Dixie Flatline - andante · forum

cirno-_old

cirno-_old 2013-01-16T16:16:25+00:00

General
add bookmarks after breaks?
No problems with normal. Just that it's easier than most normals and Hard is pretty easy too. Normal almost feels like an easy and hard as normal. But I think it's fine.

Hard
01:36:060 (4) - this may be better if it started on (2)'s end
01:39:191 (4,5,6,7,1) - rotate 35 degrees and then reposition like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/571597

Insane

00:24:582 (6,7,8,9) - Needs whistle
00:28:756 (4,5,6,1) - Felt awkward. Either stack or delete 5 and use proper spacing. Then 1 just felt weird. Felt like it broke the flow or something. I think this is better http://i.imgur.com/QmQ2r.png
00:48:061 (1,2) - I like the slider but I don't think it plays well with 2
01:34:234 (1) - not symettrical. Sounds nazi but I could tell when playing. Slider end's point needs to be 1 grid to left
01:38:669 (2,3) - Not too fond of the time in between the 2 sliders to justify a stack
01:39:713 (4,5,1) - Triangle formation maybe?
01:59:800 (4) - strange overlap
02:03:713 (3) - ctrl+g then reposition (4) a bit. It flows nice that way

GL~star

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-01-17T05:10:40+00:00

Fixed little thank you

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-01-17T06:00:03+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
Hi SCV. I'm here due to mint's request
Then I found that it's not his map but yours
so maybe we may do an m4m
Ok Let's do it
General
Beauiful song, loving it
SV in H and I diff are both 1.6, I don't know if this will be OK. You guys should get aware of this actually before mapping imo. But if to change it now, it woukd be plenty of rearranging work...I knew that. So...I'm just pointing out here, and maybe you'll remember this next time when accepting a GD. well, i put my name before because i afraid this problem, now have people refer it, so i change back to my name.

Insane
00:24:582 (6,7,8,9) - add whistles to them? seem good, ok~
00:25:104 (1) - make it a bit curve like ( , in order tofit the former stream no, 故意的
00:28:756 (4,5,6) - kind of weird to place them like this, stack notes at slider's head, or make them with same distance in between umm...失误 Tv T
00:29:539 (1) - move it a bit to the left. I'm not fond of the overlap with the former slider ok
00:48:061 (1) - a bit strange, just make it beautiful, don't actually mind the distance snap, after all this is an I diff 故意+1
00:57:191 (4,5) - stack propperly dat non-stack is baka! anyway stacked
01:28:756 (4,5) - ^
02:51:191 (1,3) - ^
03:28:234 (4,1) - ^
04:05:278 (5,6) - ^
04:07:626 (3,1) - ^
01:24:321 (3) - change its shape to http://puu.sh/1OozS or like http://puu.sh/1OoBn this maybe no, it seem really weird.
01:34:234 (1) - remove NC and 01:35:539 (3,1) - exchange NC ? ok
01:37:887 - this gap is not suitable for there is vocal at hte time sorry, try see 1st kiai time and 2nd time
01:59:278 (2,3,4) - don't care about the distance snap, I hope they do not touch each other, really i just love it so sorry
02:16:756 (1) - remove NC is ok ok
02:50:669 (8,1) - exchange NC? ok
don't have much difficulty gap with Hard diff =.= ~

Hmm, I think that's it
Hope you good luck
a ☆for the map and the song

cirno- wrote:
General

Insane

00:24:582 (6,7,8,9) - Needs whistle ok
00:28:756 (4,5,6,1) - Felt awkward. Either stack or delete 5 and use proper spacing. Then 1 just felt weird. Felt like it broke the flow or something. I think this is better http://i.imgur.com/QmQ2r.png seem nice, fixed~
00:48:061 (1,2) - I like the slider but I don't think it plays well with 2 umm..some fixed
01:34:234 (1) - not symettrical. Sounds nazi but I could tell when playing. Slider end's point needs to be 1 grid to left no
01:38:669 (2,3) - Not too fond of the time in between the 2 sliders to justify a stack ok
01:39:713 (4,5,1) - Triangle formation maybe? no
01:59:800 (4) - strange overlap seem confirmed..ok
02:03:713 (3) - ctrl+g then reposition (4) a bit. It flows nice that way no

GL~star

thanks for mod~~

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HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-01-17T06:17:45+00:00

Updated

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-01-21T04:23:33+00:00

hi~ from your queue
m4m time!

[Mintong]

01:22:365 (3) - Ctrl+G? It seemed to be too far for me.
　
01:37:887 - add note or 01:37:626 (5) - move to 01:37:887 - and NC.
　
02:03:452 (2) - 1grid down
　
02:25:104 (3,4,1) - spacing is little weird.

[Hard]

00:33:713 (2) - like this slider? (copy to 00:32:930 (7) - )

[Normal]

You should down star rate less than 3.00
　
00:53:280 (4) - move to 00:53:017 - and add note 00:53:800 - (same patturn 01:00:584 (3,4,5) - )

nice mapset~
good luck

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-01-21T04:42:35+00:00

Fixed little ~ thank you xD

Rukaru

829 posts

Joined April 2012

Rukaru 2013-01-21T11:00:04+00:00

M4M

hello there,

[General]
Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Hard] : Vocaloid
- [Mintong] : Volcaloid <--
- [Normal] : Vocaloid

[Normal]
00:46:756 - add a circle?
03:00:845 (3,4) - umm, how about change this notes to slider?
04:09:191 - add a circle? it feels empty here.

maybe just that, :'(

[Hard]
01:20:408 (2) - make this a jump?
02:43:886 (2) - ^

ah...good map. I couldn't find more.

[Mintong]
00:28:756 (4,5,6) - don't stack this. feels awkward.
00:32:408 (3) - don't stack this. please move it. this note is confuse the player if you stack like that.
00:37:365 (3,4,1) - move this so (3) does not placed behind previous note. because ^
01:02:669 (1) - ctrl + G. then make this a jump.
01:22:365 (3) - uhm...a bad jump. I am sure someone can't FC at first try at this map because of this.
01:39:713 (4,5,1) - don't stack....doesn't feel good to play.
02:04:234 (4) - ctrl + G ?
02:41:017 (1,2,3) - maybe don't stack this?
02:51:191 (2) - ctrl + G ? for better movement.
03:49:365 (6) - don't stack.
03:58:234 (2) - ^

[]

yeah, that's it.
overall it is really good. but in [Mintong] there are many stacked notes. so...I suggest to make it more flowing by stacking properly. it's feel awkward if there are too much stacked notes.

sorry for my poor english and my poor mod.

good luck on this.
I'll give you one of my star.

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-01-21T11:04:58+00:00

fix little.

@raheta_adi: i think it's ok, and i love it. so didn't change anything imo.

SPOILER

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HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-01-21T12:45:11+00:00

Updated and Fixed!

Autumn

501 posts

Joined October 2011

Autumn 2013-01-27T04:05:47+00:00

Hi~
Mod from my queue
Sorry for late..Actually I just couldn't find anytihing to mod on this map..
So I'll shoot a star instead

[Hard]
02:37:364 (6) - Let the slider point to the note:

SPOILER

[Mintong]
01:22:365 (3) - 这么短的Repeat滑条显得太急促..不如换成单点，NC从这里开始，和后面的note构成正五边形比较漂亮：

SPOILER

（后面也有一个类似的，不过那里没有正多边形的梗就不动了）

I like the song and the map, Good Luck!

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-01-27T06:28:11+00:00

Fixed thx~

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-01-29T17:28:46+00:00

tag가 nico nico douga 여야 되는거 아닌가요?
nico가 중복이긴 하지만 이렇게 하는게 더 나을거 같아요

아 아니에요,, nico nico douga로 검색해도 충분히 나오네요

Kiddo-Kun

1,014 posts

Joined May 2009

Kiddo-Kun 2013-01-31T02:52:24+00:00

[General]

• The video file for this map is 19mb which is way to big. Try finding a smaller file so the overall folder size isn't so big *_*
• You spell Vocaloid wrong in [Mintong]

[Normal]
*Resnap all notes in this difficulty.

[Hard]

• 00:41:017 (9,1) - This part does not play very well since it has such an awkward and backwards flow. I suggest fixing this by removing the repeat on (9) and adding a note on 00:41:539 - instead. It should look something like this.
• 01:38:669 (3,4) - This little jump here doesn't play well either since it doesn't flow well. I suggest moving the honeycomb lower and closer to (3) like this. That way, it flows well and you have a fun jump.

[Mintong]
* Like I mentioned before, it has inconsistent tagging.

• 00:37:365 (3,4) - Since (3) is under (2) it has an awkward feel when you're playing. I think this would play better if you unstacked it from (2).
• 01:21:974 (2,3) - I found this spacing really confusing and I always end up hitting the note too late. I think it would play better if you moved (3) closer to (2). You should also flip (3) like this so it has a better flow.
• 01:39:713 (4,5,1) - This part seems really powerful in the music and stacking the notes seem too boring for this. Change this pattern into something more exciting.
• 04:01:365 (1) - This new combo is inconsistent and does not fit the song. Remove it.

[Overall]
The maps are really good and are technically sound, but I think the maps can use some tweaking before it's ready for ranking. Good luck!

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-01-31T02:57:34+00:00

Fixed all thank you

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-02-01T15:25:09+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: andante.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 82497
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 1
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16758,32932
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:andante
TitleUnicode:アンダンテ
Artist:Dixie Flatline
ArtistUnicode:Dixie Flatline
Creator:HelloSCV
Version:Mintong
Source:Hatsune Miku
Tags:Vocaloid Vocaloid2 mintong89 Nico Douga haruyo Maku
BeatmapID:208565
BeatmapSetID:72603

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Background Colour Transformations
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140,240,245017,1,8,0:0:0
140,240,245147,1,0,0:0:0
140,240,245278,2,0,P|144:192|136:156,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
138,161,245800,2,0,P|218:159,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,228,246321,6,0,P|320:256|428:228,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,140,247104,2,0,P|388:96|388:56,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,12,247626,2,0,P|476:56|476:96,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
476,92,248408,5,0,0:0:0
388,60,248669,1,8,0:0:0
304,108,248930,1,2,0:0:0
304,108,249191,2,0,P|308:160|308:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,276,249713,2,0,P|204:224|204:184,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,320,250495,5,4,0:0:0
256,192,250626,12,0,252582,0:0:0

thanks~

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-02-02T03:23:51+00:00

updated

Nwolf

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Nwolf 2013-02-03T16:05:11+00:00

Hai, from my modding queue (holy shit another Dixie Flatline song how the fuck did this happen)

[Normal]
01:28:756 (2) - Move to x:192 y:140
01:40:495 (1) - End spinner on 01:42:321 so it's the same on all diffs
01:59:017 (4) - Move red point to x:88: y:40
03:30:843 (3) - Move to x:200 y: 236
04:10:756 (1) - End spinner on 04:12:582 so it's the same on all diffs

[Hard]
00:47:800 (5) - Rotate clockwise by 4° (Origin: Selection centre)
00:53:648 (2) - Move to x:216 y:180
01:40:234 (1) - Already saw this got mentioned twice but... I would suggest continuing the combo instead of making a new one here.
01:57:974 (4) - Move to x:396 y:192
02:05:539 (2) - Move slider start point to x:156 y:220
02:06:843 (4,5) - Combine to one slider?
02:20:669 (3) - Move slider end point to x:472 y:116
03:27:452 (7) - Move middle slider point to x:344 y:180 and end to x:252 y:196
03:35:539 (7) - Move to x:216 y:344

[Mintong]
00:24:321 (5) - Move to x:252 y:188
00:26:147 (3) - Move middle slider point to x:156 y:272

Nice map, gl

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-02-04T09:17:30+00:00

Fixed little thx~

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-02-05T04:08:47+00:00

Normal:

02:37:626 (4) - 기존 박자 보다 02:37:887 에 넣는거도 고려해 보세요

Hard:

-- 난이도 균형을 위해 AR6을 해야 합니다. 4에서 7로 뛰는건 좀 아닌듯요

01:18:060 (7,8,9) - 별로 좋은 흐름이 아닌듯요. 음.. 이런 식은 어때요?

SPOILER

01:25:364 (4) - (368,280)? (3) Blanket하는 것보다 흐름에 신경쓰는게 나을듯요
01:27:451 (8) - 음.. 1.00x?
01:31:886 (2) - (1) 대신 여기에서 NC
03:02:669 (4,5,6) - 여기도 01:39:191 (4,5,6,7) 처럼 뭔가 있으면 좋을듯요
03:52:495 (1) - 이전과 0.80x 만드세요

Mintong:

00:31:365 (1,2) - This rhythm fits the song the best

SPOILER

01:10:756 (4,1) - This rhythm fits the song the best.

SPOILER

01:21:974 (2,3) - Make (2) a circle, and start (3) at 01:22:234 since the 1/8 starts there
01:23:539 (1,2) - This is the only part you've used note+slider in this rhythm, but I really think a single 1/1 slider will fit.
02:18:843 (3) - Well this is readable enough, but I don't think this placement is the best. Consider somewhere like (392,324)?
02:25:887 (4) - Distance
02:45:713 (4,5) - Similar opinion. Start (5) at 02:45:713

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-02-05T08:59:34+00:00

Fixed little

수정 약간 했어요 감사합니다 !

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-02-08T00:14:28+00:00

Hello, here's a mod from YGOkid8 for the Project Thorough Modding
I was making the mod for over three days, or four. I was doing many other mods at the same time! So it may happen that some of the suggestions were already suggested owo!

Normal

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;

01:38:930 (3,4) - I tried this many time: Actually, it would sound better if both of these objects were reversed (By doing Ctrl+G). The reverse arrow of the slider will be perfectly placed in a way that will fit with a sound I'm hearing and the song itself. It mostly made me think of one of the previous objects, at 01:34:755 (4,5) - , which are situated on red ticks. In my opinion, it will sound better like this.
01:40:494 (1) - *Important* I think you've misplaced the end of this spinner. It's ending a bit farther than it should. Move it to 01:42:321, it will be placed on a big downbeat and on the two other difficulties, this spinner is ending here. It will be better if you do the change.
03:02:407 (2,3) - You could make the same thing like I've suggested for 01:38:930 (3,4) -
03:03:973 (1) - I think you've made a copy/paste from the previous kiai time but you simply changed the emplacement of your objects, right? So, don't forget to fix this one!
04:09:190 (2,3) - Same as said for 01:38:930 (3,4) -
04:10:755 (1) - Same as said 01:40:494 (1) - ; You should actually look at the objects correctly when you are copy/pasting..

I have completely nothing to say on the hitsounds and new combos, the hitsounds are perfectly consistent and for the New Combos, they seems to be alright. Good job!

Hard

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;

00:19:364 (5,6,7,8,9) - You could be making a smoother star pattern here, it currently look a bit odd in a way because it looks like the circle (7,9) are a bit too close from each others, which makes a bad star form. You could use the Create Polygone Circles' feature to help you.
00:35:538 (5) - I guess it will be better if this slider was not placed like that.. Placing this slider there is just a bit weird, I suggest you to place it some grids down, an emplacement which won't touch the previous slider:
Example
00:47:799 (5) - That may sound a bit nazi but well.. I thought that you could be making a better blanket with the next circle and also, the previous slider's end is almost touching the beginning of this slider. That's not bad, but you can improve it. So, disable the distance snap and move this slider one grid up. By doing this, it's going to make a better blanket and the end the of the previous slider won't be touching the beginning of this slider \:D/
02:20:669 (3) - Another nazi thing, a better blanket can be done here. Just by moving the last node one grid up, it will make a perfect blanket

Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;

Perfect! There's completely nothing wrong in here. All the hitsounds are consistent!

New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;

01:02:669 (5) - To do like you've done previously with these two combos; 00:49:364 (1) - , I guess it will be better if you add a new combo here and then, you delete the new combo to 01:03:712 (1) - . 01:02:669 (5,6) - The slider (5) is placed on a big downbeats, which you normally add new combos and also, these two sliders are almost the same from the next one, but in more longer. I guess it will be good if you do that change.
01:25:625 (5) - Most of your new combos are kinda.. weird because they're not perfectly added in a consistent way. For an example, on the third Kiai Time, most of the New combos are divided by each big downbeats. It would actually be better if they were following each others. So, add a new combo at this slider. Do the same for 02:49:104 (5) -
01:29:799 (5) - Like said on the previous point, add a new combo here.
01:36:061 (4) - Same thing for here too, add a new combo.
02:52:234 (1) - Remove the new combo at this circle and then, you could be able to add another New combo to 02:53:278, it's going to follow the vocals like that..
04:06:321 - A new combo can also be added here for the same reasons as the other previously.

Going to edit with mintong's mod

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-02-08T09:31:34+00:00

Fixed almost , and waiting mintong's reply~ thanks

Pokie

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Pokie 2013-02-09T02:52:36+00:00

My first full modding since I joined MAT \o/

　General

Dixie - andante (HelloSCV).osb - This osb file needs to be deleted (The artist is written without "Flatline")
Please add a silence soft-sliderslide2 and 3, as it sounds crappy when you're using tick sounds with custom set2,3
(e.g.: 00:18:321 - 00:22:495 - / 03:26:147 - on Hard)

　Normal

Star rate: 3.23 orz...Well it shows 3-star when selecting songs, it should be fine.
I'd like the hitsound usage from mintong's Insane(kiai parts), consider adding them to your Normal and Hard as well?
00:37:626 (2) - I've doubt on the visable here, as you can see: http://puu.sh/1ZyJs the slider track is actually cover'd by previous hitburst. How about changing the pattern like this?
SPOILER
Own suggestion on this part
- 02:25:626 (5,6) - Converting these two circles into slider, which helps to reduce difficulty (not star rate).
  02:25:626 (5,1) - Swap the new combo
  02:26:409 (2) - (If you changed previous line) Ctrl+G on this, so you'll have a similar pattern with 02:00:322 (1,2) - now.
  SPOILER
03:42:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo reachs to 6 notes in a group, have a combo swap on 03:42:061 (1,2) - or 03:42:061 (1,4) - ?

　Hard

HP Drain -1 fits better to a hard difficulty imo.
00:24:712 (2,3,4) - Consider adding whistle on these notes with a lower volume (around 60%)
01:21:451 (3) - New combo here for the spacing changes.
01:36:582 (4,5,6) - Imo the slider should be start from 01:36:582 - instead of 01:37:104 - , and replace with circles at 01:37:104 - and 01:37:365 -

02:44:930 (3) - Same as 01:21:451
03:03:712 (1) - How about a transition pattern? I can't really tell it's a flow pattern, but looks more interesting xD
SPOILER

04:07:625 (6) - Flip this to otherside make the flow better, like this
SPOILER

or rotate it with ~20 degrees, like this
SPOILER

04:09:451 (4,5) - A little bit nazi, but these two aren't fit with 04:09:191 (3) - yet, try moving them to a better position.
SPOILER

　Mintong

00:24:582 (6) - I'd like to remove this whistle since it's on lower pitch.
00:33:061 (6) - Remove this note, 放大間距的五連其實不適合, 再加上這個位置其實是沒有聲音的
00:35:278 (7) - (slider's head) Clap sounds unecesserary here, consider removing it.
00:50:147 (1) - (slider's head) Due to the section changes and downbeat, adding a finish will be much better. (As you've did it at 02:13:626 - too)
00:58:495 (1) - (slider's end) Clap sounds unecesserary here, consider removing it.
ntr style键鼠打真是坠毁...喔不對貼錯了, 01:10:756 (4) - Converting this slider into two circles to coodinate with music.
01:12:843 - Pretty weird to leave it blank here...add a circle?
01:23:017 (2,3) - Swap the whistle? It's much more suitable when adding on (3) but not (2).
01:31:365 (5) - (slider's head) Missing a clap here!
01:37:887 - Pretty weird to leave it blank here...add a circle with clap to keep the consistency?
01:40:365 (1) - , 03:03:843 (1) - , 04:10:626 (1) - Add whistle on these spinner's end which HelloSCV added on his own difficulty?
02:18:843 (3,4) - To be honest this pattern doesn't fit to this song, I would like to unstack them.
[list:76137]- 02:19:626 (5) - And stack this under (3).

SPOILER

02:30:843 (2) - (slider's head) Missing a clap here, too!
02:46:756 (3) - Where's the whistleeeee~ Add it here if you've changed my suggestion at 01:23:017 -
02:57:191 - Pretty weird to leave it blank here...add a circle with clap to keep the consistency?
03:01:365 - Pretty weird to leave it blank here...add a circle with clap to keep the consistency? (你要在紅線加hitsound就別留空啊真是的!!)
03:02:669 (3) - (slider's tail) Missing a whistle here, too, too! (看你又漏了真是的!!! 估計還有一些我沒聽出來的)
03:38:669 (4) - umm..I prefer not using a duplicated hitsounding here, which means removing either clap or whistle. (I suggest for whistle)
03:42:321 (3) - (slider's tail)^, same issue
03:44:930 (5) - ^, but I suggest to remove clap here
03:46:756 (4) - (slider's tail)^, remove whistle
03:49:104 (5) - ^, remove clap
03:49:887 (1) - (slider's tail) Use clap instead of whistle to coodinate with music?
03:51:191 (3) - Same issue that I've mentioned before, remove whistle
03:52:234 (3) - Missing a clap here?
03:53:539 (7) - And again, add a whistle here. yup...a whistle inside clap streams.
04:03:974 - No more say, add a circle with clap to keep the consistency?
04:08:147 - ^排列我還沒看的很仔細...加油把音效都改了吧(runs

♥ this song >w</ Good luck.

Edit:

nold_1702 wrote:
處女泡要出現了嗎wwwww

喂喂=~=!!

Last edited by Pokie 2013-02-09T03:29:17+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ulysses

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Ulysses 2013-02-09T03:27:00+00:00

處女泡要出現了嗎wwwww

HelloSCV

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Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-02-09T03:42:06+00:00

Fixed all! thanks xDD

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-02-09T05:02:12+00:00

Good, let's go with the last part. Please, do not kudo this post since I've already earned it previously.

Mintong

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;

00:19:104 (2,3,4) - The pattern and the sound of these objects are a bit awkward. It would have been better if it has an object to 00:19:365 - since that's a slider, which is placed on an upbeat and on the upbeats, you usually add claps to keep the consistency. But since there's no objects at this place, you can't. I'm suggesting you to make another pattern to follow the consistency and the song at the same time. Before doing it, make sure to delete the clap to 00:19:626. After that, if you agree on the pattern below, add a clap to 00:19:365. (Of course, you can change the emplacement of these circles or even, you can replace these three circles by a 1/2 slider which has a reverse arrow) {You can also make the same thing to 00:23:278 (2,3,4) - and the other patterns that looks like that}
Example
00:35:800 (1,2) - By listening the vocals, the slider (2) is completely sounding late. Because at this place, there's a vocal that starts to 00:36:321, which is actually the end of the slider (1). It could have been better if it was clickable. So, to help you a bit, I made this pattern which following the vocals and the song. (Almost make sure that the hitsounds are consistency if you do the change)
Example
01:38:147 (1,3) - I know while playing we would notice it but, on the editor, this lap is actually weird. You should be moving the slider (3) a bit more to make sure it's not overlapping the previous slider's end.
02:02:930 (4,2) - *total nazi* Actually, these circles are almost aligned together. I thought that since they were close to be aligned, making them perfectly aligned will make a better symmetry.

Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;

00:35:278 - Hm, why there's a clap here? It's on a red tick, which doesn't follow the consistency of your previous objects also, there's also a clap on the previous upbeat. So actually, you should delete it so it's going to be consistent.
00:41:800 - It feels like there's missing something here, mostly that at this place, there's a stronger/louder sound and there's a big-downbeat and the beginning of a new combo. By seeing the Hard difficulty, there's a finish here. You could be doing the same thing by keeping the consistency with Hard by adding a finish on the beginning of the slider.
00:45:452 - There's no claps? It's on an upbeat! It should have one, no? Also, on the Hard diff, there's one. I don't see why skipping it c:
00:50:147 - Like I told you about the finish, when she sings, at this place, it's getting louder. You should be adding one to emphasize it. Do the same for 01:15:191.
00:58:756 - I think you've added this clap by accident since you've also added one on your next object (which is alright since it's on an upbeat). So actually, delete this clap since there's actually two in a row and that sounds bad and that's not consistent.
01:18:843 - There's missing an hitsound here and that's awkward since you were adding clap at every upbeats and you skipped that one, which is inconsistent. do the same for 02:14:147, 02:19:365, 02:30:843, 03:03:191
01:31:365 - with these weird sounds you've added, make sure to add a whistle to keep the consistency with your previous hitsounds, like you did before the kiai time.
02:38:669 (1) - Like said for the finishes, add one to emphasize the loud vocal.
03:40:756 - I like what you did there with the whistle-claps on the previous and next patterns. It seems like you've missing to add a clap here. It would be better if you add one, if you want to keep the consistency with your hitsounds.

New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;

01:30:061 (1) - By looking on your next and previous combos, I think it's unnecessary to add a new combo. Please, delete it to make these Combos consistent. Same thing for 01:38:147 (1) -. Same for 02:57:452 (1) - and 02:57:452 (1) -.
03:56:147 (1) - Like you did with your previous Kiai Time, I think it will be more consistent if there was not a new combo at this place. Same as 04:00:061 (1) -

Nothing else to say. Please, accept this star to help you for the priority of your map!~

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-02-09T09:12:32+00:00

fixed orz..

SPOILER

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: andante.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 82497
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 1
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16758,32932
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:andante
TitleUnicode:アンダンテ
Artist:Dixie Flatline
ArtistUnicode:Dixie Flatline
Creator:HelloSCV
Version:Mintong
Source:
Tags:Hatsune Miku Vocaloid mintong89 Nico Douga haruyo Maku
BeatmapID:208565
BeatmapSetID:72603

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg"
Video,0,"PV.avi"
//Break Periods
2,102521,116030
2,186000,199508
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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250495,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
250626,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,255,128
Combo2 : 249,249,249
Combo3 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
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284,156,17278,2,0,P|252:148|200:144,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,192,17669,1,0,0:0:0
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116,100,156974,1,0,0:0:0
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260,176,157626,2,0,P|316:180|360:188,1,80
440,272,158147,2,0,P|384:268|340:260,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,304,158669,6,0,P|288:224|268:148,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,192,159452,1,0,0:0:0
120,120,159713,1,0,0:0:0
148,28,159974,1,0,0:0:0
148,28,160234,2,0,P|208:56|296:32,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,76,161017,5,0,0:0:0
380,76,161147,1,0,0:0:0
380,76,161278,2,0,P|384:120|384:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,284,161800,2,0,P|308:240|307:204,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
307,204,162321,2,0,P|216:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,136,162843,6,0,P|132:188|136:304,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,276,163626,2,0,P|272:288|312:280,1,80
380,224,164147,2,0,P|374:190|386:146,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
305,282,164930,5,0,0:0:0
248,204,165191,1,0,0:0:0
156,184,165452,1,0,0:0:0
72,232,165713,1,0,0:0:0
72,232,165843,2,0,P|76:264,2,20
156,184,166234,5,0,0:0:0
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128,8,166756,1,2,0:0:0
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335,187,168843,1,8,0:0:0
335,187,168974,1,0,0:0:0
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306,270,172495,1,8,0:0:0
212,268,172756,1,2,0:0:0
180,176,173017,1,8,0:0:0
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108,108,174061,1,8,0:0:0
108,108,174582,1,8,0:0:0
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468,32,176669,2,0,P|476:76|476:120,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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160,236,178234,1,8,0:0:0
160,236,178365,1,0,0:0:0
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60,56,179017,2,0,P|52:100|52:140,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
51,135,179539,6,0,P|144:116|208:140,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,176,180321,2,0,P|372:176,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,252,181104,1,2,0:0:0
232,252,181365,1,0,0:0:0
232,252,181626,6,0,P|184:256|120:248,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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444,220,202495,5,0,0:0:0
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288,260,205365,2,0,P|372:260,1,80
420,180,205887,2,0,P|332:180,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,132,206408,2,0,P|208:144|88:120,1,160
44,204,207191,5,2,0:0:0
76,296,207452,1,0,0:0:0
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408,224,208234,2,0,P|368:216|325:219,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
329,218,208756,6,0,P|352:140|328:64,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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372,304,214495,2,0,P|292:304,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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212,160,220234,1,0,0:0:0
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352,292,228061,2,0,P|304:284|260:296,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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236,220,230408,2,0,P|188:256|72:216,1,160
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364,296,232234,1,8,0:0:0
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352,200,232756,5,8,0:0:0
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232,200,233408,1,8,0:0:0
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156,278,235104,1,8,0:0:0
84,216,235365,2,0,P|64:136|88:60,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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472,12,247626,2,0,P|476:56|476:96,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-02-09T10:43:47+00:00

updated

Pokie

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Pokie 2013-02-09T15:22:46+00:00

Whoops missed, ignore this post

Stefan

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Stefan 2013-02-09T15:23:59+00:00

lol

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-02-09T15:48:17+00:00

lol what was that ww

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2013-02-11T11:30:16+00:00

my policy as a modder is to point out everything that bugs me. everything, regardless of being an actual issue or not. though they seem like small changes, i highly recommend you do them all, but you are of course, not obliged to. note that with beat placement suggestions, i didn't fix up spacing around it, so you'll have to do that yourself.

it might take a while to do all this, but please give every suggestion careful consideration!

Normal:
00:19:626 (4,5) - These would flow and look better if you move these down a bit. Move (4) to x:176 y:76 and (5) to x:312 y:36.
00:20:931 (1,2) - With what you're doing with these sliders, having a bigger curve in them would look and flow better imo. Not as big as the previous (4), but bigger... anyway try fiddling around with it.
00:27:191 (3,4,5) - Since rhythm is the same, why not c&p the previous one, rotate 180° and put it here? Makes it look neater.
00:32:148 (4,5) - Flip the (4) horizontal, then place at x:48 y:80? Then put the (5) at x:96 y:220
00:33:974 (2,3,4) - I can see what you're trying to do, but I don't like how (4) is so close to the (2). I suggest this formation:

SPOILER

228,360,33974,2,0,P|344:360,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,284,35017,1,8,0:0:0
496,360,35539,2,0,P|524:284|492:204,1,165

00:40:235 (5,6,7) - With what you're mapping to, it'd play better if you move the (6) down a bit. Move to x:184 y:348. Oh, and move it with the (7) selected as well, as the flow from (6) to (7) is perfect~
00:41:800 (1) - I suppose when fixing spacing, move to x:76 y:140
00:43:887 (4) - Move this right more? I think it flows better, at x:464 y:116
00:57:191 (5,6) - Move down low to x:356 y:356? Have both selected when moving.
01:01:365 (4,5) - Move (4) to x:240 y:252, (5) to x:392 y:256
01:04:757 (4,5,6) - Can you make it so these curve upwards a bit? Something like this:

SPOILER

01:07:887 (2) - Move to x:328 y:376 for better flow?
01:09:974 (5,6,1) - Assuming these stay in the same position, move (1) to x:40 y:112. If you need to place these somewhere else due to spacing, move these 3 at the same time, so you don't disrupt spacing/flow here.
01:18:322 (5,6,1) - Pretty nice, but I think will be better if you move (1) to x:480 y:68.
01:25:626 (3,4) - Delete the (4), and copy and paste the (3) so it looks something like this?
01:27:191 (5) - Move to x:304 y:296?
01:40:365 (1) - I know what you're doing here, but how about starting at 01:40:495 instead? Since you're mapping pretty much on red and white ticks, having this start on a 1/4 feels a bit weird.
01:56:930 (1) - Move to x:320 y:224? I think it'll flow better into (2), rather than a horizontal line.
02:28:234 (4,5,6) - Would be better if higher imo, move to x:92 y:56? Move with (5,6) selected as well if you want.
02:36:583 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:208 y:352, (4) to x:412 y:348.
02:41:800 (5,6,1) - Would be nice if it dipped down before going back up, move (6,1) to x:412 y:328 (with both highlighted).
02:45:974 (5) - Rotate 90° anti-clockwise? (selection centre)
02:55:365 (1,2) - Move the (2) lower so that the (1) dives down into (2)?
03:03:843 (1) - Same thing as before.
03:22:496 (3,4,1) - Flow here a bit weird... Flip the (1) vertically? Then move it up a bit, so it forms a kind of arc shape. Not too sure about this, I'll give it some more thought. Or see if you can do anything yourself.
03:48:583 (1) - Move right to x:480 y:176, so it's kinda like that formation before.
04:10:626 (1) - Same thing as before.

Hmm, I think it's best if I split up my mod posts. Tell me when you're done with Normal, then I'll move on to the other diffs.

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-02-11T12:05:08+00:00

YGOkid8 wrote:
Normal:
00:19:626 (4,5) - These would flow and look better if you move these down a bit. Move (4) to x:176 y:76 and (5) to x:312 y:36. Fixed
00:20:931 (1,2) - With what you're doing with these sliders, having a bigger curve in them would look and flow better imo. Not as big as the previous (4), but bigger... anyway try fiddling around with it. Fixed
00:27:191 (3,4,5) - Since rhythm is the same, why not c&p the previous one, rotate 180° and put it here? Makes it look neater. Yes might be c&p is better for song but i think current slider is good for song enough and working good
00:32:148 (4,5) - Flip the (4) horizontal, then place at x:48 y:80? Then put the (5) at x:96 y:220 Fixed by my way, because this is better than horizontal slider imo
00:33:974 (2,3,4) - I can see what you're trying to do, but I don't like how (4) is so close to the (2). I suggest this formation:Fixed
SPOILER
228,360,33974,2,0,P|344:360,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,284,35017,1,8,0:0:0
496,360,35539,2,0,P|524:284|492:204,1,165
00:40:235 (5,6,7) - With what you're mapping to, it'd play better if you move the (6) down a bit. Move to x:184 y:348. Oh, and move it with the (7) selected as well, as the flow from (6) to (7) is perfect~ Fixed
00:41:800 (1) - I suppose when fixing spacing, move to x:76 y:140 moved other place because fit flow with previous note
00:43:887 (4) - Move this right more? I think it flows better, at x:464 y:116 same as above
00:57:191 (5,6) - Move down low to x:356 y:356? Have both selected when moving. Not fixed , current slider is better for flow imo :/
01:01:365 (4,5) - Move (4) to x:240 y:252, (5) to x:392 y:256seems cool but i prefer current ( same reason wiht above )
01:04:757 (4,5,6) - Can you make it so these curve upwards a bit? Something like this: Fixed
SPOILER
01:07:887 (2) - Move to x:328 y:376 for better flow? Fixed
01:09:974 (5,6,1) - Assuming these stay in the same position, move (1) to x:40 y:112. If you need to place these somewhere else due to spacing, move these 3 at the same time, so you don't disrupt spacing/flow here. Fixed
01:18:322 (5,6,1) - Pretty nice, but I think will be better if you move (1) to x:480 y:68. Fixed
01:25:626 (3,4) - Delete the (4), and copy and paste the (3) so it looks something like this? hmm.. seems nice but current slider is not bad so i want to keep this
01:27:191 (5) - Move to x:304 y:296? moved other place because fit flow with previous note
01:40:365 (1) - I know what you're doing here, but how about starting at 01:40:495 instead? Since you're mapping pretty much on red and white ticks, having this start on a 1/4 feels a bit weird. Fixed
01:56:930 (1) - Move to x:320 y:224? I think it'll flow better into (2), rather than a horizontal line. Fixed by my way ,because better for flow~
02:28:234 (4,5,6) - Would be better if higher imo, move to x:92 y:56? Move with (5,6) selected as well if you want. Fixed
02:36:583 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:208 y:352, (4) to x:412 y:348. Fixed but i moved (4) other place because of spacing
02:41:800 (5,6,1) - Would be nice if it dipped down before going back up, move (6,1) to x:412 y:328 (with both highlighted) Fixed
02:45:974 (5) - Rotate 90° anti-clockwise? (selection centre) Fixed
02:55:365 (1,2) - Move the (2) lower so that the (1) dives down into (2)? seems nice suggestion but think about rhythm, i think there are no reason do like this
03:03:843 (1) - Same thing as before. Fixed
03:22:496 (3,4,1) - Flow here a bit weird... Flip the (1) vertically? Then move it up a bit, so it forms a kind of arc shape. Not too sure about this, I'll give it some more thought. Or see if you can do anything yourself. hmm i thought about it long time but yes Not fixed because current slider looks nice and flows too :/
03:48:583 (1) - Move right to x:480 y:176, so it's kinda like that formation before. current slider is fine for me ( and i think flows good too )
04:10:626 (1) - Same thing as before.Fixed

orz there are so many thing i got missed D: sorry for that , i thought i fixed them all orz..

Last edited by HelloSCV 2013-02-11T13:54:02+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-02-11T13:32:16+00:00

Hmm, do you wanna call me once this is bubbled or should I mod it now? Lally is busy at the moment.

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-02-11T13:52:09+00:00

Andrea wrote:
Hmm, do you wanna call me once this is bubbled or should I mod it now? Lally is busy at the moment.

i'll call you back when i got bubble haha thanks

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2013-02-11T14:15:30+00:00

hehe i told you that you'd have to fix spacing after doing the placements i suggested

examples:

00:20:409 (5,1) - 1.2
00:35:539 (4,1) - 2.4

etc. fix them and make them 1.0~

now for the serious part. i was looking through the rest of the diffs, and here are my thoughts.

Normal and Hard are good. Was feeling quite confident about this map until I came upon Mintong's diff. I suggest removing his diff. why?
Three reasons:

Difficulty of Mintong is quite similar to Hard (even same SV). Having two Hards is not necessary.
There is quite a bit of overmapping in this diff, with no good reason. From what I can see, they're only there to make the diff. harder.
With a song this slow, having a good Insane seems unlikely, so I suggest for your Hard to be the hardest diff.

Furthermore, I recommend having an Easy as well. Normal is quite challenging for the easiest difficulty, yet Hard is not very hard in terms of difficulty. As we have a mapset that's on the lower end of the difficulty rating, including an Easy will make this mapset more solid. If you want, I can make an Easy for you and call another MAT to check on this map.

My proposal is this: delete Mintong's diff, and I will make you an Easy. When I'm done, find some mods for the diff. and I'll call another MAT to mod your map. I have gone through this with Andrea, and he is in full agreement with me.

Give it some thought, and make sure you talk to Mintong about it first!

minyeob

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minyeob 2013-02-11T15:22:32+00:00

I think Easy is not FORCED to make.
Just delete some notes on [Normal] to decrease the star rating

And to decrease the gap, I think [Hard] is needed to map
But actually...... it's probably okay to keep this

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2013-02-11T15:58:08+00:00

my views have changed a little bit, so i'll just state them again here.

the easy way out is to just add an Easy diff. We'll have a good spread, and we can be fine with two Hard diffs. problem solved.

but i'm not satisfied with this. the "problem" may be solved, but i still think this mapset can be improved. you must admit that it is ideal for the mapset to have an even diff. spread, right? there's no reason why we can't try to do so, even though it'll take a bit more work. it is of course up to the mappers (SCV and Mintong) whether they want to do so.

my stance is this: as well as adding an Easy, remap Mintong (without overmapping) so that there is a noticeable difficulty difference between Mintong and Hard. My suggestion is to use higher SV (~1.8-2.0) and jumps.

i have here an example of how one can make a harder diff. without overmapping. it may not be great, but my point should stand that it can be done:
http://puu.sh/20Uzi

meanwhile, i suppose i'll start making an easy diff. that is all.

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mintong89 2013-02-11T16:26:20+00:00

just irc mod with popner:

http://puu.sh/20VFM

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popner 2013-02-11T16:28:55+00:00

IRC modded mintong's diff.

Log

11:41 popner: [mintong]
11:41 popner: 00:18:843 (1,2,3,4) -
11:42 popner: http://puu.sh/20UIO
11:43 mintong89: 我试试看
11:43 popner: 我倾向于这么放
11:43 popner: 有点跳,跟音乐跟得更好
11:44 mintong89: 好
11:45 popner: 00:21:452 (2) - 这可以往左移放个跳
11:46 popner: 连着三个滑条，没跳显得单调
11:46 popner: 而且前面00:16:756 (1,2) - 这里是有跳的
11:48 mintong89: ok
11:49 popner: 00:23:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里整体感觉flow一般，你看看想改不
11:51 popner: 00:20:408 (6) - 这里怎么前后spacing不一致。。
11:53 popner: 额
11:59 mintong89: ok
12:00 mintong89: sorry for ask
12:00 mintong89: afk
12:01 popner: 上面那两个
12:01 popner: 00:20:408 (6) - 距离
12:01 mintong89: 12345 不改了...感觉不需要
12:01 mintong89: 6的改了
12:02 popner: 00:27:974 (3) - 直的嘛感觉有点单调
12:02 popner: 这个你自己决定要不要动
12:02 popner: 然后
12:03 popner: 00:29:017 (6) - 这个滑条建议改成2个note
12:03 popner: 因为结尾的地方是个重音，放滑条尾不好
12:03 mintong89: ok
12:04 popner: 00:31:365 (1,2) - 跟音乐跟的不太好
12:04 popner: 00:31:756 - 蓝线这里应该有个滑条
12:05 mintong89: 换了
12:05 popner: 00:35:017 (5,6,7) - 这里的白线三连没有意义
12:06 popner: 破坏节奏了
12:06 popner: 可以直接删掉中间那个note
12:06 mintong89: ok
12:06 popner: 00:38:669 (3,4,5) - 同上
12:07 mintong89: ok
12:07 popner: 00:43:626 (4,5,1) - 你看这种红线三连就很自然
12:08 mintong89: .....?
12:08 popner: 00:41:017 (3,4,5) - 有点单调，可以把(5)移回来和(3)叠在一起
12:09 mintong89: ok
12:09 popner: 不对
12:09 mintong89: .
12:09 popner: 00:40:756 (2,3,4,5) - 这四个做成来回的感觉更合曲一些
12:10 mintong89: 好
12:10 popner: 00:53:278 (2,3,4) - 白线三连
12:11 mintong89: 什么是白线三连..?
12:11 popner: 00:55:887 (4,1,2,3) - 这里节奏建议重新做一下http://puu.sh/20VjE
12:12 popner: 白线三连就是从白线上开始的三连
12:12 popner: 这种三连除非是歌曲变节奏的地方，一般都会比较生硬
12:12 mintong89: 嗯
12:13 popner: 01:02:147 (6,7) - 这两个ctrl+g一下，flow会好很多
12:14 mintong89: ok
12:15 popner: 01:21:974 (2,3) - 这里应该是1/8的5连
12:16 mintong89: 诶怎么我没察觉
12:16 popner: 你开25%听。。
12:17 mintong89: 对不起我错惹
12:17 popner: 然后后面的白线三连我就不说了
12:18 mintong89: ok
12:18 popner: 其实YGO说overmap大概是针对这些白线三连说的
12:18 mintong89: 嗯这我也察觉到了
12:18 popner: 音乐里没有support，从节奏上来说有处在奇怪的位置
12:19 popner: 又*
12:19 mintong89: souka
12:21 popner: 嗯，就这么多
12:21 popner: 排列很干净
12:21 mintong89: ok 谢了

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