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gonna do this soon
Hello, I just saw this map on your signature XD Here are some suggestions~
Star~
- [General]
- Cut your mp3 since it isn't fully mapped?
[Easy] - 02:02:850 (1) - Make this spinner start on the next downbeat (02:03:279) instead. It should end on 02:04:993 so delete this circle: 02:04:993 (1).
- 02:39:707 (2) - I don't like this, >.< its end touches the HP Bar. If you could do something about that please do.
[Damnae's Normal] - 01:37:565 (1,2,3,4) - I think there are minor spacing problems here. (Maybe)
- 01:44:422 (1,2,3,4) - Also with these.
[Hard] - 01:16:993 (1) - Maybe move this here? I was kinda confused while playing this note.
Star~
http://puu.sh/1TTYT
AngelHoney: I applied everything except the soft whistle at 00:11:636 (8). It sounds more interesting to me that way.
Kirino Kousaka: I made these sliders overlap less.
Thanks
AngelHoney: I applied everything except the soft whistle at 00:11:636 (8). It sounds more interesting to me that way.
Kirino Kousaka: I made these sliders overlap less.
Thanks
General
Ничего, наверноеMinamutsu Murasa и Undefined Fantastic Object в тэги, ну и что-нибудь типа электро до кучи, потому что zts
- 00:24:707 (3) и 00:28:136 (3) - свисток на конец? 00:31:565 (4) - ну и так далее, короче
- 00:52:993 (1) - свисток на конец?
- 01:08:422 (3) - удали красный узелок с конца и чуть укороти потом, а то он как-то
нездоровоплоско выглядит
- 00:01:565 (1) - add finish?
- 00:15:279 (1) - ^?
- 00:39:065 (3) - better start it from the big white tick to follow the music
- 00:41:207 (1) - too short for a Normal, please map through it
- 01:12:707 (6) - add whistle to the end?
- 01:37:565 (1) - you missed a finish
- 01:51:279 (1) - add a finish here?
- 02:01:350 (1) - I'd start it from the big white tick, because the music says so
- 02:22:993 (2,3,4,5) - may be a bit hard for those who don't know the track very well, hehe
- 00:31:779 (3,4,5,6,1) - я бы ноты так же расставил на 00:24:707 (3,4,1), чтобы игралось интересней
- 01:25:886 (2) - странный хлопок на начале, я б его на конец прошлого слайдера перетащил и приглушил
- 02:35:207 (2,3,4) - хлопки резко звучат, пиздецово как-то
I came.
[General]
+1 sec lead-in time?
[Easy]
00:52:993 (1) - I think this should face center since it's the easiest diff and there's a spinner incoming. You can do better than this.
01:19:565 (4,2) - curve these two? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/587782
01:42:707 (3) - curve this maor? won't affect anything http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/587788
02:39:707 (2) - eewewew touching hpbar all over, perv :<
[Damnae's Normal]
00:41:207 (1) -might be too short for normal diff. oh you, TC :<
00:59:850 (1) - remove curve to make it look more 'universal'?
01:01:350 (3) - grid left to curve the pattern?
[General]
+1 sec lead-in time?
[Easy]
00:52:993 (1) - I think this should face center since it's the easiest diff and there's a spinner incoming. You can do better than this.
01:19:565 (4,2) - curve these two? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/587782
01:42:707 (3) - curve this maor? won't affect anything http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/587788
02:39:707 (2) - eewewew touching hpbar all over, perv :<
[Damnae's Normal]
00:41:207 (1) -
00:59:850 (1) - remove curve to make it look more 'universal'?
01:01:350 (3) - grid left to curve the pattern?
eewww.senaya wrote:
I came.
I also have no idea what you mean by 'universal' :p
http://puu.sh/1U4CE
Thanks for the mods
16:9 bg
http://puu.sh/1U8Yv
http://puu.sh/1U8Yv
Hello
[Hard]
[Hard]
- 00:23:850 (1,2) - It seems too simple here, i mean the hitsounds. I cant find a better way but maybe try add whistle at the end of 00:24:279 (2) ?
- 00:40:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Are these patterns on purpose? a bit ugly compare with your style :3
01:54:707 (1) - Remove the repeat and add note at the 01:55:350 and 01:55:565? I'd like this way :< - 02:02:957 (1) - How about add a note here?
- first kiai's hitsounds sounds confusing for me
- 00:15:065 (5) - volume is too low i guess
Topic Starter
thank you 0_0
[General]
- newBSSsucks.mp3 I don't know if this filename is really appropriate.
- I see you use a widescreen bg, that's nice
[Easy]
00:21:707 (5) - perfectly stack this on (3)?
00:40:136 (2) - place a whistle on the start?
02:06:279 (3) - move the startpoint 1/4 earlier? well youll have to sacrifice the claps for it so maybe dont.
02:09:707 (2) - same
02:13:136 (2) -
02:16:565 (2) -
02:19:993 (2) -
02:23:422 (2) - same here but it's a bit hard for [easy] if it's not a slider starting on blue
02:24:707 (4) -
02:26:850 (2) -
02:08:207 - How about a rhythm like this here? http://puu.sh/1ZnUi
Using the unused sound on this red tick.
02:15:279 (1) - same
02:22:136 (1) - ^
02:28:993 (1) - ^
02:36:279 (3) - add NC?
[Damnae's Normal]
02:12:707 (2) - Make this end 1/4 earlier for a consistent rhythm?
02:16:136 (2) - same
02:20:850 (6) - ^
02:45:922 (5,6) - make them straight? http://puu.sh/1Zof6
00:36:707 (8) - add NC
00:37:779 (1) - remove NC
02:13:565 (4) - remove NC
[Hard]
00:20:422 (1) - redo this slider with the new algorithm? it looks a bit sloppy
00:28:136 (5) - move this slider a bit down so the endpoint is on the exact same height as the stream
00:49:565 (1) - remake this with the new algorithm, use 1 slider node
00:52:565 (3) - move this 1 grid up or so, in line with the next notes.
01:09:279 (5) - redo this slider with the new algorithm
01:36:815 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to improve the curve in this stream
01:42:922 (2) - I would suggest to put this note between (1) and (3) instead of stacking it on (3), this jumps feels a bit weird now.
02:10:886 (3) - stack it on (2) like every other similar pattern?
02:30:172 (5) - same
- newBSSsucks.mp3 I don't know if this filename is really appropriate.
- I see you use a widescreen bg, that's nice
[Easy]
00:21:707 (5) - perfectly stack this on (3)?
00:40:136 (2) - place a whistle on the start?
02:06:279 (3) - move the startpoint 1/4 earlier? well youll have to sacrifice the claps for it so maybe dont.
02:09:707 (2) - same
02:13:136 (2) -
02:16:565 (2) -
02:19:993 (2) -
02:23:422 (2) - same here but it's a bit hard for [easy] if it's not a slider starting on blue
02:24:707 (4) -
02:26:850 (2) -
02:08:207 - How about a rhythm like this here? http://puu.sh/1ZnUi
Using the unused sound on this red tick.
02:15:279 (1) - same
02:22:136 (1) - ^
02:28:993 (1) - ^
02:36:279 (3) - add NC?
[Damnae's Normal]
02:12:707 (2) - Make this end 1/4 earlier for a consistent rhythm?
02:16:136 (2) - same
02:20:850 (6) - ^
02:45:922 (5,6) - make them straight? http://puu.sh/1Zof6
00:36:707 (8) - add NC
00:37:779 (1) - remove NC
02:13:565 (4) - remove NC
[Hard]
00:20:422 (1) - redo this slider with the new algorithm? it looks a bit sloppy
00:28:136 (5) - move this slider a bit down so the endpoint is on the exact same height as the stream
00:49:565 (1) - remake this with the new algorithm, use 1 slider node
00:52:565 (3) - move this 1 grid up or so, in line with the next notes.
01:09:279 (5) - redo this slider with the new algorithm
01:36:815 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to improve the curve in this stream
01:42:922 (2) - I would suggest to put this note between (1) and (3) instead of stacking it on (3), this jumps feels a bit weird now.
02:10:886 (3) - stack it on (2) like every other similar pattern?
02:30:172 (5) - same
Topic Starter
done!
bubble
Fixed some minor things through irc and ranked.
no kud.
no kud.
Topic Starter
xiexie
Next time: Natteke's Taiko
Okay, thanks, congratulation, bye.
Okay, thanks, congratulation, bye.
I wanted to say something but then i- UNTZUNTZUNTZ.
Grats.
Grats.
Grats !
4 hours between bubble and rank xD
Congratulations.
Congratulations.
grats ^q^
Topic Starter
Submitted:Feb 24, 2012Andrea wrote:
4 hours between bubble and rank xD
Congratulations.
Ranked: Feb 9, 2013
I think this took long enough
only three pages but almost a year
gg
E: oh there we go, starting the 4th one
gg
E: oh there we go, starting the 4th one
gratz bby
damm, i love so much this map
i just DLed this map yesterday.. can't believe it has ranked now. xDD
awesome work as usual~ congratz!! ;3
awesome work as usual~ congratz!! ;3
Topic Starter
thank you all!
I remember this! grats
Natteke congrats~!
congrats lol
\:D/goodbye wrote:
congrats lol
whaaaat already ranked
(I'm too lazy for modding stuff now i guess ;_;
(I'm too lazy for modding stuff now i guess ;_;
At first I thought this was Reiji's version.
Nevertheless, congratulations.
Nevertheless, congratulations.
TuT...
Yeahh, gratz
I love this
I love Natteke
I love the songs Natteke maps
I love the maps Natteke does
I love Natteke
I love the songs Natteke maps
I love the maps Natteke does
Topic Starter
*blush*
:OOOOAndrea wrote:
4 hours between bubble and rank xD
Awesome map~ >w<