hi~
Generalis nice
Yui- You should probably try lowering the star rating to around 3 at least
- consider putting hitsounds on every downbeat, feels empty during the main parts =v=
00:15:262 (2) - Whistle like 00:21:339 (2) -
00:17:162 (1) - Place somewhere like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610774, better flow imo
00:17:731 (2) - Make this a single slider like 00:29:885 (3) - , and don't forget to extend to white tick if you do~
00:38:240 (1) - Finish at beginning
00:44:317 (1) - Move a little to the right so it's not touching another note
00:50:394 (1) - Finish at beginning
01:26:854 (1) - Finish
01:34:640 (5) - a little ugly
01:41:286 (1) -
move this down more so it's not going through the hp bar01:44:324 (5) - Finish at end
01:51:161 (1) - ^ at beginning
- there are lots of Finishes that can be added according to the bg music i believe, so I will stop mentioning them
02:01:796 (1) - messy slider points
02:15:468 - Extend the break line so it starts here
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/61078102:44:333 (1) - Feels out of place? Maybe delete or map this part; same for the other spinner
02:56:485 (1) - if you keep this, add Finish
03:16:235 (2) - NC?
03:29:908 (4,1) - Spacing issue
04:16:054 (5) - Extend this to the next red tick
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610790Shining- also lots of Finishes missing here imo, add them to the beginnings of kiai time, etc~
01:12:421 (2) - Delete some reverses maybe, seems a bit confusing within the same combo
01:44:704 (5) - Finish, hear bg music
01:51:160 (1) - Finish at beginning
02:09:201 (1) - ^
02:11:100 - Add note, i think it makes rhythm more consistent
02:27:621 (2) - Finish at beginning
Kanade00:16:972 - Add something here, the rhythm flow feels a bit broken now
00:50:394 (1) - Finish
00:52:673 (1) - ugly slider
00:53:622 - Add note
00:56:470 (1) - Finish at beginning
01:02:547 (8) - Finish
01:07:105 (8,1) - Increase distance between these, I don't think this is a nice place for anti-jump
01:16:599 - Stack a note under the end of (1)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610811, so it's not an awkward pause
01:19:638 (1) - Start this 1 white tick back at 01:19:258
01:26:474 (1) - Finish at end
01:39:387 (1,1,1,1) - Don't really see a need for so many NCs, maybe delete a couple
02:01:036 (4) - NC, or move further away from (3)
02:09:202 (1) - Finish at beginning
2:15:468 - same as Yui, extend break to here
02:49:650 (2) - Move further away from (1)
2:54:586 - Add note?
03:10:159 (1) - Finish at beginning
03:16:995 (1) - Delete NC, don't think you had it before
03:28:389 (1) - Finish at beginning
03:34:465 (5,6,7) - Make spacing more equal between these
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/61081703:55:735 (5,6) - Highlight and Ctrl + G, gives better spacing imo
04:04:850 (1) - Finish
04:11:686 (1) - Delete NC
04:16:812 - Add note with Finish
I feel like your hitsounds are incomplete in general, especially Finishes
Anyways, sweet map and song!! I love AB!
Good luck!