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Nothing's Carved In Stone - Out of Control (TV Size) [Osu|Ta

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tutuhaha
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tutuhaha
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 星期一, 18 三月, 2013 at PM 8:15:35

Artist: Nothing's Carved In Stone
Title: Out of Control (TV Size)
Source: PSYCHO-PASS
Tags: opening qoot8123 Autumn
BPM: 140
Filesize: 15138kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Atm's Hard (4.87 stars, 213 notes)
  2. Easy (2.57 stars, 108 notes)
  3. Hard (4.94 stars, 235 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 362 notes)
  5. Normal (4.22 stars, 145 notes)
  6. PSYCHO-PASS (4.81 stars, 428 notes)
  7. qoot8123's Taiko Muzukashii (4.56 stars, 262 notes)
  8. qoot8123's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 524 notes)
Download: Nothing's Carved In Stone - Out of Control (TV Size)
Download: Nothing's Carved In Stone - Out of Control (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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New op, English song :D！
ED1:EGOIST - Namae no Nai Kaibutsu (TV Size)
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PSYCHO-PASS 100%
Insane 100%
Hard 100%
Normal 100%
Easy 100%
Last edited by tutuhaha , edited 32 times in total.
UnderminE
osu! Alumni
4,011 posts
Joined August 2010
UnderminE
Hmm, check these two:

SPOILER


Psycho-Pass <3
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

UnderminE wrote:

Hmm, check these two:

SPOILER


Psycho-Pass <3
I will think about this two <3~Thank you
qoot8123
1,500 posts
Joined March 2011
qoot8123
太鼓GD~~
Oni~http://puu.sh/1MJ5L
Muzu~http://puu.sh/1MJ5x

這BG好像有點太.....XD
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
这真实的反应出了2ha的兴趣倾向-_-
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn

tutuhaha wrote:

SPOILER
最近在玩剑灵封测所以回晚了
不过既然到现在都没mod的话我来给你mod你这个难度吧0.0

00:00:790 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这一段的节奏何止混乱啊Orz..........在我看来你是想尽力让节奏简单但是又没掌握好然后想把所有节奏都表达上然后搞成这样Orz
遇到你自己不知道该怎么掌握的节奏的时候，在低一点的diff里最好的方法就是拿长滑条盖掉

我的话会这么做，你现在这段的节奏混乱无比完全没掌握到重心啊Orz FIXED
然后关于space，你可能误解了我的意思，我蛮喜欢你原来的间距的，我说挤的是指
00:08:504 (1,2,3) - 像是这种，为了美观一般都会把4滑条到2滑条的距离控制的和3滑条一样，至少看起来一样

你现在看起来是这样

调整后这样 FIXED
00:13:647 (2,3,4) - 同理 FIXED
00:17:075 (1,2) - 这种静音note我本身不喜欢，因为打起来没打击感让人觉得很wierd而且这种的貌似是unrank的，这边反正我所有diff都是去掉不做 REMOVED
00:20:504 (4,6) - 这也是我说为什么挤，两个靠太近了但是和固定间距其实没什么关系 FIXED
00:33:147 (1,2,3) - 1，2尾巴太近就第一眼来说会让人觉得1-2的间距会比2-3的短，然后2和上面的7靠太近 FIXED
00:58:218 (4,6) - 比前面的4和6好一点但是还是........ FIXED 换成了Slider
01:06:575 (2，4) - 尾巴和头之间 把3放中间？目前这样改了
01:09:147 (1,2,3) - 非常典型的在你给我的第一版diff我看的最挤得排列方式 FIXED
01:14:290 (5,6,7) - 01:04:218 (1,2,3) - 这个就控的很完美，这个也控一下 FIXED
01:17:933 (1) - 折的地方和前面的5靠的太近了 FIXED
01:29:718 (X) - 这里完全可以加个note ADDED
^以上挤得就说完了，接着你这个diff还有一个比较wierd的是拖拍
00:36:575 (3,4) - 我以前也经常这样，前面拖拍搞久了后面不顾节奏就开始拖，这里slider跟歌的话是应该长白线结尾的，被这么拖一下打的不爽而且没跟节奏很奇怪 FIXED
00:38:290 (1,2) - ^ 这里是跟背景的BASS音，似乎也可以
00:11:933 (5,6) - ^ FIXED
其实你原来那个space打的我蛮舒服的不过现在这个也行，以上是我打完后的怨念产物【其实是因为今天剑灵维护】
还有你不是开了个queue么说mod你的diff就可以接mod request
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/70115
有时间的话帮忙mod下这张吧，谢谢了 OK
改完后再edit我上传
谢谢你的MOD！
Updated：http://puu.sh/1Pdr4
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ M4M as your request. My map

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
感觉有些挤，用LKs - Ctrl+A排版检验法可以看出大部分note都在中间。
00:03:790 (4,1) - blanket修一下？现在的略难看。。00:04:218 (1) 这个滑条弧度偏大了所以导致这块摆起来比较纠结。
00:10:218 (3,4) - 这里我觉得摆出一点折线比较好：
SPOILER
01:01:218 (3,4,5) - ^类似，摆出弧线：
SPOILER

[Normal]
基本没什么好挑的，看起来比Easy要好。和Normal比起来上面的Easy感觉有点粗糙，细节部分还是要修一下。

[Atm's Hard]
00:05:075 (3,4,5) - I prefer this rhythm:
SPOILER
There are two reasons: First, the use of long slider obviously follows the vocal better. Comparing with other parts like 00:04:004 (1) and 00:07:433 (5), the 1/2 sliders you used here don't make much sense. Second, the repeat appearance of 1/2 slider with similar shape may makes player boring.
00:13:004 (8) - maybe make it a symmetric slider so it will looks much better. That is easy: you only need to let the last node of the slider be at the center of slider end, the adjust the second node to make it symmetric.
01:25:647 (3,4,5) - nazi - they are not in a line

[Hard]
00:24:683 (6,1) - spacing issue，打起来倒是没什么影响，主要是看起来很难看
01:02:075 (5,6,1) - ^

[Insane]
00:01:218 (3,4,5,6) - 这里节奏感觉有点奇怪，我觉得不如就用这种节奏，反正刚开始也不用那么高能
SPOILER
00:03:683 (8) - 然后把这个滑条改成滑条+圈，刚好和前面的配合：
SPOILER
00:06:361 (2) - 感觉flow不是那么干净。。可以稍微往右下移一下，差不多是这样的：
SPOILER
00:14:825 (2,3) - 这里也是打起来不舒服。。不过我也没什么好的建议
00:16:004 (1,2,3) - 直接摆成直线？这样稍微弯一点感觉有些不上不下。
01:12:790 (1,2) - 不够圆，嗯
01:17:933 (1,3) - 这里的overlap不太好，前面的300遮住后面的了。建议为了排版干净修一下。。

最后一个难度槽点在连打上，感觉连打布置地有些乱，比如00:24:361 (8,9,10,11,1) - 这里flow的突变，打起来不舒服也容易断。00:30:790 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
连打四个一组中间的跳比较难，所以前后连打的方向最好配合一下，比如这里我建议把前面四个弯的方向反过来(随便摆了一下)
SPOILER


That's all I can find. GL~
cmn_891127
1,308 posts
Joined July 2010
cmn_891127
~~

[General]
  1. 两个太鼓 的 PreviewTime 都有问题
  2. Atm's Hard 是GD吧~ TAG呢

[Normal]
  1. 00:16:647 (5) - 唔，这个还是换成circle比较好
  2. 01:21:361 (3,4) -
[hard]
  1. 00:38:075 (4,5) - Ctrl+G比较顺手
[Insane]
  1. 00:16:647 (5,6) - (6)在蓝线开始，唔，不好打啦，(5)拉长，(6)结尾一个circle
其他的木有什么说的了
Chyo-Kun
308 posts
Joined May 2012
Chyo-Kun
I was lurking in #modreqs and i find a moe request~

[Easy]


  1. 00:12:361 (2) - In this point,instead of a slider,i'l suggest to add a beat and a slider like this:



    It fits alot better in my opinion ^^
  2. 01:05:504 (4) - Move to x:160 y:84,looks way better in my opinion
  3. 01:25:647 (4) - Place this x:160 y:236,in front of the slider it looks better,and it's the same thing that you did with the beat and the slider before

[Normal]


  1. 00:27:147 - Place a beat on the slider like you did with the sliders before? I don't see why not
  2. 01:29:504 (5) - NC because it's the last slider? It doesent make any sense,but it looks great o:

[Atm's Hard]


  • 00:03:790 (5) - Add NC here and remove 00:04:004 (1) here? The instrument change in that part

[Hard]


  1. 00:03:361 (4) - Remove the reverse at this slider and add a little stream like this:



    It fits with the drum beats in my opinion

    120,204,3790,1,0,0:0:0
    100,240,3897,1,0,0:0:0
    84,276,4004,1,0,0:0:0
    76,316,4111,1,0,0:0:0
  2. 00:59:718 (2) - This slider looks ugly in this position :s maybe move it more far from the previous one

Nothing else in Insane and PSYCHO-PASS,very nice map,i like it ^^
Good luck for rank (:
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
Mod as request ♪

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[General]

BG....囧

[Oni]

01:01:861 - 这个部分的话 试试 d ddk _ d d k...?
SPOILER

挺好的, 不知要吐槽什么.

[Muzu]

00:09:575 - k 试试？
00:20:825 (3,1,1) - 这的话 觉得 k d k 比较好...

没啥问题

加油 0 0/
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn

popner wrote:

Hi ~ M4M as your request. My map


[Atm's Hard]
00:05:075 (3,4,5) - I prefer this rhythm:
SPOILER
There are two reasons: First, the use of long slider obviously follows the vocal better. Comparing with other parts like 00:04:004 (1) and 00:07:433 (5), the 1/2 sliders you used here don't make much sense. Second, the repeat appearance of 1/2 slider with similar shape may makes player boring. Fixed
00:13:004 (8) - maybe make it a symmetric slider so it will looks much better. That is easy: you only need to let the last node of the slider be at the center of slider end, the adjust the second node to make it symmetric. 对称滑条么..老实说我不太理解 不过还是换了样式..能贴个图就好了orz
01:25:647 (3,4,5) - nazi - they are not in a line Fixed
And fixed Chyo-Kun's mod.

Thx all. updated:
http://puu.sh/1PWXb
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
Normal :

00:17:933(1) 这个节奏不对啊 应该向前移动到前面那根红线

00:55:647(1) 同上

00:24:361(8) 这滑条 节奏不对 把前面7末尾缩减到白线 然后把8移到前面红线吧

01:02:075(8) 同上

00:23:718 (7)(8) 7末尾和(8)开头时间太短容易掉，看面板其实挺远的但是连起来却很快，缩短一下7末尾和8开头的距离

全程滑条。。。建议缩减一点 这让别人怎么开FL。。。
qoot8123
1,500 posts
Joined March 2011
qoot8123

mintong89 wrote:

Mod as request ♪

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[General]

BG....囧

[Oni]

01:01:861 - 这个部分的话 试试 d ddk _ d d k...?
SPOILER

挺好的, 不知要吐槽什么.

[Muzu]

00:09:575 - k 试试？
00:20:825 (3,1,1) - 这的话 觉得 k d k 比较好...

没啥问题

加油 0 0/


感謝mod~><
Oni~http://puu.sh/1PYLn
Muzu~http://puu.sh/1PYL7
Gundam
136 posts
Joined January 2011
Gundam
[General]
hitsound声音略小0 0建议65%左右

[Normal]
01:27:361(2) - 折返变成note怎么样 这样打起来也不至于很无聊0.0
SPOILER

[Atm's Hard]
00:15:361(2) - 那个红点能不能再往上点……看起来略不舒服
01:13:433(3,4) - 建议这样
SPOILER
NewRulerNA
1,301 posts
Joined December 2010
NewRulerNA
hi
found issues. you must fix....

[qoot8123's Taiko Oni]
  1. preview time is not same as others
[qoot8123's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. preview time is not same as others
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Jycool
嗯。。。。。。。。我感觉已经做的很好了。。。。每个难度我都打了。。。。。
排列方面感觉很流畅:D
节奏方面感觉有点平淡。。。。可能是歌的缘故


我感觉insane难度比最高难度难0.0



以上就当作我的mod吧。。。我真的不知道说什么好。。。

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/113986这个是我的图。。。。你可以忽略。。。
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
哈罗0.0

[General]
taiko的preview time跟其他难度不同
tag里缺了个guest好像

[Easy]
屌毛，这setting太高了啊HD+OD最多5就够了啊，不然死人的
AR也建议-1

[Normal]
OD,或者HD-1 0.0？

[Atm's Hard]
00:13:004 (6,1) - please try to move them up a bit, they're nearly out of the screen

[Insane]
00:54:790 (1) - 这里感觉应该用跟H一样的1/3节奏，合曲点0.0

[PSYCHO-PASS]
01:22:433 (8) - ctrl+g一下，然后01:22:861 (10) - 也ctrl+g一下，flow会好点，改的时候注意01:22:861 - 这里的clap
01:29:504 - 感觉可以把这NC挪到最后那个note上0.0 现在这串看上去略违和

真是让我倍感鬼畜0.0..
mod找差不多了就叫我吧0.0
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

wcx19911123 wrote:

哈罗0.0

[General]
taiko的preview time跟其他难度不同
tag里缺了个guest好像

[Easy]
屌毛，这setting太高了啊HD+OD最多5就够了啊，不然死人的
AR也建议-1

[Normal]
OD,或者HD-1 0.0？

[Atm's Hard]
00:13:004 (6,1) - please try to move them up a bit, they're nearly out of the screen

[Insane]
00:54:790 (1) - 这里感觉应该用跟H一样的1/3节奏，合曲点0.0

[PSYCHO-PASS]
01:22:433 (8) - ctrl+g一下，然后01:22:861 (10) - 也ctrl+g一下，flow会好点，改的时候注意01:22:861 - 这里的clap
01:29:504 - 感觉可以把这NC挪到最后那个note上0.0 现在这串看上去略违和

真是让我倍感鬼畜0.0..
mod找差不多了就叫我吧0.0
全搞掂
Atm的最近没见到他就帮他改了
多谢
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL
hi~
from in game chat :3

[qoot8123's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:17:933 (1) - D
  2. 00:53:611 - add d
  3. 00:53:718 - ^

[qoot8123's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:04:433 - add k
  2. 00:28:861 (2) - d
  3. 00:55:861 - ddk
  4. 01:26:933 (2) - k
  5. 01:27:147 (1) - d
nice map :)
good luck!
qoot8123
1,500 posts
Joined March 2011
qoot8123

ReySHeL wrote:

hi~
from in game chat :3

[qoot8123's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:17:933 (1) - D
  2. 00:53:611 - add d
  3. 00:53:718 - ^

[qoot8123's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:04:433 - add k
  2. 00:28:861 (2) - d
  3. 00:55:861 - ddk
  4. 01:26:933 (2) - k
  5. 01:27:147 (1) - d
nice map :)
good luck!
all fixed!
thanks~>w<
Muzu~http://puu.sh/1VgjW
Oni~http://puu.sh/1Vgk3
DaxMasterix
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
1,562 posts
Joined February 2010
DaxMasterix
Hello~ Mod from my Emporium :33
Sorry for the big Delay. Holidays.. lel

Easy:
  1. 00:00:790 to 00:03:361 - I think here is better an AudioSoft Part. You know... Change the Audio Settings of the RedLine to Soft. And put a GreenLine with a change to NormalAudio in 00:03:790
  2. o3o That is all in this diff.
Normal:
  1. 00:00:790 to 00:03:361 - Same in easy.
Atm's Hard:
  1. 00:00:790 to 00:03:361 - Same in easy. o3o
  2. 00:17:075 (x) - Here I Think you can add a note.. Or a pattern.. you know.. to 00:17:718. Follow the voice. o3o
  3. 00:21:361 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why here you have NCombos and in 00:28:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6) You don't have any NC o3o... This need be similar.. So.. Your choose.. NCombos or Not NCombos xDD
  4. 00:34:861 (5,1) - This Spacing is Absolutely bad. Try Move (1) to... I don't know.. to x:212|y:160 (? (The same position of 00:36:575 (3) ) o3o
Hard:
  1. 00:00:790 to 00:03:361 - Same in easy... yeah.. I Really think sounds better a Soft Part in Hitsounding.
Insane:
  1. Oh shi- This Diff need be fixed. Is all in 1/6.. badly.. I think was a problem... Try Fix It... hurry up. xD.. I nca't mod this diff.. ._. But remember... The same suggestion in the easy Diff. xDD
PSYCHO-PASS:
  1. 00:00:790 to 00:03:361 - Same in easy. xD
LEL Sorry.. A mod like me can't find Anything in your crazy map. Is.. Rare.. Too much strange for me.. o3o Sorry.. I can't make Suggestion in this map too.. But.. Because My mod was horrible, Short, an delayed.. You win 3 Kdstars.
Good Luck. I can't says more e-e xD
LloydK
7 posts
Joined September 2012
LloydK
The opening of the video has changed in chapter 14
You should change it, this is better :) (?)
Of the rest, I hope you approve :cry:
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn

Gundam wrote:

[Atm's Hard]
00:15:361(2) - 那个红点能不能再往上点……看起来略不舒服 Fixed
01:13:433(3,4) - 建议这样 Fixed
SPOILER

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Atm's Hard]
00:13:004 (6,1) - please try to move them up a bit, they're nearly out of the screen Fixed.Changed flow.

DaxMasterix wrote:

Atm's Hard:[list][*]00:00:790 to 00:03:361 - Same in easy. o3o Fixed
[*]00:17:075 (x) - Here I Think you can add a note.. Or a pattern.. you know.. to 00:17:718. Follow the voice. o3o Added a slider
[*]00:21:361 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why here you have NCombos and in 00:28:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6) You don't have any NC o3o... This need be similar.. So.. Your choose.. NCombos or Not NCombos xDD NC
[*]00:34:861 (5,1) - This Spacing is Absolutely bad. Try Move (1) to... I don't know.. to x:212|y:160 (? I need the jump. NC to notify
Sorry for late!
打了两天WoW给忘了..实在是不好意思啦
稍微改了几处flow和NC.

Packaged：http://puu.sh/1WN2I
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
都市传说 performance point÷智商=犯罪系数

[PP]
00:02:183 (4) - 缩短1/4 00:02:290是有节奏点的而且00:02:397空出来合适很多
00:03:683 (3) - 拆分circle? 00:03:790/00:03:897有相同的鼓点没落点打起来略奇怪
00:16:754 - +circle ; 00:16:754 (6,7) - 后移1/4 相应的slience绿线后移1/4 00:17:075没音效也没打击实在有点
00:24:683 - +clap ; 00:31:540 - < ; 00:38:397 - <
01:02:397 - ^ ; 01:09:254 - < ; 01:16:111 - <
00:43:968 (2,3) -
01:29:504 (10,11) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/599346
SV个人有点不适应orz做不出这种风格的谱子 感觉密集连打+slider表现吉他效果没把感觉做出来

[Insane]
/怎么全是1/6没法mod啊大哥\

[Hard]
00:03:361 (4,1) -
00:31:433 - remove clap ; 00:31:540 (4) - +clap

[ATM]
00:02:290 (1,2) -
00:10:004 - 感觉这里空档太大不是说跟vo就一直跟到底
00:16:647 - ^. imo
00:35:504 (1) - ^^ 前面如果是勉强能接受这里塞满突然来个大gap不是那么舒服
00:45:361 (1) - 00:44:075 (2,2) 试试这两个一条直线? 当然00:45:790 (2,3,4) - 相应修改
01:24:790 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^好像是同样的pattern
01:28:218 (3) - good slider art :D 建议折返点在2nd/3rd tick上

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Curisu wrote:

都市传说 performance point÷智商=犯罪系数

[ATM]
00:02:290 (1,2) - Fixed
00:10:004 - 感觉这里空档太大不是说跟vo就一直跟到底 Fixed
00:16:647 - ^. imo 这点空看上去还行
00:35:504 (1) - ^^ 前面如果是勉强能接受这里塞满突然来个大gap不是那么舒服 Fixed
00:45:361 (1) - 00:44:075 (2,2) 试试这两个一条直线? 当然00:45:790 (2,3,4) - 相应修改 Fixed
01:24:790 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^好像是同样的pattern Fixed
01:28:218 (3) - good slider art :D 建议折返点在2nd/3rd tick上 Fixed

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Thank you~
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Hard还是少了个guest ID。。其他没啥了
改了叫我吧0.0
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fix the title in (TV Size) pls
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Hi ~ tutuhaha ~ :)

[General]


  1. Artist should be : Nothing's Carved In Stone
  2. Please change both taiko SV to 1.4 is better.

Other looks fine ~ Amazing mapset ~

Call me back ~ ;)
tutuhaha
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tutuhaha

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ tutuhaha ~ :)

[General]


  1. Artist should be : Nothing's Carved In Stone
  2. Please change both taiko SV to 1.4 is better.

Other looks fine ~ Amazing mapset ~

Call me back ~ ;)
FIX all~
Kawayi Rika
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OK ~ Looks much better ~

Here you go <3

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