. I see why you did it, though. change to stack like 00:11:068 (2,3) - .
00:21:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Considering the amount of overlap you're pulling here, it might be better to go with a higher AR. If you do, increase OD as well please. That or make this pattern not go back over itself. I change AR and OD.
00:54:087 (1,2) - This overlap is pretty ugly changed.
01:00:502 (1,2) - This jump is rather sudden. You might want to use a less extreme spacing here. increase spacing.
01:22:828 (4,5,6) - I'd rather not see something like this in a fairly easy Hard difficulty. change pattern.

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best. I would like to use tick 1...
The MP3 quality is really low. Can you find a better one please? changed mp3 tentatively... however I wasnt able to find the better thing.....T_T
The white and light blue combo colors are really difficult to see against the video. ah fixed

[Insane]
00:23:143 (4) - This plays better ctrl + g'd. Be careful with rearranging the hitsound sif you do this.
01:23:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This flows better if you rotate it 180 degrees. fixed both

Garven wrote:

I understand what you were followinh, but for the pace of the map vs. the pace of the music, I found undermapping at that point serves the experience much better.

As for the difficulty settings, if it makes the map easiee to read, then its not making the gap larger in any significant manner. Most of that will come from rhythm and note placement. I found the ar to be very low for that general velocity is all.

1. 00:24:010 - 00:31:746 - 00:32:312 (3) - などでオリジナルと比較すると動画がズレているように思えます
   offsetを-400にしてみてください。
   

   Video,-400,"movie.avi"

   タイミング関係のものなので、完全な数値は割り出せませんが、少なくとも今の-300の数値は遅れています。
   mp3を変えてしまったので、そこでの修正のし忘れのように思えます。動画のoffsetがズレていればUnrankableなので一度確認し、必要ならば修正してください。